2016-04-09 14:10 PyaKura: imma start now then
2016-04-09 14:10 LordRaika: lets make it fast then >_<
2016-04-09 14:10 LordRaika: sry thou
2016-04-09 14:10 PyaKura: gonna grab something to drink
2016-04-09 14:11 LordRaika: sure ^^b
2016-04-09 14:11 PyaKura: also i probably wont finish in 30 mins but whatever
2016-04-09 14:11 LordRaika: its ok XD u can always tell me the main point
2016-04-09 14:11 LordRaika: i will think something on how to deal with it
2016-04-09 14:13 PyaKura: np map pls
2016-04-09 14:14 LordRaika: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/923665 Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought]
2016-04-09 14:18 PyaKura: lol ok
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: i don't even$
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: jdezoiduhcbpdsoc
2016-04-09 14:19 LordRaika: pls XD
2016-04-09 14:19 LordRaika: its ok
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: not warmed up
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: okay so
2016-04-09 14:19 LordRaika: do u think HP too high?
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: no it's fine
2016-04-09 14:19 LordRaika: yeah, i know ^^b
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: map is relatively easy as well
2016-04-09 14:19 PyaKura: my hands are just super stiff
2016-04-09 14:20 LordRaika: thats why i increase it, XD
2016-04-09 14:20 LordRaika: previously its 8.5 and 8.8
2016-04-09 14:21 LordRaika: let me know everything that plays not really well... i will get the point, and fix it later ^^/ (since im going off soon >_<)
2016-04-09 14:21 PyaKura: 00:53:721 (53721|0,53799|2,53877|4,53955|6) - strange releases
2016-04-09 14:21 PyaKura: on 1/8
2016-04-09 14:21 PyaKura: just pointing what looks a bit off to me
2016-04-09 14:22 PyaKura: will do a detailed mod later on with you
2016-04-09 14:22 PyaKura: i'm on holiday now so yeah
2016-04-09 14:22 PyaKura: 01:02:236 - missing hihat
2016-04-09 14:23 PyaKura: right, same strange releases here 01:12:158 -
2016-04-09 14:23 PyaKura: 01:21:846 - you've got 4 notes here to put emphasis on the loud sound
2016-04-09 14:24 PyaKura: 01:22:471 - 01:23:096 - 01:23:408 - but only 3 on those lines
2016-04-09 14:24 LordRaika: sure,.. ^^b , will add more 1/4 on hihat... and ehmm... will try to make the stream more easier XD
2016-04-09 14:25 LordRaika: thx, will make the cymbal more consistent ^^b
2016-04-09 14:25 PyaKura: 01:24:346 - this one could also use one more note I guess
2016-04-09 14:25 PyaKura: the following part is a bit unbalanced i think
2016-04-09 14:26 PyaKura: i mean it's fine to play but now that i look at it
2016-04-09 14:26 PyaKura: oh, nevermind
2016-04-09 14:26 LordRaika: k k
2016-04-09 14:26 PyaKura: 01:24:346 - you can make 2 notes chords on each white line
2016-04-09 14:27 PyaKura: for the kick
2016-04-09 14:27 LordRaika: sure
2016-04-09 14:27 LordRaika:
2016-04-09 14:28 PyaKura: as a general advice
2016-04-09 14:28 PyaKura: don't be afraid to make big chords on those loud sounds that stand out
2016-04-09 14:28 PyaKura: the song is pretty brutal in nature i feel
2016-04-09 14:28 LordRaika: yeah... xi .... full 1/4 is normal XD
2016-04-09 14:28 PyaKura: at least that's how i have felt it when i made my map
2016-04-09 14:28 LordRaika: wahaha
2016-04-09 14:29 LordRaika: ye
got it
2016-04-09 14:29 LordRaika: i will check my cymbal and impact section ^^b
2016-04-09 14:29 PyaKura: 01:40:596 (100596|1) - this little one is pretty awkward lol
2016-04-09 14:30 PyaKura: i know what you wanted to do here but i don't think it deserves a note of its own
2016-04-09 14:30 PyaKura: would feel better if you could move down the start of the 3 following LNs
2016-04-09 14:30 LordRaika: 01:40:596 (100596|1,100752|1) - yea, but its just the same pitch, so ... what do we do about it
2016-04-09 14:31 PyaKura: i think i ignored the repetition in my map
2016-04-09 14:31 PyaKura: i mean you do what you feel is right, i'm only giving suggestions alright
2016-04-09 14:31 PyaKura: c:
2016-04-09 14:31 LordRaika: then i want to keep it ^^ hehe, since it doesnt hard at all....
