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Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining - Hope

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 March 2016 at 16:59:29

Artist: Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining
Title: Hope
Tags: liquicity galaxy of dreams dnb drum and bass -Inyafaze- HB24 ReFaller
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6457kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.65 stars, 195 notes)
  2. HB's Insane (4.36 stars, 464 notes)
  3. Inya's Insane (4.71 stars, 545 notes)
  4. Normal (2.23 stars, 254 notes)
  5. ReFaller's Hard (2.9 stars, 273 notes)
Download: Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining - Hope
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitsounds by me (excluding ReFaller's diff)

Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
ReFaller's Hard - 100%
HB's Insane - 100%
Inya's Insane - 100%

sorry i needed a break due to rsi q.q im back on this map i promise!

SPOILER
Removed Neme's Hard - 16/03 - Reasons in thread
Added ReFaller's Hard - 17/03
Last edited by Log Off Now , edited 68 times in total.
Spiraler
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Joined November 2014
Spiraler
Easy
00:27:540 (1) - head of this should stack on tail of 00:23:426 (3)
00:54:969 (1,2,3,4,1) - while barely noticeable, these sliders are slightly different, try using the same one and copy-pasting it in, and rotate/flip it so it looks consistent
00:59:426 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:940 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:18:283 (1) - remove NC
01:23:769 (1) - ^
01:29:597 (5) - rather than make a whole new slider, reuse the old one but hit ctrl+g and rotation and flip to get it to be similar to what it is now
01:40:226 (3) - While this alone being straight isn't bad, it would be better if it were the same as the previous slider
01:41:597 (1,2) - same as 00:54:969 (1,2,3,4,1)
01:49:826 (1) - the head is ever so slightly off from the tail of the other slider, just stack it real quick
01:52:569 (1,2) - same as 01:41:597 (1,2)
02:09:026 (1,2) - I would make these face the same way personally

Normal
01:03:883 (2) - I wouldn't recommend making this curved while the next 2 patters of the same kind have straight sliders
01:47:769 (3) - make this slider the exact same direction as the other 2
02:02:169 (1) - I would recommend vertical flip but keeping the head where it was

really good maps!
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Spiral527 wrote:

Easy
00:27:540 (1) - head of this should stack on tail of 00:23:426 (3) Can't do this without changing the triangle before hand due to distance spacing, i'll think about it more though
00:54:969 (1,2,3,4,1) - while barely noticeable, these sliders are slightly different, try using the same one and copy-pasting it in, and rotate/flip it so it looks consistent it was copy pasted q.q
00:59:426 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:05:940 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:18:283 (1) - remove NC Ok
01:23:769 (1) - ^ Done
01:29:597 (5) - rather than make a whole new slider, reuse the old one but hit ctrl+g and rotation and flip to get it to be similar to what it is now this is what i did XD, it might be because it's slightly higher compared to the first slider
01:40:226 (3) - While this alone being straight isn't bad, it would be better if it were the same as the previous slider Ok, changed
01:41:597 (1,2) - same as 00:54:969 (1,2,3,4,1) they were copied also q.q
01:49:826 (1) - the head is ever so slightly off from the tail of the other slider, just stack it real quick good catch, didn't notice this :P
01:52:569 (1,2) - same as 01:41:597 (1,2) also copied XD
02:09:026 (1,2) - I would make these face the same way personally i'm not sure what you mean here?

Normal
01:03:883 (2) - I wouldn't recommend making this curved while the next 2 patters of the same kind have straight sliders This is curved as it follows the previous aesthetic curve, I don't think curving this makes much of a difference to gameplay/readability of the small straight slider section that follows this
01:47:769 (3) - make this slider the exact same direction as the other 2 again not sure what you mean here, the sliders alternate direction going down/up/down
02:02:169 (1) - I would recommend vertical flip but keeping the head where it was again i'm not sure what you mean by this, sorry XD. i did change something else in this part though, so thanks for pointing it out :D

really good maps!
Thank you for the mod!! :D
RyoKazuka
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RyoKazuka
double check metadata pls


its

Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining
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RyoKazuka wrote:

double check metadata pls


its

Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining
Oops, dots op XD. Thanks for pointing that out. I won't be able to fix it for a little while though so it will be changed in the next update.
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Added Inya's Insane
pingal1ty
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pingal1ty
Inya's Isnane is great. 10/10 Would play for an FC when it becomes ranked. Been trying a while tho but no luck, my best was 99.28% acc with almost FC, failed a jump almost at the end, but it feels like my hands are moving along with the rythm, keep the good work guys and thanks Log Off Now for awesome maps you are working at.
inya
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inya

pingal1ty wrote:

Inya's Isnane is great. 10/10 Would play for an FC when it becomes ranked. Been trying a while tho but no luck, my best was 99.28% acc with almost FC, failed a jump almost at the end, but it feels like my hands are moving along with the rythm, keep the good work guys and thanks Log Off Now for awesome maps you are working at.
Thanks for the nice feedback :) I've been trying to keep a good flow on the map and I guess it's not bad :p
RyoKazuka
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AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it)

EZ
01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean)
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow

EZ WAS GOOD M8

NM
NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE

Neme's HD
Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you ! :)


EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger


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Updated Mapset with HB's Insane (WIP) and an update for Inya's Insane (WIP Hitsounds). I'll start working on it again on monday when I finally get back to uni ^^.

Haven't managed to apply your mod yet Ryo, will get to it on monday
inya
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inya

RyoKazuka wrote:



AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it)

EZ
01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean)
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow

EZ WAS GOOD M8

NM
NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE

Neme's HD
Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you ! :)


EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn Nah, the sliders and the jump have a reason, "prepare for it and make this jump to calm down at the following slider"
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger Good idea


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Updated mapset and fixed tags with GD names :D
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Modding Inya's Insane and Neme's Hard

[Neme's Hard]

Flow is generally good, although emphasis is sometimes slightly strange, and feels strange to the player and there are occasional unnecessary triples are found in this difficulty.

00:35:095 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:36:638 (3,1) - ^
00:40:581 (2) - Maybe make this the opposite of 00:39:895 (1) - ? (Ctrl + H then move back to original position)
00:45:209 (5,6) - These two notes aren't needed, I understand why they are here though, remember that this is a hard difficulty though
00:52:238 (1) - You could end this spinner here 00:53:609 - and then have a circle placed 00:54:638 - although i'm not sure which is better tbh XD
00:58:924 (1) - I would have a circle here and then start a slider on 00:59:095 - downbeats usually want to be clickable
00:59:952 (5,6) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:03:466 (2) - ^ (Keep 3 though as it's on the downbeat)
01:04:838 (2) - ^
01:05:952 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved
01:21:809 (5) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:25:409 (2) - ^ (Won't keep pointing these out now since you know what they look like)
01:41:609 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try something like this?
01:54:638 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved
02:09:724 (4) - Maybe try this?
02:11:438 (4) - This could be turned into either a jump between 02:11:438 - and 02:11:609 - or made into a circle triple
02:24:809 (2,1) - This looks a bit ugly, you could try and do something different with 2 to make it look cleaner, the overlap here doesn't work well imo, also remove NC on 02:25:495 (1)
02:39:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this part is overmapped, it's the end of the music in a quiet part, I don't see why it needs lots of emphasis on quiet notes

I know it seems like a lot but it would really improve the quality of the map :D

[Inya's Insane]

Again Flow is generally good with some emphasis issues

00:33:038 - 00:44:009 - I would reduce the spacing in this section since they are relatively big jumps considering how calm the music is at the moment
00:39:895 (1) - I would have a long slider here as well (like 00:38:866 (4) - here) since it's the exact same note in the guitar and still the calm part of the introduction
01:01:838 (6,7) - I would follow what you did previously at 01:00:466 (6,1) - and use a second slider on the downbeat since it shows clear emphasis on the echos in the music and also plays pretty nicely
01:07:324 (1) - I would replace this with two single circles
01:35:781 (5,7) - Consider making 5 blanket 7?
01:38:866 - 01:49:838 - I would reduce the spacing in this section also, even though it is a lot more intense than the previous comment about this it is hard to keep stamina for these size jumps throughout the map but there are lots of opportunities for cool stack patterns and smaller 'linear' jumps. I'll try show you what I mean in screenshots :P
01:38:866 (1) - 01:41:438 - For example, this section could be changed to this, of course you can put your own take on it or make it cleaner if you choose to use this suggestion
Lots of Images






01:41:609 (1) - 01:44:181 (3) - For this section you could follow a similar pattern to above, but instead of stacking circle -> slider you could follow what you have already and change the pattern of the notes, for example 01:42:638 (6) - would move to where 01:42:466 (5) - currently is and vise versa and I would change 01:43:324 (9) - to two seperate circles and maybe have a jump here and I would also change 01:44:009 (2,3) - to be a slider to match 01:43:666 (1). Hopefully this is helpful for the rest of this section since currently I'm not sure what part of the music you're trying to follow with the current positioning of the sliders in the timeline
01:49:838 (3,4,5,6) - Again I would seriously consider reducing spacing in this section, since there are some quite audible 'click things' in the music XD. I would also suggest following a similar thing to what Nemesis has done in this section since I found it rather enjoyable to play, and the NC's on each click work very well. Don't directly copy though, maybe change the SV between each click so the length is different, idk it's up to you
02:28:238 (1) - Instead of this slider being wavey, I think it would look better if it was much sharper, almost lightning bolt like (or bigger waves, either works)
02:33:895 - 02:43:495 - Is again I feel very overmapped, this part of the music should give a calm ending, but theres big jumps again and lots of imo unneeded notes

[]

Hopefully this was of use to you both :D I haven't modded HB's Insane since it's not finished yet, also going to reply to your mod now Ryo (wow this is a long post XD)

Ryo's Mod

RyoKazuka wrote:



AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd Ok :P

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks Done

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot Good Idea :D Although I changed it to a 'dark icy blue' since it would fit the background better

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it) fs spinners q.q Fixed XD

[box=EZ]01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider I see your point, changed it to an angular slider that follows the flow
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean) Fixed
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd Fixed - I don't drink but it was at least 3:30am XD
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow changed
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow changed

EZ WAS GOOD M8 noice

[box=NM]NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE :D NOICE

[box=Neme's HD]Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you ! :) :D


EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger



Thank you for the mod!
Lily Bread
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Lily Bread
M4M from your queue.
(because you said you wanna a M4M ^^)

[Easy]
00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - short repeat slider is not recommended in Easy diff. what about changing them into 1/1 sliders? (though there does have a durm beat)
01:38:181 (4) - ^

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:13:838 (6,2) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
01:23:781 (1,2,3) - a bit crowded here. move them away a little.

