LNP- wrote:

M69M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329388

Column : 1|2|3|4

[4K Betelsip]
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - delete, gajelas nada mana ini `L_`
01:11:221 - ~ 01:11:846 - ini apa ? bikin 1/4 kayak sebelumnya, tapi beda pattern 1 4 - 2 3 - 1 4 - 2 3 gitu
01:53:929 (113929|1) - ~ 01:53:929 (113929|1) - 1/6
03:00:674 (180674|1) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - add note
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:07:549 (187549|1) - delete
03:07:705 - add note

sisanya ok,
hbd alex

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hi sukee
Mod req via PM :3

[4K Perang angkasa]
00:59:502 - add one? to make it consistent as 00:59:814 - and 01:00:752 - oh removed the double, thanks for pointing xd
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - i think these notes are supposed to be snapped at 1/8.. hmm i don't think so :/
01:01:338 (61338|1) - i'm not sure about this note, it sounds like no sound here.. b-but its burst...
01:29:502 (89502|3,89658|2) - Ctrl+G this? this part will lead to the stream afterward, so i think it's not a good idea to have jack as the "start" of stream. nice point
01:32:314 - 01:32:392 - isn't this suppose to be 1/6 snap? yes i skipped some 1/6 for smooth streams experience lol
01:51:429 (111429|2,111637|0) - I'm not sure about these LN's snap, i would follow pya's snap instead. hmm i'm sure about this snap, it suits with the bgm sound
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - for this kind of sound, i think it would be more fit if you make it into 1-2-4-3 pattern, instead of 1-2-3-4.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4486131 yeah it's good, but hard to press ;w;
03:10:439 (190439|2,190517|1) - this will be a bit picky, but i would Ctrl+G this to follow pitch here.. eh nice xD
03:11:924 - I would add here, because this still has quite audible melody that you follow yes already applied from the previous mod
03:29:736 (209736|2) - is this a ghost note? can't hear anything for this.. nice catch, deleted
04:11:533 (251533|2,251611|0) - i would Ctrl+G this, it's more suitable for sound at 04:11:611 - 04:11:767 - i would like to keep, for avoiding jack on left side
04:29:658 - i think this would be more fit if it's double instead of triple. hmm keep for the impact
04:29:814 - ^ ^
04:41:142 (281142|1,281221|0,281299|1,281377|0,281455|1) - plis not one hand triple ;w; lol fixed xd
04:42:783 - Why triple? oops i forgot xd
04:51:377 - add one? still has cymbal sound here.. oh ya ok
04:56:611 - Why not add here? this has audible 1/4 sound that you follow ok
04:56:767 - Also here.. ok
04:58:799 (298799|3) - Delete this, the stream that you follow started at 04:58:799 (298799|3) - eh keep bcs its has similiar sound with 04:58:955 - this, so it counted
05:01:064 - add here? make it consistent as 05:00:752 - ? it's double bcs i'm following the fx sound like 05:00:596 - this

Ok, that's it, sorry not many..
Good luck , nice map btw :3

Valentrixe wrote:

yo
nih bad-quality mod gw :"
m4m reply

kapal"an

btw ini diffname kenapa ada 4K nya? mau bikin 7K nya juga kah? kalo gak ya ilangin aja 4K nya >_>
[4K Battlespace]

1. 00:08:721 - saran aja sih, menurut gw lebih nyaman kalo kek gini : http://puu.sh/n05iE/cf6c5327e1.jpg hmm klo pake pny lu jdi break patternnya, tpi rearrange deh wkwk
2. 00:10:596 - ^ : http://puu.sh/n05sQ/9ed05e2a57.jpg hmm gud gud lbh seimbang xD
3. 00:11:846 (11846|2,12002|2) - unneccesary jack, 00:12:002 (12002|2,12158|1) - ctrl + H hmm itu justru sengaja, lbh balance imo (see avalon's mod lmao)
4. 00:16:689 (16689|0,16689|1,16846|1,16846|0) - kasian tangan kiri gw, coba ini, lebih balance : http://puu.sh/n05Jz/6aa80a1e55.jpg keep, patternnya emg bgitu wkwk (dan masih toleransi la :v)
5. 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - kasian tangan kiri gw[2], coba : http://puu.sh/n05ME/6254a4acda.jpg tpi pattern yg skrng masih lbh enak :^)
6. 00:27:158 - http://puu.sh/n05Qo/26d80645aa.jpg copas, rearrange dong lel, kalo lbh enak why not? :^) /tpi masih bole suggest kok wkwk
7. 00:59:658 (59658|3) - kelebihan(?), apus? same with 01:00:908 - this, see the others
8. 01:08:642 - add note? hue keep for the stream, emg sengaja gw skip kok
9. 01:09:267 - ^ ^
10. 01:12:471 (72471|0,72471|1,72549|2,72549|3,72627|1,72627|0,72783|0,72783|1) - why double? oh yaaa, rearranged~ nice catch
11. 02:43:721 - add note for cymbal? yha klo gtu gw hrs add yg 02:43:564 - 02:43:642 - 02:43:877 - ini jga... so keep

udah dikit aja ;;

sumbang star sekalian '3')/
met imlek lek

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi !
Come as Kyousuke-'s Request on Mania Modding Team

