1. Advanced (3.56 stars, 354 notes)
2. Easy (1.43 stars, 116 notes)
3. estellia-'s Basic (1.83 stars, 177 notes)
4. Master (5.38 stars, 686 notes)
5. Rtyzen's Expert (4.85 stars, 560 notes)

Kloyd wrote:

hi

d u choose combocolors? opps, fixed

• extra
  

1. 00:42:975 (1) - i think u don't need to nc here fixed
2. 00:43:673 (1) - same fixed
3. 00:46:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - we can make this more aesthetic i think its ok lol
4. 00:56:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to see for me so i've changed this pattern little bit http://puu.sh/mdF3L/24ddd20a99.jpg anyway setting those apart can make playability better imo fixed
5. 01:20:998 (1) - remove nc fixed
6. 01:25:708 (1,2,3) - making spacing lower can make more impact imo fixed
7. 01:28:498 (1,1,1,1) - try like this http://puu.sh/mdFal/31f393b0a8.jpg keeping this for consistency with earlier pattern
8. 01:35:301 (6,1) - space more fixed
9. 01:49:080 (1) - is that 1/16? i have no idea but some guys who take the sound perfectly might say something if thats not 1/16 i'll try asking for others opinion
10. 02:10:126 (1) - a custom hitsound can make this have more impact added!

• Hard

1. 02:06:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - space more and nc 02:06:696 (2) - following DS, added NC tho

• Easy

1. 00:13:150 (2) - how about this http://puu.sh/mepRJ/8d30b534d4.jpg following DS
2. 02:07:568 (3) - nc fixed

gonna mod other diffs after i take a break gl thanks for mod!

Kloyd wrote:

• Insane
  
  ask any bn or qat for ds

1. 00:13:498 (4,7,10) - how bout nc
2. 00:43:324 (1,1) - same
3. 01:31:987 (3) - 1/4 comes to me more than 1/3
4. 01:43:150 (5) - nc
5. 01:53:615 (1,1) - same

- Castaway - wrote:

From my queueue

SPOILER

Easy

1. 00:17:336 (2,2) - Better blanket keeping this for the symmetry
2. 00:37:219 (2,3) - I don't like pointing out blankets D: fixed
3. 00:39:661 (2,3) - ^ fixed
4. 01:01:115 (2) - Check spacing here fixed
5. 00:35:649 (3,3) - stack fine imo
   Pretty much fine

Normal

1. 01:54:312 (2,1) - blanket wah~ im bad at blankets
2. 00:06:173 (1,2) - i would make slider 1 straight vertically...u almost have to turn a completely new direction fixed
3. 00:16:638 (5) - move to x:313 y:214, means u will have to move the circles after this as well moved stuff around abit
4. 01:01:987 (1) - This better:http://puu.sh/meAzh/cedd434731.JPG fixed
5. 01:09:661 (5,6) - not a fan of this moved to the other side
6. 01:32:685 (1) - why does nearly every circle after this have whistle hitsound. I'm bad at hitsounding...but it hurts ma ears the whistles are following the vocals i guess

Hard

1. AR 7 please ok
2. 00:12:452 (2) - Better as long slider the music kinda stops there so i used a circle
3. 01:20:126 (1,1,1) - Stick to DS please fixed
4. 01:45:068 (4) - woaw...this is really weird fine to me i guess? idk
   That's it

Some sort of Love

1. 00:04:778 (1) - dont stack this completely...move to off abit changed this and 00:10:184 (5) - too
2. 00:14:545 (1) - ^ keeping this cause of SV changes
3. Alot more others ^...you can find them urself
   Umm...Pretty much fine too

Soz for my somewhat useless mod... wat no your mod helped lol

GL on rank thanks for modding!

Rendyindo wrote:

From my modding queue!

Normal

00:07:568 (1) - Uncheck NC fixed
01:44:894 - Add a circle fixed

Hard

01:56:405 (1,2) - Stack these? keeping for DS

Extra

00:34:429 (2,3) - Stack these meant to be unstacked

gracefu wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:452 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are a bit hard to read and play imo... Even at 40k rank I'm finding it tricky since the gap between the repeat sliders and the next triple is 1/4. true, fixed
01:20:126 (1,1) - Maybe overlap a bit more than just the tip? Or move them slightly further apart so there's a small gap following distance snap lol
01:45:068 (4) - I'm not sure if completely covering circles are allowed in Hard. Keep them if it's okay because this plays well. i want to keep this cause its cool, if its unrankable i'll change
01:50:650 (4) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:15:243 (3) - blanket me fixed
00:15:940 (4) - ^ fixed
00:26:405 (3) - ^ fixed
00:28:498 (2) - ^ fixed
00:31:987 (2) - maybe move this slightly left and up? it looks better imo sure
00:33:033 (1,2) - is this symmetrical with red combo? yes? double checked and its ok
00:46:638 (4) - the lower half not blanketing properly fixed
01:31:289 (4) - ^ upper half fixed
01:44:894 (3,4) - a little bit harder than the rest of the map fixed with the later pattern
01:55:010 (1) - blanket me fixed
01:56:405 (1) - ^ fixed
01:57:801 (1) - ^ fixed

[Easy]
Hm all the patterns and flows make sense, it's just that sometimes there are difficult beat placements here: 00:21:871 (2,1) - 00:33:033 (2,1) - 00:59:196 (1,2) - 01:00:592 (1,2) - 01:04:778 (1,2) - 01:06:173 (1,2) - Since it seems to be used consistently I'd say keep it until a BN complains :3 lol ok

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from my queue

mod

Hard
00:16:812 (3,4) - swap these 2 around (put the circle beat 1st before the slider) yep, fixed
01:56:929 - since there's a beat here, I suggest adding either a start or an end circle holy shit why didn't I do this lol fixed

Normal
01:03:382 (3,4,5,6) - why are these not curved? just for variation
01:11:057 (2) - put this higher for a better flow shifted stuff around slightly

Easy
01:03:033 - should add a beat here uh ok
01:08:615 - ^ ^

that's all I can find, good luck thanks for modding!

