00:19:432 (7) - You may want to change this to
k since the vocal pitch is higher than the hits surrounding it.
I'd prefer to let the first stanza (or first beat) to be d, just like original Taiko no Tatsujin style do it.00:24:494 (28) - ^ The pitch is the same as the next hit, and you did a similar thing at 00:34:085 (67).
ok00:27:957 (42,43) - Just a personal opinion, but this should have Ctrl + G done on it, then change 00:28:490 (44) to
k. The way you've matched the
ks here seems to be matched to the music box (let's call it that); if so, you could possibly Ctrl + G 00:27:158 (39,40) instead.
But the vocal does fit these pattern if you hear properly00:29:423 (47,48,49,50,51,52) - I'd personally delete this portion, since adding hits in a quiet section doesn't sound good imo. Also, it creates a transitional effect into the second half of the quiet section. You can do whatever you want tho.
But I wanna keep the similarity of the part, you can see that all part a these soft section are contain 4-note.00:36:616 (78) - I realize you matched the instrumentals here because it's on a different place within the measure compared to places such as 00:31:821 where you didn't match to the instrumentals. However, I still think you should add the hits at these places where you omitted, such as the one mentioned above, and other similar places such as 00:35:018 in the quiet section. Idk, it just felt kinda inconsistent when I played through it.
Because generally the vocal is louder than instrumental and it barely hearable when I put note on it, but when the vocal is gone then I'll put the instrumental instead.01:06:190 - Add a
d here. You can clearly hear an instrumental sound here, and it kinda interrupts the flow. To compensate for the break loss, you could add a break by deleting 01:07:789 (314,315) which doesn't have a sound.
But I does the same thing on other part?? It would be more interrupts the flow when I used your suggestion because the break part isn't similarity anymore.01:07:922 (316) - You can change this to
k to match to the vocals and instrumentals. Even further, you could change 01:08:055 (317) to
k as well, and Ctrl + G 01:08:188 (318,319,320) for a better match with the instrumentals, like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4431956 I've changed the first suggestion but not second one because that is quite hard to press for kkdd player01:08:721 (322) - Change to
d? The background instrumentals aren't present here (the snare drum-like sound I think), and vocals aren't present either.
same as above reason, it's kinda hard to press when comes to kkdd player's flow01:09:121 (327,328,329,330,331) - This rhythm should be reworked as there are instrumentals that are missed. Something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4431966 may work
I've used your suggestion but I think the rhythm is weird. Generally I want to emphasize the guitar bass at here.01:11:119 (343) - You could change this to
k for the snare drum sound.
You're right but I wanna keep this to d because the it was too much k on it imo01:13:384 (363,364) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
sure01:15:115 (378) - You could change to
d as there's a clear bass drum sound here.
Same as above reason, I don't want to make it same pattern in like ~2 sec. It's kinda boring imo01:15:781 (384) - Change to
k? Then Ctrl + G 01:16:048 (387,388) would make a better match the instrumentals, with the
ks matching the snare drums once again.
ddkdk is really hard for kkdd player imo when comes to really fast bpm lol sorry for this01:16:448 - This rhythm is absolutely beautiful. wow I didn't notice these, thanks
01:18:579 (406) - I'm guessing this is a
d for contrast with the next hit which is vocals. However, I personally like this as a
k better.
yeah01:18:845 (408,409,410,411,412,413,414) - This could be reworked too imo.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432058 yeah I like this, also applied above suggestion cuz I've change pattern lol01:21:510 (432) - Change to
d to match the bass drum and because there's no snare drum, and because the vocals are lower.
I want to make it same as 01:21:776 (434) - this note as their vocal tone are same01:22:842 (444) - You can change this to
k if you want to match the snare drum. hmm I'd prefer to keep this so I can make a variety of
01:26:172 (472,473) - You may want to delete this for a nice emphasis on the vocals.
If you hear properly this is already emphasis to it because at 01:24:707 - here you get d k d k d k-ish pattern and 01:25:773 - at here you will get k d k d k d-ish pattern.01:26:705 (477) - Change to
k for the snare drum.
As above reason01:27:504 (483,484,485,486) - You could switch the colours of these four hits for the same reasons as before. The colour change on 01:27:904 (486) is most optional.
