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KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai o Koete

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Arphimigon
1,650 posts
Joined December 2014
Arphimigon
Hi.
Not nazimoddin this since its wip

[Hard]
Damn this is more repetitive than my maps
00:06:300 (2,3,4) - I'm gonna step forward and be the first person to say that all cases like this succ (yknow that 2 slider then circle feels nicer dontcha?)
00:18:096 (2,3) - Another classic case of weird to hit offbeat sliders, perhaps a s1ck note then slider then note, or note then reverse slider because omfff it feels off as two offbeats in this part
00:37:319 - Most your extended sliders start on vocals like this, so why does your extended slider start at 00:37:465 - ? consider moving it back
00:52:028 - I know why this is here, but it seems more nice to me (idk why) if there are just three notes here. This slider end just feels... out of place. Idk keep or not thats just an opinion.
01:05:281 (1) - This red point is too early and looks weird, perhaps put it so the red point is at 01:05:353 -
01:29:164 (3) - Pls, this is two strong sounds, make it two notes :^) Esp since last sound being a slider end sucks for feelz

[Insane]
00:00:184 - to 00:05:863 - : SR wise this map is okay but taking that aside WHOA SPREAD YO
00:07:756 (3,4,1) - You do a lot of weird flows like this don't ya? Well I can understand you want emphasis to the slider, but not to that note! At least not so much that it literally points away from a curve and has high spacin, that's just weirdddd (tl;dr snappy, out of place movement to slider is k but not to note)
00:26:688 (4,1) - This could point together a tad smoother, with the curve pointin towards that previous note~
00:27:417 - Perhaps make this vocal clickable? If you turned 00:27:271 (2,3,4,5) - into note slider slider it'd make more sense with the vocals here which you have mapped most the rhythms to
00:40:232 (3) - There isnt THAT much reason for a 1/4, if you are gonna emphasise the high pitched vocal thingy here then this seems a little pressuring. So i'd reduce the spacing here. Oh, and this is really offputting being a 1/4 slider in the middle of a section with absolutely no 1/4 sliders, so if you know a way to make it more intuitive to play, go for that. (wtf did i just write, did that even make any sense)
00:42:562 (2,3,1) - Now THESE would be SO much cooler if they had a LOT more spacing, strong sounds, vocals, everything is pushed into these at once!
00:51:154 - After a reverse THIS long I'd sooooooooooo recommend you make the downbeat clickable or these next two notes are gonna be accuracy killers
00:57:853 (3,4,5) - Oh I'm saying this a little late too but, these linear plays with changing spacing are a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit weird, i'd move 4 slightly down for some more angle, even if just a little more
01:01:349 (3) - Perhaps make this into a short stream?

[BEYOND THE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH]
Yknow me and my hatred of any offbeat sliders when there isn't a need for it. That's pretty much the only reason I don't like this map as much as I should.
00:29:892 (3,4,5,1) - Pls put slider 1 to the right of note 3, it just plays so much neaterrrrrr you can keep the pressure with the spacing and snapping, but where it is, is jut awkward af
00:51:154 - Same as insane, this just feels like a dick-move pls don't do this Anxient
Nope, not really much of a problem with this diff tbh

[Sexxar's OPEN WIDE!]
00:09:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - good fookin game dam ok
oh this is wip NVRMND
-Kanzaki
889 posts
Joined June 2012
-Kanzaki
Hello anxient i like this song da drums tho.

Beyond the gate



  • 00:06:300 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Seems like you are trying to reduce the difficulty but i don't know why i would map these as circles since this part is kinda exciting and even after here i can't tell the difference between these sliders and this part 00:13:290 (2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know you change the difficulty on here but as i said if you change slider to circles then all should be okay. (P.S. : After checking insane diff as i can see you mapped same on insane diff too so you actually should do this to indicate this diff is extra diff.)

    00:51:227 (8,9) - The thing you actually starts on 00:51:154 - put 8 here and then you can put objects to white blue and red tick i would do like this check it http://puu.sh/nb2pB/430b2fcd66.png

    01:04:552 (2,3) - Same thing as i said on first mod but on this part these aren't bats my eye i dont know why but you could map these circles too i don't know if you wanna keep your difficulty this way



Xexxar diff : 00:14:310 (1,2,3) - really bad overmapping done over here.




Nice map anxient you gonna speed rank your difficulties probably. I find it good enough to go.
Last edited by -Kanzaki , edited 2 times in total.
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

Arphimigon wrote:

Hi.
Not nazimoddin this since its wip

[Hard]
Damn this is more repetitive than my maps - bruh
00:06:300 (2,3,4) - I'm gonna step forward and be the first person to say that all cases like this succ (yknow that 2 slider then circle feels nicer dontcha?) - bruh
00:18:096 (2,3) - Another classic case of weird to hit offbeat sliders, perhaps a s1ck note then slider then note, or note then reverse slider because omfff it feels off as two offbeats in this part - made it hitcircle -> slider -> hitcircle
00:37:319 - Most your extended sliders start on vocals like this, so why does your extended slider start at 00:37:465 - ? consider moving it back - 00:37:465 - coz theres actually a beat here that i cannot miss out on.
00:52:028 - I know why this is here, but it seems more nice to me (idk why) if there are just three notes here. This slider end just feels... out of place. Idk keep or not thats just an opinion. - ok dad
01:05:281 (1) - This red point is too early and looks weird, perhaps put it so the red point is at 01:05:353 - gotcha
01:29:164 (3) - Pls, this is two strong sounds, make it two notes :^) Esp since last sound being a slider end sucks for feelz - k

[Insane]
00:00:184 - to 00:05:863 - : SR wise this map is okay but taking that aside WHOA SPREAD YO - bruh
00:07:756 (3,4,1) - You do a lot of weird flows like this don't ya? Well I can understand you want emphasis to the slider, but not to that note! At least not so much that it literally points away from a curve and has high spacin, that's just weirdddd (tl;dr snappy, out of place movement to slider is k but not to note) - made it less out of place
00:26:688 (4,1) - This could point together a tad smoother, with the curve pointin towards that previous note~ - gotcha fam
00:27:417 - Perhaps make this vocal clickable? If you turned 00:27:271 (2,3,4,5) - into note slider slider it'd make more sense with the vocals here which you have mapped most the rhythms to - nah i think its fine as it is
00:40:232 (3) - There isnt THAT much reason for a 1/4, if you are gonna emphasise the high pitched vocal thingy here then this seems a little pressuring. So i'd reduce the spacing here. Oh, and this is really offputting being a 1/4 slider in the middle of a section with absolutely no 1/4 sliders, so if you know a way to make it more intuitive to play, go for that. (wtf did i just write, did that even make any sense) - nope. but im keeping the 1/4 coz theres a drum beat.
00:42:562 (2,3,1) - Now THESE would be SO much cooler if they had a LOT more spacing, strong sounds, vocals, everything is pushed into these at once! - naw i think its fine lol
00:51:154 - After a reverse THIS long I'd sooooooooooo recommend you make the downbeat clickable or these next two notes are gonna be accuracy killers - come on man theyre not THAT bad...
00:57:853 (3,4,5) - Oh I'm saying this a little late too but, these linear plays with changing spacing are a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit weird, i'd move 4 slightly down for some more angle, even if just a little more - gotcha
01:01:349 (3) - Perhaps make this into a short stream? - i reduced the slider by one repeat and added a circle.

[BEYOND THE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH]
Yknow me and my hatred of any offbeat sliders when there isn't a need for it. That's pretty much the only reason I don't like this map as much as I should. - bruh this entire song is an offset beat
00:29:892 (3,4,5,1) - Pls put slider 1 to the right of note 3, it just plays so much neaterrrrrr you can keep the pressure with the spacing and snapping, but where it is, is jut awkward af - placed more irght
00:51:154 - Same as insane, this just feels like a dick-move pls don't do this Anxient - bruh i dont understand why you dont like this part so much :c
Nope, not really much of a problem with this diff tbh
broh thank for m4m
I Must Decrease
908 posts
Joined June 2013
I Must Decrease
I'll hurry up ;_;



eventually... :(
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello anxient i like this song da drums tho.

Beyond the gate



  • 00:06:300 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Seems like you are trying to reduce the difficulty but i don't know why i would map these as circles since this part is kinda exciting and even after here i can't tell the difference between these sliders and this part 00:13:290 (2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know you change the difficulty on here but as i said if you change slider to circles then all should be okay. (P.S. : After checking insane diff as i can see you mapped same on insane diff too so you actually should do this to indicate this diff is extra diff.) - maybe its just my style, or something but i dont want to start the map instantly hard. i want to let the player enjoy the map before i rip their faces with the kiai. like give them time to enjoy the map before they die? besides. its cool to play with. as for why i made jumps in 00:13:290 (2,3,4,5,6) - its to indicate that there is a new part of the song coming up, the previous part is going to end.

