Rikakimekata wrote:

Mudah-mudahan beatmap nya di ranked

-Rafzel- wrote:

Numpang modding

[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]

-Sebaiknya ditambahin colours nya, hanya level ini yg nggak punya colours
-Hitsoundnya juga gak ada, sebaiknya juga ditambahin

[Normal]

Saran : kalau mau, ane bakal buatin level normal nya

[Hard]

00:08:333 - bagusnya ditambahin spinner
00:11:333 - ^
00:16:771 - tambahin circle disini atau slider, kalau slider, slidernya sampai 2/4 aja
00:23:896 (2) - sebaiknya pakai circle aja 2 buah
00:42:083 (6) - jangan keempit sama slider yang ke-5
00:48:271 - tambahin circle disini
00:48:646 - ^
00:50:333 - ^

[Insane]

kurangi slidernya dan perbanyak circlenya

00:08:333 - bagusnya ditambahin spinner
00:11:333 - ^

~Sekian~

-Rafzel- wrote:

Sep, nih level normal nya udah siap gan

- NORMAL LEVEL -

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Does - Know know know -tv size-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48271
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Know Know Know
TitleUnicode:Know Know Know
Artist:DOES
ArtistUnicode:DOES
Creator:MadaoX
Version:-Rafzel-'s Normal
Source:Gintama°
Tags:AlicePerlelicht Does Know know know Gintama 2015 2016 opening 04 17 21 Shogun Assasination Farewell Shinsengumi arc
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,0,"Does - Know know know -TV Size-.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
bg.jpg is 1366x1568, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[All .osu Files]

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [-Rafzel-'s Normal] : 0
- [AlicePerlelicht's Beginner] : 0
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [-Rafzel-'s Normal] : 0
- [AlicePerlelicht's Beginner] : 0
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1

[-Rafzel-'s Normal]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

Snapping
00:19:771 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

[Hard]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Insane]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

WazZzaA123 wrote:

Queue

Consider adding {TV Size}

[Insane]
From 00:14:146 - to 00:22:958 - I think that you should be mapping the triples that the guitar does ( JUST A SUGGESTION )
00:49:021 (1) - NC
01:00:458 (4,5) - These feels weird for me I dont know why but maybe try something else ? If not than just keep it like that it should be fine
01:25:021 (1) - NC (?)

[Hard]
00:07:396 (1) - NC
00:36:646 - Theres a big white tick here consider moving the 00:36:552 (5) - over there

[Rafzel Normal]
At the start maybe try something like this http://i.imgur.com/txQXDWE.png with the combo and see how it goes ?
00:08:333 (1) - Slider is too close to the next object 00:10:396 (1) - So it might be hard for newbies to play that
00:11:333 (1) - ^

[Easy]
Try this : Delete 00:11:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - , remove this 00:11:146 (4) - , 00:11:333 - Add spinner that ends here 00:13 Reference http://i.imgur.com/YGdUwkX.png
Instead of putting a slider 00:46:021 (2,1) - try to do a big slider art (?) just a thought

[Beginner]
Try to llower the ar by 1
Recheck your blankets


[AiMod]
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AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
bg.jpg is 1366x1568, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[All .osu Files]

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [-Rafzel-'s Normal] : 0
- [AlicePerlelicht's Beginner] : 0
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [-Rafzel-'s Normal] : 0
- [AlicePerlelicht's Beginner] : 0
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1

[-Rafzel-'s Normal]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

Snapping
00:19:771 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

[Hard]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Insane]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 646 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

DeltaLeeds wrote:

M4M ^^

General

SPOILER

1. Lihatlah AIMod (ctrl+shift+a)
   
2. Perhatiin semua judulnya, semua diff judulnya harus sama.
3. Backgroundnya disesuaiin yang disuruh di AIMod, 1366x768.
4. Cek DS juga di AIMod, benerin DSnya kalau tingkat kesulitannya dibawah insane...
5. 01:13:021: Matiin Kiai mode di sini. Kepanjangan kalo ga, dan ga cocok pake kiai selanjutnya.

Alice Perlelicht's Beginner

SPOILER

00:08:146 (5): NC, greget sih bikinin ini jadi 1, tapi mending NC setiap 8 tick putih biar konstan.
00:26:896 (4): NC
00:28:021 (1): NCnya dimatiin
00:29:896 (3): NC
00:43:771 (1): Matiin NC
00:44:896 (2): NC
00:50:896 (2): Mending sih dibikin slider sampai ke 00:51:271 jadi hapusin slider (3) biar NCnya konstan dan menurut saya cocok. Setelah itu tambahin note di 00:52:021 yang NC.
00:54:646 (4): Mending drpd slider reverse ini, bikin slider di 00:55:021 yg di NC sampai dengan 00:56:146.
01:01:021 (1,2,3,4): Ini nimpa"nya agak gmn gitu... Saya sarankan bagian ini pakainya note drpd slider, lebih cocok menurutku haha. Jadi lebih kaya gini la alurnya:

01:16:021 (3): NC
01:19:021 (3): NC
01:20:521 (1): Matiin NC
01:22:021 (3): NC
01:25:021 (5): NC

Easy

SPOILER

00:08:521 (1): Mendingan alurnya begini:

Normal jangan ada yang 1/4 seperti di alur tadi di (4).


00:28:021 (4): 1/4, emang cocok sih beat 1/4 di bagian ini tapi di normal diff ga disarankan.
Panjangin slider sebelumnya di (3) sampai sini saja dan hapus note ini biar jadi kaya gini:

00:31:771 (4): ^
00:37:021 (3): ^
00:43:021 (4): ^
Yaaa ngerti la, nggak usah aku kasih tau semuanya hehe.
00:46:396 (3): Bukan bagian dari mod, tapi, nice slider.