done IRC mod

15:25 Shinzo-: lek
15:26 Kyousuke-: wat
15:27 Shinzo-: sibuk ga
15:28 Kyousuke-: wait
15:28 Kyousuke-: lgi nge cek hs anomaly
15:28 Kyousuke-: emg napa? o.o
15:28 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:28 Shinzo-: kalo mau ya IRC buat dreadnought ._.
15:33 Kyousuke-: bntr lgi ya
15:33 Kyousuke-: udah deh wkwk
15:34 Shinzo-: lel
15:36 Kyousuke-: yok>
15:36 Kyousuke-: *?
15:36 Shinzo-: ayok
15:36 Shinzo-: duluan aja
15:36 Shinzo-: *ehh
15:37 Kyousuke-: lel
15:38 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871129 Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought]
15:38 Shinzo-: anjay last pending...
15:38 Shinzo-: gaada mod ya ?xD
15:38 Kyousuke-: rip server os
15:38 Kyousuke-: *osu
15:38 Kyousuke-: ga bsa buka thread hue
15:38 Shinzo-: iya
15:39 Shinzo-: bad pippi
15:39 Shinzo-: ane dah bisa o.o
15:39 Kyousuke-: ye
15:40 Shinzo-: 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2,3096|1,3252|3,3408|1,3564|3,3721|1,3877|2,3955|3,4033|1,4111|0,4189|3,4267|2) - Ctrl H ?
15:40 Kyousuke-: sbenerny ni map mo rencana bikin SV
15:40 Kyousuke-: dan raika gd nya lama beud
15:40 Shinzo-: ehhh se-enggakny yg 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2) - biar nyambung gitu ama 00:01:846 (1846|3,2002|1) -
15:41 Shinzo-: ehh raika ? 7K ?
15:41 Kyousuke-: yha patternnya jdi break :v
15:41 Shinzo-: iya sih awkakawk
15:41 Kyousuke-: itu gw ud ngikut pitch (?)
15:42 Kyousuke-: 00:07:002 (7002|1,7158|0) - sama kyk ini wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: 00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|0,11767|1) - jadiin LN ? awkawkawkaw
15:43 Kyousuke-: no short ln, kalo bisa di map ini gw minimalisir ln nya wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: ooke
15:44 Kyousuke-: abis banyak stream nya sih :v
15:44 Shinzo-: 00:17:627 (17627|0,17705|2,17861|0) - ctrl H trus move ke kiri 1 kali ? >,>
15:45 Kyousuke-: wat
15:45 Kyousuke-: ss? :v
15:46 Kyousuke-: salah ngetik itu kykny lel, jdi aneh
15:46 Kyousuke-: knp banyak modder yg pointing tu pattern awkwk
15:47 Shinzo-: eh iya salah
15:47 Shinzo-: http://puu.sh/neDAq/69c73bd0e3.jpg
15:47 Shinzo-: itu biar nyambung aja pattern ny (yg w crop)
15:48 Kyousuke-: pattern yg kyk gtu ud bnyk lel
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:25:283 (25283|0,25283|2,25361|1,25439|2,25517|1,25596|0,25596|3) - liek dis
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:26:221 (26221|0,26221|3,26299|1,26377|2,26455|1,26533|0,26533|3,26611|2,26689|1,26689|0,26767|2,26846|3,26846|0,26846|1) - and dis
15:49 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:50 Shinzo-: ya ngga sih, lucu aja 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - ini sndiri :V
15:51 Kyousuke-: abisnya pitch nya mirip? >.>
15:54 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - delete ?
15:55 Kyousuke-: ey why
15:55 Kyousuke-: 00:26:611 (26611|2) - sama kyk ini?
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - emang ada suarany ? o.o
15:56 Shinzo-: eh ada kecil
15:56 Kyousuke-: kyk suara bgm gtu sih bukan instrument
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:31:221 (31221|0,31221|3,31299|2,31377|3,31377|0,31455|1) - coba lu denger lagi ? itu kek bukan 1/4
15:57 Kyousuke-: ey klo effect sound yg space itu 1/4 kan?
15:57 Kyousuke-: di map ini agak ribet jga snap nya lel
15:58 Shinzo-: ye gatau
15:58 Shinzo-: 00:43:096 (43096|0) - move ke 3 ? itch ny gitu de kekny
15:58 Shinzo-: persis ke 00:44:033 (44033|2) - soalny
15:59 Kyousuke-: ok
15:59 Shinzo-: 00:44:971 (44971|2,45596|1,46221|0) - 2 1 3 ?
16:01 Kyousuke-: fixed, tpi 312 wkwk
16:01 Shinzo-: okeoke
16:01 Shinzo-: 01:00:205 (60205|0) - kek gaada suara....
16:02 Shinzo-: but pasti lu punya alasan untuk itu
16:02 Kyousuke-: iye effect sound yg keselip
16:02 Shinzo-: 01:10:674 (70674|3,70830|3,70986|3,71142|3) - mungkin move 1/4 ke bawah, soalny suarany gasama (01:10:596 (70596|0,70596|1,70674|3,70674|2,70752|1,70752|0,70830|3,70830|2,70908|1,70908|0,70986|3,70986|2,71064|1,71064|0,71142|3,71142|2) -)
16:02 Kyousuke-: di bms jga ad sih
16:03 Kyousuke-: ay gw lbh suka spam 12 34
16:03 Kyousuke-: :v
16:03 Shinzo-: eh y udh
16:04 Kyousuke-: wait apa bedanya ya :v
16:07 Shinzo-: 01:37:783 (97783|3) - kek salah snap
16:08 Kyousuke-: klo denger 100% baru ketahuan
16:08 Kyousuke-: tpi klo 25% suaranya ga kedengeran beda, dan ga ketahuan snap nya >.>
16:08 Kyousuke-: lel
16:08 Shinzo-: ye begitu
16:08 Shinzo-: 01:54:502 (114502|3,114502|2) - 01:55:127 (115127|1,115127|0,115439|0,115439|1) - 1 note aja ?
16:09 Kyousuke-: sengaja
16:09 Kyousuke-: biar ada impact sama melodny nya
16:10 Shinzo-: iy deh
16:11 Shinzo-: 02:24:346 (144346|3,144346|0) - move ke 23 ? sama pitch kek 02:24:189 (144189|2,144189|1) -
16:12 Shinzo-: 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - trus ini dihapus ? buat charge aja buat impact yg di 02:24:658 - biar kerasa
16:12 Shinzo-: afk bentar mandi
16:12 Kyousuke-: iya jga sih
16:12 Kyousuke-: lel oke
16:16 Kyousuke-: yha, tpi 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - klo ini diapus nga deh kykny
16:19 Shinzo-: ohhh oke gpp
16:19 Kyousuke-: lel cefet beud mandinya
16:20 Kyousuke-: main bentar ye
16:20 Shinzo-: 7 menit yha
16:20 Shinzo-: awkawkawk okeoke
16:20 *Kyousuke- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/790529 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos]
16:23 Kyousuke-: ay ga jdi dhe pegel
16:23 Kyousuke-: perlu banyak stamina map nya :^)
16:23 Shinzo-: awkawkawkwak
16:23 Kyousuke-: lel lu malah ikut maen rohi :v
16:23 Shinzo-: iye lu udh np sih
16:23 Shinzo-: 3 menitan juga
16:23 Shinzo-: belum semenit ane dah lelah
16:24 Kyousuke-: lel sama
16:25 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 (147783|1) - delete ?
16:25 Shinzo-: gaadil aja sama 02:27:939 (147939|2,147939|3,148017|0,148017|1) -
16:27 Kyousuke-: t-tpi bagaimana dgn 02:27:314 (147314|1,147314|3,147314|2) - ini
16:27 Kyousuke-: iya sih yg itu pengecualian, masa iya triple 1/4 :v
16:27 Shinzo-: wkwkwkw
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 - soalny ini gaada suara yg kek pst pst gitu
16:28 Kyousuke-: yg laen jga kyk gtu >.>
16:28 Shinzo-: tapi buat pattern sih bagu ugha ==
16:28 Shinzo-: y'udh de gpp
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:28:304 (148304|3) - Ctrl H ?
16:28 Shinzo-: buat pitch
16:28 Kyousuke-: eh bner jga deh, ga ada pst pst nya
16:29 Kyousuke-: deleted :v
16:29 Shinzo-: lel
16:29 Shinzo-: ok
16:29 Kyousuke-: yg pitch ok
16:30 Shinzo-: 02:43:799 (163799|2) - delete ?
16:30 Shinzo-: ehhh gajadi
16:30 Shinzo-: jelek
16:30 Kyousuke-: 02:47:783 - lha gw yg ini double doang >.> emg hrsnya delete akwkw
16:31 Kyousuke-: lel ada echo nya itu
16:31 Shinzo-: ohiya
16:31 Shinzo-: iya makany gajadi
16:32 Shinzo-: 02:44:580 - http://puu.sh/neFcy/860e5957ca.jpg ? buat pitch aja
16:34 Kyousuke-: bole
16:34 Shinzo-: okeee
16:34 Shinzo-: 02:46:533 - http://puu.sh/neFf3/47d2e6de1d.png ? buat pitch juga soalny stream 1/4 ny juga di kanan semua xD (02:46:142 (166142|2,166221|3,166377|2,166455|3,166741|2,166793|3,167002|3,167080|2) - )
16:36 Kyousuke-: nice
16:36 Kyousuke-: 02:21:221 (141221|1,141221|0,141221|2,141377|0,141429|1,141481|2) - sama kyk ini akwkw
16:37 Shinzo-: ehh xD awkawkawk
16:37 Shinzo-: 02:50:517 (170517|0) - delete aja ? xD terserah sih, soalny 02:51:767 - ada + kick ny tapi 1 note doang hehee
16:38 Shinzo-: 02:56:221 - 02:59:267 - lel laguny tiba" epic gitu awkawkwakawk
16:38 Kyousuke-: bner jga
16:38 Kyousuke-: tau tuh :v
16:40 Shinzo-: xD
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:00:986 (180986|0) - gaada synt ny sih xD tpi mungkin lu ngikut suara yg lain..
16:40 Kyousuke-: melody
16:40 Shinzo-: ok
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:15:439 - dibikin 2 note ?
16:42 Kyousuke-: kykny gausah deh
16:42 Kyousuke-: kick nya ga bgitu kedengeran sih, gara effectnya wkwk
16:42 Shinzo-: iye sih
16:42 Shinzo-: okok
16:42 Shinzo-: 03:31:846 (211846|3,211846|2) - move ke 12 ? kek tadi
16:43 Kyousuke-: ok
16:44 Shinzo-: 03:17:861 (197861|1) - move ke 03:18:017 - ? soalny 03:18:017 - ada kick + melody sementara 03:17:861 - ga begitu kedengerantapi gpp juga sih kalo lu mo ngindarin jack
16:44 Shinzo-: *ama pattern yg seterusny*
16:46 Kyousuke-: why not add dua" nya :v
16:47 Shinzo-: up t you babeh :* it's your map
16:47 Shinzo-: *yo
16:47 Shinzo-: *to
16:47 Shinzo-: awkawkawkawkwa
16:47 Kyousuke-: lel
16:47 Kyousuke-: rip akwkwkw
16:47 Shinzo-: 03:35:283 (215283|3) - sama kek tadi yg pst pst itu xD
16:48 Shinzo-: kek ny 03:41:533 - lebih worth buat 3 note dripada 03:41:377 - soalny .... idk xD awkakawkawk
16:48 Shinzo-: 03:46:767 (226767|3) - delete ? soalny gaada kick ny OwO
16:49 Kyousuke-: lel yg 2 note itu emg sengaja
16:50 Kyousuke-: karena dulu ad modder yg ngomong gitu lel
16:50 Kyousuke-: yg delete ga ad kick ok
16:50 Kyousuke-: nice catch :v
16:50 Shinzo-: oohhuuee
16:50 Shinzo-: ok
16:51 Shinzo-: 03:49:971 - padahal enak ya yg part begini kalo ada SV
16:51 Shinzo-: tapi ya itu gatau minta ke siapa >,>
16:51 Kyousuke-: makanya
16:51 Kyousuke-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: 04:19:892 - udh ada kick ny disini sih
16:53 Shinzo-: soalny klo ga salah juga sebelum ny lu kasih 2 note di situ xD
16:53 Shinzo-: 02:52:392 - eh ngga ternyata
16:53 Shinzo-: yaudah up to you xD
16:53 Kyousuke-: lel
16:53 Kyousuke-: wait
16:54 Shinzo-: k
16:54 Kyousuke-: saya nyerah cari patternnya
16:54 Kyousuke-: keep aj dhe
16:55 Shinzo-: wkwkwkwk
16:55 Shinzo-: okekoe
16:55 Shinzo-: 04:29:267 (269267|2) - delete ajah ? supaya buat bedain ama suara 04:29:424 (269424|2,269502|1,269580|0) - kan 04:29:267 (269267|2) - ga terlalu jelas tuh
16:57 Kyousuke-: okela
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:30:674 - 04:30:830 - 04:30:986 - ada suara ny, (ye mungkin lu sengaja ga layer, ane gatau)
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:40:049 - missing ?
16:57 Kyousuke-: emg ga sengaja layer itu, ga terlalu audible
16:58 Shinzo-: ohhh okeoke
16:58 Kyousuke-: itu ga missing? patternnya emg gtu
16:58 Shinzo-: hmmm okla
16:58 Kyousuke-: dan ga terlalu audible :v
16:58 Shinzo-: ye iya
16:58 Shinzo-: 04:56:455 - di add aja ?
17:00 Kyousuke-: jdi aneh
17:00 Kyousuke-: 04:56:533 (296533|2,296611|3,296689|1,296767|2) - gw cuma ngikut efek ini sih wkwk
17:00 Shinzo-: haha ok gpp
17:01 Shinzo-: 05:01:064 - mirip kek 05:00:752 -
17:01 Shinzo-: lagian 00:30:752 (30752|2,31064|1) - jumlah note ny sama
17:02 Kyousuke-: beda di effect soundnya
17:02 Shinzo-: gitu yah
17:02 Shinzo-: iya sih
17:03 Kyousuke-: yg di ending effectnya lbh gahar lel :v
17:03 Kyousuke-: jdi double deh >.>
17:03 Shinzo-: xD
17:03 Shinzo-: iyaa
17:03 Shinzo-: ok itu aja ._.
17:03 Kyousuke-: thanks~