    00:51:227 (8,9) - The thing you actually starts on 00:51:154 - put 8 here and then you can put objects to white blue and red tick i would do like this check it http://puu.sh/nb2pB/430b2fcd66.png - i know what you mean. i applied your mod, but dude next time check the contents of your puush link :^)

    01:04:552 (2,3) - Same thing as i said on first mod but on this part these aren't bats my eye i dont know why but you could map these circles too i don't know if you wanna keep your difficulty this way - i dont wanna make this into a jump fest lol. besides i dont think that part is very worthy of a jump section if you know what i mean/

Xexxar diff : 00:14:310 (1,2,3) - really bad overmapping done over here. - i should really tell people to stop modding xxr's diff.


Nice map anxient you gonna speed rank your difficulties probably. - i wont speedrank this until i get sayonara no yukue ranked. besides i have GDs i need to wait for. I find it good enough to go. - thanks tho bby, i really appreciate it.
thanks for modding!
-Kanzaki
889 posts
Joined June 2012
-Kanzaki
Sorry about my puush. I used a circle and a 1/4 slider on there it fits better instead of triplet tho.
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
sry for very fucking late.
i was sick since monday :(
tried to aim for 2.6* but i didn't lel.

Poke me if you want me to nerf it.

because i used hitsounds
Make sure everything is the same as in the current set since i didn't update it. The only diffs i have is yours.
Kawashiro
1,522 posts
Joined April 2012
Kawashiro
m4m

[Xexxar]
  1. 00:00:184 - Stream is too loud. hitsound is louder than drum sound change volume to 50~60%
  2. 00:03:824 (4) - Add Drum Clap will be fit with song
  3. 00:09:941 (4,5) - hey... here is 1/4 gap? plz keep DS 1.0
  4. 00:14:747 - drum is in here. so how about change 00:14:601 (1,1) - this circle to 1/2 slider? it will be fit with drum and elec guitar sound
  5. from 00:14:018 - here to 00:15:183 - here, don't abuse NC plz. i think this part doesn't need lots of NC
  6. 00:15:183 (1) - change to 1/2 slider plz. vocal 'tsu' is still play in this part but 00:15:329 - this gap is weird. I think it's wrong beat

Sor, I hate Jump map :(

Thanks about m4m, GL :)
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

Feb wrote:

sry for very fucking late.
i was sick since monday :(
tried to aim for 2.6* but i didn't lel. - well glad youre feeling better~

Poke me if you want me to nerf it.

because i used hitsounds
Make sure everything is the same as in the current set since i didn't update it. The only diffs i have is yours.
updated with feb's diff! Thanks!
MikasaSerket
520 posts
Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket
Nice Anxient! I wanted to map this song for a while, I never have really gotten to it. Hopefully you are able to get it ranked ;^)
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

MikasaSerket wrote:

Nice Anxient! I wanted to map this song for a while, I never have really gotten to it. Hopefully you are able to get it ranked ;^)
ayy thanks
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
rank monogatari thing
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

Feb wrote:

rank monogatari thing
once pho wakes up done
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[General]
  1. Every diff except Normal have unsnapped preview point.

[Beyond the door]
  1. 00:00:176 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - add some drum-hitsound don't be lazy. tbh i want you to add yourself but i will leave my suggestion here so you won't think I'm lazy.
    - 00:00:176 (1,2,3,4) - clap
    - 00:00:467 (5,1,2,3,4) - drum-clap
    - 00:01:049 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - drum-finish
  2. there still have some place that you can add drum-hitsound if you want. because don't add is possible too.
  3. 00:32:506 (5,1) - cymbal sound have less spacing than (5)? just no. you made it more spacing the whole map.
  4. 00:47:360 (4) - why add finish here? you didn't add at 00:45:030 (4)
  5. 00:48:671 (4,5) - why you use two sliders? imo replace to 4 circles plays better and more HARDCORE.
  6. 01:20:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - tbh, overmapped. but I don't know how to fix either. so let's keep like that first :p

[Insane]
  1. unsnapped preview time.
  2. 00:13:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - tbh, this pattern is even harder than expert diff. please nerf it.
  3. 00:29:156 (1) - make it further or nerf (3). make cymbal more spacing.
  4. 00:01:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - also please reconsider about this, expert even doesn't has 9 notes stream. (here)
  5. 00:42:117 (1,2,3) - the way you use NC is a bit weird imo, 00:42:117 (1,2) = 1/2 but have more spacing than 00:42:554 (2,3) which is 1/1 and the same NC color. almost got me when testplay.
  6. 00:55:952 (1) - I knew you probably don't change but you did like this on 00:57:117 (1) and 00:58:282 (1) and 00:59:447 (1). it's also have more flow so maybe?

[Hard]
  1. 00:21:001 (1) - soo do you want to use NC on every 1 or 2 stanza I confused. remove this one? make them consistent.
  2. 00:49:981 (4) - spread to two circles to fit with the strong beat? and more fit with the song.
  3. 00:51:583 (1,2,3) - this is still a hard diff. will be more friendly if you move these pattern nearer to the middle. so they can hit them comfortably.
  4. I think use circle to emphasize cymbal sound sounds and plays better. such as
    01:22:311 (3) , 01:24:642 (3) and 01:26:680 (2,3) or you can use this rhythm.
  5. Insane have many stream and triple, how about add a few triple (or slider stream) to this diff for better spread?

[Feb]
  1. 00:08:768 (2,3) - ctrl+g sounds and plays better imo.
  2. 00:13:428 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:23:768 (1) - unnecessary imo. it is more like the same set the previous NC. no impact from the song to add here.
  4. 00:37:894 (5) - error spacing.

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:855 (1) - tbh from my experience, beginner mostly miss a pattern like this, long gap but stack. every time I spec noob, they always hit that slider beforehand and miss because the break is too long and their cursor reach it too fast so they don't know what to do but click it. it's up to you to change or not :3
  2. 00:23:622 - unused green line. also 00:24:496 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:865 (1) - ^ please avoid stack for easiest diff.
  4. 01:06:438 (1) - not sure if this shape is too tricky for beginner.
  5. 01:11:098 (1) - please avoid stack.
  6. 01:20:418 (1) - ^

good map GL :P

pm/tell me anywhere if you want to star for star.
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb

P A N wrote:

[General]

  • [notice][Feb]
  1. 00:08:768 (2,3) - ctrl+g sounds and plays better imo. I think both play alright tbh, in my case i wanna follow the electric guitar in your case you wanna follow the basic drums. I think both ways are acceptable.
  2. 00:13:428 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 00:23:768 (1) - unnecessary imo. it is more like the same set the previous NC. no impact from the song to add here. I added NC because of the SV change. Idk if its appropriate since the SV change is not to huge, but I'll stay better safe than sorry atm.
  4. 00:37:894 (5) - error spacing.
    fixed
Thanks for modding pan!

