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Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania]

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Dellvangel

Feerum wrote:

Thank you both for the Mod >w< i'm really happy about these and i try to reply them as soon as possible.. maybe i just have to kick my Computer few times and he will work again..
lol, kick it then :v
when are you coming back to this game? or may be i should ask about your pc, not when are you coming back owo
juankristal
Hi Feerum ! :D

Creeppy BG
00:27:373 - Add double and 00:27:583 (27583|2) - Double and 00:27:898 - double? It might work
01:25:066 (85066|1,85066|3) - Why double?
01:26:744 (86744|1,86744|0) - ^ etc (or maybe just add claps for most of this doubls lolol)
If you keep the doubles, move 01:40:171 (100171|2) - to 1 maybe?
01:49:192 - In this section you map the doubles in drums and claps but you didnt do this in the previous one, yeah, its a more clappy sound but, who know, just poiint it out because ye. You map the bass drum 01:54:646 (114646|1,114646|2) - like that
Imo, this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3768235) feels better because you are changing the way you press the notes in the withe tick (you did it in the red one).
Its like this 02:14:786 (134786|3,134839|2) - is going the samee way as the previous pattern but it changes the way the pattern plays, so I think its better to change it all in the same spot (the way thee pattern plays and thee way the pattern went)
02:32:408 - I am not convinced with this jump sections... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3768253 Something like this maybe?
02:58:422 (178422|1) - Doubl? This is an example, you have more spot when this happends.
03:04:087 (184087|0,184087|1) - Move 1 to right maybe? It might be better for balance
03:16:884 - Same thing as beeforee in burst.
04:32:408 - ^
Same for the last burst
05:05:136 (305136|0) - Whooooooooooooooooops !


Good luck Feerum ! :D:D Hope to seee this one ranked soon
Topic Starter
Feerum
Oh my gawd so many mods aahhhh xD

I thanks Juan! I reply as soon as possible.. :D
-SoraGami-
lol too many mods to reply xD
FrenzyLi
Quick mod: 05:05:136 (305136|0) - Slider should end at 05:05:346. Possibly a mistake.
Awesome map flow. It happens to have many interesting and challenging patterns from higher diff beatmaps that have significantly higher BPM.
If you desire one, I'll post a mod for this map in a few days.
Topic Starter
Feerum
Let's get this party started!


Critical_Star wrote:

Hihi Feru nyan~
mod requested~
column 1 2 3 4
alright, since i have some time before my examination so i would like to mod your map first xD
hmm, generally everything was fine!
once again,a very nice halozy map :3
okay below here is just some suggestion, feel free to reject it!!

Thousand Color? are u sure there is 1000 color? maybe not!! xD //Lol xD
It seems that this map shows some complex color (multicolored)
and yet is seems to be tainted by evil lol what i am saying haha //Hahaha
okay here is the mod xD


Faded kaleidoscopic
00:00:940 - actually u can add another LN here end 00:01:360 - hmm, there is another long sound there :P It's only one sound for me. It just get louder :c so no.
00:15:940 - hey u miss this sound :v neppu~
00:17:618 - hmm, is all these on purpose to miss it? :/ but highly recommend you to add it :3
00:19:297 - 00:20:975 - 00:22:653 - 00:24:332 - 00:26:010 - ok neppu neppu :v For me these Sounds are just echos. I mapped here the really audible Music so i think i don't need the Echos here :x
00:28:213 - till 00:51:709 - hmm, this is good but how about follow those loud kick by adding double? like at 00:28:632 - 00:29:471 - 00:30:311 - 00:31:150 - ? it could be fun :3 Yes to this all i map the Claps with double.
01:09:646 - ah alright! okay.... neppu~ okay if u accept to add all these then u might wanna check other part along the way too! xD No Change..
01:47:094 - hmm, how about this? http://puu.sh/kuIVM/087706d74d.png since this is a low bpm song so it wont be hard to press it!! will be nice if there is some various burst section :3 I like!
03:04:192 - there should be a strong sound here, hmm how about this? http://puu.sh/kuL5S/730231d8d8.png xD Accepted
03:24:436 (204436|2,205485|1) - hmm actually here the LN sound should be like http://puu.sh/kuJX1/73982a640a.png just optional if u like to express those sound better :3 I like mine more :c
03:51:709 - hmm, i can hear another long sound here maybe like http://puu.sh/kuLdT/df7d8abd73.png ? it could be fun :s I extend the short LN until here
04:05:450 (245450|2,245660|2) - i think these note have a lower pitch than 04:04:716 (244716|2,244926|2,245136|2) - so they should be in different column :v Actually its the same pitch, the music gets just a bit.. how should i say.. deeper at this point.
04:33:248 - here should be another note at 2, well is for crash sound :v i think it won't be so hard to hit it Accepted
05:17:094 (317094|2) - move to 1? No, would have a 3 Jack on 1 then :x
05:30:311 - finishing hit make it triple note? Accepted
04:36:604 - till 05:01:779 - okay this is just my suggestion and it may crush your style here :s. how about emphysize those loud sound like 04:37:024 - 04:37:863 - 04:38:702 - and so on with triple note? i think those sound should be okay to triple and also it won't be that hard to hit it with low bpm :3 No thanks :c i tried this time not to overuse 3-Chords.
didn"t expect this so early? huehehehe
alright hope these mod could help you!
Good Luck for rank!!
shooting lucky star des~ *star*
meow nyan~
Thank you Moe_Star!