Good Luck !

LordRaika wrote:

Hi, w ada hadiah untukmu XD

http://puu.sh/nyRSt.mp3 (gara2 laguny itu2 trus, jadi stuck di kepala >_< akhirnya jadi deh pitch nya)

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's Modding Queue
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Battlespace

00:30:908 - 00:31:221 - Add notes? Hard bass going in 3 notes is only for cymbal / finish sound
01:24:658 - Add a note? ^ it was the same like the others note lol >.>
02:28:096 - 02:29:150 - I'm not sure if this was intentional, but the ends of the longnotes seems unsnapped and unnecessarily long. I think it would be better to snap it to 1/8 yellow tick please hear carefully, it was accurately 1/6 (look pya's map)
02:48:096 - 03:35:596 - 03:55:596 - 04:15:596 - ^Same ^

Sorry for late modding ;-;
Feel free to reject it.
Good luck!

Evening wrote:

Quite a long post, this format is so that replying is easier if you'd like

LordRaika's 7K Onslaught

00:09:033 (9033|3,9346|3) - Pretty sure there are 1/4s in between these 2, quite faint but I reckon it's a recurring rhythm that is intended by the artist, up to you if you want to add that in.

| Refer: 00:06:533 (6533|4,6611|2,6689|4,6767|2) - Previous 1/4 rhythm

i make the stair pattern there ... till i forgot that its actually has a strong 1/2 and some 1/4, haha...
sure,... added 1/4 like previous one, to fit this consistency and the pattern looks fit as well.

