Nise Eikoku Shinshidan - Animal Life · forum

Yolshka

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Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-01-30T22:39:44+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Last edited by Yolshka 2016-03-20T18:17:41+00:00, edited 40 times in total.

greenwood0301

236 posts

Joined November 2014

greenwood0301 2016-02-07T18:39:22+00:00

Hi ShadyAngel here the mod you ask for ^^

HARD

You should switch to AR7

00:00:769 to 00:10:038 Don't do slider chain

Use more the single note

Don't use the same pattern over and over again

01:06:836 to 01:14:926 use some slider

NORMAL

The timming seems wrong to me check that out

Use CS 3 or 3,5

Use AR6

Hope i was usefull GL HF With your mapping^^

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-07T18:57:08+00:00

Thank you Ill update when i get the chance.

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Cheri 2016-02-09T01:57:37+00:00

Incomplete GD coming through!

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Title:Animal Life
TitleUnicode:Animal Life
Artist:Nise Eikoku Shinshidan
ArtistUnicode:偽英国紳士団
Creator:ShadyAngel
Version:Dj Lucky's Insane
Source:Touhou
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Before I go finish this, I need to know if you like the diff or not so I won't be wasting time finishing this.
It only 40s long but it should give you an idea on how I going to map the rest of it. This is going to be at least a 4.50 - 5.10*.

I never really map songs like this but I didn't wanted to decline your request so easily so please forgive me if it's crappy to you. :c

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-09T05:56:40+00:00

Thank you for your work!

I checked it, and I like it so far, so if you feel like finishing it I'll be grateful!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-02-09T14:37:49+00:00