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi :)

|0|1|2|3|

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[Thousand Colors]00:29:471 - Add a note at 2
00:40:380 - Add a note at 3
03:04:087 (184087|1) - Move this :arrow: 2
03:04:192 - Add a note
03:46:884 (226884|1) - Move this :arrow: 2
05:16:779 (316779|3) - Delete this

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I Make it short. Most of them Accepted but i don't delete the last Note. Thanks for your Mod!

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, random mod here >w<

1|2|3|4
[Thousand Colors]
* 03:56:115 (236115|1) - move to 3 for balance, also different sound with 03:55:695 (235695|1) - . Accepted
* 04:22:234 (262234|2) - move to 2? different sound with 04:21:919 (261919|2) - . Accepted
* 05:17:094 (317094|2) - move to 1 for easier play, like 05:03:667 (303667|3,303877|2) - . Accepted

aaa, i really wait this map ranked >w<b
Thanks for the Mod :3

juankristal wrote:

Hi Feerum ! :D

Creeppy BG
00:27:373 - Add double and 00:27:583 (27583|2) - Double and 00:27:898 - double? It might work I don't really like these :(
01:25:066 (85066|1,85066|3) - Why double?
01:26:744 (86744|1,86744|0) - ^ etc (or maybe just add claps for most of this doubls lolol)
If you keep the doubles, move 01:40:171 (100171|2) - to 1 maybe? I keep my doubles for the Music and accept this one.
01:49:192 - In this section you map the doubles in drums and claps but you didnt do this in the previous one, yeah, its a more clappy sound but, who know, just poiint it out because ye. You map the bass drum 01:54:646 (114646|1,114646|2) - like that
Imo, this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3768235) feels better because you are changing the way you press the notes in the withe tick (you did it in the red one). I mapped it with a Difficult Build Up. Like lot of my Maps. So i keep mine :3
Its like this 02:14:786 (134786|3,134839|2) - is going the samee way as the previous pattern but it changes the way the pattern plays, so I think its better to change it all in the same spot (the way thee pattern plays and thee way the pattern went) I change some pattern
02:32:408 - I am not convinced with this jump sections... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3768253 Something like this maybe? You'r screen don't load so no change.
02:58:422 (178422|1) - Doubl? This is an example, you have more spot when this happends. Oh nice catch.
03:04:087 (184087|0,184087|1) - Move 1 to right maybe? It might be better for balance //Changed with previous Mod
03:16:884 - Same thing as beeforee in burst.
04:32:408 - ^
Same for the last burst Both changed!
05:05:136 (305136|0) - Whooooooooooooooooops ! Shame on me. Nice thanks xd
Thanks for the Mod Juan <3

FrenzyLi wrote:

Quick mod: 05:05:136 (305136|0) - Slider should end at 05:05:346. Possibly a mistake.
Awesome map flow. It happens to have many interesting and challenging patterns from higher diff beatmaps that have significantly higher BPM.
If you desire one, I'll post a mod for this map in a few days.
A Modder already show me this but thank you :3
juankristal
CRAP, I did format my pc so I dont have the map changed so I can show you the picture of what I wanted to suggest to you orz...

