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Luel Roseline
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Luel Roseline

No492_Shaymin wrote:

S A V E R Y wrote:

저기...나중에 따로 스탠 모드 해놓아도 되나요?
새 맵셋에다가요?
네
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

S A V E R Y wrote:

네
전 상관없음 ㅋㅋ 기기
Len
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Joined June 2012
Len
from your userpage



224:

전체적으로 브레이크타임이 너무 많아서 흐름이 끊겨버리네요. 00:13:673 - ~ 00:25:101 - 여기는 최소한 매핑 하셔야 할듯합니다. 00:47:244 - 여기서 시작하는 브레이크는 00:47:958 - 여기까지 끌어서 여기서 브레이크가 시작되게 해주시면 좋을것같네요.

첫번째 키아이타임에서 대쉬좀 끊게 세로로 되어있는 슬라좀 많이 이용해주셨으면 좋겠네요. 쉬프트를 놓을수가없거나. 끊어서하기 애매한 패턴들로 전체적으로 자리잡고있네요.01:01:887 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:12:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , 02:12:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - , 02:19:387 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -

02:34:744 - 이 뒤에 있는 슬라들 조금 기울여주시는것도 좋을것같습니다. 조용한부분에서 대쉬를 끊어서 씨앗을 받아야한다니 너무 어렵네요. 예시로 02:37:958 (2,3) - 이런것과 02:40:101 (1,2) - 이것을보시면 알수있을것같네요. 이렇게 가로로 배치 안해도 충분히 자연스럽게 이어갈수있는데 개인적으로 아쉬운부분입니다.

AImod 체크해주세요.



Real:

224님 레인과는 반대로 세로로된 슬라가 너무 많네요. 전체적으로 뭔가 심심한느낌이 강합니다.

00:04:387 (3) - 이 슬라를 강조해야할것만 같네요. 00:04:387 - 이부분에서 삐 하고 큰 소리가 나기때문에.. 아래 사진과 같은 배치도 한번 고려해보시는것도 좋을것같네요. 00:04:208 - 여기하고 00:04:744 - 여기에 하이퍼가 붙게끔 배치해주시면 좋을것같습니다.

00:06:887 (2,3,4) - 이 흐름 뭔가 어색하다는 느낌이 조금 있네요. 00:07:244 - 여기에 1.2배 초록선 하나넣고 이런 흐름도 나쁘지않을것같네요. 또한 00:06:529 (1,2,3,4) - 이 4개 전체적인 위치도 바꾸면 좋을것같다는 생각이 .. 거리가 좁아서 뭔가 지루한느낌

00:18:672 (1,2) - 이 두개 떨어뜨려서 00:18:940 - 여기하고 00:19:298 - 여기에 하이퍼 붙게끔 배치하시는것도 좋을것같네요.

00:29:744 (3,4) - 1/4 스냅

00:50:815 (4,6) - 이 두개 모양을 좌우반전 시키는게 더 어울리고 받기 편하네요. 한번 고려해보시는것도 좋을것같습니다.


00:58:137 - 강조가 되어야 할 부분은 여기지 00:58:226 - 여기가 아닌듯합니다.

01:48:315 (1) - 이부분 뭔가 흐름이 이상하네요. 3/4 슬라를 이용하실거면 이런 배치가 더 낫다고 생각합니다.

02:02:958 (1) - 이 슬라 역시 00:04:387 (3) - 와 같은 이유로 강조하면 좋을것같다고 생각합니다.

AImod 체크해주세요.



Good Luck
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
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Topic Starter
Rocma

Fast wrote:

from your userpage

Real:

224님 레인과는 반대로 세로로된 슬라가 너무 많네요. 전체적으로 뭔가 심심한느낌이 강합니다. 원래 제가 레인이고 224님이 오버도즈였는데 바꿔서 그럼 ㅋㅋ

00:04:387 (3) - 이 슬라를 강조해야할것만 같네요. 00:04:387 - 이부분에서 삐 하고 큰 소리가 나기때문에.. 아래 사진과 같은 배치도 한번 고려해보시는것도 좋을것같네요. 00:04:208 - 여기하고 00:04:744 - 여기에 하이퍼가 붙게끔 배치해주시면 좋을것같습니다. O

00:06:887 (2,3,4) - 이 흐름 뭔가 어색하다는 느낌이 조금 있네요. 00:07:244 - 여기에 1.2배 초록선 하나넣고 이런 흐름도 나쁘지않을것같네요. 또한 00:06:529 (1,2,3,4) - 이 4개 전체적인 위치도 바꾸면 좋을것같다는 생각이 .. 거리가 좁아서 뭔가 지루한느낌 O

00:18:672 (1,2) - 이 두개 떨어뜨려서 00:18:940 - 여기하고 00:19:298 - 여기에 하이퍼 붙게끔 배치하시는것도 좋을것같네요. 앞에만 붙였어용 뒤에는 소리가 좀 줄어들어서

00:29:744 (3,4) - 1/4 스냅 전 여기에 임팩트를 주려고 했습니다. 그런데 1/4틱에 소리가 나면 너무 다른맵들과 차이가 없더라구요. 요즘 유저들 실력의 상향평준화도 고려해서 제가 제일 좋아하는 1/6 그대로 가겠습니다. 대신 거리좀 줄임

00:50:815 (4,6) - 이 두개 모양을 좌우반전 시키는게 더 어울리고 받기 편하네요. 한번 고려해보시는것도 좋을것같습니다. 오버도주라서 난이도가 있어야할거같아요

00:58:137 - 강조가 되어야 할 부분은 여기지 00:58:226 - 여기가 아닌듯합니다. 50%로 들어본 결과 둘다 강조하면 될듯

01:48:315 (1) - 이부분 뭔가 흐름이 이상하네요. 3/4 슬라를 이용하실거면 이런 배치가 더 낫다고 생각합니다. 위치는 적용 모양은 변형

02:02:958 (1) - 이 슬라 역시 00:04:387 (3) - 와 같은 이유로 강조하면 좋을것같다고 생각합니다. O

AImod 체크해주세요. O 노트끝 배치 안되는거 왜그런지 아직도 의문..



Good Luck
[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
64 posts
Joined September 2013
[224]Reol

Fast wrote:

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224:

전체적으로 브레이크타임이 너무 많아서 흐름이 끊겨버리네요. 00:13:673 - ~ 00:25:101 - 여기는 최소한 매핑 하셔야 할듯합니다. 00:47:244 - 여기서 시작하는 브레이크는 00:47:958 - 여기까지 끌어서 여기서 브레이크가 시작되게 해주시면 좋을것같네요.

첫번째 키아이타임에서 대쉬좀 끊게 세로로 되어있는 슬라좀 많이 이용해주셨으면 좋겠네요. 쉬프트를 놓을수가없거나. 끊어서하기 애매한 패턴들로 전체적으로 자리잡고있네요.01:01:887 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:12:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , 02:12:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - , 02:19:387 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -

02:34:744 - 이 뒤에 있는 슬라들 조금 기울여주시는것도 좋을것같습니다. 조용한부분에서 대쉬를 끊어서 씨앗을 받아야한다니 너무 어렵네요. 예시로 02:37:958 (2,3) - 이런것과 02:40:101 (1,2) - 이것을보시면 알수있을것같네요. 이렇게 가로로 배치 안해도 충분히 자연스럽게 이어갈수있는데 개인적으로 아쉬운부분입니다.

AImod 체크해주세요.
전부 수정했습니다

http://puu.sh/kCGdC/58417ae057.osu
BoberOfDarkness
1,059 posts
Joined October 2013
BoberOfDarkness

General
Platter have more combo than rain what is not rankable for our BNs :^)

Cup
00:06:530 (3) - NC
01:09:030 (1,2,3,4) - pattern might be exhausting for newbies delete 01:09:565 (2,3) - and place note at 01:09:744 - instead
01:12:244 (4) - NC , remove NC 01:13:315 (1) -
01:19:208 (6) - delete
01:19:387 - place note with NC
01:19:744 (1) - remove NC
02:09:030 (1) - ^
02:09:387 (2) - add NC
02:25:458 (1,2) - swap NCs
02:27:244 (5) - NC
02:31:351 (5,1) - swap NCs
02:44:565 (2) - NC

Salad
00:09:387 (5) - NC
00:15:101 (4) - NC
00:17:958 (4) - NC
00:26:530 (3) - NC
00:32:244 (3) - NC
00:35:101 (3) - NC
00:36:173 (1) - remove NC
00:46:530 (5) - NC
00:49:387 (2) - NC
00:55:101 (3) - NC
01:20:815 (6) - NC
01:33:673 (3) - NC
01:35:101 (3) - NC
02:13:673 (3) - shorten this slider by 1/2
02:14:387 - place new 1/2 slider here with NC and delete 02:14:744 (4) - also remove NC 02:15:101 (1) -
02:15:815 (3) - NC
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

General
Platter have more combo than rain what is not rankable for our BNs :^)

Cup
00:06:530 (3) - NC
01:09:030 (1,2,3,4) - pattern might be exhausting for newbies delete 01:09:565 (2,3) - and place note at 01:09:744 - instead
01:12:244 (4) - NC , remove NC 01:13:315 (1) -
01:19:208 (6) - delete
01:19:387 - place note with NC
01:19:744 (1) - remove NC
02:09:030 (1) - ^
02:09:387 (2) - add NC
02:25:458 (1,2) - swap NCs
02:27:244 (5) - NC
02:31:351 (5,1) - swap NCs
02:44:565 (2) - NC

Salad
00:09:387 (5) - NC
00:15:101 (4) - NC
00:17:958 (4) - NC
00:26:530 (3) - NC
00:32:244 (3) - NC
00:35:101 (3) - NC
00:36:173 (1) - remove NC
00:46:530 (5) - NC
00:49:387 (2) - NC
00:55:101 (3) - NC
01:20:815 (6) - NC
01:33:673 (3) - NC
01:35:101 (3) - NC
02:13:673 (3) - shorten this slider by 1/2
02:14:387 - place new 1/2 slider here with NC and delete 02:14:744 (4) - also remove NC 02:15:101 (1) -
02:15:815 (3) - NC
all fixed

thank you :D
Lost
72 posts
Joined May 2014
Lost
Mod on lower diffs.

