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Renard - Spaghetti

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Spaghetti
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Topic Starter
Spaghetti
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 4, 2016 at 7:02:11 PM

Artist: Renard
Title: Spaghetti
Tags: Mom's Spaghetti eminem lose yourself remix smooth calm 8 eight mile Curtain Call The Hits
BPM: 180.6
Filesize: 1360kb
Play Time: 00:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.54 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Normal (1.96 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Spaghetti (3.76 stars, 131 notes)
Download: Renard - Spaghetti
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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timing stolen from snaggletooth
Last edited by Spaghetti , edited 18 times in total.
Raiden
osu! Alumni
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Raiden
omgg <3
Luel Roseline
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Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
Renard - You
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
Joined October 2013
ac8129464363
vomit on his sweater already
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
spaghetti

00:06:290 (2,3) - This is kinda confusing because of the vocals. nothing concrete landing on 3 imo so i think a slider is better.
00:08:283 (1,2,3) - Theres a real lack of notes in this section so i would make 00:08:615 - a 1/2 slider instead to eliminate some rhythm gaps.
00:09:612 (1,2,3) - Spacing is kinda confusing, looks a lot more like 1/2 jump
00:23:067 (1,2) - Almost blankets are almost good xP. 00:31:040 (1,2) - too
00:32:369 (1,2,3,5) - Quite a lot of overlapping for me xP.
00:40:010 (4,5) - Uh idk nothing concrete again. I would make this a slider cuz yea if you're following vocals theyre really off here.
00:42:336 (7) - NC cuz yea.

hard

00:05:459 (1) - Weird rhythm choice. do this:
~
00:09:280 (2,3) - these don't look nice for me xdd either overlap more or dont lol.
00:12:270 (1,2,3) - Really strange rhythm choices here. the slider-ends should be maped to something clickable imo.
00:26:223 (2,3) - Ctr;+G'ing the rhythm is better imo. could apply to a lot of other places too. 00:26:555 - is a stronger beat than 00:26:721 -

normal

00:06:290 (2) - Don't do these 2x repeats on normals ;c

idk how to mod this. rhythms are so weird and idk how fitting they even are...


well, good luck
Togetic
128 posts
Joined March 2015
Togetic
Thanks for asking me to mod this!

There isn't very much to say because of how short this song is but, before anything please lower the hitsounds because it is pretty hard to even hear the song
Spaghetti diff
00:12:270 (1,2) - these sliders are a bit to curved and kinda awkward to play
00:14:595 (5,6,1) - doesn't flow too well; awkward to aim
00:21:904 (2,3,4) - doesn't flow well; very easy to slider break on your first time playing
00:27:552 (3,4,5,6,1) - bit too cluttered and awkward to aim because of this
my last problem with this diff is the triangles at the end, especially these 00:39:844 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - they need to be spaced apart more so they don't cause stupid misreads

Hard diff
00:06:290 (2,3,1) - space this apart more
00:16:256 (1,2) - overlap the circle for aesthetic reasons
00:35:027 (1,2,3) - this is very awkward to play and doesn't really fit a hard diff either

Normal diff
I suggest you lower the cs by a bit because it makes everything look a bit cluttered ie 00:06:290 (2,1,2,3,1) - and 00:33:200 (3,1,2,3,1,2) -
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
-GriM-
spaghetti:
00:08:947 (2) - remove, I don't hear anything for this to empthasize or anything
00:14:927 (1) - end on red tick, then add slider for the "won't" would probaly sound better imo
00:17:917 (2,3) - tbh I feel like you could do something with the circle out of the slider instead of placing it underneath. Just a suggestion :^)
00:18:914 (5,6) - ^
00:42:336 (7) - lower volume for it, my ears died (unless the high volume is the point ;p
also I think I see a weiner in the bg

hard:
00:12:768 - your missing a beat here D:
rest is good yaya

normal:
didnt really find much to point out
is good yaya

Tbh this isn't even worth kudosu, I know that most of this is probaly going to be rejected lol. Don't feel like you have to give me anything lol
S P A G H E T T I
gracefu
80 posts
Joined June 2014
gracefu
[Spaghetti]
00:00:974 (3) - 00:02:967 (1) -sliderend 00:03:466 (3,4) - 00:03:964 (5) -repeatend 00:05:625 (1) -repeatend 00:06:622 (4) -sliderend 00:08:947 (2) - 00:09:280 (3) -sliderhead THESE ARE ALL THE RHYTHMIC EPIC FAILS IN THE FIRST 10 SECONDS OF YOUR MAP. HOLY SHIT. *AND IT ONLY GETS WORSE WHEN THE SWING STARTS*

