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Asfand
[Easy]
  1. 01:06:798 (3,1,2) - spacing inconsistency
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:548 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:798 (5) - how about moving this here(see image) to get better flow to 00:25:548 (1) - and make nice triangle patterns
  2. 00:36:423 (1,2,1,2) - quite deceptive spacing for a Hard difficulty, maybe stack or have very low spacing
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:923 (2) - ctrl+g this and this 00:11:673 (1) -
Starfy

Asfand wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:06:798 (3,1,2) - spacing inconsistency Absolutely not
Tks for mod and no change
Sonnyc
no kd
[Easy]
  1. Consider AR3 for the spread if Zerss changes their difficulty setting.
[Normal]
  1. cs is lower than Easy. I wouldn't think this as an oridinary situation.
  2. There is currently spread issue in this map; the gap with Normal-Hard is too noticable. My conclusion is that your difficulty settings were too low, and I recommend CS4, AR6, OD5.
  3. Using the custom hitsound in this mapset is recommended for consistency. Or please at least use the custom sliderslide if you really do not prefer the other custom hitsounds.
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:110 (2) - Personally I think it would look more organized if you use the same curve rate with (1) by using ctrl+H,J.
  2. 00:49:548 (1,2) - The end of (1) and the slider body of (2) was pretty close which can be easily avoided. I would move (2,3) to (500,260).
  3. 00:58:548 (1) - 00:59:673 (1) - Slider velocity multiplier of 2.00x was way too much. I agree the idea of a speed increase here, but the current speed was pretty drastic. I'd recommend 1.5x for safety, or you could using something higher than that.
지금 보니까 노래 잔잔해서 노말 세팅 저렇게 조절하면 따로 난이도는 필요 없을듯
Starfy

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
  1. Consider AR3 for the spread if Zerss changes their difficulty setting.
Fixed and Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/jewm0/e469899743.zip
rui

Asfand wrote:


  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:798 (5) - how about moving this here(see image) to get better flow to 00:25:548 (1) - and make nice triangle patterns
    fixed
  2. 00:36:423 (1,2,1,2) - quite deceptive spacing for a Hard difficulty, maybe stack or have very low spacing changed distance. but pattern kept

Sonnyc wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:47:110 (2) - Personally I think it would look more organized if you use the same curve rate with (1) by using ctrl+H,J. fixed
  2. 00:49:548 (1,2) - The end of (1) and the slider body of (2) was pretty close which can be easily avoided. I would move (2,3) to (500,260). fixed
  3. 00:58:548 (1) - 00:59:673 (1) - Slider velocity multiplier of 2.00x was way too much. I agree the idea of a speed increase here, but the current speed was pretty drastic. I'd recommend 1.5x for safety, or you could using something higher than that. want to keep SV2.0
지금 보니까 노래 잔잔해서 노말 세팅 저렇게 조절하면 따로 난이도는 필요 없을듯
Asfand and Sonnyc thank you for mod.

http://puu.sh/jeDWc.zip
Zerss

Asfand wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:548 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency Done!

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
  1. cs is lower than Easy. I wouldn't think this as an oridinary situation.
  2. There is currently spread issue in this map; the gap with Normal-Hard is too noticable. My conclusion is that your difficulty settings were too low, and I recommend CS4, AR6, OD5. Used these diff. settings. Actually, I was the first one who made the GD, so, I didn't knew that there will be a difficulty gap :/
  3. Using the custom hitsound in this mapset is recommended for consistency. Or please at least use the custom sliderslide if you really do not prefer the other custom hitsounds. Done, I've tried to use them, but it was a bit weird, so I'll keep these (with the sliderslide)
Thanks for the mods!

Update!
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Asfand wrote:

[insane]00:10:923 (2) - ctrl+g this and this 00:11:673 (1) - umm.... no
all Update.
Zerss
Changed some little stuff :3

link
McLaren12
Hey, here's my mod!

