pingal1ty wrote:

Inya's Isnane is great. 10/10 Would play for an FC when it becomes ranked. Been trying a while tho but no luck, my best was 99.28% acc with almost FC, failed a jump almost at the end, but it feels like my hands are moving along with the rythm, keep the good work guys and thanks Log Off Now for awesome maps you are working at.

RyoKazuka wrote:

AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it)

EZ

01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean)
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow

EZ WAS GOOD M8

NM

NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE

Neme's HD

Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you !


EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn Nah, the sliders and the jump have a reason, "prepare for it and make this jump to calm down at the following slider"
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger Good idea

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M from your queue.
(because you said you wanna a M4M ^^) yayyyy!!

[Easy]
00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - short repeat slider is not recommended in Easy diff. what about changing them into 1/1 sliders? (though there does have a durm beat) I'll wait for further feedback on this, I think they play fine are easy enough to read since they're essentially 'isolated' from the rest of this buildup section
01:38:181 (4) - ^ Again I'll wait for more feedback on this one, since there is a double bass drum hit on this slider that matches the music, however I have changed some other of these sliders later on in the map which could prove hard to read/pointless, so thanks for pointing them out ^^

[Normal]
fine

Hard/Insane GD Mods

[Hard]
01:13:838 (6,2) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
01:23:781 (1,2,3) - a bit crowded here. move them away a little.

[HB's Insane]
00:54:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i don't know why there 5 circles stream and 3 circles stack. the music is not special here.
00:57:209 (4,5,6) - make them into jump, just you do with - 00:56:866 (2,3) - .because the music is not changed here.

not finished?0 0

[Inya's Insane]
00:40:581 (4,7) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
00:41:952 (3,4) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^

00:52:581 (1) - listen to music, the slider should start at - 00:52:238 (2) - .

01:01:838 (6,1) - visualable overlap. move them away a little to get a better pattern.

01:40:581 (1,2,4) - very crowded here, move them away?

02:33:895 (1,5,6,7,8) - there shouldn't make a big jump. the music is quiet here.

good luck.

Thank you for the mod!! And yes HB's diff is currently unfinished, hopefully will be done soon

[ Nemesis ] wrote:

Btw. Log Off Now, you created great Hitsounds thank you very much i like it

Log Off Now wrote:

Modding Inya's Insane and Neme's Hard

[Neme's Hard]

Flow is generally good, although emphasis is sometimes slightly strange, and feels strange to the player and there are occasional unnecessary triples are found in this difficulty.

00:35:095 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:36:638 (3,1) - ^
00:40:581 (2) - Maybe make this the opposite of 00:39:895 (1) - ? (Ctrl + H then move back to original position)
00:45:209 (5,6) - These two notes aren't needed, I understand why they are here though, remember that this is a hard difficulty though
00:52:238 (1) - You could end this spinner here 00:53:609 - and then have a circle placed 00:54:638 - although i'm not sure which is better tbh XD
00:58:924 (1) - I would have a circle here and then start a slider on 00:59:095 - downbeats usually want to be clickable
00:59:952 (5,6) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:03:466 (2) - ^ (Keep 3 though as it's on the downbeat)
01:04:838 (2) - ^
01:05:952 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved
01:21:809 (5) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:25:409 (2) - ^ (Won't keep pointing these out now since you know what they look like)
01:41:609 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try something like this?
01:54:638 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved
02:09:724 (4) - Maybe try this?
02:11:438 (4) - This could be turned into either a jump between 02:11:438 - and 02:11:609 - or made into a circle triple
02:24:809 (2,1) - This looks a bit ugly, you could try and do something different with 2 to make it look cleaner, the overlap here doesn't work well imo, also remove NC on 02:25:495 (1)
02:39:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this part is overmapped, it's the end of the music in a quiet part, I don't see why it needs lots of emphasis on quiet notes

I know it seems like a lot but it would really improve the quality of the map

[Inya's Insane]

Again Flow is generally good with some emphasis issues

00:33:038 - 00:44:009 - I would reduce the spacing in this section since they are relatively big jumps considering how calm the music is at the moment
00:39:895 (1) - I would have a long slider here as well (like 00:38:866 (4) - here) since it's the exact same note in the guitar and still the calm part of the introduction
01:01:838 (6,7) - I would follow what you did previously at 01:00:466 (6,1) - and use a second slider on the downbeat since it shows clear emphasis on the echos in the music and also plays pretty nicely
01:07:324 (1) - I would replace this with two single circles
01:35:781 (5,7) - Consider making 5 blanket 7?
01:38:866 - 01:49:838 - I would reduce the spacing in this section also, even though it is a lot more intense than the previous comment about this it is hard to keep stamina for these size jumps throughout the map but there are lots of opportunities for cool stack patterns and smaller 'linear' jumps. I'll try show you what I mean in screenshots
01:38:866 (1) - 01:41:438 - For example, this section could be changed to this, of course you can put your own take on it or make it cleaner if you choose to use this suggestion