[Cup]

As i have no experience with Cup diffs i'll keep this very short.
First of all map is FC'able w/o dashing so that part is as it should be :)
According to this Rule that will most likely pass this pattern is unrankable 00:46:173 (4,1) - Should change it to 1/1 distance before and after the spinner for first note. All the other spinners in the Cup are fine.
[Salad]

Same issue as Cup with the spinner at 00:56:530 (7,1) - And 02:44:208 (4,1) - They need to be 1/1 distance.
I'd suggest making the jumps on the Salad more clear, currently it is quite hard to see if you need to use dash or not on most jumps. Increasing the spacing a little bit will make the map easier to read.
Currently there are only jumps at 1/1 distance, there are a few places during kiai where small jumps on 1/2 would fit the song very well in my opinion.
These places are:
I'd suggest 6 squares on grid size 2 for these jumps
01:00:815 (1,2,3) -
01:06:530 (1,2,3) -
01:09:387 (1,2,3) -
01:12:244 (1,2,3) -
01:20:458 (4,5,6,7,8) - Change 4,5 To a slider and possibly NC on 4?
02:15:815 (1,2,3) -
02:21:172 (4,1,2,3) -
02:32:601 (4,1,2,3) -
The Salad flows really nicely, fun to play :)

[Platter]

No suggestions, just want to say this Platter is insanely fun to play. Good job :)
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

Lost wrote:

Mod on lower diffs.

[Cup]

As i have no experience with Cup diffs i'll keep this very short.
First of all map is FC'able w/o dashing so that part is as it should be :)
According to this Rule that will most likely pass this pattern is unrankable 00:46:173 (4,1) - Should change it to 1/1 distance before and after the spinner for first note. All the other spinners in the Cup are fine.
[Salad]

Same issue as Cup with the spinner at 00:56:530 (7,1) - And 02:44:208 (4,1) - They need to be 1/1 distance.
I'd suggest making the jumps on the Salad more clear, currently it is quite hard to see if you need to use dash or not on most jumps. Increasing the spacing a little bit will make the map easier to read.
Currently there are only jumps at 1/1 distance, there are a few places during kiai where small jumps on 1/2 would fit the song very well in my opinion.
These places are:
I'd suggest 6 squares on grid size 2 for these jumps
01:00:815 (1,2,3) -
01:06:530 (1,2,3) -
01:09:387 (1,2,3) -
01:12:244 (1,2,3) -
01:20:458 (4,5,6,7,8) - Change 4,5 To a slider and possibly NC on 4?
02:15:815 (1,2,3) -
02:21:172 (4,1,2,3) -
02:32:601 (4,1,2,3) -
The Salad flows really nicely, fun to play :)

[Platter]

No suggestions, just want to say this Platter is insanely fun to play. Good job :)
all fixed :3

Thank you

(I will re-fix)
CLSW
osu! Alumni
2,182 posts
Joined October 2010
CLSW
[Ignored Masterpiece]
00:11:888 (3,4) - 이 부분 좀 많이 칼타이밍인거같네요. 1/4 하이퍼대시 바로 다음 나오는 역점프라 처리하는 타이밍 잡기가 상당히 쉽지 않습니다. 00:11:888 (3) - 을 x : 32에 (4)를 192에 놓으시면 될거같습니다.
00:38:851 (2,3,4) - (2) 부분의 하이퍼대시를 없애고 (4)의 끝부분에 하이퍼를 넣는건 어떨지 건의해봅니다. 이쪽이 저한테는 좀 더 자연스럽네요.
SPOILER
01:15:637 (3,1) - 요 부분 둘 다 하이퍼대시 넣는편이 난이도로나 분위기로나 더 맞아보이네요..
02:22:601 (1,2) - 여기는 양끝 하이퍼보다는 그냥 쭉 이어지는 일반 연타형태로 바꾸시는 편이 너무 오버스럽지 않을것 같습니다.
SPOILER
02:38:672 (1) - 오른쪽이 아니라 왠지 왼쪽에 가있어야할듯한.. 반사적으로 이 부분 왼쪽으로 움직였습니다. 만약 이 부분을 고치셨다면, 후속 패턴 02:39:030 (2,3,4,5) - 으로
SPOILER
이걸 써보세요. 분명 좋을겁니다.

오브젝트 추가나 제외는 제가 그냥 싫어해서 하지 않았습니다. 우선 제 사견으로는 오버매핑과는 살짝 거리가 있다고 봅니다만, 비트인엔젤도 반대했던 애들 특징상 이게 어찌될지는 살짝 장담할 수는 없네요. 재밌게 잘 플레이했습니다.

continue to next.

[Overdose]
00:29:744 (3,1) - 속편하게 두개 다 1/8 쓰는쪽이 좋아보이네요.
00:34:744 (2,1) - 둘 사이에 점프가 없으니 어색한 느낌. 00:35:101 (1) - 를 x : 80에 배치해보세요.
00:38:851 (2,3) - 슬라이더의 위치가 00:38:851 이어야 합니다. 결정적으로 00:39:030 여기엔 아무 박자도 없거든요. 이건 00:37:601 (6) - 여기도 마찬가지.
02:15:101 (3) - 이 부분은 하이퍼대시 1~2개쯤 왕복하면서 넣는걸로 해주세요. 그쪽이 좀 더 분위기와 난이도를 살리는 것 같습니다.
02:38:672 (6,7,8) - 여기 제가 권장드리는 패턴. 한번 써보세요.
SPOILER

[224]
00:14:923 (1) - 이거 오른방향에 배치되어야 좀 더 맞는거같은데..
00:29:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이 부분 하이퍼대시 많이 써가면서 좀 강한 분위기 연출시키시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 이렇게 써보시고 참고해보세요.
SPOILER
01:03:137 (5) - 불합리한 칼점프네요. 안그래도 요 부분 자체 간격도 상당히 길어서 대시키 살짝 눌러주면서 자리 제대로 잡아줘야하는데 그 다음 바로 역방향으로 칼타이밍 대시가 나와버리면 정말 처리하기 까다롭습니다. 5번 슬라이더의 길이를 더 짧게 조정하시거나 점프 거리를 좀 더 줄여주세요. (1)을 x : 112정도로 놓으시면 될 것 같습니다.
01:08:673 (4,1,2) - 글쎄요. (2)로 넘어가는 부분이 좀 심심한 느낌입니다. 요런식으로 고쳐보시면 좀 맞을거라 생각되네요.
SPOILER

전반적으로 어? 여기에 배치될 부분이 아닌데? 하는것들이 좀 많은 편이고, 뉴콤보 정렬도 제대로 되어있지 않은 상태입니다. 조금 더 자연스러운 흐름들을 찾아보세요. 패턴 자체의 쓰임새는 양호합니다.

[Platter's Frobe]
리매핑하세요 핵노잼 ㅡㅡ

[Salad]
01:32:958 (2) - 보통 초심자들은 이런 패턴이 나올때 비록 1/2라고 해도 와리가리를 할 생각을 하지 않고 중심잡기를 하려고 합니다. 그런 의미에서 이 부분을 중심잡기를 이용해 받기에는 간격이 스탠 neu급으로 너무 벌어져 있으니 어느 정도 충분히 줄여주시는걸 추천드릴게요.