SPOILER
Starfy's Easy

00:54:048 May be me, but the jump to the this circle and to the next circle feels a lot larger than the one previous. Moving it up just a touch should fix it
00:59:673 ~ 01:00:798 That's quite a distance, even for that pause
01:23:673 Maybe you could erase (2) and (3) and finish the song off there with an ending spinner starting at 01:23:673 to 01:25:548

Zerss' Normal

00:05:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here
00:34:548 Add NC
00:35:673 This slider could be cleaned up a little bit, feels a little plain
01:02:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here
01:08:673 ^
01:19:548 ^
01:22:923 Add NC
01:23:673 Remove NC and/or ending spinner like in easy

Rui's Hard

00:24:423 ~ 00:24:798 Not sure why these notes are here, don't really match with anything in the song
00:30:423 ^
01:23:673 Ending spinner??

KAn

00:07:548 Remove NC
00:08:298 Remove NC
00:10:548 Remove NC
00:11:673 Remove NC
00:30:798 Remove NC
00:34:173 Remove NC
00:34:548 Add NC
00:36:985 Remove NC
00:37:173 Remove NC
00:40:548 Remove NC
00:43:173 Remove NC
00:59:298 Remove NC
01:00:235 Remove NC
01:02:110 Remove NC
01:08:110 Remove NC
01:14:110 Remove NC
01:17:110 Remove NC
01:20:485 Remove NC
01:20:673 Add NC
01:21:235 Remove NC
01:23:110 Remove NC

Hope I helped! :D
rui

McLaren12 wrote:

Rui's Hard

00:24:423 ~ 00:24:798 Not sure why these notes are here, don't really match with anything in the song ok fixed
00:30:423 ^ ^
01:23:673 Ending spinner?? nope
Thank you McLaren12

http://puu.sh/jm1y7.zip
Beomsan
fuwafuwa desu
Zerss

McLaren12 wrote:

Hey, here's my mod!

Zerss' Normal

00:05:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here Done
00:34:548 Add NC Done
00:35:673 This slider could be cleaned up a little bit, feels a little plain I don't see the problem :/
01:02:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here no
01:08:673 ^ no
01:19:548 ^ no
01:22:923 Add NC Done
01:23:673 Remove NC and/or ending spinner like in easy Done

Hope I helped! :D
Thanks for your mod! :)

Update!
Starfy

McLaren12 wrote:

Starfy's Easy

00:54:048 May be me, but the jump to the this circle and to the next circle feels a lot larger than the one previous. Moving it up just a touch should fix it I don't think so tbh => http://puu.sh/jnA80/4328c7449f.jpg
00:59:673 ~ 01:00:798 That's quite a distance, even for that pause Because of the Distance Snap
01:23:673 Maybe you could erase (2) and (3) and finish the song off there with an ending spinner starting at 01:23:673 to 01:25:548 No change
Tks for mod and no change
Topic Starter
HonKAn

McLaren12 wrote:

Hey, here's my mod!

KAn

00:07:548 Remove NC
00:08:298 Remove NC
00:10:548 Remove NC
00:11:673 Remove NC
00:30:798 Remove NC
00:34:173 Remove NC Done
00:34:548 Add NC Done
00:36:985 Remove NC
00:37:173 Remove NC
00:40:548 Remove NC
00:43:173 Remove NC
00:59:298 Remove NC
01:00:235 Remove NC
01:02:110 Remove NC
01:08:110 Remove NC
01:14:110 Remove NC
01:17:110 Remove NC
01:20:485 Remove NC Done
01:20:673 Add NC Done
01:21:235 Remove NC
01:23:110 Remove NC

Hope I helped! :D
Thanks you modding
all Update.
Luel Roseline
SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
Topic Starter
HonKAn

S A V E R Y wrote:

SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
모딩감사합니다.
GugUCorn
별 쏘고 감 ;)

조만간 모딩 해주지 흠흠;;

D-157

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Luel Roseline

HonKAn wrote:

S A V E R Y wrote:

SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
모딩감사합니다.
(뜨끔)그건 안해줬나? 星
Akiyama Mizuki
starfy
00:13:548 (1) - finish doesn't fit at all, for a calmful piano
00:19:548 (1) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1) - offscreen
01:17:673 (2) - ^ - yes, a bit

zerss
AR AT LEAST 4.5~5, 6 is beyond ridiculous for this difficulty
okay map i think

rui
AR7 fits way better IMO
00:12:423 - mute from here to 00:12:798 - , these sounds have nothing to do with the song
00:48:798 (3) - has to be notes, drum on 00:48:985 - definitely needs to be emphasized
neat

honkan
00:01:173 (1,2,1) - 여기가 점점 상승하는 톤에 줄어드는 간격에 00:04:173 (1,2,1) - 여기는 점점 줄어드는 톤에 상승하는 간격이네요. 뭔가 잘못됐습니다.
좋네요
Zerss

bbj0920 wrote:

zerss
AR AT LEAST 4.5~5, 6 is beyond ridiculous for this difficulty i'm ok with moving it to 5, i'll let HonKAn do it by him/herself
okay map i think
thx
Starfy

bbj0920 wrote:

starfy
00:13:548 (1) - finish doesn't fit at all, for a calmful piano
00:19:548 (1) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1) - offscreen
01:17:673 (2) - ^ - yes, a bit
All fixed
http://puu.sh/n3KKz/e48b8610d2.zip
Topic Starter
HonKAn
2/12 UPDATE
Abelia
[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion.

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요.
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯...
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요.
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히...
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요.




열심히 보긴 봤는데 다른 다른 난이도는 잘 안보이네요 ㅜㅠ
Gloria Guard
M4M

[General]

Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal


[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요

SPOILER
00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^
00:50:673 (1) - ^
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^
01:00:235 (1) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - ^
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^


곡이 잔잔하고 맵도 괜찮아서 딱히 잡을게 없었네요 Good Luck ~
rui

bbj0920 wrote:

rui
AR7 fits way better IMO changed AR7.5
00:12:423 - mute from here to 00:12:798 - , these sounds have nothing to do with the song changed volume 10%
00:48:798 (3) - has to be notes, drum on 00:48:985 - definitely needs to be emphasized
neat I see. this placement change
Thank you bbj0920
Dailycare


[starfy's Easy]
00:14:673 (2) - Fix blanket
00:25:548 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (2) - ^

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better

[rui's Hard]
why did you use small CS as old-style beatmaps?

00:56:673 (2,2,2) - Move to (268, 104)

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요
Zerss

Moly wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion. if you mean, make a blanket with (2), then flow would be broken

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics are you talking about 00:25:548 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:28:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Because it was right in the middle of them xD

Dailycare wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better Well, it's following the piano, so i guess it's right
okay, no changes, waiting for Gloria Guard's answer
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Moly wrote:

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.(ok)
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯... (ok)
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히... (ok)
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요. (ok)

Gloria Guard wrote:

M4M

[General]
Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal (ok)


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요네.

SPOILER
00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC (ok)
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC (ok)
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:50:673 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:00:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)

Dailycare wrote:

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제 (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요 (ok)
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요 (ok)

감사합니다.
depzdai
#modreq. Wow, the map is good...
rui's Hard
- 00:29:673 (7) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc9jV/710fe4ecbe.png
- 00:37:548 (1,2) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc8vw/8bbd21de46.png
- 00:52:548 (1) - A map would be more interesting with some slight changes of a pattern. https://puu.sh/rcbGq/6a8f596c28.png

Insane
- 00:17:673 (2) - ctrl+g. A pattern with lots of ways to play with always makes the players less bored.
- 00:49:173 (2,1) - Blanket.
- 01:04:923 (2,3) - Can it be blanket? https://puu.sh/rcacr/3674b0deac.png
Topic Starter
HonKAn

depzdai wrote:

#modreq. Wow, the map is good...