Anyway, good luck ! :D

EDIT: It was something like this if I remember correctly, orz 02:26:325 - http://puu.sh/kFiGU/eed8151db7.png
Topic Starter
Feerum
Okay i check this Tomorrow, thanks for post it again ^-^

Hey i like dis. Really good. Thanks Juan!
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi Feerum . . this is sparta mod mod mod
since all of general things is clear . . . so lets go to the pattern

Click

  • [Thousand Colors]
  1. 00:23:807 (23807|2,23912|1,24017|0,24017|2,24122|3,24227|1) - i suggest to change this pattern, it is repetitive with 00:22:129 - i think that section is have different sound flow or tempo maybe
  2. 00:27:373 - since the kick sound is very clear, and this is only have 1 diff . . . so i suggest to map that sound, sad if you miss that . . . maybe i suggest like this http://puu.sh/kIwLR/8fbd7d7e71.jpg
  3. 01:08:283 (68283|1,68387|2) - i suggest to put 2 note for this last kick sound in this section, for make a difference between this sound 01:08:178 (68178|2) - the cymbal in this part is also very low :3 http://puu.sh/kIwYD/831e5b6b7f.jpg
  4. 01:22:758 - & 01:29:471 - you need to add one more note on that, for represent the kick sound bcuz it's different with this hat sound 01:22:129 (82129|2) - like you do in 01:37:024 - 01:38:702 - etc (even it's have LN, but it still count as 2 note)
  5. 01:36:185 - & 01:42:898 - same reason as above ^
  6. 01:47:933 (107933|2,107985|3,108038|0,108090|1,108353|2,108405|3,108457|0,108510|1) - this burst part is kinda hard and kill accuracy . . . hue hue
    maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/kIxgg/b48281d42e.jpg well, it's more fit with "kick break sound" in this part imo
  7. 02:01:045 (121045|3) - snap to 02:01:150 - it's more fit with vocal . . . cuz actually that main vocal is start here 02:00:940 -
  8. 02:15:835 - 02:17:513 - 02:19:192 - 02:20:870 - i suggest to give this sound 1 note each . . . idk but i feel missing "something" here if you just follow main kick sound
  9. 02:23:283 (143283|2) - delete this note ? . . . well, it's not fit with previous pattern that you following same sound 02:22:548 (142548|1,142653|2,142758|1,142968|2,143073|1,143178|3) -
  10. 02:24:122 (144122|1,144332|3) - delete this note ? actually it's not same sound like this synth sound 02:24:541 (144541|0,144646|3,144751|1) -
  11. 02:29:891 (149891|2) - only 1 note for kick sound ? well i think you've following vocal in this part maybe . . but i suggest to keep consistent with main synth sound, it's more better imo (because this synth to vocal transition is not smooth )
  12. 02:42:898 - same reason as above ^
  13. 02:51:709 - add 1 note for kick sound . . . like you do in this part 02:58:422 - good for make a difference with this hat sound 02:51:080 -
  14. 03:05:136 - & 03:11:849 - same reason as above ^
  15. 03:17:933 - same as my mod on 02:15:835 -
  16. 04:35:870 (275870|2) - i suggest to delete this note, weird and different with 04:35:136 (275136|1,275241|2,275346|0,275555|2,275660|0,275765|1,275975|0,276080|2) - that actually same percussion sound
  17. other seems fine :3

just that . . . i hope it's useful mod for you
sorry for long delay ;__;

good luck
Topic Starter
Feerum

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Feerum . . this is sparta mod mod mod
since all of general things is clear . . . so lets go to the pattern