IRC

22:48 Electoz: sry
22:48 Electoz: my internet tripped up
22:48 Electoz: just went offline
22:48 Electoz: where are we again?
22:48 ShadyAngel: My EZ is still unfinished
22:48 ShadyAngel: though
22:48 Electoz: hmmm
22:48 Electoz: so
22:48 ShadyAngel: i was using distance snap
22:49 Electoz: hmmm
22:49 Electoz: then
22:49 Electoz: any specific diff you want me to look at?
22:49 Electoz: or do you want me to throw some general stuff?
22:49 ShadyAngel: yeah mainly hard difficulty
22:49 ShadyAngel: general stuff also good
22:50 ShadyAngel: im hungry for knowledge
22:51 ShadyAngel: :d
22:51 Electoz: sec
22:51 Electoz: lemme
22:51 Electoz: test it
22:52 ShadyAngel: ^^
22:52 Electoz: As for Hard
22:52 Electoz: actually
22:52 Electoz: it tastes better than it looks tbh
22:53 ShadyAngel: :d thats good to hear
22:53 ShadyAngel: though this diff
22:53 Electoz: let's see
22:53 Electoz: hm?
22:53 ShadyAngel: got remapped like 8 billion times
22:53 ShadyAngel: but still not satisfied :/
22:54 Electoz: well
22:54 Electoz: normally
22:55 Electoz: 00:07:510 (2) - 00:07:510 (2) - repeat sliders like these
22:55 Electoz: is rarely seen nowadays
22:55 Electoz: because
22:55 Electoz: repeat sliders with 2 repeats or more, can be confusing most of the time
22:55 Electoz: and ruins the flow
22:56 Electoz: we won't use it unless the song really provides the need for it
22:56 Electoz: and I don't think this is the case for this song << just my opinion
22:57 ShadyAngel: yeah ill remap it maybe with circles?
22:57 Electoz: up to you
22:57 ShadyAngel: btw im writing this in a txt if you don't mind
22:57 ShadyAngel: so ill know
22:57 Electoz: try some different rhythms
22:57 Electoz: well I'll just post the chatlog in your thread anyways
22:57 Electoz: so dw
22:57 Electoz: if you miss something you can look for it later
22:58 ShadyAngel: ah yeah thats a good idea
22:58 Electoz: 00:22:679 (4,5,6,1) - 01:27:060 (1,2,3,4) - 01:42:903 (2,3,4,5) - You seem to cram objects up in some place
22:58 Electoz: ^ just a few I picked, not all
22:59 Electoz: thing is
22:59 Electoz: it doesn't look neat
22:59 Electoz: try to do an overlap when you have a purpose
22:59 Electoz: like
22:59 Electoz: "it's the same part of the pattern", "it fits the rhythm of the song" or "it would look neater when overlapped" and etc
23:00 Electoz: unintentional overlaps can cause the objects in that part feel dense in terms of visual
23:00 Electoz: and that doesn't appealing, at least to the major amount of players
23:00 Electoz: and it doesn't look neat as well
23:00 ShadyAngel: mhm yeah it is really ugly
23:01 ShadyAngel: maybe i should up the DS
23:02 Electoz: how much DS you used here?
23:02 Electoz: 0.7?
23:02 ShadyAngel: 0,9x
23:03 Electoz: uhhh
23:03 Electoz: that's really low tbh
23:03 Electoz: thing is
23:03 Electoz: some people just misunderstood that
23:03 Electoz: higher diffs = higher DS
23:04 Electoz: ^ actually that's not always the case
23:04 Electoz: you have to find an appropriate amount of DS
23:04 Electoz: to match your main SV in each diff
23:04 Electoz: if you have a good sv+good DS, the map will flow more smoother
23:05 ShadyAngel: >< yeah thats exactly what i thought
23:05 Electoz: also
23:05 Electoz: just curious but
23:05 Electoz: what's your standard of putting NCs?
23:06 ShadyAngel: uh... nightcore ? :D sorry ><
23:06 Electoz: lol
23:06 Electoz: new combo
23:06 Electoz: anyways
23:06 Electoz: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Glossary
23:06 Electoz: ^ your osu! dictionary
23:07 ShadyAngel: oh new combo
23:07 ShadyAngel: i basically
23:07 ShadyAngel: map the whole song
23:07 ShadyAngel: and then
23:07 ShadyAngel: edit the combos
23:08 ShadyAngel: though this map may have been an exception
23:08 ShadyAngel: it was kinda random here :/
23:08 Electoz: hmmm
23:08 Electoz: let's say
23:08 Electoz: most people
23:09 Electoz: in easier difficulties, we put NCs every two downbeats << this is quite international
23:09 Electoz: for higher difficulties
23:09 Electoz: sometimes we put NC as for an indication of a new pattern, sv changes, difference in beat spacings, etc
23:10 Electoz: well I'm not really tell you to change anything
23:10 Electoz: cuz
23:10 Electoz: NCing is an subjective stuff
23:10 Electoz: just make sure you have your own standard of putting it
23:11 ShadyAngel: mhm so new combos are serious business
23:11 ShadyAngel: ill change that
23:11 ShadyAngel: really messed up here
23:11 Electoz: ncs get more srs in higher diffs
23:12 Electoz: hmmm
23:12 Electoz: that's all for Hard I guess
23:12 Electoz: mainly you have to remap because DS and stuff
23:12 ShadyAngel: yeah ill try a higher DS
23:12 Electoz: ^well, sry if that's harsh
23:12 Electoz: anyways, any other diffs?
23:13 ShadyAngel: Normal probably
23:13 ShadyAngel: or you feel like or have the time insane but the thread said to avoid that
23:14 ShadyAngel: and i just realized it was made 3 months ago actually
23:14 ShadyAngel: ><
23:15 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/894724 Nise Eikoku Shinshidan - Animal Life [Normal]]
