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[Spread]
I'm a little concerned about the difficulty jump between Normal - Hard
[Easy]
00:35:379 (2,3) - really weird flow; (3) should be further left
00:55:879 (3) - aaa imo this slider is not very pretty ;w;
00:59:879 (3) - the end of this slider should be a normal hitnormal (snare), not a whistle
01:30:879 (5) - this slider should follow the same rhythmic pattern (because the lyric rhythm is the same). Extend it so it starts on the previous red tick
01:46:879 (4) - ^
02:05:379 (2) - ends on a really strong beat, use 2 2/1 hitcircles instead?
[Normal]
01:09:629 (1) - ends on a really strong beat, should be 2 hitcircles
[Hard]
00:21:504 (4,1) - ugly overlap; move (1) to the right?
00:26:379 (2) - spaced way too close to (1); try some ctrl+g strategy?
00:29:504 (6,1) - ugly overlap again
01:09:379 (6,7) - ^ and for better flow this stuff should be to the left of (5)
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like this hahaha
01:27:379 (1) - i know it's a very nice blanket but I feel like this should be spaced further away for more emphasis. it could also be because 01:26:754 (7) - ends on a really strong beat that probably should be clicked on instead
01:36:879 (5,6) - ugly overlap, move (6) up
01:43:379 (2) - space further away
01:58:629 (3) - this needs some kind of emphasis, either a whistle or soft-hitfinish or something
02:00:379 (2) - really should be spaced further
02:04:379 (2) - again should be spaced further, try ctrl+g
02:15:129 (5) - make this a two-note stack?
[imouto's Insane]
00:16:379 (3) - whistle on the start of this?
00:17:379 (7) - ^
00:37:129 (1) - space this further for better pacing and readability
00:43:254 (5,7) - ugly overlap :/
01:09:879 (1,3) - (3) can blanket (1) better
01:22:379 (2,3) - ugly overlap, move (3) up and to the right?
02:02:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I strongly disagree with completely covering the slider heads with the slider tracks. It can be unreadable and it used to be unrankable.
02:10:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
[Liqueur]
00:38:879 (4) - you missed the beat at 00:39:254 -
00:43:379 (5) - this should be further away from (4)
00:55:254 - add note, or acknowledge this beat in some way
00:56:254 (3) - remove new combo
00:59:254 (5) - really big jump given your 1/1 is spaced quite close together
01:08:254 - missing beat
01:17:879 (1,2) - ugly overlap. I like it better if (2) is placed so that (1) blankets the start of (2)
01:23:504 (8) - the vocal is not on the red tick; it's at 01:23:629 -
01:26:754 (1) - make this a little 1/8 repeat slider so you emphasize the little trill in the melody?
01:38:629 (3,4) - ctrl+g much better flow
01:51:754 (5) - woah! this jump is huge! if anything, the jump should be from (5) to (1), not from (4) to (5).
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very catchy, GL
-SMIC