hi anxient
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52028
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:GATEⅡ～世界を超えて～
Artist:KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS
ArtistUnicode:岸田教団&THE明星ロケッツ
Creator:Anxient
Version:Feb's Advanced
Source:GATE 自衛隊　彼の地にて、斯く戦えり　第２クール
Tags:tv size opening kreygasm drum 2 feb
BeatmapID:908097
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OverallDifficulty:5
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357,68,19836,6,0,B|294:53|294:53|216:74,2,132,6|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,142,20855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,217,21001,2,0,P|354:273|420:263,1,132,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,185,21729,2,0,P|254:260|263:288,1,88,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,350,22166,6,0,B|191:366|191:366|148:346,1,132,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,295,22748,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,154,23040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,185,23331,6,0,P|300:133|258:114,1,121.000003692627,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,168,23768,6,0,P|188:205|206:237,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,270,24059,2,0,P|312:263|340:247,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,191,24350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,154,24496,6,0,B|478:196|478:196|448:313,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,379,25224,2,0,L|267:265,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,182,25661,2,0,P|186:155|111:207,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,283,26243,2,0,L|10:288,2,55
157,331,26680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,331,26826,6,0,B|211:320|211:320|341:344,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,307,27409,2,0,P|417:272|389:192,1,110
329,154,27845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,154,27991,2,0,L|204:147,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,86,28428,2,0,P|191:102|317:48,1,165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,34,29010,1,10,0:0:0:0:
465,74,29156,6,0,B|474:113|474:113|445:250,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,362,29884,2,0,P|282:342|264:283,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,213,30321,2,0,P|218:205|141:245,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,151,30904,2,0,P|182:120|233:113,1,110
295,64,31341,1,8,0:0:0:0:
349,132,31486,6,0,B|360:248|360:248|333:305,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,288,32069,2,0,P|222:277|177:270,2,55
287,367,32506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,361,32651,2,0,P|131:350|26:361,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,273,33234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,220,33379,2,0,P|123:207|146:207,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,141,33816,6,0,P|90:156|188:86,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,34544,2,0,B|371:117|371:117|358:176,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,217,34981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,217,35127,2,0,P|257:278|294:291,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,296,35564,2,0,P|397:299|434:315,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,369,36001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,370,36146,6,0,B|111:361|111:361|62:316,1,165,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,162,36875,2,0,L|135:169,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,204,37311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,163,37457,2,0,P|337:162|382:223,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,287,37894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,358,38040,2,0,P|270:362|236:351,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,287,38476,6,0,P|269:310|193:272,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,143,39205,2,0,P|66:184|110:219,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,191,39642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,146,39787,2,0,B|286:132|286:132|369:138,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,197,40224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,136,40370,2,0,P|500:103|491:63,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,197,40807,6,0,P|377:125|396:35,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,69,41535,2,0,P|169:98|119:64,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,34,41972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
14,117,42117,2,0,B|2:171|2:171|22:240,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,272,42554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,204,42845,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,348,43137,6,0,B|137:280|137:280|169:183,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,204,43719,2,0,P|300:214|312:122,1,165,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,60,44302,2,0,B|188:47|188:47|76:66,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,99,44884,2,0,P|-4:153|10:208,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,270,45321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,270,45467,6,0,B|180:299|180:299|236:268,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,226,46049,2,0,P|343:208|421:218,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,261,46486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
474,261,46632,2,0,B|490:207|490:207|472:88,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,63,47214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,97,47360,2,0,P|284:94|243:82,2,55,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,63,47797,6,0,P|336:115|346:216,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,275,48379,2,0,L|365:332,2,55,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,286,48816,2,0,L|274:346,2,55,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,286,49253,2,0,L|178:360,2,55,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,200,49690,1,10,0:0:0:0:
97,172,49836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,220,49981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,267,50127,6,0,B|144:252|144:252|171:266|171:266|247:242|282:254|298:265|298:265|270:275|256:270,1,247.500009441376,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,358,51146,6,0,P|301:357|329:345,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,218,51583,2,0,P|457:217|491:230,2,55,10|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,218,52457,6,0,B|315:237|315:237|260:202,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,47,53185,2,0,P|156:71|109:51,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,29,53622,2,0,L|39:193,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,268,54205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,221,54350,2,0,P|210:208|273:236,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,294,54787,6,0,P|362:347|410:288,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,113,55515,2,0,P|431:109|490:150,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,196,55952,2,0,B|354:204|354:204|324:193|324:193|241:204,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,139,56535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,162,56680,2,0,P|78:163|42:144,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,139,57117,6,0,B|207:258|207:258|183:308,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,340,57845,2,0,L|4:217,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,200,58282,2,0,B|128:192|128:192|160:200|160:200|208:188|260:208,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,58865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,304,59010,2,0,P|332:328|288:284,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,59447,6,0,B|464:224|464:224|516:192,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,118,60030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,42,60175,2,0,P|391:24|361:22,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,105,60612,2,0,B|182:94,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,176,61341,2,0,B|79:134|79:134|106:202,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,258,61777,6,0,P|199:304|284:268,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,215,62506,2,0,B|454:272|454:272|435:324,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,331,62942,2,0,B|319:214|319:214|339:155,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,99,63525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,40,63671,2,0,P|255:37|199:51,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,20,64108,6,0,P|117:62|116:192,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,320,64836,2,0,P|239:268|239:210,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,129,65273,2,0,B|259:121|259:121|309:139|309:139|385:128,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,193,65855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,109,66001,2,0,P|466:95|496:69,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,193,66438,6,0,B|446:254|446:254|424:365,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,354,67166,2,0,P|231:310|241:244,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,179,67603,2,0,B|172:158|172:158|117:171,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,200,68185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,286,68331,2,0,P|71:312|99:269,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,200,68768,6,0,P|30:125|69:40,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,61,69350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,56,69496,2,0,P|276:46|302:29,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,61,69933,2,0,B|129:132|129:132|151:239,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,263,70661,2,0,B|370:282|370:282|320:324,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,360,71098,6,0,L|69:353,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,275,71680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,71826,2,0,P|78:153|60:125,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,255,72263,2,0,L|322:263,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,213,72845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,125,72991,2,0,P|377:84|385:52,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,170,73428,6,0,L|126:158,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,115,74010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,61,74156,2,0,P|133:22|117:-4,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,115,74593,2,0,B|42:168|42:168|56:223,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,287,75030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,243,75175,2,0,L|305:251,1,110
382,244,75612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,294,75758,6,0,P|479:227|462:126,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,96,76341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,105,76486,2,0,P|268:104|237:90,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,177,76923,2,0,P|327:243|238:241,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,261,77506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,241,77651,2,0,L|12:224,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,261,78088,6,0,B|167:196|167:196|140:91,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,11,78671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,38,78816,2,0,P|269:53|335:28,1,110
409,19,79253,1,4,0:0:0:0:
409,19,79690,6,0,P|408:57|398:89,1,55,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,140,79981,2,0,P|454:168|432:194,1,55,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,272,80273,1,10,0:0:0:0:
333,314,80418,6,0,B|291:297|291:297|257:306|257:306|212:286|156:300,2,165,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,272,81438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,103,81729,2,0,B|407:87|407:87|336:97,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,35,82166,2,0,P|262:90|268:206,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,276,82748,6,0,B|177:286|177:286|155:272|155:272|112:280|66:268,2,165,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,193,83768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,174,84059,2,0,P|454:109|439:59,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,87,84642,2,0,P|255:133|269:208,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,278,85078,6,0,B|234:292|234:292|209:284|209:284|162:297|105:267,2,165,6|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,310,86098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,163,86389,2,0,B|472:103|472:103|451:33,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,57,86972,2,0,B|265:110|265:110|279:177,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,214,87409,6,0,B|225:230|225:230|175:210,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,178,87991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,98,88137,2,0,P|32:89|0:86,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,77,88574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,105,88719,2,0,L|302:96,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,121,89010,1,10,0:0:0:0:
403,38,89156,1,12,0:0:0:0:
345,204,89447,5,14,0:0:0:0:
Anxient
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Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

P A N wrote:

[General]
  1. Every diff except Normal have unsnapped preview point.

[Beyond the door]
  1. 00:00:176 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - add some drum-hitsound don't be lazy. tbh i want you to add yourself but i will leave my suggestion here so you won't think I'm lazy.
    - 00:00:176 (1,2,3,4) - clap
    - 00:00:467 (5,1,2,3,4) - drum-clap
    - 00:01:049 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - drum-finish
  2. there still have some place that you can add drum-hitsound if you want. because don't add is possible too. - its not that i was lazy in putting the hitsounds lol, its that i didnt think or cannot think of any hitsound pattern that would suit it :c
  3. 00:32:506 (5,1) - cymbal sound have less spacing than (5)? just no. you made it more spacing the whole map. - lowered the spacing so it wont be the largest jump in the set
  4. 00:47:360 (4) - why add finish here? you didn't add at 00:45:030 (4) - changed to clap
  5. 00:48:671 (4,5) - why you use two sliders? imo replace to 4 circles plays better and more HARDCORE. - i need build up :cc
  6. 01:20:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - tbh, overmapped. but I don't know how to fix either. so let's keep like that first :p - lol its overmapped?

[Insane]
  1. unsnapped preview time.
  2. 00:13:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - tbh, this pattern is even harder than expert diff. please nerf it. - nerfed
  3. 00:29:156 (1) - make it further or nerf (3). make cymbal more spacing. - i made 3 more visible, but ill keep the spacing as is. i did reloacte some notes so there will be flow break. that should be enough emphasis right?
  4. 00:01:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - also please reconsider about this, expert even doesn't has 9 notes stream. (here) - changed to 4 hit and one slider repeat
  5. 00:42:117 (1,2,3) - the way you use NC is a bit weird imo, 00:42:117 (1,2) = 1/2 but have more spacing than 00:42:554 (2,3) which is 1/1 and the same NC color. almost got me when testplay. - continue combo for 00:42:117 (7) - and NC for 00:42:554 (1) -
  6. 00:55:952 (1) - I knew you probably don't change but you did like this on 00:57:117 (1) and 00:58:282 (1) and 00:59:447 (1). it's also have more flow so maybe? - nah i think it flows well as it is rn

[Hard]
  1. 00:21:001 (1) - soo do you want to use NC on every 1 or 2 stanza I confused. remove this one? make them consistent. - continue combo
  2. 00:49:981 (4) - spread to two circles to fit with the strong beat? and more fit with the song. - copied previous slider and rotated so it flows. used 2.0x DS
  3. 00:51:583 (1,2,3) - this is still a hard diff. will be more friendly if you move these pattern nearer to the middle. so they can hit them comfortably. - is it really that hard? ;A; fiine changed rhythm to hitcircle --> slider --> hitcircle. should be 300% easier now
  4. I think use circle to emphasize cymbal sound sounds and plays better. such as
    01:22:311 (3) , 01:24:642 (3) and 01:26:680 (2,3) or you can use this rhythm. - i think its fine lol
  5. Insane have many stream and triple, how about add a few triple (or slider stream) to this diff for better spread? - my concept for hard is no 1/4 notes so nah ^^"

