18:25 SuperMICrophone: lel
18:25 *MrSergio is away: Duties irl
18:25 MrSergio: :3
18:25 SuperMICrophone: lel
18:25 *SuperMICrophone is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/848143 Halozy - Masshiro na Yuki [Everlasting Snow]]
18:25 SuperMICrophone: im assuming right?
18:25 MrSergio: sure
18:25 MrSergio: that one is fine too
18:25 MrSergio: just remember I still ahve to finish HS x
18:25 MrSergio: x/
18:25 SuperMICrophone: okok
18:26 MrSergio: I'll probably do it tonight ( maybe lol)
18:26 SuperMICrophone: 00:01:491 (4,4) - lmao personal preference but i don't think these needs whistles o3o
18:26 MrSergio: 00:07:138 (4) - like this
18:26 MrSergio: indeed
18:27 SuperMICrophone: 00:23:991 - missing note?
18:28 SuperMICrophone: 00:29:638 - and here
18:28 MrSergio: added both
18:28 MrSergio: 1.4 sliders ftw
18:28 MrSergio: 1/4
18:29 SuperMICrophone: really cool mapping btw
18:29 MrSergio: >1 month just to think about it since I am lazy
18:29 MrSergio: basically, the first 30 seconds took me twice as much as the rest of the map lol
18:30 SuperMICrophone: ahaha
18:30 SuperMICrophone: 01:12:609 (9) - i like the flow better if (9) is to the left of (8), maybe try something like
http://puu.sh/mY6jG/9896babb0f.jpg18:31 SuperMICrophone: (i also moved 10)
18:32 MrSergio: the movement itself works, it's just that the direction of 10 plays kinda sloppy
18:32 MrSergio: maybe I can converti into circles
18:33 SuperMICrophone: 01:30:079 (2,3,2,3) - not sure about the need for these jumps, the bass line is pretty much the same so idk
18:33 SuperMICrophone: also let me know if im going too fast hurdur
18:33 MrSergio: nope
18:33 MrSergio: don't worry
18:33 SuperMICrophone: yeah you could always make (10) like a stack on (1) huehue
18:34 MrSergio: as for 01:30:079 (2,3,2,3) - I feel like there is a stronger beat ffor 01:29:903 (1,1,1) - , therefore the jump
18:35 SuperMICrophone: yeah i get that
18:35 SuperMICrophone: but i feel like the direction of the jump is kinda awko taco
18:35 MrSergio: that's true, gonna re-arrange that
18:36 SuperMICrophone: 02:26:550 (3,4) - consider making this a 1/4 slider to match the vocals
18:36 MrSergio: lol, someone already pointed out the same thing
18:37 SuperMICrophone: its more of a minor thing mainly because it plays fine as is
18:37 MrSergio: I'm focusing on the kigh pitch notes tho and those circles are graver than the "kirara kirara"
18:37 MrSergio: also that ^
18:38 SuperMICrophone: 03:00:432 (2,3,2,3) - same comment of weird flow :s
18:38 MrSergio: yeah, going to re-arrange that one too
18:38 MrSergio: (for the 2034567th time xD)
18:38 SuperMICrophone: uheuhuehuhue
18:38 SuperMICrophone: 03:11:020 (6) - i think this should be further from (5)
18:38 SuperMICrophone: like the same distance away as (7) is to (6)
18:38 MrSergio: they are problematic, damn xD
18:39 MrSergio: moved
18:40 SuperMICrophone: 03:34:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think these can be spaced further as well
18:40 SuperMICrophone: but i guess its ok as is
18:41 SuperMICrophone: 04:06:609 (1,2,1,2) - normally id recommend leaving a 1/4 gap in between these and then spacing them
18:41 MrSergio: following the synth there and it made me think it is a more calm part
18:41 SuperMICrophone: but i tried it a few times and its fine
18:41 MrSergio: with bigger spacing it feels overdone
18:41 SuperMICrophone: ok
18:42 MrSergio: oh, that one
18:42 MrSergio: I have a reasoning for that
18:42 MrSergio: every time you find those 1/8 sliders you have 2 options:
18:42 MrSergio: if they are attached, they have 1/8 gap between them
18:42 MrSergio: if there is a jump, you have a 1/4 gap between them
18:42 SuperMICrophone: yeah ok
18:42 MrSergio: this way I ensure there are no slider breaks or whatever
18:43 SuperMICrophone: 04:13:667 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i actually really like this haha
18:43 MrSergio: x)
18:43 SuperMICrophone: 04:29:550 (3,4,5) - i think the angle that (4) and (5) on is too steep; should move up and to the right a bit
18:44 MrSergio: it was already used and seein the angle, is like having stacked circles after it (almost)
18:44 MrSergio: rip english
18:44 SuperMICrophone: lol
18:44 SuperMICrophone: ok
18:45 MrSergio: 01:20:373 (3,4,5,6,7) -
18:45 SuperMICrophone: 04:56:903 (7) - consider ctrl+g here, then also 04:57:079 (8) - ctrl+g this
18:45 MrSergio: it's basically the same, just rotated
18:45 MrSergio: yep
18:46 MrSergio: i dunno why I set them like that lol
18:46 SuperMICrophone: 05:03:079 (1) - flow can be improved by changing the slider shape
18:46 MrSergio: 05:07:314 (1,2) - stacked these right now since they played awfully
18:46 SuperMICrophone:
http://puu.sh/mY7aF/1281c5e180.jpg maybe like this more
18:46 SuperMICrophone: ok
18:47 MrSergio: fixed
18:47 SuperMICrophone: well that's it
18:48 SuperMICrophone: super well done job on this is a very very good map