nao - Soutaisei VISION [OsuMania] · forum

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Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-12-06T15:32:36+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
[Avalon's MEDIUM]
00:03:777 (3777|3) - should be W
00:04:264 (4264|1) -
00:07:345 (7345|2,7345|0,7507|1,7669|2) - kinda weird and hard to catch this well, how about move 00:07:345 (7345|2) - to 4?
it's like this: 00:09:940 (9940|0) - re-arranged, oh yeah :v
00:11:886 (11886|2) - add F
00:07:021 (7021|3) - remove C
00:08:318 (8318|0) - W
00:08:967 (8967|3) - W
00:09:615 (9615|1) - remove C
00:10:913 (10913|0) - W
00:11:561 (11561|3) - W
00:12:210 (12210|0) - remove C
00:13:507 (13507|3,14156|3) - should be W
00:14:804 (14804|2) - add F
00:16:588 (16588|3) - C
00:17:075 (17075|3) - remove W
00:29:075 (29075|1) - remove C
00:32:642 (32642|2,32967|1) - remove hitsound
00:34:913 (34913|1,34913|0) - pitch is going up, how about move this to the right 1 column? well, this sound is more fit to play with left hand imo
00:37:021 (37021|0) - random F, change to C
00:45:615 (45615|2) - C
00:51:940 (51940|0) - C
00:52:913 (52913|1) - C
01:00:210 (60210|0) - W
01:27:453 (87453|0) - remove C
01:06:696 (66696|2) - remove C
01:13:723 (73723|0) - missing C
01:15:129 (75129|2) - missing C
01:17:723 (77723|0,77886|1) - missing C
01:21:129 (81129|2) - C
01:30:048 (90048|2) - remove C
01:30:859 (90859|0) - C

I will trust CS to take your HS check :v (for keep consistency accross all diff too)

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osu file format v14

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Title:Soutaisei VISION
TitleUnicode:相対性VISION
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:Critical_Star
Version:Avalon's MEDIUM
Source:新次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ VⅡ
Tags:choujigen shinjigen game opening compile heart Dellvangel [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Feerum
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Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-06T16:41:55+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
naoooooooo yooooooooo

mania check

soft-hitfinish.wav is >5ms delayed: here is the fix: http://puu.sh/lLp11/68aec72005.wav fixed

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C: clap
W: whistle
F: finish

[EXTREME]
00:07:021 (7021|1) - remove C
00:08:318 (8318|1,8967|3) - W
00:09:615 (9615|0) - remove C
00:10:913 (10913|1,11561|3) - W
00:11:886 (11886|0) - F
00:12:210 (12210|3) - remove C
00:13:507 (13507|2,14156|3) - W
00:16:183 (16183|2,16588|2) - C
00:17:075 (17075|3) - remove W
00:25:669 (25669|0,25669|1) - move to [34] ? would be more nice yes
00:37:021 (37021|2) - random F
00:45:615 (45615|2) - C
00:51:940 (51940|2) - C
00:52:913 (52913|1) - C
01:00:615 (60615|0,60940|1) - C
01:01:102 (61102|3) - should be C
01:06:696 (66696|3) - remove C
01:10:102 (70102|3) - W
01:11:399 (71399|2,71480|1) - C
01:13:183 (73183|1,73183|0,73291|1,73291|2,73399|3,73399|2,73507|0,73507|1,73615|1,73615|2,73723|2,73723|3,73832|1,73832|0,73994|0,73994|3,73994|2) - pitch is going down, how about Ctrl + H sure
01:13:723 (73723|2) - C
01:17:886 (77886|2) - W
01:21:129 (81129|1) - C
01:27:129 (87129|1) - F
01:30:048 (90048|0) - remove C
01:32:642 (92642|1) - F
01:38:318 - in here do jack would be more nice, sound is same too: http://puu.sh/lLrff/b4b2b1c242.jpg nice rearranged

hitsound is very mess, please fix them carefully
the map itself is already good, only hitsound is the main reason
good luck, call me after you done

fixed all hs for all diff, ~~not sure why can't submit now BSS error~~ updated

Last edited by Critical_Star 2015-12-06T16:57:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Feerum

osu! Alumni

2,042 posts

Joined August 2014

Feerum 2015-12-06T16:55:02+00:00

CS fixed the Hitsounds in my Diff, and i fix the two things you mention~

So yeah, mine is fixed :3

Dellvangel

1,269 posts

Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2015-12-07T00:02:53+00:00

Star-nyan already fixed the HS at my diff, so i only reply to the pattern suggestions >w<