23:15 Electoz: basically
23:15 Electoz: your sv
23:15 Electoz: and star rating
23:15 Electoz: is pretty damn high for normal
23:15 Electoz: sv could be nerfed 
23:16 Electoz: like, 0.8-1.3 would be an appropriate amount
23:16 Electoz: you can adjusted it later so it fits with DS
23:16 ShadyAngel: oohh
23:16 ShadyAngel: yeah im dumb
23:16 ShadyAngel: i thought it was
23:16 ShadyAngel: universal
23:16 ShadyAngel: amongst all diffs
23:17 Electoz: three things that if you get it completely wrong then you have to remap :
23:17 Electoz: 1.DS 2.SV 3.Weird overlaps
23:17 Electoz: ^my opinion only
23:17 ShadyAngel: ds sv overlaps got it
23:17 Electoz: alright then
23:17 Electoz: lemme test it for awhile
23:17 Electoz: *a while
23:18 Electoz: 00:47:959 - Basically
23:18 Electoz: In Normal you can make some small SV changes 
23:18 Electoz: but not like halving them
23:18 Electoz: that's too difficult for players in this level
23:19 Electoz: something like 0-0.2 SV change would be accpetable imo
23:19 Electoz: we won't do heavy SV changes even the song calls for it
23:19 Electoz: because it ruins the playability
23:20 ShadyAngel: alright so careful with sv changes especially in easier diffs
23:20 Electoz: 00:02:117 (2,3,4) - Also, this will take a bit long, some kind of advanced stuff
23:20 ShadyAngel: oh god that kiai is just terrible
23:21 Electoz: 00:02:285 - 00:02:454 - 00:02:622 - There's a same sound here that's cleary audible
23:21 Electoz: so if you're going to emphasize them, all of them should be clickable
23:21 Electoz: also
23:22 Electoz: 00:02:117 (2) - Plays really weird because you put it like it's in the same pattern with 00:02:285 (3,4)  - but it didn't represent the same instrument
23:22 Electoz: ^is that complicated? If yes then I'll try explaining it more clearly again
23:22 Electoz: *too complicated
23:22 ShadyAngel: yeah id like that haha
23:23 ShadyAngel: i kinda get it though
23:24 Electoz: 00:16:948 (1,2) - This kind of stacks
23:24 Electoz: rarely exists even in Hard
23:24 ShadyAngel: shuld be different
23:24 ShadyAngel: oh yeah so that "2" circle
23:24 Electoz: so putting it in Normal is pretty out of queston
23:24 Electoz: *question
23:25 Electoz: 00:25:038 (4) - Also, I might point this out already
23:25 Electoz: but this kind of repeat slider
23:25 Electoz: really strict in Normal and lower diffs
23:25 Electoz: I mean, in higher diffs you can put it if the song really calls for it
23:26 Electoz: but in Easy and Normal you just can't, no matter what
23:26 Electoz: cuz beginners can't handle stuff with 2 reverses
23:26 ShadyAngel: yeah so no repeaters
23:26 ShadyAngel: sliders and circles
23:27 ShadyAngel: and no stacking
23:27 ShadyAngel: ^^
23:27 Electoz: 00:53:353 (5,6,7) - Stuff like this too, too difficult for normal
23:27 Electoz: well, you can do stacking
23:27 Electoz: but not like stacking sliders like what I pointed out
23:27 Electoz: 00:59:083 (2) - What's with this slider lol
23:27 Electoz: ^basically
23:28 Electoz: when you put a slider, it means to be dragged/followed
23:28 Electoz: sliders like these doesn't require any movement and doesnt' really fit the song
23:28 Electoz: cuz it feel like you're "holding" and object instead of "tapping" them
23:29 ShadyAngel: yeah its pretty bad :d
23:29 Electoz: 01:48:971 (5,6) - This kind fo stack
23:29 Electoz: is pretty much allowed in Normal
23:29 Electoz: but not Easy
23:29 Electoz: ^telling this just in case so it's easier to understand
23:30 Electoz: 02:02:117 (2) - 02:03:802 (2) - 02:06:162 (5) - Tbh I'm not really a fan of those shapes here
23:30 Electoz: looks odd
23:30 Electoz: you can just do some more creative shapes with this length of slider
23:31 ShadyAngel: yeah i don't really like those either
23:31 ShadyAngel: i was just scared of crazy slider shapes :d
23:31 Electoz: lol
23:31 Electoz: seems like some rhythms can be improved
23:31 Electoz: but yeah
23:32 Electoz: that's pretty much covered everything for Normal
23:32 Electoz: cuz some stuff I mentioned in Hard already
23:32 ShadyAngel: yeah thank you very much ill update it
23:33 Electoz: hmm
23:33 ShadyAngel: both and probably finisth easy as well
23:33 Electoz: anything else?
23:33 ShadyAngel: well i could give you an endless amount of questions :d but you answered pretty much everything i needed
23:33 ShadyAngel: learnt quite a bunch of new things
23:34 Electoz: hmmm
23:34 Electoz: alright
23:34 Electoz: just call me when you need something then
23:34 ShadyAngel: yes thank you very much for that
23:35 ShadyAngel: i dont know what i what can i do in return :d
23:35 Electoz: well
23:35 Electoz: just put some effort in your map
23:35 ShadyAngel: silly sentence <--
23:35 Electoz: cuz I saw many people like
23:35 Electoz: bored with mapping
23:35 Electoz: and that's kinda waste tbh
23:35 Electoz: all of efforts that modder had put there
23:35 Electoz: and stuff
23:35 ShadyAngel: yeah
23:36 ShadyAngel: so far its been really fun
23:36 ShadyAngel: mapping