[HB's Insane]
00:54:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i don't know why there 5 circles stream and 3 circles stack. the music is not special here.
00:57:209 (4,5,6) - make them into jump, just you do with - 00:56:866 (2,3) - .because the music is not changed here.

not finished?0 0

[Inya's Insane]
00:40:581 (4,7) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
00:41:952 (3,4) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^

00:52:581 (1) - listen to music, the slider should start at - 00:52:238 (2) - .

01:01:838 (6,1) - visualable overlap. move them away a little to get a better pattern.

01:40:581 (1,2,4) - very crowded here, move them away?

02:33:895 (1,5,6,7,8) - there shouldn't make a big jump. the music is quiet here.

good luck.
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Lily Bread wrote:

M4M from your queue.
(because you said you wanna a M4M ^^) yayyyy!!

[Easy]
00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - short repeat slider is not recommended in Easy diff. what about changing them into 1/1 sliders? (though there does have a durm beat) I'll wait for further feedback on this, I think they play fine are easy enough to read since they're essentially 'isolated' from the rest of this buildup section
01:38:181 (4) - ^ Again I'll wait for more feedback on this one, since there is a double bass drum hit on this slider that matches the music, however I have changed some other of these sliders later on in the map which could prove hard to read/pointless, so thanks for pointing them out ^^

[Normal]
fine
 :D

Hard/Insane GD Mods
[Hard]
01:13:838 (6,2) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
01:23:781 (1,2,3) - a bit crowded here. move them away a little.

[HB's Insane]
00:54:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i don't know why there 5 circles stream and 3 circles stack. the music is not special here.
00:57:209 (4,5,6) - make them into jump, just you do with - 00:56:866 (2,3) - .because the music is not changed here.

not finished?0 0

[Inya's Insane]
00:40:581 (4,7) - visualable scratch. move them away a little to get a better pattern.
00:41:952 (3,4) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^

00:52:581 (1) - listen to music, the slider should start at - 00:52:238 (2) - .

01:01:838 (6,1) - visualable overlap. move them away a little to get a better pattern.

01:40:581 (1,2,4) - very crowded here, move them away?

02:33:895 (1,5,6,7,8) - there shouldn't make a big jump. the music is quiet here.

good luck.

Thank you for the mod!! And yes HB's diff is currently unfinished, hopefully will be done soon :)
[ Nemesis ]
111 posts
Joined December 2014
[ Nemesis ]
Here the things which i changed on:

Neme's Hard
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rameses B - Hope ft. Charlotte Haining_.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54969
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22108,38512,41254,43997,49483,52226,54969,76912,98854,109826,120797,130397,131769,142740,148226
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hope
TitleUnicode:Hope
Artist:Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining
ArtistUnicode:Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Neme's Hard
Source:
Tags:liquicity galaxy of dreams dnb drum and bass -Inyafaze- HB24 Nemesis
BeatmapID:874097
BeatmapSetID:401530

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"hopebg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 251,245,149
Combo2 : 11,50,89
Combo3 : 192,192,192
Combo4 : 214,184,216

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288,232,107095,6,0,B|244:208|204:256|156:220,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,156,107609,2,0,P|104:108|112:80,1,60
196,60,107952,2,0,P|200:108|192:136,2,60,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,108466,6,0,P|336:104|408:92,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,184,108981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,109152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,332,109324,1,4,0:0:0:0:
248,340,109495,2,0,P|192:336|176:336,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,228,109838,6,0,L|124:192,1,30
200,176,110181,6,0,L|200:144,1,30
276,160,110524,6,0,L|284:124,1,30
392,88,110866,6,0,P|392:124|416:168,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,252,111209,6,0,L|208:284,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,111724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,111895,2,0,P|116:304|116:332,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,256,112238,2,0,P|52:208|52:180,1,60
168,160,112581,6,0,P|224:160|284:120,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,48,113095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,68,113266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,113438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,113609,2,0,P|424:296|424:328,1,60
348,244,113952,6,0,L|340:168,1,60
248,172,114295,2,0,L|228:96,1,60
136,128,114638,2,0,L|104:68,1,60
28,128,114981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,115152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,196,115324,6,0,P|216:148|204:84,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,156,115838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,156,116009,2,0,L|312:224,1,60
244,316,116352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,316,116524,2,0,P|232:280|216:256,1,60
332,304,116866,6,0,P|380:312|396:308,1,60
444,204,117209,2,0,P|436:160|436:120,1,60
328,88,117552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,117724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,88,117895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118066,12,0,120466,0:0:0:0:
196,208,120809,6,0,L|192:144,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,60,121152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,121324,2,0,L|95:306,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,121838,2,0,P|256:336|292:328,1,60
364,260,122181,6,0,P|360:200|360:172,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,122524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,122609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,122695,2,0,P|352:96|328:96,1,60
220,84,123038,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,180,123209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,123381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,272,123552,6,0,P|264:304|264:336,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,340,123895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,228,124066,2,0,P|92:160|136:104,1,120
232,76,124581,2,0,P|280:72|316:76,1,60
368,168,124924,6,0,L|376:232,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,125266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,125352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,125438,2,0,L|256:332,1,60
372,340,125781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,272,125952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,220,126124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,156,126295,6,0,P|464:116|456:80,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,52,126638,2,0,P|348:92|356:128,1,60
256,184,126981,2,0,P|256:144|248:108,1,60
140,80,127324,2,0,P|140:120|148:156,1,60
48,212,127666,6,0,P|48:252|56:288,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,316,128009,2,0,P|164:276|156:240,1,60
256,184,128352,2,0,P|256:224|264:260,1,60
372,288,128695,2,0,P|372:248|364:212,1,60
436,60,129038,6,0,L|448:128,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,129381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,129552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,72,129724,2,0,P|72:88|60:96,1,60
100,208,130066,2,0,P|124:248|144:268,1,60
304,320,130409,6,0,L|344:328,2,30,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,236,130752,2,0,L|230:230,2,30,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,220,131095,2,0,L|396:228,2,30,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,144,131438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,131524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,128,131609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,56,131781,6,0,P|88:60|60:120,1,120
124,208,132295,2,0,P|128:248|124:276,1,60
212,352,132638,2,0,P|216:312|212:284,1,60
248,176,132981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,224,133152,6,0,P|396:232|428:232,1,60
312,288,133495,2,0,P|304:324|304:356,1,60
252,236,133838,2,0,P|216:228|184:228,1,60
300,172,134181,2,0,P|308:136|308:104,1,60
128,92,134524,6,0,B|100:132|96:148|96:148|104:204,1,120
180,296,135038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,344,135209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,135381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,135552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,135724,2,0,P|484:184|484:180,1,60
368,204,136066,6,0,P|320:216|292:216,1,60
216,144,136409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,136495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,136581,2,0,P|168:124|140:120,1,60
56,180,136924,2,0,P|104:200|132:204,1,60
228,340,137266,6,0,B|292:328|292:328|356:352,1,120
456,304,137781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,137952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,100,138124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,138295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,138466,2,0,P|236:116|216:112,1,60
124,164,138809,6,0,P|120:212|112:240,1,60
204,304,139152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,139324,2,0,P|244:324|272:324,1,60
360,264,139666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,139838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,340,140009,6,0,P|416:316|436:248,1,120
380,180,140524,2,0,P|368:140|364:120,1,45.0000017166138
456,116,140866,2,0,P|468:76|472:56,1,45.0000017166138
380,52,141209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141381,12,0,142409,0:0:0:0:
256,292,142752,6,0,B|256:208|64:208|144:64|256:64|256:144,1,330,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,144809,2,0,P|304:20|352:32,1,90
256,144,145495,2,0,B|256:64|368:64|448:208|256:208|256:328,1,360,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,304,147895,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,148238,2,0,P|136:132|248:132,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,232,149609,2,0,P|390:249|433:177,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,120,150981,6,0,P|276:128|228:72,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,344,153038,2,0,P|236:292|208:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,153724,6,0,P|104:204|76:208,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,133,154409,2,0,P|149:83|128:64,1,71.9999978027344
245,88,155095,2,0,P|270:40|271:11,1,71.9999978027344
328,117,155781,2,0,P|381:105|403:88,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,164,156466,6,0,P|104:180|76:176,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,250,157152,2,0,P|149:300|128:319,1,71.9999978027344
245,295,157838,2,0,P|270:343|271:372,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,266,158523,2,0,P|381:278|403:295,1,71.9999978027344
271,360,159209,2,0,B|83:316|127:129|345:180|294:398|52:309|52:309|101:238|81:184,1,630.000024032594
256,192,161952,12,0,164009,0:0:0:0:



MOD
00:35:781 (1) - blanket
00:37:152 (1) - blanket
00:40:581 (2) - changed side
00:45:038 (4,5) - remove a tripplet
00:52:238 (1) - shorter spinner
00:54:466 (1) - i hope its ok ^^
01:03:209 (1,2) - remove tripplet
01:04:924 (2,3) - remove tripllet
01:06:466 (2) - blanket
01:13:838 (6,2) - remove ugly overlap
01:24:295 (2,3) - remove "to much slider on one place"
02:11:438 (4,5,6) - a tripplet
02:24:809 (2) - i dont know other thing for this part sry, i liked the overlap more
02:39:209 (5) - remove overmappt thing

Btw. Log Off Now, you created great Hitsounds thank you very much i like it ;)
Log Off Now
955 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Log Off Now
Updated mapset with Neme's update and also fixed a few hitsound inconsistencies

[ Nemesis ] wrote:

Btw. Log Off Now, you created great Hitsounds thank you very much i like it ;)
Thank you ^^
Prospettiva
23 posts
Joined May 2015
Prospettiva
irc thingy
2016-01-23 13:29 Log Off Now: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/880802 Rameses B ft. Charlotte Haining - Hope]
2016-01-23 13:29 Log Off Now: can you check over my easy/normals? :)
2016-01-23 13:29 Prospettiva: sure, I'll do an IRC mod with you if you're available
2016-01-23 13:30 Log Off Now: thanks ^^
2016-01-23 13:30 Log Off Now: yeah im free for a little longer
2016-01-23 13:32 Prospettiva: 00:37:152 (3) - 
2016-01-23 13:32 Log Off Now: wait is this easy or normal?
2016-01-23 13:32 Prospettiva: This is under the health bar I'm pretty sure, it's easy
2016-01-23 13:32 Prospettiva: Easy diff
2016-01-23 13:33 Prospettiva: You may want to move it down a bit
2016-01-23 13:33 Log Off Now: oops i didnt notice
2016-01-23 13:34 Prospettiva: 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) -  
2016-01-23 13:34 Log Off Now: too hard?
2016-01-23 13:34 Prospettiva: I don't know about these kicksliders, some other modder may point out that this is too hard for a beginner
2016-01-23 13:34 Prospettiva: You may want to ease it a bit
2016-01-23 13:35 Log Off Now: someone already has q.q but i dont really feel like i need to nerf it
2016-01-23 13:35 Log Off Now: its simple enough imo
2016-01-23 13:35 Prospettiva: True enough
2016-01-23 13:35 Log Off Now: i can understand patterns later on in the song which i've used these
2016-01-23 13:35 Log Off Now: which i will probably have to end up nerfing
2016-01-23 13:35 Log Off Now: but since thats literally essentially isolated from the rest of the song i think its fine
2016-01-23 13:36 Prospettiva: 01:28:238 (2) - 
2016-01-23 13:36 Prospettiva: Why is this slider like that?
2016-01-23 13:37 Log Off Now: wanted a slight angle up onto 3
2016-01-23 13:37 Log Off Now: even though its essentially a straight slider
2016-01-23 13:37 Prospettiva: You should straigten it out imo
2016-01-23 13:37 Log Off Now: i will do
2016-01-23 13:38 Log Off Now: also going to change 3/4 into a slider since thats a pretty big flow break i've noticed
2016-01-23 13:38 Log Off Now: and fix 5
2016-01-23 13:38 Prospettiva: 01:49:838 (1) - 
2016-01-23 13:38 Prospettiva: Again with the hard turn for this one, are you emphasising the kick with the hard turn?
2016-01-23 13:38 Prospettiva: the kick in the song i mean
2016-01-23 13:39 Log Off Now: yes
2016-01-23 13:39 Prospettiva: oh okay, then it's fine
2016-01-23 13:39 Log Off Now: :D
2016-01-23 13:40 Prospettiva: 02:11:781 (1) -  this one though
2016-01-23 13:40 Prospettiva: There's no kick in the music, not real reason for hard turn
2016-01-23 13:40 Prospettiva: simple curve will suffice
2016-01-23 13:40 Log Off Now: i follow the lead in this part
2016-01-23 13:40 Log Off Now: but i guess you're right with a curve
2016-01-23 13:41 Prospettiva: just a quick compliment 
2016-01-23 13:41 Prospettiva: 02:17:266 (1) -  I love this hard turn on this one
2016-01-23 13:41 Log Off Now: ^^
2016-01-23 13:41 Log Off Now: it fits the echo in the 'voice' so well
2016-01-23 13:41 Prospettiva: ^
2016-01-23 13:42 Log Off Now: and it's timed perfectly, i think a bit of luck was involved with that one lmao
2016-01-23 13:42 Prospettiva: 02:43:324 (1) -  This spinner is too quick
2016-01-23 13:43 Log Off Now: yeah im gonna get rid of them on both easy and normal
2016-01-23 13:43 Prospettiva: You may want to work on giving a beginning player some ease time during this song
2016-01-23 13:43 Prospettiva: it's constant 1/1 at some parts
2016-01-23 13:44 Prospettiva: while it emphasizes the song, yes, the player, presumably beginner, wouldn't be able to play it well
2016-01-23 13:44 Log Off Now: it is but i don't really know what i can get rid of during the kiai parts
2016-01-23 13:44 Log Off Now: i tried to use some longer sliders occasionally as a super short rest
2016-01-23 13:45 Log Off Now: 01:38:866 - eg here
2016-01-23 13:45 Log Off Now: this is sort of my version of a break XD
2016-01-23 13:45 Log Off Now: not sure what i can get rid of in the first/2nd kiai
2016-01-23 13:46 Prospettiva: I can give a suggestion
2016-01-23 13:46 Prospettiva: hold up
2016-01-23 13:46 Log Off Now: ight
2016-01-23 13:47 Prospettiva: 01:20:009 (2) - 
2016-01-23 13:47 Log Off Now: long slider?
2016-01-23 13:47 Prospettiva: Yes, or triple kick
2016-01-23 13:47 Prospettiva: double*
2016-01-23 13:47 Log Off Now: or hairpin type long slider
2016-01-23 13:48 Prospettiva: http://puu.sh/mGMXg/96d99da45a.jpg
2016-01-23 13:48 Prospettiva: you could do this
2016-01-23 13:48 Log Off Now: i find double repeating sliders hard to read imo, especially when this map only has single repears
2016-01-23 13:48 Log Off Now: repeats*
2016-01-23 13:48 Prospettiva: Good point, maybe a long slider will do
2016-01-23 13:49 Prospettiva: anyway, that's all I can see with easy atm
2016-01-23 13:49 Log Off Now: ty ^^
2016-01-23 13:49 Log Off Now: i remapped that combo with the long slider
2016-01-23 13:49 Prospettiva: though you should get some other suggestions on how to fix the counstant 1/1
2016-01-23 13:49 Log Off Now: made it even easier
2016-01-23 13:50 Prospettiva: 00:33:724 (2,3) - 
2016-01-23 13:50 Prospettiva: y
2016-01-23 13:50 Prospettiva: ;-;
2016-01-23 13:50 Prospettiva: just repeat slider will do
2016-01-23 13:50 Log Off Now: :p i guess
2016-01-23 13:51 Log Off Now: but ds tho q.q
2016-01-23 13:51 Log Off Now: nvm i fixed it
2016-01-23 13:53 Prospettiva: 00:59:095 (4) -  this is conflicting with the score at the top right
2016-01-23 13:53 Prospettiva: move it down a lil
2016-01-23 13:54 Prospettiva: 01:03:895 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -  I'm not sure about this, it seems too hard for a normal
2016-01-23 13:54 Log Off Now: done
2016-01-23 13:54 Log Off Now: i think its fine
2016-01-23 13:54 Log Off Now: seen harder patterns in normal diffs before q.q
2016-01-23 13:55 Prospettiva: Alright, but I know there's going to be some modder that's going to point all of those out and say: This is too hard!
2016-01-23 13:55 Log Off Now: and theres a much easier section following after it as like a 'cooldown'
2016-01-23 13:55 Log Off Now: if it gets pointed out like 4 times i'll change it but i don't really see how thats super difficult
2016-01-23 13:56 Log Off Now: it used to be harder but i made the pattern easier XD
2016-01-23 13:56 Prospettiva: 01:39:552 (2,3,4) - 
2016-01-23 13:57 Prospettiva: 1/2 sliders, are you sure about that?
2016-01-23 13:57 Log Off Now: yes
2016-01-23 13:57 Prospettiva: oh
2016-01-23 13:57 Prospettiva: i see it
2016-01-23 13:57 Prospettiva: nvm
2016-01-23 13:57 Log Off Now: i definitely want to follow the lead in this section
2016-01-23 13:57 Log Off Now: :P
2016-01-23 13:57 Prospettiva: yeah, I just noticed it
2016-01-23 13:58 Prospettiva: anyway
2016-01-23 13:58 Log Off Now: ^^
2016-01-23 13:58 Prospettiva: 01:53:952 (1,2,3,4) -  This is a bit fast, don't you think? 
2016-01-23 13:58 Log Off Now: i guess i could remove 2 out of it
2016-01-23 13:59 Log Off Now: yeah i'll remove 2 since it doesn't effect what the maps following
2016-01-23 13:59 Prospettiva: That'll work, yee
2016-01-23 14:00 Prospettiva: 02:32:009 (2) -  The hard turns in this slider don't match to any beat that I can hear...
2016-01-23 14:00 Log Off Now: XD
2016-01-23 14:00 Log Off Now: also i'll remove the spinner at the end
2016-01-23 14:00 Log Off Now: the second redpoint matches but the first doesn't
2016-01-23 14:01 Prospettiva: yep
2016-01-23 14:01 Log Off Now: idk what i could change it to
2016-01-23 14:01 Log Off Now: unless i just make it a curved one with a sharp ending
2016-01-23 14:01 Prospettiva: Maybe an L?
2016-01-23 14:02 Log Off Now: idk i'll change it at some point
2016-01-23 14:02 Log Off Now: that looks a bit boring tho XD
2016-01-23 14:02 Prospettiva: true
2016-01-23 14:02 Log Off Now: this is why im bad at slider art
2016-01-23 14:02 Log Off Now: XD
2016-01-23 14:02 Prospettiva: XD
2016-01-23 14:03 Log Off Now: ill leave it as is and figure something out at some point
2016-01-23 14:03 Prospettiva: anyways, that's all I can see for not, be sure to work out something with the 1/1 constant on easy and such
2016-01-23 14:03 Log Off Now: i'll take a look at easy and see if i can remove some sliders and replace them with longer ones
2016-01-23 14:03 Log Off Now: ty for the mod ^^
2016-01-23 14:04 Prospettiva: NP, song's amazing and it's very clear, flows great
2016-01-23 14:04 Log Off Now: :D
2016-01-23 14:04 Log Off Now: im tempted to try and storyboard it
2016-01-23 14:04 Prospettiva: Oh dear, you may want to practice though
2016-01-23 14:04 Log Off Now: only super subtle but something the picture scrolling along, since i have a way higher res version of it
2016-01-23 14:04 Prospettiva: Storyboarding is very difficult
2016-01-23 14:04 Log Off Now: yeah ofc
2016-01-23 14:05 Log Off Now: i'd just grey it out until the first kiai
2016-01-23 14:05 Prospettiva: Alright, I'll port this irc in your threat~
2016-01-23 14:05 Log Off Now: then have the picture in colour and scroll to the left
2016-01-23 14:05 Log Off Now: ight
2016-01-23 14:05 Log Off Now: tell me when you have and i can kds you
2016-01-23 14:05 Prospettiva: alrighty