Click

  • [Thousand Colors]
  1. 00:23:807 (23807|2,23912|1,24017|0,24017|2,24122|3,24227|1) - i suggest to change this pattern, it is repetitive with 00:22:129 - i think that section is have different sound flow or tempo maybe
  2. 00:27:373 - since the kick sound is very clear, and this is only have 1 diff . . . so i suggest to map that sound, sad if you miss that . . . maybe i suggest like this http://puu.sh/kIwLR/8fbd7d7e71.jpg I give up! Everyone suggest me this okay okay okay . Accepted. Let's get hyped BOYZ xD
  3. 01:08:283 (68283|1,68387|2) - i suggest to put 2 note for this last kick sound in this section, for make a difference between this sound 01:08:178 (68178|2) - the cymbal in this part is also very low :3 http://puu.sh/kIwYD/831e5b6b7f.jpg I make some different here but accepted.
  4. 01:22:758 - & 01:29:471 - you need to add one more note on that, for represent the kick sound bcuz it's different with this hat sound 01:22:129 (82129|2) - like you do in 01:37:024 - 01:38:702 - etc (even it's have LN, but it still count as 2 note)
  5. 01:36:185 - & 01:42:898 - same reason as above ^ Okaaaay Accepted.
  6. 01:47:933 (107933|2,107985|3,108038|0,108090|1,108353|2,108405|3,108457|0,108510|1) - this burst part is kinda hard and kill accuracy . . . hue hue
    maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/kIxgg/b48281d42e.jpg well, it's more fit with "kick break sound" in this part imo I maked it differend but changed
  7. 02:01:045 (121045|3) - snap to 02:01:150 - it's more fit with vocal . . . cuz actually that main vocal is start here 02:00:940 - Nope because i don't follow vocal so why here :x
  8. 02:15:835 - 02:17:513 - 02:19:192 - 02:20:870 - i suggest to give this sound 1 note each . . . idk but i feel missing "something" here if you just follow main kick sound No i like this little "Breaks" here. To give the Hands a little rest.
  9. 02:23:283 (143283|2) - delete this note ? . . . well, it's not fit with previous pattern that you following same sound 02:22:548 (142548|1,142653|2,142758|1,142968|2,143073|1,143178|3) - kkkkkkkk wwwwwww :D
  10. 02:24:122 (144122|1,144332|3) - delete this note ? actually it's not same sound like this synth sound 02:24:541 (144541|0,144646|3,144751|1) - i keep :x
  11. 02:29:891 (149891|2) - only 1 note for kick sound ? well i think you've following vocal in this part maybe . . but i suggest to keep consistent with main synth sound, it's more better imo (because this synth to vocal transition is not smooth ) here too. I really like how it is. Plays really good atm.
  12. 02:42:898 - same reason as above ^ ^
  13. 02:51:709 - add 1 note for kick sound . . . like you do in this part 02:58:422 - good for make a difference with this hat sound 02:51:080 - okay
  14. 03:05:136 - & 03:11:849 - same reason as above ^ Done
  15. 03:17:933 - same as my mod on 02:15:835 - No change
  16. 04:35:870 (275870|2) - i suggest to delete this note, weird and different with 04:35:136 (275136|1,275241|2,275346|0,275555|2,275660|0,275765|1,275975|0,276080|2) - that actually same percussion sound Done
  17. other seems fine :3

just that . . . i hope it's useful mod for you
sorry for long delay ;__;

good luck
Thank you!
[ A v a l o n ]
aaaa dat BG is totally creepy XD
Topic Starter
Feerum

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

aaaa dat BG is totally creepy XD
Everyone say this! I can't understand. Its a perfect BG for this Map! :p
Okoratu
Topic Starter
Feerum
Oh Oko thats great. Storyboard me this map pls
- [ S o r a ] -
00:55:066 - Add a note?
01:35:241 - Missing? ==> 03:04:192
02:19:611 - I noticed something from here... sound?
03:04:297 - Remove one? according to => 02:50:870 atleast avoid from jack at column 1 :3
also 05:16:884 accord => 05:03:457 look weird
03:24:436 (204436|2) - Can you cut and place to 03:25:276 ?
04:09:541 - I can't understand. accord => 01:38:492

Just my suggestion
I don't know why did i mod this for. You are doing great x3
Topic Starter
Feerum

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

00:55:066 - Add a note? Done to emphasize the beginning of a new part
01:35:241 - Missing? ==> 03:04:192 www Blame Feerum. Nice Catch!
02:19:611 - I noticed something from here... sound? Yes there is a Sound but i would like just to map the Drums to emphasize them :)
03:04:297 - Remove one? according to => 02:50:870 atleast avoid from jack at column 1 :3 No but i added one at 2:50 c:
also 05:16:884 accord => 05:03:457 look weird Added a note :D
03:24:436 (204436|2) - Can you cut and place to 03:25:276 ? I think its fine how it is :o
04:09:541 - I can't understand. accord => 01:38:492 Listen to music :D

Just my suggestion
I don't know why did i mod this for. You are doing great x3
Thanks for mod! :)
Hestia-
Hihi Feerum~ Touhou ♥!!