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
naoooooooo yooooooooo

mania check

soft-hitfinish.wav is >5ms delayed: here is the fix: http://puu.sh/lLp11/68aec72005.wav

1234

C: clap
W: whistle
F: finish

[Dell's NOVICE]
hmm ... how about move this to 00:02:805 (2805|3) - 2nd? 00:02:805 (2805|1,2805|0,3291|1,3291|2,3777|2,3777|3) - hmm, keep for hand balance.
00:07:021 (7021|1) - remove C
00:08:318 (8318|3,8967|2) - should be W
00:09:615 (9615|2) - remove C
00:10:913 (10913|0,11561|0) - should be W
00:11:886 (11886|1) - F
00:12:210 (12210|2) - remove C
00:13:507 (13507|3,14156|1) - W
00:10:588 (10588|1,10588|2) - i don't know why you add 2 notes on here, it's weird because i don't hear any strong beat/sound in here, and ofc, it's same as some kind like 00:09:291 - re-arranged.
00:14:642 - add a note on 2nd with C will be more better keep, i can't hear anything here.
00:16:264 (16264|3,16426|1,16588|2) - all should be C
00:27:453 (27453|0) - remove W
00:29:075 (29075|0) - remove C
00:35:075 (35075|2) - move this to 4, make a whistle sound jack in here would be good keep, i think the current pattern is better with the flow.
00:37:021 (37021|2) - W
00:44:318 (44318|0) - C
00:45:615 (45615|3) - C
00:51:940 (51940|0) - C
01:03:615 (63615|0) - add F
01:06:696 (66696|1) - remove C
01:04:750 (64750|1) - move to 1, for balance i know what you mean, but i think the current pattern already balance.
01:07:345 (67345|2) - move to 4 ^
01:08:642 - hmm, maybe try this: http://puu.sh/lLptd/e9c254c4c6.jpg i cant hear anything at 01:09:129 - well, since this is only novice diff i'll not add note here to make it simple, also the jack at col 2 and 4 like on your suggestion, hmm i think current pattern is better with the flow.
01:27:453 (87453|0) - remove C
01:29:723 (89723|3,89723|2) - remove a note, same reason i've mentioned before re-arranged.
01:30:048 (90048|0) - remove C
01:31:994 (91994|1) - should be W
01:32:318 (92318|0) - F
and oops ... i found a minor problems, it's make my osu! crashed for 3 times before i found this one
Open your .osu in notepad and in the end: it has a code:
320,192,97021,1,2,0:0:0:0:j
this one make error while checking map with "Show Sample Name"
i suggest you to remove: the "j" word, it's the main problem, it's also unrankable issues too

okay continue, 01:35:561 (95561|2) - remove C
01:36:210 (96210|0) - remove W
01:13:669 - no 1/2 on here re-arranged, changed to 1/3 beat like other diff.

hitsound is very mess, please fix them carefully
the map itself is already good, only hitsound is the main reason
good luck, call me after you done

Thank you for the mod KK! >w<

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Soutaisei VISION.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62480
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Soutaisei VISION
TitleUnicode:相対性VISION
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:Critical_Star
Version:Dell's NOVICE
Source:新次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ VⅡ
Tags:choujigen shinjigen game opening compile heart Dellvangel [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Feerum
BeatmapID:794138
BeatmapSetID:361016

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"neppu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Note: May be you should check the HS around this part 01:13:021 - before update this to BSS because i changed the snap note, star-nyan~

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-07T06:16:46+00:00

do some irc check with Dell, and rechecked all diff HS, updated all diff

Akasha-

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2013

Akasha- 2015-12-09T11:28:26+00:00

hitsound finally fixed, no snap conflict, all diffs good and feel smoothly

Bubbled

Congratulations ~ Good luck in qualification

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-09T12:31:16+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
hitsound finally fixed, no snap conflict, all diffs good and feel smoothly

Bubbled

Congratulations ~ Good luck in qualification

Thanks KK~

Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2015-12-17T09:23:34+00:00

Metadata, patterns, hitsounds is fine

Qualified

Dellvangel

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Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2015-12-17T09:27:12+00:00

omg, when i see at #announce

~~My first GD got qualified >w<~~

[ A v a l o n ]

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Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-12-17T11:03:31+00:00

Congratulation guys :')

Maxus

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined May 2014

Maxus 2015-12-17T11:48:01+00:00

Finalllyyyy

Congratulations starbintangand the gd'ers o/

Feerum

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Feerum 2015-12-17T18:43:36+00:00

Hey nice

Grats all and Grats C_Star :3

sherrysina

540 posts

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sherrysina 2015-12-18T00:22:13+00:00

GRAAAAAATZ!!!!