Map is great, flow is awesome aswell. Good luck~! :) :)
inya
98 posts
Joined January 2013
inya

Log Off Now wrote:

Modding Inya's Insane and Neme's Hard

[Neme's Hard]

Flow is generally good, although emphasis is sometimes slightly strange, and feels strange to the player and there are occasional unnecessary triples are found in this difficulty.

00:35:095 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:36:638 (3,1) - ^
00:40:581 (2) - Maybe make this the opposite of 00:39:895 (1) - ? (Ctrl + H then move back to original position)
00:45:209 (5,6) - These two notes aren't needed, I understand why they are here though, remember that this is a hard difficulty though
00:52:238 (1) - You could end this spinner here 00:53:609 - and then have a circle placed 00:54:638 - although i'm not sure which is better tbh XD
00:58:924 (1) - I would have a circle here and then start a slider on 00:59:095 - downbeats usually want to be clickable
00:59:952 (5,6) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:03:466 (2) - ^ (Keep 3 though as it's on the downbeat)
01:04:838 (2) - ^
01:05:952 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved
01:21:809 (5) - Same comment as 00:45:209 (5,6)
01:25:409 (2) - ^ (Won't keep pointing these out now since you know what they look like)
01:41:609 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try something like this?
01:54:638 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved
02:09:724 (4) - Maybe try this?
02:11:438 (4) - This could be turned into either a jump between 02:11:438 - and 02:11:609 - or made into a circle triple
02:24:809 (2,1) - This looks a bit ugly, you could try and do something different with 2 to make it look cleaner, the overlap here doesn't work well imo, also remove NC on 02:25:495 (1)
02:39:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this part is overmapped, it's the end of the music in a quiet part, I don't see why it needs lots of emphasis on quiet notes

I know it seems like a lot but it would really improve the quality of the map :D

[Inya's Insane]

Again Flow is generally good with some emphasis issues

00:33:038 - 00:44:009 - I would reduce the spacing in this section since they are relatively big jumps considering how calm the music is at the moment
00:39:895 (1) - I would have a long slider here as well (like 00:38:866 (4) - here) since it's the exact same note in the guitar and still the calm part of the introduction
01:01:838 (6,7) - I would follow what you did previously at 01:00:466 (6,1) - and use a second slider on the downbeat since it shows clear emphasis on the echos in the music and also plays pretty nicely
01:07:324 (1) - I would replace this with two single circles
01:35:781 (5,7) - Consider making 5 blanket 7?
01:38:866 - 01:49:838 - I would reduce the spacing in this section also, even though it is a lot more intense than the previous comment about this it is hard to keep stamina for these size jumps throughout the map but there are lots of opportunities for cool stack patterns and smaller 'linear' jumps. I'll try show you what I mean in screenshots :P
01:38:866 (1) - 01:41:438 - For example, this section could be changed to this, of course you can put your own take on it or make it cleaner if you choose to use this suggestion
Lots of Images






01:41:609 (1) - 01:44:181 (3) - For this section you could follow a similar pattern to above, but instead of stacking circle -> slider you could follow what you have already and change the pattern of the notes, for example 01:42:638 (6) - would move to where 01:42:466 (5) - currently is and vise versa and I would change 01:43:324 (9) - to two seperate circles and maybe have a jump here and I would also change 01:44:009 (2,3) - to be a slider to match 01:43:666 (1). Hopefully this is helpful for the rest of this section since currently I'm not sure what part of the music you're trying to follow with the current positioning of the sliders in the timeline
01:49:838 (3,4,5,6) - Again I would seriously consider reducing spacing in this section, since there are some quite audible 'click things' in the music XD. I would also suggest following a similar thing to what Nemesis has done in this section since I found it rather enjoyable to play, and the NC's on each click work very well. Don't directly copy though, maybe change the SV between each click so the length is different, idk it's up to you
02:28:238 (1) - Instead of this slider being wavey, I think it would look better if it was much sharper, almost lightning bolt like (or bigger waves, either works)
02:33:895 - 02:43:495 - Is again I feel very overmapped, this part of the music should give a calm ending, but theres big jumps again and lots of imo unneeded notes

[]

Hopefully this was of use to you both :D I haven't modded HB's Insane since it's not finished yet, also going to reply to your mod now Ryo (wow this is a long post XD)

Ryo's Mod

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AY LOGGY !

i think ill remap easy in 2/3 and p1 map xd Ok :P

General:

Check all diff and make sure to disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks Done

Combo color 1 doesnt seem striking for a soft song like this, I recommend maybe an icy blue for that spot Good Idea :D Although I changed it to a 'dark icy blue' since it would fit the background better

Kindly check all diff's AIMod because Easy has unsnapped objects (I think Normal also has it) fs spinners q.q Fixed XD

[box=EZ]01:01:152 (2,3) - tbh in easy issues this really dont flow well imo, I suggest you straighten the 2nd combo slider I see your point, changed it to an angular slider that follows the flow
01:25:152 (7) - NC? (if you change it then remove the nc from the next object if you know what I mean) Fixed
01:30:638 (7) - NC too did you map this while you're drunk? xdd Fixed - I don't drink but it was at least 3:30am XD
01:48:466 (3) - kindly move the tail to 248|236 for better flow changed
01:49:152 (4) - move the tail to 272|88 for also better flow changed

EZ WAS GOOD M8 noice

[box=NM]NM WAS GOOD I LIKE THE COPY PASTING OF THOSE THREE SLIDER SYMMETRY MUCH LOVE :D NOICE

[box=Neme's HD]Meme

holy sh if youre planning to make this really hard at least set OD to 6.5 xdd

00:44:352 (2) - perhaps bend this slider so that it flows to the next?
00:58:066 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this is too hard for Hard but let me wait until HappyRocket finishes his diff and Ill see whether this should be reduced or no but for now, dont change it yet
01:14:524 (2) - this slider overlaps ingame, maybe move it a little bit to the right?
01:53:609 (1) - whats the nc for? xdd

Hard is very good but I feel a little untidy about it

Inya's Insane has good flow and tap
I discussed with my friend and he also agrees that either the spacings after the second kiai reduced or make a break somewhere
same rule applies to Neme's Hard but Hard is not so necessary to have a break

Insane is mostly jumps all over and throughout the drop which needs maybe constant + easy flow for the player to gain stamina or recover from the jumps

anyway the set is well made and good luck to all of you ! :) :D




EDIT:

07:40 Cheesecake: just make sure that you mention that 02:20:009 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this whole section should be calming dowjn
07:40 Cheesecake: 02:25:495 (3) - also this would be cuter if the waves were bigger



Thank you for the mod!
Thanks for the mod, applied almost everything or atleast tried ^^
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Mapset updated! :D
Electoz
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Hi, sorry for being late.

