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Clonepa - Orpheus

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Cryptic
551 posts
Joined December 2013
Cryptic
From #modreqs

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:115 (1) - Move the spinner onto the blue tick as thats where the sounds start, they just are at a lower volume. Take the hitsound off of the spinner end as well.
  2. 00:31:958 (1) - Why did you stop mapping the drums here? I don't get that choice.
  3. 00:36:072 (1) - Why are your hitsounds 5%? Thats absolutely horrible for players.
  4. 00:48:929 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - These both sound like 1/16th or 1/8th streams to me
  5. 00:57:158 (2,1,2) - You stop following the drums at really weird times, it doesn't really play right to me.
  6. Huge tip for your sliders: Take a circle and put it in the middle of where you want the slider to curve around. Then, use that circles approach-circle to mold your slider. Boom! Perfect circular sliders!
  7. 01:55:958 (1) - I don't like that you don't follow the drums again. I don't really like the drum > string/synth alternation you do throughout the song. For this melody you should make a decision on whether or not you'll put in the bass throughout the entire song or just leave out the bass for this part. Obviously this is just my opinion, a BN would have better advice regarding this.
  8. 02:23:558 (1,2) - Theres some fast 1/16ths or something again here that you're leaving out
  9. 02:31:444 (2) - Move this on to the blue tick? Its following the trumpet right? Also, this one needs some TLC its a bit ugly.
  10. 02:39:587 (1) - In general, and this spinner is fine btw, I don't know if I agree with the slider art ending. I think the song should have ended on the head of this slider 02:28:529 (1) - rather than drawing it out so much farther. Because the end is just boring.
[]
Good luck!
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

CrypticMech wrote:

From #modreqs

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:115 (1) - Move the spinner onto the blue tick as thats where the sounds start, they just are at a lower volume. Take the hitsound off of the spinner end as well. Fixed
  2. 00:31:958 (1) - Why did you stop mapping the drums here? I don't get that choice. It's good to not map always the same instrument I think or it'll be boring quickly
  3. 00:36:072 (1) - Why are your hitsounds 5%? Thats absolutely horrible for players. Oh damn, totally forgot to put another timing thing lol thanks!
  4. 00:48:929 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - These both sound like 1/16th or 1/8th streams to me Fixed
  5. 00:57:158 (2,1,2) - You stop following the drums at really weird times, it doesn't really play right to me. Fixed
  6. Huge tip for your sliders: Take a circle and put it in the middle of where you want the slider to curve around. Then, use that circles approach-circle to mold your slider. Boom! Perfect circular sliders!
  7. 01:55:958 (1) - I don't like that you don't follow the drums again. I don't really like the drum > string/synth alternation you do throughout the song. For this melody you should make a decision on whether or not you'll put in the bass throughout the entire song or just leave out the bass for this part. Obviously this is just my opinion, a BN would have better advice regarding this. I like the way it is now, I'll see later with a BN or something
  8. 02:23:558 (1,2) - Theres some fast 1/16ths or something again here that you're leaving out Seems fine to me, I don't want the map to be full of kicksliders ;_;
  9. 02:31:444 (2) - Move this on to the blue tick? Its following the trumpet right? Also, this one needs some TLC its a bit ugly. Yea this one is kinda ugly, I'll try to fix it later
  10. 02:39:587 (1) - In general, and this spinner is fine btw, I don't know if I agree with the slider art ending. I think the song should have ended on the head of this slider 02:28:529 (1) - rather than drawing it out so much farther. Because the end is just boring. The end may be boring but it needs to be mapped, look at every map with "boring" slider art
[]
Good luck!
Thanks! :D
Warpyc
406 posts
Joined August 2013
Warpyc
Hi!


  • Insane
  1. 00:01:786 - You didnt map intro :c you could have done some cool sliders but no big deal
  2. 00:26:472 (1,2,3) - Copy this and paste here 00:26:987 (5,6,7) -
  3. 01:37:101 (1,2,3) - Curve triipple to flow better into (4)
  4. 01:54:929 - No note? There is a strong breat here I would defenitely map this
  5. 01:55:272 - ^
  6. 01:55:444 - ^
  7. 02:18:587 (1) - Slider is too curved why dont you blanket with 02:19:101 (4) -
  8. 02:19:101 (4) - I dont like how this slider is overlapped by 02:18:587 (1) - Looks pretty bad unlike the rest of the map, I'd recommend to move it elsewhere
  9. 02:31:358 (2) - This is not an atractive slider at all...
  10. 02:34:015 (3) - why dont you map the sounds inside the slider like you did here 02:36:929 (1,2,3,4) - ?

    Weegle's Normal
  11. This diff is completely unrankable due to not using ds which is a requirement for normal difficulties, try remapping using anywhere from 0.7-1 in distance snap!

    Shmik's Easy
  12. Looks clean but remove all unused inherited timing points (the green ones)
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Warpyc wrote:

Hi!

[notice]

  • Insane
  1. 00:01:786 - You didnt map intro :c you could have done some cool sliders but no big deal Yea I think it already has enough long slider parts, I don't want to make a too "boring" map lol
  2. 00:26:472 (1,2,3) - Copy this and paste here 00:26:987 (5,6,7) - Fixed
  3. 01:37:101 (1,2,3) - Curve triipple to flow better into (4) Fixed
  4. 01:54:929 - No note? There is a strong breat here I would defenitely map this Fixed
  5. 01:55:272 - ^ ^
  6. 01:55:444 - ^ ^
  7. 02:18:587 (1) - Slider is too curved why dont you blanket with 02:19:101 (4) - Fixed
  8. 02:19:101 (4) - I dont like how this slider is overlapped by 02:18:587 (1) - Looks pretty bad unlike the rest of the map, I'd recommend to move it elsewhere Fixed
  9. 02:31:358 (2) - This is not an atractive slider at all... Yeah ikr, I'll try to fix it because right now it looks really meh lmao
  10. 02:34:015 (3) - why dont you map the sounds inside the slider like you did here 02:36:929 (1,2,3,4) - ? I already did it before but it was really awkward to play so I made some direction changes in one long slider instead
Thank you! :D
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
VERY LITTLE UPDATE
wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
mod
Ой фсе я тебе помогу нази модом хД
Shmiklak - убери нафиг вайдскрин
00:20:987 (1) - ой лол ну все, должно быть 4 белых тика, че ты, я не узнаю тебя
00:26:472 (1,1) - Его можно стакануть но ты даже не пытался
00:43:958 (4,1) - Пофиксь стак (порнография)
01:06:244 (1,2) - ДАВАЙ БЛАНКЕТ!!!!!!!!!!!!
02:12:758 (2,3) - ПОПРАВЬ БЛАНКЕТ
все
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak

wajinshu wrote:

mod
Ой фсе я тебе помогу нази модом хД
Shmiklak - убери нафиг вайдскрин ладно
00:20:987 (1) - ой лол ну все, должно быть 4 белых тика, че ты, я не узнаю тебя говорю же давно уже это было
00:26:472 (1,1) - Его можно стакануть но ты даже не пытался дс не позволяет. Да и не нужно это
00:43:958 (4,1) - Пофиксь стак (порнография) он и так ровный .-.
01:06:244 (1,2) - ДАВАЙ БЛАНКЕТ!!!!!!!!!!!! ну ок
02:12:758 (2,3) - ПОПРАВЬ БЛАНКЕТ фиксед
все
Моя сестренка мод сделала :3