-Rafzel's- Normal

SPOILER

New combonya dibuat lebih konstan ya seperti yang saya sarankan di Beginner. Setiap 4/8 tick putih kalo bisa...
00:04:958: NC
00:23:521: ^
00:01:208 (1,1,1): Hmmm, mungkin NCnya bisa dimatiin, mending dipindahin ke kiri sedikit sampai nggak nimpa 00:02:146 (1).
00:02:146 (1): Overlap
00:08:333 (1): Spinnernya sampai 00:09:646 aja biar ada waktu jeda karena normal diff biasany butuh 2 tick putih untuk waktu jeda habis slider.
00:11:333 (1): Spinnernya sampai 00:12:646...
00:37:771 (5,1): Nimpa... Saya sarankan diperbaiki.
00:54:646 (6,7,1): Walaupun ada angkanya ini benar" bisa menjebak orang yang sudah mahir pun dalam normal. Mending dibuat menjadi mirip begini:

Ngakalin aja selanjut"nya, tapi mending ganti pola... xD
01:17:146 (3,4,5): Ada overlap di 3 dan 5, mending diperbaiki.

Sudah dlu ya, semoga bermanfaat mod ini. Maaf bhs Indo saya kaku!
Good luck mapnya! Semoga cepat dirank. ^^

MadaoX wrote:

Thanks gan , ntar ane cek, buat tugas dulu

DeltaLeeds wrote:

M4M ^^

General

SPOILER

1. Lihatlah AIMod (ctrl+shift+a)
   
2. Perhatiin semua judulnya, semua diff judulnya harus sama. done
3. Backgroundnya disesuaiin yang disuruh di AIMod, 1366x768. lagi nyari background yg bagus...
4. Cek DS juga di AIMod, benerin DSnya kalau tingkat kesulitannya dibawah insane... done
5. 01:13:021: Matiin Kiai mode di sini. Kepanjangan kalo ga, dan ga cocok pake kiai selanjutnya. done

Alice Perlelicht's Beginner

SPOILER

00:08:146 (5): NC, greget sih bikinin ini jadi 1, tapi mending NC setiap 8 tick putih biar konstan. khusus yg ini 3 notes per 1 NC
00:26:896 (4): NC done
00:28:021 (1): NCnya dimatiin done
00:29:896 (3): NC done
00:43:771 (1): Matiin NC done
00:44:896 (2): NC done
00:50:896 (2): Mending sih dibikin slider sampai ke 00:51:271 jadi hapusin slider (3) biar NCnya konstan dan menurut saya cocok. Setelah itu tambahin note di 00:52:021 yang NC. ngikutin sebagian
00:54:646 (4): Mending drpd slider reverse ini, bikin slider di 00:55:021 yg di NC sampai dengan 00:56:146. ngikutin sebagian
01:01:021 (1,2,3,4): Ini nimpa"nya agak gmn gitu... Saya sarankan bagian ini pakainya note drpd slider, lebih cocok menurutku haha. Jadi lebih kaya gini la alurnya:
ngikutin sebagian , karena menurut saya circle 4 kali itu gak cocok sama beginner
01:16:021 (3): NC done
01:19:021 (3): NC done
01:20:521 (1): Matiin NC done
01:22:021 (3): NC done
01:25:021 (5): NC masih ragu

Easy

SPOILER

00:08:521 (1): Mendingan alurnya begini:

Normal jangan ada yang 1/4 seperti di alur tadi di (4). diganti sama spinner


00:28:021 (4): 1/4, emang cocok sih beat 1/4 di bagian ini tapi di normal diff ga disarankan.
Panjangin slider sebelumnya di (3) sampai sini saja dan hapus note ini biar jadi kaya gini:
milih cara lain
00:31:771 (4): ^
00:37:021 (3): ^
00:43:021 (4): ^
Yaaa ngerti la, nggak usah aku kasih tau semuanya hehe.
00:46:396 (3): Bukan bagian dari mod, tapi, nice slider.

-Rafzel's- Normal

SPOILER

New combonya dibuat lebih konstan ya seperti yang saya sarankan di Beginner. Setiap 4/8 tick putih kalo bisa...
00:04:958: NC NC nya bukannya di nomor 5??
00:23:521: ^
00:01:208 (1,1,1): Hmmm, mungkin NCnya bisa dimatiin, mending dipindahin ke kiri sedikit sampai nggak nimpa 00:02:146 (1). done
00:02:146 (1): Overlap done
00:08:333 (1): Spinnernya sampai 00:09:646 aja biar ada waktu jeda karena normal diff biasany butuh 2 tick putih untuk waktu jeda habis slider. done
00:11:333 (1): Spinnernya sampai 00:12:646... done
00:37:771 (5,1): Nimpa... Saya sarankan diperbaiki.ragu
00:54:646 (6,7,1): Walaupun ada angkanya ini benar" bisa menjebak orang yang sudah mahir pun dalam normal. Mending dibuat menjadi mirip begini:

Ngakalin aja selanjut"nya, tapi mending ganti pola... xD
01:17:146 (3,4,5): Ada overlap di 3 dan 5, mending diperbaiki.

done

Sudah dlu ya, semoga bermanfaat mod ini. Maaf bhs Indo saya kaku!
Good luck mapnya! Semoga cepat dirank. ^^

1. Size of BG which mentioned in aimod

1. It's a little crowded tbh, it may look better if arranged clearer imo.
2. 00:40:396 (3,4) - make better blanket
3. 00:40:771 (4,1,2) - liner flow looks werid
4. 00:52:021 (1,2,3) - make better blanket
5. 00:58:021 (1,2) - avoid overlap
6. 00:59:146 (2,3) - blanket
7. 01:11:146 (2,1) - ^
8. 01:19:021 (1,2) - ^

1. you can blanket 00:15:271 (1,2) - and stack 00:15:271 (1,3) -
2. 00:33:646 (2,3) - ds and blanket here maybe
3. 00:42:271 (1,1) - avoid overlap

1. 00:00:646 (1,2) - ds
2. 00:02:146 (1,2) - blanket
3. 00:03:271 (4,1) - blanket
4. 00:07:208 miss a note here imo
5. 00:17:896 (3,4) - blanket or flow both can be good here but neither here
6. 00:29:896 (1,2) - blanket
7. 00:55:583 (4,5,1) - avoid overlap
8. 00:57:458 (4,1) - blanket here maybe
9. 01:01:958 (4,2) - avoid overlap maybe

