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Shimotsuki Haruka - Konpeitou Retrotica - Another Flower ver

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Narcissu
e …… my ranked map all without BG link …… i don't care it , 1/8 note/slider in sharlo‘s diff , i want to map more beautiful and clean like the song …… random stack , random is romantic !!

other fix , why many unsanp lol

@Sharlo : i changed your hitclap XD
Misure
回馈社会,送摸,估计能加个sp(
[General]
  1. 不考虑做个歌词SB么至少
  2. 偶像夏萝的widescreen support
[Sharlo's Rosa]
  1. 00:16:062 (2,1,2) - 感觉这个flow角度有点钝 其实滑条往上挪点就感觉好些
  2. 00:23:928 (2) - 这个方向 接前面比较好 ctrl+G的话接后面比较好 额
  3. 00:30:513 (3,1) - 近了
  4. 00:36:732 (1) - ctrl+G甩flow感觉好点 00:30:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 这段flow感觉有点单调
  5. 看完kiai前这段 感觉 怎么NC多数都是向右的flow哇 慢慢的既视感..
  6. 01:13:684 (3,4,5) - 这flow好像不太好 2号3号swap好些,不过还是建议这里t跳重新摆下
  7. 01:34:171 (2,3,4) - spacing有些微妙 试试这种
  8. 01:35:269 (1,2,3) - 感觉还是等距好 滑条往右边动一动就好了吧
  9. 01:37:464 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉这个旋律的话 这两个是不是离得近比较好?倒是01:37:830 (8,1) - 我觉得可以远点
  10. 02:00:879 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我觉得再大点间距好些 配合整个diff的距离的话也更合曲 也更容易读三分拍 啊好像是六分
  11. 02:10:391 (1) - 164|80之类 远点感觉好
  12. 02:37:830 (1) - 小尾巴好违和233 最后那个拐点丢掉感觉反而好些 后者向里收
  13. 02:52:464 (1,2) - 空拍的话这个还是顺flow比较好 顺便02:52:464 (1,1) - 这俩一个弧度 就是复制粘贴那种 比较好的样子
  14. 03:31:245 (3,4,5,1) - 这么放的话 后面这个三连打起来蜜汁别扭 感觉是因为太近了
  15. 03:33:074 (8,1) - 这个同flow 感觉说不通啊 都快甩出去了又拉回来感觉有点不好
  16. 03:42:220 (1) - ctrl+G?
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:245 (1) - 离前面有点远 虽然相比之下我觉得45swap之后的那种flow好些
  2. 00:27:952 (1) - ctrl+G?
  3. 00:32:159 (4,5,1) - 160|308 虽然差的不多但是感觉上还是有些差距(其实你就是来水的吧喂
  4. 00:41:123 (1) - 472|56 ^
  5. 00:49:903 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个好棒!
  6. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G?
  7. 01:03:074 (1) - ctrl+G?感觉顺前面势往左的flow好些
  8. 01:14:598 (9) - 80|280
  9. 01:22:098 (1) - ctrl+G? 感觉换向要被all reject
  10. 01:55:025 (3,1) - 没包好诶嘿嘿(结果被回来一句:没想包
  11. 02:05:635 (7,8) - 换成滑条感觉好点 其实前面那个空拍感觉就挺容易点错掉
啧,试玩了下hard结果客户端炸了(((
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:854 (2,3,4,5,1) - 这个变距看起来挺好的 但是打起来有一丝微妙 不如直接00:27:403 (4) - 396|320 当然现在这样确实挺好应该
  2. 00:44:050 (1,2,3,4,1) - 赞
  3. 00:49:171 (3,4) - 包
  4. 00:56:123 (2,3,4) - 其实我觉得3起来突出一下那个音更合适 但是好像不好弄后面
  5. 00:58:684 (1) - 68|332感觉好 打起来
  6. 01:02:342 (1) - 可以加个NC
  7. 01:06:001 (1) - 01:06:367 (2) - 分别ctrl+G?
  8. 01:13:135 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个打起来感觉太好
  9. 02:05:635 (5,6,1) - 同Insane 感觉可能是后面vocal太赶前面俩note就感觉不好了 啊也估计是我弱qaq
  10. 02:34:537 (5,6,7) - 这个太远了感觉不好
  11. 03:03:257 (4) - 这个真是... 要不就拉个奇怪的形状配合一下?
EN不看了 估计也看不出问题 虽然前面提的也不是问题大概


好听好听好听
Good luck!! :)
Sharlo

Lasse wrote:

Sharlo's Rosa

  1. 00:15:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - shape of the stream looks a bit off, idk what you wanted to go for here, but it doesn't really look nice Oops it is just that 00:15:330 (1,2,3) - is a group and 00:15:513 (3,4,5,6) - is another group. Well let me fix it then.
  2. 00:24:111 - this is so strong, doesnt feel like putting it on the end of a rep. slider is the best choice
  3. 00:27:952 (1) - high spacing into sudden slow slider makes it really easy to mess up, you could try ctrl-g + some rotation on the slider so the "wobbly" part is at the start and players will move slower on the slider when they see this http://i.imgur.com/e5MyosR.jpg (if not, at least sdtack the sliderend properly on 5) Actually it is strong for me here. Stacked.
  4. 00:38:013 (3,4,1) - custom stack to left would look nice here imo http://i.imgur.com/5rUT2Kl.jpg It stacked automatically.
  5. 01:02:342 (1,2) - such a nice spot for a cool stream, having two repeat sliders here leading into the chorus feels a bit anticlimatic OK~
  6. 01:24:842 - way too strong for a sliderend, a kickslider into jump or triplet would give this the emphasis it deserves
  7. 02:26:671 (4) - i get what you want to do with the spacing here, but the difference 3-4 and 4-5 feels a bit too much, I'd suggest to move it a little bit more left/down to balance it like http://i.imgur.com/VtuSrzT.jpg Fixed~
  8. 03:38:196 (3,4,5,6) - angles make this feel a bit unstructured, maybe use actual 90° or sth But I like randomize~

Narcissu wrote:

@Sharlo : i changed your hitclap XD 好的

Misure wrote:

[General]
  1. 偶像夏萝的widescreen support 好好好
[Sharlo's Rosa]
  1. 00:16:062 (2,1,2) - 感觉这个flow角度有点钝 其实滑条往上挪点就感觉好些 窝也觉得有点
  2. 00:23:928 (2) - 这个方向 接前面比较好 ctrl+G的话接后面比较好 额
  3. 00:30:513 (3,1) - 近了 怎么会……
  4. 00:36:732 (1) - ctrl+G甩flow感觉好点 00:30:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 这段flow感觉有点单调
  5. 看完kiai前这段 感觉 怎么NC多数都是向右的flow哇 慢慢的既视感.. 做的时候有发现但是不想放跳 懒改(
  6. 01:13:684 (3,4,5) - 这flow好像不太好 2号3号swap好些,不过还是建议这里t跳重新摆下
  7. 01:34:171 (2,3,4) - spacing有些微妙 试试这种
  8. 01:35:269 (1,2,3) - 感觉还是等距好 滑条往右边动一动就好了吧 可以
  9. 01:37:464 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉这个旋律的话 这两个是不是离得近比较好?倒是01:37:830 (8,1) - 我觉得可以远点 01:38:196 (1) - 是降速滑条 不宜大跳
  10. 02:00:879 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我觉得再大点间距好些 配合整个diff的距离的话也更合曲 也更容易读三分拍 啊好像是六分 再大水仙要打不了了(秘制甩锅
  11. 02:10:391 (1) - 164|80之类 远点感觉好 好的
  12. 02:37:830 (1) - 小尾巴好违和233 最后那个拐点丢掉感觉反而好些 后者向里收 性感的小尾巴(快够
  13. 02:52:464 (1,2) - 空拍的话这个还是顺flow比较好 顺便02:52:464 (1,1) - 这俩一个弧度 就是复制粘贴那种 比较好的样子 02:53:928 (1) - 要blanket
  14. 03:31:245 (3,4,5,1) - 这么放的话 后面这个三连打起来蜜汁别扭 感觉是因为太近了 前面都是等距的
  15. 03:33:074 (8,1) - 这个同flow 感觉说不通啊 都快甩出去了又拉回来感觉有点不好 本来我也是这么想的但是又觉得改了后面的就要跟着改……
  16. 03:42:220 (1) - ctrl+G?
Thanks.