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
xDarxen
313 posts
Joined July 2014
xDarxen
hey hey

[General]
  1. The fact that both Normal and Easy diffs have OD 5 and HP 5 is wierd, since Easy is supposed to be easier. I suggest you decrease them on Easy. Also the CS goes from 2 to 4, which is a big gap for noobies.
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:472 (1,2) - This is way too hard for new players to read, because you combine two advanced things: an overlap and a reverse slider.
    The sound is the same with 00:23:729 (1,2) - but it is mapped differently, so why not use the same pattern again?
  2. 00:30:929 (2) - This will flow better if you make it vertical like this:

    Reference
  3. 01:14:472 (1,2) - Same as above. Here you can use this rhythm:

    Reference
  4. 01:37:787 (3) - This feels wierd because the sound ends on the red tick but this is extended till the downbeat.
  5. The outro is mapped in all the other diffs. Consider adding atleast a spinner.
[Normal]
  1. Check the distance snap. Apparently, there are some spacing issues.
  2. 00:24:072 (2) - Rotate a little to the right for better flow.
  3. 01:11:558 (7) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm:

    Reference
  4. 01:35:730 (4,7) - You can avoid this overlap, because it makes it ugly.
[Hard]
  1. Every other diff has a spinner in the beginning, so maybe add one?
  2. 00:38:815 (1) - This is nearly touching the stream and looks unattractive. Try stacking the tail of the slider to 00:37:787 (2)

    Reference

    If you do that, then you have to adjast the spacing after. You don't have to follow the DS so precisely on Hard diffs afterall. You can always add some jumps.
  3. 01:11:729 (1) - You can move this to the middle of 01:11:215 (4) to create a blanket.
  4. 01:12:929 (4) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm:

    Reference
  5. 02:28:358 - Add a break.
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:072 (1) - Why does it start on the blue tick? Both in Easy and Normal it starts on the downbeat.
  2. 00:25:701 - The gap between reverses feels wierd. Extend 00:25:444 (7) for one tick.
  3. 00:37:787 (4,1) - The slider starts on the blue tick an it feels unnatural. Move 00:37:872 (1) on the red tick and add a circle on its place to play like a triple. Nice.
  4. 00:43:529 (10) - Same^ Those kind of sliders should NEVER start on blue ticks. Move it on the downbeat and add a circle on its place. (Readjust the spacing if you do)
  5. 02:11:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a little to the left for better flow and to avoid touching 02:10:529 (5)
  6. 02:21:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack to 02:20:644 (4)?
Oki dat's it. Good luck :D
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

xDarxen wrote:

hey hey

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:072 (1) - Why does it start on the blue tick? Both in Easy and Normal it starts on the downbeat. Fixed, lol this spinner gets a lot of complains
  2. 00:25:701 - The gap between reverses feels wierd. Extend 00:25:444 (7) for one tick. Sorry but there is no sound where you want me to extend the tick, I don't want to overmap ;_;
  3. 00:37:787 (4,1) - The slider starts on the blue tick an it feels unnatural. Move 00:37:872 (1) on the red tick and add a circle on its place to play like a triple. Nice. Fixed
  4. 00:43:529 (10) - Same^ Those kind of sliders should NEVER start on blue ticks. Move it on the downbeat and add a circle on its place. (Readjust the spacing if you do) Fixed
  5. 02:11:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a little to the left for better flow and to avoid touching 02:10:529 (5) Fixed
  6. 02:21:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack to 02:20:644 (4)? Fixed
Oki dat's it. Good luck :D
Thanks! :D
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

xDarxen wrote:

hey hey

[Normal]
  1. Check the distance snap. Apparently, there are some spacing issues.
  2. 00:24:072 (2) - Rotate a little to the right for better flow. - fixed
  3. 01:11:558 (7) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm: - fixed

    Reference
  4. 01:35:730 (4,7) - You can avoid this overlap, because it makes it ugly. - yeah okay ugly removed :| :| :| :|

mY new thing
osu file format v14

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Artist:Clonepa
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Creator:Shyotamaze
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Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
UPDATE
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
Every other diff has a spinner in the beginning, so maybe add one? I'm sorry but I find it useless here
00:38:815 (1) - This is nearly touching the stream and looks unattractive. Try stacking the tail of the slider to 00:37:787 (2) changed, nice one btw
01:11:729 (1) - You can move this to the middle of 01:11:215 (4) to create a blanket. I didn't want to do that but due to all the modders that advised to move it, I did
01:12:929 (4) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything nice
02:28:358 - Add a break.

Thank you, very useful
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
Sorry for late mod

I thinks you add Hardcore to tags, i am no expert but i can listening some hardcore sounds in song xd
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:25:787 (8,9) - pls never make things like this since intuitively player will move cursor forward, and your stack made stop and causes discomfort to play. Also it's hard for reading and generally stacks with ends like this are unrankable lmao
  2. 00:28:615 (5,6) - same as before, it's hard for reading and probably unrankable
  3. 01:10:872 (3) - do u not think that it's too closer with 01:10:358 (1) - ? Move it a bit down
  4. 01:11:901 (2) - I heard some 1/8 (or 1/16 lol) sound here, i think it's will be more correct if you will map 1/8 repeat here
  5. 01:14:472 (3) - not sure, but this slider will confusing too, u could rotate it to 45 degrees and move to 154 264, looks pretty better http://puu.sh/nirYZ/98dc1ba96f.png
  6. 01:19:958 (1) - oval shape is pretty weird in my option lol, some circle form would be better imo
  7. 01:22:701 (1) - okay, here it's looks better
  8. 01:19:958 (1,1,1) - sliderends haven't some sound, so i recomment reduce volume to sliderend (10%-20% idk)
  9. 02:14:044 (1,2,3) - not too necessary, but doubles instead would be more fun to play
  10. 02:18:758 - should be 1/8 repeat here , right?
  11. 02:28:529 (1,2,3) - same with sliderends as before