[Easy]

  1. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this kinda hard for Easy?
  2. 01:06:638 (2) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 02:06:295 (1) .
  3. 01:49:152 (4,1) - Can you improve the flow here? Also the shape+symmetry here 01:48:466 (3,4) doesn't look too good imo as the heads are overlapping the tails.
  4. 01:55:324 (1,3) - Whistles should be either on the head/tail of both sliders because they give a proper feedback to players, since you made hitsounds consistent in every diffs so I suggest you to do something with the rhythm on this part.
  5. 02:41:952 (1,1) - Imo the last circle didn't give a strong enough impact to be clicked with such a low approach rate, I would prefer a slider here instead of these two circles.
[Normal]

  1. 00:51:552 (4) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 00:56:352 (1) - 01:16:238 (3) . And a few more that almost touching it.
  2. Generally looks fine.
[Hard]

  1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved.
  2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better.
  3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play.
  4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm.
I haven't mod for a few days so my modding might be a bit bad, sry for that in advance.
Good luck~
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Hi, sorry for being late.

[Easy]

  1. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this kinda hard for Easy? zzz changed to 1/1's q.q since everyone says its too hard
  2. 01:06:638 (2) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 02:06:295 (1) . my monitor is super large so it's nowhere near it on mine so it doesn't touch for me and i don't notice it q.q, fixed
  3. 01:49:152 (4,1) - Can you improve the flow here? Also the shape+symmetry here 01:48:466 (3,4) doesn't look too good imo as the heads are overlapping the tails. changed sliders to curved, don't really want to change much else because i like the 'figure eight' flow here
  4. 01:55:324 (1,3) - Whistles should be either on the head/tail of both sliders because they give a proper feedback to players, since you made hitsounds consistent in every diffs so I suggest you to do something with the rhythm on this part. will consider it, i wanted to hitsound the piano but I can understand your point here, i'll think on it a bit more
  5. 02:41:952 (1,1) - Imo the last circle didn't give a strong enough impact to be clicked with such a low approach rate, I would prefer a slider here instead of these two circles. made a shitty shark fin slider XD, i'll change it once I have a better idea of what I could do with a slider here, good suggestion though
[Normal]

  1. 00:51:552 (4) - Touches the life bar. Same applies to 00:56:352 (1) - 01:16:238 (3) . And a few more that almost touching it. zzz
  2. Generally looks fine. :D
Neme's Hard
[Hard]

  1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved.
  2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better.
  3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play.
  4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm.

I haven't mod for a few days so my modding might be a bit bad, sry for that in advance.
Good luck~
Thank you for the mod! ^^ Updated Mapset
-Nighthawk-
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This is my M4M! Your mapping style is very nice, and I'm hard pressed to find many mistakes, here I go:

Easy
02:11:781 (1,2,3) - can you straighten 2 and 3 in relation to the end of 1 please?
02:41:952 (1) - feel free to put a spinner here, since not much happens in the end.

Normal
02:41:952 (1) - same as above

Neme's Hard
00:26:181 (5,6) - can you replace this with a slider and hitcircle from 00:25:495 (3) - ? I think that would sound nicer and make more sense as the other drawn out vocals just before this have this pattern too.
02:05:352 (3) - take this out, as this is silence.
02:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the last one, these have notes on the blue ticks.
There are very similar cases to these in this difficulty, and it seems you put them in for extra difficulty, which is nice, but I'm pretty sure that this song doesn't have noise on any blue tick

HB's Insane
00:36:295 (2,4) - these notes fall on silence, I think you should remove them

Yeah sorry, I can't find much, someone more experienced might find something though, but as it stands this is a fine beatmap. I hope it gets ranked soon! :D
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This is my M4M! Your mapping style is very nice, and I'm hard pressed to find many mistakes, here I go:

Easy
02:11:781 (1,2,3) - can you straighten 2 and 3 in relation to the end of 1 please? Fixed
02:41:952 (1) - feel free to put a spinner here, since not much happens in the end. It previously used to be a spinner but the spinner was too short for easy and normal difficulties and didn't really fit well

Normal
02:41:952 (1) - same as above Same as above

Neme's Hard
00:26:181 (5,6) - can you replace this with a slider and hitcircle from 00:25:495 (3) - ? I think that would sound nicer and make more sense as the other drawn out vocals just before this have this pattern too.
02:05:352 (3) - take this out, as this is silence.
02:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the last one, these have notes on the blue ticks.
There are very similar cases to these in this difficulty, and it seems you put them in for extra difficulty, which is nice, but I'm pretty sure that this song doesn't have noise on any blue tick

Nemesis' Diff

HB's Insane
00:36:295 (2,4) - these notes fall on silence, I think you should remove them

HB's Diff - Although this difficulty is still WIP

Yeah sorry, I can't find much, someone more experienced might find something though, but as it stands this is a fine beatmap. I hope it gets ranked soon! :D
Thank you for the mod ^^
C00L
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C00L
Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/




Easy
SPOILER
[*] plays fine, but id really recommend changing hitsounds in the following sliders/notes:
[*] 01:45:724 (3) - add a whistle at the slider start
[*] 01:47:781 (2) - delete the whistle at slider start
[*] I think it sounds better tbh check other parts like this i only mentioned one since i havent spoted anything more, but if you find something similar and you like this hitsound consider changing it


Normal
SPOILER
[*] 01:28:581 (3,1) - blanket maybe?
[*] 01:29:952 (3,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 01:57:381 (4,1) - ^
[*] 02:06:295 (1,2) - ^
[*] 02:09:038 (1,2) - fix this blanket a little bit
[*] 02:11:781 (1,3) - blanket this
[*] 02:19:324 (2,1) - fix this blanket



Neme's Hard
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend? :P
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right? :P
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles :P the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - )
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx



HB's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend this slider to the previos white tick http://imgur.com/AxUdpdn
[*] 00:23:438 (4) - dont make these sort of really hard curved shapes unless it fits the tune, for calm music like this i dont think any sliders should pop up, so i probably wount mention them in the remainder of this mod but try to have a lookout for those
[*] 00:24:466 (5,1) - blanket
[*] 00:37:838 (7,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 00:51:038 (2,3,4,6) - overlap kinda awkward fix this pls
[*] 01:06:981 (5,2) - ^
[*] 01:22:409 (1) - ctrl +g maybe
then at this point i realised oh its WIP haha so far so good



Inya's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length from the white tick before that http://imgur.com/t1gCDHu
[*] 00:22:066 (1) - id say make another timing point here and decrease the volume to 30% it is really quite here it gets louder 00:33:038 (1) - which 50% is fine i think
[*] 00:54:466 (4) - make a timing point and make it 10-15% volume since it gets louder
[*] 02:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think the jumps fit there try something like this http://imgur.com/0VqltgA personally i think this plays better remember this is a 4 star song no need for so many jumps and squares :P
[*] 02:10:409 (7) - change the timing point for the end of kiai time here, and start it here 02:11:095 (1) - at this point is where there should be a burst
[*] 02:34:409 (3,4) - kinda eh overlap
[*] 02:42:981 (4,5) - ^
[*] 02:43:324 (5,2) - ^





So far nice map tbh Good luck :)
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Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/




Easy
SPOILER
[*] plays fine, but id really recommend changing hitsounds in the following sliders/notes:
[*] 01:45:724 (3) - add a whistle at the slider start good catch
[*] 01:47:781 (2) - delete the whistle at slider start i prefer to keep this since it acts as a build up to the long slider -> cymbal new section
[*] I think it sounds better tbh check other parts like this i only mentioned one since i havent spoted anything more, but if you find something similar and you like this hitsound consider changing it


Normal
SPOILER
[*] 01:28:581 (3,1) - blanket maybe? would mess up spacing so nty ^^
[*] 01:29:952 (3,1) - fix this blanket done
[*] 01:57:381 (4,1) - ^ done
[*] 02:06:295 (1,2) - ^ this one is fine?
[*] 02:09:038 (1,2) - fix this blanket a little bit done
[*] 02:11:781 (1,3) - blanket this I want to keep both shapes the same here and a blanket here is an extremely small detail that doesn't affect gameplay in this instance, and tbh i don't think it looks that bad anyway q.q, i'll change it depending on further feedback
[*] 02:19:324 (2,1) - fix this blanket done



Neme's Hard
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend? :P
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right? :P
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles :P the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - )
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx



HB's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend this slider to the previos white tick http://imgur.com/AxUdpdn
[*] 00:23:438 (4) - dont make these sort of really hard curved shapes unless it fits the tune, for calm music like this i dont think any sliders should pop up, so i probably wount mention them in the remainder of this mod but try to have a lookout for those
[*] 00:24:466 (5,1) - blanket
[*] 00:37:838 (7,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 00:51:038 (2,3,4,6) - overlap kinda awkward fix this pls
[*] 01:06:981 (5,2) - ^
[*] 01:22:409 (1) - ctrl +g maybe
then at this point i realised oh its WIP haha so far so good



Inya's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length from the white tick before that http://imgur.com/t1gCDHu
[*] 00:22:066 (1) - id say make another timing point here and decrease the volume to 30% it is really quite here it gets louder 00:33:038 (1) - which 50% is fine i think
[*] 00:54:466 (4) - make a timing point and make it 10-15% volume since it gets louder
[*] 02:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think the jumps fit there try something like this http://imgur.com/0VqltgA personally i think this plays better remember this is a 4 star song no need for so many jumps and squares :P
[*] 02:10:409 (7) - change the timing point for the end of kiai time here, and start it here 02:11:095 (1) - at this point is where there should be a burst
[*] 02:34:409 (3,4) - kinda eh overlap
[*] 02:42:981 (4,5) - ^
[*] 02:43:324 (5,2) - ^





So far nice map tbh Good luck :)
Thank you for the mod! Will wait for GDers to reply :)
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From my queue :3

[Normal]

00:33:724 (1,1) - Delete NCs

01:40:581 (4,5) - I recommend 1/2 beat slider with reverse + circle

01:43:324 (4,5) - Same


[Neme's Hard]

00:43:324 (1) - 1/1 beat slider without reverse sound better.

