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Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2015-12-17T09:23:34+00:00

Metadata, patterns, hitsounds is fine

Qualified

Dellvangel

1,269 posts

Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2015-12-17T09:27:12+00:00

omg, when i see at #announce

~~My first GD got qualified >w<~~

[ A v a l o n ]

1,978 posts

Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-12-17T11:03:31+00:00

Congratulation guys :')

Maxus

Nomination Assessment Team

1,238 posts

Joined May 2014

Maxus 2015-12-17T11:48:01+00:00

Finalllyyyy

Congratulations starbintangand the gd'ers o/

Feerum

osu! Alumni

2,042 posts

Joined August 2014

Feerum 2015-12-17T18:43:36+00:00

Hey nice

Grats all and Grats C_Star :3

sherrysina

540 posts

Joined December 2014

sherrysina 2015-12-18T00:22:13+00:00

GRAAAAAATZ!!!!

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

1,210 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-18T06:24:57+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Metadata, patterns, hitsounds is fine

Qualified

thank you shana-nyan 'w')

Dellvangel wrote:
omg, when i see at #announce

~~My first GD got qualified >w<~~

gratz xD

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Congratulation guys :')

gratz abidin :v

DixonBlackwing wrote:
Finalllyyyy

Congratulations starbintangand the gd'ers o/

hue, trima kasih kuro~

Feerum wrote:
Hey nice

Grats all and Grats C_Star :3

yea gratz baka!

sherrysina wrote:
GRAAAAAATZ!!!!

thank you ~~nutella~~cherrysina sherry~

Starry-

osu! Alumni

1,074 posts

Joined December 2012

Starry- 2015-12-21T14:00:42+00:00

Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Dell's NOVICE]
00:15:453 (15453|1) - How about move this to 1 to match the chord with 00:14:804 (14804|0,14804|3) - (similar finish sound).
00:15:615 (15615|0) - Move to 2 ]
00:16:102 (16102|2) - Move to 4 ] -- These are to rebalance the rest of the pattern.
00:16:264 (16264|3) - Move to 3 ]

00:25:669 - http://puu.sh/m3xuZ/6bde5eb79d.png Something like this might help with pitch relevancy.

01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3,73399|2,73507|1,73615|0,73723|2,73832|3) - This is slightly awkward since
01:13:021 (73021|0,73183|1) - is close together, but 1/2
01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3) - is further apart, but faster at 1/3. This makes it quite hard for new players to differentiate if this is 1/2 or 1/3.
To solve this, you can have a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/m3xBA/7f598f3c76.png or http://puu.sh/m3xDS/bd8e059f59.png .

[Avalon's MEDIUM]
00:06:048 (6048|2,6129|1,6210|0,6291|1,6372|2) - Try out 32321 or 23231 for this stream, I think it fits a lot better.

00:14:318 (14318|2,14399|1,14480|0) - Small nitpick - if you make this 234 it will be a bit more balanced.

00:37:832 (37832|1) - I really don't see any need for the LN here since the last guitar starts a lot earlier (00:37:345 -).
I suggest you delete the LN, and turn 00:37:507 (37507|1,37588|2,37669|3,37750|0) - this into a stream like 2323 or 3232 to match with the drum.

01:17:886 (77886|3,77886|1) - Perhaps switch the LN and the normal note around, since holding 2 and doing a 1/2 jack on 1 (same hand) would be awkward for new players.

[Feru's ADVANCED]
00:05:237 (5237|2) - Move to 1 perhaps since this lowers in pitch.

00:26:156 (26156|0,26156|1,26318|2,26318|1,26480|3,26480|2,26642|0,26642|1) - This feels really cluttered and if it was intended I suggest you try something else. http://puu.sh/m3ya8/bc3db3aeff.png This would work better here, even if it's a lot more simple and easier.

00:52:426 (52426|3,52588|3,52750|3,52913|3) - The 1/2 jacks here make this 00:52:588 (52588|3,52588|0,52669|2,52669|1,52750|0,52750|3) - feel very offputting. Even for a player like me this is awkward to play, so I suggest you try http://puu.sh/m3yjs/85fc95e9a6.png something like this? Something similar to this anyways.