Insane
- 00:17:673 (2) - ctrl+g. A pattern with lots of ways to play with always makes the players less bored. ( A really good way.)
- 00:49:173 (2,1) - Blanket. nope
- 01:04:923 (2,3) - Can it be blanket? https://puu.sh/rcacr/3674b0deac.png nope



Thanks you modding
rui

depzdai wrote:

#modreq. Wow, the map is good...
rui's Hard
- 00:29:673 (7) - Blanket. fixed https://puu.sh/rc9jV/710fe4ecbe.png
- 00:37:548 (1,2) - Blanket. fixed https://puu.sh/rc8vw/8bbd21de46.png
- 00:52:548 (1) - A map would be more interesting with some slight changes of a pattern. keep https://puu.sh/rcbGq/6a8f596c28.png
Thank you!

new code
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intiaz
alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this:

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff

Normal:
change ar to 4, od to 4 and hp can stay the same
00:02:298 - try not to put notes on top of sliders in normal diffs
00:06:798 - ^
00:24:798 - ^
00:28:173 - ^
ok when you see a note on top of slider just fix that anywhere else

Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother

Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)
-NeBu-
Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound.
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) -
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) -
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me)

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!


Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound. ok
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) - ok
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) - nope
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me ok
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me) A good point.

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!



Thanks~ modding!
rui

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!
Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother
Sorry all not fixed. Thank you mod.
Starfy

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
Topic Starter
HonKAn

StarForYou wrote:

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar

2016/10/03 last
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2018-05-18 21:22 bbu: 저같으면 00:20:673 (2) - 를 오버랩시키지않고 00:19:548 (1) - 꼬리에 블랭킷을 시키지않았을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 가끔 bn들이 저런 오버랩 잡는경우가 많아서
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 00:23:110 (2) -
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 이 피아노음이랑
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 00:23:485 (1) - 이쪽 보이스까지 다 잡으려고 하시는것 같은데
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: https://puu.sh/Aotal/e858ebd6a6.jpg
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 이 박자 추천드려요
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 적용해보니 상당히 잘어울리네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 앞에 흰틱음무시한게 좀 불편하네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 보이스맞춘거라 어쩔수없는면도 있긴하지만 .. 이건 마음대로 하시길
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 뉴콤의시작은 00:34:548 (1) - 여기가아니라
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 생각해보니 여기 앞 흰틱 음은없는데
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:33:798 (1) - 똑같은음인데도 불구하고 여긴 노트가있네요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 마음대로 하셔도 괜찮긴하지만 의외로 이런거 지적많이당해요 :)
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 개인적으로
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 00:39:423 (1,2,3) - 00:42:423 (1,2,3) - 00:45:423 (1,2,3) - 이런부분은
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 디스턴트를 맞춰줬으면 좋겠다는 생각이랄까
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 00:46:360 (4) -
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 이거 오버매피인거아시죠 ?
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: *오버매핑
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 지워주세요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 맵 비트가 거의 빠진곳없이 촘촘히흘러가는데 00:50:110 (2) - 갑자기 앞흰틱 비어지는거 좀아쉬ㅏ워요 ㅠㅠ
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 저같으면 https://puu.sh/AotjV/e9623cf23c.jpg 이렇게 모든보이스를 다 잡지않을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ㅆㅌㅊ 이거 좋은듯
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 00:58:735 (2,3) - 이거
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 01:00:235 (2,3) - 이거랑 디스턴트 맞춰도 이쁠것같아요
2018-05-18 21:32 bbu: 끝
Riana
00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:08:298 (2) - ^
00:10:923 (2,1) - 오버랩 좀 애매한거같네요
00:22:548 (1,2) - 여긴 앞엔 보컬 아무것도 안했는데 00:28:173 (1,2,1,2) - 여긴 서클 2개쓰셨네요
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:548 (1,2,3,1) - 좋으신쪽으로 일관성있게 리듬해주시는게 좋을거같네요
00:46:360 (4) - 소리 안나는거같네요
00:52:360 (2) - 여기도 소리 없는거같네요

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ
Reillia
[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 -
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) -

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :D
00:46:548 (1,2,3,4) - 별다른 강조되는 음도 없는데 DS가 뜬금없이 너무 커진것 같네용 굉장히 이상하게 느껴졌습니다..
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음악은 점점 강해지는 분의기인데 SV는 점점 줄어드는게 좀 어색하게 느껴지네요
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