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Title:Konpeito retorochika - Another Flower ver. -
TitleUnicode:金平糖レトロチカ - Another Flower ver. -
Artist:Shimotsuki Haruka
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320,356,205940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,296,207586,6,0,L|432:136,1,160,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,16,208135,1,2,3:2:0:0:
332,68,208318,2,0,P|295:83|256:86,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,139,208684,2,0,P|129:144|164:164,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,180,208958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,200,209049,5,2,3:2:0:0:
344,280,209232,1,2,3:2:0:0:
431,136,209415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,328,209598,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,260,209781,2,0,P|80:200|96:136,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,72,210147,2,0,L|216:52,1,80,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,136,210513,6,0,P|356:160|284:128,1,160,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,211062,1,2,3:2:0:0:
431,136,211245,2,0,L|416:224,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,211793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,211885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,211976,5,2,3:2:0:0:
417,214,212159,1,2,3:2:0:0:
284,128,212342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,280,212525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,120,212708,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,180,212891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,180,212982,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,180,213074,2,0,L|88:168,1,80,2|2,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
20,264,213440,6,0,P|91:297|168:281,1,160,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,213989,1,2,3:2:0:0:
228,68,214171,2,0,L|307:58,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,185,214537,2,0,P|461:189|422:179,1,80,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
403,168,214812,1,0,3:0:0:0:
383,152,214903,6,0,L|366:231,1,80,2|2,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
272,308,215269,2,0,L|261:360,2,40,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,215635,2,0,P|152:196|96:224,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,216001,2,0,P|32:244|32:196,1,80,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,216367,6,0,L|224:64,1,160,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,216915,1,2,3:2:0:0:
438,142,217098,2,0,P|439:102|428:64,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,236,217464,2,0,P|352:274|359:314,1,80,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,217739,1,0,3:0:0:0:
388,352,217830,5,2,3:2:0:0:
480,276,218013,1,2,3:2:0:0:
268,172,218196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,328,218379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,280,218562,1,10,0:0:0:0:
164,96,218745,1,2,3:2:0:0:
164,96,218836,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,96,218928,2,0,P|200:84|248:88,1,80,2|2,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
387,180,219293,6,0,P|326:195|268:172,1,128,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,219842,1,2,3:2:0:0:
420,60,220025,2,0,P|442:82|458:110,1,64,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,264,220391,1,2,0:1:0:0:
267,171,220574,1,0,3:0:0:0:
267,171,220665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,171,220757,5,2,3:2:0:0:
272,308,220940,1,2,3:2:0:0:
192,224,221123,2,0,L|132:212,2,32,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,221489,2,0,P|352:192|344:132,1,96,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,221854,2,0,L|260:60,1,64,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,50,222220,6,0,P|117:92|180:104,1,128,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,222769,1,2,3:2:0:0:
408,92,222952,2,0,L|496:77,2,64,2|2|2,1:3|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
300,172,223501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,223592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,223684,5,2,3:2:0:0:
204,180,223867,1,2,3:2:0:0:
304,312,224049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,248,224232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,224415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,280,224598,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,288,224781,2,0,L|-20:272,2,42.6666666666667,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,248,225147,6,0,P|144:184|120:124,1,128,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,84,225696,1,2,3:2:0:0:
172,44,225879,2,0,L|248:52,1,64,2|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,226245,2,0,L|376:108,1,64,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,226519,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,76,226610,6,0,L|463:86,1,64,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
484,180,226976,2,0,P|480:220|475:243,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,227342,2,0,P|371:299|308:312,1,128,2|2,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
140,220,228074,6,0,P|195:248|257:237,1,128,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,228623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,92,228806,2,0,L|388:16,2,64,2|2|2,1:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,229354,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,256,229446,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,256,229537,5,2,3:0:0:0:
288,92,229720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,340,229903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,176,230086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,340,230269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,92,230452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,220,230635,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,256,230818,1,2,0:3:0:0:
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Misure wrote:

回馈社会,送摸,估计能加个sp(
[General]
  1. 不考虑做个歌词SB么至少……不擅長故事版……之前糊了一個太累了
  2. 偶像夏萝的widescreen support
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:245 (1) - 离前面有点远 虽然相比之下我觉得45swap之后的那种flow好些……跳跳跳
  2. 00:27:952 (1) - ctrl+G?……我不想滑條頭離上下邊界太近【
  3. 00:32:159 (4,5,1) - 160|308 虽然差的不多但是感觉上还是有些差距(其实你就是来水的吧喂……DS1.2……
  4. 00:41:123 (1) - 472|56 ^
  5. 00:49:903 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个好棒!……naya~
  6. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G?
  7. 01:03:074 (1) - ctrl+G?感觉顺前面势往左的flow好些……跳跳跳
  8. 01:14:598 (9) - 80|280 ……
  9. 01:22:098 (1) - ctrl+G? 感觉换向要被all reject
  10. 01:55:025 (3,1) - 没包好诶嘿嘿(结果被回来一句:没想包
  11. 02:05:635 (7,8) - 换成滑条感觉好点 其实前面那个空拍感觉就挺容易点错掉
啧,试玩了下hard结果客户端炸了(((
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:854 (2,3,4,5,1) - 这个变距看起来挺好的 但是打起来有一丝微妙 不如直接00:27:403 (4) - 396|320 当然现在这样确实挺好应该
  2. 00:44:050 (1,2,3,4,1) - 赞
  3. 00:49:171 (3,4) - 包……因為都是四級網格擺的,這就是極限了……修了一下
  4. 00:56:123 (2,3,4) - 其实我觉得3起来突出一下那个音更合适 但是好像不好弄后面
  5. 00:58:684 (1) - 68|332感觉好 打起来 ……
  6. 01:02:342 (1) - 可以加个NC …… kiai 開頭都是藍色……
  7. 01:06:001 (1) - 01:06:367 (2) - 分别ctrl+G?
  8. 01:13:135 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个打起来感觉太好……太好???
  9. 02:05:635 (5,6,1) - 同Insane 感觉可能是后面vocal太赶前面俩note就感觉不好了 啊也估计是我弱qaq
  10. 02:34:537 (5,6,7) - 这个太远了感觉不好…… 莫名其妙多出來的三連……大概是從高難度直接複製的鍋
  11. 03:03:257 (4) - 这个真是... 要不就拉个奇怪的形状配合一下?……
EN不看了 估计也看不出问题 虽然前面提的也不是问题大概