We did some general stuff like, DS, SV, placements and some ranking criterias.
Good luck with your mapset~ be sure to be consistent with it.

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-09T17:27:30+00:00

Yes thank you for everything Electoz!
This post is just for me to acces things more easily.

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22:54 Electoz: well
22:54 Electoz: normally
22:55 Electoz: 00:07:510 (2) - 00:07:510 (2) - repeat sliders like these
22:55 Electoz: is rarely seen nowadays
22:55 Electoz: because
22:55 Electoz: repeat sliders with 2 repeats or more, can be confusing most of the time
22:55 Electoz: and ruins the flow
22:56 Electoz: we won't use it unless the song really provides the need for it
22:56 Electoz: and I don't think this is the case for this song << just my opinion

22:58 Electoz: 00:22:679 (4,5,6,1) - 01:27:060 (1,2,3,4) - 01:42:903 (2,3,4,5) - You seem to cram objects up in some place
22:58 Electoz: ^ just a few I picked, not all
22:59 Electoz: thing is
22:59 Electoz: it doesn't look neat
22:59 Electoz: try to do an overlap when you have a purpose
22:59 Electoz: like
22:59 Electoz: "it's the same part of the pattern", "it fits the rhythm of the song" or "it would look neater when overlapped" and etc
23:00 Electoz: unintentional overlaps can cause the objects in that part feel dense in terms of visual
23:00 Electoz: and that doesn't appealing, at least to the major amount of players
23:00 Electoz: and it doesn't look neat as well

23:02 Electoz: how much DS you used here?
23:02 Electoz: 0.7?
23:02 ShadyAngel: 0,9x
23:03 Electoz: uhhh
23:03 Electoz: that's really low tbh
23:03 Electoz: thing is
23:03 Electoz: some people just misunderstood that
23:03 Electoz: higher diffs = higher DS
23:04 Electoz: ^ actually that's not always the case
23:04 Electoz: you have to find an appropriate amount of DS
23:04 Electoz: to match your main SV in each diff
23:04 Electoz: if you have a good sv+good DS, the map will flow more smoother

23:06 Electoz: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Glossary
23:06 Electoz: ^ your osu! dictionary

23:08 Electoz: most people
23:09 Electoz: in easier difficulties, we put NCs every two downbeats << this is quite international
23:09 Electoz: for higher difficulties
23:09 Electoz: sometimes we put NC as for an indication of a new pattern, sv changes, difference in beat spacings, etc

23:10 Electoz: NCing is an subjective stuff
23:10 Electoz: just make sure you have your own standard of putting it

23:11 Electoz: ncs get more srs in higher diffs
23:12 Electoz: hmmm
23:12 Electoz: that's all for Hard I guess
23:12 Electoz: mainly you have to remap because DS and stuff

23:15 Electoz: basically
23:15 Electoz: your sv
23:15 Electoz: and star rating
23:15 Electoz: is pretty damn high for normal
23:15 Electoz: sv could be nerfed
23:16 Electoz: like, 0.8-1.3 would be an appropriate amount
23:16 Electoz: you can adjusted it later so it fits with DS

23:17 Electoz: three things that if you get it completely wrong then you have to remap :
23:17 Electoz: 1.DS 2.SV 3.Weird overlaps

23:18 Electoz: 00:47:959 - Basically
23:18 Electoz: In Normal you can make some small SV changes
23:18 Electoz: but not like halving them
23:18 Electoz: that's too difficult for players in this level
23:19 Electoz: something like 0-0.2 SV change would be accpetable imo
23:19 Electoz: we won't do heavy SV changes even the song calls for it
23:19 Electoz: because it ruins the playability

23:20 Electoz: 00:02:117 (2,3,4) - Also, this will take a bit long, some kind of advanced stuff

23:21 Electoz: 00:02:285 - 00:02:454 - 00:02:622 - There's a same sound here that's cleary audible
23:21 Electoz: so if you're going to emphasize them, all of them should be clickable
23:21 Electoz: also
23:22 Electoz: 00:02:117 (2) - Plays really weird because you put it like it's in the same pattern with 00:02:285 (3,4) - but it didn't represent the same instrument

23:24 Electoz: 00:16:948 (1,2) - This kind of stacks
23:24 Electoz: rarely exists even in Hard