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:27:329 (4,5,6) - this overlap killing my eyes -_-. You should move it so to be inside the slider http://puu.sh/nisJ8/b6c61d3388.jpg , or make something else
  2. 00:46:615 (4,5) - stack under sliders can be confusing for hard diffs players, so i recommend add some spacing between
  3. 00:52:872 (1) - again bad overlap, u can stack slider with end of 00:52:015 (7) - to avoid him
  4. 01:07:272 (3) - same as before, 1/2 probably confusing too and... stack haven't some sense
  5. 01:49:958 (8,2) - aaa, i want kill a little cats when i see stuff like this, pls fix
  6. 02:27:072 (5,1) - stack, omg fix pls

  • [Normal]
  1. pls delete unnecessary green lines
  2. idk. rhythm and flow is fine for, so i can't say something about it


  • [spaklak]
  1. 00:30:929 (2) - ужасно и некрасиво. Слайдервейвы лучше не использовать на короткие слайдеры
  2. 00:31:958 (1) - локоть слайдеры кстати тоже
  3. 00:43:958 (4,1) - не очень я одобряю 1/1 стаки, их надо использовать только в крайних случаях и по сильно нужде, тут я такой нужды не вижу
  4. 00:47:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ну слишком долгий спам 1/1 слайдерами, прояви фантазию плс
  5. 01:14:472 (1) - ужасно
  6. 01:17:215 (1,2) - ужасно
  7. 01:49:787 (4) - мне вообще не нравится идея, что ты используешь 1/2 слайдеры в изике, но это уже край. меняй на круг
  8. 01:55:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - че там по фантазии? разнообразь ритм плс
  9. 02:03:844 (1,2,3) - у меня такое чувство, что нубасы будут путаться при виде этого стака, попробуй на 295 76 поставить хз
  10. 02:11:387 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ужасно
  11. 02:25:444 (4) - если стак с тройкой еще может и прочитается, то с четверкой это вообще полный пиздец. Из-за стандартного скина ее просто не будет видно и новичку будут путаться, выбирай другую позицию
  12. 02:39:501 - че за бред, я должен сидеть и ждать 10 секунд, чтобы покрутить спиннер? добавь только каких-нибудь лолг слайдеров туда, как в других диффах
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

FCL wrote:

Sorry for late mod No problem

I thinks you add Hardcore to tags, i am no expert but i can listening some hardcore sounds in song xd Sure
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:25:787 (8,9) - pls never make things like this since intuitively player will move cursor forward, and your stack made stop and causes discomfort to play. Also it's hard for reading and generally stacks with ends like this are unrankable lmao Fixed
  2. 00:28:615 (5,6) - same as before, it's hard for reading and probably unrankable Fixed
  3. 01:10:872 (3) - do u not think that it's too closer with 01:10:358 (1) - ? Move it a bit down Fixed
  4. 01:11:901 (2) - I heard some 1/8 (or 1/16 lol) sound here, i think it's will be more correct if you will map 1/8 repeat here Fixed
  5. 01:14:472 (3) - not sure, but this slider will confusing too, u could rotate it to 45 degrees and move to 154 264, looks pretty better http://puu.sh/nirYZ/98dc1ba96f.png Wrong screenshot I guess lol, changed it in another way
  6. 01:19:958 (1) - oval shape is pretty weird in my option lol, some circle form would be better imo It's fine imo but I'll see
  7. 01:22:701 (1) - okay, here it's looks better Thanks :D
  8. 01:19:958 (1,1,1) - sliderends haven't some sound, so i recomment reduce volume to sliderend (10%-20% idk) Fixed
  9. 02:14:044 (1,2,3) - not too necessary, but doubles instead would be more fun to play Fixed
  10. 02:18:758 - should be 1/8 repeat here , right? Nah, listen closely with 25%
  11. 02:28:529 (1,2,3) - same with sliderends as before Fixed
Thanks! :)
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
Hard
00:27:329 (4,5,6) - this overlap killing my eyes -_-. You should move it so to be inside the slider http://puu.sh/nisJ8/b6c61d3388.jpg , or make something else It is what I expected
00:46:615 (4,5) - stack under sliders can be confusing for hard diffs players, so i recommend add some spacing between It has never been confusing to me but okay
00:52:872 (1) - again bad overlap, u can stack slider with end of 00:52:015 (7) - to avoid him
01:07:272 (3) - same as before, 1/2 probably confusing too and... stack haven't some sense
01:49:958 (8,2) - aaa, i want kill a little cats when i see stuff like this, pls fix It seems perfectly readable
02:27:072 (5,1) - stack, omg fix pls
Thanks
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Shmiklak
UPDATE
Video
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Video
I'll update the unnecessary green lines in next mod where changes need to be made :P
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined April 2012
neonat
General

Silence the sliderslide, it's pretty loud

Insane

00:27:844 (1,2) - this is pretty cramp, given the densty
00:40:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4) - example of what I feel is really too cramped in this map
00:42:244 (6) - could be split into 3 objects, or maybe more, give it more action here, more movement
00:43:615 (11) - kinda weird to suddenly have a slider here, if anything, the clap on the slider end puts everything off, it doesn't sound right, any percussion sound that stood out near there, it's at 00:43:615

generally speaking, you have the whistles for the sounds in the music that stick out and are lower in pitch, namely 01:03:501 (1) - 01:04:358 (1) - 01:04:872 (5) - 01:05:729 (6) - 01:06:244 (1) - to name a few. But the claps aren't really following with it, so it doesn't mix. You could have it follow the snare, which you can hear in places like 01:03:758 (4,5) - 01:04:529 (2) - 01:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:05:901 (7) - 01:06:501 (3,4) - 01:07:958 - 01:08:644 - 01:09:329 (1) - to give some examples. This could honestly make it more vibrant and work out with the music

01:28:358 (1) - doesn't start with the music
01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really odd curve in the stream
01:59:558 (2,3,4) and 02:00:244 (2,3,4) - why are they spaced differently?
02:20:301 (2,3,4,5) - really odd spacing, why is 02:20:644 (4,5) the lowest spacing, leading up to small spacing 02:20:815 (5,1) - once again

the spacing gets really small and somewhat big at times, I think you could make those changes work better, cuz right now I quite see a lot of anti-climatic spacing


GL~
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

neonat wrote:

General

Silence the sliderslide, it's pretty loud I'll try to fix it

Insane

00:27:844 (1,2) - this is pretty cramp, given the densty Fixed
00:40:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4) - example of what I feel is really too cramped in this map Fixed
00:42:244 (6) - could be split into 3 objects, or maybe more, give it more action here, more movement Fixed
00:43:615 (11) - kinda weird to suddenly have a slider here, if anything, the clap on the slider end puts everything off, it doesn't sound right, any percussion sound that stood out near there, it's at 00:43:615 Fixed

generally speaking, you have the whistles for the sounds in the music that stick out and are lower in pitch, namely 01:03:501 (1) - 01:04:358 (1) - 01:04:872 (5) - 01:05:729 (6) - 01:06:244 (1) - to name a few. But the claps aren't really following with it, so it doesn't mix. You could have it follow the snare, which you can hear in places like 01:03:758 (4,5) - 01:04:529 (2) - 01:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:05:901 (7) - 01:06:501 (3,4) - 01:07:958 - 01:08:644 - 01:09:329 (1) - to give some examples. This could honestly make it more vibrant and work out with the music I'll try to fix it with Classwork because I suck at hitsounding ;_;

01:28:358 (1) - doesn't start with the music Fixed I think
01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really odd curve in the stream Fixed? ;_;
01:59:558 (2,3,4) and 02:00:244 (2,3,4) - why are they spaced differently? Fixed
02:20:301 (2,3,4,5) - really odd spacing, why is 02:20:644 (4,5) the lowest spacing, leading up to small spacing 02:20:815 (5,1) - once again The strong beats are on 02:20:301 (2,3,4) - but I spaced 02:20:815 (5) - a bit more now

the spacing gets really small and somewhat big at times, I think you could make those changes work better, cuz right now I quite see a lot of anti-climatic spacing


GL~
Thanks! :)
Grrum
886 posts
Joined November 2011
Grrum
Hello, here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

00:34:529 (1) – The end and head of this slider overlaps a tiny bit. I think it would like nicer if this did not happen, so scale it up by a bit and re-blanket.

00:44:472 (2) – Due to the way stacking works, the prev of this is 1.0x, which is inconsistent from what you've been doing.

In general, some angles between three objects in this map can sometimes look odd. For example: 00:48:929 (4,5,6) – doesn't really look like it's going for any structure. Instead what you could do is go for some kind of symmetry along a line like this: http://puu.sh/nrpDa/c308eaaa50.jpg. Another example, 01:04:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – would look nicer if you had more of a trapezoid going on like:
http://puu.sh/nrpW6/066f86c2b5.jpg (hint: (1,6) is parallel to (2,3))

01:33:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – I'm not that big a fan of being so horizontal like this, but that's just me.

01:52:872 (1,2,3,4) – It might be cool if the spacing between these were bigger since the slider leniency makes these jumps a little too easy for me.

01:54:929 (8,2) – It would look better if the spacing between (8,2) was the same as (7,8), so move (2) to 289,225
02:19:958 (1,2,4) - ^ similar thing, try something like: http://puu.sh/nrqCP/d89f45f3eb.jpg
02:06:587 (1) – It's kind of weird to start a section so close to the edge of the screen, see if there is a way to move it closer to the center

02:15:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it wiggle less: http://puu.sh/nrqs5/797d1cf73d.jpg

02:25:958 (4,6) – This overlap looks poor. Try stacking 02:25:787 (3,6) -

The rhythm felt pretty good, although I might prefer less reverse sliders since the diff felt a little easy for me. See what you can do about positioning objects for structure and neater angles.

[Easy]

AR 4.5 seems a bit high for the lowest difficulty of the set, but hey

00:34:015 (5) – Move this to 383, 251 for a better trapezoid structure

00:46:015 (4) – Moving this to 309, 170 looks a little better since it avoids the 00:44:301 (1,4) – overlap

00:47:729 (2,3,4,5) – Structure: http://puu.sh/nrreC/444443e33e.jpg

01:15:158 (2,1) – I'm not sure about this suggestion, but this pattern seems a bit tricky for an Easy, so making (2) a ½ slider seems preferable

01:44:644 (1,2,3,4) – The visual spacing could be improved, meaning that lowest gap between (1,2) should be the same spacing as the lowest gap between (2,3) which should be the same spacing as the lowest gap between (3,4): http://puu.sh/nrrGB/e549d3bdcc.jpg

01:48:758 (3,4,1) – You can make this a triangle by moving (1) to 350, 141

02:02:472 (3,4,5,1) – Try making a better trapezoidal structure.

02:08:644 (4,2) – You might want to make the DS between these 1.00x.

02:10:701 (3,1) – This overlap looks a bit odd, try to avoid it.

[Normal]

Those circles are tiny for a normal. Try a CS of 3.2. The CS should not be harder than what is in the Hard

00:23:729 (1,2,3) – Inconsistencies in spacing in a Normal is generally a bad idea. This applies everywhere in the map

00:47:044 (1,2,3) – The angles between these and the slider angles of (1) and (3) look a bit odd. Why not structure this by using symmetry like: http://puu.sh/nrspV/1f446bae12.jpg (To be precise about it, use the y-axis as a line of symmetry, then rotate the pattern to the desired position.)

00:48:415 (3) – Having more than one reverse in a reverse slider plays strangely. Try adding a circle on 00:49:444 – instead

01:16:529 (7,1) – blanket these?

01:35:044 (3) – Consider making this a 2/1 slider and adding a circle on 01:36:072 -

01:46:015 (3,4,5,1) – Go for a structure like this: http://puu.sh/nrsMr/3645c7d334.jpg (hint: turn off the gird, and notice that the DS between (3,1) is 1.00x and all angles between the objects are equal)

02:00:587 (6) – I prefer deleting this and having a circle on the white tick instead.

02:35:215 (3) – Make this end at 02:36:929 -

[Hard]

Sorry 6th, I have a policy that I only mod for one hour on NM requests, and I've reached my limit.