00:10:596 (10596|0,10596|6,10596|3,10908|0,10908|3,10908|6) - Not really a fan of these 1/1 hammers, they feel way too light in terms of difficulty and intensity, making it rather underwhelming, suggesting to go for a bigger chord if possible OR add in the 1/2s that you've omitted

im jst aiming for the same sound to be hit on the same thing... >w< but sure, added more chord and 1/2 like in this section...

00:11:221 (11221|0,11221|1,11221|2,11299|3,11377|5,11377|4,11377|6) - Personally don't really feel like this pattern gives a much of an impact to the player physically considering it can be approximated to a 1234567 sweep, I suggest to make some 1/2 hammers here and there

| Image:

Note count is probably a bit too overkill in this case but kinda illustrates what I mean by not making it a 1234567 sweep

yep yep, i get your point, this right 567 then left chord 123 for the cymbal feels too light...
i added it for both hand and possible for a little sweep now.

00:11:611 (11611|3,11689|4,11767|5,11846|6,11846|1,11846|2,11846|0) - Doesn't really feel like a really strong build up here, I think you can trill the last few notes and end the pattern with a larger chord

| Note: Try to not have a 656{57} pattern if you intend to use the trill suggestion

i rearrange the pattern around here, and try to make it has more note, but not really much... so let it be light here , will slowly make it harder as the song goes later on.

00:15:283 (15283|4,15283|6,15439|6,15439|4) - Probably unintended missing 1/4

yeah, suppose to be mirror from 00:14:033 -
but, sure, add the 1/4 there >w<

00:16:455 - Might be intended in this case, but I'm pointing it out just in case (missing 1/4 note)

added

00:16:689 (16689|4,16689|2,16767|5,16846|3,16846|6,16846|0) - Build up is rather underwhelming, going to illustrate with an image

| Image:

Notice the note density build up here, try to keep playability constant while increasing note density, this will help in expressing the higher intensity of the song without making it horribly awkward to play

k k, add more note on it

00:19:814 (19814|5,20283|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s in between here I believe that it would feel better if you did a 1/4 to 1/8 transition here instead of throwing a 1/8 while exiting a 1/2

k, add some note and 1/4.

00:21:846 - Wanted to mention this really really underwhelming in difficulty considering they are all one handed and they are just... really easy, I would suggest to make them 2 handed instead. Think it's fine since the music kinda builds up.

oh ok, i also make this to have chord stream for better feelings.

00:25:283 (25283|1,25439|1) - Missing 1/4, probably not intended
00:26:455 - Missing 1/4, probably intended?

added

00:29:346 (29346|3,30596|2) - Feels like you're totally overlooking the build up 1/4 snare here, much more could be done in terms of patterning and build up, as of now, the build up from the 1/8 and 1/4 at the end is rigid and doesn't really fit the track in my opinion

sure, thx to all of the mod till here, i make the opening to have more note overall.... i also do so at the end of the song.

00:32:471 - Pretty sure you've seen Pyakura's dreadnought, the build up there was pretty much what I was looking for, in this case, the pattern here is a bit bland physically, it doesn't really show the following to me:

• Pattern Difficulty build up
• Density build up
• SV build up

Taking either 1 or 2 of these factors and enhancing them will make it more relevant towards the music

actually... no XD till i finished this out...
i just know that dreadnought has short and ranked version haha... but i do saw it after i finish my diff....
yes, i got your point, i remade all of it, and hope u feel the builds up now, as the density, i didnt increase the note amount...
just the pattern difficulty build up.

00:41:846 (41846|2) - Go for the SV acceleration before this chord, gives it more impact and I feel that it's a nice transition towards the slowjam

added the speed up SV

00:48:564 (48564|0,48564|2,48721|2,48721|0,48721|1) - ugh quite mindblockable for me, but it's mostly me since most players will probably play this fine

agree, this pattern is usually hard, but here its only 1times and its slow and easy BUT THEN... i think i can make it better... so i reduce the kick from 2 note to 1 note since this part is very calm.

01:01:338 (61338|3,61846|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s here, it's a transition from the 1/8s to 1/4s then to 1/2s, have a strong feeling that it's necessary to be mapped

i try to add the 1/4 ,but not fully from 1/8 since its quite surprising(while the right still busy thinking of the holding note)

01:02:158 (62158|0,62471|1) - Similarly, missing a bunch of 1/4s, though it's a recurring rhythm in this case instead of a transition

only add 1 from 1/4 after releasing the LN, ehm actually this section has loooots of 1/4 but yea... intentionally skip it as its not really unnecessary, missing the LN while playing this section is just really bad XD , hehe so as usual i prefer it easy tfor some section.

01:06:221 (66221|3,66846|5) - Build up towards the chord here is rather insignificant, considering adding some notes in to increase density

sure things, added on 1/2

01:08:721 - Felt like an indecisive section where I don't really know what sounds you plan to go with here, I find that layering 1/4s and the 1/2 chords here like this wouldn't be a problem

| Note: The 21{23} at the end was rather weird to play so I suggest to remove that too

| Image:

01:08:096 - ah... its actually from this point... i only follow the strong kick/beat sound, 1/2 for 3chord.... then... 01:10:596 - this is the intense version of it, exactly like what you suggest...
i will just make the kick that i follow to have 1/4
i also change pattern as for the end is not 21{23} weird to play >w<

01:15:517 (75517|2) - 01:16:767 (76767|2) - 01:18:017 (78017|1) - Don't think these are really needed if you plan to only map the synths here, could be nice for a roll transition towards the LNs but... yea up to you

01:15:361 - at first, i was thinking that.... IF THIS 1/4 have an appropriate sound to add note, this burst will feels really nice for the synth towards LN,
but i leave it blank... then follow up with next only 2 01:15:439 - synth note from here....
missing 1 note from the 1/4 feels a bit weird from the burst.... its just require some reading skill to pause a little bit then continue the 1/4 burst...

but hey, remove the 1/4 completely could also be some good to follow up the point that i explain above.... thanks ^^b
i remove them....
and actually make it another 1/2 LN seems ok for me, let me knw if its actually feels a bit weird to be play

01:18:486 (78486|2,78564|4,78642|1,78721|5,78799|2,78877|4,78955|1,79033|5) - Don't think the pitch synths are purely 35263526? Consider shifting these 2 notes to the center, creates a rather nice complex pattern 01:18:564 (78564|4,78799|2) -

yes yes, i spread the note to some bursty burst thingy, and looks pretty fun now. >w<

01:33:512 (93512|6,93512|5,93616|0,93616|1) - Feel like it could feel better if these are hammered on column 12, 1/3 is not that fast in this case

Sure ^^b

01:38:096 (98096|3,98721|5) - Think it should be 64 instead of 46 pitch-wise

k k

01:42:314 (102314|3,102392|5,102549|1,102783|5,102939|3) - Quite vague of a snapping and sound, might want to omit these in mapping, don't think it really makes much of a difference, if you really want to map it, consider using 01:41:846 (101846|5,101846|3,101846|1) - LN ends of those notes to map to it somehow

i remove some very less noticeable sound, to be exact the one here 01:42:314 -
that one is the only one that doesnt feels right here...
and so i remade this section here, looks nice as well for the end of the LN wall to release into normal note section.

