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[General]
offset 587 is more accurate imo ( check this after applies all mods )
00:57:327 - this is 1/12 , not 1/8 ( on diffs that have this snaps }
01:25:842 - ^
01:35:347 - ^
[Hyper]
00:01:189 (1189|4,1263|6,1337|4,1486|1,1486|2) - maybe just like this looks clean
http://puu.sh/kcukY.jpg00:12:921 (12921|3,12921|0) - should be the same density as 00:12:476 (12476|0,12476|6,12476|4) -
00:14:852 - to 00:17:228 - i think at the earlier stage , its better to focus on main synth instead of the drumstreams , it kinda make the flow inconsistent imo
00:26:288 (26288|3) - maybe on different key because of the piano pitch
00:27:476 (27476|5) - should only be 1/2 slider not 1/1
00:28:664 - add a note
00:36:981 (36981|4) - there is a finish here
00:45:149 (45149|4) - maybe change this as a LN until the double line
00:47:154 (47154|3) - maybe just focus on piano here would be nice
00:59:555 (59555|5) - delete this
01:04:233 (64233|3) - should be on white line
01:06:238 (66238|5,66238|2) - on blue line
01:09:208 - add a note
01:11:585 - ^
01:14:109 (74109|1,74109|6,74109|5,74109|0) - overemphasised
01:30:520 (90520|5) - wrong emphasisition , 01:30:446 (90446|2) - this one should be 2 note according to your previous beats
01:31:894 (91894|0) - move this on 3
01:32:080 (92080|6,92080|0,92191|1,92191|5,92265|4,92265|2,92377|6,92377|0,92488|5,92488|1,92562|2,92562|4) - 1/3
01:35:867 - add a note
01:39:283 (99283|2,99728|2,100174|4) - delete this ( check on higher diffs as well i might miss it when i mod it last time )
01:43:887 (103887|3) - move to 2
01:59:406 (119406|3,119852|3,120297|3) - move a collumn left would be more balanced
[Another]
00:17:080 (17080|3,17154|4,17228|5,17302|3,17377|2,17451|4) - how about something like
http://puu.sh/kcajL.jpg00:19:010 (19010|0,19010|2,19010|1,19109|5,19109|6,19109|4,19208|2,19208|1,19208|0,19307|5,19307|6,19307|4,19406|2,19406|0,19406|1,19505|4,19505|6,19505|5) - i think its better you map this one as 2 notes each so you can focus on various pattern in terms of pitch rev or etc.
like how you did on 01:31:189 (91189|4,91189|2,91288|6,91288|5,91387|2,91387|0,91486|4,91486|5,91585|1,91585|2,91684|4,91684|3,91783|0,91783|2,91882|6,91882|4,91981|3,91981|1,92080|2,92080|4,92179|5,92179|3,92278|0,92278|2) -
00:38:466 (38466|4) - move to 2 ? according to your pattern 00:37:872 (37872|3,38169|2) -
00:41:139 (41139|0,41436|0,41882|0,42327|0) - i dont really get what did u follow here , same as the rest LNs you did on this part
00:49:976 (49976|3) - no sound
01:01:486 (61486|4) - should add a note like how u did 01:01:189 (61189|0,61189|1,61783|3,61783|2) -
01:43:961 (103961|5) - i think 2 LNs is enough here , you can use this space for doubling notes on 01:43:961 (103961|3,104035|4) -
[Black another]
00:14:555 (14555|3) - maybe move this on 3 ?
00:20:718 - add a note here
00:21:906 - add a note
00:23:095 - ^
00:24:134 (24134|4) - delete
00:28:590 (28590|3) - ghost
00:45:099 (45099|2,45124|3,45149|4) - this grace is wrongly mapped , it should start on white tick 00:45:149 (45149|4) -
01:06:906 (66906|5) - ghost
01:08:317 - should probably add more note , its a finish
01:10:694 - ^
just some part are like overemphasised snare feel like forcing the difficulty instead of mapping the song
overall the map structure is mostly inconsisntent regarding the instrument mapped ( like earlier part is denser than later part )
a lot of improvement could be made
i will continue on the other diff after dinner ~its 4 am now i think i will continue the rest tomorrow ~