1. Easy (1,83 stars, 148 notes)
2. Gero's Hard (3,92 stars, 343 notes)
3. Hard (3,39 stars, 287 notes)
4. MkGuh & Lumael's Escape (4,99 stars, 399 notes)
5. Normal (2,44 stars, 208 notes)

Crossled wrote:

00:48:445 (1,2) - Not sure if those should be sliders, I think they sound better as single hits.
Honestly think this has a really good chance of getting ranked ^-^

MkGuh wrote:

Crossled wrote:

00:48:445 (1,2) - Not sure if those should be sliders, I think they sound better as single hits.
Honestly think this has a really good chance of getting ranked ^-^

Which diff?

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Yeah (? Will mod later. Shoot a star

Easy

Normal

Gero's Hard

1. Inconsistency in combo colors

1. 00:11:999 (1) - why do you used 4/1...? this long slider is not making sense imo, can you make rhythm like 00:14:699 (1,2) - ?
2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish? I heard cymbal sound here
3. 01:32:989 (2) - reverse point is not following anything, you should change to other rhythm.
   I think change to 1/1 slider*2 is better.
4. 01:55:260 (1) - add finish (also change sampleset)

1. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish
2. 00:29:884 (2) - umm... can you change to 1/1 rhythm? this slider is skipping vocal, idk why you skipped vocal sound lol
3. 01:03:630 (2) - ^ I'd say almost same thing
4. 01:13:416 (2) - change to 1/2 slider*2 or something like that pls, it's not suitable for normal at all, bad readability imo.

1. why light lol I think AR7 is better cuz Normal diff is AR5
2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish
3. 00:33:428 (4) - circle+1/2 slider? you skipped vocal sound only here at this part, it make unnaturally for me
4. 01:09:198 (3) - stack on 01:09:030 (2) - ? here is 2-2-2-2 sound imo
5. 01:59:310 (1) - add finish instead of whistle on slider's head?
6. 02:13:314 (3) - same as 01:09:198 (3) -

1. 00:33:428 (2) - same as light hard, change to like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:39:839 (4) - add NC
3. 00:44:142 (1) - you can add object in 00:44:226 - ,00:44:395 - I think move spinner's head 00:44:479 - is better
4. 00:49:120 (3) - stack
5. 00:51:144 (1,2,1,2) - can you make straight line?
   
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   312,131,51144,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,144,51482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,158,51819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   214,237,51988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   74,110,52157,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   180,133,52325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   140,315,52494,5,4,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:02:618 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow
7. 01:13:923 (2) - stack
8. 01:15:441 (1,2) - Ctrl+G both for better flow
9. 01:17:803 (4) - add NC?
10. 01:19:153 (1,2) - like that?
    
    SPOILER

    
    SPOILER

    300,18,79153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    242,109,79322,1,0,0:0:0:0:

11. stack 01:30:289 (1,2) - and unstack 01:30:627 (3,4) - ? easy to tap and fit with sound imo
12. 02:11:796 (2) - 131/219?
13. 02:23:101 (2,3,4) - It's just nazi suggestion, can you change rhythm like 01:59:479 (2,3,4,5) - ?

1. Take a look at your blankets, so many of them are imperfect and really catch the eye while playing
2. Other than that all the rythms and patterns seem okay

1. 00:37:646 (1) - Point this better at 00:38:321 (2) - , point 00:38:996 (4) - better at 00:38:658 (3,5) - etc
2. @ 00:44:395 - this works better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4321114
3. 01:22:190 (1,2,3,4) - Current pattern doesn't work that well imo, try a slider from 01:22:865 - to 01:23:203 - , since you barely have slider to 2 2/4 notes on other places, and it doesn't fit that well there in general anyway
4. 01:52:561 (1,2) - Sliders look ugly imo.

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  No problems found! Great diff.

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  Also an amazing diff. No problems found!

1. There's a lot of nc spam in this diff, but I guess you chose to do so for a reason, so whatever
2. 01:50:199 (1,2,3) - You are following a certain sound here and decided to use this spacing, okay, but shouldn't you do that again then at 01:52:561 (1,2,3,4) - or something for consistency? it seems random atm, since the sound that it follows repeats in various places and you only used it in one.
3. 01:56:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are weird and confusing, the easiest way to fix this is by NCing 01:57:285 (5) -
4. I would recommend making the spacing between 01:59:310 (1) - and 01:59:479 (2,3,4,5) - bigger for clarity.
5. 02:06:734 (1,2,3,4) - Perfect square please.

MkGuh wrote:

Fixed somethings from previous mod, thanks guys ♥

KittyAdventure wrote:

Where is storyboard? ;w;

Placeholder!