01:19:345 (79345|1) - Remove. This map doesn't have any minijacks in it so this is a really inconsistent style, and I know you're trying to emphasise the finish, but it doesn't fit well at all especially for just an ADVANCED diff.

01:31:183 - For this part I suggest http://puu.sh/m3yqT/09cfdb8f57.png , since having 01:31:832 (91832|1,91832|2) - this chord before the trill is slightly offputting.

[EXTREME]
The intro has inconsistent LN usage. By this I mean, 00:07:345 (7345|2) - 00:07:507 (7507|0) - 00:07:832 (7832|1) - 00:08:156 (8156|2) - etc. these are all mapped to the guitar, whilst 00:06:696 - 00:07:021 - these places also have guitar but aren't LNs. You should consider adding LNs for all sounds like that in the intro. (At parts like 00:10:588 - to 00:11:886 - it's okay to ignore the guitar since the main focus is the heavy drums here.)

00:26:642 (26642|0) - Move to 3 for consistency with the pitch and the previous chords.
00:26:967 (26967|2) - Move to 1 ]
00:27:129 (27129|0) - Move to 3 ] - These are to rebalance.

01:19:345 (79345|3) - Same point as ADVANCED - you should remove this since you don't have any other minijacks in the beatmap. Otherwise you should do it in places like 00:11:886 (11886|0,11886|3) - too.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

[ A v a l o n ]

1,978 posts

Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-12-21T15:09:54+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better. i will send pattern changes on my diff first, before CS make a change owo . . .

[Avalon's MEDIUM]
00:06:048 (6048|2,6129|1,6210|0,6291|1,6372|2) - Try out 32321 or 23231 for this stream, I think it fits a lot better. re-arranged and change to 4312 pattern, i feel more better on that position :3

00:14:318 (14318|2,14399|1,14480|0) - Small nitpick - if you make this 234 it will be a bit more balanced. Okayyy

00:37:832 (37832|1) - I really don't see any need for the LN here since the last guitar starts a lot earlier (00:37:345 -).
I suggest you delete the LN, and turn 00:37:507 (37507|1,37588|2,37669|3,37750|0) - this into a stream like 2323 or 3232 to match with the drum. OK, i delete that abuse LN and i make some re-arrange on that drum parts

01:17:886 (77886|3,77886|1) - Perhaps switch the LN and the normal note around, since holding 2 and doing a 1/2 jack on 1 (same hand) would be awkward for new players. i keep that LN because a very clear long sound is exist on that . . . but, i make rearrange on that jack part, i can sure it plays better now :3
Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thanks Starry for checking

let's bring Neppu to qualified state again owo /

Update

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Feerum

osu! Alumni

2,042 posts

Joined August 2014

Feerum 2015-12-21T15:27:52+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Feru's ADVANCED]
00:05:237 (5237|2) - Move to 1 perhaps since this lowers in pitch. I could but it still has different pitch like the previous and thats what i want to emphasize. Don't really want to jack the Chords here.

00:26:156 (26156|0,26156|1,26318|2,26318|1,26480|3,26480|2,26642|0,26642|1) - This feels really cluttered and if it was intended I suggest you try something else. http://puu.sh/m3ya8/bc3db3aeff.png This would work better here, even if it's a lot more simple and easier. I like this guitar Emphasize. Apply'd

00:52:426 (52426|3,52588|3,52750|3,52913|3) - The 1/2 jacks here make this 00:52:588 (52588|3,52588|0,52669|2,52669|1,52750|0,52750|3) - feel very offputting. Even for a player like me this is awkward to play, so I suggest you try http://puu.sh/m3yjs/85fc95e9a6.png something like this? Something similar to this anyways. I like this. Nice balance for Hand's.. why i didn't saw this.. BlameFeerum2k15

01:19:345 (79345|1) - Remove. This map doesn't have any minijacks in it so this is a really inconsistent style, and I know you're trying to emphasise the finish, but it doesn't fit well at all especially for just an ADVANCED diff. Somehow i know this would be a problem. I didn't liked this too.. but whelp.. BlameFeerum2k15²

01:31:183 - For this part I suggest http://puu.sh/m3yqT/09cfdb8f57.png , since having 01:31:832 (91832|1,91832|2) - this chord before the trill is slightly offputting.Again very nice.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thanks for the Help Starry-

Update: http://puu.sh/m3DxI/2b1b22d370.osu

Starry-

osu! Alumni

1,074 posts

Joined December 2012

Starry- 2015-12-21T17:32:26+00:00

I'm sorry CS I couldn't get back to you in PM ;_;...