Good luck!
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

pinataman wrote:

Hello, here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

00:34:529 (1) – The end and head of this slider overlaps a tiny bit. I think it would like nicer if this did not happen, so scale it up by a bit and re-blanket. Fixed

00:44:472 (2) – Due to the way stacking works, the prev of this is 1.0x, which is inconsistent from what you've been doing. uh idk I don't really understand what you say here ;_;

In general, some angles between three objects in this map can sometimes look odd. For example: 00:48:929 (4,5,6) – doesn't really look like it's going for any structure. Instead what you could do is go for some kind of symmetry along a line like this: http://puu.sh/nrpDa/c308eaaa50.jpg. Another example, 01:04:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – would look nicer if you had more of a trapezoid going on like:
http://puu.sh/nrpW6/066f86c2b5.jpg (hint: (1,6) is parallel to (2,3)) Fixed

01:33:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – I'm not that big a fan of being so horizontal like this, but that's just me. Rotated it a bit lol

01:52:872 (1,2,3,4) – It might be cool if the spacing between these were bigger since the slider leniency makes these jumps a little too easy for me. Fixed

01:54:929 (8,2) – It would look better if the spacing between (8,2) was the same as (7,8), so move (2) to 289,225 Fixed
02:19:958 (1,2,4) - ^ similar thing, try something like: http://puu.sh/nrqCP/d89f45f3eb.jpg Fixed
02:06:587 (1) – It's kind of weird to start a section so close to the edge of the screen, see if there is a way to move it closer to the center Fixed, lol it wasn't even properly spaced, nice mistake

02:15:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it wiggle less: http://puu.sh/nrqs5/797d1cf73d.jpg Fixed

02:25:958 (4,6) – This overlap looks poor. Try stacking 02:25:787 (3,6) - Fixed

The rhythm felt pretty good, although I might prefer less reverse sliders since the diff felt a little easy for me. See what you can do about positioning objects for structure and neater angles.

Good luck!
Thanks! :)
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak

pinataman wrote:

Hello, here from my queue. Hope this helps!
[Easy]

AR 4.5 seems a bit high for the lowest difficulty of the set, but hey oops...

00:34:015 (5) – Move this to 383, 251 for a better trapezoid structure okay

00:46:015 (4) – Moving this to 309, 170 looks a little better since it avoids the 00:44:301 (1,4) – overlap same

00:47:729 (2,3,4,5) – Structure: http://puu.sh/nrreC/444443e33e.jpg

01:15:158 (2,1) – I'm not sure about this suggestion, but this pattern seems a bit tricky for an Easy, so making (2) a ½ slider seems preferable

01:44:644 (1,2,3,4) – The visual spacing could be improved, meaning that lowest gap between (1,2) should be the same spacing as the lowest gap between (2,3) which should be the same spacing as the lowest gap between (3,4): http://puu.sh/nrrGB/e549d3bdcc.jpg maybe later

01:48:758 (3,4,1) – You can make this a triangle by moving (1) to 350, 141

02:02:472 (3,4,5,1) – Try making a better trapezoidal structure.

02:08:644 (4,2) – You might want to make the DS between these 1.00x.

02:10:701 (3,1) – This overlap looks a bit odd, try to avoid it.

Good luck!
UPD
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video
[quote="pinataman"]Hello, here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Normal]

Those circles are tiny for a normal. Try a CS of 3.2. The CS should not be harder than what is in the Hard - eh if more people reccomend it i'll change it

00:23:729 (1,2,3) – Inconsistencies in spacing in a Normal is generally a bad idea. This applies everywhere in the map - okay

00:47:044 (1,2,3) – The angles between these and the slider angles of (1) and (3) look a bit odd. Why not structure this by using symmetry like: http://puu.sh/nrspV/1f446bae12.jpg (To be precise about it, use the y-axis as a line of symmetry, then rotate the pattern to the desired position.) - good idea

00:48:415 (3) – Having more than one reverse in a reverse slider plays strangely. Try adding a circle on 00:49:444 – instead - did that

01:16:529 (7,1) – blanket these? - looks fine

01:35:044 (3) – Consider making this a 2/1 slider and adding a circle on 01:36:072 - good idea

01:46:015 (3,4,5,1) – Go for a structure like this: http://puu.sh/nrsMr/3645c7d334.jpg (hint: turn off the gird, and notice that the DS between (3,1) is 1.00x and all angles between the objects are equal) - okay thanks

02:00:587 (6) – I prefer deleting this and having a circle on the white tick instead. - good idea

02:35:215 (3) – Make this end at 02:36:929 - i think i messed it up in the last mod i was editing this section for, thanks for catching it

Thanks for the mod

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Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
[6th's Hard]

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - I'll request something :
Delete 6 and make a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse,
After, delete 7 & 8 and create a 1/1 beat slider who begins here : 00:28:529 -

00:47:558 - Add a 1/4 beat slider

00:56:987 (2,3) - Fix blanket

01:22:872 (1,2) - Bad overlap at the upper parts of he sliders

01:45:329 (3,4) - Change the pattern for make a blanket

01:48:929 (6) - 1/2 beat slider with 3 reverses

[Weegle's Normal]

01:47:387 (1) - please for this moment keep consistancy, map all 1/1 beat

01:53:558 (2) - ^

+ fix AIMod Problems with DS enabled
& Tags problems

[Shmik's Easy]

00:31:615 (3,2) - Please, don't make stacked overlaps like this in Easy diffs, it confuse the beginners and make the pattern 00:31:958 (1,2) - Ugly.

00:31:958 (1,5) - Overlap

00:40:872 (6) - Add reverse

01:10:358 (3,4) - Blanket problem ?

01:14:472 (1,2) - Make blanket/Fix blanket

01:38:301 - End of the slider

01:39:844 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles

02:03:844 (1,2) - This blanket got big problems o_O

That's all for me !
:3
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
[6th's Hard]

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - I'll request something :
Delete 6 and make a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse,
After, delete 7 & 8 and create a 1/1 beat slider who begins here : 00:28:529 - Je suis vraiment désolé mais je ne comprends pas à quoi ça correspondrait s:

00:47:558 - Add a 1/4 beat slider Je suis d'accord sur le fait que ça sonnerait bien mais c'est peut-être un peu trop pour une hard

00:56:987 (2,3) - Fix blanket

01:22:872 (1,2) - Bad overlap at the upper parts of he sliders Je cherche un moyen de corriger ça

01:45:329 (3,4) - Change the pattern for make a blanket

01:48:929 (6) - 1/2 beat slider with 3 reverses Honnêtement ça me parait bien comme c'est

Merci !
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
Don't give kudosus !!