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-18T06:24:57+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Metadata, patterns, hitsounds is fine

Qualified

thank you shana-nyan 'w')

Dellvangel wrote:
omg, when i see at #announce

~~My first GD got qualified >w<~~

gratz xD

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Congratulation guys :')

gratz abidin :v

DixonBlackwing wrote:
Finalllyyyy

Congratulations starbintangand the gd'ers o/

hue, trima kasih kuro~

Feerum wrote:
Hey nice

Grats all and Grats C_Star :3

yea gratz baka!

sherrysina wrote:
GRAAAAAATZ!!!!

thank you ~~nutella~~cherrysina sherry~

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-12-21T14:00:42+00:00

Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Dell's NOVICE]
00:15:453 (15453|1) - How about move this to 1 to match the chord with 00:14:804 (14804|0,14804|3) - (similar finish sound).
00:15:615 (15615|0) - Move to 2 ]
00:16:102 (16102|2) - Move to 4 ] -- These are to rebalance the rest of the pattern.
00:16:264 (16264|3) - Move to 3 ]

00:25:669 - http://puu.sh/m3xuZ/6bde5eb79d.png Something like this might help with pitch relevancy.

01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3,73399|2,73507|1,73615|0,73723|2,73832|3) - This is slightly awkward since
01:13:021 (73021|0,73183|1) - is close together, but 1/2
01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3) - is further apart, but faster at 1/3. This makes it quite hard for new players to differentiate if this is 1/2 or 1/3.
To solve this, you can have a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/m3xBA/7f598f3c76.png or http://puu.sh/m3xDS/bd8e059f59.png .

[Avalon's MEDIUM]
00:06:048 (6048|2,6129|1,6210|0,6291|1,6372|2) - Try out 32321 or 23231 for this stream, I think it fits a lot better.

00:14:318 (14318|2,14399|1,14480|0) - Small nitpick - if you make this 234 it will be a bit more balanced.

00:37:832 (37832|1) - I really don't see any need for the LN here since the last guitar starts a lot earlier (00:37:345 -).
I suggest you delete the LN, and turn 00:37:507 (37507|1,37588|2,37669|3,37750|0) - this into a stream like 2323 or 3232 to match with the drum.

01:17:886 (77886|3,77886|1) - Perhaps switch the LN and the normal note around, since holding 2 and doing a 1/2 jack on 1 (same hand) would be awkward for new players.

[Feru's ADVANCED]
00:05:237 (5237|2) - Move to 1 perhaps since this lowers in pitch.

00:26:156 (26156|0,26156|1,26318|2,26318|1,26480|3,26480|2,26642|0,26642|1) - This feels really cluttered and if it was intended I suggest you try something else. http://puu.sh/m3ya8/bc3db3aeff.png This would work better here, even if it's a lot more simple and easier.

00:52:426 (52426|3,52588|3,52750|3,52913|3) - The 1/2 jacks here make this 00:52:588 (52588|3,52588|0,52669|2,52669|1,52750|0,52750|3) - feel very offputting. Even for a player like me this is awkward to play, so I suggest you try http://puu.sh/m3yjs/85fc95e9a6.png something like this? Something similar to this anyways.

01:19:345 (79345|1) - Remove. This map doesn't have any minijacks in it so this is a really inconsistent style, and I know you're trying to emphasise the finish, but it doesn't fit well at all especially for just an ADVANCED diff.

01:31:183 - For this part I suggest http://puu.sh/m3yqT/09cfdb8f57.png , since having 01:31:832 (91832|1,91832|2) - this chord before the trill is slightly offputting.

[EXTREME]
The intro has inconsistent LN usage. By this I mean, 00:07:345 (7345|2) - 00:07:507 (7507|0) - 00:07:832 (7832|1) - 00:08:156 (8156|2) - etc. these are all mapped to the guitar, whilst 00:06:696 - 00:07:021 - these places also have guitar but aren't LNs. You should consider adding LNs for all sounds like that in the intro. (At parts like 00:10:588 - to 00:11:886 - it's okay to ignore the guitar since the main focus is the heavy drums here.)