[Cup]
00:09:030 (2) - This one seems a bit awkward, try to ctrl+> and replace on x : 304.
00:37:958 (1,2,3) - Try this. It makes more better flow and reasonable difficulty.
SPOILER
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

CLSW wrote:

[Ignored Masterpiece]
00:11:888 (3,4) - 이 부분 좀 많이 칼타이밍인거같네요. 1/4 하이퍼대시 바로 다음 나오는 역점프라 처리하는 타이밍 잡기가 상당히 쉽지 않습니다. 00:11:888 (3) - 을 x : 32에 (4)를 192에 놓으시면 될거같습니다. O
00:38:851 (2,3,4) - (2) 부분의 하이퍼대시를 없애고 (4)의 끝부분에 하이퍼를 넣는건 어떨지 건의해봅니다. 이쪽이 저한테는 좀 더 자연스럽네요. O
01:15:637 (3,1) - 요 부분 둘 다 하이퍼대시 넣는편이 난이도로나 분위기로나 더 맞아보이네요.. 너무 멀어지는 감이 있어서 그대로 가겠습니다
02:22:601 (1,2) - 여기는 양끝 하이퍼보다는 그냥 쭉 이어지는 일반 연타형태로 바꾸시는 편이 너무 오버스럽지 않을것 같습니다. O
02:38:672 (1) - 오른쪽이 아니라 왠지 왼쪽에 가있어야할듯한.. 반사적으로 이 부분 왼쪽으로 움직였습니다. 만약 이 부분을 고치셨다면, 후속 패턴 02:39:030 (2,3,4,5) - 으로
SPOILER
이걸 써보세요. 분명 좋을겁니다.
3,4,5엔 개인적으로 점프를 넣고싶지 않아서 1,2만 바꿨습니다

오브젝트 추가나 제외는 제가 그냥 싫어해서 하지 않았습니다. 우선 제 사견으로는 오버매핑과는 살짝 거리가 있다고 봅니다만, 비트인엔젤도 반대했던 애들 특징상 이게 어찌될지는 살짝 장담할 수는 없네요. 재밌게 잘 플레이했습니다.

continue to next.

[Overdose]
00:29:744 (3,1) - 속편하게 두개 다 1/8 쓰는쪽이 좋아보이네요. 확실히 깔끔해졌네요 1/4를 쓰지않고 어떻게 패턴짤까 많이 고심했던건데 해결됐네요 감사합니다
00:34:744 (2,1) - 둘 사이에 점프가 없으니 어색한 느낌. 00:35:101 (1) - 를 x : 80에 배치해보세요 00:35:101 (1,2) - 아사이에 하이퍼넣긴 그래서 2를 오른쪽으로 옮겼습니다.
00:38:851 (2,3) - 슬라이더의 위치가 00:38:851 이어야 합니다. 결정적으로 00:39:030 여기엔 아무 박자도 없거든요. 이건 00:37:601 (6) - 여기도 마찬가지. O
02:15:101 (3) - 이 부분은 하이퍼대시 1~2개쯤 왕복하면서 넣는걸로 해주세요. 그쪽이 좀 더 분위기와 난이도를 살리는 것 같습니다. O
02:38:672 (6,7,8) - 여기 제가 권장드리는 패턴. 한번 써보세요. O
SPOILER


[Salad]
01:32:958 (2) - 보통 초심자들은 이런 패턴이 나올때 비록 1/2라고 해도 와리가리를 할 생각을 하지 않고 중심잡기를 하려고 합니다. 그런 의미에서 이 부분을 중심잡기를 이용해 받기에는 간격이 스탠 neu급으로 너무 벌어져 있으니 어느 정도 충분히 줄여주시는걸 추천드릴게요. O


[Cup]

00:09:030 (2) - This one seems a bit awkward, try to ctrl+> and replace on x : 304. O
00:37:958 (1,2,3) - Try this. It makes more better flow and reasonable difficulty. O
SPOILER
(키리가야 컵 제가 관리하고있습니다)

감사합니다!
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
its been awhile since i mod ctb map, it was fun.. i might come back in holiday to give some suggestion, mainly for the rhythm placement in timeline.. nvm im busy af ;__;
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe
???
Bunnrei
1,044 posts
Joined May 2011
Bunnrei
(Those in Bold are unrankable issues based on Ranking Criteria!)

lol this song is catchy XD
[Cup]
  1. Add a hitcircle at 00:13:673.
  2. 00:33:315 (1,2,3) - Try increasing spacing here, it's a Cup diff but it's always nice to introduce some movement to a beginner.
  3. 00:46:173 (4) - Make this a bit farther from 00:45:815 (3) - .
  4. 01:00:815 (3) - Move this farther from 00:59:744 (2) - .
  5. 02:02:065 (3,4,5) - Make this more spaced out.
  6. 02:34:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3) - Try not to use very silent hitsounds here! They are barely audible, so try using 15% or 20% volume instead.

    The diff is fine difficulty wise, only thing that bothers me is the current lack of movement in the diff, as there are sometimes parts where the player stops altogether (this is fine for the calm parts).

[Salad]

dat almost 666 combo O_O
  1. 00:09:208 (4) - Move this a bit to the left.
  2. 00:35:101 (3,4) - Try reducing spacing here.
  3. 00:55:458 (4) - Make this slightly diagonal, pointing to the right. (You may move 00:55:815 (5,6,7) - farther if spacing is ever reduced.)
  4. 02:26:886 (3) - Move this either a bit to the left or the right.

    A pretty nice Salad, very well made!

[Rain]
  1. Increase tick rate to 2.
  2. 00:56:530 - Add a note here, since there is an audible beat here. (I suggest placing it far from 00:56:351 (4) - ,making it a hyper, to emphasize it more.)
  3. 00:58:494 (3,4) - Increase spacing.
  4. 01:01:708 (5) - Slightly move to the left.
  5. 01:22:065 (4,5) - Remove (5), then make (4) a repeat slider.
  6. 01:31:530 (5,6,7) - This kind of jump is confusing, try moving (5) to the same place as (6,7), then move the whole triplet a bit closer to 01:31:351 (4) - .
  7. 02:11:530 (1) - Make this point to the left.
  8. 02:11:887 (2) - Make this point to the right.
  9. 02:17:244 (1) - Move this closer to 02:17:333 (2) - , to the point that it is no longer a hyper.

[Overdose]
  1. 00:50:815 (4,5,6) - I wouldn't suggest putting such a big jump in a relatively calm part of the song.
  2. 01:12:244 (1,2,3) - The jump between (2) and (3) is probably too big of a non-hyper. Try moving (1) farther from 01:11:887 (2) - , then move 01:12:601 (2) - farther from (3).

Platter is too perfect.
And Ignored Masterpiece is beyond my modding capabilities :(
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

Ster wrote:

(Those in Bold are unrankable issues based on Ranking Criteria!)

lol this song is catchy XD
[Cup]
  1. Add a hitcircle at 00:13:673.
  2. 00:33:315 (1,2,3) - Try increasing spacing here, it's a Cup diff but it's always nice to introduce some movement to a beginner.
  3. 00:46:173 (4) - Make this a bit farther from 00:45:815 (3) - .
  4. 01:00:815 (3) - Move this farther from 00:59:744 (2) - .
  5. 02:02:065 (3,4,5) - Make this more spaced out.
  6. 02:34:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3) - Try not to use very silent hitsounds here! They are barely audible, so try using 15% or 20% volume instead.
    all fixed

    The diff is fine difficulty wise, only thing that bothers me is the current lack of movement in the diff, as there are sometimes parts where the player stops altogether (this is fine for the calm parts).

[Salad]

dat almost 666 combo O_O
  1. 00:09:208 (4) - Move this a bit to the left. it's fine
  2. 00:35:101 (3,4) - Try reducing spacing here. O
  3. 00:55:458 (4) - Make this slightly diagonal, pointing to the right. (You may move 00:55:815 (5,6,7) - farther if spacing is ever reduced.) O
  4. 02:26:886 (3) - Move this either a bit to the left or the right. O

    A pretty nice Salad, very well made!

[Overdose]
  1. 00:50:815 (4,5,6) - I wouldn't suggest putting such a big jump in a relatively calm part of the song. I changed pattern
  2. 01:12:244 (1,2,3) - The jump between (2) and (3) is probably too big of a non-hyper. Try moving (1) farther from 01:11:887 (2) - , then move 01:12:601 (2) - farther from (3). I moved (3) but I don't think this pattern was hard

Platter is too perfect.
And Ignored Masterpiece is beyond my modding capabilities :(

Thank you!
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
small mod aaa, im noob at modding ctb, so you can freely reject any suggestion that doesn't fit /w/

[Real Overdose]
01:04:833 - and 01:05:012 - you can add some circle to layer the drum roll
01:08:405 (2) - the rhythm looks awkward in this part, maybe do something with the timeline like.. http://puu.sh/m7bNH.jpg
01:16:262 - 01:16:440 - missing drumroll again

01:23:226 (4) - this circle could be removed as there's no sound in the bga to layer
01:24:655 (4) - ^
01:25:994 (4) - ^ turn to circle instead

well as in osu!mania itself, the notes only placed where there's a sound of instrument that appears in the music / bga.. any notes that placed in empty spot should be removed.. 'w' i guess its also applicable in CTB

01:26:530 - 01:26:887 - 01:27:244 - 01:27:601 - 01:27:958 - forgot some finishes?
01:31:173 (2) - wow remove finish

