Hi, M4M.
That's all. Really liked the song, good luck!
[General]
- Normal and Hard have Widescreen support, but you don't have a storyboard or a video, so remove it.
- Maybe you could change the AR on insane to 8.1-8.2?
- A dark blue/green combo color could work here for this part of the background http://i.imgur.com/WH90fA9.png
- Basic stuff, you can't really go wrong with a normal (supposedly an easy). Didn't find anything here.
- 00:45:282 (1,5) - Put 00:45:282 (1) - in the center so it doesn't touch 00:46:532 (5) - ?
- 01:10:907 - I know you're following vocals here, but maybe you could put a hitcircle here.
- 01:42:365 (1,2,3) - Something like a triangle here could work to avoid staleness of the cursor and keep the movement. Like this http://i.imgur.com/Afk38Y9.png
- 01:46:532 (3,4,5,6,7) - Since you decided that you were going to map the stream, then don't map only the end of the stream, map all the notes. Reserve sliders could work here.
- 01:52:157 (6,7,8) - The slider covers the stream, yes, but if you want you can put reverse sliders here too, it's a little weird sounding like this to me.
- 03:07:157 (4,5) - Remove 03:07:573 (5) - and make 03:07:157 (4) - 1/1 slider to follow the guitar chord fully. If no, then I would suggest making 03:07:365 - a clickable note and not having it on a sliderend.
- 03:13:407 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Not sure what to say about this, but the current setup definitely doesn't fit, and a lot of reverse sliders could be boring. One triple into reverse sliders maybe?
- 03:42:782 (1,2) - Try to make this a little less confusing since almost all of 03:43:198 (2) - the slider is overlayed by 03:42:782 (1) -
- 00:11:115 (1) - Mapping to the vocals here, but it doesn't feel quite right. Why not make 00:10:907 (6) - a 1/1 slider like you did in the previous parts of the map?
- 00:30:490 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid this overlay for the sake of aesthetics.
- 00:38:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The strong beats in this part are 00:38:615 - here 00:39:032 - here and here 00:39:240 - . The spacing here is not quite fitting, I would suggest making the jumps smaller except for those beats.
- 00:44:240 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This build-up is nice, however.
- 00:52:782 (1,2,3) - Why aren't these jumps? Strong vocals and beat suggest higher spacing.
- 01:17:782 (3) - Ctrl + G plays better in my opinion.
- 02:02:226 (1) - This is 1/3rd.
- 02:24:032 - and 02:24:240 - would fit better if they were hitcircles on them.
- 03:09:657 (3,4) - Not sure if this is rankable, because low ar and hitcircle on a reverse slider, I got confused the first time.
- 03:32:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't hear anything in the background to justify the high spacing of the hitcircles here. Only the vocals.
That's all. Really liked the song, good luck!