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:855 (1) - tbh from my experience, beginner mostly miss a pattern like this, long gap but stack. every time I spec noob, they always hit that slider beforehand and miss because the break is too long and their cursor reach it too fast so they don't know what to do but click it. it's up to you to change or not :3 - made it unstack, but im not sure about this. gonna have to confirm with you.
  2. 00:23:622 - unused green line. also 00:24:496 (1) - ^ - deleted the 1st one but not the second one. the 2nd one is for volume change and change hitsound number
  3. 00:43:865 (1) - ^ please avoid stack for easiest diff. - okay but im keeping this .-.
  4. 01:06:438 (1) - not sure if this shape is too tricky for beginner. - made it more noob friendly
  5. 01:11:098 (1) - please avoid stack. - ok dad
  6. 01:20:418 (1) - ^ - im keeping this

good map GL :P

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lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
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[General]
  1. AiMod said that you messed up the preview point on Feb's Advanced
  2. 00:15:175 - well, i don't think this normal hitsound requires for this quite part. use soft hitsound instead (about the use of hitsound, just set it to "Normal" in additions)
[Beyond to Hell]
  1. 00:48:379 (2,3) - why is this closer?
  2. 00:55:952 (1,2) - (2) has a loud sound due to its drum rather than on (1)'s tail. i suggest you to make it far from its distance
  3. 01:12:263 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:19:544 (1,2,3,4) - i'd make that triplet a bit away from it
[Insane]
  1. sound like "Light Extra" for me on intro
  2. 00:51:146 (1,2,3) - avoid from less confusing by using a 1/4 reverse slider
gl
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

lit120 wrote:

ready

[General]
  1. AiMod said that you messed up the preview point on Feb's Advanced - dudenice
  2. 00:15:175 - well, i don't think this normal hitsound requires for this quite part. use soft hitsound instead (about the use of hitsound, just set it to "Normal" in additions)
[Beyond to Hell]
  1. 00:48:379 (2,3) - why is this closer? - increase tension?
  2. 00:55:952 (1,2) - (2) has a loud sound due to its drum rather than on (1)'s tail. i suggest you to make it far from its distance - gotcha fam
  3. 01:12:263 (1,2) - ^ - i tried
  4. 01:19:544 (1,2,3,4) - i'd make that triplet a bit away from it - seems fine to me...?
[Insane]
  1. sound like "Light Extra" for me on intro - naww
  2. 00:51:146 (1,2,3) - avoid from less confusing by using a 1/4 reverse slider - nah its fine as it is imo .-.
gl
tank~
Feb
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Joined June 2014
Feb
does that hitsound thingy apply to my part? i can't remember if i copied your hitsounds lal
Anxient
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Topic Starter
Anxient

Feb wrote:

does that hitsound thingy apply to my part? i can't remember if i copied your hitsounds lal
you didnt :l
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle
n

[Normal]
00:12:409 (4,1) - This is awkward, mainly due to the other sliders follow flow with each other
00:14:010 (3) - Changing rhythm from guitar to whatever this is is kinda just awkward, just make this a 1/1 repeat to fit the music better
00:36:438 (2,3) - The change of direction doesn't feel too good imo, maybe make this one not change direction, but curve the slider of 3 to start going toward the right (after re-positioning 2 ofc)
z
00:40:807 (1,2,3) - You could make the curves n stuff here flow more smoothly
00:42:845 (5) - You should turn this into two circles cuz emphasis
01:08:331 (4,1) - lol I'm fine with all the other transitions but these ones really bug me cuz you can just make them flow perfectly

[Adv]
00:02:797 (1,2) - lol ds
00:06:729 (4,5,6) - It would be better to have 4,5 stack instead of 6 because you would rather have the restart of every guitar w/e be emphasized, applies to all sections with this

[Hard]
00:09:933 - I dunno, for here you were were following guitar before, and then now the strong guitar isn't clicked but w/e
00:25:224 (3,1) - Emphasis, you did it for last combo, why not for this one as well?
00:26:826 (1) - ^
00:27:991 (1) - ^ like, even like a .2x difference would be nice, to accent the start of every verse
00:31:341 (4,1) - So inconsistent with these accents imo
00:37:166 (5,1,2) - You were following vocals so
z
00:39:642 (5,1) - ctrl g rhythm
00:41:826 (4,5) - Why flow stop here? If it's for vocals like last stack, last stack was stronger so maybe unstack that one orrrr, you could unstack the next stack because they follow drums :v
00:42:554 (3,4,1) - I dunno, anti-jumps here would be cool

im free from owing people yayay
squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
m4m

Hard
• 00:04:253 (1) - End on white tick for a hard diff?

• 00:08:913 (3) - blanket with 2*

• strong beat at 00:14:884 - , would recommend making this a circle instead

• 00:20:855 (4) - place around x228 y224 to continue flow*

• 00:21:729 (7,8,1) - space evenly?*

• 00:28:719 (3,1) - why not stack?

• 00:29:884 (3,4,1) - another example of same type of thing as 00:20:855 (4) ^

• 00:32:360 (4,5) - Why a double?

• 00:42:554 (3,4) - ds with 2

• 00:50:200 (1) - start on white tick

• 01:26:680 (2,3) - blanket xd

Insane
• 00:02:506 (2) - Why not ctrl+g?

• 00:03:234 (1) - same^ for flowish purposes

• 00:06:292 (2,1) - not a fan of the overlaps like this i spotted in testplay. Would put closer together (x236 y120 for here)*

• 00:22:894 (4) - move farther away from slider or overlap it

• 00:32:214 (3,4,5,1) - what is this spacing? just space this evenly, it feels more necessary here at 00:33:088 -

• 00:40:224 (3) - make this a circle, no need for kickslider here

• 00:50:127 (6) - this repeat slider is very iffy. unaware of long hold + let go = loss of hp

• 00:53:185 (3) - make this a modification of 2, like this*

• 01:01:341 (3) - why not put a stream here?

• 01:06:001 (3) - another example of thing at 00:53:185 (3)

*= appears multiple times throughout map

That's all I can do due to time, good luck with the set!! :)
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

Battle wrote:

n

[Normal]
00:12:409 (4,1) - This is awkward, mainly due to the other sliders follow flow with each other - made it more intuitive(?)
00:14:010 (3) - Changing rhythm from guitar to whatever this is is kinda just awkward, just make this a 1/1 repeat to fit the music better - gotcha fam
00:36:438 (2,3) - The change of direction doesn't feel too good imo, maybe make this one not change direction, but curve the slider of 3 to start going toward the right (after re-positioning 2 ofc) - i tried
z
00:40:807 (1,2,3) - You could make the curves n stuff here flow more smoothly - feels smooth enough imo?
00:42:845 (5) - You should turn this into two circles cuz emphasis - star rating is now 1.99
01:08:331 (4,1) - lol I'm fine with all the other transitions but these ones really bug me cuz you can just make them flow perfectly - nah fam

[Adv]
00:02:797 (1,2) - lol ds
00:06:729 (4,5,6) - It would be better to have 4,5 stack instead of 6 because you would rather have the restart of every guitar w/e be emphasized, applies to all sections with this

[Hard]
00:09:933 - I dunno, for here you were were following guitar before, and then now the strong guitar isn't clicked but w/e - changed the rhythm
00:25:224 (3,1) - Emphasis, you did it for last combo, why not for this one as well? - this is a new section of the song lol
00:26:826 (1) - ^ - ^
00:27:991 (1) - ^ like, even like a .2x difference would be nice, to accent the start of every verse - naw
00:31:341 (4,1) - So inconsistent with these accents imo - okay ill fix this.
00:37:166 (5,1,2) - You were following vocals so - i was following vocals?
z
00:39:642 (5,1) - ctrl g rhythm - gotcha
00:41:826 (4,5) - Why flow stop here? If it's for vocals like last stack, last stack was stronger so maybe unstack that one orrrr, you could unstack the next stack because they follow drums :v - naw ill keep the 1st stack coz transition to a new part of the song. ill keep the 2nd stack coz doing anything but that looks weird :V
00:42:554 (3,4,1) - I dunno, anti-jumps here would be cool - eue. increased the spacing a bit so meh

im free from owing people yayay

squirrelpascals wrote:

m4m

Hard
• 00:04:253 (1) - End on white tick for a hard diff? - nope

• 00:08:913 (3) - blanket with 2* - its intentional*

• strong beat at 00:14:884 - , would recommend making this a circle instead - personal preference. doesnt disturb gameplay all that much imo. besides its a transition to a new part of the song.

• 00:20:855 (4) - place around x228 y224 to continue flow* - eh. after comparing to certain parts of the song, ill make it same ds. but your suggestion is a big nono. such a big jump in a hard diff? nope.