23:24 Electoz: so putting it in Normal is pretty out of queston

23:25 Electoz: 00:25:038 (4) - Also, I might point this out already
23:25 Electoz: but this kind of repeat slider
23:25 Electoz: really strict in Normal and lower diffs
23:25 Electoz: I mean, in higher diffs you can put it if the song really calls for it
23:26 Electoz: but in Easy and Normal you just can't, no matter what
23:26 Electoz: cuz beginners can't handle stuff with 2 reverses

23:27 Electoz: 00:53:353 (5,6,7) - Stuff like this too, too difficult for normal
23:27 Electoz: well, you can do stacking
23:27 Electoz: but not like stacking sliders like what I pointed out
23:27 Electoz: 00:59:083 (2) - What's with this slider lol
23:28 Electoz: when you put a slider, it means to be dragged/followed
23:28 Electoz: sliders like these doesn't require any movement and doesnt' really fit the song
23:28 Electoz: cuz it feel like you're "holding" and object instead of "tapping" them
23:29 Electoz: 01:48:971 (5,6) - This kind fo stack
23:29 Electoz: is pretty much allowed in Normal
23:29 Electoz: but not Easy
23:30 Electoz: 02:02:117 (2) - 02:03:802 (2) - 02:06:162 (5) - Tbh I'm not really a fan of those shapes here
23:30 Electoz: looks odd
23:30 Electoz: you can just do some more creative shapes with this length of slider

Cheri

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Cheri 2016-02-10T01:26:02+00:00

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The sr ended up being lower than I actually thought... I'll fix any mistakes or change some things in the map when I get more time and update later.

Also Ill see what I can do about hitsounds when I get more time unless you want to do them instead.

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-10T06:43:57+00:00

Thank you changes added ! Nice work.

You can edit the hitsounds if you feel like, mine are just temporary.

SoySauce

174 posts

Joined July 2015

SoySauce 2016-02-12T14:35:26+00:00

Hi from my queue

Sorry I'm kinda late though

General

Dj Lucky's Insane doesn't have a preview time set
Add 'Dj Lucky' in your tags

Easy

Yes I know this is a work in progress. Still, a quick mod won't hurt right?
Why did you put the 0.5x multiplier for SV instead of just changing it to 0.8?
Use DS please
00:04:813 (2) - For a slider this long, you might wanna consider making a slider art instead of just a simple curve. To make it more interesting
00:24:364 (2,3) - 1/2 beat not really fitting for this diff
00:34:476 (4,5,6) - Fix overlap
00:37:173 (1,2) - ^
00:35:825 (6) - No more than one repeat in Easy

Normal

*cough cough*
00:01:780 (1,4) - Don't overlap
00:02:454 (4,5) - Remove stack
00:19:645 (1,2) - 1/4 beats or spacing is not allowed in Normal
00:22:173 (1,1) - In Normal, the note after a spinner must be minimum 2 beats away for recovery time.
00:25:038 (4) - No more than one repeat in Normal
00:27:735 (8) - ^
00:27:735 (8,1,2) - Do not overlap
00:30:431 (5) - Same repeat issue
00:33:128 (2) - ^
00:36:162 (3) - ^
00:38:521 (7) - ^
00:33:802 (3,2) - Fix overlap
00:37:510 (5,7) - ^
00:40:881 (3,5) - ^
00:43:409 (8,1) - Remove stack
00:47:959 - SV changes are not recommended in Normal. Especially this big of a change
00:49:308 (3) - Same repeat issue
00:51:836 (3) - ^
00:54:364 (8) - ^
00:57:398 (5) - ^
01:02:791 (4) - ^
01:05:487 (7) - ^
00:53:353 (5,6,7) - 1/4 beats are not allowed in Normal
01:28:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete these sliders. Put a circle instead for the piano
01:35:487 - Break here doesn't really fit. Continue on with the piano sounds
01:46:611 (7) - Repeats
01:49:982 - A break during kiai time is just really weird imo. Continue to map this part
02:04:813 (4) - Repeats

Insane

00:01:443 (3,4,5) - Fix slight overlap
00:13:578 (10,1) - Please fix this flow reversal here. It feels kinda out of place. Or you can make them don't overlap if you're keeping this
00:15:600 (8,9) - Don't overlap with the slider track for this 1/4 beat. Overlap with just the slider end.
00:17:791 (5,6) - Would prefer them to not overlap
00:22:004 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:229 - Well, starting from here your NC pattern just becomes random. Please keep a consistent NC pattern. You might also want to avoid long combos as they are not really liked.
00:27:566 (2,3) - Fix slight overlap
00:30:768 (4,5) - ^
00:32:454 (5,6,10) - ^
00:35:993 (7) - Please remove repeats. 1 is enough
00:38:184 (14,1,2) - Space them
00:56:555 (4,5) - ^
01:16:948 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
No major issues are found further on the map. Just try to avoid unintentional overlaps and keep your NC pattern consistent.