PLEASE. NOT MODDING THIS.
Spaghetti
1,118 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Spaghetti

gracefu wrote:

I have a very small cock, but my brain's smaller!
Thanks for being helpful!

the rhythms of this song suck so this is going to da yard i got dis
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-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
-GriM-
noo not da yard
Raiden
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2013
Raiden

gracefu wrote:

i'm dumb hehe
no honey dad is not coming back
Spaghetti
1,118 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Spaghetti
completely redid normal
MMMMMMMMMMMMonstrata
fixed everything but 00:26:223 (2,3) - cuz it just doesnt sound right

nintendo
fixed everything on insane

GrandIgnis wrote:

00:06:290 (2,3,1) - space this apart more what no following DS
00:35:027 (1,2,3) - this is very awkward to play and doesn't really fit a hard diff either I disagree!

xdoom

-GriM- wrote:

spaghetti:
00:08:947 (2) - remove, I don't hear anything for this to empthasize or anything "but he"
00:14:927 (1) - end on red tick, then add slider for the "won't" would probaly sound better imo doesnt sound right with all the 1/4 sliders :c
00:17:917 (2,3) - tbh I feel like you could do something with the circle out of the slider instead of placing it underneath. Just a suggestion :^) inconsistencies tho zzz
00:18:914 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:42:336 (7) - lower volume for it, my ears died (unless the high volume is the point ;p da point
also I think I see a weiner in the bg ur a weiner in the bg

hard:
00:12:768 - your missing a beat here D: wot
rest is good yaya
inya
98 posts
Joined January 2013
inya
Mod for you :D

Spaghetti

00:00:143 (1) - Place a hit here perhabs?

00:01:306 (4) - NC

00:01:638 (5) - No need to increase spacing, stay at 1,0x, the music doesn't change

00:01:971 (6) - NC

00:13:100 (2) - Move the slider 2 ticks to the right, onto the white tick and make it shorter

00:17:253 (3) - There's no sound here, remove slider and make a hit here 00:17:419 (3) -

00:18:831 (4) - Move one tick right

00:21:074 (3) - Move the slider 2 ticks to the right again, and make it shorter

00:23:067 (1) - ^

00:24:396 (1) - ^

00:25:725 (1) - ^

00:27:054 (2) - Move 2 ticks right, make it shorter and place a hit before it

00:28:383 (1) - ^

Normal

00:00:143 (1) - Same like spaghetti

00:00:808 (2) - Make it 2 ticks shorter

00:02:469 (2) - ^ and place hit behind it

00:05:127 (2) - ^

00:08:781 (2) - Make a slider from red to white tick here

00:21:074 (5) - Slider here

00:26:223 (2) - Make slider shorter and place hit behind it

00:28:383 (1) - ^

Pretty nice maps, I wish you good luck and I hope I helped :D
Spaghetti
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Topic Starter
Spaghetti
inyaFaZe

-Inyafaze- wrote:

Mod for you :D

Spaghetti

00:00:143 (1) - Place a hit here perhabs? Behind the timing point

00:01:306 (4) - NC no, NCing every bar

00:01:638 (5) - No need to increase spacing, stay at 1,0x, the music doesn't change emphasis this isnt 2012 lol

00:01:971 (6) - NC d

00:13:100 (2) - Move the slider 2 ticks to the right, onto the white tick and make it shorter no audible hit there

00:17:253 (3) - There's no sound here, remove slider and make a hit here 00:17:419 (3) - "everybody"

00:18:831 (4) - Move one tick right no beat there orz

00:21:074 (3) - Move the slider 2 ticks to the right again, and make it shorter .-.

00:23:067 (1) - ^ n

00:24:396 (1) - ^ o

00:25:725 (1) - ^ p

00:27:054 (2) - Move 2 ticks right, make it shorter and place a hit before it rhythm is beijng worked on by deetz, but these suggestions are inaccurate anyways

00:28:383 (1) - ^ e

Normal

00:00:143 (1) - Same like spaghetti Same like spaghetti

00:00:808 (2) - Make it 2 ticks shorter I see your point, but I extended to reduce rhythm gaps in the song.

00:02:469 (2) - ^ and place hit behind it swing

00:05:127 (2) - ^ swing

00:08:781 (2) - Make a slider from red to white tick here I don't understand D:

00:21:074 (5) - Slider here Would reduce the rhythm gap, but as the song is switching phrases, I find it very fitting.

