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DM Ashura feat. Skizzo & Hanna - Move That Body! [OsuMania]

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AJIekceu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 сентября 2017 г. at 22:31:15

Artist: DM Ashura feat. Skizzo & Hanna
Title: Move That Body!
Source: Pump It Up 2015 Prime
Tags: alexey arcade dance andamiro piu eurodance allezard
BPM: 145
Filesize: 20997kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Allezard's Move - 4Key (3,79 stars, 1446 notes)
  2. EZ - 4Key (1,37 stars, 394 notes)
  3. HD - 4Key (3,05 stars, 1188 notes)
  4. NM - 4Key (2,12 stars, 760 notes)
Download: DM Ashura feat. Skizzo & Hanna - Move That Body!
Download: DM Ashura feat. Skizzo & Hanna - Move That Body! (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mod Progress
EZ - 11
NM - 14
HD - 13
Allezard's Move - 13
Harbyter
hi, here my mod


00:06:836 - suggest to add a note here to keep your consistency

00:06:940 (6940|0) - suggest to remove this note so you can emphatize better the next drums hits ,also suggesto to add a note here 00:07:147 -

00:13:043 (13043|2,13043|3,13147|0,13250|1,13354|2,13354|3,13457|1,13457|0) - how about like this

00:43:457 (43457|1,43561|2,43561|1,43664|2) - high suggest to change this for this level ,even if is a low BPM it hard for this difficuclty something like this?

01:20:492 - why only a double here, it break your consistency

01:22:664 (82664|1) - suggest to remove and adding here 01:22:974 -

01:49:664 (109664|1,109767|0,109871|1) - switch column??01:49:664 (109664|1,109871|1) - moving in 1 and 01:49:767 (109767|0) - in 2 ,more confortable xD


that's all, sorry for the poor mod p,p
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Harbyter wrote:

hi, here my mod


00:06:836 - suggest to add a note here to keep your consistency | Added and repatterned

00:06:940 (6940|0) - suggest to remove this note so you can emphatize better the next drums hits ,also suggesto to add a note here 00:07:147 -

00:13:043 (13043|2,13043|3,13147|0,13250|1,13354|2,13354|3,13457|1,13457|0) - how about like this

00:43:457 (43457|1,43561|2,43561|1,43664|2) - high suggest to change this for this level ,even if is a low BPM it hard for this difficuclty something like this?

01:20:492 - why only a double here, it break your consistency

01:22:664 (82664|1) - suggest to remove and adding here 01:22:974 - | Added, but not removed

01:49:664 (109664|1,109767|0,109871|1) - switch column??01:49:664 (109664|1,109871|1) - moving in 1 and 01:49:767 (109767|0) - in 2 ,more confortable xD | Nice idea, thanks :D


that's all, sorry for the poor mod p,p

All accepted except orange text :roll:

Thank you :)
Mia_Rose
EZ
  1. AiMod says the preview point of the EZ version is different from the HD difficulty, better check that out
  2. you Kiai time is not alligned properly at several points, you can check that out by clicking data--->AiMod
  3. as a 1,4 star map, please use a HP drain of 7 as well as an overal difficulty of 7 instead of 8

    I can play it fluently, nothing disturbs the flow, this one is ready to rock the ranking :D

NM
  1. Here again, some trouble with the Kiai alligning, you can check that out with the AiMod, as well as the preview point is not the same as the one of the HD version, seems you need to change it for the HD version then
  2. 00:16:477 (16477|1) - you can delete this note since it will feel more comfortable and fits the actual track beat better there, in my opinion ^___^
  3. 00:23:201 (23201|2) - same with this note
  4. 01:34:994 (94994|0,95201|1,95408|3,95615|2,95822|1,95925|0,96029|2,96132|3,96236|0,96339|1,96443|3,96546|2) - here I recommend using a stream in form like a stair, just place every single note even to each other, using a beat in there doesn´t fir the rolling kick drum


    In general, I really like how this map starts into the track, there are nice rythm emphasis and patterns that do challenge a bit, small changes and also this one is ready to rock the ranks :D

In general, I like the song and the way how it rolls through the map, a nice addition for a rank pool that overlays with high speed nintendo sounding tracks that sound the same all the time
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Mia_Rose wrote:

EZ
  1. AiMod says the preview point of the EZ version is different from the HD difficulty, better check that out
  2. you Kiai time is not alligned properly at several points, you can check that out by clicking data--->AiMod
  3. as a 1,4 star map, please use a HP drain of 7 as well as an overal difficulty of 7 instead of 8