I'll end my mod here. Good luck!

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-12T15:29:21+00:00

Thank you very much cagrux !! I appreciate it.
I'll update as soon as i can.

EDIT: also thanks for showing that little tool, i did not know about it

DJ lucky: Slight changes to the diff:
added widescreen support, disabled countdown, set preview point.
let me know if you wish to change those back and ill update.

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Warpyc 2016-02-15T18:10:47+00:00

Hi,
Insane and general mod

Tags conflict with dj lucky's diff
you should try to find a better quality mp3, this is fine but 192kb/s is recommended
a lot of the streams are overmapped for example ( 00:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - )
Too many random slider shapes you should really try using more straight sliders and copy pasting more sliders to make it look better
00:01:106 (2) - randomly curved slider feels weird to play I'd recommend making something more visually pleasing like this http://puu.sh/n90UI/d68b2385f3.jpg
00:01:443 (3,4) - Copy first slider and past the other one for symmetry
00:03:465 (1) - Looks like there is no break but there is one, put slider further away from last note
00:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - to 00:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - random break?
01:09:532 (2,3,4,5) - I dont understand these, why are they there, its clearly a 1/2 beat and at some parts you've mapped it like 1/2 than we have these random repeat sliders
01:25:544 - another completely random break
the kiai time has really cool hitsounds good job!
so many random breaks, try to map them!

Anyways this was my mod hope it helped, I do recommend you to look at ranked maps, it really helps to understand patterns and sliders, also make sure to kd mods which put effort into helping your map! you click this button under the modders picture to give them kudosu! http://puu.sh/n91RE/30ee76f226.jpg

Good luck with your map!

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-15T18:41:39+00:00

Thank you for your mod and your help Warpyc!

had no idea about kudosu

I'll update the diff soon.
Unfortunately I have not been able to find a better quality song,I would probably have to spend money on that, but i'll be sure to check again.

Thanks again!

EDIT:found it, changed mp3 as stated above.
Updated some of it i'll change more soon, not sure why the SR is so high though.

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Cheri 2016-02-17T00:06:11+00:00

update GD

[General]
AudioFilename: Labyrinth of Touhou 2 OST 11 - Animal Life.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 11555
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 85375,115038,120937
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999998

[Metadata]
Title:Animal Life
TitleUnicode:Animal Life
Artist:Nise Eikoku Shinshidan
ArtistUnicode:偽英国紳士団
Creator:ShadyAngel
Version:Dj Lucky's Insane
Source:Touhou
Tags:Touhou Labyrinth 2 of 2hu Animal Life nise eikoku shinsidan DJ Lucky
BeatmapID:901450
BeatmapSetID:411252

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Xpa2tFQ.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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769.053458420815,337.077837837838,4,2,1,70,1,0
22342,-200,4,2,1,70,0,0
23690,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
45263,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
66836,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
93802,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
98690,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
99195,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
120768,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0

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Combo1 : 158,215,142
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 9,116,247

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280,256,118240,2,0,L|452:172,1,180
372,72,118746,2,0,P|328:48|280:72,1,90
252,192,119083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,192,119251,2,0,L|152:156,1,90
132,64,119588,2,0,P|172:40|228:76,1,90
256,196,119926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,120094,2,0,L|316:124,1,90
448,96,120431,2,0,L|372:184,2,90

I haven't check with this map in a while so I made a bit of tweaking near the beginning.

On Topic: someone already mention it so ill mention it again since you probably didn't understand. Although you put Dj lucky in your tags on my GD, you didn't however did the same to all the other diffs. Really minor but it best to fix it right away.

Another I feel like your kiai mode could be a bit longer but ill let you decided on this one.