2016-04-09 14:32 PyaKura: 01:42:392 (102392|5,102549|1) - those two are off sync
2016-04-09 14:32 PyaKura: if you want to underline the change in pitch uh
2016-04-09 14:32 LordRaika: 02:04:033 - what do u think of this pattern... do u want me to change this?
2016-04-09 14:32 PyaKura: this one is okay
2016-04-09 14:33 PyaKura: easy to read and hit
2016-04-09 14:33 LordRaika: i see
2016-04-09 14:33 PyaKura: okay so
2016-04-09 14:33 PyaKura: 01:42:549 (102549|1) - move this one fown to the white line
2016-04-09 14:34 PyaKura: it will play better and is on sync with the pitch going down
2016-04-09 14:34 PyaKura: fown -> down lol
2016-04-09 14:36 LordRaika: [http://puu.sh/obP5N.jpg this?] but im not sure if 01:42:471 - have a sound on it.... since what i hear is the sound that exist here 01:42:549 -
2016-04-09 14:36 PyaKura: there is no sound on 01:42:549 - (?)
2016-04-09 14:36 PyaKura: or so faint i can't hear it at all
2016-04-09 14:38 LordRaika: 4k add note from the white line too,... so i guess i will follow it ^^b
2016-04-09 14:38 LordRaika: it might be delayed sound XD
2016-04-09 14:38 LordRaika: thx ^^b
2016-04-09 14:38 PyaKura: 01:54:346 -
2016-04-09 14:38 PyaKura: in this part
2016-04-09 14:39 PyaKura: i suggested you use triplets from each red lines
2016-04-09 14:39 PyaKura: suggest*
2016-04-09 14:39 LordRaika: like?
2016-04-09 14:39 PyaKura: until 01:56:221 -
2016-04-09 14:39 PyaKura: well
2016-04-09 14:39 PyaKura: the song emphasizes triplets here
2016-04-09 14:40 PyaKura: drop the hihat and focus on the synth
2016-04-09 14:40 LordRaika: i got it
2016-04-09 14:40 LordRaika: like... 01:54:736 (114736|1,115049|2,115361|5) - removing this
2016-04-09 14:40 PyaKura: 01:56:221 - here the hihat is stronger and goes along the synth so you can keep doing 1/4 until the next big white line
2016-04-09 14:41 LordRaika: k ^^b i got the point
2016-04-09 14:41 LordRaika: next next
2016-04-09 14:41 PyaKura: 01:56:846 - so same suggestion as previous since the structure is the same
2016-04-09 14:41 LordRaika: yep
2016-04-09 14:42 PyaKura: 01:59:346 - there is a buildup starting from here so I guess you can leave the following like that
2016-04-09 14:42 PyaKura: also remember big chords to add impact :p
2016-04-09 14:43 LordRaika: sure ^^b
2016-04-09 14:43 PyaKura: 02:27:002 (147002|4,147080|5,147158|6,147314|4,147314|5,147471|6,147549|5,147627|4,147783|6,147783|5) - I am not sure what these are mapped to
2016-04-09 14:44 PyaKura: oh
2016-04-09 14:44 PyaKura: i got it
2016-04-09 14:45 LordRaika: yeah, but i jst thought... this 02:27:314 (147314|5,147783|5) - is the only hard things here?
2016-04-09 14:45 LordRaika: should i reduce the LN?
2016-04-09 14:45 LordRaika: 02:27:314 (147314|5,147783|5) - delete this... its good, but the impact is just lower... what do u think?
2016-04-09 14:45 LordRaika: *good because its ensure less chance to miss haha
2016-04-09 14:45 PyaKura: well if it were me i would turn these LN 02:27:314 (147314|4,147314|5,147783|6,147783|5) - into normal notes
2016-04-09 14:46 PyaKura: because you have the LNs on the left for the synth sounds
2016-04-09 14:46 PyaKura: so normal notes could represent drums or something
2016-04-09 14:46 LordRaika: 02:27:314 (147314|5,147783|5) - but keep this?
2016-04-09 14:46 PyaKura: yes
2016-04-09 14:46 PyaKura: i mean uh
2016-04-09 14:46 PyaKura: turn it into normal note?