1. 00:23:521 (1,2) - no stack maybe (compare to 00:29:896 (5) -
2. 00:36:646 (6,1) - better blanket
3. 00:51:646 (5) - ctrl g
4. 01:12:458 (8,1) - better blanket

1. 00:10:396 (1,2,3,4) - i think it's better to jump at downbeat (4)
2. 00:50:896 (2) - ctrl g
3. 01:01:021 (1) - fix shape to make tail down in order to flow better
4. 01:02:521 (6) - ^
5. 01:15:271 (4,5) - can blanket here
6. 01:18:271 (4,5,6,7) - jump at downbeat, im confused here

ceLy wrote:

M4M from your queue
[General]

1. Size of BG which mentioned in aimod

[Beginner]

1. It's a little crowded tbh, it may look better if arranged clearer imo.
2. 00:40:396 (3,4) - make better blanket
3. 00:40:771 (4,1,2) - liner flow looks werid
4. 00:52:021 (1,2,3) - make better blanket
5. 00:58:021 (1,2) - avoid overlap
6. 00:59:146 (2,3) - blanket
7. 01:11:146 (2,1) - ^
8. 01:19:021 (1,2) - ^

[Easy]

1. you can blanket 00:15:271 (1,2) - and stack 00:15:271 (1,3) -
2. 00:33:646 (2,3) - ds and blanket here maybe
3. 00:42:271 (1,1) - avoid overlap

[Normal]

1. 00:00:646 (1,2) - ds
2. 00:02:146 (1,2) - blanket
3. 00:03:271 (4,1) - blanket
4. 00:07:208 miss a note here imo
5. 00:17:896 (3,4) - blanket or flow both can be good here but neither here
6. 00:29:896 (1,2) - blanket
7. 00:55:583 (4,5,1) - avoid overlap
8. 00:57:458 (4,1) - blanket here maybe
9. 01:01:958 (4,2) - avoid overlap maybe

[Hard]

1. 00:23:521 (1,2) - no stack maybe (compare to 00:29:896 (5) -
2. 00:36:646 (6,1) - better blanket
3. 00:51:646 (5) - ctrl g
4. 01:12:458 (8,1) - better blanket

[Insane]

1. 00:10:396 (1,2,3,4) - i think it's better to jump at downbeat (4)
2. 00:50:896 (2) - ctrl g
3. 01:01:021 (1) - fix shape to make tail down in order to flow better
4. 01:02:521 (6) - ^
5. 01:15:271 (4,5) - can blanket here
6. 01:18:271 (4,5,6,7) - jump at downbeat, im confused here

GL~
My map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395781

• General

1. I recommend changing the resolution of your background images to 16:9.
2. You don't need the Artist and the Song title in the tags.

• -Rafzel-'s Normal

1. 00:52:047 - A new combo should start here, 00:51:672 (3) - the repeat sounds wrong imo
2. 00:54:672 (4) - same here, new combo should start at 00:55:047.
3. 00:57:484 (4,1) - fix blanket

• Hard

1. 00:01:422 (4) - I recommend a new combo here.
2. 00:36:672 (5,1) - fix blanket
3. 00:37:047 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:54:859 (7) - this should not repeat and the new combo should start on 00:55:047.
6. 01:02:172 (6) - I don't like the flow here, how about changing it like this or something similar to that
7. 01:12:484 (8,1) - fix blanket

• Insane

1. 00:01:422 (4) - NC here
2. 00:03:484 (7) - Alright, I feel like there should be 2 circles and a slider here sorta like this, so a new combo should start every big white bar instead of on the red bar.
3. 00:14:922 (3,4) - Make this similar to 00:14:172 (1,2), there is no need for a repeat; a new combo should start on 00:15:672.
4. 00:17:547 (2,3) - blanket?
5. 00:17:547 (2,4) - These overlaps look ugly imo
6. 00:18:672 (5) - NC
7. 00:31:609 (2,3) - how come the DS here is larger than the DS here 00:31:797 (3,4) - ?
8. 00:35:547 (1,2) - The distance from the slider end to the 2nd circle is almost as same as 00:36:109 (3,4), but you choose to put 00:36:578 (4) on a blue bar. Try putting that farther away from the slider end or try this rhythm instead.
9. 00:41:547 (1,2) - fix blanket
10. 00:44:547 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing equal.
11. 00:50:547 (1,2) - is this a blanket?
12. 01:00:484 (4,5) - These sliders don't fit in to the song

• Assassination
  is not done ;-; I'll try modding it when you are finished with the map

freebird42 wrote:

Hi

Beginner

00:15:646 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - try smth like this http://puu.sh/ntS8n/b7b6f602c7.jpg i tried a new thing the last slider
00:40:396 (1,2) - blanket acuurately Done
00:54:646 (3,1) - same done

easy

00:15:271 (1,2,1,2,1) - try smth like this http://puu.sh/ntThX/ceec76511c.jpg done
00:33:271 (1,2,1) - and here smth like this http://puu.sh/ntTup/72a2f985c9.jpg [color=#00FF0]done[/color]
00:46:396 (1) - dunno, i feel like this slider should start at 00:46:021 - and maybe end at 00:48:271 - refuse it
00:56:146 - i feel like here you should put note and after that 1/1 slider, cause its better fits the rhythm, and your figures after that feel a bit strange, please think about, because if you'll agree you'll probably have to remap whole part after this moment, but its just my opinion agree with it

-Rafzel-'s Normal

00:06:833 (1) - i suggest here a 1/4 reversal slider + note i think it's not suitable with normal diff
00:15:458 - maybe note? maybe you're right
00:15:646 (1,2,3) - how about 2 3/4 reversal sliders? agree
00:18:271 (4) - 1/2 i think done
00:18:646 - 3/4 reversal maybe? refuse it
00:28:208 - and 00:28:583 - note? done
00:30:083 (2) - strange sliders, maybe move it 1/2 to the right on time scale? done
00:51:646 - maybe just note here and here 00:52:021 - 1/1 slider? refuse it
00:55:021 - dont end figures where singer starts new word, thats not really good even if you dont map vocals hmmm.. i think it doesn't follow the singer
00:58:958 - , 01:04:208 - and many moore this little pauses fells strange and empty, better map it the other way 01:04:208 refuse it in this part
01:05:896 (1) - better end this slider here, cause you miss pretty strong beat

well i dont know, but the rhythm selection is strange, see what other modders will say, and make your decisions honestly, i feel doubt about it, because it's a normal level.