Lots of Images

01:41:609 (1) - 01:44:181 (3) - For this section you could follow a similar pattern to above, but instead of stacking circle -> slider you could follow what you have already and change the pattern of the notes, for example 01:42:638 (6) - would move to where 01:42:466 (5) - currently is and vise versa and I would change 01:43:324 (9) - to two seperate circles and maybe have a jump here and I would also change 01:44:009 (2,3) - to be a slider to match 01:43:666 (1). Hopefully this is helpful for the rest of this section since currently I'm not sure what part of the music you're trying to follow with the current positioning of the sliders in the timeline
01:49:838 (3,4,5,6) - Again I would seriously consider reducing spacing in this section, since there are some quite audible 'click things' in the music XD. I would also suggest following a similar thing to what Nemesis has done in this section since I found it rather enjoyable to play, and the NC's on each click work very well. Don't directly copy though, maybe change the SV between each click so the length is different, idk it's up to you
02:28:238 (1) - Instead of this slider being wavey, I think it would look better if it was much sharper, almost lightning bolt like (or bigger waves, either works)
02:33:895 - 02:43:495 - Is again I feel very overmapped, this part of the music should give a calm ending, but theres big jumps again and lots of imo unneeded notes

[]

Hopefully this was of use to you both I haven't modded HB's Insane since it's not finished yet, also going to reply to your mod now Ryo (wow this is a long post XD)

Ryo's Mod

RyoKazuka wrote:

AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd Ok

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks Done

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot Good Idea Although I changed it to a 'dark icy blue' since it would fit the background better

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it) fs spinners q.q Fixed XD

[box=EZ]01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider I see your point, changed it to an angular slider that follows the flow
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean) Fixed
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd Fixed - I don't drink but it was at least 3:30am XD
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow changed
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow changed

EZ WAS GOOD M8 noice

[box=NM]NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE NOICE

[box=Neme's HD]Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you !




EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger

Thank you for the mod!

1. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this kinda hard for Easy?
2. 01:06:638 (2) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 02:06:295 (1) .
3. 01:49:152 (4,1) - Can you improve the flow here? Also the shape+symmetry here 01:48:466 (3,4) doesn't look too good imo as the heads are overlapping the tails.
4. 01:55:324 (1,3) - Whistles should be either on the head/tail of both sliders because they give a proper feedback to players, since you made hitsounds consistent in every diffs so I suggest you to do something with the rhythm on this part.
5. 02:41:952 (1,1) - Imo the last circle didn't give a strong enough impact to be clicked with such a low approach rate, I would prefer a slider here instead of these two circles.

1. 00:51:552 (4) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 00:56:352 (1) - 01:16:238 (3) . And a few more that almost touching it.
2. Generally looks fine.

1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved.
2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better.
3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play.
4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late.

[Easy]

1. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this kinda hard for Easy? zzz changed to 1/1's q.q since everyone says its too hard
2. 01:06:638 (2) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 02:06:295 (1) . my monitor is super large so it's nowhere near it on mine so it doesn't touch for me and i don't notice it q.q, fixed
3. 01:49:152 (4,1) - Can you improve the flow here? Also the shape+symmetry here 01:48:466 (3,4) doesn't look too good imo as the heads are overlapping the tails. changed sliders to curved, don't really want to change much else because i like the 'figure eight' flow here
4. 01:55:324 (1,3) - Whistles should be either on the head/tail of both sliders because they give a proper feedback to players, since you made hitsounds consistent in every diffs so I suggest you to do something with the rhythm on this part. will consider it, i wanted to hitsound the piano but I can understand your point here, i'll think on it a bit more
5. 02:41:952 (1,1) - Imo the last circle didn't give a strong enough impact to be clicked with such a low approach rate, I would prefer a slider here instead of these two circles. made a shitty shark fin slider XD, i'll change it once I have a better idea of what I could do with a slider here, good suggestion though

[Normal]

1. 00:51:552 (4) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 00:56:352 (1) - 01:16:238 (3) . And a few more that almost touching it. zzz
2. Generally looks fine.

Neme's Hard

[Hard]

1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved.
2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better.
3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play.
4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm.

I haven't mod for a few days so my modding might be a bit bad, sry for that in advance.
Good luck~

-Nighthawk- wrote:

This is my M4M! Your mapping style is very nice, and I'm hard pressed to find many mistakes, here I go:

Easy
02:11:781 (1,2,3) - can you straighten 2 and 3 in relation to the end of 1 please? Fixed
02:41:952 (1) - feel free to put a spinner here, since not much happens in the end. It previously used to be a spinner but the spinner was too short for easy and normal difficulties and didn't really fit well

Normal
02:41:952 (1) - same as above Same as above

Neme's Hard
00:26:181 (5,6) - can you replace this with a slider and hitcircle from 00:25:495 (3) - ? I think that would sound nicer and make more sense as the other drawn out vocals just before this have this pattern too.
02:05:352 (3) - take this out, as this is silence.
02:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the last one, these have notes on the blue ticks.
There are very similar cases to these in this difficulty, and it seems you put them in for extra difficulty, which is nice, but I'm pretty sure that this song doesn't have noise on any blue tick

Nemesis' Diff

HB's Insane
00:36:295 (2,4) - these notes fall on silence, I think you should remove them

HB's Diff - Although this difficulty is still WIP

Yeah sorry, I can't find much, someone more experienced might find something though, but as it stands this is a fine beatmap. I hope it gets ranked soon!

Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/




Easy

SPOILER

[*] plays fine, but id really recommend changing hitsounds in the following sliders/notes:
[*] 01:45:724 (3) - add a whistle at the slider start good catch
[*] 01:47:781 (2) - delete the whistle at slider start i prefer to keep this since it acts as a build up to the long slider -> cymbal new section
[*] I think it sounds better tbh check other parts like this i only mentioned one since i havent spoted anything more, but if you find something similar and you like this hitsound consider changing it

Normal

SPOILER

[*] 01:28:581 (3,1) - blanket maybe? would mess up spacing so nty ^^
[*] 01:29:952 (3,1) - fix this blanket done
[*] 01:57:381 (4,1) - ^ done
[*] 02:06:295 (1,2) - ^ this one is fine?
[*] 02:09:038 (1,2) - fix this blanket a little bit done
[*] 02:11:781 (1,3) - blanket this I want to keep both shapes the same here and a blanket here is an extremely small detail that doesn't affect gameplay in this instance, and tbh i don't think it looks that bad anyway q.q, i'll change it depending on further feedback
[*] 02:19:324 (2,1) - fix this blanket done

Neme's Hard

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend?
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right?
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - )
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx

HB's Insane

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend this slider to the previos white tick http://imgur.com/AxUdpdn
[*] 00:23:438 (4) - dont make these sort of really hard curved shapes unless it fits the tune, for calm music like this i dont think any sliders should pop up, so i probably wount mention them in the remainder of this mod but try to have a lookout for those
[*] 00:24:466 (5,1) - blanket
[*] 00:37:838 (7,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 00:51:038 (2,3,4,6) - overlap kinda awkward fix this pls
[*] 01:06:981 (5,2) - ^
[*] 01:22:409 (1) - ctrl +g maybe
then at this point i realised oh its WIP haha so far so good

Inya's Insane

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length from the white tick before that http://imgur.com/t1gCDHu
[*] 00:22:066 (1) - id say make another timing point here and decrease the volume to 30% it is really quite here it gets louder 00:33:038 (1) - which 50% is fine i think
[*] 00:54:466 (4) - make a timing point and make it 10-15% volume since it gets louder
[*] 02:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think the jumps fit there try something like this http://imgur.com/0VqltgA personally i think this plays better remember this is a 4 star song no need for so many jumps and squares
[*] 02:10:409 (7) - change the timing point for the end of kiai time here, and start it here 02:11:095 (1) - at this point is where there should be a burst
[*] 02:34:409 (3,4) - kinda eh overlap
[*] 02:42:981 (4,5) - ^
[*] 02:43:324 (5,2) - ^

So far nice map tbh Good luck

Dono027 wrote:

From my queue :3

[Normal]

00:33:724 (1,1) - Delete NCs oops, XD, removed NC on 2nd slider (also fixed other weird nc's in this section)

01:40:581 (4,5) - I recommend 1/2 beat slider with reverse + circle

01:43:324 (4,5) - Same Currently like these as they are, but will change if more people suggest it


[Neme's Hard]

00:43:324 (1) - 1/1 beat slider without reverse sound better.

01:15:209 (4) - End out of the grid

01:33:037 (5) - The slider have a really strange point at the end x)

02:16:495 (3) - Delete circle

02:24:809 (2) - The slider make a blanket only with (3) why not blanketing for 1 & 3 at the same time ?


Neme's diff (i hope he's not dead and will actually check these q.q)

That's all for me, if you want a mod for your other maps, go on my queue !
Good luck !

SuperMICrophone wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Easy]

00:22:066 (1) - finish? Added a whistle instead, finish is a bit too much imo for this, thanks for pointing it out though ^^ Also reminded me to fix some of the other missing hitsounds in this diff
01:38:866 (1,2,3) - looks weird; would be better if you could edit the pattern so (1) and (3) are symmetrical across (2) I don't understand what you mean here?
01:48:466 (1,2) - i want these to blanket lol I think it adds a bit of variety compared to the previous blanket, also if I did blanket I would have to remap the next section because of the long slider being aligned to 'turn' at the kick

only slightly concern about the difficulty is the use of non-stop 1/1 in the first kiai, maybe working in some 2/1 here and there would be better especially because the beginning is so slow. Also, I'm not sure about the 1/2 repeat sliders because of the high BPM but again these are just minor concerns.