00:26:223 (2) - Make slider shorter and place hit behind it but

00:28:383 (1) - ^ why

Pretty nice maps, I wish you good luck and I hope I helped :D Sorry for denying so much, the rhythm structure is fine though >>. Deetz is helping me perfect it since this song is a bit weird. :P
Xilver15
Former osu! Champion: 2015
510 posts
Joined August 2013
Xilver15
JHSDLKJHFDASKLJFASLK

[Spaghetti]

tbh your ncs dont make a lot of sense pm me about them and ill let u know

00:01:306 (4,5) - u know this already

00:03:964 (5) - Why not like this? That repeat slider landed on a strong beat which should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4265178

00:06:622 (3) - ctrl g would b cool

00:10:775 (3) - Same here, it finishes on a strong beat which should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4265201 maybe?

00:15:426 note here maybe?



map's pretty good nothing too major dood
Spaghetti
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Topic Starter
Spaghetti
osu! Champion

Xilver wrote:

JHSDLKJHFDASKLJFASLK

[Spaghetti]

tbh your ncs dont make a lot of sense pm me about them and ill let u know JHSDLKJHFDASKLJFASLK

00:01:306 (4,5) - u know this already i forgot the problem LOL

00:03:964 (5) - Why not like this? That repeat slider landed on a strong beat which should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4265178 d

00:06:622 (3) - ctrl g would b cool d

00:10:775 (3) - Same here, it finishes on a strong beat which should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4265201 maybe? d but in my own way

00:15:426 note here maybe? nah cuz nothing there but rearranged the slider stuffs there to remove the rhythm gap



map's pretty good nothing too major dood
Lince Cosmico
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Joined February 2015
Lince Cosmico

Monstrata wrote:

spaghetti
NOT M4M!? :0
Iceskulls
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Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
as requested

[general]
idk there are some instances that I feel like the vocal just happen to be sound a bit off or something if you try to lower the speed of the song so ddd

[u]
  1. 00:14:595 (3,4) - I think if you spacing this like what you did here 00:13:599 (1,2) - it will make this play a bit better imo
  2. 00:15:260 (2,3,4) - 1/2 spacing there looks similiar to 1/1 spacing there somehow so better try to increase 1/1 spacing or decrease 1/2 spacing a bit so it would make thing a bit easy to read
[hard]
  1. 00:06:290 (2) - add a note here to make rhythm here sound better ? I hear a vocal there
  2. 00:08:283 (5,8) - nc lol ?
  3. 00:12:270 (4) - , 00:37:851 (4) - nc ?
[normal]
  1. 00:22:236 (2,3) - I feel like 1/2 slider just work better here imo
  2. 00:22:236 - woah this part has a lots of 1/2 things here , I think it would be better if you try to decrease the 1/2 thing at this part here a bit so it would make diff spike here not so high imo
  3. 00:40:010 (3,1,2,3,4) - somehow it just feel like the overlap here might be kinda hard to read for player who new to this game lol , try this rhythm and overlap them less ?
    SPOILER

    o this normal is kinda hard , I would include an easy diff here for beginners lol
good luck :)
Prismetical
274 posts
Joined October 2015
Prismetical
Hello! :)

Normal
- reduce stack leniency
00:11:107 (1,1) - stack
00:35:027 (1,2,3,1) - too cluttered, use the playfield

Hard
00:03:632 (4,1) - stack
00:09:280 (7) - new combo
00:28:050 (3,3) - overlay

Spaghetti
00:07:286 (5,1) - overlay
00:09:612 (1,3) - ^
00:16:755 (2) - don't put this on the end of a slider, put it on the upcoming slider/circle, make a big distance between them two
Good luck!
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
-GriM-
no yard? yaAaaA
George
George
xGeN ReaL
your bg is small asf fam
also this bg ~may not~ be rankable because theres a peener in it
00:43:001 - add a green point that is soft hitsounds and %5 volume here

Normal
00:08:283 (1) - I'd try to make this slant to the left luj
00:11:107 (1,1) - stack the 2nd (1)'s tail on the first (1)'s tail

Hard
00:10:276 (9,10) - for these both only move the end point down one grid line so they're both equal djv
00:13:599 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:15:592 (2,3) - I'd move these left a bit more to help the flow
00:17:253 (3) - move this up and try to "clean" the slider a bit, it looks ugly imo and idrk what to say to fix it
00:24:396 (1) - off grid (and nearly off screen)
00:42:336 (1) - don't use a repeating slider here, do what you did before

Spaghetti
00:08:615 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:11:937 (4,1) - ^
00:13:100 (2) - I'd move this up a bit more to fix flow
00:19:911 (7,2) - fix blanket
00:20:575 (2,3) - ^ rkj
00:21:904 (2) - off grid
00:25:725 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:34:197 (2) - ctrl < and fix spacing
00:42:336 (1) - use a solid slider or a spinner
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