I' can't really talk too much about it but I feel your map is a bit overmap in certain areas. I'm just a newbie at modding so I can't really tell what I mean by overmapped so try looking up other beatmaps similar to this and try to observe how they map theirs. Since I am new to modding I really can't give too much advice so sorry.

Off Topic but something to be careful for: Try not to give kudosu to people who gave you GD since I didn't really help made your map better. It's not going to hurt you but some moderator or whatever is probably just going to deny the kudosu if he/she sees it so its not a big deal.

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-17T07:49:59+00:00

Thank you for the diff DJ lucky, ill fix the things you mentioned.
I'll be careful with kudosu.

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-02-19T19:00:25+00:00

yo

[General]
Source should be 東方Project.
Check AiMod.

[Easy]
00:00:769 (1,1) - avoid overlap.
00:02:033 - why did you place green point here, I don't see volume, slider velocity, sampleset changes.
00:12:903 - same here.
And others.
00:15:600 (3,1) - avoid overlap.
A lot of overlaps... Nah, fix it.
00:41:218 (3) - do it more symmetrical.

[Normal]
Do spacing consistent. Use only one spacing. And 1.6x spacing too high for Normal diff. Make slider velocity higher and spacing lower.

[Hard]
Make spacing more consistent, same spacing for the same patterns and etc.
01:52:678 (6) - NC.
01:54:195 (12) - NC.

Good luck

Yolshka

669 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-20T10:12:56+00:00

Thank you for the mod Namki, you can expect an update soon.

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2016-02-25T01:39:36+00:00

KEEP IN MIND THAT A LOT OF THE STUFF I SAY IS WRONG, YOU REPEAT IN YOUR MAPS. SO IF YOU WANT TO FIX, LOOK OUT FOR ALL OF THEM, BECAUSE I DO NOT LIST THEM.

Well, anyways, here is some definitions since you are new to mapping:
DS - Distance Snap.
NC - New Combo.
Blanket - When a object is enveloped in a slider but not overlapping.
SV - Slider Velocity.

[Easy]
00:15:600 (3,2) - These overlap, please try to fix it.
00:16:948 (1,2,1) - This just seems awfully too close.
00:22:342 (2) - move to x:188, y:204 for perfect blanket.
01:24:364 (3) - Why not do it like you did before with the 1/2 repeat slider?
01:31:105 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These are pretty jumpy for an easy. Not sure if you should nerf or not.
01:52:678 (1) - The red points are unrankable because they slow down the slider.

[Normal]
00:00:769 (1,2) - alright gonna play a normal map and WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA the SV is waaaay too high. Too high for even a hard difficulty. Please put it down. By that, I don't mean for one section, I mean the SV for the whole map of normal.
00:08:521 (3) - Hard to read for normal players.
DS needs to be more than 1.0x. That's too low for normal, maybe 1.3X?
00:35:825 (1,2,3) - Whoa why this now?
00:41:218 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Hard to read when overlapping like that at that low of an AR, and high AR isn't an option here so change pattern.
01:22:341 (2,1) - Not pretty at all.
01:45:600 (3) - Again hard to read.

[Hard]
Ok I can clearly see you didn't adjust DS for diffs. It's very important. Make this at least 1.7x.
Second of all, make some jumps! It's very important to make a fun to play map! Without them, it's pretty boring.
00:03:128 (6) - You know how you get these little pauses after these notes? Make it a 1/2 slider and then it's pretty good!
00:10:207 (1,1,2,3) - Don't just make sudden changes like this for no reason. It maybe funner but it's not mapping the song, and let's be real here. It's called a beatmap, it's supposed to map the rhythm.
00:19:308 (1,2,1) - Also you can't just spam NC everywhere. It needs to make sense. NCs should be in a place where they end a pattern or rhythm. You know why? They break follow points, and that's why they break up patterns and rhythms.
00:34:729 (2,3) - Don't do this, it doesn't work musically according to music theory. The beginning of the triple is not empathized at all because it's a slider end instead of a hit circle.
00:57:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oooh you did fantastic here! Now just apply that to the whole map and you've got it! I don't mean change everything to a pattern, but whereever it deserves it!
01:07:173 (2,3) - Why the three? It's nonexistent in the rhythm you are mapping?

[Insane]
I'm afraid it's about the same as ^.

Yolshka

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Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Yolshka 2016-02-25T05:01:13+00:00

Thank you Osuology I'll fix it in the near future.