Hard

00:01:396 (4) - nc? hmmm... done
00:07:208 - triple here
00:10:208 - silence the end of spinner, cuz there is no sound ohh.. i forget about it
00:15:646 - feels like here should be note, as you did here 00:17:896 (3) - done
00:19:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe increase spacing? objects are too close imo
00:22:396 (4) - nc done
00:26:708 - how about 1/2 reversal here? refuse it
00:28:208 and 00:28:583 - note? done
00:29:521 (3) - changed to just a single circle done
00:30:458 (2,3,4) - overmapped done
00:31:583 - note done
00:32:146 - you are missing strong beat are you sure?
00:43:583 - note again? done
00:44:896 (2) - i think you can split it into 2 circles refuse it
00:47:146 - note, because strong beat and nc on it NC only
00:47:521 (3,5) - i think its better to unstack this, but stuck this 00:48:083 (5,1) - , maked it more readable imo done
01:12:833 and 01:12:927 - 2 circles? done

Insane

00:01:396 (4) - nc done
00:07:583 (6,7,8) - why dont make stream here, by adding 2 more notes? done
00:11:146 (4) - nc done
00:25:771 (2) - how about delete this note and put here rhis slider 00:26:052 (3) - and make it reversal? refuse it
00:30:271 (5) - hears more like 3/4 + 1/2 and note here 00:31:021 - done
00:36:552 (4) - nc + note here 00:36:646 - done
00:46:771 (1,2,3) - choose all three notes on time scale and press ctrl+g, i think its more fun to play, and the same thing with 00:47:521 (1,2) - agree with it
01:15:271 (4) - ctrl+g? agree with it
01:25:021 (9) - nc but it's already nc

good job

gl with set

ProEzreal wrote:

M4M

• General

1. I recommend changing the resolution of your background images to 16:9.
2. You don't need the Artist and the Song title in the tags.

• -Rafzel-'s Normal

1. 00:52:047 - A new combo should start here, 00:51:672 (3) - the repeat sounds wrong imo done
2. 00:54:672 (4) - same here, new combo should start at 00:55:047. done
3. 00:57:484 (4,1) - fix blanket done

• Hard

1. 00:01:422 (4) - I recommend a new combo here.
2. 00:36:672 (5,1) - fix blanket done
3. 00:37:047 (1,2) - ^ done
4. 00:43:234 (1,2) - ^ done
5. 00:54:859 (7) - this should not repeat and the new combo should start on 00:55:047. done
6. 01:02:172 (6) - I don't like the flow here, how about changing it like this or something similar to that i'll think it again
7. 01:12:484 (8,1) - fix blanket

• Insane

1. 00:01:422 (4) - NC here
2. 00:03:484 (7) - Alright, I feel like there should be 2 circles and a slider here sorta like this, so a new combo should start every big white bar instead of on the red bar.
3. 00:14:922 (3,4) - Make this similar to 00:14:172 (1,2), there is no need for a repeat; a new combo should start on 00:15:672.
4. 00:17:547 (2,3) - blanket?
5. 00:17:547 (2,4) - These overlaps look ugly imo
6. 00:18:672 (5) - NC
7. 00:31:609 (2,3) - how come the DS here is larger than the DS here 00:31:797 (3,4) - ?
8. 00:35:547 (1,2) - The distance from the slider end to the 2nd circle is almost as same as 00:36:109 (3,4), but you choose to put 00:36:578 (4) on a blue bar. Try putting that farther away from the slider end or try this rhythm instead.
9. 00:41:547 (1,2) - fix blanket
10. 00:44:547 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing equal.
11. 00:50:547 (1,2) - is this a blanket?
12. 01:00:484 (4,5) - These sliders don't fit in to the song

• Assassination
  is not done ;-; I'll try modding it when you are finished with the map

To be really honest, I don't think this is ready to get ranked at all. The combos and flow have to be fixed, spacing also. Try starting a new combo every large white bar which would be much better. Also work on the flow of the map. Good luck.

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

No Kudosu just checking

please the title song change to "KNOW KNOW KNOW"

ProEzreal wrote:

no kds? rip

1. Tick rate -1
2. 00:19:797 (1,1) - You should consider removing slider after spinners for take recovery times or remaking this part. well, this part is fine 00:11:547 (1,1) -
3. 00:28:047 (1) - remove new combo from here? I feel it's not necessary.
4. 00:34:047 (1) - ^
5. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head
6. 00:55:047 (1) - ^
7. 01:25:422 (1) - This is really hard for beginners, Please change to one spinner at last part

1. 00:15:297 (1) - I feel it's not necessary for this difficulty level, remove it?
2. 00:18:672 (1) - remove new combo from here
3. 00:19:797 (1,1) - Same as Beginner difficulty.
4. 00:35:547 (3) - add a new combo for new rhythm from here ?
5. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head
6. 01:25:422 (1) - Same as Beginner difficulty.

1. 00:01:422 (1) - remove new combo from here
2. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head
3. 01:01:047 (1) - ^
   Nice diff :3

1. HP Drain Rate +1 for hard difficulty.
2. 00:13:422 (1) - try to add a clap to the head
3. 00:46:047 (7) - add a new combo for new rhythm from here ?
4. 00:49:047 (3) - ^ same. and add a finish to the head
5. 00:59:922 (10,1) - Please use more distance, it's really hard for reading
6. 01:23:734 (1,2) - ^ same as above.

1. 00:02:172 (1) - add a finish to the head
2. 00:08:172 (1) - How about moving right this circle for flow like this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:984 (3) - Please use more spacing on here ? It would be better for playing.
4. 00:25:797 (4) - add a new combo for anti-jump? it prevents the player from misreading
5. 00:31:797 (4) - ^ Same.
6. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head
7. 00:55:047 (1) - ^ Same.

alacat wrote:

Hello~ m4m

[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]

1. Tick rate -1
2. 00:19:797 (1,1) - You should consider removing slider after spinners for take recovery times or remaking this part. well, this part is fine 00:11:547 (1,1) - done
3. 00:28:047 (1) - remove new combo from here? I feel it's not necessary. done , the NC will appear at 00:28:797
4. 00:34:047 (1) - ^ done
5. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head done
6. 00:55:047 (1) - ^ done
7. 01:25:422 (1) - This is really hard for beginners, Please change to one spinner at last part

mm.. maybe..