01:43:877 (103877|3,103955|4,104033|5,104111|3,104189|4,104267|5) - There are some sound distortions here, might want to map that in through SVs or just making this a broken stair

mapping the broken stair is quite hard here since i prefer this stair as main pattern, adding the SV is also a better choice and makes it good as well.

01:47:471 (107471|6,107783|0,108096|6,108721|4) - Pretty sure the violin pitch goes like 1234 instead of 4143

k k

01:53:096 (113096|4,113174|0,113252|6) - 1/6 or 1/8 idk, but it's just weird to map with 1/4

yep,1/6... i also add some SV there...

02:09:033 - Heavily dislike this pattern in this section, it's horribly awkward to execute (especially the 2312132), consider making this increase in density instead of... this pattern. If you intend to follow the suggestion I would suggest to change up the whole pattern starting from 02:06:377 - as the transition from singles to this is rather spiky

| Image:

Kinda forgot about the note count thing but yea.. something like this would be great

i actually give this 2312132 quite lots of concern, since i can barely pass it with some horrible acc,im sure stronger people will have no trouble at all...
but seems like... this is just dont feels good after all XD
dw, i change this section...
i can feel the actual pattern difficulty increase here as this new pattern, let me know what do u think of it...

02:28:096 (148096|6,148096|0,148304|6,148304|1,148512|2,148512|6,148721|6,148721|3,148929|4,148929|6,149137|6,149137|5) - ugh the pitch doesn't go in one way, change the last 3 note here if possible

haha, this is the correct pitch pattern anyway 02:48:096 (168096|2,168304|3,168512|4,168721|5,168929|3,169137|1,169346|3) - , as somehow the current pattern looooks so good so i ignore the pitch...
but wait... let me make it a good pattern with correct pitch....

02:33:056 (153056|3,153096|4,153174|3) - Consider removing the center note anchor here, quite awkward to trill 454

agree... tq for pointing this out.

03:03:096 (183096|4,183408|5) - This synth is 1/4, might want to rethink this pattern here

03:08:096 (188096|2,188408|3) - Similarly, this synth is 1/4

yeah, it is... like i did here 03:13:096 (193096|3,193096|6,193174|0,193252|6,193252|3,193330|0) - , therefore i will make all of them the same.

03:03:564 (183564|0,183721|1,183877|2,184033|3,184189|4) - The pitch is more like 15432 instead of 12345

| Image:

03:04:111 - Not sure what is this note for, felt like it's too vague to be included

yep, pitch fix and remove for a better and focused sound

03:08:721 (188721|6,188721|4,188877|6,188877|4) - Think it's more of {57}{46} instead of a {57} hammer pitch-wise

right... wait... its 4 6 then 5 7, looks good now.

03:10:596 (190596|2) - The music cuts off this synth, might want to show that by not mapping this in

thx, fixed...
just like i did before on here 03:00:596 -

03:11:221 (191221|3,191299|2,191377|1) - I believe it's 1/6

thanks XD

03:13:877 (193877|6,193955|5,194033|4) - Well, pitch-wise I think it's better if you did this

| Image:

Right... but i would like to keep it >_<, since the pattern looks a bit ugly XD haha

03:16:533 (196533|0,196611|2,196689|4,196767|6) - Might be a bit underwhelming to go with 1/4 instead of 1/8 or 1/6 w/e this snap is here

i pay a very close check here, its 1/6... now i remade the pattern and it looks awesome here, thx again for the snap... >_<

03:23:096 (203096|6,203408|4) - These are piano chords, better if they are not singles

03:28:877 (208877|0,208877|4,208955|1,208955|5,209033|6,209033|2) - Try a 1/4 and 1/6 poly considering the synths

right, looks very detail now.

03:36:221 (216221|6,216221|3,216221|4,216429|5,216429|2,216429|4,216637|6,216637|5,216637|1) - Pitch pls

o-ok >_<

03:46:455 (226455|2,226533|1,226689|1,226846|1,226924|2) - Not sure about omitting the 1/4s, think it's possible if you 3232323 this part, up to you on how you want to put in the 1/4s

k k, add the 1/4, its gotta be trilling.... hope u like it... XD

04:22:158 (262158|4,262158|1,262158|5,262158|2) - Consider making these 1/1 long LNs here, feel that it better illustrates the music here as the music changes mood at 04:22:471 (262471|3) - so a larger change in the chart would better fit that

agree.. i was about thinking how to emphasize the sudden lose of the sound and change.... was thinking bout this but worry if its gotta be weird, but... to think of it again.. ITS PERFECT >w<b , this 4fat LN to be release is not weird at all.. it fits

04:32:783 (272783|1,272783|0,272861|2,272861|3) - Kind of a weird 1/4, might want to just not map this, the 1/4 here is rather vague and it feels like a weird anomaly in this section when i played it

oh why.... w....
k remove XD

04:36:533 (276533|1,276533|5,276689|5,276689|1,276846|3,276846|2,276846|4) - Recommend to put 1/4s

04:39:346 (279346|4,281846|4) - Think you can do something about this 1/4 snare build up in this section

04:45:283 (285283|1,285439|1) - Pretty sure you can include 1/4s here by 2323-ing this

05:01:533 (301533|2,301533|6,301611|5,301611|1,301689|0,301689|4,301767|3) - Dislike the fact that the chart ended off quite light, consider doing some trills here and there to make it more intensive rather than a double stair, which in fact is just really flowy instead of giving high impact when playing

yep, i remade and make the density a bit higher...
and sure, gotta make it more trilling... XD

Lenfried- wrote:

oui oui

cant testplay during weekdays :c

4k

Due to the lack of tricky LNs, this could be HP OD 9 hmm i would like to keep it now...
Needs SV added
01:22:314 (82314|1,82366|2,82418|3,82471|0,82471|1,82471|2) - could be a [4][3][2][134] to counter the triple usage here 01:21:846 (81846|0,81846|1,81846|3) - That being said, 01:22:002 (82002|2,82080|1) - ctrl h this. Provides cool jacks too hmm you right about that triple, re-arranged
01:55:283 (115283|0) - move to 2 because 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - ok
02:15:127 (135127|3) - move to 3 to make that 232 trill since 02:15:283 (135283|3,135361|0,135439|3) - ok
02:25:439 (145439|3) - idk lol move to 3 lol ok, re-arranged a bit
02:54:554 (174554|1,174658|2) - maybe ctrl h ok more balance
03:42:627 (222627|3) - coopoopy pastaaaaaa move to 3 lol ok
04:10:127 (250127|1,250205|2,250283|3,250283|0,250439|1,250491|2,250543|3,250596|1,250596|2,250596|0) - i think i said somethig about this previously done
04:22:054 (262054|1,262158|2) - this too ok

7k

00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
02:58:721 - could use some SVs
03:35:596 - another quad thing
03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
03:49:971 - another quad thing
03:55:596 - ^
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?

amazing charts! Wishing the best of luck to this set!