02:20:280 - 02:20:369 - & 02:20:994 - 02:21:083 - add something? well those jumps looks scary O.o
02:26:172 (2) - add finish in the end of this slider
02:30:101 (1,2,3) - could be more jumpy i guess :^)

[frobe's platter]
nice hitsound *-* other diffs should have same hitsound like on this diff imo.. and wow i need to sleep.. might come back again for the other diffs cuz aaaaa shinobi <3

ps: was exusagi here... *runs*
[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
64 posts
Joined September 2013
[224]Reol

CLSW wrote:

[224]
00:14:923 (1) - 이거 오른방향에 배치되어야 좀 더 맞는거같은데.. - 약간 오른쪽으로 땡겼습니다 ㅋㅋ;
00:29:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이 부분 하이퍼대시 많이 써가면서 좀 강한 분위기 연출시키시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 이렇게 써보시고 참고해보세요.
SPOILER
- 원래 하이퍼 있었는데 수세미가 막 바꿈 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ 수정했습니다
01:03:137 (5) - 불합리한 칼점프네요. 안그래도 요 부분 자체 간격도 상당히 길어서 대시키 살짝 눌러주면서 자리 제대로 잡아줘야하는데 그 다음 바로 역방향으로 칼타이밍 대시가 나와버리면 정말 처리하기 까다롭습니다. 5번 슬라이더의 길이를 더 짧게 조정하시거나 점프 거리를 좀 더 줄여주세요. (1)을 x : 112정도로 놓으시면 될 것 같습니다. - ... 왜인지 하이퍼가 안붙어있네요 (1)을 x : 112에 놓았습니다
01:08:673 (4,1,2) - 글쎄요. (2)로 넘어가는 부분이 좀 심심한 느낌입니다. 요런식으로 고쳐보시면 좀 맞을거라 생각되네요.
SPOILER
- 패턴이 가다 중간에 끈기긴 하지만 해보니 괜찮은 아이디어 같아요 수정..

전반적으로 어? 여기에 배치될 부분이 아닌데? 하는것들이 좀 많은 편이고, 뉴콤보 정렬도 제대로 되어있지 않은 상태입니다. 조금 더 자연스러운 흐름들을 찾아보세요. 패턴 자체의 쓰임새는 양호합니다.
감사합니다 ㅎㅎ
역시 칝님... 모딩 퀄리티가 대단하심...
http://puu.sh/m7TPK/2ebce7ffc9.osz
[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
64 posts
Joined September 2013
[224]Reol

Ster wrote:

[Rain]
  1. Increase tick rate to 2. - ok i will
  2. 00:56:530 - Add a note here, since there is an audible beat here. (I suggest placing it far from 00:56:351 (4) - ,making it a hyper, to emphasize it more.) - umm; rhythm miskate... will fix here
  3. 00:58:494 (3,4) - Increase spacing. - sorry i think enough spacing
  4. 01:01:708 (5) - Slightly move to the left. - ok looks nice haha
  5. 01:22:065 (4,5) - Remove (5), then make (4) a repeat slider. - sorry i think (5) circle is important..
  6. 01:31:530 (5,6,7) - This kind of jump is confusing, try moving (5) to the same place as (6,7), then move the whole triplet a bit closer to 01:31:351 (4) - . - fix same as 01:28:673 (5,6,7) -
  7. 02:11:530 (1) - Make this point to the left. - ok i will
  8. 02:11:887 (2) - Make this point to the right.- ^
  9. 02:17:244 (1) - Move this closer to 02:17:333 (2) - , to the point that it is no longer a hyper. - sorry 02:16:887 (5,1) - spaicing too far
thank you ster! your modding is awasome~ same in ctb skill ;)
http://puu.sh/m7UKz/d6a109c58d.osz
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

ajeemaniz wrote:

small mod aaa, im noob at modding ctb, so you can freely reject any suggestion that doesn't fit /w/

[Real Overdose]
01:04:833 - and 01:05:012 - you can add some circle to layer the drum roll O
01:08:405 (2) - the rhythm looks awkward in this part, maybe do something with the timeline like.. http://puu.sh/m7bNH.jpg I changed rhythm other way
01:16:262 - 01:16:440 - missing drumroll again O

01:23:226 (4) - this circle could be removed as there's no sound in the bga to layer
01:24:655 (4) - ^
01:25:994 (4) - ^ turn to circle instead all fixed

well as in osu!mania itself, the notes only placed where there's a sound of instrument that appears in the music / bga.. any notes that placed in empty spot should be removed.. 'w' i guess its also applicable in CTB

01:26:530 - 01:26:887 - 01:27:244 - 01:27:601 - 01:27:958 - forgot some finishes? added
01:31:173 (2) - wow remove finish lol didn't it fun?

02:20:280 - 02:20:369 - & 02:20:994 - 02:21:083 - add something? well those jumps looks scary O.o I copied from 01:07:958 :3
02:26:172 (2) - add finish in the end of this slider O
02:30:101 (1,2,3) - could be more jumpy i guess :^) good

[frobe's platter]
nice hitsound *-* other diffs should have same hitsound like on this diff imo.. and wow i need to sleep.. might come back again for the other diffs cuz aaaaa shinobi <3 <3

ps: was exusagi here... *runs* was -> is
Thank you ExUsagi!!



224's rain is updated
Benita
604 posts
Joined February 2014
Benita
Since Shaymin kindly asked for a mod! :3

General
  1. Hitsounds: Platter is the only diff using the custom hitsounds, would be awesome if the other diffs used them as well!

Kirigaya's Cup
  1. 00:13:673 - 00:25:101 - This doesn't need to be a break imo
  2. 00:37:958 (1,2,3) - 00:42:780 (1,2) - 00:45:458 (2,3,4) - Long chains of 1/2's like this can be a bit overwhelming for cup, there are more examples but I'm not gonna point them all out. Go through the map and remove notes similar to the ones mentioned.

Salad
The max combo in Salad is 667 which is a big jump from cup with 374 max combo. I would recommend deleting some notes. I will point out some examples to how you can do it through the map:
  1. 00:15:101 (1) - Remove and add beat 00:15:280 - and 00:15:458 -
  2. 00:16:351 (3) - 00:17:958 (1) - Remove
  3. 00:18:137 (2) - Remove repeat
  4. 00:19:923 (2) - Remove
  5. 01:48:315 - 01:49:387 - This part has more notes in Cup
  6. Go through your map and delete notes similar to the ones mentioned above

Frobe's Platter
  1. Max combo is higher than Rain which is unrankable.

I'll end my mod here and leave the harder diffs to the pros! :) gl on ranking!
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma
Double posting sry
Idk the reason
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Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

BennyBananas wrote:

Since Shaymin kindly asked for a mod! :3

General
  1. Hitsounds: Platter is the only diff using the custom hitsounds, would be awesome if the other diffs used them as well!
    too lazy to change

Kirigaya's Cup
  1. 00:13:673 - 00:25:101 - This doesn't need to be a break imo I added notes
  2. 00:37:958 (1,2,3) - 00:42:780 (1,2) - 00:45:458 (2,3,4) - Long chains of 1/2's like this can be a bit overwhelming for cup, there are more examples but I'm not gonna point them all out. Go through the map and remove notes similar to the ones mentioned.

    00:37:958 (1,2,3) - this pattern is ok the others are changed

Salad
The max combo in Salad is 667 which is a big jump from cup with 374 max combo. I would recommend deleting some notes. I will point out some examples to how you can do it through the map Spec said it's fine
  1. 00:15:101 (1) - Remove and add beat 00:15:280 - and 00:15:458 - ^
  2. 00:16:351 (3) - 00:17:958 (1) - Remove ^
  3. 00:18:137 (2) - Remove repeat ^
  4. 00:19:923 (2) - Remove O
  5. 01:48:315 - 01:49:387 - This part has more notes in Cup I changed both diff
  6. Go through your map and delete notes similar to the ones mentioned above same

Frobe's Platter
  1. Max combo is higher than Rain which is unrankable.
    224 said he will add notes in his rain

I'll end my mod here and leave the harder diffs to the pros! :) gl on ranking!

Thank you :D
Taeyang
Elite Mapper
1,209 posts
Joined June 2013
Taeyang
캐치실력도 없고 캐치매핑 시작한지 얼마안된 늅이지만 최선을다해 모딩해보겠습니다.

[ General]
  1. 02:11:530 - 전체적으로 레드라인이 박혀있는데 왜박혀있는지 모르겠...혹시나하고 지적하고 넘어가봅니다.
  2. 'Widescreen Support' 체크해제

[ Kirigaya's Cup]
  1. 00:02:244 - add circle and NC like another diff
    SPOILER
  2. 00:02:244 (1) - and add finish
  3. 01:31:173 (1,2,3) -suggest; too boring
    SPOILER
  4. 02:14:387 (1,2,3) - 02:15:101 (1,2,3) - just use reverse slide? 02:03:673 (2,3) -02:19:744 (1,2) - like here

[ Salad]
  1. 00:35:101 (3) - 박자가 뭔가이상한데 1/2슬라로?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:780 (3,3) - 노트 추가 하는게 리듬적으로 더 나아보입니다.00:37:958 (1,1) - 각각여기에 스택시켜보면 어떨까요?
  3. 01:00:637 (3,1,2) - 이부분 흐름 어렵네요 이정도로 좀 줄이는게 어떨까요
    SPOILER
  4. 01:06:530 (1,2,3) - 흐름제안;01:06:530 (1) - 복붙해서 대칭하는건 어떠신지 약간 어렵네요
    SPOILER
  5. 01:25:101 (1) - 힛사운드 빠졌습니다.