Je savais pas que t'était francais,
Alors je vais te redire ce point :

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - I'll request something :
Delete 6 and make a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse,
After, delete 7 & 8 and create a 1/1 beat slider who begins here : 00:28:529 - Je suis vraiment désolé mais je ne comprends pas à quoi ça correspondrait s:

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - Les notes ne sont pas parfaitement dans le rythme,je parle en l'occruence des sliders 6 & 7
En gros supprime le slider (6) et fais un slider d'un demi beat (battement ou tick blanc commencant au debut du slider 6) et ajoute lui une reverse.
Ensuite, supprime le slider 7 & le cercle 8 afin de faire un slider d'un battement (tick blanc au tick blanc) qui commence ici : 00:28:529 - Afin de corriger les problemes de rythme.
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial
M4M BOY
Insane
  1. 00:29:215 (3) - squashed up slider is a no for me, I would do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659215
  2. 00:31:101 (4) - just use 3 points for the arc, don't need five: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659221
  3. 00:33:329 (1,3,4,5) - this overlapping doesn't look right
  4. 00:34:358 (6,1) - better blanket, not centered properly
  5. 00:36:158 (2,4,8) - can't hear these notes in the music, doesn't belong in the stream
  6. 00:48:244 (2,3,4,5,6) - not a big deal but I prefer more consistent spacing in this part
  7. 01:19:958 (1) - Personally not a big fan of elipse but I would prefer it shaped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659289
  8. 01:22:701 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659327
  9. 01:25:444 (1,1) - just want to point out this is actually good, BUT the sound fades at 01:30:929 (2) - so the slider should end there
  10. 01:39:158 (1,2,3) - you could play with 1/8 sliders here tbh
  11. 02:19:444 (1) - is this is bad blanket???
  12. 02:27:672 (3) - center it properly
  13. 02:28:187 (5,1) - make "5" blanket "1" maybe?
  14. 02:31:358 (2) - the horn sounds like it starts between the white tick and blue tick, you might want to double check that since score v2 is coming
  15. 02:34:015 (3) - this doesn't work with the last one, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659400 I made this but I think it still looks meh
  16. 02:34:187 (4) - you really have to decide on when does the horn go off cause score v2 will make your map hard to acc
  17. 02:36:929 (1) - this note is not needed
I still need to learn how to map easier difficulties so I don't have much to say for them, and I have nothing to say about Easy.
Hard
  1. 00:32:472 (2,3,4,5) - try to make the notes start on the white tick, it is just awkward for new players to start sliders on so many red ticks.
  2. 00:39:844 (4) - Heavy beat there, there should be something for the players to tap, I personally perfer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659464. Not letting players tap on heavy beat is consistently a problem, so might want to check that out, I won't repeat myself after this.
  3. 01:05:729 (4) - a simple curve would do
  4. 01:11:215 (4,1) - make it over lap properly if you're going to blanket it (don't think you can blanket it either with that shape), or just make it symmetrical
  5. 01:39:844 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:54:929 (2) - don't need to do it, but blanket it properly
Normal
01:50:815 - squashed up sliders ew
GOOD LUCK
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER

Lexis wrote:

Don't give kudosus !!

Je savais pas que t'était francais,
Alors je vais te redire ce point :

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - I'll request something :
Delete 6 and make a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse,
After, delete 7 & 8 and create a 1/1 beat slider who begins here : 00:28:529 - Je suis vraiment désolé mais je ne comprends pas à quoi ça correspondrait s:

00:27:844 (6,7,8) - Les notes ne sont pas parfaitement dans le rythme,je parle en l'occruence des sliders 6 & 7
En gros supprime le slider (6) et fais un slider d'un demi beat (battement ou tick blanc commencant au debut du slider 6) et ajoute lui une reverse.
Ensuite, supprime le slider 7 & le cercle 8 afin de faire un slider d'un battement (tick blanc au tick blanc) qui commence ici : 00:28:529 - Afin de corriger les problemes de rythme.

J'ai bien compris ce que tu me demandais, mais je ne voyais pas à quoi ça correspondant dans la musique (; bref, je m'en suis rendu compte, merci !

SPOILER
00:32:472 (2,3,4,5) - try to make the notes start on the white tick, it is just awkward for new players to start sliders on so many red ticks. It works well here, doesn't it ?
00:39:844 (4) - Heavy beat there, there should be something for the players to tap, I personally perfer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659464. Not letting players tap on heavy beat is consistently a problem, so might want to check that out, I won't repeat myself after this.
01:05:729 (4) - a simple curve would do
01:11:215 (4,1) - make it over lap properly if you're going to blanket it (don't think you can blanket it either with that shape), or just make it symmetrical changed
01:39:844 (3,4) - ^ hmm I don't like it so much here
01:54:929 (2) - don't need to do it, but blanket it properly

Thanks
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

N0thingSpecial wrote:

M4M BOY
Insane
  1. 00:29:215 (3) - squashed up slider is a no for me, I would do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659215 Fine imo, and it would make the following jumps a bit awkward to aim/read
  2. 00:31:101 (4) - just use 3 points for the arc, don't need five: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659221 Fine too, I used 5 points because with only 3 it was too curved and didn't flow well with the following hitcircle
  3. 00:33:329 (1,3,4,5) - this overlapping doesn't look right Fixed
  4. 00:34:358 (6,1) - better blanket, not centered properly Fixed
  5. 00:36:158 (2,4,8) - can't hear these notes in the music, doesn't belong in the stream At first I thought it was false but after hearing it multiple times, you're right lol, I feel ashamed of myself for overmapping now :o
  6. 00:48:244 (2,3,4,5,6) - not a big deal but I prefer more consistent spacing in this part Actually it's kinda consistent, only one spacing change here 00:48:587 (3,4) - for that entire part 00:47:558 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - , I wanted to emphasize a bit more 4 but I'll see if I change it
  7. 01:19:958 (1) - Personally not a big fan of elipse but I would prefer it shaped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659289 I like how it is now and your shape would make it flow weirdly just after 01:19:615 (6) - because it goes in the left direction and your shape goes in the left direction, but I'll see if I change it to another shape someday
  8. 01:22:701 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659327 I like how it is now but thanks for the suggestion
  9. 01:25:444 (1,1) - just want to point out this is actually good, BUT the sound fades at 01:30:929 (2) - so the slider should end there Sorry, I don't hear anything during the break and even if you hear something the sound is way too low to map it, it would feel like overmapping and boring
  10. 01:39:158 (1,2,3) - you could play with 1/8 sliders here tbh I'm mapping to the other instrument for that part, so it would feel weird to map that instrument just for one slider and for the other instrument the next notes, but I see what you mean
  11. 02:19:444 (1) - is this is bad blanket??? It wasn't intended to be a blanket but fixed now, nice catch
  12. 02:27:672 (3) - center it properly Oops, fixed
  13. 02:28:187 (5,1) - make "5" blanket "1" maybe? Nah, it's fine like this
  14. 02:31:358 (2) - the horn sounds like it starts between the white tick and blue tick, you might want to double check that since score v2 is coming I'll check it winter is coming
  15. 02:34:015 (3) - this doesn't work with the last one, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659400 I made this but I think it still looks meh Changed it my own way
  16. 02:34:187 (4) - you really have to decide on when does the horn go off cause score v2 will make your map hard to acc I'll check it too
  17. 02:36:929 (1) - this note is not needed It is, without it the next two hitcircles would feel really weird/off/harder to acc
GOOD LUCK
Thanks! :) I'll try to mod your map tonight
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N0thingSpecial wrote:

[*]01:54:929 (2) - don't need to do it, but blanket it properly[/list][/box]
[Normal]
01:50:815 - squashed up sliders ew - fixed
GOOD LUCK
broke a sweat with this mod ;o;

updated slider
osu file format v14

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DeltaLeeds
78 posts
Joined November 2015
DeltaLeeds
Hello M4M. The map is good enough so I don't have a lot to say, don't give kds if the mod was useless...

