I took my time to mod this, and didn't find anything good at all, I hope this can help you.
[General]
[extra]
[insane]
[General]
- Inconsistency in Tags
{aeonnzr's oni} : breakcore comfywolf loctav semantics benzo chronicles
{aEoNNzR's Taiko Oni} : breakcore ComfyWolf Loctav Semantics Benzo Chronicles
{extra} : breakcore comfywolf aeonnzr loctav semantics benzo chronicles
{fatal oni} : breakcore comfywolf loctav semantics benzo chronicles
{insane} : breakcore comfywolf aeonnzr loctav semantics benzo chronicles
{Remember} : breakcore ComfyWolf Loctav Semantics Benzo Chronicles - Timing is inconsistent
[extra]
General
- Why don't you call this Extra instead of extra?
- lol do you even bookmark bro?[/b]
Playability
- I was waiting a note here 00:08:138 - there is an audible beat there, why did you choose not to add a circle there?
- what do you think about moving this note 00:56:249 (5) - clores to previous (4) slider tail? instead of his head, this way the movement feels more natural with the next circle
- I thing you should move 00:57:631 (1,2) - circle (2) closer to slider (1), I know this is one of the "red" parts of the song, but this isn't kiai time, and I think this can be a bit confusing, not much for pro players
- isnt this triplet 00:59:152 (4,5,6) - out of context? I think this triplet can be somewhere else, stacked is really confusing to play imo, also, the spacing with (6) is complete unpredictable, this is a big turn off >.<
- What do you think about moving this note 01:30:811 (1) - here? with a better blanket of course, I think this way flows better
Presentation
- imo moving this triplet 00:09:797 (5,6,7) - here: x:408 y:204 looks better
- Why dont you made this following notes 00:55:419 (1,3) - 00:56:387 (6,4) - 01:42:147 (3,1) - a blanket? playabiliti doesn't change at all and looks better
- tbh I dont like the way this two notes look 01:59:843 (3,4) - , what do you thing about this?, this can change a bit the way you want that part to flow, but I think its better and playable
- Making this slider 02:34:405 (9) - with this rotate settigs, I thinks looks better
- I don't like this, but I dont have any sugestions. 03:32:055 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think it looks a bit ugly.
- make this slider 03:45:189 (7) - curvy? it looks better because of the previous stream concavity
- You can improve the way this 04:43:253 (1,2,3) - three sliders looks, example, if you do this, perhaps you want to change the position of this two notes 04:44:014 (4,5) -
- What do you think about changing this 05:08:553 (8) - to make it look like a blanket? like you did with previous patterns before
- I don't like the way this last four notes looks 05:09:590 (12,13,14,1) - , what do you think about this? you can make it look way better, with more time
Nazi
- stack this notes better? 02:59:567 (3,3) -
Combos
- I would change some of the combos, but I will not mention it since you are using colors to emphazise the sb and changing any combo will be a pain in the ass
Sounds
- Everything seems fine
Overall
- Pretty well made, there all of this are mere sugestions, the only thing I really see necesary to change is the one I mentioned here: 00:59:152 (4,5,6) other than that, I really enjoyed this map.
[insane]
General
- Why don't you call this Insane instead of insane?
- You sure have a lot of fun with bookmarks
Playability
- What about adding a note here? 01:06:410 - in the head of 01:06:479 (1) - it makes feel that section less empty, same here: 01:07:516 -
Presentation
- what do you think about changing this 00:32:746 (5,6) - for something like this?
- I think moving this two notes 00:55:834 (3,4) - to make them blankets its a good idea, and it doesn't change the playability at all
- I think you can improve this pattern 01:30:811 (1,2,3,4) - for something like this, looks way better
- I was expecting this 01:37:861 (4,5) - to be blanket when played the map for the first time
- What do you think about this? here: 01:53:207 (3,4) - what I did was, using a copy from slider (4) I used Ctrl+H and J then rotate it -45° and blanked it with 01:53:069 (2) -
- What do you thing about this? here:05:16:848 (3,4) - , perhaps if you like this you will have to modify the next pattern a bit to make the spacing better and readable
Nazi
- Stack this notes better? 03:46:156 (2,3) - 03:50:857 (4,4) - 06:12:562 (4,2) -
- You can improve this blanket 06:13:668 (4,2) -
Combos
- I will say the same here as extra, some combos can be improven but yeah...
Sounds
- Everything seems fine
Overall
- This is really hardcore for an Insane player at some points, I got some problems but nothing to worry, I really liked, only minor changes about Presentation, nothing really important, good job.