- Castaway - wrote:

Insane

1. Put the AR down to probs an 8 onwards Down to 8.8 for now
2. General comment: give your sliders some space
   Fine as well

Rendyindo wrote:

Insane

00:21:696 (6,8) - Stack these done
01:52:917 (3,5) - 6 not too sure but fixed I think?

XxSeonxX wrote:

Rtyzen's Insane
00:41:929 (9) - put this circle to the left for a better flow Done

-[H13]- wrote:

*no kudosu*


ok

Small mod because I'm tired.


Generally, don't use the whistle hitsound too much.
Why no kiai time? ;( kiai sux

Easy

00:42:452 - 00:46:638 why two spinners? Make it one, and try avoiding using two consecutive spinners, especially at easy difficulties. It is confusing. ok
01:08:092 move to y:204 ok

I might edit this later when I'm not that tired. thanks for modding!

Scebtile wrote:

Hello from my queue!
Tragic Love Extra

• 00:08:266 (3) - NC here ok
• 00:12:626 (1) - Remove NC ok

• 00:22:219 (1) - Move to x:284, y:88 fine imo

• 00:32:946 - There should be a note here. following vocal here

• 01:21:522 (1) - This slider should be as long as the slider at 01:24:312 (1) because there is a clap beat at 01:22:219 following the piano here, and there's a slidertick hitsound on 01:22:219 already

• 02:07:655 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC on all of those because it would play weird in tag-coop. wat

And that's it

Sorry if the mod was a bit short but I hope it helped somehow. Good luck on ranking the map ^^ thanks for modding~

Reana wrote:

From my modding queue!

[Tragic Love Extra]
00:13:324 - why did you miss all of 1/4 sounds? 1/4 sounds not very strong imo
00:21:522 - same, until 00:22:481 - . If you are going to follow vocal's sound change 00:21:522 (1,2,3) - to 1/2. following vocal but having more variation is good too
00:32:685 - ^ ^
00:52:568 (1) - I don't think NC is needed. ok
00:58:150 (1) - ^ ok
01:03:732 (1) - ^ ok
01:42:801 (1) - ^ ok
01:43:150 (1) - NC ok

Nice map, GL! thanks

bigfrog wrote:

hi, from my queue :3

Tragic Love Extra
00:33:208 (2) - move to 232|260? fine this way imo
00:34:952 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better flow ^
00:38:789 (3,4) - ctrl+g, same reason as above ^
01:37:568 (1) - renove NC? ok

why not add some kiai time?? i don't really want to add kiai time to this diff, imo the 'chorus' of the song doesn't feel that strong to me for kiai lol

Hard
01:15:243 (4) - use slider instead of circle? it seem a little empty there did this for the extra diff too, keeping for consistency i guess
01:20:126 (1) - slide to 01:20:737 and the next slider start at 01:20:824 ??? what

Normal
no problem.

Easy
00:56:405 (1,2) - can blanket better, but up to you i hope i made it better
01:37:219 (3,4) - ctrl+g? more fit rhythm i think ds screws up lol

maybe can change some straight slider to curve one, this diff might become more soft

that all, nice song
good luck~~ thanks for modding!

1. 01:01:115 (3) - ctrl+g?
2. 00:13:325 (2,1) - ctrl+g'ing these plays pretty well.... not sure if its better than how it is right now but maybe take a look at it?
3. 00:37:917 (5) - move to the tail of the slider instead of head?
4. 00:46:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i LOVE this!!!!!!
5. 01:13:847 (4,5,6) - hmm what about making this a slider?

Scebtile wrote:

Hello from my queue!

Rtyzen's Insane

• 00:04:603 (5) - Don't put this slider under the slider (4) its way too confusing. Do it like the one at 00:07:394 (5) instead.
• 00:10:185 (5) - ^
• 00:12:975 (5) - ^
• 01:11:580 (5) - ^
^ No need for most of this. I didn't stack them exactly on the end
• 00:16:987 (1) - Remove NC Whoops fixed

• 00:19:429 (3) - CTRL + J, CTRL + H, Then move it to x:188, y:288. This way it has better flow and looks visually better. That's not the point of the pattern

• 00:38:266 (6) - NC here
• 00:41:057 (6) - ^
• 00:55:010 (6) - ^
• 01:06:173 (6) - ^
Fixed these ^
• 01:09:312 (1,2,3,4) - This jump stream is a bit hard. I suggest you just combine this stream with the one at 01:08:964 (1,2,3,4). Or make it a 1/4 reverse slider. It's not a jump stream lol but I decreased distance a tiny bit

bigfrog wrote:

Rtyzen's Insane
00:27:278 (2) - move to 372|236 or near? better flow i think I moved it to x:328 y:256 instead cuz what you suggested overlaps kinda badly
01:01:115 (3,4) - this way? : I understand what you mean but I dont think there's a need to change it

SPOILER

02:08:353 - add a circle here and move spinner to 02:08:440 uh there's no drum sound there D:

Cagrux wrote:

Rtyzen's Insane

1. 00:07:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So this diff went full stream while the harder extra diff didn't? Hmmmmm Fits the song, not gonna change for now
2. 00:13:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same thing. This part is overmapped while the Extra is not. Just my opinion but those should be in the extra diff instead wtf does those should be in the extra diff instead mean it's not even my map. Also no change
3. 02:05:650 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think you could lighten up the streams in here These are just quints that are not that far apart so I think it's ok