I understand what you mean and depending on more feedback i'll add in some longer sliders, but as it stands I think it's ok for now

[Normal]

00:22:066 (1) - finish? Same comment as easy
00:26:181 (3,4) - blanket can be improved by making the curves steeper Fixed, didn't originally intend for this to be a blanket but it looks better as one
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - looks sloppy; maybe more something like this? (I only edited the direction of (2): Decided to change the direction of 1 instead for a more curved shape which is what I was going for originally, good shout on this

SPOILER

01:34:067 (3) - curve can be slightly adjusted so the end is more up and to the right for better flow this is such a minor detail q.q changing this wouldn't affect flow much if at all imo
01:46:409 (6) - adjust direction so it forms a line of symmetry where (1) and (5) are symmetrical across the line of (6)? Ok

SPOILER

02:02:181 (1,1) - make the grey (1) a ctrl+g version of the pink (1)? I have these at different angles intentionally
02:32:009 (2) - you can make a cooler slider than this! :p but howwwwww q.q.q.q.q.q im so bad at slider art q.q

GD's

[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3)
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))?
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)?
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles?
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat
02:18:466 (6) - ^
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth.
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^

[Inya's Insane]

00:32:009 (4) - i definitely don't think the vocal is intended to be on the blue tick; it just occurs as a result of the fade in effect. either way, it sounds really awkward so I really think you should shift this ahead to the white tick and make it a 1/2 slider
00:47:438 (4,5) - space these further apart
00:56:352 (7) - NC
00:56:695 (1) - RNC
00:59:095 (8) - NC
00:59:609 (1) - RNC
01:04:238 (7) - RNC
01:04:581 (1) - NC
01:08:695 (1,2) - weird flow, maybe vertically invert (2) in a ctrl+j sort of way
01:10:066 (7) - NC
01:18:295 (6) - NC
01:20:695 (1) - RNC
01:21:038 (2) - NC
01:22:409 (1,2) - should be much further apart
01:23:781 (5) - NC
01:25:838 (1) - RNC
01:26:524 (3) - NC
01:29:266 (6) - NC
01:30:981 (3,4) - space further apart
01:32:009 (7) - NC
01:38:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks really messy
01:39:038 (2,3) - these first two beats aren't spaced close together in all of your following patterns, so by the same logic space these apart
01:50:524 (3) - ends on a strong beat that really should be clicked on; make this two hitcircles
01:52:409 (1) - RNC
01:52:581 (2) - NC
01:52:752 (1) - RNC
02:33:895 (1) - this section is way too loud, consider turning down the volume

I think patterning still needs some work; there's a lot of overlap and inconsistency in flow & pacing. Hopefully these points help though.

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC

Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/




Easy

SPOILER

[*] plays fine, but id really recommend changing hitsounds in the following sliders/notes:
[*] 01:45:724 (3) - add a whistle at the slider start
[*] 01:47:781 (2) - delete the whistle at slider start
[*] I think it sounds better tbh check other parts like this i only mentioned one since i havent spoted anything more, but if you find something similar and you like this hitsound consider changing it

Normal

SPOILER

[*] 01:28:581 (3,1) - blanket maybe?
[*] 01:29:952 (3,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 01:57:381 (4,1) - ^
[*] 02:06:295 (1,2) - ^
[*] 02:09:038 (1,2) - fix this blanket a little bit
[*] 02:11:781 (1,3) - blanket this
[*] 02:19:324 (2,1) - fix this blanket

Neme's Hard

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend?
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right?
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - )
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx

HB's Insane

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend this slider to the previos white tick http://imgur.com/AxUdpdn
[*] 00:23:438 (4) - dont make these sort of really hard curved shapes unless it fits the tune, for calm music like this i dont think any sliders should pop up, so i probably wount mention them in the remainder of this mod but try to have a lookout for those
[*] 00:24:466 (5,1) - blanket
[*] 00:37:838 (7,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 00:51:038 (2,3,4,6) - overlap kinda awkward fix this pls
[*] 01:06:981 (5,2) - ^
[*] 01:22:409 (1) - ctrl +g maybe
then at this point i realised oh its WIP haha so far so good

Inya's Insane

SPOILER

[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length from the white tick before that http://imgur.com/t1gCDHuDone
[*] 00:22:066 (1) - id say make another timing point here and decrease the volume to 30% it is really quite here it gets louder 00:33:038 (1) - which 50% is fine i think Good idea
[*] 00:54:466 (4) - make a timing point and make it 10-15% volume since it gets louder Done it with all of the stream hits, thx for the idea
[*] 02:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think the jumps fit there try something like this http://imgur.com/0VqltgA personally i think this plays better remember this is a 4 star song no need for so many jumps and squares Already fixed
[*] 02:10:409 (7) - change the timing point for the end of kiai time here, and start it here 02:11:095 (1) - at this point is where there should be a burst Done
[*] 02:34:409 (3,4) - kinda eh overlap
[*] 02:42:981 (4,5) - ^
[*] 02:43:324 (5,2) - ^ Done all 3

So far nice map tbh Good luck

SuperMIC wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Easy]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
01:38:866 (1,2,3) - looks weird; would be better if you could edit the pattern so (1) and (3) are symmetrical across (2)
01:48:466 (1,2) - i want these to blanket lol

only slightly concern about the difficulty is the use of non-stop 1/1 in the first kiai, maybe working in some 2/1 here and there would be better especially because the beginning is so slow. Also, I'm not sure about the 1/2 repeat sliders because of the high BPM but again these are just minor concerns.

[Normal]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
00:26:181 (3,4) - blanket can be improved by making the curves steeper
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - looks sloppy; maybe more something like this? (I only edited the direction of (2):

SPOILER

01:34:067 (3) - curve can be slightly adjusted so the end is more up and to the right for better flow
01:46:409 (6) - adjust direction so it forms a line of symmetry where (1) and (5) are symmetrical across the line of (6)?