[Thousand Colors]
00:52:129 - Add 3
00:52:234 (52234|2) - Move to 2
00:52:443 (52443|1) - Move to 3
00:52:968 - Add 1
03:26:115 - Change SV to 0.8
03:39:541 - Change SV to 0.85
05:04:297 (304297|0) - Remove

goodluck~
Topic Starter
Feerum

Hestia- wrote:

Hihi Feerum~ Touhou ♥!!

[Thousand Colors]
00:52:129 - Add 3 Makes no sense :/ sorry
00:52:234 (52234|2) - Move to 2
00:52:443 (52443|1) - Move to 3 No to both. Would break the Flow i build here.
00:52:968 - Add 1 Nope. I keep the 1/4 here
03:26:115 - Change SV to 0.8
03:39:541 - Change SV to 0.85 I like these SV Changes. Feels more smooth :3
05:04:297 (304297|0) - Remove Nope for consistency

goodluck~
Thanks for your Mod :3
Wind_14
Sorry for my late responses...

MOD
01:39:541 (99541|2,99541|3,99961|2) - swap this, 01:40:171 (100171|3) - to 2 and 01:40:380 (100380|1) - to 3 ?
for pattern consistency with 01:26:115 (86115|1) - and additional balance.

02:32:408 - how about 02:32:408 (152408|0,152408|2,152408|1,152618|3,152618|2,152828|1,152828|0,152828|3,153038|0,153038|2,153143|3) - ? considering the pattern 02:39:122 (159122|2,159122|3,159122|0,159332|1,159332|3,159541|0,159541|1,159541|2,159751|2,159751|0) -

02:39:751 (159751|2) - to 3, for balance.

Sorry, i'm not really good with note+LN pattern..... :(
and i can't upload the pic,( slow internet ), so sorry...
Topic Starter
Feerum

Wind_14 wrote:

Sorry for my late responses...

MOD
01:39:541 (99541|2,99541|3,99961|2) - swap this, 01:40:171 (100171|3) - to 2 and 01:40:380 (100380|1) - to 3 ?
for pattern consistency with 01:26:115 (86115|1) - and additional balance. I changed it for my own

02:32:408 - how about 02:32:408 (152408|0,152408|2,152408|1,152618|3,152618|2,152828|1,152828|0,152828|3,153038|0,153038|2,153143|3) - ? considering the pattern 02:39:122 (159122|2,159122|3,159122|0,159332|1,159332|3,159541|0,159541|1,159541|2,159751|2,159751|0) - No change here

02:39:751 (159751|2) - to 3, for balance. nice catch. changed c:

Sorry, i'm not really good with note+LN pattern..... :(
and i can't upload the pic,( slow internet ), so sorry...
Thanks for your Mod :)
Krfawy

#1
Akasha-
placeholder for #2
Topic Starter
Feerum

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

placeholder for #2
Nice! I better say it now.
I will replace the BG with the next Update and change the Artist according to KwaN's Meta check:
puxtu
nice first bubble from a non-mania ex-bn you have there feerum :D
Akasha-


Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania Modding]

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Beatmap Nominator Modding / Iconning

Mod Requested by Feerum


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 1370 (fix this after fix mod)
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Will be changed
- Folder’s problem: Seems like soft-hitwhistle.wav is used but where? i can't find it
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Thousand Colors]