Shmik's Easy


SPOILER
00:27:844 (1): Disable NC, NC should be constant every 8 ticks.
00:29:215 (5): NC
00:30:587 (1): Disable NC
I won't point out the rest, and it's up to you. ;)
02:14:815 (1,2): Not parallel.
02:34:015 (1,2): Fix this overlap.

Weegle's Normal


SPOILER
00:53:215 (2): Copy 1's slider instead.
01:37:787 (4): I'd suggest that slider should approach the next slider instead of away from it. Well yeah it'll mess yo

6th's Hard

SPOILER
There's almost no hitsound in this diff...
00:23:729 (1): Put a clap or finish hitsound.
00:26:472 (1): ^
00:29:215 (1): ^
00:34:529 (8): ^
00:41:558 (1): ^
00:42:072 (2): Put a finish hitsound at the slider's head.
The point is if you hear that specific beat on the song, I'd suggest you put a finish hitsound.

00:36:758 (3,4,5): Put a clap hitsound, but for 5 just put it at the slider's head
00:38:129 (3,4,5): ^
00:40:872 (4,5,6): ^
01:05:301 (2,3): At 3 just put the clap at the arrow and the beginning of the slider.

Not much stuff to say other than this, it's a pretty good map already. ^^
Insane

SPOILER
I can't mod insane... So I'm just going to put a few things. :(
00:26:644 (3,7): The finish hitsounds don't fit imo.
00:36:415 (3,4,5): Put claps here, I like the sound of the claps at 00:38:129 (1,2,3,4,5) :3
00:40:701 (1,2,3,4,5): Claps, including the head and tail of slider.

Shot a star because I like the song, and I think my mod was horrible... Good luck for the map, hope it gets ranked soon! ^^
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

DeltaLeeds wrote:

Hello M4M. The map is good enough so I don't have a lot to say, don't give kds if the mod was useless...

Insane

SPOILER
I can't mod insane... So I'm just going to put a few things. :(
00:26:644 (3,7): The finish hitsounds don't fit imo.
00:36:415 (3,4,5): Put claps here, I like the sound of the claps at 00:38:129 (1,2,3,4,5) :3
00:40:701 (1,2,3,4,5): Claps, including the head and tail of slider.
I'll see with Classwork if he agrees with this ;)

Shot a star because I like the song, and I think my mod was horrible... Good luck for the map, hope it gets ranked soon! ^^ Thanks a lot for the star :)
Thank you!
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial
Just want to quickly tell you this: 02:33:929 (3) - in insane
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

N0thingSpecial wrote:

Just want to quickly tell you this: 02:33:929 (3) - in insane
Oh crap my bad lol, thanks! :)
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
irc

SPOILER
01:06 P A N: fix it please
01:06 P A N: i think i want kds
01:07 Shyotamaze: what diff for the weird rhythm
01:07 Shyotamaze: lol
01:07 P A N: hardest ofc
01:09 P A N: you added background sound here 00:23:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
01:09 P A N: but after 00:29:215 (3) - 
01:09 P A N: you didn't
01:09 P A N: but the problem is
01:09 P A N: 00:34:101 (4) - you added background sound again
01:09 Shyotamaze: yea I switch sometimes
01:09 P A N: that's weird :p
01:10 Shyotamaze: ;_;
01:10 P A N: on kiai
01:10 P A N: add clap on evey white tick is right
01:10 P A N: but you still missing some
01:11 P A N: 01:55:272 (1,2,3) - more like error spacing than intentional for various spacing
01:11 P A N: 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - if you prefer to follow that sound, 2 supposed to be 1/1 slider
01:11 P A N: ofc remove 3 and 4
01:12 P A N: 01:57:672 (5) - 1/2 slider and circle is more fit with the song
01:12 P A N: which mean remove reverse and add circle after the slider instead
01:12 P A N: 01:58:872 (2,3,4) - same with 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - 
01:13 Shyotamaze: 01:55:444 (2) - is intentional because it follows a little shape like this http://prntscr.com/acrazd
01:14 P A N: try use
01:14 P A N: turn on hit animation
01:14 P A N: you will know the truth
01:14 Shyotamaze: how
01:14 P A N: View > hit animation
01:14 P A N: on the top bar
01:14 Shyotamaze: oh yeah done
01:14 P A N: mapping is for gameplay
01:15 P A N: not editing
01:15 P A N: now you can see
01:15 P A N: your art is gone
01:15 Shyotamaze: rip
01:15 P A N: and you see that 01:55:272 (1,2,3) - is more like error spacing
01:15 P A N: :^)
01:15 Shyotamaze: yea
01:15 Shyotamaze: :(
01:16 P A N: don't be sad
01:16 P A N: XD
01:16 P A N: and replace 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - and 01:58:872 (2,3,4) - to 1/1 slider
01:16 P A N: im serious about this
01:16 P A N: now is very weird
01:17 Shyotamaze: okay
01:17 P A N: [http://puu.sh/nzpbU/d774234c10.jpg this] is what i mean
01:18 P A N: your slider is annoying imo
01:18 P A N: use [http://puu.sh/nzpf9/8db7a68f93.wav this]
01:18 P A N: paste in your song folder then copy it and renamed to other set as well
01:18 P A N: like soft-sliderslide3
01:19 P A N: k that's it for now
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