    I can play it fluently, nothing disturbs the flow, this one is ready to rock the ranking :D

NM
  1. Here again, some trouble with the Kiai alligning, you can check that out with the AiMod, as well as the preview point is not the same as the one of the HD version, seems you need to change it for the HD version then
  2. 00:16:477 (16477|1) - you can delete this note since it will feel more comfortable and fits the actual track beat better there, in my opinion ^___^
  3. 00:23:201 (23201|2) - same with this note | Rejected for this time. Nice, but I need to this sound too :D
  4. 01:34:994 (94994|0,95201|1,95408|3,95615|2,95822|1,95925|0,96029|2,96132|3,96236|0,96339|1,96443|3,96546|2) - here I recommend using a stream in form like a stair, just place every single note even to each other, using a beat in there doesn´t fir the rolling kick drum | I choose stair, thanks :)


    In general, I really like how this map starts into the track, there are nice rythm emphasis and patterns that do challenge a bit, small changes and also this one is ready to rock the ranks :D

In general, I like the song and the way how it rolls through the map, a nice addition for a rank pool that overlays with high speed nintendo sounding tracks that sound the same all the time
I forgot tochange timing and Preview Point in other difficulties :o

Thank you very much! :)
_Zenith

Your map looks like very good,but i don't like eurodance this genre.
So i shoot you 1 star,just take it.
Good luck!
pnx
From PnX's modding queue


NM

00:09:546 (9546|2,9753|2) - I suggest to move these to 00:09:546 (9546|3,9753|3)
00:42:960 (42960|2) - Should move it here 00:43:063 (43063|2) ?
00:56:201 (56201|1) - 00:56:305 (56305|1) Here might be better


HD

00:18:753 - Should add some note (?)
00:22:063 - Same as above
00:25:374 - Same as above too
01:24:960 (84960|2) - Some here
01:28:063 (88063|2) - Here too

Nice map!
GL! >.<
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

PnX wrote:

From PnX's modding queue


NM

00:09:546 (9546|2,9753|2) - I suggest to move these to 00:09:546 (9546|3,9753|3)
00:42:960 (42960|2) - Should move it here 00:43:063 (43063|2) ? | Miss note, thanks
00:56:201 (56201|1) - 00:56:305 (56305|1) Here might be better


HD

00:18:753 - Should add some note (?)
00:22:063 - Same as above
00:25:374 - Same as above too
01:24:960 (84960|2) - Some here
01:28:063 (88063|2) - Here too

Nice map!
GL! >.<
All accepted. Thank you :)
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

-[Apple]- wrote:


Your map looks like very good,but i don't like eurodance this genre.
So i shoot you 1 star,just take it.
Good luck!
Thank you :oops:
Crusts
hi from my queue :D
sorry if if my delay took too long since my internet been at bad condition
Col : 1|2|3|4

NM
00:01:374 - add note like the EZ diff ??
00:13:270 (13270|0,13374|1) - make this into 21 stair ?
00:19:374 (19374|0) - delete no sound here or (replace it at 00:19:477 - any col you want)
00:22:374 (22374|2) - move to 4 or 2
00:26:098 - add note ? at 2

(to be continued)
no kds for this 1
Crusts
hi again sorry double post
Col : 1|2|3|4

;w;
NM
00:27:856 (27856|1,27960|0) - make it into 12 ?
00:33:753 (33753|0,34167|0) - move 1 of this it's somehow not good i think to make LN jack at NM diff
00:37:063 (37063|2,37477|2) - ^
00:40:374 (40374|3,40787|3) - ^
00:43:684 (43684|1,44098|1) - ^
01:03:132 (63132|2,63339|3,63546|0,63753|3) - delete last note no sound i here (there are some part same in here part be sure to check it)
01:23:201 (83201|0) - delete this ?
01:27:546 (87546|3) - delete ? i know i heard sound but seems weird if this note not deleted (some part like this too be sure to check it out)
01:49:063 - last part like this ?? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4631272

HD

00:13:684 (13684|3,13684|1,13787|2,13787|0,13891|1,13891|3) - make this into 12 34 12
00:22:374 (22374|2) - i think 1 is enough for this part
00:26:718 (26718|3,26718|0,26822|1,26925|2,26925|3,27029|3,27029|1,27132|2,27132|0,27236|1,27339|0) - this part better repattern
00:34:167 (34167|1) - change to note ?
00:36:856 (36856|1) - delete ? ._.
00:56:718 (56718|3) - ^

that's it my mod gl on map 8-)
edit (again) : please make a no video 1
Pizza

The PizzaComet Modding Queue



heyo!