[Easy]

1. 00:15:297 (1) - I feel it's not necessary for this difficulty level, remove it? i think no
2. 00:18:672 (1) - remove new combo from here i think it should be NC here
3. 00:19:797 (1,1) - Same as Beginner difficulty. done
4. 00:35:547 (3) - add a new combo for new rhythm from here ? oops, i forgot to add NC here
5. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head done
6. 01:25:422 (1) - Same as Beginner difficulty done

[-Rafzel-'s Normal]

1. 00:01:422 (1) - remove new combo from here i think no
2. 00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head done
3. 01:01:047 (1) - ^ done
   Nice diff :3 thanks! :3

[Hard]

1. HP Drain Rate +1 for hard difficulty. i think it's for light insane
2. 00:13:422 (1) - try to add a clap to the head
3. 00:46:047 (7) - add a new combo for new rhythm from here ? done
4. 00:49:047 (3) - ^ same. and add a finish to the head done
5. 00:59:922 (10,1) - Please use more distance, it's really hard for reading
6. 01:23:734 (1,2) - ^ same as above.

[Light Insane]
[list]
[*]00:02:172 (1) - add a finish to the head done
[*]00:08:172 (1) - How about moving right this circle for flow like this done

SPOILER

[*]00:22:984 (3) - Please use more spacing on here ? It would be better for playing. done
[*]00:25:797 (4) - add a new combo for anti-jump? it prevents the player from misreading done
[*]00:31:797 (4) - ^ Same. done
[*]00:49:047 (1) - add a finish to the head done
[*]00:55:047 (1) - ^ Same. refuse

Good luck!　

Kaitjuh wrote:

From my queue~

Mod

AlicePerlelicht's Beginner

• 
  Improve blanket on All Done

1. 00:05:922 (2) - (make 00:05:172 (1) - blanket sliderend)
2. 00:15:672 (1) - (tilt sliderend slightly upwards)
3. 00:24:297 (1) - (make the slider blanket the next slider evenly)
4. 00:28:797 (1) - ^
5. 00:28:797 (1) - (could use some refinement)
6. 00:34:797 (1) - ^
7. 00:42:297 (2) - ^
8. 00:49:047 (1) - ^
9. 00:52:797 (2) - ^
10. 00:56:547 (3) - ^
11. 01:04:422 (2) - ^
12. 01:11:172 (2) - ^
13. 01:14:547 (2) - ^
14. 01:23:547 (2) - ^
15. 00:52:797 (2,3,1) - ^ + make the other sliders blanket distance the same as this
    Suggestion:
    

Easy

• 
  Improve Blanket: All Done

1. 00:02:547 (2) -
2. 00:15:672 (1) -
3. 00:17:922 (2) - Curve more
4. 00:43:797 (1) -
5. 00:56:922 (1) -
   
6. 00:42:297 (1) - Is quite close to 00:43:797 (1) - . Angle more upwards done

-Rafzel-'s Normal

• 
  Improve Blanket:

1. 00:07:797 (3) - Curve slightly more
2. 00:31:797 (1) - Adjust to blanket 00:30:297 (2) - better refuse this one
3. 01:03:297 (3) -
4. 01:07:609 (2,3) -
5. 01:08:547 (1) -
6. 01:13:984 (2) - make parallel to 01:14:547 (1) -

Hard

• 
  Improve Blanket: All done

1. 00:15:672 (1) - Curve slightly more
2. 00:16:422 (3) - Curve sliderend slightly downwards
3. 00:20:453 (4) -
4. 00:25:797 (4) - Curve slightly more
5. 00:37:609 (2) - Curve slightly less
6. 00:53:922 (3) - Curve slightly more
   
   
7. 00:05:172 (1) - Unstack with 00:04:984 (8) - . Maybe Stack with 00:05:359 (2) - since it has a strong beat, the transition from 00:04:984 (8) - to 00:05:172 (1) - should involve movement imo. I agree with it
8. 00:52:609 (4,5,6) - Space out evenly and don't let them touch. done
9. 00:57:672 (4,5) - are further apart from each other than 00:56:922 (2,3) -. Even this out. done
10. 00:59:547 (7,8,9) - out of place imo and the rest doesnt really make sense with the rhythm Okay, i'll change it
    Suggestion:
    
11. 01:03:109 (4,5,6) - these sliders are on a counter rhythm (idk what it called). This makes it really awkward
    Suggestion:
    the first circle starts on 01:02:547 btw done
12. You use a lot of sliders and circles that do not match the song at all. Consider remaking this part from 01:06:859 (6) to 01:09:859 (7), I could give you another suggestion but then it would almost be a GD lol. lol, maybe , i'll waiting for the other suggestion
13. 01:19:047 (1) - Don't let this touch the previous slider
14. 01:19:609 (4,5,6) - more counter rhythm sliders

Light Insane

I'll check it later

1. 00:14:078 (5) - a circle after that slider souldn't be there since it plays bad. My best solution is to place this before the repeating slider or make the whole thing a stream. done, i place the circle before the slider
2. 00:24:109 (3) - Counter rhythm again done
3. 00:32:734 (1,2) - ^ done
4. 00:43:047 (1) - Not a nice blanket. A blanket looks way better when the empty space between the sliders is evenly spaced. done
5. 00:49:609 (4,5,6) - Guess what More counter rhythm?
6. 00:52:609 (4) - Guess again Can't guess... Maybe Counter rhythm again?
7. 00:54:109 (4) - sorry, im gonna stop Okay XD

dont hate me

Good luck o/

1. 00:15:684 (1) - would extend the return here to follow the guitar, its a bit easier to play for beginners so you and place it like this
   
2. 00:46:434 (1) - needs more recovery time for a beginner diff (3-4 white ticks), would suggest to follow the vocals at 00:45:309 (2,1) - if you want to keep the spinner like this
   