Kyle Y

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Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-02-27T14:17:46+00:00

SPOILER

21:31 Kyle Y: hi, sorry I am buzy yesterday
21:31 ShadyAngel: hi there Kyle Y
21:31 ShadyAngel: yeah i was too :d
21:33 Kyle Y: um, I read you map, you still need to fix a lot
21:34 ShadyAngel: >< yeah i'm really bad at this haha
21:34 *Kyle Y is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/892884 Nise Eikoku Shinshidan - Animal Life [Hard]]
21:34 Kyle Y: are you free to have a look on it togather?
21:34 ShadyAngel: yes
21:34 ShadyAngel: I'd be greatful
21:35 Kyle Y: okay
21:38 Kyle Y: um.... still 2 main preblems maybe
21:38 Kyle Y: 1st about rhythm, 2nd about overlapping
21:38 ShadyAngel: yes
21:39 Kyle Y: 00:01:948 - if you skip this beat, I think it suits the song more
21:40 ShadyAngel: hmm yeah it does actually
21:40 Kyle Y: yup? I think I have updated
21:40 Kyle Y: any problem on my version?
21:41 ShadyAngel: hmm how do i check it :d
21:41 ShadyAngel: sry >< lil bit confused here
21:42 *Kyle Y is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/892884 Nise Eikoku Shinshidan - Animal Life [Hard]]
21:42 Kyle Y: this song right?
21:42 Kyle Y: I go to dl again, wait
21:43 ShadyAngel: alright .d
21:44 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/nni9o/e26bb28274.jpg
21:45 ShadyAngel: yeah :d
21:45 ShadyAngel: should i make like this
21:45 Kyle Y: yup?
21:46 ShadyAngel: aalright so
21:46 ShadyAngel: slider slider circle slider slider
21:46 ShadyAngel: if i see this correctly
21:47 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/nnigs/30051d8467.jpg
21:47 Kyle Y: I prefer this one
21:48 ShadyAngel: hmm yeah seems good
21:48 Kyle Y: 00:03:465 - same as above
21:48 Kyle Y: 00:07:594 (2) - overmapped 1/4 circle, there is no sound here
21:49 Kyle Y: 00:15:179 (5) - ^ also
21:50 Kyle Y: 00:15:179 (5) - I will checked until here
21:50 Kyle Y: 00:06:836 (4,5) - poor overlapping
21:51 Kyle Y: 00:06:667 (3,6) - ^
21:51 Kyle Y: about the overlapping problems
21:51 ShadyAngel: yes
21:51 Kyle Y: 00:06:667 (3,6) - If you overlap about this, your map will become messy
21:52 ShadyAngel: hmm yeah
21:52 Kyle Y: 00:04:139 (3,3) - a lot of example in fact
21:54 ShadyAngel: i'll fix it, so no overlaps like that
21:54 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4617599 you placed the notes too concentrated in the centre, but 4 concer do not mapped
21:54 Kyle Y: it is not good to do so
21:55 ShadyAngel: hmm that didn't evenc cross my mind
21:55 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/nniAY/87ee0765d3.jpg if you want to place note more natural, you can blanket the slider like this
21:59 ShadyAngel: yeah i'll do that
22:05 ShadyAngel: woah that blanket trick works wonders
22:05 Kyle Y: of course
22:05 Kyle Y: I did it in every map
22:05 Kyle Y: 00:10:207 (1,2) - you can widely use it
22:06 ShadyAngel: yeah :d
22:07 Kyle Y: 00:08:184 (5,2) - remember you still need to avoid poor overlapping
22:08 ShadyAngel: yes
22:08 Kyle Y: 00:22:173 (1) - this spinner is unrankable, lack of recovery time. In hard diff at least 1 beat is required
22:09 ShadyAngel: oh :p
22:10 Kyle Y: 00:25:122 - be careful on 1/4 sound, here still no sound for 1/4
22:11 Kyle Y: 00:31:527 - 00:31:695 - but here have
22:12 Kyle Y: maybe you can map about 10% and let me check first
22:13 Kyle Y: re-map, I mean
22:13 ShadyAngel: hmm alright i can do that
22:13 ShadyAngel: i delete the rest then i guess
22:14 ShadyAngel: btw you are a huge help to me you know that i hope
22:15 Kyle Y: I just did what I can do for you
22:15 ShadyAngel: :d
22:15 Kyle Y: maybe I post this log in forum and get the kudo first, I can still help you later on

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