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[Catharsis]
[Catharsis]
- 00:37:490 (1,2) - and similar places - your rhythm is fine, but since drum sound constantly increase in intensity you could try using a single repeat 1/8 slider instead to capture sound w/o adding extra emphasis to 00:37:587 - might also reduce the "overmapping" comments
- 01:07:877 (1) - and similar places - maybe remove 1 repeat to prevent sliderbreak
- 01:39:426 (7,8,1) - very weird to play since since stream doesn't flow into slider. maybe something more standard like this? http://puu.sh/mSSCW/e8882b89e4.jpg
- 01:55:877 (1) - is NC here necessary? these are all 1/2 rhythms and the spacing hasn't changed yet. also makes 01:56:652 (1,2) - more ambiguous cuz now its 1/1 rhythm
- 02:22:200 - senya, why you no put drums here :/
- 02:48:135 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm since triplet ends on red tick and 02:48:232 (3) - is overmapped. maybe try this rhythm to match guitar? http://puu.sh/mST84/954cd094db.jpg
- 03:00:329 - add note?
- 03:23:361 (1,2) - stronger beat is at 03:23:748 - instead of 03:23:652 - no? suggest you add an extra repeat to slider and place note at 03:23:748 -
- 03:40:200 (7,8,1) - make this triplet less curved so it flows better from 03:40:006 (6) -
- 00:02:071 (1,2) - make approach angles to these sliders more sharp so that they receive proper emphasis http://puu.sh/mSTBZ/7214de7439.jpg
- 01:17:361 (4,5) - weird to stack here since (5) isn't particular strong beat and you don't use 1/2 stacks anywhere else in guitar part
- 01:28:781 (1,2,3) - rapid continuous CW movement seems forced since you don't use this flow pattern anywhere else. prefer if you keep the flow/style more jumpy to be consistent with rest of map (sorry if this explanation doesn't make sense)
- 01:55:877 (1) - same concern about NC as extra diff
- 02:11:103 (1,2) - rotate by -40 and reposition so the reverse flow coming from the slider feels more apparent (like how you did 00:50:071 (1,1,2) - )
- 02:55:006 (2,3,4) - why is this more dense than your extra? I like your extra rhythm better since it captures guitar, so maybe try it here as well
- 00:26:652 - 01:47:168 - add note? i hear drum and vocal here
- 01:07:103 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - didn't notice before, but storyboard here is very nice
- 01:55:684 (1) - 01:56:458 (1) - I feel these NC are unnecessary
- 02:52:587 (2,3,4) - I would enjoy a bigger spacing here, but maybe just me
- 00:50:458 (2) - and similar places - just a suggestion, but maybe you could represent music better by changing this to 1/2 slider
- 02:31:684 (5) - maybe change to 1/2 slider with repeat so you can add clap on offbeat?
- 02:40:200 (4) - ^ although here it's probably more important to emphasize guitar sustain...
- 02:58:587 (1) - looks a little strange, idk
- eh, i'm just being picky since everything else looks ok