thanks for the modsLasse wrote:
m4m things like we talked about in IRC
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/378196
so many mods already, will be hard to find anything meningfull but I'll give it a tryGeneral
looks fine
here is the bg source: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=52580290
would be nice if you could link it in the description to credit the artist mmmkstárlight
ar ~9.2 maybe? you do so many overlaps here it would be nicer to read that way imo, but 9 should be fine too ar9 is fine imo
00:17:001 (5) - making this straight would make a nicer angle with the sliderbodies and not influence playability I prefer current since it make it looks like drop off flow which kinda fit the song there
00:20:421 (6,7,8) - this angle could be better to play, how about making 00:20:577 (7,8) - a 15° rotated version of 00:20:110 (3,4) - ?
look like this: http://i.imgur.com/t8M5s2V.jpg ya
00:41:716 (5,6) - bit smaller angle might play better here, suggest moving 6 downright http://i.imgur.com/5Co1RFQ.jpg x
00:48:090 (6) - why is the spacing so low compared to the rest of the combo? Don't really get it for this note op
00:52:908 (7,8,9) - straight line here doesnt really play that well imo, how about sth like http://i.imgur.com/xIMZSPd.jpg mmm it plays fine for me , still prefer lining like the current one tho
00:57:727 (1) - have you tried putting a low sv slider until 00:58:271 - with a silenced end here instead? would go really nice with the "noise" and the vocal here I think ==> same for lower diffs afer looking at them I don't like to use silenced sliderend
or maybe make 00:57:727 (1,2,1) - a bigger triangle so they feel more emphasized, but I prefer the firt idea personally :v current just feel alright now imo
01:15:447 (5,2) - could you avoid http://i.imgur.com/mT7mtn8.jpg ? I know it is barelsy noticeable during gameplay but it still is a bit and easily avoidable since that is not a nice overlap. Either space 2 a bit higher to avoid overlap or lower for a nice overlap xd kk try to make it more looks like I intentionally overlap xddd
01:26:794 (1) - how about putting ~20% volume on 01:26:950 - as the loud slideticks dont fit the athmosphere here lol why it sound weird for me when there is no slider tick sound , I think slider tick sound would just help player read the sv here or something like that
01:45:447 (6,1) - the way you suddenly double the spacing really makes this look like 1/1 gap, still okay to read, but changing a bit might be better I nc (1) so I think player can read this easily
02:32:235 (1) - same slider suggestion as 00:57:727 (1) samesa
02:48:400 (4,5) - stack on such high pitched/loud vocals doesnt really work well imo, even if you mainly focus on drum or sth,.. sldier or spaced circles would be nicer dw
03:29:437 (3) - 1/2 slider + 2 circles would play better imo since you end all the sliders before on the same "thing" (there is no real sound on the red tick) ending this one there too would feel better to play and be consistent with what you did before
=> like 03:33:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - is better it's just beginning of this part I don't use something like that to avoid player getting wat feeling on the beginning of calm part
03:39:385 (3,4) - ^ this one is just a bit sound weird for me imo
03:42:494 (1,2) - avoiding that miniscule overlap would look so much nicer lolinsáne
00:30:991 (1,2) - stack like 00:32:545 (2,3,4) - or overlap less would look better want do you mean ? I don't see any overlap
00:48:245 (6,1) - higher spacing into way lower sv plays bad here imo maximum impact xddd , plays fine for me here imo
00:57:727 (1) - same suggestion extra sa
01:26:794 (1) - same slidertick thing as extra sam
01:47:157 (2,3,4) - spacing those more evenly would go better with music and look niver make spacing equal would make flow here 01:47:468 (3,4) - not right imo
02:14:670 (4,5) - same shape? nah xdd
02:22:753 (6,1) - looks so much like 1/1.. it's got nc so I think player can read that easily
02:32:235 (1) - same suggestion extra ame
02:48:245 (3,4) - stack doesnt go well here imo, space them or slider? I just focus a bit on vocal here since I actually did follow vocal here 02:47:779 (1,2) - too , the vocal there just suit the stack more I think
04:35:810 (1,2,3) - bit smaller angle would play better here yahárd
00:10:317 (3,4,5,6,7) - using 1/2 and 1/4 stack and also doing it during the same combo right after each other might be a bit bad to read on hard oo
00:44:825 (2,3) - aligning them in a differen anlge (sliderbodies) would look nicer http://i.imgur.com/fk36zFc.jpg current fit the song more imo
00:52:442 (2,3,4,5) - bit confusing 1/2 - 1/4 again k
03:31:146 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ shouldn't be hard to read for this one imo , it got 1/1 small break tho
04:05:654 (4,5,6) - putting them in a line really takes away some ephasis from those really strong vocals ya
diff looks fine besides the obvious fact that I really dislike the usage of stacked 1/2 and 1/4 so close after each other, especially with 190+ bpm ya same , gonna take note then look through those things laternormál
00:29:592 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You keep the same movement for such a long time, bit boring to play :/ wh I don't think it's boring here
02:57:105 (4,1) - different overlap (or no overlap) would look better imo this overlap just looks good for me
03:44:359 (4,1) - same shape would look much nicer here nah current fit the song more imo
03:49:955 (1) - making the corner a bit clearer would be better for normal I think http://i.imgur.com/RFI0a6l.jpg lol current is fine tho
leásy
00:53:374 (1,2) - could make them a bit more interesting shapes :v can't think any good shape that fit the song here it's calm part so I think better make it looks simple
01:26:794 (3) - bit clearer path in that corner should be better for easy http://i.imgur.com/p6YVIQN.jpg current is fine lol
01:55:395 (1) - so long and then you make a straight slider, so maybe a more interesting shape here too? same like the first one
02:26:483 (2,3) - make the sliderbodies perfectly parallel to each other, would look nicer k w/e
02:44:670 (3,1) - same shape for both would look much better current fit the song more imo
04:07:364 (1) - just remove the red anchor, would look way better imo I don't think so
cant find anything "big" on this diff so I just modded some slidershapes lol LO same
seems pretty nice already, hard to contribute anything
good luck!