00:26:642 (26642|0) - Move to 3 for consistency with the pitch and the previous chords.
00:26:967 (26967|2) - Move to 1 ]
00:27:129 (27129|0) - Move to 3 ] - These are to rebalance.

01:19:345 (79345|3) - Same point as ADVANCED - you should remove this since you don't have any other minijacks in the beatmap. Otherwise you should do it in places like 00:11:886 (11886|0,11886|3) - too.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

[ A v a l o n ]

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[ A v a l o n ] 2015-12-21T15:09:54+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better. i will send pattern changes on my diff first, before CS make a change owo . . .

[Avalon's MEDIUM]
00:06:048 (6048|2,6129|1,6210|0,6291|1,6372|2) - Try out 32321 or 23231 for this stream, I think it fits a lot better. re-arranged and change to 4312 pattern, i feel more better on that position :3

00:14:318 (14318|2,14399|1,14480|0) - Small nitpick - if you make this 234 it will be a bit more balanced. Okayyy

00:37:832 (37832|1) - I really don't see any need for the LN here since the last guitar starts a lot earlier (00:37:345 -).
I suggest you delete the LN, and turn 00:37:507 (37507|1,37588|2,37669|3,37750|0) - this into a stream like 2323 or 3232 to match with the drum. OK, i delete that abuse LN and i make some re-arrange on that drum parts

01:17:886 (77886|3,77886|1) - Perhaps switch the LN and the normal note around, since holding 2 and doing a 1/2 jack on 1 (same hand) would be awkward for new players. i keep that LN because a very clear long sound is exist on that . . . but, i make rearrange on that jack part, i can sure it plays better now :3
Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thanks Starry for checking

let's bring Neppu to qualified state again owo /

Update

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Creator:Critical_Star
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Tags:choujigen shinjigen game opening compile heart Dellvangel [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Feerum
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192,192,11399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,11804,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,15453,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,26642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Feerum

osu! Alumni

2,042 posts

Joined August 2014

Feerum 2015-12-21T15:27:52+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Feru's ADVANCED]
00:05:237 (5237|2) - Move to 1 perhaps since this lowers in pitch. I could but it still has different pitch like the previous and thats what i want to emphasize. Don't really want to jack the Chords here.

00:26:156 (26156|0,26156|1,26318|2,26318|1,26480|3,26480|2,26642|0,26642|1) - This feels really cluttered and if it was intended I suggest you try something else. http://puu.sh/m3ya8/bc3db3aeff.png This would work better here, even if it's a lot more simple and easier. I like this guitar Emphasize. Apply'd

00:52:426 (52426|3,52588|3,52750|3,52913|3) - The 1/2 jacks here make this 00:52:588 (52588|3,52588|0,52669|2,52669|1,52750|0,52750|3) - feel very offputting. Even for a player like me this is awkward to play, so I suggest you try http://puu.sh/m3yjs/85fc95e9a6.png something like this? Something similar to this anyways. I like this. Nice balance for Hand's.. why i didn't saw this.. BlameFeerum2k15

01:19:345 (79345|1) - Remove. This map doesn't have any minijacks in it so this is a really inconsistent style, and I know you're trying to emphasise the finish, but it doesn't fit well at all especially for just an ADVANCED diff. Somehow i know this would be a problem. I didn't liked this too.. but whelp.. BlameFeerum2k15²

01:31:183 - For this part I suggest http://puu.sh/m3yqT/09cfdb8f57.png , since having 01:31:832 (91832|1,91832|2) - this chord before the trill is slightly offputting.Again very nice.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thanks for the Help Starry-

Update: http://puu.sh/m3DxI/2b1b22d370.osu

Starry-

osu! Alumni

1,074 posts

Joined December 2012

Starry- 2015-12-21T17:32:26+00:00

I'm sorry CS I couldn't get back to you in PM ;_;...

My suggestion for the LN guitar inconsistency:
00:06:870 (6870|0,7194|0) - 00:09:464 (9464|2,9788|2) - You can remove these notes to make it like 00:11:897 -.
Then you can add LNs and they will play a lot better.