3. 01:11:184 (2) - wouldn't skip the loud 2 beats here, would pick a 2/1 slider and 2 circles instead this also makes each KNOW KNOW clickable which is fun to play imo (suggest for placement maybe so you can remove all the notes after this to the right:
   
4. 00:36:309 (2) - blanket can be improved a bit, make the slider a little more
5. 00:28:809 (1) - you could add a whisle here for all diffs
6. diggin the blankets

1. 00:06:684 (1,3) - why not change these from places so the (3) is clickable since its like the dropoff
2. 00:45:309 (1) - bring the tail down a bit for a double blanket, it'll look a bit nicer like this
   
   *00:56:934 (1) - divide this one in 2/1 return + circle

1. 00:18:684 (1,2,3) - check DS
2. 01:15:871 (3,4) - blanket these instead, the overlap looks bad here
3. 00:48:309 (5) - you could maybe change this to 2 stacked circles at x212/y184 so both the YES and I are clickable here and its a bit of hold like in the song

1. 00:47:840 (3,4) - would change these into a slider instead, it'll give 00:48:309 (1,2) - more impact because now it seems like 00:48:121 (4,1) would have the same sound as 00:47:371 (1,2) -
2. 00:48:309 (1,2) - Would stack this to create a hold like in the song
3. 01:09:871 (7,1) - switch these around and make it into something like you did with 01:04:059 (1,2,3) -
4. 01:04:996 (5,6) - unstack this, different sound so some spacing would be better it's also the only time you don't use back-and-forth for this pattern
   

1. 00:04:621 (5,6,1,2,3) - select, rotate by -15, place at x332/y172 it'll make 00:05:559 (3,4,5) - flow better and 00:04:246 (4,5) - gets a better blanket
2. 00:48:309 (1,2) - same as other diffs, you can put the stack in the middle of the triangle patterns
3. 01:00:871 (4) - control g + control h so you continue the flow from 01:00:309 (1,2,3) -
4. 01:23:371 (6,1) - unstack these, really needs some spacing for the difference in sound I'd put 6 near x472/y236 flows alright imo
5. 01:26:184 (1,2,3) - the drum is actually a 1/6 snap here so I'd go with this instead
   

Wishkey wrote:

Heya from my Q

Beginner

1. 00:15:684 (1) - would extend the return here to follow the guitar, its a bit easier to play for beginners so you and place it like this done
   
2. 00:46:434 (1) - needs more recovery time for a beginner diff (3-4 white ticks), would suggest to follow the vocals at 00:45:309 (2,1) - if you want to keep the spinner like this i change it into slider
   
3. 01:11:184 (2) - wouldn't skip the loud 2 beats here, would pick a 2/1 slider and 2 circles instead this also makes each KNOW KNOW clickable which is fun to play imo (suggest for placement maybe so you can remove all the notes after this to the right: done
   
4. 00:36:309 (2) - blanket can be improved a bit, make the slider a little more done
5. 00:28:809 (1) - you could add a whisle here for all diffs
6. diggin the blankets

Easy

1. 00:06:684 (1,3) - why not change these from places so the (3) is clickable since its like the dropoff done
2. 00:45:309 (1) - bring the tail down a bit for a double blanket, it'll look a bit nicer like this done
   
   *00:56:934 (1) - divide this one in 2/1 return + circle done

Normal

1. 00:18:684 (1,2,3) - check DS done
2. 01:15:871 (3,4) - blanket these instead, the overlap looks bad here done
3. 00:48:309 (5) - you could maybe change this to 2 stacked circles at x212/y184 so both the YES and I are clickable here and its a bit of hold like in the song done

Hard

1. 00:47:840 (3,4) - would change these into a slider instead, it'll give 00:48:309 (1,2) - more impact because now it seems like 00:48:121 (4,1) would have the same sound as 00:47:371 (1,2) - hmm... i'll wait for the other suggestion
2. 00:48:309 (1,2) - Would stack this to create a hold like in the song i'll wait for the other suggestion
3. 01:09:871 (7,1) - switch these around and make it into something like you did with 01:04:059 (1,2,3) - done
4. 01:04:996 (5,6) - unstack this, different sound so some spacing would be better it's also the only time you don't use back-and-forth for this pattern done
   

Insane

1. 00:04:621 (5,6,1,2,3) - select, rotate by -15, place at x332/y172 it'll make 00:05:559 (3,4,5) - flow better and 00:04:246 (4,5) - gets a better blanket done
2. 00:48:309 (1,2) - same as other diffs, you can put the stack in the middle of the triangle patterns done
3. 01:00:871 (4) - control g + control h so you continue the flow from 01:00:309 (1,2,3) - agree with ctrl + g
4. 01:23:371 (6,1) - unstack these, really needs some spacing for the difference in sound I'd put 6 near x472/y236 flows alright imo done
5. 01:26:184 (1,2,3) - the drum is actually a 1/6 snap here so I'd go with this instead thanks! ^^
   

really cool mapset and song hope I'll see it ranked soon

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! just saw a small mistake in normal with the coordinates of 00:48:309 (1,2) : (2) should be placed at X220/Y284 and then just stack (1) on it otherwise you got some DS problems here (srry selected the 1st note instead of the 2nd the coordinates)

- Frontier - wrote:

[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]
Too long diff name. Maybe "Alice's Beginner" is better.

