ayy, sorry I'm slow, thought I'd be able to test play later but my hand still broken xd
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normal hitwhistle9 and normal sliderslide 9 is 2 seconds long lol
00:31:883 (1,2,3,4) - personally I found default claps here to be really unfiting, I think you could find something better, maybe even from the current normal hitsounds you use
00:44:135 (8) - I know you intend to make this part easy, but you coul try spacing this more - it would put good emphasis on the note
http://i.imgur.com/np1uWIq.jpg etc
wow do you really have to use 80 % volume at kiai, get it down to 70 atleast imo, because normal hitsounds are extra loud already
01:46:695 (13,1,2) - this is the harshest transition into this stream in this section, but if you justify it by the music here then it's fine
02:07:422 (5,13) - stick with the same thing here, now 02:08:786 (1) - feels like 1/1 gap if sightreading
02:15:331 (1,2,3,4) - this patern was really cool until 02:16:149 (4) - it just doesn't fit it visually there lol, atm it seems like you had the idea to use only 3 sliders in that combo. do it like 03:25:141 (1,2,3,4) -
02:44:913 (2,3) - this stack doesn't play well in comparison to the other ones, unstack this one imo
03:01:141 (1) - something similar to the very first point I mentioned try spacing more, the patern you use before it is perfect for emphasizing beats like this
http://i.imgur.com/xQWdMEH.jpg example. you can also try anything else, just that beat is strong so yeah
03:03:186 (7) - move more down, it's too close to 03:02:232 (1,3) -
03:04:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section looks really messy, mostly the overlaps
03:06:595 (1,3,7) - yea same problem, move up 7 this time. if you want to keep the beat emhpasis on this part idk try to move them around a bit, but I'm sure you can make it better
03:15:732 (4,5) - harsh flow
05:11:618 (2) - 100
06:02:890 (6) - nc
06:02:890 (6) - whistle on whole slider are you sure?
06:03:436 (7) - slider?
I think that's all I wanted to say
Good luck!