好听好听好听
Good luck!! :)
沒回的大部分不知道該怎麼回答……感覺都差不多 :?
Silky
hi promapper
Normal
  1. 02:00:147 (3,4) - DS is bit off
Hard
  1. 00:26:489 (1,2,3) - can you use same distance in 00:26:489 (1) - 's end and 00:26:854 (2) - 's head and 00:27:220 (3) - ?
    it's just for better looks lol
  2. 00:36:184 (4) - when player playing this, this overlapping might get confuse imo, you should avoid this in someway
  3. 01:24:842 (6) - NC for consistency with Insane
  4. 03:03:257 (4) - add NC?
  5. 03:25:940 (6) - same as 01:24:842 (6) -
Insane
  1. OD7 or 7.5 is better spread imo
  2. 00:27:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - can you make more spacing? this sound is still strong
  3. 00:35:269 (1) - I'd stack it on 00:35:452 (2) - 's head, up to you tho
  4. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?
  5. 01:45:513 (1) - same as 00:35:269 (1) -
  6. 02:03:440 (7) - umm... I know you following drums, but following vocals better at this part imo, so I'd move this circle to 02:03:623 -
  7. 02:07:830 (7) - ^
  8. 03:45:147 (1) - unsnapped
gl
Topic Starter
Narcissu

fuyuyu- wrote:

hi promapper
Normal
  1. 02:00:147 (3,4) - DS is bit off…… fix
Hard
  1. 00:26:489 (1,2,3) - can you use same distance in 00:26:489 (1) - 's end and 00:26:854 (2) - 's head and 00:27:220 (3) - ?
    it's just for better looks lol …… ok
  2. 00:36:184 (4) - when player playing this, this overlapping might get confuse imo, you should avoid this in someway …… ok
  3. 01:24:842 (6) - NC for consistency with Insane…… fix
  4. 03:03:257 (4) - add NC?…… e …… bule when kiai start
  5. 03:25:940 (6) - same as 01:24:842 (6) - …… ok
Insane
  1. OD7 or 7.5 is better spread imo…… all diff OD = AR-1
  2. 00:27:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - can you make more spacing? this sound is still strong…… a bit …… lazy
  3. 00:35:269 (1) - I'd stack it on 00:35:452 (2) - 's head, up to you tho…… for the voice Segmentation rhythm …… i think jump 00:35:452 (2) - better
  4. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?…… bad flow/jump when downbeat
  5. 01:45:513 (1) - same as 00:35:269 (1) -
  6. 02:03:440 (7) - umm... I know you following drums, but following vocals better at this part imo, so I'd move this circle to 02:03:623 -
  7. 02:07:830 (7) - ^
  8. 03:45:147 (1) - unsnapped…… fix
gl
very thx , Japanese always good modder

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i don't know …… i try find Metadata check :?