2016-04-09 14:47 PyaKura: the main difficulty in this part
2016-04-09 14:47 PyaKura: is the little gaps you have between those notes 02:27:080 (147080|5,147314|5,147549|5) -
2016-04-09 14:47 PyaKura: if you use normal notes it "cut" the pattern into easier to read parts
2016-04-09 14:47 PyaKura: and also remove the small gap
2016-04-09 14:48 LordRaika: i have 2 choice... [http://puu.sh/obPCL.jpg is this full LN better?] or ... [http://puu.sh/obPEf.png this one]
2016-04-09 14:48 PyaKura: i prefer the second to keep the impact
2016-04-09 14:49 LordRaika: k thx ^^b
2016-04-09 14:49 PyaKura: i even did this
2016-04-09 14:49 PyaKura:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48953792016-04-09 14:49 PyaKura: on the left side
2016-04-09 14:49 PyaKura: 3 notes to emphasize the loud sound instead of 1
2016-04-09 14:49 LordRaika: haha that impact
2016-04-09 14:50 LordRaika: its actually perfect... its 4 and 4 , 3note 1 ln,
2016-04-09 14:50 LordRaika: for cymbal
2016-04-09 14:51 PyaKura: 02:35:361 (155361|5,155361|4) - this sound is a bit of a trap
2016-04-09 14:51 PyaKura: i'm no actually sure there even is a sound there
2016-04-09 14:52 LordRaika: oh
2016-04-09 14:52 PyaKura: i just hear the synth stopping
2016-04-09 14:52 LordRaika: no worry, i hear it loud and clear ^^b
2016-04-09 14:52 PyaKura: but additional sound
2016-04-09 14:52 PyaKura: ok if you say so
2016-04-09 14:52 LordRaika: 02:35:049 (155049|6,155049|5,155361|4,155361|5) - here, they both have the same pitch (actually)
2016-04-09 14:52 LordRaika: XD hehe
2016-04-09 14:53 PyaKura: i can hear the first one fine
2016-04-09 14:53 PyaKura: the second one however ?_?
2016-04-09 14:53 PyaKura: anyway
2016-04-09 14:54 PyaKura: 02:40:908 (160908|1,161221|1) - move these to 6
2016-04-09 14:54 PyaKura: (i use 1|2|3...6|7 btw)
2016-04-09 14:54 PyaKura: it's easier to hit that way since it makes a hidden stairs
2016-04-09 14:55 PyaKura: 3 1 2 is an awkward pattern
2016-04-09 14:55 PyaKura: oh and 02:41:533 (161533|1) - this one to 7 for the above reason
2016-04-09 14:55 LordRaika: haha hidden stair
2016-04-09 14:55 LordRaika: sure
2016-04-09 14:56 PyaKura: 02:42:314 (162314|3,162366|2,162366|6,162418|1,162418|5,162471|4,162471|3) - this 'should' be fine buut
2016-04-09 14:56 PyaKura: you can probably turn one of these stairs into 1/4
2016-04-09 14:56 PyaKura: since the 1/4 is far more hearable than the 1/6
2016-04-09 14:56 PyaKura: polyrhythm yeyeyeye
2016-04-09 14:57 PyaKura: uh i mean the drums are 1/4
2016-04-09 14:57 PyaKura: not "far more hearable" my bad
2016-04-09 14:57 LordRaika: yeah, like 03:28:877 (208877|3,208877|0,208929|4,208955|1,208981|5) - this right?
2016-04-09 14:58 PyaKura: yes yes
2016-04-09 14:58 LordRaika: i will look into it , ^^ i will test it again later, if its good, i will change it
2016-04-09 14:58 PyaKura: sure
2016-04-09 15:00 PyaKura: 03:01:064 (181064|4,181142|3,181221|2,181299|1,181377|0) - releases, make them align with the 1/4 notes
2016-04-09 15:01 LordRaika: i think i like this 3/8 better ...
2016-04-09 15:01 LordRaika: its longer than 1/4 short LN,
2016-04-09 15:01 LordRaika: so its suppose to be easier to get 300
2016-04-09 15:02 PyaKura: well the releases need to be snapped well
2016-04-09 15:02 PyaKura: unconsciously you have a better time reading press and releases when they are aligned
2016-04-09 15:02 LordRaika: hmm ok then
2016-04-09 15:03 LordRaika: since i use short LN for those section ^^
2016-04-09 15:03 LordRaika: i'll change it
2016-04-09 15:04 PyaKura: consider doing this for every similar instance of LN like this
2016-04-09 15:04 LordRaika: ^^b ofc
2016-04-09 15:04 PyaKura: it's your choice in the end
2016-04-09 15:04 LordRaika: btw ,... ah damn, times up XD i have to go ;w;
2016-04-09 15:04 LordRaika: huehueheuhe