• 00:21:729 (7,8,1) - space evenly?* - this is a recurring thing if you didnt notice. 00:17:069 (6,1) - 00:19:690 (8,1) - 00:22:020 (8,1) - in this part, every time theres a NC, there will be a small jump.

• 00:28:719 (3,1) - why not stack? - from the mods on sayonara no yukue, stacks arent recommended on hard diffs.

• 00:29:884 (3,4,1) - another example of same type of thing as 00:20:855 (4) ^ - - need jump

• 00:32:360 (4,5) - Why a double? - made into a triangle.

• 00:42:554 (3,4) - ds with 2 - emphasis.

• 00:50:200 (1) - start on white tick - why? theres sound on the blue tick .-. well in cases with the insane diff it would be a repeat slider but meh

• 01:26:680 (2,3) - blanket xd - ok dad

Insane
• 00:02:506 (2) - Why not ctrl+g? - good idea.

• 00:03:234 (1) - same^ for flowish purposes - not this one tho.

• 00:06:292 (2,1) - not a fan of the overlaps like this i spotted in testplay. Would put closer together (x236 y120 for here)* - i happen to like this tho :c

• 00:22:894 (4) - move farther away from slider or overlap it - nah. it doesnt look too bad imo

• 00:32:214 (3,4,5,1) - what is this spacing? just space this evenly, it feels more necessary here at 00:33:088 - gave spacing to 00:33:088 (2) -

• 00:40:224 (3) - make this a circle, no need for kickslider here - there is double.

• 00:50:127 (6) - this repeat slider is very iffy. unaware of long hold + let go = loss of hp - your loss. git gud :^)

• 00:53:185 (3) - make this a modification of 2, like this* - implying that it isnt?

• 01:01:341 (3) - why not put a stream here? - overkill imo

• 01:06:001 (3) - another example of thing at 00:53:185 (3) - ^ ^

*= appears multiple times throughout map

That's all I can do due to time, good luck with the set!! :)
thanks you two!
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb

Battle wrote:

n

[Adv]
00:02:797 (1,2) - lol ds i suck dick
00:06:729 (4,5,6) - It would be better to have 4,5 stack instead of 6 because you would rather have the restart of every guitar w/e be emphasized, applies to all sections with this agreed.
you need to add video to my diff
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Anxient
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Exa
445 posts
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06:20 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/916147 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Normal]]
06:20 *Anxient is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/916147 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Normal]]
06:20 Anxient: gotcha fam
06:21 Exa: 00:23:040 (3,1) - Stack
06:21 Exa: 00:34:544 (2,3) - Not good enough blankut
06:21 Exa: 00:34:544 (2) - Rotate this by 1 with select center
06:22 Anxient: 1st stack
06:22 Anxient: im pretty sure with a gap that large
06:22 Anxient: anyone would know NOT to click
06:22 Exa: hm?
06:22 Anxient: fixed blanket
06:22 Anxient: 4/1 gap pls
06:22 Exa: yeah, the stack is imperfect tho that's what I am saying
06:22 Anxient: dont worry exa i know how to make those things lol
06:22 Exa: XD
06:23 Anxient: WHAT
06:23 Exa: http://puu.sh/nNiyR/54aa42416e.jpg
06:23 Anxient: fixed
06:23 Exa: lol
06:23 Anxient: fixed
06:23 Anxient: btw im not changing the rhythm unless it doesnt increase the star rating
06:23 Anxient: its 1.99 and im really sensitive
06:23 Exa: yeah I saw lol
06:24 Exa: 01:26:972 (4) - rotate by -4 with select center
06:24 Exa: no thechnical errors on normal, wp
06:24 Anxient: wp?
06:25 Exa: well played
06:25 Exa: should i mod febs thing?
06:25 Anxient: yeah sure
06:25 Exa: oh wow
06:25 Anxient: lemme see if hes online
06:25 Exa: so
06:25 Anxient: if he is, mod my part and then move to him
06:25 Exa: ofc
06:25 Exa: let me know
06:25 Anxient: if he isnt, blah forum mod
06:26 Exa: ofc
06:26 Anxient: hes online
06:26 Anxient: okay lets continue
06:26 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905046 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Hard]]
06:27 Exa: 00:09:205 (4,1) - Try doing something like [http://puu.sh/nNiLo/78067885eb.jpg this] since I find the current movement too be too snappy
06:27 Anxient: which diff
06:27 *Anxient is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905046 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Hard]]
06:27 Anxient: ?
06:27 Exa: 00:08:913 (3,4,1) - The vertical alternation here makes it way too snapy
06:27 Exa: yeah
06:27 Exa: and you haven't used such movement afterwards or before so
06:28 Exa: 00:14:010 (5) - It would be nice if that was a slider since the sound it's representing is the exact same with 00:14:302 (1) -
06:28 Anxient: does it look okat to you http://puu.sh/nNiS9/28bdb64adb.jpg
06:29 Anxient: btw http://puu.sh/nNiSE/3e236f9f52.jpg
06:29 Exa: yup, quite nice
06:29 Exa: alright
06:29 Anxient: btw what wdum?
06:29 Anxient: 00:14:010 (5,1,2) - what do
06:29 Exa: slider
06:29 Exa: instead of nice
06:29 Exa: note*
06:29 Anxient: make 5 into a 1/2 slider?
06:29 Exa: yup
06:29 Anxient: nah i wanna emphasize the next two notes lol
06:29 Anxient: if i use a 1/2 slider it kinda loses its magic imo
06:30 Exa: 00:14:010 (5,1) - These 2 represent the exact same sound
06:30 Exa: Rhythmicaly speaking it doesn't make sense
06:30 Exa: to not have them be the same objects
06:30 Anxient: well then youre not gonna liek what i did to the next 2 diffs lol
06:30 Exa: lol
06:31 Exa: welp it's your map
06:31 Exa: and your vision
06:31 Anxient: coz i literally use the same rhythm
06:31 Anxient: yeah i guess
06:31 Anxient: well im keeping it lol
06:31 Anxient: i wanna keep the vibe i think i made
06:31 Exa: if you think it's better this way, you should keep it c:
06:31 Exa: sure
06:31 Anxient: c:
06:32 Exa: 00:17:069 (6,1) - According to this, 00:19:399 - a reverse slider should start here
06:32 Exa: cause currently its incosistent
06:32 Exa: you can even tell by the vocals
06:33 Anxient: so hwat do you want me to do lol
06:33 Exa: 00:19:399 - start a reverse slider here lol
06:33 Anxient: make it a slider fest or a..
06:33 Anxient: oh
06:34 Exa: [http://puu.sh/nNj6C/3bad9a35ae.jpg this seems to work much better]
06:34 Anxient: yeah im doing thsy rn
06:34 Exa: aight
06:34 Anxient: kinda confused on how to place it tho
06:34 Exa: 00:29:156 (1,1) - Stack nicely
06:35 Exa: welp I could suggest stuff but placement is too subjective
06:35 Anxient: ill use my own judgement lol
06:37 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nNjhA/53bb64f4a6.jpg
06:37 Anxient: ??
06:38 Anxient: kinda upset i had to do this tho v
06:38 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nNjj2/bc1a66890a.jpg
06:38 Exa: seems much nicer compared to what I came up with
06:38 Exa: why are you upset with this?
06:38 Anxient: well later ill update and you judge it yourself lol
06:38 Exa: ofc
06:38 Anxient: just my pet peeve
06:38 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nNjl4/f0a2306cfd.jpg you see this
06:39 Anxient: look at the slider direction
06:39 Anxient: and look at the follow line direction
06:39 Anxient: its not parallel
06:39 Anxient: its a perfect triangle
06:39 Anxient: but its not parallel
06:39 Anxient: #dillema
06:39 Exa: 00:20:273 (2,3) - you mean that these 2 are not parallel?
06:39 Anxient: no
06:39 Anxient: 00:19:836 (1,2) - this
06:40 Anxient: compare this http://puu.sh/nNjoP/237b36d14a.jpg
06:40 Exa: Oooh
06:40 Anxient: with this http://puu.sh/nNjpz/a688b56358.jpg
06:40 Anxient: #dillema
06:40 Anxient: so its either sacrifice perfect triangle
06:40 Anxient: or sacrifice parallel folllow points
06:40 Exa: welp that's up to you really
06:40 Exa: you have 2 solutions, the thing is to choose
06:40 Anxient: i want both of them
06:41 Exa: #canthaveboth
06:41 Anxient: @why
06:41 Exa: %idk, it depends on what you do
06:41 Anxient: bah im going with the perfect triangle
06:41 Exa: you might be able to have both
06:41 Anxient: coz not everyone uses a follow lines lol
06:41 Anxient: 6
06:41 Exa: aight
06:41 Anxient: yeah
06:41 Exa: let me continue c:
06:42 Exa: 00:52:020 (3) - I very much expected this to be a slidere
06:43 Anxient: well you expected wrong
06:43 Exa: probs
06:44 Exa: no more complaints from the hard
06:44 Anxient: bah im keeping the non parallel line
06:44 Exa: pretty clean, pretty nicer
06:44 Anxient: hnggggggggggggh
06:44 Exa: nice*
06:44 Exa: lol
06:44 Anxient: i dont like it
06:45 Anxient: btw this set
06:45 Anxient: is very bad for beginners lol
06:45 Exa: welp you have a 1.99* normal with no easy
06:45 Anxient: this spread is evil
06:45 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905047 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Insane]]
06:46 *Anxient is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905047 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Insane]]
06:47 Exa: STREAMS OUTTA NOWHERE
06:47 Exa: This spread is trully evil
06:47 Exa: no streams on hard
06:47 Anxient: I WAS AS MERCIFUL AS I COULD POSSIBLY BE
06:47 Anxient: dude
06:48 Anxient: one stream on hard = 4 star diff
06:48 Anxient: literally
06:48 Exa: ik
06:48 Exa: cause bpm
06:48 Exa: fuk
06:48 Anxient: i hope the higher than average SV for hard is a hint
06:49 Anxient: and then lightning speed SV for insane
06:49 Anxient: omg why am i a mapper
06:49 Exa: idk man
06:49 Exa: I see the same 1/1 sliders lel
06:49 Exa: wp wp
06:50 Anxient: where
06:50 Anxient: doko
06:50 Exa: 00:42:845 (2,1) - fuk movement
06:51 Exa: slider proposes opposite direction movement compared to the existing one
06:51 Anxient: its not THAT bad
06:51 Anxient: is it?
06:51 Exa: don't see how you could fix it
06:51 Exa: nah it's not bad
06:51 Exa: I see many maps do that
06:51 Exa: never liked it cause it fucks the flow up
06:51 Anxient: its the perfect flow breaker
06:51 Exa: yeah
06:51 Anxient: new song section
06:51 Anxient: 00:42:554 (1,2) - transition
06:51 Exa: it's cool cause it's before 1/1
06:51 Exa: else it would be very weird
06:51 Anxient: 00:44:593 (2,3,4,5) - kinda stole this from gangsta
06:51 Exa: there are much better ways to break flow with 1/2 gaps
06:51 Anxient: if it wasnt 1/1 i would rage lol
06:52 Exa: but since this is 1/1 it's cool
06:52 Anxient: dudenice
06:53 Exa: 00:52:894 (2,3) - Dude you just entered the chorus and you basicaly reduce the movement to a minimum here
06:53 Exa: 00:52:894 (2,3) - Not only the transition is easy and smooth af, but the player also basicaly stops on the reverse slider
06:53 Exa: Even though the vocals asre still crazy
06:54 Anxient: okay dad
06:54 Anxient: i stopped being merciful http://puu.sh/nNk2a/812af97d70.jpg
06:54 Exa: well it's better ofc
06:55 Anxient: but i dont think anyone would stop moving
06:55 Anxient: unless they actually tried
06:55 Exa: 00:58:719 (2,3,1) - Same here
06:55 Anxient: coz the song is too upbeat lol
06:55 Exa: Well noone would actually //STOP// moving
06:55 Exa: but they would reduce movement to almost non-existent
06:56 Anxient: well
06:56 Anxient: thats how they play the game nowdays right :l
06:56 Anxient: not much i can do about it
06:56 Anxient: increased SVhttp://puu.sh/nNk8D/888f6a15ee.jpg
06:57 Exa: SV?
06:57 Exa: mean DS?
06:57 Anxient: ..
06:57 Anxient: right
06:57 Anxient: LOL
06:57 Exa: lol
06:57 Exa: 01:12:263 (1,2) - Dude that looks like 1/4
06:57 Exa: too close to one another
06:58 Anxient: seriosly?
06:58 Anxient: 01:13:428 (1,2) - and this doesnt? :OO
06:58 Anxient: oh
06:58 Anxient: i was using 1.0x
06:58 Anxient: its supposed to be 1.1x
06:59 Exa: this particular one caught me eye and trigered me
06:59 Exa: It looked like 1/4 to me
06:59 Anxient: my bad
06:59 Anxient: lol
07:00 Exa: gimmie 1 min
07:00 Exa: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ij5KI6odrQk MY POINT IS MADE]
07:01 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nNknp/6d57a7dcc5.jpg
07:01 Anxient: is it better dad http://puu.sh/nNknX/ea44a91c65.jpg
07:01 Exa: c:
07:01 Exa: it is
07:01 Anxient: c:
07:01 Exa: did you watch the video?
07:02 Anxient: yeah
07:02 Exa: c:
07:02 Anxient: why did they make an entire documentary about tripping balls
07:02 Anxient: omg
07:02 Anxient: doesnt cnn have anything better to do ;l
07:03 Exa: 01:26:389 (1,5) - So I would stack these and add a note 01:27:263 - here and stack it with 01:27:409 (1) - this
07:03 Exa: idk cnn is nuts
07:03 Anxient: well
07:04 Anxient: unless i make that on the extra diff as well
07:04 Anxient: im not doing it lol ;l
07:04 Exa: hm alright
07:04 Exa: it just seems weird to skip that sound out of the blue
07:04 Anxient: and dude as much as i like stacking
07:05 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901096 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Beyond the Gate]]
07:06 Exa: 00:26:826 (1) - lol what is that
07:06 Anxient: well im not hearing anything that powerful so ;l
07:07 Anxient: my poor attempt at trying to emphasize the guitar
07:07 Exa: it looks like it grew a tummor and gave up on life right before it died and then rotted in your map
07:07 Exa: nothing actually wrong with it though
07:07 Anxient: LOL
07:07 Anxient: 10/10 for that analogy
07:07 Anxient: i want that printed
07:07 Exa: lol
07:08 Exa: 00:48:671 (4,5) - how about you turn these into circles
07:08 Exa: cause you kinda kill the tension
07:08 Anxient: wow
07:08 Anxient: you too?
07:09 Exa: o.o
07:09 Exa: I suppose it has been said fore ay?
07:09 Anxient: yeah
07:09 Exa: welp change it
07:10 Anxient: i think making it circles would make it unecessarily harder
07:10 Anxient: im not xxr :l
07:10 Anxient: but it refused
07:10 Anxient: >"[
07:10 Exa: unecessarily harder
07:10 Exa: dude that's the final diff
07:10 Exa: it's gotta be harder than usual
07:10 Exa: or better
07:10 Exa: it //can// be
07:11 Anxient: give me a pattern that doesnt look like shti lol
07:11 Anxient: coz im all out of ideas
07:11 Exa: #askingmeforpatterns
07:11 Exa: k I will try some stuff out
07:12 Exa: 00:47:797 (1) - but idk, this fallen penis-like slider makes clean patterning too hard
07:13 Anxient: well
07:13 Anxient: what else should i put :l
07:15 Anxient: ok
07:15 Anxient: i tried http://puu.sh/nNl0K/288a4faf77.jpg
07:15 Anxient: hah
07:15 Exa: http://puu.sh/nNl1o/f680b8faeb.jpg
07:15 Exa: I can send you the code if you want
07:15 Anxient: I CANT RAD
07:15 Anxient: send me .osu
07:15 Anxient: with diffname Exa
07:16 Exa: http://puu.sh/nNl61/e7d4d8ea6b.osu
07:18 Anxient: how about this :l http://puu.sh/nNlb4/a9db6b0947.osu
07:19 Exa: 00:48:671 (4) - did you just not let the player tap on a white tick on the buildup?
07:19 Anxient: oh
07:19 Anxient: my god
07:19 Anxient: fine
07:20 Exa: XD
07:20 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nNlfX/b436def670.osu
07:21 Exa: much better
07:21 Exa: 00:49:399 (2,4,7) - Don't like this overlap tho
07:21 Anxient: #prei
07:21 Exa: too crampy
07:21 Anxient: intentional tho :(
07:22 Exa: I know ofc it is intentional
07:22 Exa: I just find it to bee too crampy
07:22 Exa: if you think it's cool then keep it XD
07:22 Anxient: ok
07:22 Anxient: btw recheck once i update kay
07:23 Exa: ofc
07:23 Anxient: just to know if youre satisfied with the changes
07:23 Anxient: and then after checking, talk to feb about it :^)
07:24 Exa: no more complaints on this diff
07:24 Exa: sec now
07:24 Anxient: ?
07:24 Anxient: ill update kay
07:24 Exa: no sec
07:24 Exa: gonna check files and stuff
07:24 Anxient: ook
07:24 Anxient: ok
07:27 Anxient: dont mind the bg name
07:27 Anxient: >.>
07:27 Exa: d
07:27 Exa: got disc
07:27 Exa: sec
07:27 Anxient: k
07:27 Anxient: tell when allow
07:27 Exa: http://puu.sh/nNlCS/5751607036.png
07:28 Anxient: why do you still have beyond the extra
07:28 Anxient: delete that
07:29 Exa: shit do I
07:29 Exa: I don't why the fuk did it appear there
07:29 Exa: then it's cool
07:29 Exa: files are fine
07:29 Anxient: well
07:29 Anxient: ok
07:29 Anxient: ill update?
07:30 Exa: yup
07:30 Anxient: ill update.
07:30 Anxient: gotcha
07:30 Anxient: updating
07:32 Anxient: updated
07:32 Anxient: good job buffing it by 0.8 stars
07:32 Exa: XD
07:32 Anxient: oh
07:33 Anxient: http://www.generasia.com/wiki/Gate_II_~Sekai_wo_Koete~
07:33 Anxient: it has a tv size metadata
07:33 Anxient: damn
07:33 Exa: 00:49:836 (5) - NC
07:33 Anxient: NC'd
07:33 Anxient: i wanna find the meta for this
07:34 Anxient: ah damn
07:34 Anxient: http://whv-amusic.com/kisidakyoudan/dis ... 60000.html
07:34 Anxient: changing the metadata
07:35 Exa: I suck at finding metadata so
07:35 Exa: if you think this is legit, change it
07:37 Exa: so
07:37 Exa: imma talk with feb
07:37 Exa: and post everything once done
07:37 Anxient: feb is offline
07:37 Anxient: dammit
07:37 Anxient: well just stuff a forum mod
07:39 Exa: asdaikhrfp;kjhf
07:39 Exa: I don't wanna forum cause I will have to type way too much
07:39 Exa: just let me know when he comes online
07:39 Anxient: lol
07:39 Anxient: uh okay i guess