My suggestion for the LN guitar inconsistency:
00:06:870 (6870|0,7194|0) - 00:09:464 (9464|2,9788|2) - You can remove these notes to make it like 00:11:897 -.
Then you can add LNs and they will play a lot better.

Example: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3KeC/cde718f9ff.png 00:09:302 - http://puu.sh/m3KhP/d2f7c1e3f7.png
You can take these screenshots further, and rearrange to make them more pitch relevant.
Example for pitch relevancy: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3Ktu/97c5e8ed92.png

Just rearrange them how you like.

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

1,210 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-22T02:56:01+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)
[EXTREME]
The intro has inconsistent LN usage. By this I mean, 00:07:345 (7345|2) - 00:07:507 (7507|0) - 00:07:832 (7832|1) - 00:08:156 (8156|2) - etc. these are all mapped to the guitar, whilst 00:06:696 - 00:07:021 - these places also have guitar but aren't LNs. You should consider adding LNs for all sounds like that in the intro. (At parts like 00:10:588 - to 00:11:886 - it's okay to ignore the guitar since the main focus is the heavy drums here.)

00:26:642 (26642|0) - Move to 3 for consistency with the pitch and the previous chords.
00:26:967 (26967|2) - Move to 1 ]
00:27:129 (27129|0) - Move to 3 ] - These are to rebalance.

01:19:345 (79345|3) - Same point as ADVANCED - you should remove this since you don't have any other minijacks in the beatmap. Otherwise you should do it in places like 00:11:886 (11886|0,11886|3) - too.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Starry- wrote:
I'm sorry CS I couldn't get back to you in PM ;_;...

My suggestion for the LN guitar inconsistency:
00:06:870 (6870|0,7194|0) - 00:09:464 (9464|2,9788|2) - You can remove these notes to make it like 00:11:897 -.
Then you can add LNs and they will play a lot better.

Example: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3KeC/cde718f9ff.png 00:09:302 - http://puu.sh/m3KhP/d2f7c1e3f7.png
You can take these screenshots further, and rearrange to make them more pitch relevant.
Example for pitch relevancy: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3Ktu/97c5e8ed92.png

Just rearrange them how you like.

fixed all~ thanks starru~

Dellvangel

1,269 posts

Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2015-12-22T03:40:25+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Dell's NOVICE]
00:15:453 (15453|1) - How about move this to 1 to match the chord with 00:14:804 (14804|0,14804|3) - (similar finish sound).
00:15:615 (15615|0) - Move to 2 ]
00:16:102 (16102|2) - Move to 4 ] -- These are to rebalance the rest of the pattern.
00:16:264 (16264|3) - Move to 3 ] i'll keep this one for note variation.

00:25:669 - http://puu.sh/m3xuZ/6bde5eb79d.png Something like this might help with pitch relevancy. changed to other pattern.

01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3,73399|2,73507|1,73615|0,73723|2,73832|3) - This is slightly awkward since
01:13:021 (73021|0,73183|1) - is close together, but 1/2
01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3) - is further apart, but faster at 1/3. This makes it quite hard for new players to differentiate if this is 1/2 or 1/3.
To solve this, you can have a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/m3xBA/7f598f3c76.png or http://puu.sh/m3xDS/bd8e059f59.png . i like the second one, applied >w<

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thank you so much Starry >w<b

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Tags:choujigen shinjigen game opening compile heart Dellvangel [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Feerum
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Critical_Star

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Critical_Star 2015-12-22T08:29:23+00:00

updated all diff~

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-12-22T18:30:04+00:00

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Akasha-

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Akasha- 2015-12-23T12:28:33+00:00

Seems Starry- pointed out which this map needed to be improves, thank you
and so on, i rechecked, seem the problems goes away, source fixed, overall quality now is better

Requalified

Recongratulations once again

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Critical_Star 2015-12-23T12:44:11+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Seems Starry- pointed out which this map needed to be improves, thank you
and so on, i rechecked, seem the problems goes away, source fixed, overall quality now is better

Requalified

Recongratulations once again

Thank you~ <3