01:15:209 (4) - End out of the grid

01:33:037 (5) - The slider have a really strange point at the end x)

02:16:495 (3) - Delete circle

02:24:809 (2) - The slider make a blanket only with (3) why not blanketing for 1 & 3 at the same time ?


That's all for me, if you want a mod for your other maps, go on my queue !
Good luck ! :)
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From my queue :3

[Normal]

00:33:724 (1,1) - Delete NCs oops, XD, removed NC on 2nd slider (also fixed other weird nc's in this section)

01:40:581 (4,5) - I recommend 1/2 beat slider with reverse + circle

01:43:324 (4,5) - Same Currently like these as they are, but will change if more people suggest it


[Neme's Hard]

00:43:324 (1) - 1/1 beat slider without reverse sound better.

01:15:209 (4) - End out of the grid

01:33:037 (5) - The slider have a really strange point at the end x)

02:16:495 (3) - Delete circle

02:24:809 (2) - The slider make a blanket only with (3) why not blanketing for 1 & 3 at the same time ?


Neme's diff (i hope he's not dead and will actually check these q.q)

That's all for me, if you want a mod for your other maps, go on my queue !
Good luck ! :)
Thank you for the mod!
SuperMIC
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m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Easy]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
01:38:866 (1,2,3) - looks weird; would be better if you could edit the pattern so (1) and (3) are symmetrical across (2)
01:48:466 (1,2) - i want these to blanket lol

only slightly concern about the difficulty is the use of non-stop 1/1 in the first kiai, maybe working in some 2/1 here and there would be better especially because the beginning is so slow. Also, I'm not sure about the 1/2 repeat sliders because of the high BPM but again these are just minor concerns.

[Normal]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
00:26:181 (3,4) - blanket can be improved by making the curves steeper
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - looks sloppy; maybe more something like this? (I only edited the direction of (2):

SPOILER

01:34:067 (3) - curve can be slightly adjusted so the end is more up and to the right for better flow
01:46:409 (6) - adjust direction so it forms a line of symmetry where (1) and (5) are symmetrical across the line of (6)?

SPOILER

02:02:181 (1,1) - make the grey (1) a ctrl+g version of the pink (1)?
02:32:009 (2) - you can make a cooler slider than this! :p

[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3)
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))?
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)?
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles?
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat
02:18:466 (6) - ^
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth.
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^

[Inya's Insane]

00:32:009 (4) - i definitely don't think the vocal is intended to be on the blue tick; it just occurs as a result of the fade in effect. either way, it sounds really awkward so I really think you should shift this ahead to the white tick and make it a 1/2 slider
00:47:438 (4,5) - space these further apart
00:56:352 (7) - NC
00:56:695 (1) - RNC
00:59:095 (8) - NC
00:59:609 (1) - RNC
01:04:238 (7) - RNC
01:04:581 (1) - NC
01:08:695 (1,2) - weird flow, maybe vertically invert (2) in a ctrl+j sort of way
01:10:066 (7) - NC
01:18:295 (6) - NC
01:20:695 (1) - RNC
01:21:038 (2) - NC
01:22:409 (1,2) - should be much further apart
01:23:781 (5) - NC
01:25:838 (1) - RNC
01:26:524 (3) - NC
01:29:266 (6) - NC
01:30:981 (3,4) - space further apart
01:32:009 (7) - NC
01:38:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks really messy
01:39:038 (2,3) - these first two beats aren't spaced close together in all of your following patterns, so by the same logic space these apart
01:50:524 (3) - ends on a strong beat that really should be clicked on; make this two hitcircles
01:52:409 (1) - RNC
01:52:581 (2) - NC
01:52:752 (1) - RNC
02:33:895 (1) - this section is way too loud, consider turning down the volume

I think patterning still needs some work; there's a lot of overlap and inconsistency in flow & pacing. Hopefully these points help though.

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC
Log Off Now
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Topic Starter
Log Off Now

SuperMICrophone wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Easy]

00:22:066 (1) - finish? Added a whistle instead, finish is a bit too much imo for this, thanks for pointing it out though ^^ Also reminded me to fix some of the other missing hitsounds in this diff
01:38:866 (1,2,3) - looks weird; would be better if you could edit the pattern so (1) and (3) are symmetrical across (2) I don't understand what you mean here?
01:48:466 (1,2) - i want these to blanket lol I think it adds a bit of variety compared to the previous blanket, also if I did blanket I would have to remap the next section because of the long slider being aligned to 'turn' at the kick

only slightly concern about the difficulty is the use of non-stop 1/1 in the first kiai, maybe working in some 2/1 here and there would be better especially because the beginning is so slow. Also, I'm not sure about the 1/2 repeat sliders because of the high BPM but again these are just minor concerns.

I understand what you mean and depending on more feedback i'll add in some longer sliders, but as it stands I think it's ok for now

[Normal]

00:22:066 (1) - finish? Same comment as easy
00:26:181 (3,4) - blanket can be improved by making the curves steeper Fixed, didn't originally intend for this to be a blanket but it looks better as one
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - looks sloppy; maybe more something like this? (I only edited the direction of (2): Decided to change the direction of 1 instead for a more curved shape which is what I was going for originally, good shout on this

SPOILER

01:34:067 (3) - curve can be slightly adjusted so the end is more up and to the right for better flow this is such a minor detail q.q changing this wouldn't affect flow much if at all imo
01:46:409 (6) - adjust direction so it forms a line of symmetry where (1) and (5) are symmetrical across the line of (6)? Ok

SPOILER

02:02:181 (1,1) - make the grey (1) a ctrl+g version of the pink (1)? I have these at different angles intentionally
02:32:009 (2) - you can make a cooler slider than this! :p but howwwwww q.q.q.q.q.q im so bad at slider art q.q

GD's
[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3)
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))?
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)?
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles?
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat
02:18:466 (6) - ^
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth.
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^

[Inya's Insane]

00:32:009 (4) - i definitely don't think the vocal is intended to be on the blue tick; it just occurs as a result of the fade in effect. either way, it sounds really awkward so I really think you should shift this ahead to the white tick and make it a 1/2 slider
00:47:438 (4,5) - space these further apart
00:56:352 (7) - NC
00:56:695 (1) - RNC
00:59:095 (8) - NC
00:59:609 (1) - RNC
01:04:238 (7) - RNC
01:04:581 (1) - NC
01:08:695 (1,2) - weird flow, maybe vertically invert (2) in a ctrl+j sort of way
01:10:066 (7) - NC
01:18:295 (6) - NC
01:20:695 (1) - RNC
01:21:038 (2) - NC
01:22:409 (1,2) - should be much further apart
01:23:781 (5) - NC
01:25:838 (1) - RNC
01:26:524 (3) - NC
01:29:266 (6) - NC
01:30:981 (3,4) - space further apart
01:32:009 (7) - NC
01:38:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks really messy
01:39:038 (2,3) - these first two beats aren't spaced close together in all of your following patterns, so by the same logic space these apart
01:50:524 (3) - ends on a strong beat that really should be clicked on; make this two hitcircles
01:52:409 (1) - RNC
01:52:581 (2) - NC
01:52:752 (1) - RNC
02:33:895 (1) - this section is way too loud, consider turning down the volume

I think patterning still needs some work; there's a lot of overlap and inconsistency in flow & pacing. Hopefully these points help though.

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC
Thanks for the mod! :D
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Starset
osu pls
osu file format v14

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inya
98 posts
Joined January 2013
inya

Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/




Easy
SPOILER
[*] plays fine, but id really recommend changing hitsounds in the following sliders/notes:
[*] 01:45:724 (3) - add a whistle at the slider start
[*] 01:47:781 (2) - delete the whistle at slider start
[*] I think it sounds better tbh check other parts like this i only mentioned one since i havent spoted anything more, but if you find something similar and you like this hitsound consider changing it


Normal
SPOILER
[*] 01:28:581 (3,1) - blanket maybe?
[*] 01:29:952 (3,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 01:57:381 (4,1) - ^
[*] 02:06:295 (1,2) - ^
[*] 02:09:038 (1,2) - fix this blanket a little bit
[*] 02:11:781 (1,3) - blanket this
[*] 02:19:324 (2,1) - fix this blanket



Neme's Hard
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend? :P
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right? :P
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles :P the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - )
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx



HB's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend this slider to the previos white tick http://imgur.com/AxUdpdn
[*] 00:23:438 (4) - dont make these sort of really hard curved shapes unless it fits the tune, for calm music like this i dont think any sliders should pop up, so i probably wount mention them in the remainder of this mod but try to have a lookout for those
[*] 00:24:466 (5,1) - blanket
[*] 00:37:838 (7,1) - fix this blanket
[*] 00:51:038 (2,3,4,6) - overlap kinda awkward fix this pls
[*] 01:06:981 (5,2) - ^
[*] 01:22:409 (1) - ctrl +g maybe
then at this point i realised oh its WIP haha so far so good