*throws stars

Rikuka wrote:

rank pls :3

Kyousuke- wrote:

doain ya >w<

Lenfried- wrote:

7k

00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
thx but i prefer single note and leave it blank as its only have not much space to next impact note with SV.

01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
basically... i jst add more note on the kick, yes sure...


01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
nopeeee... trust me, you just need to play like "normal stair pattern" and u will get 300

02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
hmm, everything is 3 note chord with pattern, using 4 could hardly gives a good pattern out of it,
and this 3 note is also good and consistent, so no change to all.

02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
i can feel the trill is not that fun...therefore i remove 1 of the 1/4 there >w<


02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
haha, thx... i know there is 1/6 there but its just doesnt make a good transition to my next LN part...

02:58:721 - could use some SVs
sure~


03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
no , simple hammer/trill is easier than chord control with anchor point, its really harder >_<



04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?
nooo, the 2nd last one LN will have the length of 50ms, NOOO
thats why with this around 100ms length, you just simply hit it as normal stair pattern to get 300.

Shinzo- wrote:

duno why
lebih suka diff raika yg dulu

LordRaika wrote:

Lenfried- wrote:

7k

00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
thx but i prefer single note and leave it blank as its only have not much space to next impact note with SV.

01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
basically... i jst add more note on the kick, yes sure...


01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
nopeeee... trust me, you just need to play like "normal stair pattern" and u will get 300

02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
hmm, everything is 3 note chord with pattern, using 4 could hardly gives a good pattern out of it,
and this 3 note is also good and consistent, so no change to all.

02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
i can feel the trill is not that fun...therefore i remove 1 of the 1/4 there >w<


02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
haha, thx... i know there is 1/6 there but its just doesnt make a good transition to my next LN part...

02:58:721 - could use some SVs
sure~


03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
no , simple hammer/trill is easier than chord control with anchor point, its really harder >_<



04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?
nooo, the 2nd last one LN will have the length of 50ms, NOOO
thats why with this around 100ms length, you just simply hit it as normal stair pattern to get 300.

Thanks for the mod >w<b

Shinzo- wrote:

duno why
lebih suka diff raika yg dulu

yaaah, klo ad pattern yg krg enak, ks tau aja >w<, bakal w cari pattern lain....






Update >>> http://puu.sh/nImxN.zip <<<
self mod, remodel some pattern into more amazing XD
add more SV(should recopy timing for 4k)
and wtf, SR got increased again... /me runssss

xanibabe wrote:

columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

lordraika's 7k onslaught

00:32:471 - same as 02:04:658 - but 1/1 first instead of 1/2 right away?
00:35:908 - was it intentional to sort of break the pattern here? (like 24642...)
sry, no... its for pattern sake...
changing it also doesnt show much differences, therefore i will go for the pattern.

00:50:596 - maybe add a short LN, sounds like chord like 00:49:346 -
suree

01:08:096 - should this be like 01:07:471 - ? (note on columns 1267)
right, i will follow my usual cymbal pattern for 1267

01:09:346 - hard to change pattern, but maybe this could also have pitch mapping
yeah, no... this pattern feels really nice to be play

01:40:596 - i dont understand what this is mapped to
01:40:596 (100596|1,100752|1) - this two have the same absolute pitch.. therefore its a minijack.
and the sound it follows is the choir sound, like from 01:35:596 -

another reason why its only 1 note, not 3 note for a total jack...
is yes....bcs the sound is very low, 3note is just not right....


02:12:158 - could also be like 00:39:658 -
no, XD for variation... thx anyway

03:35:596 - maybe better pitch mapping for this measure, since 03:36:221 - goes down in pitch but jumps up in columns
aaa no no no... this is actually already a perfect pitch, especially till here 03:36:429 -
from there its jst for a trill pattern...

now if you wonder the pitch, from 03:35:596 -
it is : F6 , F#6 , G#6 , D#7 , and last 3 is trill, C#7, C7 , C#7


05:02:471 - maybe move to 05:03:096 - to give a full measure's length for the LN, since the end is not really mapped to a solid beat
its jst for the short bass drop, while the other one is for the fading out wind sound.
but sure.... i will jst simply make them same to prevent confusion.

very cool map, even if i can't really play it at my skill level

DkAngelS wrote:

From my queue
Finally a song with 5* stars, well 4.9... I got 94.97% at first try (maybe I'll get more if I'll warm up)
Anyway...
|0|1|2|3|

4k BattleSpace

00:38:721 - Wow, I didn't expect this. I like it. thanks~ ><)/
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - I don't know what say about this, if remove them and move to 01:00:205 (60205|2) or only remove them because I don't hear the flow in that part with 1/12 snap. i'm following the effect sound, check pya's map and bms chart. It's existed with 1/6 snap
04:04:502 (244502|0) - move to 1? to match the pattern with 04:02:002 (242002|3) - this

Questions:
Why don't use LN's at 02:22:471 to 02:23:642 like 02:28:096 to 02:29:267
03:29:971 to 03:31:142 same ^
03:49:971 to 03:51:142 ^
the most reason is for pattern variation, and also to make a differences between 02:21:846 - 03:29:346 - 03:49:346 - this, and 02:26:846 - 02:46:846 - 03:34:346 - 03:54:346 - 04:14:346 - this. As you can see, the LN one is more climax than the triplets (anti-climax) one.

That's all.
Feel free to reject it if you won't use this suggestions or if my mod was too short.
Good luck

P.S I'd give you a star for awesome chart but my modding isn't good yet.
P.S 2 Sorry for late mod, if some are alrealdy fixed. Ignore them.

Kaito-kun wrote:

Sorry, but I can't help with LordRaika's diff. It's honestly too akward for me, may be because of the difficulty, as I'm not used to playing nor modding maps this difficult, but it certainly felt akward while both playing it and looking at it on the editor. Only things I can actually point out is that:
01:39:346 - Should have at least one extra note, there's a sound there other than the one you currently map
yes... its a bell sound... suppose to be extra note? i already put 3 note there...
this technique is called shielding pattern, while i keep my LN section, while this shield 'REPRESENT' the bell, furthermore its 3note.
so.. i wont add any other note.


00:12:822 (12822|3,12861|2,12900|1,12939|0) - Idk where you got this from, but no matter how much I look at it, I can't find the reason that stream is there
00:22:822 (22822|5,22861|4,22900|3,22939|2) - Same here
this is usually 1/8 kick but to make this consistent... like what i do here 04:32:783 -
Sure, i will remove it.