[ Frobe's Platter]
  1. 00:10:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 이부분 힛사 00:05:101 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 여기처럼 하면 어떨까요
  2. 00:27:780 (6) - 클랍제거
  3. 매핑면에서 제 실력으로 건드릴만한 맵이 아니네요 ㄷㄷ;
    캐치못하는 제가봐도 잘만드신것 같습니다.01:22:423 (1) - ~01:37:958 (1) - 특히 이부분 재밌게 잘찍혔네요

이 이상 난이도는 제 실력이 딸리는지라 모딩을 할수가 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
굳럭인겁니다.~!
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
526 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Rocma

Taeyang wrote:

캐치실력도 없고 캐치매핑 시작한지 얼마안된 늅이지만 최선을다해 모딩해보겠습니다.

[ General]
  1. 02:11:530 - 전체적으로 레드라인이 박혀있는데 왜박혀있는지 모르겠...혹시나하고 지적하고 넘어가봅니다. 기존 매니아 맵셋에도 있었고 이부분에서 정박의 위치가 바뀝니다
  2. 'Widescreen Support' 체크해제 헉 이거 언제 다시 돼있었지

[ Kirigaya's Cup]
  1. 00:02:244 - add circle and NC like another diff O
    SPOILER
  2. 00:02:244 (1) - and add finish O
  3. 01:31:173 (1,2,3) -suggest; too boring 패턴은 제가 임의로 좀더 난이도 있게 바꿨습니다
    SPOILER
  4. 02:14:387 (1,2,3) - 02:15:101 (1,2,3) - just use reverse slide? 02:03:673 (2,3) -02:19:744 (1,2) - like here O

    이거 제가 관리하고있었는데 영어 쓰시느라 고생 많으심 ㅋㅋ

[ Salad]
  1. 00:35:101 (3) - 박자가 뭔가이상한데 1/2슬라로? 좀 늘어뜨리는게 좋을거같아서 1/6틱 썼습니다
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:780 (3,3) - 노트 추가 하는게 리듬적으로 더 나아보입니다.00:37:958 (1,1) - 각각여기에 스택시켜보면 어떨까요? 추가했지만 스택이 뭔지 모르는게 함정
  3. 01:00:637 (3,1,2) - 이부분 흐름 어렵네요 이정도로 좀 줄이는게 어떨까요 일부러 대쉬쓰기위해 벌렸습니다만 지금보니 샐러드엔 조금 과한거같네요 걍 (3)을 왼쪽으로 좀 옮겼습니다
    SPOILER
  4. 01:06:530 (1,2,3) - 흐름제안;01:06:530 (1) - 복붙해서 대칭하는건 어떠신지 약간 어렵네요 이것도 제가 임의로 바꿨습니다
    SPOILER
  5. 01:25:101 (1) - 힛사운드 빠졌습니다. O


이 이상 난이도는 제 실력이 딸리는지라 모딩을 할수가 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
굳럭인겁니다.~!
감사합니다!!
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe

Taeyang wrote:

[ Frobe's Platter]
  1. 00:10:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 이부분 힛사 00:05:101 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 여기처럼 하면 어떨까요 임의로 수정
  2. 00:27:780 (6) - 클랍제거 ㄴㄴ
  3. 매핑면에서 제 실력으로 건드릴만한 맵이 아니네요 ㄷㄷ;
    캐치못하는 제가봐도 잘만드신것 같습니다.01:22:423 (1) - ~01:37:958 (1) - 특히 이부분 재밌게 잘찍혔네요
코드
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189,261,148494,1,0,1:0:0:0:
213,216,148583,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,192,148672,6,0,L|114:186,1,127.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,100,149030,2,0,P|238:90|283:113,1,85,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,225,149387,2,0,P|390:246|307:182,1,170,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
350,59,149922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,150101,6,0,P|418:111|400:164,1,85
222,229,150458,2,0,P|176:238|158:185,1,85,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,338,150815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,338,151172,1,8,1:0:0:0:
296,313,151351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,278,151530,6,0,P|458:217|429:102,1,170,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
361,87,152065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,106,152244,6,0,P|54:167|83:282,1,170,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
151,297,152779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,278,152958,6,0,L|510:266,1,85
371,196,153315,2,0,L|456:184,1,85,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,121,153672,2,0,L|460:96,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,27,154208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,98,154387,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Torchic
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Torchic
Good luck on ranking this :D
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
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- tbeutel - wrote:

Good luck on ranking this :D
lol you changed nickname

thx :)
Kagari
750 posts
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Kagari
placeholder (sorry late... loads of school work throughout the week ;w;)
late M4M mod rip (sorry ;w;)

these are only suggestions from me, don't kd me if most of my suggestions isnt helping the map to improve

[Kirigaya's Cup]
  1. 00:13:315 (1) - try moving this to the right side (x:352) or you can move to the left instead (x:164) if you dont want to follow the first suggestion
  2. 01:08:315 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - this is kinda tricky for me to explain. I hope you understand what I am going to explain :-
    ctrl+h 01:08:315 (3,4) - and relocate to x:144.
    then, ctrl+h this 01:09:030 (1) - and move it to x:368.
    after that, ctrl+h 01:09:744 (2,3) - and move them to x:272.
    finally, move 01:10:815 (1) - to the left (x:224)
    you might reduce the note spacing a bit if some of them are too hard for cup
  3. 01:27:958 (1,2,3) - hmm... try 01:28:315 (2) - at x:176 and 01:28:673 (3) - at x:224
  4. 01:29:744 (1,2) - try 01:29:744 (1) - to x:336 and 01:30:101 (2) - to x:256
  5. 01:37:601 (3,4) - move them to the left side of combo 2 if possible
  6. 02:39:030 (2) - move to x:48?
[Salad]
  1. 00:04:387 (1) - ctrl+g them, and then ctrl+h them, after that move to x:336
  2. 00:09:744 (2,3) - increase the distance (make sure the dash afterwards is still reachable)
  3. 00:44:744 (1,2) - increase the distance between them too if possible
  4. 02:18:315 (3,1) - ^
  5. 01:49:387 (2) - idk but i thint this break can be use to add few more notes.. for me, it's okay to have this break, but i do feel that something should be added to fill the break gap... it's up to you to decide
[Frobe's Platter]
  1. 00:52:244 (1,2,3) - try to add more spacing in between these three notes.
  2. 01:36:887 (2) - move it more to the left (x:56)
[224's Rain]
  1. 00:30:101 (5) - change the repeated slider to normal slider and add a note here 00:30:458 (6) - at x:464 so it become like this
  2. 00:30:637 (7,1) - make h-dash (or at least a normal dash) in between the two notes
  3. 00:35:101 (2,3) - I suggesting on using this timeline instead and place the notes like this (changing the sv multiplier in the affected part would be necessary)
  4. 00:47:780 (3,4) - make a normal dash in between the notes. i think it suited the most IMO
  5. 00:52:244 (1,2) - ctrl+g.
  6. 00:58:494 (3,4) - another place suited for a dash (or h-dash) towards (4)
  7. 01:36:351 (8,1) - a hyperdash towards (1) seems fit to me IMO.
  8. 01:48:673 (2,1) - increase the spacing between (2) and (1).
  9. 01:49:387 (1) - idk why there is another break afterwards although it's really fits to fill the gap break with some notes with easy pattern IMO. Whether it's intentional or not, I do highly suggest that you add something to fill the gap during the break.

