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oo keysounds (know that I'll be judging you harshly if any of them are wrong)
00:02:684 (1) - Not sure why you followed the high note here but the low note here. 00:05:133 (1) - Yes these are the correct keysounds BUT it's not a good idea to switch between emphasizing the treble (high) notes and then the bass (low) notes. If you really wanted to follow one only then it would work because the song would follow the othernote but if you wanted to follow both you COULD combine some keysounds and make 2 note chords. Both work except the 2nd one will need a few extra custom keysounds to make it work. Still highly consider following either one or both at the same time but not alternating.
00:58:705 (3) - For keysounds like these it'd be better if the sound was shorter so as to not overlap in sound with 00:59:011 - for example. One small fix could be to lower the volume for 00:58:705 - by like 50% (maybe 40%) so it's not as loud as the high note and make it sound muddy. The harder but slightly better fix would be to add a short version of the keysound (see lordraika's
userpage under the keyboard set and look for the same note under the "short" folder)
01:01:154 (2) - Same for this one. Lowering the volume is probably a better fix because it takes a lot less work and idk if you might need those long sounds later so that might mean adding more keysounds so yeah. Just lower the volume of these notes by like 10-20%.
01:11:256 (8) - These sounds are an octave too high. The sounds of these two notes should be lower than 01:11:868 (1) - If you don't already have the keysounds I've attached them here in this .zip file. They are labeled E3S and B3S respectively. If they sound too loud then you can edit them via audacity and lower the db by like -6 maybe.
01:14:776 (2) - Technically the piano doesn't do this lol but it does add a good harmony so you can leave it :v
01:19:521 (1,2,3) - (3) doesn't sound right to me. Should probably be 21 like 01:14:929 (3) -. ALSO a very nice thing you can do here is add 01:19:674 (2) - SC:27 to this note. It will better follow the vocals and sound really nice
01:24:419 (1,2) - Maybe add some keysounds here like 01:14:623 (1,2) - 01:19:521 (1,2) -
01:24:725 (3) - Definitely not SC:18. If anything its still SC:21 so you can actually do for 01:24:419 (1,2,3) - what you did at 01:14:623 (1,2,3) -
01:25:644 (6) - Optional but you can probably add a whistle and SC:20 here. Has a nice effect.
01:30:848 - Technically this is the correct sound but it should be one octave lower as well. Might not be necessary because there are a lot of notes that should be lower octave but that would mean many more hitsounds etc so its okay if you don't wanna change it.
01:33:297 (1,1,1,1) - ok HERE you DEFINITELY need short keysounds They're the correct sounds fortunately but because these are the long sounds they overlap each other and sound REALLY muddy. It might mean more work but this is very overbearing in play mode and will likely impact play because the sound will linger past the other sounds so players wouldn't be able to hear the feedback very well. Also 01:34:215 (1) - This should be 1/6
01:35:746 (1) - Add finish :v
01:45:542 (1) - X_X This is either SC:29, SC:22 OR SC:20 but definitely not 17. Lowest sound is A and highest sound is C#. Middle note is C# but lower. Changing it to 29 is better because then you don't have to change the next keysound. Changing it to 22 or 15 could work too because its the same note but lower although if you use 22 you might need to change a few notes around and that might not sound as good so try 15 if you want the lower sound. Then 20 because it's the actual note that plays there (except an octave higher but I don't think you have that keysound). TLDR, use SC:29 or 15 or use A3S attached in the .zip above.
01:52:889 (1) - Use SC:14. Better harmony and it's the actual note :v
01:53:960 (5) - Personally I'd suggest removing this keysound. Hard to explain but it's a bit overbearing here and it doesn't really follow what the piano does. It could be a default soft whistle instead to follow the drums which is the sound here.
02:05:133 (1) - Same suggestion as 01:45:542 (1) -
02:12:480 (1) - Same as 01:52:889 (1). Custom 14 instead but I guess 15 can work here too.
02:15:389 (3) - Ged rid of the keysound here. Doesn't follow the piano or vocals correctly there.
02:50:440 (5) - This should be SC:21 like 02:45:236 (4,5) -
02:51:052 (6) - Change to customs 18 and 21 respectively so it leads into the minor chord note better.
03:13:399 (3) - Custom 28 sounds better.
03:15:847 (4,1) - Change to custom 20 and 19 (on the head only) since 03:16:154 - the low note is actually G# (lower than this but you don't have that one and I don't think you want it now cuz you'd have to put it in many other areas in the song lol.
This pianist sucks he can't even 1/3 legato LOL but thats not ur problem xD BUT uh...03:23:501 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You follow the piano in terms of snap a bit better here than 01:33:297 (1,1,1,1) - even though the piano is off snap here too. Consider keeping it 1/6 at 03:23:501 - even though it doesn't follow the bad piano I don't think it should xD
03:27:631 (1,2,3,4) - eww lol get rid of all these keysounds EXCEPT for 03:27:784 - and change that to SC:23. The piano doesn't really play here yet except there and thats the dissonant note which leads into 03:28:397 (1) - which is the resolution. Hard to explain so hopefully you trust me :v
03:38:193 (1) - Same suggestion as 01:45:542 (1).
03:45:540 (1) - Also SC:14 like before.
03:47:988 - I will point out that a lot of this (and a few other parts in the song) are freestyle since the actual piano doesn't do all this stuff in the music. This is okay of course but you want it to at least have a sort of nice melody throughout. In this case, 03:48:907 - repeating the same note as 03:48:601 - doesn't sound as good and also doesn't play the note in the melody. 03:48:907 - The real sound per the piano is SC:19 but I dunno if you still wanna freestyle so either change 03:48:907 - to SC:19 and delete 03:49:060 - or change 03:48:907 - to SC:17 to freestyle.
03:52:274 (3,4) - Aww these should be higher
Consider changing to SC:31 and 30 in that order.
03:57:784 (1) - Same suggestion as 01:45:542 (1).
04:06:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why no keysounds???? ;A; I suggest 04:06:662 (1,3) - SC:18 and SC:22 for those two notes only.
04:08:805 (6) - Remove hitsound unless I guess you're freestyiling.
04:12:172 (3) - SC:57 might work a bit better but eh...This part doesn't really follow the piano all that well so I guess maybe its also freestyled idk.
04:12:785 (2) - This would normally be A# but uh...I don't know if you have that keysound or not so I attached it on the .zip just in case called A#3S_Bb3S.
04:44:315 - Wow Much freestyle very keysounds so decoration :v OH BUT 04:46:764 (5) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO this is SC:65 well technically its SC:21 but UUUUUUUUUUUUGHHHHHHHHHHH like this freestyle you did here sounds nice BUT it basically leads into a section that isn't resolved. And damn I can't even explain this cuz its all music terms so I'm just gonna sound like an ass trying to explain it because it's all just music theory stuff x_x. I guess the short easy version is 04:45:234 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Is adding buildup into another keysounded section and that note at (5) is just way off. I dunno what you wanna do though so I suggest using SC:65 or SC:21. Both sound good depending on what you're trying to do. Do you want it to end high or end low?
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See this is why I hate when people keysound for standard it's so hard to mod them because its hard to tell whether they were trying to add to the song, follow the music, follow the high or low notes, follow a different instrument or just straight up didn't really know what they were doing ;-;
Also cuz then I focus on just the hitsounds and don't have the energy left to actually mod the map itself x_x
Fortunately it seemed like you knew what you were doing for the most part at least to the point where even the freestyle sounded mostly pleasant.
EDIT: LOL forgot to attach the .zip file.
Here it is