SPOILER

02:02:181 (1,1) - make the grey (1) a ctrl+g version of the pink (1)?
02:32:009 (2) - you can make a cooler slider than this! :p

[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3)
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))?
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)?
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles?
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat
02:18:466 (6) - ^
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth.
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^

[Inya's Insane]

00:32:009 (4) - i definitely don't think the vocal is intended to be on the blue tick; it just occurs as a result of the fade in effect. either way, it sounds really awkward so I really think you should shift this ahead to the white tick and make it a 1/2 slider Nope, that's even more weird
00:47:438 (4,5) - space these further apart Done
00:56:352 (7) - NC
00:56:695 (1) - RNC
00:59:095 (8) - NC
00:59:609 (1) - RNC
01:04:238 (7) - RNC
01:04:581 (1) - NC Done all
01:08:695 (1,2) - weird flow, maybe vertically invert (2) in a ctrl+j sort of way Done
01:10:066 (7) - NC
01:18:295 (6) - NC
01:20:695 (1) - RNC
01:21:038 (2) - NC Done all
01:22:409 (1,2) - should be much further apart Fixed i guess
01:23:781 (5) - NC
01:25:838 (1) - RNC
01:26:524 (3) - NC
01:29:266 (6) - NC Done all
01:30:981 (3,4) - space further apart Kay..
01:32:009 (7) - NC
01:38:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks really messy Fixed
01:39:038 (2,3) - these first two beats aren't spaced close together in all of your following patterns, so by the same logic space these apart Fixed these
01:50:524 (3) - ends on a strong beat that really should be clicked on; make this two hitcircles Done
01:52:409 (1) - RNC
01:52:581 (2) - NC
01:52:752 (1) - RNC Done all
02:33:895 (1) - this section is way too loud, consider turning down the volume Kay

I think patterning still needs some work; there's a lot of overlap and inconsistency in flow & pacing. Hopefully these points help though. Don't think so

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC

1. 00:45:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - First thing is the NC's here are on the red ticks, which don't make much sense with the music. The second is I don't hear why you're using a back and forth pattern like this. If anything, a pattern like this should start on 00:45:038 (5) - since thats when the weird dropplet effect things in the background of the music start.
2. 00:52:238 (2,1,1,2,3) - These are all too quiet in my opinion.
3. And here starts my general hand-wavey mod. For the first two kiais:
   
   1. You have a constant 1/2 beat throughout the entire first two kiais, and while that may be whats in the music, there are plenty of other things you can map in the music to break this up a bit. A lot of mappers frown upon this, especially in longer songs, because ultimately osu! is a rhythm game and this isn't really a rhythm chorus, its just a metronome of 1/2s.
   2. Most of the chorus is spent with the player jumping in a clockwise motion, which can be bad for mouse players (from what I'm told) and is also kind of tiring for the wrist of a tablet player as well.
   3. Listening to the music closely, I understand that it would probably be frustrating to have to be 3/4th or 4/4th sliders in here. What I recommend is abusing some repeating sliders here and there to give the player a break. Also, lower DS a bit all across the board and have it get higher at some of the more... intense? (Its really hard to clarify what would be intense in the song, you as the mapper should make that call) parts.
   Tbh, I know its bad, but thats all I reall feel like pointing out, I'm kind of tired. If you want any clarifications to my mod, or if you want me to do a longer mod for your diff, shoot me a PM or catch me in game, I'd be more than happy to as I like the song, I'm just not feeling the desire to do this right now.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved. sure
2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better. agreed, also changed new combo slider for a better shape
3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play. nice suggestion, i've changed the pattern so the downbeat is clickable which should feel much more natural
4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm. changed into a stack, hopefully thats a bit better

I haven't mod for a few days so my modding might be a bit bad, sry for that in advance.
Good luck~

-Nighthawk- wrote:

This is my M4M! Your mapping style is very nice, and I'm hard pressed to find many mistakes, here I go:

Neme's Hard
00:26:181 (5,6) - can you replace this with a slider and hitcircle from 00:25:495 (3) - ? I think that would sound nicer and make more sense as the other drawn out vocals just before this have this pattern too. I think this pattern plays perfectly fine since it's mainly following the piano here and since the vocal changes seamlessly between words it's hard to make it clickable
02:05:352 (3) - take this out, as this is silence. done
02:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the last one, these have notes on the blue ticks. the bass drum is being hit on the red tick?
There are very similar cases to these in this difficulty, and it seems you put them in for extra difficulty, which is nice, but I'm pretty sure that this song doesn't have noise on any blue tick

Yeah sorry, I can't find much, someone more experienced might find something though, but as it stands this is a fine beatmap. I hope it gets ranked soon!

Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/

[centre]Neme's Hard[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I This would make the start time inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties, and the vocal is suuuuper quiet here and not even audible at lower volumes so I don't think it's worth it
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want slider is too big q.q
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward ok, also moved slider afterwards for a better flow
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend? changed
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo the drum fill starts on the red tick, if i moved it to the white tick it would be playing silence or half of the fill which is jarring to play
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD ok, done
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket i like it how it is q.q
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right? I know what you mean by this but it would mean that the flow going from 1 -> 2 -> 3 would need to be changed, if more people suggest it i will change it though
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - ) they play with the 'pops' or whatever they're called and also they're sliders because of the feedback in the bass
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times i'm confused as to what you mean here?
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx that looks so much cleaner although i'm not sure how i can fix the current one, help me out a bit here? ;D

So far nice map tbh Good luck

Lexis wrote:

From my queue :3

00:43:324 (1) - 1/1 beat slider without reverse sound better. I agree but not sure how I can change this without making a massive jump, will try and fix at some point

01:15:209 (4) - End out of the grid fixed

01:33:037 (5) - The slider have a really strange point at the end x) XD fixed

02:16:495 (3) - Delete circle done along with deleting the same circle a bar or two later

02:24:809 (2) - The slider make a blanket only with (3) why not blanketing for 1 & 3 at the same time ?
that looks so good, done

That's all for me, if you want a mod for your other maps, go on my queue !
Good luck !

SuperMIC wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3) done, made 3 blanket 1 also
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))? I think it plays fine in this instance, but will change depending on further feedback
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably a slider works fine here because of the quieter note in the lead on the red tick
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything removed
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^ removed
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)? ok
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles? changed into a stack, good call
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything removed
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^ removed
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat changed, also changed up the rest of the combo
02:18:466 (6) - ^ changed along with rest of combo
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth. will fix later
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^ will fix later

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow, i just want to know if you still need the diff. o.o By far I can tell the spread is fine as it is, but that's only my point of view. Let me know what you think.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey
My posts sum has gotten totally decreased.... what even happened

Resurrected your map *dramatic sound effect* lol

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]

1. I think AR 3 would be enough and would make a better diff spread too. ok, changed
2. 00:23:438 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe it would be better to just make this into star (it's currently imperfect so....) use ctrl+D to make perfect stars in case you didn't know (but before, you have to set the beat snap divisor to 1/1) and try to make it a perfect star with 00:23:438 (3) - 's tail and 00:27:552 (1) - 's head so they should overlap each other. http://puu.sh/nCyHN/ac7ceb960c.jpg (the selection shows how the tail and head stacked) Uhhh i think i did it right? XD
3. 00:33:038 (1,2) - Is it really necessary to split it into 1/1 slider and circle? Considering there's no sound at white tick that supported with slider's end and circle, and because of the long vocal that started on the big white tick, it should be better to use a single 2/1 slider. http://puu.sh/nCyOE/9bd1beefc5.jpg would be even fitting if you end it at red tick 00:33:895 since there's a sound there but I don't recommend it since it might cause polarity problem. I just changed it into a 1/1 slider since the 2/1 slider felt a little weird to play tbh
4. 00:35:781 (1,2) - same as above ^ should be better if you just simply use 1/1 slider. Will change this depending on more feedback, felt this one was ok because there is a definite change in vocals on the 2
5. 00:37:152 (3) - there's no significant sound at the current white tick where it ended now (or just tiny sound). And instead it ignored the vocal here 00:37:838 would be better if you just end it there to follow the vocal. good idea, changed
6. 00:52:238 (1) - I think a single circle at big white tick should be sufficient since this is Easy, and more fitting too since the sound just stop there without any increasing or decreasing sound afterward that indicate the use of spinner. Are you sure, I chose to use a spinner here since there is a definite held note played in the bass that the spinner follows here and I think that having a break here would be a bit too boring tbh
7. 01:15:552 (3,4) - Would be better to just use a single 4/1 slider because there's no significant sound here 01:15:895 that need to be emphasized with slider and it goes silent right after the big white tick so it should fit more to just cover the entire "silent" effect with a single slider instead of splitting it. Let the slider head emphasize the big sound at big white tick. http://puu.sh/nCzCS/f2322a1523.jpg I kinda like this combo since it follows the vocals and hihats and the faint reverse cymbal, i'd change this depending on more feedback though
8. 01:30:638 (6) - Kinda nazi, shouldn't it NC here instead? oops, didn't notice XD good catch
9. 01:34:752 (1) - Remove NC since you usually NC-ed every 2 big white ticks.
10. 01:49:838 (1) - I honestly don't like the shape xD maybe make it more "funky" or something like http://puu.sh/nCzKf/78ae271f65.jpg or http://puu.sh/nCzLj/a79ccbcc38.jpg or anything else... Maybe add some curve to make it less stiff (?) this map was made back when I was super scared to even try stuff like that XD, i've changed it now since i've got a little bit better at it
11. 01:51:209 (2) - Honestly I want to NC this because the rhythm become different from 01:49:838 (1) - ... Let 01:49:838 (1) - be a lonesome combo makes sense, done
12. 02:20:009 (1,2) - just delete these and start the spinner from 02:20:009 since the sound there and the sound at where the spinner start on currently are similar so it would be more fitting to just cover the entire sound with a single spinner. Done
13. 02:24:124 reduce the volume at this part and so on, sounded a bit too loud currently.... wow, you actually mapped the outro .-. Done, also removed useless green line at the end
14. Overall, nice map, you picked a simple song at used simple rhythms. Good job. Just need some improvement, and some blankets are still off.

