Hello Daikyi. I'm here to check your Map as 2nd BN.
Should be everything fine i can give you the 2nd Bubble.
Final Voyage
My first suggestion is to delete these notes: 00:21:610 (21610|2,21997|3,22384|0,22771|3,23159|2) -
The Piano here is really not that strong and it was really really uncomfortable feeling while playing the Opening here with so many Chords.
For Pitch you can make the singlenotes from here 00:21:610 - like 1-2-3-4-2
Try it out it feels really nice like you actually really play the Piano.
00:25:481 (25481|2) - Should you accept my suggestion before i recommend to delete here one note too because it's also not that audible. But you could add instead here 00:25:674 - a note.
00:33:221 (33221|2,33221|0) -
00:35:544 (35544|2,35544|1) -
00:37:092 (37092|1,37092|0) - Do you really need here a chord? It feels too much to hit for this still kinda peaceful part of the Song. You should try to catch more the (maybe it sounds stupid) "feeling" of the current Part. It's peaceful and calm so i think to overuse here chords is not really good.
00:56:145 - i think you missed here a sound. It's not sooo audible but it's there and belong to these notes 00:55:916 (55916|2,55992|3,56069|2,56222|1) -
Since you are often watch for PR.. 00:56:222 (56222|1,56375|0) - same Pitch
can be same column.
01:08:133 (68133|0) - Remove this note here. Uhm it has not this sound you follow here with your Singlenotes. There is only the Long sound for the LN. Its really audible to hear that the sound isn't there.
01:12:396 (72396|1,72396|2) - Why suddenly the chord here? I mean yeah i sound is louder but.. i think it's not really needed here.
01:16:822 (76822|3,76822|1) - -> 01:18:133 (78133|1) - Inconsistency in your Pattern. Exactly the same sounds but different kind of pattern.
01:20:756 - Same thing here.
01:23:912 (83912|2,83953|3) - What do you try to catch here? There is no 1/8 sound. The Sound in the melody is pretty sure 1/12 here. So you could keep this note here 01:23:953 (83953|3) - for the drum like you later also did, but i'm pretty sure this one 01:23:912 (83912|2) - should be on the last 1/12 beatline, means 01:23:898 (83898|2) - .
01:28:953 (88953|0,89117|0,89281|1) - Try to arrange here, i miss the PR.
01:46:330 (106330|3) - Maybe move this one to 3? It feels kinda strange to have it on the same column you followed an other sound. Make clear that this note belongs not longer to 01:46:002 (106002|3,106166|3) - . Also it has a different pitch to 01:46:493 (106493|3) - .
01:58:023 (118023|3) - When you follow here the really high sound in the melody this note is definitely
Wrong Snapped and should be 1/4, means 01:58:051 - .
02:01:739 (121739|2,121739|1,121794|3,121821|0,121842|2,121903|3,121903|1) - I don't get these ?_? what note follows what. Please recheck this because it really seems wrong for me. The Melody here is clearly 1/6 but you snapped it so strange i just can't hear what you follow here so i better ask.
Since you always followed kinda exactly with your LN's the Melody i need to mention that 02:56:107 (176107|2,176571|0,177035|1,177500|2) - are actually should be 3/4 beat long.
03:28:117 (208117|3) - Pretty sure this note is
Wrong Snapped. It should be 1/8 to follow the Drumroll.
03:33:334 - Just want to mention you mapped this sound here for what you now use 1/8, in the Part before with 1/6. As example see here. 01:49:280 - .
Did you do it on purpose?
03:43:906 (223906|2,223946|1,223987|0,223987|3,224028|2,224069|1) - ?_? I don't get it now. 03:44:028 (224028|2) - This note has no sound. Uhm.. deepens on how you mapped this part i think this note should be 03:43:865 -
03:54:933 (234933|3) - I know what you tried here, to catch the Melody right? But 1/12 sounds really really really to early here. Set your Beatsnap Divider to 1/12 and start here on this point with 50% playback and with 25% playback and you will clearly hear the sound comes later. I'm pretty sure it is 1/8 and should be 03:54:964 - .
03:58:676 (238676|1) - If you again follow the melody this note is
Wrong Snapped. It should be 1/8 here 03:58:706 - .
With melody i mean this really loud .. like.. a whistle?
05:11:795 (311795|1,311795|2) - do you have here a note too much? I just hear the drumroll.
05:13:552 (313552|2,313552|3) - And here i hear only the melody, no drum in the background, according to 05:15:035 - you might to delete a note or add here. But keep consistency with your pattern.
05:16:257 - Add because melody + Drumroll. See as example here 05:16:986 - .
05:18:924 - I feel like the Kiai should beginn here, not 05:18:198 -
05:22:806 - Note missing? Drum/Melody, has everything you mapped with your Chords in this evil 1/6 stream
why the hell i suggest you to make it more harder.05:24:379 (324379|3,324379|2,324439|1,324439|0) - i don't really get these two chords here.. uhm.. the melody you mapped with chords is actually 05:24:500 - and here you don't have one. Kinda confusing.
05:29:111 (329111|0) - It feels like this LN should be 1/6 beat longer.
05:42:492 (342492|0,342492|1) - Suggest to delete a note here. You followed the main melody here and it's kinda .. mh.. strange to add suddenly for a drum here a chord. 05:42:772 - Here you have drum too and no chord. Keep following the melody.
06:00:896 (360896|3,361023|2,361150|3,361277|2) - 1/3 drum
06:01:404 (361404|3,361468|2) - 1/6 drum and then you change for one note back to 1/3 what is not good. It feels weird to play
Move 06:01:563 (361563|3) - this one to the last 1/6 beatline and add a note on 06:01:595 - because the full 1/6 drum beginns already 06:01:404 - .
Oki thats all. I really like this song