SPOILER

  • It looks good, very nice! I will just points out some stuffs
    00:13:108 (13108|1,13108|3,13108|2) - hmm ... on here cymbal sound very lightly, i suggest you to add 2 notes only
    00:14:996 (14996|2,15206|2) - this jack mean nothing, i recomended you to move 00:15:206 (15206|2) - to 4, for pitch and balance
    00:27:164 - i would suggest you this for hand feeling but also for rhythm, it would be good if you follow the main kick on 4th column: http://puu.sh/mKiLz/8e4ba5f76b.jpg
    00:50:241 - how about this one: http://puu.sh/mKiPb/9395e8cfb7.jpg
    01:13:859 - switch those notes, for paterns also for balance
    01:19:821 - Why this flow changes on here? it's sounds exactly same as 01:18:667 (78667|2,78772|1,78877|3,78982|0,79087|2,79192|1,79297|3,79401|0,79506|2,79611|1,79716|3,79821|0) - i suggest you to change them back to [1324], also if you keep, you may give players have a weird feeling of 1/4 and 1/8 because of http://puu.sh/mKiX2/9255abf8f7.png
    01:36:185 (96185|2) - move this to 1 for balance, it looks hard: 01:35:975 (95975|3,96185|2,96394|2) -
    02:01:569 (121569|0,121569|1,121569|2) - i know you follow both vocals and high-up sound but 3 notes here is not good imo, i suggest you to remove one note
    02:22:548 (142548|1,142653|2,142758|1) - how about: 1-4-1, it sound different than 02:22:968 (142968|2,143073|1,143178|2) - tho
    02:48:353 - i suggest you to follow rhythm-only on here, it sounds like the music paused on here (don't count that bass) so i would suggest you this: http://puu.sh/mKjjH/a2b45c1eaf.jpg (you can rearrange by your own ideas)
    03:30:311 (210311|0,212828|3) - it sounds like, pitch is going up and then down, i would recomended you to Ctrl + H this, which suitable for this part
    04:00:940 (240940|1) - this one sound different than 03:59:681 (239681|1,239891|1,240101|1,240415|1,240625|1) - then i suggest you to Ctrl + G this 04:00:940 (240940|1,241150|3) -
    04:20:031 (260031|0) - for pitch, you must move this to 3, and also you do them the same after this spot
    05:01:779 (301779|0,301832|1,301884|2,301936|3,301989|0,302041|1,302094|2,302146|3,302199|0,302251|1,302304|2,302356|3,302408|0,302461|1,302513|2,302566|3,302618|0,302671|1,302723|2,302776|3,302828|0,302880|1,302933|2,302985|3,303038|0,303090|1,303143|2,303195|3,303248|0,303300|1,303353|2,303405|3) - keep continue this may not good, how about change the half of it to [12] [43]: http://puu.sh/mKjEY/b17647a433.jpg


[Overall]

Halozy, as always, a very good song, compared with it is an excellent beatmap made by Feerum, great job
Catch me up anytime you done fixing
Topic Starter
Feerum

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania Modding]

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Beatmap Nominator Modding / Iconning

Mod Requested by Feerum


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 1370 (fix this after fix mod)
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Will be changed
- Folder’s problem: Seems like soft-hitwhistle.wav is used but where? i can't find it // 00:28:432 (28432|0,28852|1,29272|2) - etc. On the Red ticks o:
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

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“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Thousand Colors]