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

GD finished
link : http://puu.sh/nIDG6/0aafe27e8f.rar

- idk if 4.68 can named an extra diff XD, since 160 bpm is really not easy to map over 5 ★ lol, if cant then just named it insane
- hs copy from insane diff
- PM me if got any question

- Frontier - wrote:

hi from ur request :v
[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]
Too long diff name. Maybe "Alice's Beginner" is better. done
00:03:684 (1) - NC
00:05:184 (5) - ^
00:06:684 (7) - ^
00:08:184 (1) - ^
00:17:184 (1) - ^
00:18:684 (1) - ^
00:26:934 (1) - ^
00:36:309 (2) - not blanket move to x 100 y 76 done
00:37:434 (1) - NC
00:38:934 (1) - ^
00:40:434 (7) - ^
00:43:434 (1) - ^
00:44:934 (1) - ^
00:49:059 (1) - not blanket ,move first point to x 192 y 348 done

picture

00:52:059 (4) - NC
00:58:059 (1) - not blanket done
01:00:309 (1) - NC
01:04:059 (5) - ^
01:10:434 (4) - ^
01:16:059 (3) - ^
01:22:059 (1) - ^

Too many NC

[Easy]
00:03:684 (3) - NC
00:05:934 (2) - not blanket, move to x 72 y 188 done
00:06:684 (3) - ^
00:15:309 (1) - delete cuz unranked done
00:25:809 (1,2) - 1/2 unranked? wait for other suggestion
00:27:309 (1,2) - ^
00:28:809 (1,2) - ^
00:31:809 (1,2) - ^
00:33:309 (1,2) - ^
00:36:309 (2,3) - ^
00:37:809 (1,2) - ^
00:39:309 (1,2) - ^
00:42:309 (1,2) - ^
00:43:809 (1,2) - ^
00:45:309 (1,2) - ^
00:46:434 (1) - This slider looks wierd i'll change it
00:50:559 (1) - NC
00:53:559 (1) - ^
01:02:934 (1) - ^
01:05:559 (1) - ^
01:08:559 (1) - ^
01:11:934 (1) - ^
01:14:559 (1) - ^
01:17:559 (1) - ^
01:20:559 (3) - ^
01:23:559 (1) - ^

Too many NC again?? ;w;

[-Rafzel-'s Normal]
00:01:434 (1) - NC
00:20:934 (1) - ^
00:22:434 (1) - ^
00:46:059 (3) - ^
00:50:559 (5) - ^
01:09:684 (4) - not parallel to 01:09:309 (3)
01:26:746 (1) - no need to make spinner here

Too hard for newbie. This isn't normal diff. It's hard diff. I already talk to him, and he said ,he will change it into advanced

[Hard]
00:16:434 (3) - not blanket done
00:20:934 (5) - Ctrl+G and NC maybe no
01:23:746 (1) - too near done
01:26:746 (1) - no need to make spinner here

Yeah.. Too many streams. Too hard.

[Insane]
00:07:902 (8) - delete done
00:17:559 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - players may confused about these notes yes i know, but i think is alright for Insane diff, i'll wait for other suggestion
00:19:059 (2) - Ctrl+G umm.. no
01:26:309 (1,2) - delete it .-. why?

No comment.

[Overall]
That's good map. But too many of NC.
Good luck

- Frontier - wrote:

[NiNo's Assassination]
00:00:965 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:18:965 (2) - ^
00:21:684 (1,1) - Why speed change here???? NC plz
00:35:465 - add note here. if don't , people may confud and miss here. fixed
00:40:809 (4,5,6,7,8) - move away plz
01:14:840 (2) - Ctrl+G
No comment again .-.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Edit :

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

GD finished
link : http://puu.sh/nIDG6/0aafe27e8f.rar

- idk if 4.68 can named an extra diff XD, since 160 bpm is really not easy to map over 5 ★ lol, if cant then just named it insane
- hs copy from insane diff
- PM me if got any question

I guess it's totally okay since it's harder than Insane so it could be named as Extra
You used custom name btw so who knows if it's mean to be Insane or Extra xD
This tho https://osu.ppy.sh/b/285708

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, mod from my modding Q

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

Note : I removed the custom skin, sorry

[General]

1. Personally I don't think the kiai here 00:02:184 is necessary since it's more like intro than chorus, but well.... hmm okay, i'll change it
2. Song setup -> design, uncheck the "Widescreen Support", it's only used if you have storyboard done
3. For background, I suggest to use same (or at least similar) background size which would be best with 1366x768 (16:9, widescreen ratio) or 1024x768 (4:3)
4. The rest are fine I guess

[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]

1. Some of your blankets are off so try to take a look at them again, I won't mention blanket mod since it would be too nazi
2. BTW, I realized that you NC-ed every big white tick. It's good and fit well and stuff, but actually for easier diff like this one, I suggest to just NC every two big white ticks so that the combo wouldn't be too short. Usually the sound is bigger at the 1st and 3rd tick too so it would fit even more. But if you decide to do it, be careful to keep NC-ing on every 1st and 3rd big white tick and not on 2nd and 4th one since the sound would be weaker there. For example, remove NC here 00:03:684 (1) - 00:06:684 (1) - 00:28:809 (1) - and so on
3. 00:03:684 (1,2) - I think it'll fit more if you ctrl+g these since the reverse slider would perfectly cover the guitar sound. done
4. 00:06:684 (1,3) - Well, I don't recommend stack like this on easier diffs since it might confuse or surprise the new player. I'd rather have it unstacked like this http://puu.sh/nKLCT/6efd18b09a.jpg or anyway else you like. done
5. 00:45:309 (2,1) - Uhh, but why? Remove (2)'s reverse, move (1) 1 tick forward so it would start at big white tick since it's where the long vocal started. Adjust the length so it would still end at where it ended now. http://puu.sh/nKLLL/021fcbca89.jpg <- a must do mod
6. 00:49:059 (1,1) - Umm, overlap, a pretty bad one .-. I would prefer something like this http://puu.sh/nKLOx/87dc3f82a3.jpg about the next notes DS tho... well I don't know :/ Maybe like this looks good http://puu.sh/nKLSl/ae8e94ccf0.jpg adjust the next notes afterwards http://puu.sh/nKLTj/52f1b78682.jpg DS (2) then and you might need to change (3)'s shape a bit to fit http://puu.sh/nKLUQ/3bbd842810.jpg should be good enough after that. So you might have to change this xD
7. 00:59:184 (2) - This don't really fit imo :/ Since there's a big sound at big white tick, you might need to start the slider there instead like http://puu.sh/nKLZs/7fd3cc2bf2.jpg or maybe, using 2/1 single slider instead of 1/1 reverse slider would fit as well.
8. 01:04:059 (1,2) - Uhh, ctrl+g these, it would fit much more, I mean really really much more. Just like what you did here 01:07:059 (1) - fit very well so you don't need to use different pattern that don't really fit.
9. 01:09:684 (3,1) - I would prefer if you start a slider at big white tick instead of ending a slider there since it would get less emphasized and make the pattern feels weird, so for this whole pattern 01:09:684 (3,1,2,3,4) - you can try it like this http://puu.sh/nKM71/a129200917.jpg or if you don't want too much circle at 01:11:934 you can use 1/1 reverse slider instead http://puu.sh/nKM8Q/0bf1879621.jpg it'll fit well too.
10. 01:14:559 (2) - Umm, kinda look weird imo. Maybe you can longer the part after the red anchor a bit like http://puu.sh/nKMaG/8d1480f5da.jpg so it won't look too weird.
11. 01:23:559 (2) - I don't recommend complicated slider shape like this in beginner but well.... Or maybe you can make it looks less complicated like http://puu.sh/nKMdv/ab433af591.jpg it'll be much better.
12. 01:25:434 (1) - umm, the sound ends like here 01:26:559 so extending the spinner more than that don't really make sense.... Ending it there would be too short too I think so maybe you could just use long slider http://puu.sh/nKMhw/a1b4b2df00.jpg it fit better imo. This might apply for all diffs. there is a cymbal's sound until 01:28:434, check it with headset