Other than that is just opinion, but at the very least I'll share it in case it actually helps:

My biggest problem with the map is the start of it, there are lots of notes that are there, but I can barely associate them with any sound, they almost feel like ghost notes that are there just to dense the start up. I know they have their reason for being there, but it just felt like that while playing it.

WoW dude, Hold it... the start of the map consist of absolute 1/2 and necessary 1/4 drum roll and snare...
JUST WHY and WHERE is this ghost note is? unless the one above, i already remove it....



Another thing I found uncomfortable was the first set of SVs, they felt really akward and sorta off the music, so maybe give those a check.
this....... HURTS me... oh my god... seriously dude.... *facepalm*
i cant believe it...!!!

first, how? this SV is well-calculated... its suppose to be sightreading, its a gimmick, its a stutter that has the SAME SCROLL modifier speed in total.
second, ALL OF my SV here is "LOOOW" in multiplier of the effect... its -L-O-W- , supposed to not even bother your performance at all,
some people cant even tell if there is SV because it doesnt bother player while playing, while it does give an effect "IF" you pay a closer attention to it.

unless... 00:41:455 - only this one is not sightreading, is much more likely into reflex react.

off with the music?
idk what to say anymore.



I also consider that HP rate is too high and OD rate is too low, but I won't really tell you to change it as that's nothing I can really consider a problem with the map.
HP and OD is perfectly intentional.
i even want to put HP 9 and OD 8 later on 'if' demanded.

first, HP at this Star rating is really NORMAL, you dont expect it to be a real easy PP map right?
and, OD ... this beatmap consist of tons short LN and inverse LN,
as a mapper and player, i know my pattern very well, to be able to "perfectly" release all those LN, its require a strict timing out of it.
therefore a "bit" lower OD is set in this concern.


really planning to go on 9HP, to prevent people saying its gonna be easy PP map...
OD 8 if really really everyone can do the LN very well in terms of acc.



This is all I can say about the 7K diff, me looking for more problems would probably result in either a shitty mod or a decrease in the map's quality, and I would like to avoid both of them.

(No Kudosu as it wasn't actually a mod)

thanks for the mod
BUT i really suggest... like... you have a high Performance, u should be at least play this map.
there you can just give me your honest opinion on what pattern is too hard or other things. that could be more likely... helping.

LordRaika wrote:

All bold is my reply.. to make it easier to distinguish the differences while replying each of your concern.

Kaito-kun wrote:

Sorry, but I can't help with LordRaika's diff. It's honestly too akward for me, may be because of the difficulty, as I'm not used to playing nor modding maps this difficult, but it certainly felt akward while both playing it and looking at it on the editor. Only things I can actually point out is that:
01:39:346 - Should have at least one extra note, there's a sound there other than the one you currently map
yes... its a bell sound... suppose to be extra note? i already put 3 note there...
this technique is called shielding pattern, while i keep my LN section, while this shield 'REPRESENT' the bell, furthermore its 3note.
so.. i wont add any other note.


00:12:822 (12822|3,12861|2,12900|1,12939|0) - Idk where you got this from, but no matter how much I look at it, I can't find the reason that stream is there
00:22:822 (22822|5,22861|4,22900|3,22939|2) - Same here
this is usually 1/8 kick but to make this consistent... like what i do here 04:32:783 -
Sure, i will remove it.




Other than that is just opinion, but at the very least I'll share it in case it actually helps:

My biggest problem with the map is the start of it, there are lots of notes that are there, but I can barely associate them with any sound, they almost feel like ghost notes that are there just to dense the start up. I know they have their reason for being there, but it just felt like that while playing it.

WoW dude, Hold it... the start of the map consist of absolute 1/2 and necessary 1/4 drum roll and snare...
JUST WHY and WHERE is this ghost note is? unless the one above, i already remove it....



Another thing I found uncomfortable was the first set of SVs, they felt really akward and sorta off the music, so maybe give those a check.
this....... HURTS me... oh my god... seriously dude.... *facepalm*
i cant believe it...!!!

first, how? this SV is well-calculated... its suppose to be sightreading, its a gimmick, its a stutter that has the SAME SCROLL modifier speed in total.
second, ALL OF my SV here is "LOOOW" in multiplier of the effect... its -L-O-W- , supposed to not even bother your performance at all,
some people cant even tell if there is SV because it doesnt bother player while playing, while it does give an effect "IF" you pay a closer attention to it.

unless... 00:41:455 - only this one is not sightreading, is much more likely into reflex react.

off with the music?
idk what to say anymore.



I also consider that HP rate is too high and OD rate is too low, but I won't really tell you to change it as that's nothing I can really consider a problem with the map.
HP and OD is perfectly intentional.
i even want to put HP 9 and OD 8 later on 'if' demanded.

first, HP at this Star rating is really NORMAL, you dont expect it to be a real easy PP map right?
and, OD ... this beatmap consist of tons short LN and inverse LN,
as a mapper and player, i know my pattern very well, to be able to "perfectly" release all those LN, its require a strict timing out of it.
therefore a "bit" lower OD is set in this concern.


really planning to go on 9HP, to prevent people saying its gonna be easy PP map...
OD 8 if really really everyone can do the LN very well in terms of acc.



This is all I can say about the 7K diff, me looking for more problems would probably result in either a shitty mod or a decrease in the map's quality, and I would like to avoid both of them.

(No Kudosu as it wasn't actually a mod)

thanks for the mod
BUT i really suggest... like... you have a high Performance, u should be at least play this map.
there you can just give me your honest opinion on what pattern is too hard or other things. that could be more likely... helping.

Kaito-kun wrote:

Again, I said thise things as mere opinions and things I thoughts I had firsthand about the map. There's also the case that I'm not used to modding maps this difficult (as I said previously). Tho I can say that maybe the word "akward" was probably missused in my case, could have phrased it better. And yes, I played the map 3 times, and even had to reduce HP to 7 to actually finish it without No Fail lol.

Also, let me clear some things up real quick: When I referred the start as "akward", I was reffering that it sometimes FEELS like I'm hitting ghost notes. After looking at it on the editor, I found the sound, but while playing it, I didn't heard it (also, it's not the whole minute or so I'm talking about, it's only some notes here and there that feel like this). About the SVs, maybe I didn't expressed myself correctly either, but what I meant is that they don't really feel connected to the music (Can be because I'm already used to Pya's SVs in his map, dunno).

Sorry if I made you facepalm with this lol. But I was speaking mostly of opinion, even tho it may be a very retarded one, so it wasn't anything really thought out. I just added it there in case it actually helped. Anyways, good luck with the map, since even tho I don't personally like it, it's still well done.

LordRaika wrote:

as for SV, im not fans of aggressive SV that require player to memorize the song, yeah... like i explained before...
i prefer things that could be sightread while it does give effect, an effect that doesnt makes player feels uneasy bcs it could probably miss the note.