IN
00:01:994 (1994|2,2098|3) - ctrl+g
00:02:305 (2305|2,2408|3) - ctrl+g
00:05:201 (5201|0,5305|1) - ctrl+g
00:58:529 (58529|2) - missplaced?
01:09:236 (69236|0,69339|1,69339|3,69443|2,69443|0,69546|3,69546|1,69650|2,69753|3,69753|0,69856|2,69856|1,69960|0,69960|3,70063|2,70167|1,70167|0,70167|3) - i don't get it this part, consider to change it to all-doubles?

just that! feel free to reject!
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Crusts wrote:

hi again sorry double post
Col : 1|2|3|4

;w;
NM
00:27:856 (27856|1,27960|0) - make it into 12 ?
00:33:753 (33753|0,34167|0) - move 1 of this it's somehow not good i think to make LN jack at NM diff
00:37:063 (37063|2,37477|2) - ^
00:40:374 (40374|3,40787|3) - ^
00:43:684 (43684|1,44098|1) - ^
01:03:132 (63132|2,63339|3,63546|0,63753|3) - delete last note no sound i here (there are some part same in here part be sure to check it)
01:23:201 (83201|0) - delete this ?
01:27:546 (87546|3) - delete ? i know i heard sound but seems weird if this note not deleted (some part like this too be sure to check it out)
01:49:063 - last part like this ?? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4631272

HD

00:13:684 (13684|3,13684|1,13787|2,13787|0,13891|1,13891|3) - make this into 12 34 12
00:22:374 (22374|2) - i think 1 is enough for this part
00:26:718 (26718|3,26718|0,26822|1,26925|2,26925|3,27029|3,27029|1,27132|2,27132|0,27236|1,27339|0) - this part better repattern
00:34:167 (34167|1) - change to note ?
00:36:856 (36856|1) - delete ? ._.
00:56:718 (56718|3) - ^

that's it my mod gl on map 8-)
edit (again) : please make a no video 1

Pizza wrote:


The PizzaComet Modding Queue



heyo!

IN
00:01:994 (1994|2,2098|3) - ctrl+g
00:02:305 (2305|2,2408|3) - ctrl+g
00:05:201 (5201|0,5305|1) - ctrl+g
00:58:529 (58529|2) - missplaced?
01:09:236 (69236|0,69339|1,69339|3,69443|2,69443|0,69546|3,69546|1,69650|2,69753|3,69753|0,69856|2,69856|1,69960|0,69960|3,70063|2,70167|1,70167|0,70167|3) - i don't get it this part, consider to change it to all-doubles?

just that! feel free to reject!
Thank you :)
Another Lie
Mod req from my little queue
Metadata: A bit problem, After HD, it is usually using MX than IN, could you ask the GD person to change that diff name?
Consistency: A bit problem
Balance: Fine for me
Pitch: Idk yet
NM
00:06:029 (6029|2) - why not make it consistent with 00:05:201 (5201|2,5201|3) - ? (those chord have same sound with it)
00:06:856 (6856|1) - same with above
00:16:374 - i hear drum pitch here, can you add some note?
00:22:994 - same here (idk the reason why you leave it blank, it is actually have pitch there)
00:24:236 (24236|3) - make it chord, well same pitch with 00:23:822 (23822|2,23822|3) -
HD
00:26:718 (26718|0) - well, i prefer chord note than 1 LN & 1 SN
01:22:994 (82994|1,83201|2) - i prefer be shield than jack in HD, well it is actually hard in HD but MX fine for jack
That's all
I wish you best luck for rank :D
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Another Lie wrote:

Mod req from my little queue
Metadata: A bit problem, After HD, it is usually using MX than IN, could you ask the GD person to change that diff name?
Consistency: A bit problem
Balance: Fine for me
Pitch: Idk yet
NM
00:06:029 (6029|2) - why not make it consistent with 00:05:201 (5201|2,5201|3) - ? (those chord have same sound with it) | Just forget :o
00:06:856 (6856|1) - same with above
00:16:374 - i hear drum pitch here, can you add some note?
00:22:994 - same here (idk the reason why you leave it blank, it is actually have pitch there) | I want to follow sounds like this 00:16:167 (16167|2,16270|0) - . Now I will follow them too. Maybe later will ad a note
00:24:236 (24236|3) - make it chord, well same pitch with 00:23:822 (23822|2,23822|3) - | Forget too, thanks
HD
00:26:718 (26718|0) - well, i prefer chord note than 1 LN & 1 SN | Accepted
01:22:994 (82994|1,83201|2) - i prefer be shield than jack in HD, well it is actually hard in HD but MX fine for jack | Emm.. Just repatterned, because I don't know what is shield :o lol
That's all
I wish you best luck for rank :D
Thank you very much :)
jukkaduei
JUKKADUEI