[Normal]

1. Some DS problems, check it.
2. Why the slider feel so fast when actually it's not xD
3. 00:52:238 (1) - same suggestion as Easy actually.... and maybe for the next diffs, I'll stop reminding this. same reasoning as easy
4. 01:28:581 (3,1) - Somehow I don't like this placing :/ 01:29:266 (1) - is weirdly too close to (3)'s reverse.... maybe just move it to (3)'s blanket? http://puu.sh/nCAzf/5b4df53ab4.jpg you should fix the blanket afterwards tho. I originally thought so too but couldn't find a way to fit the rest of the combo in but i've managed it, so changed
5. 01:36:124 (1,2,3) - Lol, I actually prefer this to be a perfect "angry symbol" shape xD try to balance it more. Same suggestion for the similar patterns. but this song is more sad than angry q.q
   "angry symbol in case you don't know"

   
6. 01:39:552 (2,3) - well it's following a nice significant sound but I think this rhythm might be a bit tricky for new players... This one should do better maybe http://puu.sh/nCAKz/d55557aab7.jpg same suggestion for similar patterns. will change depending on further feedback, only reason for this is because circle then slider is something i honestly struggled to hit when trying something similar for the first time. If more people think it's better off changed i'll change it though
7. 02:32:009 (2) - Lol, the shape xD yeah, it's totally fine, no worries, just kinda unique -w- i said i was bad at stuff like this xd
8. 02:43:324 (1) - Actually since there's barely sound here, it's pretty hard to hit perfectly.... maybe just end a slider or a spinner here... changed

[Neme's Hard]

Doing his mods since I still assume he's unable to check/work on it

1. 00:25:495 (3) - Move this to the right a bit for better flow http://puu.sh/nCAWp/ca3ec5d94f.jpg "Why? The current pattern now make a perfect leading from (2) considering (3)'s shape that point upward so it should flow nicely," maybe you asked so. Well, yeah, but from (1) to (2) is moving to the right and suddenly going upward would make the flow too pointy, look http://puu.sh/nCB2v/1c45dde2ee.jpg but with a little gap so (2) don't point directly to (3) like the example I did, it act as "bumper" that would make it less pointy http://puu.sh/nCB7x/d2ee2a5e00.jpg Note this tip Ah and it's definitely not going outside the playfield, so it's okay. Nice suggestion and extremely well explained, changed.
2. 00:39:038 (2,3) - Make a little jump so that don't get too close, it looks kinda weird. http://puu.sh/nCBbv/f4459c2e24.jpg changed
3. 01:21:724 (4,5) - the triplet is kinda unnecessary imo... If you want to make triplet, this rhythm would fit better imo http://puu.sh/nCBgv/7d8b00e7e1.jpg agreed, removed triplet, didn't add one since there isn't really need for one for the majority of the song
4. 01:23:266 (3,4) - unstacked on purpose? Wew, this kinda looks like triplet or 1/1 pattern xD but still okay tho. i'm pretty sure this was intentional, although i've edited it to make it a bit clearer about whats going on
5. 01:35:609 (4,5) - try to ctrl+g these, fit much better I think i did what you suggested, although i'm not sure if it's right XD
6. 01:56:352 (4,5,1) - the stack seems kinda unnecessary imo... changed And I think I need to say to avoid starting a slider at red tick since it would end at bigger sound than where it start and it would feel weird. Like this pattern 01:56:695 (1,2,3) - try to compare it with this http://puu.sh/nCBoN/c7c53a8151.jpg feel different right? Except for certain cases like this 01:35:266 (3) - , it totally alright and fitting since the big sound actually starts at red tick. yeah I understand what you mean, although i'll have to talk to nemesis on this one since the difficulty is like this throughout and it only fits at certain points, so i'll go through it with him and identify them
7. 01:58:066 (1) - The music don't really change.... why spinner? Just map this part normally. im not sure either lol, i'll ask him
8. 02:22:752 (1,3) - Lol, maybe move them downward a bit to make them not too close to (2) http://puu.sh/nCBx9/3d846ef0e1.jpg done
9. 02:25:495 (3) - Oh yeah, I think it's better to end it here 02:26:866 since there's a piano sound there. A faint one tho, but it better than ending it here 02:27:552 where there's no sound at all. if you listen closely there is a sound, although it is also pretty faint. I might change this depending on feedback, but it would mean that I would have to essentially redo the sliders XD
10. The rest are basically fine except for those unfitting started-at-red-tick sliders

I'll end this here :3
Overall good map, rankable, just need some improvement~
Good luck~^^

edit: wrong format, lol
edit 2 : I forgot to mention that this is a M4M from my modding Q~ Thank you for using it and waiting for your mod ^^

Maakkeli wrote:

hey i'm trying to make #modreqs great again...
was it ever great?


