Hi guy
[Everlasting Snow]
Anyway, feel free to ask me if anything needs to be explained
Good luck!
[Everlasting Snow]
- 00:35:197 (1) - No NC for consistency with 00:40:667 (2,3) -
- 00:36:609 (3,4,5,6) - shiet this is just really hard to read and i still cant acc it even after looking at the editor lol. i think the problem is 3,4 is right next to each other but 5,6 is a jump when we are expecting something similar. also I think 00:36:961 (5) - sounds like it should be 1/12, but the way it is right now makes it even weaker than 00:36:609 (3) - . Heres some suggestions http://puu.sh/mQ9ta/25b77a3fbc.jpg or http://puu.sh/mQ9vA/e32d0bbe0a.jpg
- 00:42:256 (2,3,4,5) - ^
- 00:59:903 (6) - it should be closer to 00:59:020 (2) - right?
- 01:29:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - try splitting the NCs like this to make it easier to read http://puu.sh/mQaBf/f232801c9d.jpg
- 01:30:079 (2,3,2,3) - its not in a perfectly straight line btw, idk if that was intentional
- 01:34:138 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC on 01:34:138 - and 01:35:550 - instead
- 01:53:903 - errr theres not much consistency between the patterns in this section... like when im playing i have no idea what to expect and that shouldnt be the case when the music is actually very similar. Lets compare 01:54:432 (4,5,6) - 02:00:079 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:05:726 (4,5,6,7,8) - 02:11:197 (3,4,5) - Maybe you can try alternating between stuff like this http://puu.sh/mQcqk/0ae3b931e6.jpg but right now its this http://puu.sh/mQcrx/c355b84931.jpg and that's too much of a difference imo. I guess this appears in a lot of places in the map so I won't mention it anymore lol
- 02:06:256 (8) - you can move to x244y61 to make a perfect triangle with 02:05:903 (6,7) -
- 02:10:314 (7,8) - try moving 8 a little closer. maybe you can even blanket with 02:11:020 (2) -
- 03:00:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same as 01:29:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
- 03:01:491 (3,1) - this jump is huge and possibly unintentional idk
- 04:09:432 - this part is really fun, well done!
Anyway, feel free to ask me if anything needs to be explained
Good luck!