[Easy]

1. Same suggestion about NC-ing as Beginner
2. Same suggestion about blanket too
3. 00:06:684 (1,2,3) - Try ctrl+g-ing these, much more fit imo. I change it with different way
4. 00:11:371 (1) - I think you better start this at white tick since this is Easy. done
5. 00:15:309 (1) - 4 beats spinner gap rule, this note violate it. Furthermore, I think it's kinda unnecessary so you better just delete it. done
6. 00:25:809 (1) - I honestly think this is unnecessary for Easy diff, would be better if you just use simple 1/1 slider, but since you use it all over again, you might not want to change it. change it...
7. 00:34:059 (2) - This is very unfitting imo .-. I mean there's a big sound that got ignored here 00:34:809 and the reverse just don't hit anything.... I highly suggest to change it to something like this http://puu.sh/nKMV0/e3d0c78dfc.jpg or something else with the same count. done
8. 00:41:184 (2) - Reverse at big white tick = nope. I highly suggest to change it to something like this http://puu.sh/nKMYW/8572db16ee.jpg you might want to NC at 00:41:559 (3) - afterwards tho. done
9. 00:46:059 (2) - Remove this and then move this 00:46:434 (1) - to start at big white tick. Adjust the length afterwards to let it end at the same place as the current. Same reason as beginner ^ And somehow the shape looks kinda... random xD Maybe you could try something like http://puu.sh/nKNd9/768f1f0146.jpg well.... not that good either but... *sigh* I tried ;-; note : I place it at random place so it's easier to look, you'll have to DS it in reality. done , i make a different shape t avoid overlap
10. 00:56:934 (1) - Another random reverse slider .-. If you want to keep the 2/1 reverse slider, you might have to change the rhythm a bit to make it more fitting. For example, do it like this http://puu.sh/nKNkx/1c014de0d5.jpg it's much more fitting that way. yeah, it's a random slider ._. , i change it with different way
11. 01:25:434 (1) - same suggestion as beginner^ same as beginner

[-Rafzel-'s Normal]

1. Wow, kinda looks like Hard with that much number of notes at red tick o-o this might cause kinda big diff jump to Easy :/
2. 00:31:434 (4,2) - I don't recommend this for Normal, would be better if you just separate them
3. 01:09:309 (3,4) - I'd rather have them parallel
4. 01:26:746 (1) - Unnecessary imo, there's no really sound there, just delete it.
5. I have to say, this looks more like Advanced than Normal.... You might have to reduce the number of notes at red tick to make it a proper Normal. This make too much jump from Easy. Or to be save, name this Advanced, make it a little harder (optional) and make another proper Normal with like 2.0 stars or something. i alredy talk to him , and he agree with that, he'll change it soon

[Hard]

1. 00:00:684 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to hit properly, more fitting for Insane and above. Use 3/4 reverse slider or this kind of slider http://puu.sh/nKNIj/cfe54a0b17.jpg would be good too. done
2. 00:14:840 won't you want a note here to map the guitar sound?
3. 00:19:434 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1/4 pattern, polarity problem everywhere, use a mix of 3/4 reverse slider pattern, the slider pattern that I suggest above ^ and some kind like this http://puu.sh/nKNNm/5907b20923.jpg to avoid polarity problems and keep the boredom away.
4. 00:48:121 (4,1) - Maybe unstack them because of the totally different sound they make? .-. unlike this one 00:47:371 (1,2) - with similar sound, stacking those with different sound seems kinda weird. okay
5. 01:16:996 (5,1,2,3) - stack
6. 01:23:746 (1,2,3,4) - why are they so close together... move them apart. okay
7. Try to reduce the number of slider that start at red tick because most of them are unfitting. Like this part 01:19:621 (4,5,6) - where the vocal is clearly at white tick so starting a slider at red tick would make the vocal land at slider tail and make it weird to play. Furthermore, it make the bigger sound at white tick (than at red tick) got less emphasized than how it should be.

Well, I'll end this here I guess...
Pretty good, just need some improvement in rhythm and placing
Good luck~^^

- Frontier - wrote:

[AlicePerlelicht's Beginner]
Too long diff name. Maybe "Alice's Beginner" is better.

^^^

Edit :

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

GD finished
link : http://puu.sh/nIDG6/0aafe27e8f.rar

- idk if 4.68 can named an extra diff XD, since 160 bpm is really not easy to map over 5 ★ lol, if cant then just named it insane
- hs copy from insane diff
- PM me if got any question

I guess it's totally okay since it's harder than Insane so it could be named as Extra
You used custom name btw so who knows if it's mean to be Insane or Extra xD
This tho https://osu.ppy.sh/b/285708

the mod didn't explain those changes with real problems....
so i wont do them sorry :\
still thanks for the mod tho
http://puu.sh/nKSIM/54da35b410.rar

EDIT:@MadaoX let just fix my diff name to NiNo's Extra since wat hanyuu_nanodesu said

-Rafzel- wrote:

Updated

Advanced

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