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@Sharlo : changed title to Konpeitou Retorochika >.>
Silky
one thing
http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/


Title: CONFETTI RETROTICA or Confetti Retrotica?

btw 金平糖 is Konpeitou in romaji lol
-Nanaka-
Hitsound that falls out

E
02:23:196 (1,2) - rem body normal

H
01:32:708 - whistle
03:35:269 (2) - rem body drum
03:38:836 - 03:38:928 - Missing Normal
03:50:818 (4) - Missing Dwhistle

I
01:24:842 (1) - 03:25:940 (1) - whistle
01:48:440 - sample Dwhistle
03:44:415 (5) - rem body normal
03:46:610 (1,2) - whistle
Topic Starter
Narcissu
fix all …… Japanese always good modder * 2

when i become mapper , Japanese and Canadian teach me how to mod/map …… i map/mod a song overnight …… now i lose enthusiasm for mapping , lose carefully for modding 【
-Nanaka-
Not as much as Mod, Though
but Very pretty map :)
Lavender
快飞了
Rakuen
很抱歉,前两个月被去掉BN了呜呜;_;

( =`・ω・´) Rakuen's Modding Queue

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Easy

  1. 01:38:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这部分Drum/Clap好像放错了
  2. 03:02:525 (2) - 较难击中,换像这样的滑条如何01:23:561 (3) -

Normal

  1. 01:11:123 (5) - Normal Sampleset + Soft Additions?
  2. 01:17:342 (4) - 碰到HP了
  3. 02:01:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 旋律有点怪,建议都换成这一类的:

Hard

  1. 00:15:330 (1,2,3) - 因为Normal只放1/2,所以觉得Hard不能直接放1/8连打+跳。这得看上面的人怎么说 :3
  2. 02:11:489 (4) - NC?

Nice map! Give star~

Good luck!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Rakuen wrote:

很抱歉,前两个月被去掉BN了呜呜;_;

( =`・ω・´) Rakuen's Modding Queue

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Easy

  1. 01:38:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这部分Drum/Clap好像放错了……fix
  2. 03:02:525 (2) - 较难击中,换像这样的滑条如何01:23:561 (3) - ……ok

Normal

  1. 01:11:123 (5) - Normal Sampleset + Soft Additions?……fix
  2. 01:17:342 (4) - 碰到HP了……no problem
  3. 02:01:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 旋律有点怪,建议都换成这一类的:……ok

Hard

  1. 00:15:330 (1,2,3) - 因为Normal只放1/2,所以觉得Hard不能直接放1/8连打+跳。这得看上面的人怎么说 :3……那種廁所裏的石頭我見一個踢一個
  2. 02:11:489 (4) - NC?……別的難度也都沒加

Nice map! Give star~

Good luck!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
thx mod
NucleaRaven
Hi from my queue o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider isnt straight but 00:44:050 (4) - is? Make either both straight or both slightly angled pls.
  2. 00:51:367 (1) - i would personally make this slider bend the other way to avoid overlap and for slightly better flow but up to you!
  3. 01:48:440 (4) - i think this would look cleaner if it had the same angle as 01:46:977 (3) -
thats all i need to put down for this diff - its pretty much perfect i think - just your slider angles are a tad off sometimes.

[Insane]
  1. 02:03:257 (6) - you can place this note better.
  2. 02:04:903 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this a perfect triangle? You are close
  3. 02:11:489 (4) - i really like this idea - but i think you need to move it a little closer as it seems forced.
  4. 03:26:123 - spinner?
Nice map and amazing hitsounds!
Gl!
Mikkuri
Hello, from my queue

[General]

  • Fine~
[Easy]
  • maybe the best Easy I have seen in 2016
[Normal]
  1. 01:11:123 (5) - change to normal-clap?
  2. 03:12:220 (5) - ^
[Hard]

  • Fine
[Insane]

  • Fine
[Sharlo's Rosa]
  1. 01:28:684 (5) - like this?
  2. 03:38:013 (2,3,4,5) - like this?
  3. 03:50:086 (4) - move this to x:440 y:136 ?
God tier map and song omg!!
Topic Starter
Narcissu
@Mikkuri : all fix

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider isnt straight but 00:44:050 (4) - is? Make either both straight or both slightly angled pls. …… want not use ctrl+v all aprt …… i like random 【
  2. 00:51:367 (1) - i would personally make this slider bend the other way to avoid overlap and for slightly better flow but up to you!……ok
  3. 01:48:440 (4) - i think this would look cleaner if it had the same angle as 01:46:977 (3) -
thats all i need to put down for this diff - its pretty much perfect i think - just your slider angles are a tad off sometimes.