FEB IRC
08:13 Exa: feb
08:13 Exa: irc?
08:16 Feb: ohhhhhh k
08:16 Feb: sry my graphic card died
08:16 Exa: lel
08:16 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/908097 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Feb's Advanced]]
08:16 Feb: hmmm
08:17 Exa: first thing that I noticed is that the rhythm that you use is very incosistent
08:17 Exa: like
08:17 Exa: 00:05:709 (1,2) - Stacked on slider
08:17 Exa: 00:06:875 (5,6) - Not stacked on slider
08:17 Exa: nothing to do with rhythm
08:18 Exa: but
08:18 Exa: 00:07:748 (8,1) - shouldn't there be a note before 8?
08:18 Exa: 00:09:933 (5,1) - Same goes for before 1
08:18 Exa: 00:11:243 (3,4) - And before 4
08:18 Feb: the one you mentioned which is unstacked
08:18 Feb: and the following are unstacked because i want the downbeat to have more impact
08:18 Feb: the rhythm should be consistent tho :/
08:19 Exa: it isn't tho :|
08:19 Exa: 00:05:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Compare this
08:19 Exa: 00:10:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - To this
08:20 Feb: 00:05:709 (1,2) - isn't that thze only thing which is different o.o
08:21 Exa: Nope
08:21 Exa: 00:06:729 (4,5) - And 00:11:243 (3) -
08:21 Exa: because of the thing that you just said is different, the rest of the rhythm is different as well
08:22 Feb: sec
08:24 Exa: sooo?
08:24 Feb: im changing pattern
08:24 Feb: continue
08:26 Exa: 01:23:768 (2,4) - Stack these nicely
08:26 Exa: no technical stuff here
08:26 Exa: aside from the incosistent rhythm at the beginning, this is pretty decent
08:27 Exa: alright that's it I guess, didn't find much and it looks like its ready for ranking
08:27 Exa: imma post this
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Title:GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ (TV-size)
TitleUnicode:GATE Ⅱ ～世界を超えて～ (TV-size)
Artist:KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS
ArtistUnicode:岸田教団&THE明星ロケッツ
Creator:Anxient
Version:Feb's Advanced
Source:GATE 自衛隊　彼の地にて、斯く戦えり　第２クール
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thanks for mod exa
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient
updooted
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Starset
Hi

[Beyond the Gate]
-well, i just learned from Priti that beginning a map with streams is very desorionting for the player so u should actually swap ur patterns :v
-00:18:671 (4) - i really prefer having the slider tail directing more upwards if u know wat i mean
-less spacing here 00:23:768 (2,3) - then 00:23:622 (1,2) -
-00:24:496 (1,2,3) - for some reasong nothing here is blanketed when it should be xd
-00:25:224 (3,4) - not really much movement in here i see, from 2 to 4 it only like did go down a bit, not really intresting pattern compared to wat u did before
-00:25:515 (5) - is it me or u forgot a clap?
-00:26:098 (3) - changing slider shape should make things differ a bit, i recommend a normal straight shape for this one, should be intresting (or making this one straight instead is also an option)
-00:26:826 (1) - very weird shape for sry
-00:29:884 (3,4,5) - well again theres not much to let the cursor move, so maybe stack 3 and 4?
-just a suggestion, u can move 00:31:341 (5) - to x81 y209 like u did after, allowing better flow i guess
-00:31:341 (5) - i would make a circle here and move the slider here 00:31:341 (5) -
-00:33:379 (4) - try putting clap here, it sounds gud to my ears :D
-00:36:001 - again u forgot clap
-00:38:040 (3,4,5) - the vocals inspire more to make a back and forth jump here
-00:37:457 (1) - the end of this one should be clickable cuz of the vocals impact
-00:39:787 (1) - same goes here
-00:50:127 (3) - have u tryed making it 1/8?
placements of notes are nice and emphsizing claps and strong notes are considered so i say its a very nice diff

[Insane]
-00:06:583 (3) - dont ctrl+g it, if u know wat i mean, so it would be more directed to 00:06:875 (4) -
-00:14:884 - put 1/2 slider pls
-00:29:010 (4) - clap
-00:29:884 (3) - rotate more to 00:30:321 (1) - pls, its actually hard to catch ;w;
-00:33:379 (5) - clap, trust me
-00:36:001 (5) -
-00:42:845 (2) - custom stack it on 00:42:554 (1) -
-00:53:476 - making a circle here is really better and u might want to put it on x67 y32
-01:29:738 (1,2,3,4) - WOT XD

nice
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Anxient

HB24 wrote:

Hi

[Beyond the Gate]
-well, i just learned from Priti that beginning a map with streams is very desorionting for the player so u should actually swap ur patterns :v - not much i can do about it
-00:18:671 (4) - i really prefer having the slider tail directing more upwards if u know wat i mean - i am fully upright. and nah i dont think its a good idea. go hide your man stick
-less spacing here 00:23:768 (2,3) - then 00:23:622 (1,2) - i tried.
-00:24:496 (1,2,3) - for some reasong nothing here is blanketed when it should be xd - i did my best
-00:25:224 (3,4) - not really much movement in here i see, from 2 to 4 it only like did go down a bit, not really intresting pattern compared to wat u did before - there really is nothing special about this part though. theres no emphasis at all so i decided to make this part bland.
-00:25:515 (5) - is it me or u forgot a clap? - whoops!
-00:26:098 (3) - changing slider shape should make things differ a bit, i recommend a normal straight shape for this one, should be intresting (or making this one straight instead is also an option) - nah ill keep it. i like repeating things alot.
-00:26:826 (1) - very weird shape for sry - made it better looking.
-00:29:884 (3,4,5) - well again theres not much to let the cursor move, so maybe stack 3 and 4? - i need buildup for 00:30:175 (5,1) -
-just a suggestion, u can move 00:31:341 (5) - to x81 y209 like u did after, allowing better flow i guess - i guess i rarely use this kind of jump. the one you proposed is more common.. okay then. applied.
-00:31:341 (5) - i would make a circle here and move the slider here 00:31:341 (5) - ?
-00:33:379 (4) - try putting clap here, it sounds gud to my ears :D - nice catch
-00:36:001 - again u forgot clap - dammit
-00:38:040 (3,4,5) - the vocals inspire more to make a back and forth jump here - i dont wanna abuse the back and forth in this map. itll feel redundant.
-00:37:457 (1) - the end of this one should be clickable cuz of the vocals impact - theres no instruments in that part so ill reject
-00:39:787 (1) - same goes here - ^
-00:50:127 (3) - have u tryed making it 1/8? - the guitar riff isnt too fast for it to be a 1/8.
placements of notes are nice and emphsizing claps and strong notes are considered so i say its a very nice diff - thanks!