I thought this is fit the vocal perfectly?01:28:304 (490,491) - Ctrl + G matches the snare drum and the vocal pitch better.
ok01:29:369 (500,501,502) - Switch the colours for the same reason as above?
same01:30:435 (509) - You can change this to
k. Alternatively, 01:30:568 (510) may be changed to match the vocals.
yeah01:33:499 (534,535,536,537) -
k d d k is possible to match the snare drums, and the first k d to match the vocals.
ok01:34:698 (544,545,546,547) -
k d k k is possible to match the snare drums and the k k to match the vocals.
yeah01:35:763 (550) - You may change this to
d to match the pitch of the vocals, as you did at 01:38:960 (568).
^01:47:086 (622,623) - Ctrl + G would have the
k matched to the vocals and have a
d to contrast with the instrumentals at 01:47:352 (624).
^01:52:415 (668,669,670,671) - Switch the colours of this pattern? A
k on 01:52:415 (668) works to match the vocals, and a
k on 01:52:681 (671) works to match the instrumentals.
Changed to other pattern to make the flow better.01:58:809 (732,733,734,735,736,737,738) - This can also be reworked like this perhaps:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4435774 The current rhythm is too monotonous at 01:58:809 (732,733,734,735,736) imo.
Changed to other pattern too to make a variety or difference to previous part02:02:805 (772) - You can change this to
k to match the instrumentals. Alternatively, you could change 02:03:072 (774) to
k to match the instrumentals.
I'd prefer to keep this to make the flow better and more fun02:04:804 (792,793) - Ctrl + G would match the instrumentals and vocals better imo.
Changed to other pattern to avoid too much kdkdkd02:07:867 (814) - You could change this to
D to contrast with the surrounding hits and to emphasize the highest point of the vocals at 02:08:666 (818). Same at 03:25:130 (1402) and 05:04:774 (174).
nah, if you see properly that I am playing with the big note pattern with D and then D and K and K. I did this for the vocal tone is slightly fading up too. 02:08:666 (818) - Best part of every kiai and the whole song right at this hit <3 Ikr haha!
02:12:663 - I think the kiai should end here. I'm pretty particular on stylistic elements such as the kiai time.
But the score will be less 02:16:260 (875,876,877,878) - Switching the colours of these hits would work better to match the pitch of the instrumental melody.
yep, these sounds great!02:18:525 (895,896,897) - ^
yea02:20:256 (910,911,912,913) - ^
but not here, kdd is a anti-flow lol02:22:921 (931) - You could change this to
d to contrast the vocal pitch and the instrumental sound difference.
But I wanna emphasize the instrumental. If I change to d the pattern will too low-pitch-ish (that's mean the k generally for soft part or high pitch, so if I put too much d it will too noisy).02:26:118 (949) - Change to
k? The instrumental sound is more similar to the next hit than the previous.
yep02:26:384 - It wouldn't hurt to add a hit here.
Generally I don't want to put something between big note so I can emphasis it.02:27:050 (955,956,957,958) - Ctrl + G would work to match the
ks to both the vocals and instrumentals.
yep02:28:782 (970,971,972) - ^
^02:29:448 (976,977) - ^ If you want to match to the vocals.
^02:30:381 (984,985,986) - If you switch the colours of these hits, it could work better for the
k on 02:30:381 (984) to match a similar sound that was heard at 02:30:248 (983) and
d k for a nice contrast on the vocal pitch.
Same as first reason, I'd want to keep this because of first stanza02:34:377 (1006,1007) - You could change these to
d to show a difference in instrumental sound with the next two hits, and you could also add a
k at 02:34:910 if you want to.
ok02:44:767 (1076,1077,1078,1079,1080) - You could switch the colours of these hits to match the instrumentals better at 02:44:901 (1077,1078).
well ok02:49:297 (1101) - You can change this to
k to match to the vocals which I think you're doing here; it also matches the instrumentals.
ok02:49:896 - You can add a hit here.
I'd prefer to keep here just 1/2 beat snap divisor because here is very soft02:54:891 (1141,1142) - Ctrl + G may be better to have the
k be matched to the high pitched drum sound at 02:55:024 (1142).
same reason02:55:424 (1144) - You can change this to
d to put a bit more emphasis on the vocals.
ok03:04:216 (1211) - You can change this to
k to match the similar sound at 03:04:083 (1210).
03:07:146 (1240) - You can change this to
d for a slight more variety.