From NM request

Column |0|1|2|3|

EZ
Great diff
00:30:856 (30856|1) - Move to column 3 for balance
00:32:512 (32512|2) - Move to column 0 ^
NM
Good Diff
00:06:443 (6443|1) - Move to column 3
00:09:753 (9753|2) - Move to column 1
00:15:753 (15753|1) - Move to column 2
00:22:374 (22374|2) - Move to column 1
00:56:512 (56512|1) - Move to column 3
00:56:718 (56718|3,56822|2,56925|0,56925|1) - Ctrl + H
01:22:787 (82787|2) - Move to column 1
HD
Great diff
01:31:891 (91891|2) - Move to column 0
01:32:098 (92098|0) - Move to column 3
IN
Excellent diff
01:49:787 - Add note in column 2

It's all of my mod and GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR BEATMAP :D
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

jukkaduei wrote:

JUKKADUEI


From NM request

Column |0|1|2|3|

EZ
Great diff
00:30:856 (30856|1) - Move to column 3 for balance
00:32:512 (32512|2) - Move to column 0 ^
NM
Good Diff
00:06:443 (6443|1) - Move to column 3
00:09:753 (9753|2) - Move to column 1
00:15:753 (15753|1) - Move to column 2
00:22:374 (22374|2) - Move to column 1
00:56:512 (56512|1) - Move to column 3
00:56:718 (56718|3,56822|2,56925|0,56925|1) - Ctrl + H
01:22:787 (82787|2) - Move to column 1
HD
Great diff
01:31:891 (91891|2) - Move to column 0
01:32:098 (92098|0) - Move to column 3

It's all of my mod and GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR BEATMAP :D
Thank you very much, it was helpful :) All accepted~
Wonki
NM request
from WGH mania queue
hi owo
0 1 2 3
NM
00:13:270 (13270|0) - delete focus on drum beat
00:13:787 - add note drum beat
00:29:098 (29098|1,29098|2) - this part is weird follow http://puu.sh/pD47U/1e79ae7bd8.jpg
00:29:615 (29615|1,29822|0,30029|2,30236|3) - this part recommend LN
01:09:753 (69753|2,69856|1,69960|0,70063|1,70167|2) - not clean pattern because compare 01:08:512 - ~01:09:650 - it's same drum beat but you put01:09:753 (69753|2,69856|1,69960|0,70063|1,70167|2) - here 1/4 snap
change all 1/4 snap or 1/2 snap
01:23:201 (83201|0,83201|1,83305|2,83408|1,83408|3) - hard to normal change 1/1/2 note
Allezard's IN
00:07:063 (7063|3,7063|2,7167|2,7167|3,7270|2,7270|3) - hmm i think move 00:07:167 (7167|0,7167|1) - here is comportable for players
00:13:684 (13684|1,13684|0,13787|1,13787|0,13891|0,13891|1) - ^
00:26:925 (26925|3,26925|2,27029|2,27029|3,27132|2,27132|3) - i dont mention it any more change
00:29:408 (29408|0,29408|1,29512|2,29512|3) - this is different00:29:615 (29615|0,29615|1,29718|2,29718|3,29822|0,29822|1,29925|2,29925|3,30029|1,30029|0,30132|3,30132|2,30236|1,30236|0,30339|2,30339|3,30443|0,30443|1) - follow http://puu.sh/pD55B/c3ffe8c6cf.jpg
01:08:925 (68925|1,69029|3,69029|2) - same 00:29:408 (29408|0,29408|1,29512|2,29512|3) -
RedBall
Hello~ I'm from RRM mania modding queue!


Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
- I think the size of BG image should be 1366x768 instead of 1280x720. I edited it :> http://puu.sh/pE8zl/e76520bf36.zip

NM
- 00:13:787 - add one note on column 2 as you did in 00:27:029 (27029|1)
- 00:16:374 - add one note as you did in 00:13:270 (13270|0)
- 00:19:581 - add one note on column 3 (without this note, that part is a little bit awkward because of 00:19:374 (19374|0) - this note. The sound is similar)
- 00:22:994 - add one note (same suggestion I did on 00:16:374 )
- 00:50:305 and 00:50:718 + 00:53:615 and 00:54:029 - change them like 00:33:753 ~ 00:34:374 (similar sound)
- 01:04:787 (64787|1,64994|1) - no jack here. I think 1/2 jack fits from 01:05:201 ~ somewhere
- 01:23:201 (83201|0,83201|1) - delete one of them (for consistency)

Allezard's IN
- 00:13:891 (13891|0,13891|1) - Ctrl + H AND add one note on column 1 (because the sound is stronger than 00:13:684 (13684|1,13684|0,13787|0,13787|1) - these sounds + you did it in 00:56:925 (56925|0,56925|3,56925|2) - here)
- 00:17:822 (17822|1) - I think this LN should end on 00:17:925 (following the sond + for consistency)
- 00:50:098 - add one note on column 4 (as you did in 00:43:063 (43063|1,43063|2) - here)
- 00:57:443 (57443|3) - delete? (isn't it mistake? I thought like that since you did not put note on 01:00:753 )
- 01:23:408 (83408|0,83408|1) - Ctrl + H AND add one note on column 1 (same as the first suggestion)
- If 01:30:236 (90236|3,90236|0) - this is double, 01:30:443 (90443|0) - this should be double (that snare is much more stronger)
- 01:32:925 (92925|3) - double if you accepted previous suggestion
- 01:43:477 (103477|1) - change it to LN which ends on 01:43:581 as you did in 01:36:856 (96856|1) - here

Sorry for modding only two diffs :(
I'm quite bsuy because of real life things.

If you request further mods, I'll mod someday! Thank you~
blackcow30
Hi, from my modding queue! These are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
Feel free to reject my mod ^^

Column 1|2|3|4

EZ
00:56:925 to 01:03:546 - I think there's no reason to repeat the same note two times. I mean this:

I suggest rearrange this part

I don't really find anything else, but if you mind things like 01:21:132 (81132|1,81753|1,82167|1) - you may want to rearrange those notes because too much jacks can make other columns vacant.
01:21:753 (81753|1) - Move to col 1 ^
01:49:787 (109787|2) - You can remove this note, isn't necessary at all in EZ
01:49:891 (109891|1,109891|0) - LNs ends in 01:54:029
NM
00:01:477 (1477|3) - I think this LN starts in 00:01:374 -
00:08:098 (8098|0) - Starts in 00:07:994 -
00:08:305 - Add note in col 4
00:20:098 (20098|3) - I suggest end this LN in 00:20:305 (I understand that is because there's a voice sound, but... Is strange to play)
00:47:408 (47408|0,47615|3) - CTRL+H to this notes (to avoid repetition of this LN 00:46:994 (46994|0) - )
00:50:305 - Missing LN here, maybe?
00:50:718 - ^
00:53:615 - ^
00:54:029 - ^
01:49:891 (109891|1,109891|0) - LNs ends in 01:54:029
HD
00:04:787 (4787|3) - This LN isn't necessary at all, you can delete and put notes here
00:34:167 (34167|1) - Move this LN to col 3
00:37:477 (37477|3,37477|2,37477|0,37684|1) - CTRL+H , then move 00:37:787 (37787|2) - to col 4
00:50:718 (50718|0) - Move to col 3 (to avoid repetition)

00:57:960 (57960|2) - Move to col 4
00:59:615 (59615|1) - to col 1
01:00:443 (60443|3) - to col 3
01:00:856 (60856|2) - to col 2
01:02:512 (62512|1) - to col 3
It'll be more suitable transition here without doublenoting, there are no sounds for jacks

01:06:650 (66650|3) - Move this note to col 3
From 01:08:512 - to 01:09:339 - looks exactly same as in NM. This is HD, you can add more simple notes in 1/4
01:10:994 (70994|1) - You can remove this LN, and replace with notes
01:14:305 (74305|3) - ^
01:16:994 (76994|3) - Move this note to col 3
01:17:615 (77615|0) - Same as before
01:20:925 (80925|1) - ^
01:49:891 (109891|3,109891|0) - - LNs ends in 01:54:029
Allezard's IN
From 00:20:098 to 00:20:512 , you can add jacks in 1/4, according to the voice. It'll be good for this diff, I think
00:30:856 (30856|0,31063|2) - Uhm... I suggest to replace with simple notes
00:37:270 (37270|1,37477|0) - ^
00:57:339 (57339|3,57443|3) - There are no sounds for jacks, move 00:57:443 (57443|3) - to col 1
From 01:36:650 - to 01:48:236 - mini LNs aren't necessary, rearrange this part without LNs