Xenophilius wrote:

you have a good point of the mod, but i know really well the LN that i map... that it was intended, ofc in playability too.
here is my reply :

Raika's 7k

1. 01:12:158 (72158|0,72236|2,72314|4,72392|5,72471|3,72549|1,72627|2,72705|4,72783|6,72861|3,72939|5,73017|6) - You don't think lenght of these LNs is a bit awkward to play? I suggest you to make the pattern more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4782958 with 1/2 LNs, so the player always have a release and an hit. Easyer to play and less frustrating.
   1/4short LN here require you to hit it with delicacy, or just do it very fast, to get 300s, since the length is only around 80ms
   this 3/8 has a good length which is around 120ms, bcs "normally" a normal key press took around 100-130ms while playing.
   while 1/2 has a bit too long and require u too hold 1, release 1, and press new one, for each 1/4 which is... harder...
   
   thts why i choose 3/8, player just simply have to hit like normally, no need to worry about a delicate touch, just do hit it like normal note.
   you can try this with F5 inside editor, by removing all other note from the entire difficulty aside this LN... to test the differences and which is easier to get 300s. i really prefer 3/8 here. ^^
   
   but still... if some more player really have trouble on this, i will really change it later.
   
   that will answer all of your 3/8 concern and why i really choose it >w<
   as u can see, i choose 3/8 a lots all over the difficulty... since well.. its easier.... (at least for me)
   this difficulty(lv6-7k) on last chorus can show you how this LN could be easily 300s.
   
    
    
   
2. 02:33:642 - Just a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4782990
   its niceeee, but i really prefer the current one as its easier XD (for acc) and to follow up for next 1/4
   i mean this 02:34:111 (154111|6,154189|4,154267|2) - (to prevent sudden mini jack if using your pattern)
    
3. 03:16:221 - Why not end these LNs in 1/4 snap? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4783028
   to have all this 4 LN consistent LN release length which is important....
   
   but wait.... after testing this, especially if this two 03:16:299 (196299|2,196455|6) - ends at 1/4
   its easier to get 300s because its exact 1 release and 1 press at the "same" time, all of this occur once for each hand....
   which is still easy, ignoring the snap differences... for example from 03:16:637 (196637|2) - to next release is nowhere near exact snap.
   but its on the other hand, which is completely okay as it is....
    
    
4. 03:51:924 - Why 6 notes? There's nothing so relevant to layer with 6 notes.
   for a perfect shield pattern... AND it does have the huge impact, cymbal, bass kick, and the main rhythm.

_underjoy wrote:

Hello! Sorry for waiting so long, been busy.

4K mod inside

00:03:955 (3955|3) - it's a ghost note, doesn't correspond to layering after btw it isn't for me, the melody is more hearable than before, and it's similiar with the others which i layer
00:06:299 (6299|3) - this is a ghost note too. Can't hear the sound for it. seriously? there's a melody effect sound like lol (even there's exist on raika's diff too)
00:14:111 - you lack a note here. Compare with 00:04:033 - nah there's no audible melody on there, unlike the first mod and the timestamp that you pointed 00:04:033 - . Yes i get what you mean, but if i add the note on there, i must add the note on the others place bcs the sound is similiar with the others (unlike 00:14:189 (14189|1,14267|2) - this, it have a sound effect or an instrument sound that makes it different for me)
00:17:158 (17158|3,17158|0,17236|2,17314|1,17392|2,17471|0,17471|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4846863 plays much better because it removes the big anchor on 2. It's now a lot more clean. nice
00:24:111 - same as 00:14:111, add a note. same as before, but take into consideration lol
00:27:158 (27158|0,27158|3,27236|2,27314|1,27392|2,27471|0,27471|3,27549|1,27627|0,27705|1,27783|2,27783|3,27861|1,27861|0,27939|3,27978|2,28017|1,28056|0,28096|1,28096|2,28096|3) - I suggest to do the same pattern as in 00:17:158, but mirror it (ctrl+H the whole changed sequence). ok
00:51:846 (51846|0,51846|3) - delete the note at 1. It's just a piano sound, not accented. that's quite loud for me lol, but applied
01:22:158 (82158|0) - move to 3, to delete the 3-anchor on 1. The burst afterwards plays better this way. nicee
01:22:627 (82627|3,82705|2) - swap those two? reflects the pitch a bit better I think (and is a natural followup of the pattern on burst) hmm seems more better, applied
01:31:377 (91377|2) - this note should be on 1. The anchor on right hand combined with the jack after is too much for the right hand, it needs some balance. ok
01:34:033 (94033|3,94033|0,94033|2) - two notes suffice here. The sound is different. oh okay, since the other modders have pointed this before
02:01:533 (121533|1,121611|2,121689|1,121767|2,121846|1,121924|2,122002|1) - ouch it's not a good idea with the minijack. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4846944 ouch okay, btw why u don't redl
03:03:096 (183096|0,183174|1,183252|2,183330|1,183408|0,183486|2) - I think you should use an 121212 trill here. The music clearly suggests it. okay nice suggestion :^) it seems that you're a trill fans lol
03:05:517 (185517|2,185674|1,185986|2,186142|2) - they seem like ghost notes, and even if they're not, they're barely audible. I'd not map them. Also, revise the chords that happen without those notes because they seem not structured with the notes deleted. yea you're rite. deleted
03:13:096 (193096|3,193174|1,193252|2,193330|1,193408|3,193486|2) - the same idea with the trill on the other hand instead. okkie
03:15:361 (195361|1,195517|1) - ghost notes IMO too 03:15:517 - only deleted this
03:16:533 (196533|0,196572|1,196611|2,196650|3,196689|0,196728|1,196767|2,196806|3) - this is 1/6, not 1/8! oops lol changed
03:24:502 (204502|2) - I'd go with the main line of piano and not map this (because there's no piano for that) okkie
03:26:221 (206221|0) - cosmetic change: move to 3, or change the chord to [14] to reflect the pitch. more prefer [14]
03:28:877 - you forgot a chord here, so I suggest this pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4847050 . Also, I didn't check the snaps so I hope you're correct. hmm somehow i would to keep it, for playability. and about the snaps i've checked from the bms chart
03:34:658 (214658|0,214658|1,214658|3) - delete one. it should be 2-chord. okay, why i forgot to apply it on here too lol
03:58:564 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4847082 I think you should go with the similar pattern as in the first part. It also plays better than the one you used (it's not bad, but it's hard to nail and many people would fc the map to this point and miss here then rage.) yeah that's true, this was the most part i worried for lol. btw changed into your suggestion, maybe will change the pattern like the first if many people complaining
04:26:377 (266377|1,266767|1) - those notes are not needed. You didn't map the background sounds for that section, and the first note is such a background sound. The second note was probably meant to be a part of the windup but it starts 04:26:846 - here. ok
04:54:189 (294189|1,294267|2) - in my opinion it would be good as a minijack. Do what you want hmm yeah its good, but i never use that on my pattern. so yeah keep

Nice map! Good luck!
PS I've noticed the copy-paste =.= it's hard you know to make the different pattern ;w; i was too lazy to think yeah since the song is repetive tho lmao

PyaKura wrote:

Dropping in to say I have not forgotten about this map and will proceed with the mod as soon as I am done with Level_51's Double Helix.