SPOILER

  • It looks good, very nice! I will just points out some stuffs
    00:13:108 (13108|1,13108|3,13108|2) - hmm ... on here cymbal sound very lightly, i suggest you to add 2 notes only I will keep here the 3 noted chord to emphasize the difference. I Mapped the claps with 2 Notes and this is audible different
    00:14:996 (14996|2,15206|2) - this jack mean nothing, i recomended you to move 00:15:206 (15206|2) - to 4, for pitch and balance Sure
    00:27:164 - i would suggest you this for hand feeling but also for rhythm, it would be good if you follow the main kick on 4th column: http://puu.sh/mKiLz/8e4ba5f76b.jpg Thats really nice i take this
    00:50:241 - how about this one: http://puu.sh/mKiPb/9395e8cfb7.jpg Nice! Take this
    01:13:859 - switch those notes, for paterns also for balance i don't see the problem here
    01:19:821 - Why this flow changes on here? it's sounds exactly same as 01:18:667 Actually i don' know anymore haha. Changed(78667|2,78772|1,78877|3,78982|0,79087|2,79192|1,79297|3,79401|0,79506|2,79611|1,79716|3,79821|0) - i suggest you to change them back to [1324], also if you keep, you may give players have a weird feeling of 1/4 and 1/8 because of http://puu.sh/mKiX2/9255abf8f7.png I keep. somehow i like these 1324
    01:36:185 (96185|2) - move this to 1 for balance, it looks hard: 01:35:975 (95975|3,96185|2,96394|2) - okay
    02:01:569 (121569|0,121569|1,121569|2) - i know you follow both vocals and high-up sound but 3 notes here is not good imo, i suggest you to remove one note removed one
    02:22:548 (142548|1,142653|2,142758|1) - how about: 1-4-1, it sound different than 02:22:968 (142968|2,143073|1,143178|2) - tho Yeah thats nice
    02:48:353 - i suggest you to follow rhythm-only on here, it sounds like the music paused on here (don't count that bass) so i would suggest you this: http://puu.sh/mKjjH/a2b45c1eaf.jpg (you can rearrange by your own ideas) I think the missing note in the Middle plays kinda weird but i rearranged it a little bit better to music
    03:30:311 (210311|0,212828|3) - it sounds like, pitch is going up and then down, i would recomended you to Ctrl + H this, which suitable for this part Sure
    04:00:940 (240940|1) - this one sound different than 03:59:681 (239681|1,239891|1,240101|1,240415|1,240625|1) - then i suggest you to Ctrl + G this 04:00:940 (240940|1,241150|3) - Changed
    04:20:031 (260031|0) - for pitch, you must move this to 3, and also you do them the same after this spot Okay
    05:01:779 (301779|0,301832|1,301884|2,301936|3,301989|0,302041|1,302094|2,302146|3,302199|0,302251|1,302304|2,302356|3,302408|0,302461|1,302513|2,302566|3,302618|0,302671|1,302723|2,302776|3,302828|0,302880|1,302933|2,302985|3,303038|0,303090|1,303143|2,303195|3,303248|0,303300|1,303353|2,303405|3) - keep continue this may not good, how about change the half of it to [12] [43]: http://puu.sh/mKjEY/b17647a433.jpg okay


[Overall]

Halozy, as always, a very good song, compared with it is an excellent beatmap made by Feerum, great job Thank you >w<
Catch me up anytime you done fixing
All done. Like i sayd i Updated the Artist according to KwaN's Check and i replaced the BG
Akasha-
Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled #2
(A small white thingy with pink outline, all it needs now is a small orange thingy with pink outline)

Good luck on Appvoval
Topic Starter
Feerum
Whooop. I selfpop bubble.

I don't want that this Map makes any Drama because of:

puxtu wrote:

nice first bubble from a non-mania ex-bn you have there feerum :D
Thanks puxtu for contact Loctav to make sure if this would be a problem or not.
Indeed it wouldn't but its better to rank it correctly :)
Akasha-
Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Rebubbled #1
(A small white thingy with pink outline, all it needs now is a small orange thingy with pink outline)

Good luck on Appvoval
As i got noticed, and the map is no changes at all, so i will do #1 rebubbled
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Feerum
lalala playing the waiting game
[ A v a l o n ]
oh come on . . . i'm waiting this map :(
Vulkin
map hype
Cra Dow
Waiting like waiting for paper in the bathroom.
Nice touho music... Good Luck!
AntariksaMAA
i love this map ! can't wait for this to get ranked ! GOO !!
[ A v a l o n ]
aaaa marked for bub #2
damn, this take 15 days . . . i'm sorry

Bubble #2 Check



  • [General]
  1. As KK mentioned before, so i checked it again and there is no issues here but . . .
    [Hitsound]
  2. first, your soft-hitfinish seems unbalanced between L & R sound but i think it just small different since i still can hear it feels like normally does, will be more good if you can balance it too
  3. second, Cheer.wav is have much blank spot in the end, so maybe you need to cut it ==> here is my fix it can be useful to reduce the filesize too