[Insane]
-00:06:583 (3) - dont ctrl+g it, if u know wat i mean, so it would be more directed to 00:06:875 (4) - im not changing this part. i need the flow.
-00:14:884 - put 1/2 slider pls - added after having this request drilled to my brain countless times. also added to the top diff.
-00:29:010 (4) - clap - baka anxient
-00:29:884 (3) - rotate more to 00:30:321 (1) - pls, its actually hard to catch ;w; - git gud :^)
-00:33:379 (5) - clap, trust me - i trust you
-00:36:001 (5) - clap
-00:42:845 (2) - custom stack it on 00:42:554 (1) - thatll make the movement to 00:43:137 (1) - too sudden. i dont want that.
-00:53:476 - making a circle here is really better and u might want to put it on x67 y32 - good idea
-01:29:738 (1,2,3,4) - WOT XD - what the fuck?

nice
thanks for modding ^^
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
m4m

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[Normal]

00:15:175 (1) - Normal hitsounds sound really harsh during this section. I think Soft hitsets, with a snare (normal-hitnormal) on beats 2 and 4 would fit much better with a transition back to Normal at 00:24:496 (1) this goes for all difficulties so I'll only mention it once here

clean

[Feb's Advanced]

00:08:768 (2) - i don't like how this skips over that strum on the red tick; you were mapping it in the previous two patterns why not now? try this?:

SPOILER

00:13:428 (2) - ^
00:37:457 (4,5,6,1) - ooo interesting
00:51:146 (1) - 1/4 repeat slider instead?
01:01:341 (5) - doesn't look good because the slider head and end overlap
01:08:331 (5) - ends on a vocal note i think should be clicked on
01:10:661 (5) - same comment as 1:01:341
01:19:981 (2) - better flow facing the other way

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:08:913 (3) - i think back and forth flow fits better here in terms of momentum

SPOILER

00:10:078 (4) - i get this curves the way it does because of the direction of (3), but i think it should curve the other way to accommodate the transition to (1). Either is fine, your call.
00:49:981 (4) - should be two hitcircles

[Insane]

00:06:583 (3,4) - awkward flow, solution is probably more changing (3) rather than moving (4)
00:09:787 (2) - ctrl+g is more readable
00:40:224 (3) - just a hitcircle would be better for emphasis imo; technically overmapped currently
00:57:845 (3,4,5) - why the different spacing?

[Beyond the Gate]

00:25:515 (5) - i don't think the music warrants this big of an emphasis for (5); reduce spacing

quite polished

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good work anxient!

-SMIC
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb

SuperMIC wrote:

m4m

[Feb's Advanced]

00:08:768 (2) - i don't like how this skips over that strum on the red tick; you were mapping it in the previous two patterns why not now? try this?: because this is not the same as before the pattern is rpeating 00:10:515 - here the first time. so it should be fine.
00:13:428 (2) - ^ same reasoning
00:37:457 (4,5,6,1) - ooo interesting jhnddfdnkfd cool
00:51:146 (1) - 1/4 repeat slider instead? trying to keep simple 1/2 rhyhtm so no :/
01:01:341 (5) - doesn't look good because the slider head and end overlap i don't think it looks bad tho ..
01:10:661 (5) - same comment as 1:01:341 ^
not mentioned = agreed with.

hi anxient
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Anxient
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Topic Starter
Anxient

SuperMIC wrote:

m4m

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[Normal]

00:15:175 (1) - Normal hitsounds sound really harsh during this section. I think Soft hitsets, with a snare (normal-hitnormal) on beats 2 and 4 would fit much better with a transition back to Normal at 00:24:496 (1) this goes for all difficulties so I'll only mention it once here - i think its fine as is tho :[

clean

[Hard]

00:08:913 (3) - i think back and forth flow fits better here in terms of momentum - i used the previous rhythm

SPOILER

00:10:078 (4) - i get this curves the way it does because of the direction of (3), but i think it should curve the other way to accommodate the transition to (1). Either is fine, your call. - its like that coz it IS the transition to 1. to indicate that its a new section of the song. appropriate, no?
00:49:981 (4) - should be two hitcircles - nah

[Insane]

00:06:583 (3,4) - awkward flow, solution is probably more changing (3) rather than moving (4) - not awkward to me tho :l
00:09:787 (2) - ctrl+g is more readable - gotcha
00:40:224 (3) - just a hitcircle would be better for emphasis imo; technically overmapped currently - theres a drumroll though.
00:57:845 (3,4,5) - why the different spacing? - buildup.

[Beyond the Gate]

00:25:515 (5) - i don't think the music warrants this big of an emphasis for (5); reduce spacing - nerfed

quite polished

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good work anxient! - thank

-SMIC
thanks for the mod mic ^^

Feb wrote:

hi anxient
hi feb
Broccoly
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m4m

[BTG]
00:38:040 (3,4,5,1) - flow going from 5 to 1 might be sharp considering 3~5 is linear flow with opposite direction
00:51:729 (2,3) - kinda too close and may confuse reading. put 3 a bit further apart?

[I]
00:51:583 (1,2,3,4) - do smth like this? cuz its right before kiai u kno to build up

I can't really find anything in Hard and advanced and normal ...
damn look at the difference between ur mod n mine
ask me for testplays or smth to make up fo r it lo im very sorry
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Hi~

General
  • fine

Beyond the Gate
  • 00:30:175 (5) - just personal here, but I find the current position a bit random. What about moving it to around 503;33?

    00:52:020 (4) - I wonder if I'm the only one pointing this out, but I can't hear this beat tbh. Even if you delete it the spacing is still good

    01:01:341 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would have made it more curvy since as it is now it's a bit flat and doesn't tell me much, but that's really really minor

    01:05:709 (2) - Ctrl + G? (I actually tried Ctrl + G-ing different objects for that part and whatever object is fine lol, such black magic)

    01:22:748 (1) - isn't there a cleaner version of this? =w= (same for all the others) even this can work

Insane
  • 00:52:020 (4) - same as above ^

    01:27:117 (5,1) - I would have stacked these since the spacing is a bit misleading but I guess it is fine as it is

Hard
  • 00:52:020 (3) - just this note (again)

Feb's Advanced
  • I could argue on some aesthetics (such as 01:19:690 (1,2) - why they aren't the same even if it's the same sound?) but I find it pointless at this point, since the rhythm is fine and so is the patterning. It just needs polishing the small details like the one I pointed out (applies for every diff)

    01:29:156 (7,1) - Switch combo?

Normal
  • Not really much to say here

Ugh, it turned out to be a short mod, even shorter than I imagined.
Well, there you go... go rank this =w=b
Anxient
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Broccoly wrote:

m4m

[BTG]
00:38:040 (3,4,5,1) - flow going from 5 to 1 might be sharp considering 3~5 is linear flow with opposite direction - methinks its fine lol. it gives that really big emphasis kick
00:51:729 (2,3) - kinda too close and may confuse reading. put 3 a bit further apart? - idk how you would misread this but i did it anyway. spaced out a BIT more.

[I]
00:51:583 (1,2,3,4) - do smth like this? cuz its right before kiai u kno to build up - did something like that. applied.

I can't really find anything in Hard and advanced and normal ...
damn look at the difference between ur mod n mine - Q_Q
ask me for testplays or smth to make up fo r it lo im very sorry - ill keep that in mind.

MrSergio wrote:

Hi~

General
  • fine

Beyond the Gate
  • 00:30:175 (5) - just personal here, but I find the current position a bit random. What about moving it to around 503;33? - i think moving it there is more random .-.

    00:52:020 (4) - I wonder if I'm the only one pointing this out, but I can't hear this beat tbh. Even if you delete it the spacing is still good - theres the vocals bro

    01:01:341 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would have made it more curvy since as it is now it's a bit flat and doesn't tell me much, but that's really really minor - itll be too plain :cc

    01:05:709 (2) - Ctrl + G? (I actually tried Ctrl + G-ing different objects for that part and whatever object is fine lol, such black magic) - i want emphasis for 01:06:001 (3) - thooo

    01:22:748 (1) - isn't there a cleaner version of this? =w= (same for all the others) even this can work - applied. it SHOULD look less cancer lol

Insane
  • 00:52:020 (4) - same as above ^ - same as above

    01:27:117 (5,1) - I would have stacked these since the spacing is a bit misleading but I guess it is fine as it is - if it really causes a problem ill change it. but for now its staying.

Hard
  • 00:52:020 (3) - just this note (again) - same response (again)

Feb's Advanced
  • I could argue on some aesthetics (such as 01:19:690 (1,2) - why they aren't the same even if it's the same sound?) but I find it pointless at this point, since the rhythm is fine and so is the patterning. It just needs polishing the small details like the one I pointed out (applies for every diff)

    01:29:156 (7,1) - Switch combo?

Normal
  • Not really much to say here - tei

Ugh, it turned out to be a short mod, even shorter than I imagined.
Well, there you go... go rank this =w=b
thanks for modding you two <3
Feb
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MrSergio wrote:

Hi~

Feb's Advanced
  • I could argue on some aesthetics (such as 01:19:690 (1,2) - why they aren't the same even if it's the same sound?) but I find it pointless at this point, since the rhythm is fine and so is the patterning. It just needs polishing the small details like the one I pointed out (applies for every diff) u mean it should be ctrl+h? I think it's fine as it is tho.

    01:29:156 (7,1) - Switch combo? I see why, but i want to have the player realize that there's an pause between those notes, so in this case i don't think it makes much difference if i have the combo on 7 or 1.

Ugh, it turned out to be a short mod, even shorter than I imagined. blame anxient's mapping
Well, there you go... go rank this =w=b YES ANXIENT OOOOO
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