[Insane]
  1. 02:03:257 (6) - you can place this note better.……don't mind it xd
  2. 02:04:903 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this a perfect triangle? You are close……perfect triangle look like dull , i want to random
  3. 02:11:489 (4) - i really like this idea - but i think you need to move it a little closer as it seems forced.
  4. 03:26:123 - spinner? …… no
Nice map and amazing hitsounds!
Gl!
Xinely

  • Easy
  1. 00:22:098 - would suggest finish too here because the cymbal
  2. 00:16:245 - 00:27:952 - ^
  3. 00:44:050 (4) - make this a bit not straight like 00:42:586 (3) - , keep same the level position node tail
  4. 01:55:757 (1) - i'd say drag the middle node to 404,92. the slider looks quite curve but not for making blanket. somehow looks a bit forced for me
  5. 02:03:806 (2) - i'd say make this slider curved more a bit, better to see and having better flow too i guess https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524270
  6. 02:08:196 (2) - same with above if you agree
  7. 02:40:757 - well SV change usually isnt recommended in easy, also imo 0,4x is already slooww, and i feel 0,25x slower and i would confuse to reduce my actual moving mouse speed from i got 2 mins 30 sec before face up this part


  • Normal
  1. 00:39:293 - add note for consistency with 00:33:440 (3) -
  2. 00:56:123 - should map this imo, the vocal is so strong
  3. 00:59:781 - ^
  4. 01:05:635 (4) - 84,320 has better (smoother flow)
  5. 01:19:903 (4) - i would say to not use 1/8 here, the vocal is ambiguous but almost in 01:20:269 - and that sound in 1/8 appears in 01:20:269 - too so would be weird if you map the 1/8 but not for 1/2, try other rhythm will be nicer
  6. 02:27:220 (2) - 32,108 will give better flow for me as it doesnt go too down while you doing the curve in downward too, if agree then 02:28:318 (3) - 76,328
  7. 02:30:147 - should map this, it's part of snare sound from 02:30:513 -
  8. 02:38:562 - 02:38:928 - 02:38:928 - map them, would be very empty if you have no notes for full measure
  9. 02:45:513 - if you map piano then you should map this too, i think you follow piano more here as you skip vocals like 02:46:245 - 02:41:854 - so would suggest to map it really
  10. 02:57:220 - ^
  11. 03:03:257 (4) - really suggest to map with easier rhythm or whatever, you map 1/6 when your Easy full of 1/1 , will be dangerous for sure
  12. 03:12:952 (1) - if you want to make a circle flow from 03:11:489 (3) - till this then i'd say ctrl+g, looks cute for me


  • Hard
  1. 00:23:928 (2) - since you did this pattern in begining, try ctrl+g to give a variation?
  2. 00:32:251 (4) - there is a music for this but quite ambigious and hard to hear in 100% speed. just like overmap in 100% speed imo
  3. 00:38:104 (5) - ^
  4. 01:03:074 (1) - stack in previous slider's tail instead, i'd read this for catch in 1/4 if use anti jump
  5. 01:07:464 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better flow
  6. 01:11:123 (3) - curve this like (4) for keep the flow
  7. 01:28:318 (2) - i'd say ctrl+g, you did many jumps for this diff, the spread somehow looks quite big for me
  8. 02:04:354 (2) - the jump is quite far imo
  9. 02:34:903 (1) - no 1/8 music following from this slider, yeah prefer make to 1/2 slider because the music sounds like that


  • Insane
  1. AR 8,3 or 8,5 please, AR 9 too fast really for slow bpm


  • Sharlo
  1. OD 8,5 would be nice for Insane+

good luck ~
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Xinely wrote:


  • Easy
  1. 00:22:098 - would suggest finish too here because the cymbal …… i think normal-whistle better
  2. 00:16:245 - 00:27:952 - ^
  3. 00:44:050 (4) - make this a bit not straight like 00:42:586 (3) - , keep same the level position node tail …… all parallel not my wish
  4. 01:55:757 (1) - i'd say drag the middle node to 404,92. the slider looks quite curve but not for making blanket. somehow looks a bit forced for me …… too nazi lol
  5. 02:03:806 (2) - i'd say make this slider curved more a bit, better to see and having better flow too i guess …… ↑↑↑ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524270
  6. 02:08:196 (2) - same with above if you agree
  7. 02:40:757 - well SV change usually isnt recommended in easy, also imo 0,4x is already slooww, and i feel 0,25x slower and i would confuse to reduce my actual moving mouse speed from i got 2 mins 30 sec before face up this part …… i don't think so ……