[Real Overdose and Ignored Masterpiece]
too hard for me to mod ;w;
but I want to point out the breaks after 01:49:387 (1) - . My suggestion would be the same as what I've mentioned in 224's rain. It's kinda frustrating for me to see this part especially in higher difficulties ;w;
that's all from me I guess... I hope my mods can be useful to improve this mapset >.<

gl on ranking~ /o/
[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
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[224]Reol
[224's Rain]
  1. 00:30:101 (5) - change the repeated slider to normal slider and add a note here 00:30:458 (6) - at x:464 so it become like this - sorry i think that was too hard
  2. 00:30:637 (7,1) - make h-dash (or at least a normal dash) in between the two notes - ?????? cant search but; i'll fix
  3. 00:35:101 (2,3) - I suggesting on using this timeline instead and place the notes like this (changing the sv multiplier in the affected part would be necessary) - sorry i think that was too hard
  4. 00:47:780 (3,4) - make a normal dash in between the notes. i think it suited the most IMO - fix it! thx~
  5. 00:52:244 (1,2) - ctrl+g. - ^
  6. 00:58:494 (3,4) - another place suited for a dash (or h-dash) towards (4) - ^
  7. 01:36:351 (8,1) - a hyperdash towards (1) seems fit to me IMO. - ^
  8. 01:48:673 (2,1) - increase the spacing between (2) and (1). - ^
  9. 01:49:387 (1) - idk why there is another break afterwards although it's really fits to fill the gap break with some notes with easy pattern IMO. Whether it's intentional or not, I do highly suggest that you add something to fill the gap during the break. - umm... ok i agree ill fix some pattern
Kagari your mod is really high quality!! :lol: envy u :(

map file here http://puu.sh/mEU5b/f46a7484f5.osu
Rocma
Former osu!catch Champion: 2022
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Rocma

Kagari wrote:

placeholder (sorry late... loads of school work throughout the week ;w;)
late M4M mod rip (sorry ;w;)

these are only suggestions from me, don't kd me if most of my suggestions isnt helping the map to improve

[Kirigaya's Cup]
  1. 00:13:315 (1) - try moving this to the right side (x:352) or you can move to the left instead (x:164) if you dont want to follow the first suggestion moved to x160
  2. 01:08:315 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - this is kinda tricky for me to explain. I hope you understand what I am going to explain :-
    ctrl+h 01:08:315 (3,4) - and relocate to x:144.
    then, ctrl+h this 01:09:030 (1) - and move it to x:368.
    after that, ctrl+h 01:09:744 (2,3) - and move them to x:272.
    finally, move 01:10:815 (1) - to the left (x:224)
    you might reduce the note spacing a bit if some of them are too hard for cupI adjusted them
  3. 01:27:958 (1,2,3) - hmm... try 01:28:315 (2) - at x:176 and 01:28:673 (3) - at x:224 spreading is not cool at here :3instead, I changed them a little
  4. 01:29:744 (1,2) - try 01:29:744 (1) - to x:336 and 01:30:101 (2) - to x:256 ^
  5. 01:37:601 (3,4) - move them to the left side of combo 2 if possible O
  6. 02:39:030 (2) - move to x:48?
O

[Salad]
  1. 00:04:387 (1) - ctrl+g them, and then ctrl+h them, after that move to x:336 x352
  2. 00:09:744 (2,3) - increase the distance (make sure the dash afterwards is still reachable) I adjusted them
  3. 00:44:744 (1,2) - increase the distance between them too if possible ^
  4. 02:18:315 (3,1) - ^ ^
  5. 01:49:387 (2) - idk but i thint this break can be use to add few more notes.. for me, it's okay to have this break, but i do feel that something should be added to fill the break gap... it's up to you to decide O

[Real Overdose and Ignored Masterpiece]
too hard for me to mod ;w;
but I want to point out the breaks after 01:49:387 (1) - . My suggestion would be the same as what I've mentioned in 224's rain. It's kinda frustrating for me to see this part especially in higher difficulties ;w; O
that's all from me I guess... I hope my mods can be useful to improve this mapset >.<

gl on ranking~ /o/
Thank you! :D


224's Rain is uploaded
Equim
335 posts
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Equim
From M4M

[General]
  1. Metadata
    Title:
    忍
    Romanised Title:
    Shinobi
    reference: offical shop
[Ignored Masterpiece]
Just had a test play and I found many flaws, which are mainly overmapping. Set the soundeffect volume to 0 and you can easily fine these overmapped part. But I am not good at modding overdose as well ;_;
  1. 01:49:387 (1,2) - Overmap. This part is peace and doesn't need too many sounds. Replace them with a slider is fine.
  2. 01:52:244 (1,2) - merge them as one slider. There is no sense to put a HDash at 01:52:735 - .
  3. 01:55:637 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern can't match the music at all! Remap this part and maybe try to follow the vocal.
  4. 02:00:458 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - In this part, you can actually put HDashes every 1/1, as the gong here is the strongest than other sounds here.
  5. 02:05:994 (2,3,4) - overmap.
[Real Overdose]
Same as Ignored Masterpiece, but with not many flaws.
  1. 00:47:958 (1) - You can make a HDash here, because there is a drum here 00:47:958 - , also it's a transition between two verse.
  2. 00:51:440 (5,6) - This part is peace and doesn't need to be that wide.
  3. 01:37:958 (2) - x352.
[224's Rain]
It looks fine, but there are a few problems about distances. Sometimes the distance is too wide (especially in anti-flow), and sometimes it's too close (no-movement is awkward in these cases, and some straight sliders can be considered as "too close" as well). You can find distance issues by youself. Just ctrl+H the whole diff and test it as you are playing it for the first time.
  1. 00:01:530 (1,2) - Why HDash? It doesn't match the music, and even the two Overdoses have no HDash at this point as well.
  2. 00:03:405 - too wide. 00:03:315 (3) - x352.
  3. 00:16:173 (4) - too wide, both prev and next, maybe x336.
  4. 01:48:673 (2) - too close, x192.
  5. 02:03:673 (1,2,1) - yeah, too close..... Try to ctrl+shift+S and 1.2x.
[Frobe's Platter]
It is good!
  1. no issue.
[Salad]
Better if you use the same hitsound sample that used in Platter.
  1. no issue.
[Kirigaya's Cup]
It is okay to me
  1. no issue.
The mapset still needs more works on the higher diffs.
Rocma
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Rocma

Equim wrote:

From M4M

[General]
  1. Metadata
    Title:
    忍
    Ok
    Romanised Title:
    Shinobi
    reference: offical shop
[Ignored Masterpiece]
Just had a test play and I found many flaws, which are mainly overmapping. Set the soundeffect volume to 0 and you can easily fine these overmapped part. But I am not good at modding overdose as well ;_;
  1. 01:49:387 (1,2) - Overmap. This part is peace and doesn't need too many sounds. Replace them with a slider is fine. This part doesnt have many sounds but a little big sounds
  2. 01:52:244 (1,2) - merge them as one slider. There is no sense to put a HDash at 01:52:735 - . I delete hdash
  3. 01:55:637 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern can't match the music at all! Remap this part and maybe try to follow the vocal. ok
  4. 02:00:458 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - In this part, you can actually put HDashes every 1/1, as the gong here is the strongest than other sounds here. this is the time that is ready to preheat. I think hdash is overmapping
  5. 02:05:994 (2,3,4) - overmap. I don't think they are overmapped but I changed them easier
[Real Overdose]
Same as Ignored Masterpiece, but with not many flaws.
  1. 00:47:958 (1) - You can make a HDash here, because there is a drum here 00:47:958 - , also it's a transition between two verse. I added hdash
  2. 00:51:440 (5,6) - This part is peace and doesn't need to be that wide. It's Real Overdose not Raindose
  3. 01:37:958 (2) - x352.I don't want to make people use hdash at here
Thanks :3
[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
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[224]Reol
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[224]Reol
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
64 posts
Joined September 2013
[224]Reol

Equim wrote:

[224's Rain]
It looks fine, but there are a few problems about distances. Sometimes the distance is too wide (especially in anti-flow), and sometimes it's too close (no-movement is awkward in these cases, and some straight sliders can be considered as "too close" as well). You can find distance issues by youself. Just ctrl+H the whole diff and test it as you are playing it for the first time.
  1. 00:01:530 (1,2) - Why HDash? It doesn't match the music, and even the two Overdoses have no HDash at this point as well. - fix~
  2. 00:03:405 - too wide. 00:03:315 (3) - x352. - ^
  3. 00:16:173 (4) - too wide, both prev and next, maybe x336. - a... think that was too close
  4. 01:48:673 (2) - too close, x192. - fix!!
  5. 02:03:673 (1,2,1) - yeah, too close..... Try to ctrl+shift+S and 1.2x. - ^
your distance mod is awasome! :)
thank you!!

http://puu.sh/mZk2s/c1d8c59ec4.osu map file
Rocma
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224 double posting baka

rain is updated
[224]Reol
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[224]Reol

No492_Shaymin wrote:

224 double posting baka

rain is updated
baka
Equim
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Equim

No492_Shaymin wrote:

Equim wrote:

00:51:440 (5,6) - This part is peace and doesn't need to be that wide. It's Real Overdose not Raindose
No, you misunderstood.
A song has its different verses that make up the ebb and flow of the melodies. More clearly, the Chorus (kiai) is contrasting the Verse. In an Overdose diff, of course you can make tricky dashes in chorus part which is the strongest part throughout the song, but in verse part (unkiai) you can't work that way, otherwise, it is overmapping.
The syllogistic logic is:
1.The song itself is a contrast (Verse and Chorus)
2.We map to the song
3.The map needs to have a contrast (Unkiai and Kiai)

Many examples are telling that, even this. Yeah it's a map wild enough, but it's not always wild from beginning to end; it has its peaceful parts due to the peaceful verses.
Rocma
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Rocma
ok I reduced distance.
But if they get easier than now, they will be boring
Equim
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Equim
If it matches the music well, it will be funny.
autofanboy
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Hello! o/

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

  • Difficulty Naming
  1. Feels a bit meaningless to split the names (as Salad, Overdose and Deluge are all made by you), but Salad with '492' included, which is not so appropriate in my opinion. You may just change it to Salad instead.
  2. Real Overdose, it is just the same problem. What about changing it to Overdose instead, it is meaningless to include 'Real', since it is really an Overdose...