An apology for so little (and late) mod, but I can't find many errors.
Hope this was helpful for you :)
Topic Starter
AJIekceu
Thank you all, gyus \o/

Something accepted, something not, but your mods are very goods 8-)
Alsty-
Hello , NM request here :3
okay here a short mod , hope it'll be helpfull :3
COLUMN GUIDE
1|2|3|4


mod
EZ :
00:29:615 (29615|2) - make it stop here 00:30:029 -
01:14:512 (74512|3) - move to 1
01:14:718 (74718|1) - move to 4 if mod above is applied
01:15:132 (75132|0) - move to 3 if mod above is applied
01:16:374 (76374|1) - move to 4
01:16:787 (76787|3) - move to 2 if mod above is applied
01:17:201 (77201|2) - move to 4 if mod above is applied
01:17:615 (77615|1,77822|0) - flip
01:31:063 - LN ended here and add one note?
Allezard's IN :
00:10:581 - untill here 00:12:236 - i hear hi-hat there , u can add here note here 00:10:684 - 00:10:891 - 00:11:098 - 00:11:305 - 00:11:512 - 00:11:718 - 00:11:925 - 00:12:132 -
00:28:994 (28994|2,28994|3,29098|0,29098|1,29201|2,29201|3) - here is my suggestion
01:27:546 (87546|2,87650|1,87650|3,87753|0,87753|2,87856|1) - here's too sample
01:29:201 (89201|2,89305|3,89305|1,89408|2,89408|0,89512|3) - make like above ^ and move 01:29:615 (89615|2) - to 4
01:49:063 - here's if u want some variations i suggest this
01:49:891 - add note in 2
okay that's all , hope this is will be helpfull :3

Complete

Thank you for requesting and feel free to request again on my Queue :3
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

AetherKeys wrote:

Hello , NM request here :3
okay here a short mod , hope it'll be helpfull :3
COLUMN GUIDE
1|2|3|4


mod
EZ :
00:29:615 (29615|2) - make it stop here 00:30:029 -
01:14:512 (74512|3) - move to 1
01:14:718 (74718|1) - move to 4 if mod above is applied
01:15:132 (75132|0) - move to 3 if mod above is applied
01:16:374 (76374|1) - move to 4
01:16:787 (76787|3) - move to 2 if mod above is applied
01:17:201 (77201|2) - move to 4 if mod above is applied
01:17:615 (77615|1,77822|0) - flip
01:31:063 - LN ended here and add one note?

Complete

Thank you for requesting and feel free to request again on my Queue :3

Thank you, it's very good and interesting :)
All accepted
Allezard

AetherKeys wrote:

Hello , NM request here :3
okay here a short mod , hope it'll be helpfull :3
COLUMN GUIDE
1|2|3|4


mod
Allezard's IN :
00:10:581 - untill here 00:12:236 - i hear hi-hat there , u can add here note here 00:10:684 - 00:10:891 - 00:11:098 - 00:11:305 - 00:11:512 - 00:11:718 - 00:11:925 - 00:12:132 -
00:28:994 (28994|2,28994|3,29098|0,29098|1,29201|2,29201|3) - here is my suggestion
01:27:546 (87546|2,87650|1,87650|3,87753|0,87753|2,87856|1) - here's too sample
01:29:201 (89201|2,89305|3,89305|1,89408|2,89408|0,89512|3) - make like above ^ and move 01:29:615 (89615|2) - to 4
01:49:063 - here's if u want some variations i suggest this
01:49:891 - add note in 2
okay that's all , hope this is will be helpfull :3

Complete

Thank you for requesting and feel free to request again on my Queue :3

Thanks for mod
Suzuko-P




Hi! From Suzuko-P's Modding Queue
(Sorry for late :P)