P A N wrote:

irc

SPOILER
01:06 P A N: fix it please
01:06 P A N: i think i want kds
01:07 Shyotamaze: what diff for the weird rhythm
01:07 Shyotamaze: lol
01:07 P A N: hardest ofc
01:09 P A N: you added background sound here 00:23:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
01:09 P A N: but after 00:29:215 (3) - 
01:09 P A N: you didn't
01:09 P A N: but the problem is
01:09 P A N: 00:34:101 (4) - you added background sound again
01:09 Shyotamaze: yea I switch sometimes
01:09 P A N: that's weird :p
01:10 Shyotamaze: ;_;
01:10 P A N: on kiai
01:10 P A N: add clap on evey white tick is right
01:10 P A N: but you still missing some
01:11 P A N: 01:55:272 (1,2,3) - more like error spacing than intentional for various spacing
01:11 P A N: 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - if you prefer to follow that sound, 2 supposed to be 1/1 slider
01:11 P A N: ofc remove 3 and 4
01:12 P A N: 01:57:672 (5) - 1/2 slider and circle is more fit with the song
01:12 P A N: which mean remove reverse and add circle after the slider instead
01:12 P A N: 01:58:872 (2,3,4) - same with 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - 
01:13 Shyotamaze: 01:55:444 (2) - is intentional because it follows a little shape like this http://prntscr.com/acrazd
01:14 P A N: try use
01:14 P A N: turn on hit animation
01:14 P A N: you will know the truth
01:14 Shyotamaze: how
01:14 P A N: View > hit animation
01:14 P A N: on the top bar
01:14 Shyotamaze: oh yeah done
01:14 P A N: mapping is for gameplay
01:15 P A N: not editing
01:15 P A N: now you can see
01:15 P A N: your art is gone
01:15 Shyotamaze: rip
01:15 P A N: and you see that 01:55:272 (1,2,3) - is more like error spacing
01:15 P A N: :^)
01:15 Shyotamaze: yea
01:15 Shyotamaze: :(
01:16 P A N: don't be sad
01:16 P A N: XD
01:16 P A N: and replace 01:56:129 (2,3,4) - and 01:58:872 (2,3,4) - to 1/1 slider
01:16 P A N: im serious about this
01:16 P A N: now is very weird
01:17 Shyotamaze: okay
01:17 P A N: [http://puu.sh/nzpbU/d774234c10.jpg this] is what i mean
01:18 P A N: your slider is annoying imo
01:18 P A N: use [http://puu.sh/nzpf9/8db7a68f93.wav this]
01:18 P A N: paste in your song folder then copy it and renamed to other set as well
01:18 P A N: like soft-sliderslide3
01:19 P A N: k that's it for now
Thanks for the mod even though I said a little joke about you lol
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
from q

General:
  1. aimod says tag is blahblah

Easy:
  1. 00:32:644 (2) - try to avoid overlap with 00:32:644 (2) - ? it looks so messy for me
  2. 00:34:529 - add whistle instead? so loud
  3. 01:39:844 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - pls put the slider instead orz
  4. 02:24:072 (2) - what about avoiding that overlap with 02:22:358 (5) - ?
  5. 02:36:758 (2) - move to x83 y342 in order to avoid overlap
change the diff name to normal pls

Normal:
  1. CS PLEASE

Hard:
  1. 01:25:615 (2) - move to x203 y245 and nc?
  2. 01:49:101 - add tick hs? or add note and slider instead 01:48:929 (6) -

good luck!
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

DeltaLeeds wrote:

Hello M4M. The map is good enough so I don't have a lot to say, don't give kds if the mod was useless...
Weegle's Normal


00:53:215 (2): Copy 1's slider instead. - it looks better blanketed
01:37:787 (4): I'd suggest that slider should approach the next slider instead of away from it. Well yeah it'll mess yo - if someone else points this out i'll change it, for now i'll take it into consideration
Thanks for the suggestions!


Len wrote:

from q

Normal:
  1. CS PLEASE - i think it looks fine as 4.0 cs, but a lot of people says they'd prefer bigger clickies, one more person says something about cs size then i'll change i guess..
brilliant.

no changes sorry
Erasariel
24 posts
Joined June 2012
Erasariel
Hi! M4M with Shyotamaze. Hope you'll find my suggestions of use.

Shmik's Easy
SPOILER
00:20:987 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to next red tick.

00:40:872 (6) - Personally I would lengthen the slider to the next white tick. Matches the combo's rhythm and still gives ample leeway for the new combo.

00:46:701 (6,1) - Probably save the stacking until Normal.

01:41:901 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to next white tick.

01:54:244 (3) - Slider art is great, but in this case you lose the rhythm and the slider ends awkwardly. I'd rather do standard sliders, or be fancy and make the slider do turns with every beat. See here.

02:25:787 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather not slow the combo down - the slider art after that is enough to wind down. Following the previous combo would work.

02:28:529 (1) - You can lengthen the slider for up to the second white tick - more space to do slider art with.

Weegle's Normal
SPOILER
01:05:215 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - It kind of bothers me that this sequence crosses between bars/measures. The elongated (6) slider makes

the rest of the sequence look slow relative to the actual rhythm. At the very least convert 01:06:929 (1) to a 2-rev slider.

02:31:272 (1) - Shorten the slider to the white tick.

6th's Hard
SPOILER
00:57:329 (3,4) - Crazy, crazy idea: Why not introduce the buzzing slider from Insane here? See here.

01:04:701 (4) - I'd remove this. It's overmapping and I really can't hear a corresponding rhythm or beat to it.

01:05:301 (2,3) - Just to compliment on how well this turned out.

01:19:787 (3) - Maybe try a 3-rev slider at 01:19:615, see here.

01:41:558 (4) - I'd spice it up by shortening the slider to the red tick and inserting a five-rev slider at 01:41:901, see here.

01:48:929 (6) - Try converting this to a five-rev slider (see here) or splitting it up into two shorter sliders to match the strong bass beats.

Insane
SPOILER
01:10:358 (1) - Think it's still part of the previous combo.

01:28:401 (1) - Timing feels off. Shouldn't it be at 1:28:358?

02:18:844 (2,3) - I guess the stacking is part of the insane difficulty, but a little less stacking might make it a little more playable.

02:23:558 (1,2) - I loved those buzzing sliders from earlier. Bring them back? If you wanted to cross the map you could also convert 02:24:244 (3) into a stream.

Thank you very much for the M4M and best of luck with your map!
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Erasariel wrote:

Hi! M4M with Shyotamaze. Hope you'll find my suggestions of use.

Insane
SPOILER
01:10:358 (1) - Think it's still part of the previous combo. Not sure about that since the NCs should be on white ticks

01:28:401 (1) - Timing feels off. Shouldn't it be at 1:28:358? Fixed

02:18:844 (2,3) - I guess the stacking is part of the insane difficulty, but a little less stacking might make it a little more playable. Spaced it a bit more

02:23:558 (1,2) - I loved those buzzing sliders from earlier. Bring them back? If you wanted to cross the map you could also convert 02:24:244 (3) into a stream. Fixed but I didn't apply your stream suggestion

Thank you very much for the M4M and best of luck with your map!
Thanks! I'll mod your map soon ;)
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