    Difficulty Spread
  3. Perhaps you might want to increase the ARs of Cup and Salad to 6 and 7 respectively? The current 1.5 AR gap is a bit large comparing to the gaps among the harder difficulties.
  4. Slider velocity of the Rain is higher than the 2 Overdoses. See if the SVs can change so to show a clear spread.

    Tags
  5. You may add 'TMNT' as one of the tags, since it is the abbreviation of the Source, 'Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles'. It is also fine to include '2012' since the song is shown in the 2012 TV series of TMNT. Adding 'Nickelodeon' would be fine as well.
  6. Is it necessary to add 'Brobe' in tags? I know it is one of the joke name of the mapper Frobe but it is not widely known so I bet it is better not to add it.

    Combo Colors
  7. The combo colors in Cup and Rain are different from the other difficulties. It is more recommended to unify the combo colors, but I think it is just mistake (probably the difficulties are updated without changing combo colors).

    Length
  8. The Platter ends earlier (2:34) than the other difficulties (2:45). See if it is possible to unify the time length among the difficulties.

    Kiai Time
  9. Similar issue. The Kiai Time usage are not the same among the difficulties. I don't mean it is required to be exactly same, however it feels not appropriate to add Kiai Time like 00:29:387 - in Cup. In fact they can be removed and all difficulties will be having consistent Kiai Time usage.

[ Kirigaya's Cup]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:10:815 (1,1) - Please increase the timeline gap here, at least 2/1 distance, simply a 1/1 gap won't be enough for a beginner to get ready for the upcoming notes. I recommend shortening the spinner to 00:12:244 - OR remove 00:13:315 (1) - . The current one would be too hard for beginners, they may miss the next notes if they were driven away from the spinner, also the BPM is too high so keep in mind about the spinner distance.
  2. 00:35:101 (1,1) - ^. I recommend removing the spinner and map the part with notes. It will be too short to apply a spinner here if you wish to keep at least 2/1 distance.
  3. 00:53:673 (3) - This can be difficult to beginners as the slider velocity is high and the slider slope is too high in gameplay. Consider inclining it a bit more. Actually I don't think changing the SV in beginner difficulties a necessary option, keep in mind that Cup is for beginners, don't try to add gimmicky stuff such as SV adjustments, it will be confusing for beginner players!
  4. 00:56:530 (1,1) - Same as 00:10:815 (1,1) - You may do the same if you did what I suggested.
  5. 01:16:530 (1,2) - I suggest shortening the distance here, it is a little bit large while the two sliders are a bit straight-pointed as well.
  6. 01:35:101 (1,1) - Same as above-mentioned.
  7. 01:57:958 (1,1) - ^
  8. 02:11:530 (2) - Too high in SV and the slider is straight! Please slant it.
  9. 02:17:244 (1,2) - ^
  10. 02:19:744 (1,2) - Maybe you can reduce the distances between the triplets too? It is very easy to miss as beginners usually stand at a point.
  11. 02:21:173 (3) - , 02:28:673 (1,2) - , 02:32:601 (4) - Same.

    This difficulty is fine, the issues are mostly spinner usage and slider velocity problems. In addition, please check your difficulty as there are quite a lot of unused SV changes. Remove or change them back to 1.00x if necessary.

[ 492 Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:03:673 (4,5,1) - I don't think this is a good spot to add dash. It is FC'able without dashing too, so it is recommended to reduce the distance here.
  2. 00:13:494 (6,1) - What about a dash here? It begins pretty well while fitting the audio background.
  3. 00:18:673 (3,1) - If possible, try to add a dash here.
  4. 00:24:744 (4,1) - Add dash? It is the new stanza so maybe a dash would help indicating that.
  5. 00:30:815 (1,2) - This is with dash, which is inconsistent comparing to the previous one 00:25:101 (1,2) - , which has no dash included. Perhaps you want to remove the dash here by reducing its distance.
  6. 00:33:673 (1,2) - The distance here is pretty large, it feels like it needs a dash to go while it is actually FC'able without dashing. Hence it is recommended to reduce such distance to make it clear.
  7. 00:35:101 (3) - Is it necessary to use sliders involving 1/8 ticks? Why not mapping it at white and red ticks? In fact this is a Salad difficulty so it is supposed to have easy patterns and rhythms, mostly not including 1/8 or 1/4 ticks.
  8. 00:36:173 (6,1) - Add a dash?
  9. 00:55:101 (3,4,5,6,7) - The pattern is fine, but the sliders make this part a bit difficult, as the movements seem timed if the players are not dashing. In fact this part is FC'able without dashing, so why not reducing the distances to ensure it is really not needed for dashing? In my opinion this can help removing ambiguous distances. Additionally, I suggest adding dash at 00:56:173 (6,7) -
  10. 00:59:030 (1,1) - Add a dash? It is to indicate the Kiai Time start, where the song is going to be sounding intense than before.
  11. 01:02:244 (1) - Too high in slider velocity! Please slant the slider a bit.
  12. 01:34:387 (1,2,1) - I see what you tried to do here, however it is very strange when there is a slow slider following a stream. While changing the slider to streamy pattern is not an appropriate solution, what about reworking on the stream 01:34:387 (1,2) - into 1/2 sliders, in my opinion it will do well too if you add dashes between the 2 1/2 sliders and also the long slider, so to indicate the gradual increases of the difficulty you want to stress here.
  13. 02:00:458 (1,1) - Add a dash?
  14. 02:11:530 (3,1) - ^
  15. 02:17:958 (2,3,1) - A bit hard since (2,3) is also a jump which is ambiguous about the dash usage. Please reduce the distance between them.
  16. 02:21:172 (4,1,2) - (1,2) is a hard part too since the sliders are way too straight and it gives a feeling to players, that it is a distance requiring precision of timing, where I am recommended not to add them in easier difficulties like Salad and Cup.
  17. 02:22:958 (1,2) - Too high in SV, please reduce!
  18. 02:26:529 (2,3) - I don't recommend using 1/4 sliders here, it is not consistent with the first Kiai Time either. What about mapping at white and red ticks? That would feel much appropriate in my opinion.

[ Frobe's Platter]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:02:958 (3,4,1) - The distances among (3,4,1) is ambiguous, where it feels like they need dashes to pass through. While I think you may want to add dash at (4,1) so what about reducing distance of (3,4) and enlarge the distance at (4,1)?
  2. 00:03:673 (1,2,3) - ^, what about reducing distance of (1,2) while increasing the one at (2,3)?
  3. 00:35:101 (1,2,3) - ^. I don't think the dash at (1,2) is necessary, or actually the whole part doesn't need one since it is a pretty silent part.
  4. 00:53:940 (2,3,1) - Distance of (2,3) is too big and the whole part is ambiguous here, as (3,1) is surely require dashing to FC but (2,3) is not a must. To avoid such problem, what about shortening the distance of (2,3) and keep a dash at (3,1)?
  5. 00:54:654 (2,3,1) - ^
  6. 00:58:315 (2,3,4) - I like how you emphasize (4) by adding a strong HDash here. However the distance of (2,3) is too big, which can be cruel when players miss the HDash, causing them to miss (4) and lose track of the rest. You may have to shorten the distance here, perhaps moving 00:57:780 (1,2) - a bit to the left?
  7. 01:36:083 (4,1) - Add a dash here? It feels less-intense as 01:35:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - don't really need dashes to FC, while parts like 01:34:387 (1,2) - do require.
  8. 01:57:958 (1,1) - A little bit troll here as the spinner tends to end at the right hand side, usually the players will miss because they fall into the spinner trap. Please move the notes closer to middle.
  9. 02:05:101 (1,2,3,1) - Better reduce the distances of 02:05:101 (1,2,3) - so players can be given more time to react on the jump of 02:06:173 (3,1) - , in fact you can reduce the distance of 02:06:173 (3,1) - , it is advisable too.
  10. 02:14:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit hard here due to the wiggling movements and left-right jumping. Please shorten the distances if you want to use such pattern, it can be exhausting for Platter players because of these jumping.
  11. 02:15:815 (1,2) - Shorten the distance here, it is still able to accommodate a dash here while keeping a HDash to the next note by moving 02:16:172 (2) - to x:312.
  12. 02:20:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The same thing.
  13. 02:34:208 (4,1) - What about a HDash here? It feels right to me.
  14. Consider mapping the last part. Check 'General'.