Column 1|2|3|4


EZ
00:08:305 (8305|0,8512|2,8718|1,8925|3,9132|2,9339|0,9546|3,9753|1) - My suggestion : Too hard for beginner (I saw a similar pattern on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/421342 NM diff 00:38:482. )
00:31:477 (31477|1) - Is your pattern follow instrumental or vocal? If instrument,delete it (if you follow a hat sound,it's ghost note and they are not hear that for sure)
00:33:132 (33132|2) - ^
00:34:787 (34787|2) - ^
00:36:339 (36339|1) - Delete
00:38:098 (38098|1) - Is your pattern follow instrumental or vocal? If instrument,delete it (because 00:32:098 (32098|2,32512|0)If you 1/1 note beat,you should always make it all 1/1 beat)(if you follow a hat sound,it's ghost key and they are not hear that for sure)
00:39:753 (39753|2) - ^
00:41:408 (41408|3) - ^
00:44:305 (44305|1,44718|2) - ^
00:45:960 (45960|0,46374|3) - ^
00:47:615 (47615|2,48029|1) - ^
00:49:270 (49270|1,49684|0) - ^
00:50:925 (50925|1,51339|0) - ^
00:52:581 (52581|3,52994|2) - ^
00:54:650 (54650|1) - ^
00:55:891 (55891|2,56305|3) - ^
01:07:270 (67270|2,67684|3,67684|1,68098|2,68512|0,68512|3) - Make them opposite (single note > double note) (double note > single note) because of clap sound
01:08:925 (68925|1,68925|2) - It's don't have any kick or cymbal sound,so make it single note
01:25:684 (85684|0,85787|1,85994|3,86098|2,86305|1,86512|0) - Re-arrange it,it's too hard for ez diff
01:45:960 (105960|2,106374|0) - Ghost note?

Good Luck!
Rivals_7

Mod Request


DM Ashura feat. Skizzo & Hanna - Move That Body! [OsuMania]



You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it
[General]
Background: Have you deleted one of the BG on your folder, for some reason theres 2 BG there
Metadata: Fine
Mapset:fine
Difficulty Spread:Fine
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Unsnapped kiai spotted at NM
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: Fine
Timing: Fine
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4

C=Clap | W=Whistle | F=Finish


Allezard's IN



SPOILER
  1. 00:13:374 (13374|1) - should be F
  2. 00:19:270 (19270|3,19270|0) - I feel that one of these should be an LN, judging from the most LN usage here which is following the main BG noise in this section
  3. 00:19:891 (19891|1,19994|2,20098|1) - perhaps you could move this to left? wider gameplay and more balanced. since - 00:19:787 (19787|2,19994|2,20098|2) - are quite mindblocking
  4. 00:20:305 (20305|2) - seems the noise that this LN covered is not even that long? you could cut it at - 00:20:408 -
  5. 00:25:684 (25684|1,26098|2) - now i See this LN is kinda pointless compared to section 11 (- 00:18:856 -){if you have no idea what section 11 is}
    you might want to reconstruct this section to be similar like it or.... your choice. though its recommended
  6. 00:29:408 (29408|3,29408|2,29512|2,29512|1,29615|1,29615|0) - i'm kinda disagree with this pattern usage since you were follow the main kick, not pitch. recommended to reconstruct this into usual 34|12 trill like above (- 00:29:718 (29718|3,29718|2,29822|0,29822|1,29925|3,29925|2,30029|1,30029|0) - ) for more balanced play
  7. 00:40:787 (40787|0) - remove C, there's already C on the same timeline
  8. 00:46:994 - the songs atmosphere kinda change here. you could curve the notes - 00:47:098 (47098|2,47201|0,47305|1,47512|0,47615|1) - to the left since..... you do that at - 00:47:718 (47718|3,47822|2,48029|3,48132|2) - see below img


    1. 00:49:063 - atmosphere change again. I guess you could do the vice versa things like before ^
    2. 00:50:408 (50408|0,50512|1) - swap this to due to atmosphere change again
  9. 01:03:753 (63753|1) - maybe move this to 1? to avoid triple stacking

    1. 01:04:581 (64581|1) - ^
    2. 01:05:822 (65822|1) - ^ (why so many lel)
    3. 01:07:063 (67063|2,67477|2) - 1|4 respectively, same reason as ^
  10. 01:11:615 (71615|2) - theres 2 pitch here yet you mapped it as one LN. either split it or make the LN into single note, your choice

    1. 01:18:236 (78236|1) - ^
  11. 01:12:236 (72236|3) - ehhhhhh i cant hear clearly what you were following here

    1. 01:18:856 (78856|0) - ^
  12. 01:16:787 (76787|3) - should be C
  13. 01:35:305 (95305|1) - the transition is really weird here, would recommend to remove this one



HD



SPOILER
  1. 00:27:546 - I believe this should be double. see - 00:28:374 (28374|2,28374|3) -
  2. 00:34:374 - i think you can made this more balance-wise?

