This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
11:48 Pokegn: Hello, I just saw you are online, and you told me on my map (https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/415772) that I could call you, to point some general things
11:49 Electoz: yes
11:49 Electoz: ya
11:49 Electoz: how about now?
11:49 Pokegn: yes I would appreciate it
11:52 Electoz: can you link your map?
11:52 Pokegn: ?
11:53 Pokegn: sorry Im mexican, and I have some limited english :/
11:54 Electoz: I mean
11:54 Electoz: can you put the link of your map in here?
11:54 Pokegn: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412096
11:54 Electoz: so I can download it
11:55 Pokegn: (sorry for the bat background Im searching for a good one, but I didnt like no background)
11:57 Electoz: this is gonna take long
11:57 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/896349 Cupids Chocolates OP [Normal]]
11:57 Electoz: ^I'll go with this first
11:58 Electoz: by the way, you can say "ok" or something while I'm pointing out general things
11:59 Electoz: so I know that you're reading
11:59 Pokegn: ok
12:01 Electoz: 00:24:687 (4,1) - When mapping a song that doesn't have any vocals, you shouldn't leave an empty space like this
12:01 Electoz: it's too big and players will get bored
12:01 Pokegn: I have a background, updating now
12:01 Pokegn: ok
12:01 Pokegn: on what difficulty?
12:01 Electoz: this song has many instruments to follow so you should try mapping them based on instruments
12:01 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/896349 Cupids Chocolates OP [Normal]]
12:02 Electoz: 00:36:757 (1) - 00:41:727 (3) - Also, slider like these didn't make much sense, because you're "skipping" many instruments for no reason
12:02 Electoz: When you're mapping, try to follow the instruments consistently
12:03 Pokegn: ok, ill have that in mind
12:03 Electoz: don't randomly skipped some instruments you're following
12:03 Electoz: *skip
12:04 Electoz: 00:00:546 (1,2,3,4) - 00:48:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In easier difficulties, we use sliders more than circles
12:04 Electoz: you used too much circles here, and the pattern seems pretty old
12:04 Electoz: This kind of pattern was used like, 5 years ago or something
12:04 Pokegn: ok
12:04 Electoz: If I remembered correctly
12:05 Electoz: Don't try to put too many circles at one
12:05 Electoz: try to have a good transition between circles and slider
12:05 Pokegn: ok
12:05 Electoz: have a good balance between them
12:06 Electoz: 01:10:127 (1,2,3,4) - We'll stacking objects only when the song presents the "exact" same sound
12:07 Electoz: if you think the song didn't represent the same sound then you shouldn't stack them
12:07 Electoz: also, in easier difficulties, don't stack objects too much
12:07 Electoz: like, you can stack 2 objects
12:07 Electoz: but more than that it'll be harder to read for players in this level
12:07 Pokegn: ok
12:07 Electoz: 01:27:878 (2,3) - Also , stack like this, under the slider tail
12:08 Electoz: is what we won't do nowadays
12:08 Electoz: well you can stack this but, it's pretty uncommon
12:08 Electoz: just be sure to keep that in mind
12:09 Pokegn: ok
12:09 Electoz: If you're having trouble finding where the each instrument lands
12:09 Electoz: try listening to the song with 25% speed, that will make things a lot easier
12:10 Pokegn: ok
12:10 Electoz: let's see
12:10 Electoz: well, that's pretty much I'll point out now
12:10 Electoz: I'll give you some links in your beatmap forum later
12:11 Pokegn: ok thank you
12:11 Electoz: np
12:11 Electoz: you're welcome
12:11 Electoz: also
12:11 Electoz: Things I pointed out there
12:11 Electoz: are just "some" of the issues
12:11 Electoz: not all of them
12:11 Electoz: I want you to get the "concept" what I'm trying to explain
12:12 Electoz: so be sure to get what I'm saying and apply what you learned throughout the map