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Mizu_banned
Nice map :3
Star~
XepherX3
i love this song

really awesome..u have some really great mapping skills

found 0 problems

Star ~
RaP13iT
nice map
star ~ 8-)
banvi
Hello :D
Easy
I suggest Circle Size -1
01:03:967 (1) start 01:04:346? (such as Normal)
04:31:688 (4) new combo?
04:43:840 (4) ^
Normal
I suggest HP Drain -1 or no change , Circle Size -1 , Overal Diff -1
03:19:536 (2,3) spacing is close
04:01:309 (5) new combo?
Hard
01:33:967 (3,4) spacing is close

WIP , but nicemap at this time.
~star
Mikkuri
04:13:460 ตัด spin ทิ้ง ใส่โน้ตแทน

04:22:574 - 04:33:967 ทำเป็นเบรคไปได้เลย

ขอเมลตูนหน่อยนะ จะได้คุยสะดวกหน่อย
Backstep
Sound Mod :P

[General]
เสียง Soft ช่วงที่มีคนร้องช่วงต้น นี่เหลือสัก 5 ขีดพอครับ(ช่วงหลังkiaiนิดหน่อยด้วยครับ) แต่พอช่วง 00:49:916 เพิ่มมาเป็น 7 ขีดครับ ช่วง kiai เพิ่มเป็น 10 ขีด หลังคำร้องว่า "shizuite" (ช่วงที่มีกีตาร์ใช้ 7 ขีดพอครับ)

[Easy]
ช่วงเวลาเหล่านี้ใส่ whistle ครับ
00:25:612,00:28:650,00:31:688,00:34:726,00:37:764,00:40:802,00:43:840,00:46:878,01:29:410,01:32:448,04:16:498,04:19:536

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy ครับ (ช่วงไหนที่ใส่เสียงไม่ได้ข้ามไปเลย)

[Hard]
ใส่ whistle เช่นเดียวกันกับ Easy แต่เพิ่มเติมนิดหน่อย (ช่วงไหนที่ใส่เสียงไม่ได้ข้ามไปเลย)
00:06:625,00:09:663,00:12:701,00:15:739,00:18:777,00:21:815
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

Remove the Countdown, and use a lead-in...The Countdown doesn't really suit the opening for this song.

[Easy]
00:24:853 (1) - i think you should start this slider at 00:24:473 and end it at 00:25:612
02:24:853 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 02:28:650
04:20:296 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 04:22:574

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate: -1
Circle Size: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1
Seems fine...Maybe include another break.

[Hard]
Finish it off, then I'll mod it.

Overall...Its a decent map. Keep trying!

Contact me again once finishing hard!

GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
indyinyou
thx for mod : D
Curisu
My god this song is so long :?

[EZ]
OA-1
00:59:790 (1) - move to 00:59:220 and extend 3/4 beat
02:24:853 (1) - ^
01:52:954 (4) - New combo
02:56:752 - soft whistle
02:59:790 - ^
03:49:346 - break time

[NM]
circle size+1
03:41:182 (4) - extend to 03:41:941
Great map~ :)
wmfchris
[hard]
0:36:625 (1) spacing too large?

~generally hitsound too loud.

That's all I can find~ good luck in finishing the song :D
star
Caroline7
Beautiful song and beautiful map :) :D
Vass_Bass
Hi~

Easy
00:52:954 (1) - make it simmetrical
01:14:220 (4) - ^
01:31:688 (4) - new combo
02:43:840 (3) - simmetrical
02:56:752 (4) - new combo

Normal
good

Hard
00:06:245 (4,5) - 1 grid up
01:38:524 (1) - eeh.. spacing?
02:12:131 - break time?
02:20:486 (6) - move it to the end of the slider
...
...
where is the end of hard? о_О :shock:

strange..but have a star..
roflninja
Hi,
have someone check your timing? it seems a bit off to me. might just be me though @_@

[easy]
fine~
turn hp drain down by 1?

[normal]
also fine!

[hard]
seems a bit easy for a hard imo
maybe OD +1?

nice map. looking forward to seeing this ranked
lovhin456
Hi!
General;
- Nice song, very long I must say
- Delete osb and full-sub
- Change the combo burst or don't use one at all
- The color of the notes ... well it doesn't quite fit the ones in the BG so change them


Easy;
- 04:55:992 >> silence this spinner
- Open AIMod and check the spacing with it but is not really a must

Normal;
- Your normal is shown as easy, may want to fix that ~
- 01:15:739 >> one more repeat
- 02:10:802 >> end at 02:11:562
- 02:46:878 >> one more repeat
- 04:03:207 >> 2 repeats
- Silence the last spinner just like easy

Hard;
- Not finished eh ?? Good luck finishing it :3 !!

* Star ~
Topic Starter
indyinyou
thx for all mod this map

thx :D
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

General:
Empty .osb file. Delete it, then full submit.

Easy:
01:14:220 (1) - Add a clap on this slider's tick.
Above 4 minutes training time goes for approval afaik.

Normal:
03:24:853 (1) - You can make this slider more symmetrical.
Above 4 minutes draining time goes for approval afaik.

Hard:
01:20:296 (7) - New combo.
I guess you'll add hitsounds when you've finished mapping it ?

Well, no star as it's a WIP.
loser101_old
ok why does hard have less circles then normal not good

Easy
Great

Normal
GREAT

Hard
GRRRRREAT

They all follow a beat
Tatsuo
This is going for approval?
If not, the mp3 is really long at 5 minutes.
Not much to note or say, except to finish up your [Hard].
*star*
vincerio

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

This is going for approval?
If not, the mp3 is really long at 5 minutes.
Not much to note or say, except to finish up your [Hard].
*star*
less than 5 minutes is fine... ><
IceBeam
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
03:33:967 (1,2) - Why have you missed claps in these 2 slider endings?

[Hard]
Combos are too long.You can more New Comboes.
01:08:144 (5) - New combo.
01:13:840 (6) - ^
01:20:296 (7) - ^
01:53:714 (3) - Strange.You need to place it further,and keep same Distance during one combo.
Distance between 01:53:714 (3) and 01:54:093 (4) is 3-4x then between 01:52:954 (2) and 01:53:714 (3).
As I see,it's counting lately,so I have no idea about it.
02:11:941 (12) - New combo.
02:24:093 (8) - ^

Oh Gosh,it's a WIP?

Well,that's bad,you know.Ask for modding only for fully-complete maps next time.
Mikkuri
double BPM to 158 is good for Hard diff :D

don't forget, change Slider Velocity to all diff

good map 8-)
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