Example: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3KeC/cde718f9ff.png 00:09:302 - http://puu.sh/m3KhP/d2f7c1e3f7.png
You can take these screenshots further, and rearrange to make them more pitch relevant.
Example for pitch relevancy: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3Ktu/97c5e8ed92.png

Just rearrange them how you like.

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

1,210 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Critical_Star 2015-12-22T02:56:01+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)
[EXTREME]
The intro has inconsistent LN usage. By this I mean, 00:07:345 (7345|2) - 00:07:507 (7507|0) - 00:07:832 (7832|1) - 00:08:156 (8156|2) - etc. these are all mapped to the guitar, whilst 00:06:696 - 00:07:021 - these places also have guitar but aren't LNs. You should consider adding LNs for all sounds like that in the intro. (At parts like 00:10:588 - to 00:11:886 - it's okay to ignore the guitar since the main focus is the heavy drums here.)

00:26:642 (26642|0) - Move to 3 for consistency with the pitch and the previous chords.
00:26:967 (26967|2) - Move to 1 ]
00:27:129 (27129|0) - Move to 3 ] - These are to rebalance.

01:19:345 (79345|3) - Same point as ADVANCED - you should remove this since you don't have any other minijacks in the beatmap. Otherwise you should do it in places like 00:11:886 (11886|0,11886|3) - too.

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Starry- wrote:
I'm sorry CS I couldn't get back to you in PM ;_;...

My suggestion for the LN guitar inconsistency:
00:06:870 (6870|0,7194|0) - 00:09:464 (9464|2,9788|2) - You can remove these notes to make it like 00:11:897 -.
Then you can add LNs and they will play a lot better.

Example: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3KeC/cde718f9ff.png 00:09:302 - http://puu.sh/m3KhP/d2f7c1e3f7.png
You can take these screenshots further, and rearrange to make them more pitch relevant.
Example for pitch relevancy: 00:06:707 - http://puu.sh/m3Ktu/97c5e8ed92.png

Just rearrange them how you like.

fixed all~ thanks starru~

Dellvangel

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Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2015-12-22T03:40:25+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hi Critical_Star! There is a few issues with this mapset which prevent it from being ranked so I have disqualified it for the time being.

The Source field contains an unnecessary space. "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌ VⅡ" -> "新次元ゲイムネプテューヌVⅡ" (before VⅡ). This is according to the official website and pretty much everywhere else.

The offset is also a bit too early. Using an offset of around 2816 will be a lot better.

Here's a few suggestions which I advise you consider before requalifying: (1234)

[Dell's NOVICE]
00:15:453 (15453|1) - How about move this to 1 to match the chord with 00:14:804 (14804|0,14804|3) - (similar finish sound).
00:15:615 (15615|0) - Move to 2 ]
00:16:102 (16102|2) - Move to 4 ] -- These are to rebalance the rest of the pattern.
00:16:264 (16264|3) - Move to 3 ] i'll keep this one for note variation.

00:25:669 - http://puu.sh/m3xuZ/6bde5eb79d.png Something like this might help with pitch relevancy. changed to other pattern.

01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3,73399|2,73507|1,73615|0,73723|2,73832|3) - This is slightly awkward since
01:13:021 (73021|0,73183|1) - is close together, but 1/2
01:13:183 (73183|1,73291|3) - is further apart, but faster at 1/3. This makes it quite hard for new players to differentiate if this is 1/2 or 1/3.
To solve this, you can have a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/m3xBA/7f598f3c76.png or http://puu.sh/m3xDS/bd8e059f59.png . i like the second one, applied >w<

Call me back when you've applied these. Good luck!

Thank you so much Starry >w<b

Update

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Tags:choujigen shinjigen game opening compile heart Dellvangel [_A_v_a_l_o_n_] Feerum
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Critical_Star

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Critical_Star 2015-12-22T08:29:23+00:00

updated all diff~

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-12-22T18:30:04+00:00

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Akasha-

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Akasha- 2015-12-23T12:28:33+00:00

Seems Starry- pointed out which this map needed to be improves, thank you
and so on, i rechecked, seem the problems goes away, source fixed, overall quality now is better

Requalified

Recongratulations once again

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Critical_Star 2015-12-23T12:44:11+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Seems Starry- pointed out which this map needed to be improves, thank you
and so on, i rechecked, seem the problems goes away, source fixed, overall quality now is better

Requalified

Recongratulations once again

Thank you~ <3