(Idk if this actually matters but whatevs)

I don't think it does but since only one of the colours is different i'll change it anyway

normal
I. 00:23:438 (3) - You could end this slider on the red tick to get that piano or whatever in wanted to follow vocal here
II. 00:27:552 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty sure you could follow the piano here since 1/2 rythms are not forbidden or anything in normals yeah i know but i wanted to keep it calm for the intro, i'll think about it
III. 01:29:952 (3) - Missing a clap at the end good catch
IV. 02:27:895 (3) - Pretty sure that this is overmapped yeah i agree, there is a sound on the 3 but it's not really enough to warrant it being clickable, if anything it should be a slider end but since 2's slider end finishes on a more important beat then i'll delete 3, nice call
Seems pretty cool.
I'm still learning to mod e/n/h diffs so pls bear with me.

easy
modding easies is stupid im sorry

ReFaller wrote:

Update diff: http://puu.sh/nJEIz/bd52c4cb05.osu

And now mod, because yes:
[Easy]
00:25:495 (2,3) - these two are part of star pattern, nice, but spacing between them by unknown reason is other than the rest of this pattern ok fixed it, I don't know if i ruined the star though now XD
00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - I heard the music, because i know what to do in this moment for easy, i prefer replace them into spinner which will end 00:52:238 (1) - then this spinner would be removed and put here a break time ehhh I like how this plays, especially because of the nice ending on the spinner it feels like a suitable transition to me
I retreat from further modding this diff, i just give a hint, how to map drum and bass for Easy.

Your guide

Watch on timeline.
Objects in yellow color contains:
1.Kick
2.Snare on head and tail
3.Kick
4.Snare on head and tail

?? I know this I just think I may have overdone it in the first kiai XD

That's all about Easy.
[Normal]
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - WTF?! These objects don't agree with the rythm!!! Ok yeah I think I agree lol, i'll change it
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/557815 - pls watch Normal diff here
00:38:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The next "wtf" situation, you should can fix it when you'll watch the diff from link above I actually really enjoy how the rhythm plays here and it is much better and fitting compared to the first one, so i'm gonna keep this
00:41:952 (3,4) -
00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - Better idea should be 1/1 slider or (like an Easy) the spinner ehhhhhh gonna wait for some feedback on this, i think it honestly is easy enough to play for a normal
01:00:466 (1,2,3) - These placement of objects makes missing the important drum kick which is here 01:01:324 - rest of the same situations you should noticed self. they only miss a red tick beat which honestly I don't think is worth ending a slider on since it would make it confusing to play both the kick and the snare and would screw up clicking rhythm
01:15:895 (2,3) - keep object number 3 in 1/1 beat or remove markered two objects for make a short break as my diff, your choice actually I might do depending on further feedback, although the easy didn't have a break here so I think its fine
Nnnnooooo......The rest of map is monotonous.....meh....However, I mapped the same in past
[ReFaller's Hard]
Ooops, it's my diff, let's skip it.
[HB's Insane]
00:22:924 (3) - Tail of this slider is in blue tick, which contains no reasonable rythm/sound for end here, make this slider 1/1
00:54:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream has one too many circle, it's number 6, delete is and change placement of this stream a little, because you'll have only 1/2 beat free from objects, it's not enough to make a stack (1/1 is required but you cannot do this because you have mapped 1/4 beats)
00:54:981 (1) - Your 1/2 spam journey stars here. Let's say some facts. You should can map some 1/1 beats because it's still possible, but don't base at my diff, especially copying my sliders, because you will not know, what is wrong with sliders WHY THEY ARE STRANGE CURVING WTF?!?!!1?
02:22:752 (1) - I don't recommend to map this part (and further objects), but if you really want to keep these objects, adjust carefully volume setting because most of them are too loud and sounds weird.
[Inya's Insane]
00:33:552 (2) - But your 1/2 starts right now, OMG, read about this in "HB's Insane" report
00:52:066 (1,2) - Remove NC for 1 and set for 2
00:52:581 (1) - Your rythm mapped on this slider is a rythm, which shouldn't be ever mapped, remove it as fast as possible.
00:53:952 (1,2,3) - The same about these circles.
00:54:466 (4) - Set NC, because you will need it when you delete objects noticed above.
00:54:981 (1) - NO!!! You are the best 1/2 spammer ever which you finished 02:22:581 (10) - Fix them in similar way like HB, there are rythms when you can really do 1/1 pauses or beats.

If your Insane will be still harder than HB after rework, you may set AR 9,2 for this purpose.

A r M i N wrote:

M4M
Inya's

00:22:924 (1,2) - Switch those two No use
00:23:438 (3) - http://puu.sh/nIE4l/09c1fcc964.jpg sounds better Done, but now it makes even less sense to do your first point
00:27:209 (5) - http://puu.sh/nIEdZ/7bd2f19198.jpg Nah
00:29:266 - add circle Done
00:31:924 (4) - it maybe fits to the vocals, but u r not mapping on vocals are you ? remove it and add a circle at 00:32:009 - still no
00:34:409 (6) - blanket 5 Huh
instead of 00:52:238 (2) - put this 00:52:581 (1) - http://puu.sh/nIEq9/b9beed759c.jpg like that Nope




Cool map good luck