Inya's Insane
SPOILER
[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length from the white tick before that http://imgur.com/t1gCDHuDone
[*] 00:22:066 (1) - id say make another timing point here and decrease the volume to 30% it is really quite here it gets louder 00:33:038 (1) - which 50% is fine i think Good idea
[*] 00:54:466 (4) - make a timing point and make it 10-15% volume since it gets louder Done it with all of the stream hits, thx for the idea
[*] 02:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think the jumps fit there try something like this http://imgur.com/0VqltgA personally i think this plays better remember this is a 4 star song no need for so many jumps and squares :P Already fixed
[*] 02:10:409 (7) - change the timing point for the end of kiai time here, and start it here 02:11:095 (1) - at this point is where there should be a burst Done
[*] 02:34:409 (3,4) - kinda eh overlap
[*] 02:42:981 (4,5) - ^
[*] 02:43:324 (5,2) - ^ Done all 3


So far nice map tbh Good luck :)
Thx for the mod <3
Last edited by inya , edited 1 time in total.
inya
98 posts
Joined January 2013
inya

SuperMIC wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Easy]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
01:38:866 (1,2,3) - looks weird; would be better if you could edit the pattern so (1) and (3) are symmetrical across (2)
01:48:466 (1,2) - i want these to blanket lol

only slightly concern about the difficulty is the use of non-stop 1/1 in the first kiai, maybe working in some 2/1 here and there would be better especially because the beginning is so slow. Also, I'm not sure about the 1/2 repeat sliders because of the high BPM but again these are just minor concerns.

[Normal]

00:22:066 (1) - finish?
00:26:181 (3,4) - blanket can be improved by making the curves steeper
00:33:038 (1,2,1) - looks sloppy; maybe more something like this? (I only edited the direction of (2):

SPOILER

01:34:067 (3) - curve can be slightly adjusted so the end is more up and to the right for better flow
01:46:409 (6) - adjust direction so it forms a line of symmetry where (1) and (5) are symmetrical across the line of (6)?

SPOILER

02:02:181 (1,1) - make the grey (1) a ctrl+g version of the pink (1)?
02:32:009 (2) - you can make a cooler slider than this! :p

[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3)
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))?
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)?
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles?
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat
02:18:466 (6) - ^
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth.
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^

[Inya's Insane]

00:32:009 (4) - i definitely don't think the vocal is intended to be on the blue tick; it just occurs as a result of the fade in effect. either way, it sounds really awkward so I really think you should shift this ahead to the white tick and make it a 1/2 slider Nope, that's even more weird
00:47:438 (4,5) - space these further apart Done
00:56:352 (7) - NC
00:56:695 (1) - RNC
00:59:095 (8) - NC
00:59:609 (1) - RNC
01:04:238 (7) - RNC
01:04:581 (1) - NC Done all
01:08:695 (1,2) - weird flow, maybe vertically invert (2) in a ctrl+j sort of way Done
01:10:066 (7) - NC
01:18:295 (6) - NC
01:20:695 (1) - RNC
01:21:038 (2) - NC Done all
01:22:409 (1,2) - should be much further apart Fixed i guess
01:23:781 (5) - NC
01:25:838 (1) - RNC
01:26:524 (3) - NC
01:29:266 (6) - NC Done all
01:30:981 (3,4) - space further apart Kay..
01:32:009 (7) - NC
01:38:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks really messy Fixed
01:39:038 (2,3) - these first two beats aren't spaced close together in all of your following patterns, so by the same logic space these apart Fixed these
01:50:524 (3) - ends on a strong beat that really should be clicked on; make this two hitcircles Done
01:52:409 (1) - RNC
01:52:581 (2) - NC
01:52:752 (1) - RNC Done all
02:33:895 (1) - this section is way too loud, consider turning down the volume Kay

I think patterning still needs some work; there's a lot of overlap and inconsistency in flow & pacing. Hopefully these points help though. Don't think so

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC
Thx for the mod, the NCs really helped
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Updated Mapset with HB's Diff completed and Inya's Update
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Here from #modreqs - feeling kind of tired so I'm only going to mod 1 diff for now, may mod another down the road for no kds

[Inya's Insane]
  1. 00:45:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - First thing is the NC's here are on the red ticks, which don't make much sense with the music. The second is I don't hear why you're using a back and forth pattern like this. If anything, a pattern like this should start on 00:45:038 (5) - since thats when the weird dropplet effect things in the background of the music start.
  2. 00:52:238 (2,1,1,2,3) - These are all too quiet in my opinion.
  3. And here starts my general hand-wavey mod. For the first two kiais:
    1. You have a constant 1/2 beat throughout the entire first two kiais, and while that may be whats in the music, there are plenty of other things you can map in the music to break this up a bit. A lot of mappers frown upon this, especially in longer songs, because ultimately osu! is a rhythm game and this isn't really a rhythm chorus, its just a metronome of 1/2s.
    2. Most of the chorus is spent with the player jumping in a clockwise motion, which can be bad for mouse players (from what I'm told) and is also kind of tiring for the wrist of a tablet player as well.
    3. Listening to the music closely, I understand that it would probably be frustrating to have to be 3/4th or 4/4th sliders in here. What I recommend is abusing some repeating sliders here and there to give the player a break. Also, lower DS a bit all across the board and have it get higher at some of the more... intense? (Its really hard to clarify what would be intense in the song, you as the mapper should make that call) parts.
    Tbh, I know its bad, but thats all I reall feel like pointing out, I'm kind of tired. If you want any clarifications to my mod, or if you want me to do a longer mod for your diff, shoot me a PM or catch me in game, I'd be more than happy to as I like the song, I'm just not feeling the desire to do this right now.
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Placeholder for massive reply on Hard difficulty mods since nemesis can't work on it because of poor internet.

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Electoz wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late.

[Hard]

  1. 00:23:438 (3) - Can you curve it more or so sth about the shape? I think it can be improved. sure
  2. 00:43:324 (1) - Is this one even curved lol, just do a completely straight one looks much better. agreed, also changed new combo slider for a better shape
  3. 00:58:581 (5,6,1) - The stacks feels very uncomfortable because it's distrupting the flow, my suggestion here is to make 00:58:581 (5,6) a different flow from the rest of the pattern here 00:58:066 (2,3,4,5) . Imo sth like what you did here 00:59:438 (3,4,5) feels much more comfortable to play. nice suggestion, i've changed the pattern so the downbeat is clickable which should feel much more natural
  4. 01:23:609 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I found out the flow of the jump here is kinda uncomfortable compared to other jumps with a similar rhythm. changed into a stack, hopefully thats a bit better :P
I haven't mod for a few days so my modding might be a bit bad, sry for that in advance.
Good luck~
Thank you! :D

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-Nighthawk- wrote:

This is my M4M! Your mapping style is very nice, and I'm hard pressed to find many mistakes, here I go:

Neme's Hard
00:26:181 (5,6) - can you replace this with a slider and hitcircle from 00:25:495 (3) - ? I think that would sound nicer and make more sense as the other drawn out vocals just before this have this pattern too. I think this pattern plays perfectly fine since it's mainly following the piano here and since the vocal changes seamlessly between words it's hard to make it clickable
02:05:352 (3) - take this out, as this is silence. done
02:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the last one, these have notes on the blue ticks. the bass drum is being hit on the red tick?
There are very similar cases to these in this difficulty, and it seems you put them in for extra difficulty, which is nice, but I'm pretty sure that this song doesn't have noise on any blue tick

Yeah sorry, I can't find much, someone more experienced might find something though, but as it stands this is a fine beatmap. I hope it gets ranked soon! :D
Thank you! :D

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Cooldue7 wrote:

Hey man M4M from #modreqs. As of the start i would like to appologise for the waiting time, was pretty busy :/

[centre]Neme's Hard[*] 00:20:695 (1) - extend the slider length like so http://imgur.com/WybN39I This would make the start time inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties, and the vocal is suuuuper quiet here and not even audible at lower volumes so I don't think it's worth it
[*] 00:23:095 (2,3) - blanket this if you want slider is too big q.q
[*] 00:42:466 (4) - move this to x:328 y:48 no need for such a awkward ok, also moved slider afterwards for a better flow
[*] 00:43:324 (1) - any need for this like bend? :P changed
[*] 00:54:466 (1) - move to the white tick and extend until the red one like so http://imgur.com/1PKjEh1 the current state doesnt really fit the music imo the drum fill starts on the red tick, if i moved it to the white tick it would be playing silence or half of the fill which is jarring to play
[*] 01:00:981 (2) - you could curve this slider to have a bit of flow with the previous long one 01:00:466 (1) - like so http://imgur.com/HWdFDhD ok, done
[*] 01:00:466 (1,3) - blanket i like it how it is q.q
[*] 01:47:095 (1,3) - you could give this a fancy blanket if you want it wount really be noticed but something like this always adds some style points to the map. right? :P I know what you mean by this but it would mean that the flow going from 1 -> 2 -> 3 would need to be changed, if more people suggest it i will change it though
[*] 01:50:181 (1,1) - i dont think these sliders fit this tune, consider normal circles :P the first one is ok ( 01:49:838 (1) - ) they play with the 'pops' or whatever they're called and also they're sliders because of the feedback in the bass
[*] 02:14:524 (1) - consider changing this slider to something like this 02:16:409 (2,3,4) - you done it previosuly just try to keep it consistent with like every 2'nd white tick or 3rd, since the current state seems pretty random at times i'm confused as to what you mean here?
[*] 02:22:752 (1,3) - i really like these slider shapes, but consider making them a bit circular at the end, something like this http://imgur.com/PmlHtBx that looks so much cleaner although i'm not sure how i can fix the current one, help me out a bit here? ;D

So far nice map tbh Good luck :)
Thank you :D

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Lexis wrote:

From my queue :3

00:43:324 (1) - 1/1 beat slider without reverse sound better. I agree but not sure how I can change this without making a massive jump, will try and fix at some point :P

01:15:209 (4) - End out of the grid fixed

01:33:037 (5) - The slider have a really strange point at the end x) XD fixed

02:16:495 (3) - Delete circle done along with deleting the same circle a bar or two later

02:24:809 (2) - The slider make a blanket only with (3) why not blanketing for 1 & 3 at the same time ?
 that looks so good, done :D

That's all for me, if you want a mod for your other maps, go on my queue !
Good luck ! :)
Thank you :D

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SuperMIC wrote:

m4m! Instructed not to mod HB's difficulty.