  • Normal
  1. 00:39:293 - add note for consistency with 00:33:440 (3) - …… e …… skip click here , 00:39:659 - more obviously
  2. 00:56:123 - should map this imo, the vocal is so strong
  3. 00:59:781 - ^
  4. 01:05:635 (4) - 84,320 has better (smoother flow)
  5. 01:19:903 (4) - i would say to not use 1/8 here, the vocal is ambiguous but almost in 01:20:269 - and that sound in 1/8 appears in 01:20:269 - too so would be weird if you map the 1/8 but not for 1/2, try other rhythm will be nicer …… player will follow voice , because it's obviously than drum
  6. 02:27:220 (2) - 32,108 will give better flow for me as it doesnt go too down while you doing the curve in downward too, if agree then 02:28:318 (3) - 76,328
  7. 02:30:147 - should map this, it's part of snare sound from 02:30:513 -
  8. 02:38:562 - 02:38:928 - 02:38:928 - map them, would be very empty if you have no notes for full measure
  9. 02:45:513 - if you map piano then you should map this too, i think you follow piano more here as you skip vocals like 02:46:245 - 02:41:854 - so would suggest to map it really
  10. 02:57:220 - ^
  11. 03:03:257 (4) - really suggest to map with easier rhythm or whatever, you map 1/6 when your Easy full of 1/1 , will be dangerous for sure …… no problem imo
  12. 03:12:952 (1) - if you want to make a circle flow from 03:11:489 (3) - till this then i'd say ctrl+g, looks cute for me


  • Hard
  1. 00:23:928 (2) - since you did this pattern in begining, try ctrl+g to give a variation? …… same direction is my wish ……
  2. 00:32:251 (4) - there is a music for this but quite ambigious and hard to hear in 100% speed. just like overmap in 100% speed imo …… no problem imo
  3. 00:38:104 (5) - ^
  4. 01:03:074 (1) - stack in previous slider's tail instead, i'd read this for catch in 1/4 if use anti jump …… follow the music , none will think it's 1/4
  5. 01:07:464 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better flow …… ok
  6. 01:11:123 (3) - curve this like (4) for keep the flow
  7. 01:28:318 (2) - i'd say ctrl+g, you did many jumps for this diff, the spread somehow looks quite big for me
  8. 02:04:354 (2) - the jump is quite far imo
  9. 02:34:903 (1) - no 1/8 music following from this slider, yeah prefer make to 1/2 slider because the music sounds like that …… a …… it's 1/3


  • Insane
  1. AR 8,3 or 8,5 please, AR 9 too fast really for slow bpm …… ar9 is best ar for new player

good luck ~
no reply = no change ……
Rincewind
Just returning the star I got from this map.
Good luck.
Sharlo
啊是不是要回摸了
Kibbleru
sharlo's diff is new im guessing
00:29:415 (1) - why bezier slider here xD
02:34:903 (1) - i think the 1/3 starts here so i would use one of these 02:35:635 (1) -

k ill recheck the rest later
Sharlo

Mikkuri wrote:

[Sharlo's Rosa]
  1. 01:28:684 (5) - like this? k
  2. 03:38:013 (2,3,4,5) - like this?
  3. 03:50:086 (4) - move this to x:440 y:136 ?

Xinely wrote:


  • Sharlo
  1. OD 8,5 would be nice for Insane+ k

Kibbleru wrote:

sharlo's diff is new im guessing
00:29:415 (1) - why bezier slider here xD
02:34:903 (1) - i think the 1/3 starts here so i would use one of these 02:35:635 (1) -

fixed all.
Topic Starter
Narcissu
wait my computer revived ... :?

updata
Kibbleru
do u have a source for metadata?

also 'Sharlo's Rosa' sounded cooler xd

i would also recommend making the combo colors consistent

are you going to just keep the hs volume for ur diff consistent throughout the entire map? owo
places like 00:27:952 - could use lower and kiais could be higher imo

why are all diffs 2.00 sv haha oh well its fine, u changed them through multipliers
Topic Starter
Narcissu
source ? i don't know xd, metadata by Mamayu (fuyuyu-) http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/ and nanaka, Chinese network can't do something 【【【

Translation software say “玫瑰 = Rosa” rip my english

i don't mind change combo colors, but maybe Sharlo don't want to, what colors your prefer ? in fact my colors is my skin

i think same volume is ok when i do the map, because different hitsound density for different part ……but if volume need't change, maybe SV need‘t change too ? i don't know, just changed. volume = (SV - 1)* 100% now except 02:38:013 -

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/171126 ← the map teach me use 1.0 SV lol, 2012 map 170BPM 4.1 star, 2014 map 164 BPM 4.4 star
Sharlo
还真是了解我= =
Kibbleru
any combo color is fine, just make it consistent


fk im so confused with metadata xd where does ' Another Flower ver.' come in lol cant seem to find it on that website u linked
gunna ask kwan maybe >>

IamKwaN wrote:

Probably this.

http://puu.sh/nIcSQ/06d9a64aea.png from http://shimotsukin.com/753/af2/
http://puu.sh/nIcZw/d588104f43.png from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtK5G9MGkZE

Need some time to check the romanisations. Will approach you again later.


still waiting on romanisations xD
can somebody confirm this?