  3. 00:37:063 (37063|2,37063|3,37477|1,37477|0) - I think they should be ended on the blue line above? (1/4). I think the sound still exist imo
  4. 00:39:339 (39339|2) - move to 2 perhaps?
  5. 00:40:374 (40374|2,40787|3) - I think allezard got the right snap of this LN. Compare the LN length with it

    1. and literally applied to other LN that are similar afterwards
  6. 01:10:994 (70994|1) - Should this LN start in the blue line below? (1/4). see IN to compare. also the noise start from there too.

    1. there is some LN that are similar. applied to that too
  7. 01:31:787 (91787|1,91994|1,92201|1,92408|1) - this is kinda evil for left hand lel. spread that pls
  8. 01:49:891 (109891|3,109891|0) - the end should be longer than this

    Ranking Criteria - Guidelines wrote:

    Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.



NM



SPOILER
  1. disable widescreen
  2. 00:33:753 (33753|1,34167|0) - well....this LN should be longer imo. listen closely
  3. 01:09:443 (69443|1,69546|2,69856|1,69960|2,70167|1) - i guess you can ctrl+h? one-way stair is kinda hard to be followed especially intermediate players. This will also improve players hand independence towards further tricky patterning
  4. 01:27:753 (87753|1,87960|3) - 3|2 respectively? imo - 01:27:650 (87650|0,87753|1) - is kinda uncofortable for newer player
  5. 01:35:925 (95925|1,96029|2,96339|1,96443|2) - i guess you could do thesame ctrl+h thing here?
  6. 01:49:063 (109063|3,109167|2,109270|1,109374|0,109477|1,109581|2,109684|3,109787|2) - wh..... pls no back-and-forth stairs in NM o_O, you could do alternate pattern instead :u

  7. the end should be longer


EZ



SPOILER
  1. disable widescreen
  2. 00:03:960 (3960|0,4374|3) - i think this should ended in the blue line below? (1/4) but since this is EZ and for the sake of newbie player, i guess thats fine. not sure tho
  3. 01:15:856 (75856|1) - delete this and - 01:16:063 (76063|2) - move this down to white line (1/4). kick are the most obvious to recognize so why not?
  4. the end should be longer

Good luck :D
edit: some grammar error xd
Meiju
EZ
01:08:925 - у тебя тут две ноты в одной

01:19:684 - LN
NM
Начало второго киаи не на тике

01:16:787 (76787|3) - на 3

01:43:270 (103270|0) - на 2
IN
00:00:753 - ЛН

00:01:684 (1684|2) - удали

00:33:960 (33960|3,34374|3) - удали

00:33:753 - дабл

00:34:167 - дабл

00:37:063 - 00:37:477 - 1/2 ЛНы

00:40:787 - дабл
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Mage wrote:

EZ
01:08:925 - у тебя тут две ноты в одной | Ой кек, как она там оказалась
01:19:684 - LN
NM
Начало второго киаи не на тике | Вообще два киаи .-.

01:16:787 (76787|3) - на 3

01:43:270 (103270|0) - на 2
Ibrahim


hai mod as your req

Hard

00:15:960 (15960|2,16167|2,16374|2,16581|2,16787|2) - this is pain for hard diff
00:53:925 (53925|2,54029|2) - i'm not sure about this
01:16:374 - add note like here 01:15:546 -
01:24:650 - to 01:25:891 - idk why you make col 1 empty
01:36:029 (96029|1,96236|1,96443|1,96650|1) - this too it's pain
01:37:270 (97270|2,97477|2,97684|2,97891|2) - ^

another diff all good i think.
Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
AJIekceu

Ibrahim wrote:



hai mod as your req

Hard

00:15:960 (15960|2,16167|2,16374|2,16581|2,16787|2) - this is pain for hard diff
00:53:925 (53925|2,54029|2) - i'm not sure about this
01:16:374 - add note like here 01:15:546 -
01:24:650 - to 01:25:891 - idk why you make col 1 empty | I got carried away by other columns :lol:
01:36:029 (96029|1,96236|1,96443|1,96650|1) - this too it's pain
01:37:270 (97270|2,97477|2,97684|2,97891|2) - ^

another diff all good i think.
Good luck! :D
Thank you! :)
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