1. The intro sounds like it's glitching at 00:11:999 - 00:14:699. Try to find a better mp3 or see if it is intended to be like this by the original remixer.
2. Try to resize and optimize your BG according to modern 16:9 display format? Get 1366x768 version here.
3. That'd be awesome to have more tags like Techno and probably more things that comes to your mind and are related to the song. A bit of googling might help, too!
   Note: and is it's already been mentioned, Lumael should be in the tags, too.

1. 00:27:860 (4,6) - not really happy with the way these stacks work, as they slightly reduce the amount of time to read the circle hidden under the previous one.
   Note: 00:31:909 (4,2) - same happens here.
2. 00:44:395 (3,4) - this should be one slider, the vocals are going really strong with the "hide" thing, so a 3/1 slider will fit just right.
3. 00:57:893 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - in this part your combouing gets irregular and from regular every-second-measure you shift to something that feels random to me. Also, there are quite a few downbeats you left unclickable. It is no big deal at this part, but I'd still try to emphasize them. For example, 01:07:005 (3,1) - here a simple Ctrl+G and a couple of spacing fixes could make it feel better.
4. 01:24:890 (1) - rythmically and in terms of vocals this shouldn't have a new combo.
5. 01:24:890 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - why does it feel copy-pasted? I'd recommend to get something different here, as the song isn't long and repeating the same patterns in different part of it doesn't feel right to me.
   
   Overall, I am not really happy with your comboing, everrything else is alright.

1. This could benefiit from Circle Size 3,5. Give it a try and see if you like the way spread balance improves.
2. 00:12:674 (2) - if you want this to follow vocals properly, make it end at 00:13:012 - where the vocals end. 00:13:180 - the beat here will need a separate circle.
   Note: 00:15:374 (2) - 00:19:423 (2) - same happens here. There is a clear stop in the white tick, you can't ignore it.
3. 01:03:630 (2) - the music doesn't change from it's regular 1/1 rhythm. Therrefore, 2/1 slider here feels unnatural and forced. Consider splitting it into something smaller/shorter?
4. 01:08:186 (5) - it's better to use either a single circle on the white tick or replace the slider with two circles. So, every beat is emphasized according to its strength.
5. 01:24:215 (3) - this is extended for no musical reason, there is a clear and way too loud beat that just can't be mapped with a slidertick at 01:24:553 - so, please, end the slider here.
   Note: 01:57:285 (2) - same.
6. 02:12:471 (6) - replace this one with two circles? There is a really loud and obvious downbeat at 02:12:808 - that has to be made a clickable circle.
   
   Apart from a few rhythmical complaints I am not happy with, I'd like to bring up the fact that your comboing here is also irregular andseems to be controversing itself.

1. The difficulty is in heavy need of Slider tick Rate 2. Sliders like 00:38:321 (3,4) - will not work unless you try to stress the background beat. Also, STR2 will correlate with the rhythm choice you represent here.
2. 01:18:141 (3,1) - swap the NC here, according to the music and your pattern it has to be swapped here.
3. 01:21:515 (2) - the slider doesn't really sync with the vocals and feels forced here. Please end it 1/2 earlier as the vocals suggest you. 01:22:022 - this has to be a separate circle.
   Note: same applies to the rest of 3/2 sliders in this part.
4. 01:55:260 (1,2) - the shape doesn't suggest players that there are two repeats and the jump between these sliders makes it even more confusing. Let's try something like this?
   
   I liked the difficulty. Apart from a few 3/2 sliders it was really nice!

1. The jumps in the intro feel really overdone. The song isn't asking for anything agressive at this part, so I'd highly advice you to tone down the spacing here.
2. 00:47:432 (1) - the slider has an unnatural slowdown here and feels glitchy, pleasy simplify the shape of it.
3. 01:44:462 (1,2,3) - this and 01:49:861 (1,2,3) - this are almost identical in terms of vocals, therefore, I assume that it'd be better to have thme mapped in a similar way.
   
   Neat.

1. 00:30:897 (1,2,1,2) - personally, I believe that in the hardest diff you don't have to emphasise jumps with new combos. Players of the target skill range are capable of reading it, anyway.
2. 01:30:627 (3,4) - the sudden stack here feels flow-breaking and doesn't correspond with the intense nature of vocals.
3. 01:51:717 (2,3) - without any musical reason this jump is misleading players and looks a lot like 1/1 pattern. Reduce the DS or re-arrange this pattern?
4. 01:56:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the DS of this patterns feels random. Make it gradually increasing or decreasing or keep the DS consistent. This way it'd be more reasonable and understandable to the player.
   
   I insist on reducing the number of NCS as they feel overused and boost HP to the point when HP Drain hardly works as it is intended to. Apart from that it was fine.

Bakari wrote:

[MkGuh & Lumael's Escape]
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[*]00:30:897 (1,2,1,2) - personally, I believe that in the hardest diff you don't have to emphasise jumps with new combos. Players of the target skill range are capable of reading it, anyway. I know it's not necessary but it just looks ugly without the NC, and I'm pretty sure this is not a major issue.