SPOILER
17:43 Kibbleru: can u take a look at a romanization for me owo
17:43 -[Koinuri]: ok owo
17:43 Kibbleru: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/401324
17:43 Kibbleru: just wana know if its correct or not owo
17:48 -[Koinuri]: http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/crbanner500.jpg I think found a banner or something for that album
17:49 -[Koinuri]: Konpeitou is a Japanese word so I think it should be the same but "Retorochika" is probably a made up word that combines English words so I think it should be "retrotica" like this thing
17:49 Kibbleru: what does retrotica even mean lol ><
17:50 -[Koinuri]: lol Idk
17:50 -[Koinuri]: I think it's "Retro" + something with "~tica"
17:50 Kibbleru: i doubt thats an english word lol
17:51 Kibbleru: google doenst recognize it :( http://puu.sh/nLqap/255189acc3.png
17:51 -[Koinuri]: Yeah, that's why I think it's made up, like
17:51 *-[Koinuri] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/249435 Zips - Mushikui Psychedelism [Guard Up!]]
17:52 Kibbleru: psychedelism
17:52 -[Koinuri]: psychedelism
17:53 Kibbleru: man
17:53 Kibbleru: metadata ><
17:53 -[Koinuri]: rip
KSHR
Got a forum pm from Kibbleru


1. Title
I also wondered where "Another Flower ver." comes from, but websites and screenshots that KwaN provided look like the valid source for it.

2. Romanisation
I'm 100% sure the current romanized title is against the rule because レトロチカ is obviously the loan word. Therefore it should be Konpeitou Retrotica (according to the url ↓).


3. Tags
  1. ○ しちごさん。 × しちごさん
  2. 753. (http://eleol.net/753/)
  3. Is it really necessary to add M3-35..?
  4. I don't think MeltyRecord that Noah belongs to is necessary because it's unrelated to the song itself.
  5. It's the first time for me to see the mapper adding the vocalist's nickname (シモツキン) to Tags.. lol
  6. I have no idea how to read 幾丹弥吹


That's it from me. /me leaves rest to KwaN
Topic Starter
Narcissu

KSHR wrote:

It's the first time for me to see the mapper adding the vocalist's nickname (シモツキン) to Tags.. lol …… my english lv1 and my japanese lv0, i don't know it's nickname 233

I have no idea how to read 幾丹弥吹 …… i can read it use chinese :roll:
hope my translation software is not wrong ……
KSHR
read my post carefully. 753.
About the nickname in Tags, if I were you, I would remove it from there because I assume no one will search the map with it :p
Topic Starter
Narcissu
nani, the “.” not end for a sentence :?

removed …… but about me ……i DL map 40% by MP, 40% by singer, 20% by Modder req, never by tag lol
KSHR
AAAAAAA

Check the first line in "3. Tags" and the following website again!!
http://eleol.net/753/
Topic Starter
Narcissu
o i don't know what should i do, i can't read japanese except “イベント価格:2000円” , maybe i should add it in tag because someone just only remind the price ?

KSHR



しちごさん。
× しちごさん



The reason why I told you to add . is, because this artist group's name is しちごさん not しちごさん!!!!
So what you should do with Tags is, adding 。 after しちごさん in Tags.
Topic Starter
Narcissu
i forget save it

KSHR
Metadata approved by KSHR =w=b
Kibbleru
oh. thanks kshr

i approve now =w=b

gder diff has different combo colors from the rest but i guess thats fine since its gd
Topic Starter
Narcissu
thx metadata and bubble …… so many map bubble by kibb :?
Shurelia
Star because Shimotsuki Haruka.

Hit me up if you need mod!

already bubbled , hype
IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:

\o

Unicode Title: 金平糖レトロチカ - Another Flower ver. -
Romanised Title: Confetti Retrotica - Another Flower ver. -
Unicode Artist: 霜月はるか
Romanised Artist: Haruka Shimotsuki

References:
http://puu.sh/nIcSQ/06d9a64aea.png from http://shimotsukin.com/753/af2/
http://puu.sh/nIcZw/d588104f43.png from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtK5G9MGkZE
http://puu.sh/nIdcR/09c1ff0f50.jpg from http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/#link
http://puu.sh/nIdfV/dd7a20e7bc.jpg from ^
http://puu.sh/nOmfR/cc0dce0018.jpg from http://shimotsukin.com/project/melo/
http://puu.sh/nOmgf/a0ceaf570d.jpg from http://shimotsukin.com/
http://puu.sh/nOmgJ/5f6021c16e.png from ^

Good luck la o/
lol sorry that I am late every time sending PM. Anyone give a check? Senpai please <3
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