I wanna keep this not just because I wanna make it harder than first part but I wanna emphaize the drum tick at white line03:07:946 (1247,1248) - Ctrl + G works to bring out the vocals with the
k at 03:08:079 (1248).
ok03:10:610 (1272,1273,1274,1275) - Ctrl + G for consistency with 01:53:347 (678,679,680), it also sounds better. You may also want to change 03:11:076 (1276) to
k if you want, or just have the whole triplet as
ddd as it was originally.
yea03:16:072 (1324,1325) - ^ for a better match with the vocals.
03:19:136 (1355,1356) - ^
03:19:669 (1359,1360) - You could also change this to
dd if you want to bring out the vocals at the end of the triplet.
03:35:254 (1459) - Change to
d. The
k matching is inconsistent with 03:34:722 (1457). If you accept this suggestion, you should also Ctrl + G 03:35:521 (1460,1461,1462) for contrast and consistency of matching.
I want to keep the d d k d k k pattern03:43:780 -
It's also possible to create a kiai here. It's a pretty high-paced part. ok maybe not cuz the kiai would be insanely long lel lol
03:47:777 (1536,1537) - Ctrl + G for a nice match with the vocals 03:47:777 (1536,1537).
ok03:49:908 (1554,1555,1556) - Switch the colours of these hits? It'll help match the vocals and match the instrumental sound at 03:49:908 (1554).
I'll change to k k D because of first reason03:53:105 (1579) - The drums are slightly higher pitched here and it'll also create a good contrast with the next finisher, so change to
k?
I'll keep here to emphasis the vocal a~a~a (vocal tone is fading down)03:54:970 (1587) - Change to
k to keep the consistency of matching the instrumentals at 03:54:171 (1583). Same at 03:55:769 (1591). You may also want to change some surrounding hits.
same as first reason
03:58:833 (1607,1608) - Ctrl + G will have a
k better match with the high vocals and the instrumental sounds.
ok04:08:291 (1681,1682) - ^
04:11:489 (1707,1708) - ^ To match the instrumental sound at 04:11:755 (1708).
04:14:686 (1730,1731) - ^
04:22:146 (1785) - You should change to
D since the vocal pitch is lower. Similarly, 04:25:343 (1799) should be changed for the lower instrumental sound.
Same, I was playing the flow of the pattern (D and K and D and K)04:22:546 (1786,1787) - Maybe change to
d d to contrast the instrumental sound at 04:22:945 (1788)?
Since the second big note is K, so I'll make it all k for similarity.04:27:740 (1801) - You can change this to
k to match a similar sounding xylophone sound at 04:28:274 (1803).
I'll reconsider this, well I don't make it same as second part for variety04:36:266 (1827,1828) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
same, for variety.04:34:401 (1822,1823,1824) - Switching the colours would match the pitch of the xylophone and the vocals.
04:41:595 (1844,1845) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
I'd prefer the k for final note because d is too noisy04:47:722 (16,17) - ^ to have the
k matched to the vocals, probably one of the more optional changes tho.
ok04:51:452 (48) - You could change this to
k to match the high vocals.
yep, and thus flow is better too04:58:646 (126,127,128,129,130) - Having this pattern start and end with a
k would sound better imo.
yea05:02:109 (165) - Idk, but this slider seemed unnecessary to me, and could be made just like 03:22:466.
For emphasize the very strong word from the song05:08:504 (202) - You could change this to
K for a greater contrast with the surrounding hits.
hmm I did prefer D d d d for similarity.05:09:036 (204) - This could be changed to
k for the instrumental difference and vocals.
05:10:635 (1) - This spinner should end at 05:12:500 for the vocals imo.
But for the gameplay it's too short imo05:14:498 (5,6) - Ctrl + G may work to have the
k match the instrumental sound at 05:14:631. Same at 05:30:617 (104).
ok05:17:828 (25) - Could be changed to
k for the same reason as above. Adding a hit could also be possible at 05:17:695.
05:19:693 (35,36) -
d d works better to contrast the instrumentals at 05:19:960 (37).
05:20:892 (42) - This can also be changed to
d for the same reason as above.
05:22:491 (55,56) - Ctrl + G works better to match the instrumentals imo.
05:23:956 (67,68) - ^
all are applied05:34:613 (126) - You may change to
k here for the same reasons as before.
I wanna make a difference or variety for second part05:35:412 - May I ask why this inherited point is at 47% lel xD Change to 45% if you want to be precise:P
ahh you're right lol, miscalculated