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[Neme's Hard]

00:47:266 (2) - make this blanket the start of (1)? (so you'd also have to change (3) done, made 3 blanket 1 also :D
00:50:695 (7) - slider ends on a very strong beat that should really be clicked on. make into two hitcircles or a hitcircle then a 1/2 slider (where you'd delete (1))? I think it plays fine in this instance, but will change depending on further feedback
00:58:924 (1) - ^ make into two circles probably a slider works fine here because of the quieter note in the lead on the red tick
01:33:724 (2,3,4) - don't like this triplet because (3) isn't really mapped to anything removed
01:35:095 (2,3,4) - ^ removed
01:44:009 (4,1) - make (1) parallel to (4)? ok
01:56:524 (5) - ends on a super strong beat; two hitcircles? changed into a stack, good call
02:02:524 (2,3,4) - same as above (3) isn't mapped to anything removed
02:05:266 (2,3,4) - ^ removed
02:15:724 (6) - ends on a strong beat changed, also changed up the rest of the combo
02:18:466 (6) - ^ changed along with rest of combo
02:22:752 (1) - curve at the end should be smoother. Move the second last point left until the curve is smooth. will fix later
02:25:495 (3) - and copy paste^ will fix later

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Cool mapset, thanks for the m4m!

-SMIC
Thank you :D

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That took ages, massive thanks to everyone who modded though :D
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Hellow, i just want to know if you still need the diff. o.o By far I can tell the spread is fine as it is, but that's only my point of view. Let me know what you think.
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HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow, i just want to know if you still need the diff. o.o By far I can tell the spread is fine as it is, but that's only my point of view. Let me know what you think.
Hi :D

I would still like to include your advanced difficulty into the map since I think it would cool to have you in the set and it's a difficulty that would suit the song well :)

Thank you:)
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Hey
My posts sum has gotten totally decreased.... what even happened

Resurrected your map *dramatic sound effect* lol

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]
  1. I think AR 3 would be enough and would make a better diff spread too.
  2. 00:23:438 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe it would be better to just make this into star (it's currently imperfect so....) use ctrl+D to make perfect stars in case you didn't know (but before, you have to set the beat snap divisor to 1/1) and try to make it a perfect star with 00:23:438 (3) - 's tail and 00:27:552 (1) - 's head so they should overlap each other. http://puu.sh/nCyHN/ac7ceb960c.jpg (the selection shows how the tail and head stacked)
  3. 00:33:038 (1,2) - Is it really necessary to split it into 1/1 slider and circle? Considering there's no sound at white tick that supported with slider's end and circle, and because of the long vocal that started on the big white tick, it should be better to use a single 2/1 slider. http://puu.sh/nCyOE/9bd1beefc5.jpg would be even fitting if you end it at red tick 00:33:895 since there's a sound there but I don't recommend it since it might cause polarity problem.
  4. 00:35:781 (1,2) - same as above ^ should be better if you just simply use 1/1 slider.
  5. 00:37:152 (3) - there's no significant sound at the current white tick where it ended now (or just tiny sound). And instead it ignored the vocal here 00:37:838 would be better if you just end it there to follow the vocal.
  6. 00:52:238 (1) - I think a single circle at big white tick should be sufficient since this is Easy, and more fitting too since the sound just stop there without any increasing or decreasing sound afterward that indicate the use of spinner.
  7. 01:15:552 (3,4) - Would be better to just use a single 4/1 slider because there's no significant sound here 01:15:895 that need to be emphasized with slider and it goes silent right after the big white tick so it should fit more to just cover the entire "silent" effect with a single slider instead of splitting it. Let the slider head emphasize the big sound at big white tick. http://puu.sh/nCzCS/f2322a1523.jpg
  8. 01:30:638 (6) - Kinda nazi, shouldn't it NC here instead?
  9. 01:34:752 (1) - Remove NC since you usually NC-ed every 2 big white ticks.
  10. 01:49:838 (1) - I honestly don't like the shape xD maybe make it more "funky" or something like http://puu.sh/nCzKf/78ae271f65.jpg or http://puu.sh/nCzLj/a79ccbcc38.jpg or anything else... Maybe add some curve to make it less stiff (?)
  11. 01:51:209 (2) - Honestly I want to NC this because the rhythm become different from 01:49:838 (1) - ... Let 01:49:838 (1) - be a lonesome combo
  12. 02:20:009 (1,2) - just delete these and start the spinner from 02:20:009 since the sound there and the sound at where the spinner start on currently are similar so it would be more fitting to just cover the entire sound with a single spinner.
  13. 02:24:124 reduce the volume at this part and so on, sounded a bit too loud currently.... wow, you actually mapped the outro .-.
  14. Overall, nice map, you picked a simple song at used simple rhythms. Good job. Just need some improvement, and some blankets are still off.

[Normal]
  1. Some DS problems, check it.
  2. Why the slider feel so fast when actually it's not xD
  3. 00:52:238 (1) - same suggestion as Easy actually.... and maybe for the next diffs, I'll stop reminding this.
  4. 01:28:581 (3,1) - Somehow I don't like this placing :/ 01:29:266 (1) - is weirdly too close to (3)'s reverse.... maybe just move it to (3)'s blanket? http://puu.sh/nCAzf/5b4df53ab4.jpg you should fix the blanket afterwards tho.
  5. 01:36:124 (1,2,3) - Lol, I actually prefer this to be a perfect "angry symbol" shape xD try to balance it more. Same suggestion for the similar patterns.
    "angry symbol in case you don't know"
  6. 01:39:552 (2,3) - well it's following a nice significant sound but I think this rhythm might be a bit tricky for new players... This one should do better maybe http://puu.sh/nCAKz/d55557aab7.jpg same suggestion for similar patterns.
  7. 02:32:009 (2) - Lol, the shape xD yeah, it's totally fine, no worries, just kinda unique -w-
  8. 02:43:324 (1) - Actually since there's barely sound here, it's pretty hard to hit perfectly.... maybe just end a slider or a spinner here...

[Neme's Hard]
  1. 00:25:495 (3) - Move this to the right a bit for better flow http://puu.sh/nCAWp/ca3ec5d94f.jpg "Why? The current pattern now make a perfect leading from (2) considering (3)'s shape that point upward so it should flow nicely," maybe you asked so. Well, yeah, but from (1) to (2) is moving to the right and suddenly going upward would make the flow too pointy, look http://puu.sh/nCB2v/1c45dde2ee.jpg but with a little gap so (2) don't point directly to (3) like the example I did, it act as "bumper" that would make it less pointy http://puu.sh/nCB7x/d2ee2a5e00.jpg Note this tip ;) Ah and it's definitely not going outside the playfield, so it's okay.
  2. 00:39:038 (2,3) - Make a little jump so that don't get too close, it looks kinda weird. http://puu.sh/nCBbv/f4459c2e24.jpg
  3. 01:21:724 (4,5) - the triplet is kinda unnecessary imo... If you want to make triplet, this rhythm would fit better imo http://puu.sh/nCBgv/7d8b00e7e1.jpg
  4. 01:23:266 (3,4) - unstacked on purpose? Wew, this kinda looks like triplet or 1/1 pattern xD but still okay tho.
  5. 01:35:609 (4,5) - try to ctrl+g these, fit much better
  6. 01:56:352 (4,5,1) - the stack seems kinda unnecessary imo... And I think I need to say to avoid starting a slider at red tick since it would end at bigger sound than where it start and it would feel weird. Like this pattern 01:56:695 (1,2,3) - try to compare it with this http://puu.sh/nCBoN/c7c53a8151.jpg feel different right? Except for certain cases like this 01:35:266 (3) - , it totally alright and fitting since the big sound actually starts at red tick.
  7. 01:58:066 (1) - The music don't really change.... why spinner? Just map this part normally.
  8. 02:22:752 (1,3) - Lol, maybe move them downward a bit to make them not too close to (2) http://puu.sh/nCBx9/3d846ef0e1.jpg
  9. 02:25:495 (3) - Oh yeah, I think it's better to end it here 02:26:866 since there's a piano sound there. A faint one tho, but it better than ending it here 02:27:552 where there's no sound at all.
  10. The rest are basically fine except for those unfitting started-at-red-tick sliders

I'll end this here :3
Overall good map, rankable, just need some improvement~
Good luck~^^

edit: wrong format, lol
edit 2 : I forgot to mention that this is a M4M from my modding Q~ Thank you for using it and waiting for your mod ^^
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