[ 224's Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:01:530 (1,2,1) - Ehh... Don't include side-to-side jumps in a Rain please, especially when there are overdose and deluge fitting to the spread. Patterns like these also exhaust players as they will hold the dash buttons all the time.
  2. 00:06:887 (3,4,5) - Pattern is fine but the distance of (4,5) can be smaller in my opinion, as the HDash draw players away from the next notes, so a smaller distance at (4,5) can help them catching up. Keep in mind that this is a Rain, so it is mostly great to make jumps easier!
  3. 00:10:458 (1,2,1) - The HDash of (1,2) will include the jump at 00:10:637 (2,1) - as well, which is not so recommended. I suggest moving (2) closer to the right so there is no jump at (2,1) and it plays much better from my perspective.
  4. 00:13:494 (4,1) - HDash? (1) is the new start of stanza, it will be much greater if you add so.
  5. 00:17:958 (2,3) - The jump here is way too hard, please reduce it.
  6. 00:18:673 (4,5,1) - Same as 00:01:530 (1,2,1) -
  7. 00:29:030 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^, additionally, this is way too difficult and it feels like an Overdose pattern. Highly recommended to nerf this.
  8. 00:31:887 (4,1,2) - Same as 00:06:887 (3,4,5) - , maybe it is better to change the start, to start with smaller distance then advance to larger distance? To explain more in a detailed way, 00:32:423 (1,2) - is the larger distance while 00:32:780 (3,4) - is the smaller distance. So you can start off by using the smaller distance and the last 2 circles with larger distance.
  9. 00:36:530 (1,2) - The distance between the heads/tails and the reverse circle is too high, it is easy to miss as some players may stand to catch the triplets. You may slant the triplets a bit to make it easier.
  10. 00:42:780 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is a bit surprising to see after sliders like 00:41:887 (4,1) - . Also the jumps here are a bit high so it is more advised to shorten the distances of jumps here, or change the whole pattern to a more suitable one.
  11. 00:44:030 (4,5,6,1,2) - Same as 00:36:530 (1,2) - , while you did this with 3 circles. If you decided to change this one, you may also alter the distances in 00:43:673 (1,2,3) - to the same distances above.
  12. 00:45:815 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:31:887 (4,1,2) -
  13. 00:47:780 (3,4) - Add a HDash? There is a clear cymbal sound at (4).
  14. 00:52:958 (3,4,5,1) - I would say it is more appropriate to add HDash at 00:53:494 (5,1) - instead of 00:52:958 (3,4) - . See if you think the same too.
  15. 00:59:387 (2,3,4) - Timelines like these are really annoying and impeding the rhythm. It is quite strange to see a slider starting at blue ticks and end at blue ticks. Please map this part with 1/2 patterns instead, it is much fitter to the rhythm.
  16. 01:02:244 (1,2,3) - , 01:05:101 (1,2,3) - , etc. (check yourself) - ^
  17. 01:04:387 (1,2) - Not really necessary to do a side-wall jump here. You can actually change the circle pattern of 01:03:494 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - to somewhat easier, the one currently feels like it is done for gimmicky but not for the song. You may rearrange the circles to reduce the HDash power.
  18. 01:07:601 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard pattern, it feels like an Overdose pattern where multiple precise jumps can be found. Please rework this part.
  19. 01:09:030 (3,1) - A bit surprising here since the distance is large while not covering any HDash. Please reduce the distance here.
  20. 01:10:458 (3,4,1) - I think it is better to add HDash at (4,1) instead of (3,4) for emphasizing the correct note.
  21. 01:15:815 (3,4) - Slant the triplets, the distance between is too high.
  22. 01:19:030 (1) - 01:19:744 (4) - ^
  23. 01:21:887 (3,4,5) - This is totally alright, one thing I want to point out is (4,5). It is really easy to miss the tail of (4) in case the player cannot control their dash after catching the HDash at (3,4). Maybe you want to move (5) closer to right?
  24. 01:27:958 (1,2) - HDashes like this are meaningless, you can do it with a smaller distance. Also it is better to avoid side-to-side jumps so reducing the distance here helps a lot.
  25. 01:28:851 (3,4,1) - ^
  26. 01:29:744 (3,4,1) - Difficult here! The jump at (3,4) is too high without any HDashes. While adding HDash here is not appropriate, so it is better to reduce the distance of (3,4).
  27. 01:30:279 (3,4,1) - Same as 01:27:958 (1,2) -
  28. 01:32:959 (1,2,3) - Move (2) closer to (1,3), the gaps among them are too large, it is quite broken showing in the stream.
  29. 01:33:673 (1,2,3) - ^
  30. 02:06:173 (4,1) - Add HDash? You may remove the HDash at 02:07:065 (2,3) - if you did this, otherwise it will be too cramped with HDashes at this point.
  31. 02:14:387 (1,2,3) - Strange part that I have mentioned before.
  32. 02:17:244 (1,2,3) - , 02:28:672 (1,2,3) - , etc. (check yourself) - ^
  33. 02:15:637 (3,4,5) - You may shorten the distances here, it feels too large and too intense with side-to-side jumps. Maybe move (4) a bit to the right?
  34. 02:22:780 (4,1,2) - Why not add HDash at (4,1) instead? It feels delayed when you add HDash at (1,2) while the sound at (1) is loudest. Perhaps you are doing 02:22:958 (1,2,3,4) - as a pattern, but it is still same as 02:14:387 (1,2,3) - so you may rework on it too.
  35. 02:25:905 (1,2) - Strange part too because of (1). What about changing (1) to a note at 02:25:994 - ?
  36. 02:31:173 (1,2,3) - The HDash at (1,2) is not important, as (2) is not sounding prominent to be emphasized. Please remove the HDash at (1,2) and keep only at (2,3).
  37. 02:31:888 (1,2,3) - ^

    In my opinion the Rain still need quite some work.

[ Real Overdose]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:01:887 (2,1) - Add HDash? The sound at (1) is prominent. You may do it at 00:02:779 (2,3) - too if you did it.
  2. 00:09:744 (3,4,5) - Why not adding HDash at (4,5) instead? (5) is the note you need to emphasize if you really want a HDash at this part.
  3. 00:11:708 (5,6,1,2) - Quite meaningless to include side-to-side HDashes. You can still accomplish it by having a shorter distance. Sometimes things like that are exhausting and not interesting for players to play.
  4. 00:13:315 (1,1) - Add HDash?
  5. 00:37:958 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent with 00:36:530 (1,2,3) - , please maintain the consistency between the patterns.
  6. 01:28:494 (4,5) - Distance here is too high, as 01:28:315 (3,4) - swipes players away from the next notes.
  7. 01:36:440 (8,9) - What about a HDash here?
  8. 01:49:030 (3,1) - ^
  9. 02:33:851 (2,3) - , 02:34:208 (2,3) - Please reduce their distances, or just use a slider. The ones now show a big gap, and it is really big. It may cause misses during the stream.
  10. 02:42:958 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Keep consistency with 02:37:244 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - (about the HDash pattern).

    To be frank, this difficulty is a bit hard to mod, what I pointed out are just the ones I find annoying during the testplay. Maybe I will do a recheck on the higher difficulties later.

[ Ignored Masterpiece]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:36:082 (4,5,6) - I think it is better not to include 3 HDashes in a straight line, it would be so timed and also cruel when players fail catching one of them, then the whole thing will be like dominoes falling down. I suggest moving (5) closer to (6) and see if you can remove the HDash of (5,6) and not even including a jump at (5,6).
  2. 00:36:887 (3,4,5) - Gah, this is opposing the flow! Please fix!
  3. 01:07:868 (6,1,2) - This is REALLY timed part, as it involves a back-and-forth HDash movement, which can be easily missed. It is also a cruel part where you can fail if you miss (6,1). Please make this part more easier and tolerating. In addition, 01:07:958 (1,2,3) - is also a hard part because the HDash of (1,2) is going to cover the jump at (2,3) too, which is extremely timed. Please rework.
  4. 01:16:440 (5,1) - HDash?
  5. 01:31:797 (6,7,8,1) - Another timed part as mentioned.
  6. 02:09:208 (6,1,2) - ^
  7. 02:45:101 (1,2,3) - Reduce the distances among the 3 notes, it is so surprising to see in the ending, where players expect the ending would be much easier than the previous parts. The distance here are quite large and it is easy to miss because the HDash at 02:44:922 (2,1) - swipes players away. I think it is a good reason to make it easier, for the people who have FC'ed the previous parts and missed here.

    This difficulty is also hard to mod, it gives me a feeling that the map is placed with streams made for difficulty purpose. Also it is EXTREMELY hard to follow as you keep using different patterns all over the place, try keeping some parts consistent to make it easier to follow. In fact I just pointed out the ones I find annoying. I will take a look of this later if I have some time.

    Anyways I must quote something:

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Bear in mind that CtB difficulties are meant to be fun to play, not a random experimentation with the editor. Make sure your map is fun, even if it's difficult! This comes only with practice. This includes making sure you don't spam 20 hyperdashes in a row - that's not fun, that's exhausting and frustrating.

Good luck!

AFB

I should sleep already, used 4 hours on modding this map...
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