    |1|2|3|4|
  4. 00:23:817 (23817|2,23922|1,24027|0,24027|2,24132|3,24237|1) - i can really sure this part is have different sound/pitch from this part 00:22:139 - i would like suggest to use diifferent pattern form for that
  5. 00:35:146 (35146|1,35356|0) - and 00:41:859 (41859|1,42069|2) - will be feels more good if you put them in same column, like your other paet with this kind of sound too
  6. 01:00:635 (60635|1) - move to 3? hard to be explained but it just feels like on this part 01:00:950 (60950|1,61055|2,61160|3,61370|2,61474|1,61579|0) - with have different form like you do on 01:05:146 -
  7. 01:35:356 (95356|3,95985|3) - is that LN is have same sound ? but i feel it just like similar on here 01:42:069 (102069|2,102698|3) -
  8. 01:58:432 (118432|3,118432|2,118642|0,118642|1) - not make this same column like previous part ? or you can make a difference on this pattern 01:55:076 - 01:51:719 -
  9. 02:25:915 (145915|3) - better move this one to 3 since it have different sound with this pattern 02:26:125 (146125|1,146125|3) - just i feel weird on that ><
  10. 02:29:691 (149691|1,149796|2,149901|3) - Ctrl G . . . it seems more better since we have vocal impact in here 02:29:481 (149481|3,149481|2) - so, using 1/2 jack is very good to express that sound i think
  11. 02:36:509 (156509|1) - just my feeling, but this one is more balance if you move that to 4 . . . because you used too much 2nd column in this time
  12. 02:50:775 (170775|2,170880|1,170880|2) - dude, this is painful to press xD
  13. 03:03:048 (183048|2,183048|0,183153|1,183153|3) - Ctrl G, it just feels like same sound on this part 03:03:572 (183572|1,183572|3,183677|0,183677|2) - and it useful to avoid overused note on 2nd column
  14. 04:08:293 - the LN seems different sound, i suggest to map something like this http://puu.sh/pE8Jq/b2d0fc7cea.jpg you can see the same kick sound is have same place too
  15. 04:10:810 (250810|0,251020|2) - Ctrl G, same reason as above ^
  16. i really loves the kiai end parts :3

    [Hitsound]
  17. 01:47:104 - 01:47:838 - 01:48:048 - 01:48:153 - 01:48:363 - 01:48:572 - add drum sampleset for the kick sound here
  18. 03:16:055 - 03:16:789 - 03:16:999 - 03:17:104 - 03:17:314 - 03:17:523 - same as above ^
  19. 05:28:642 - hmm ^
OK just that from me . . . call me back after fix :)
Topic Starter
Feerum

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

aaaa marked for bub #2
damn, this take 15 days . . . i'm sorry // np dude! It was month bubbled so i can wait few more days ahah

Bubble #2 Check



  • [General]
  1. As KK mentioned before, so i checked it again and there is no issues here but . . .
    [Hitsound]
  2. first, your soft-hitfinish seems unbalanced between L & R sound but i think it just small different since i still can hear it feels like normally does, will be more good if you can balance it too
  3. second, Cheer.wav is have much blank spot in the end, so maybe you need to cut it ==> here is my fix it can be useful to reduce the filesize too fixed both HS


    |1|2|3|4|
  4. 00:23:817 (23817|2,23922|1,24027|0,24027|2,24132|3,24237|1) - i can really sure this part is have different sound/pitch from this part 00:22:139 - i would like suggest to use diifferent pattern form for that Arranged this one
  5. 00:35:146 (35146|1,35356|0) - and 00:41:859 (41859|1,42069|2) - will be feels more good if you put them in same column, like your other paet with this kind of sound too Both have here clearly different sound so same column would be wrong
  6. 01:00:635 (60635|1) - move to 3? hard to be explained but it just feels like on this part 01:00:950 (60950|1,61055|2,61160|3,61370|2,61474|1,61579|0) - with have different form like you do on 01:05:146 - Yep, seems cool for me
  7. 01:35:356 (95356|3,95985|3) - is that LN is have same sound ? but i feel it just like similar on here 01:42:069 (102069|2,102698|3) - They have same sound so i arranged the 2nd LNs
  8. 01:58:432 (118432|3,118432|2,118642|0,118642|1) - not make this same column like previous part ? or you can make a difference on this pattern 01:55:076 - 01:51:719 - Arranged!
  9. 02:25:915 (145915|3) - better move this one to 3 since it have different sound with this pattern 02:26:125 (146125|1,146125|3) - just i feel weird on that >< Arranged in other way since even in low bpm i wanted to avoid "tri-jacks" :D
  10. 02:29:691 (149691|1,149796|2,149901|3) - Ctrl G . . . it seems more better since we have vocal impact in here 02:29:481 (149481|3,149481|2) - so, using 1/2 jack is very good to express that sound i think Done
  11. 02:36:509 (156509|1) - just my feeling, but this one is more balance if you move that to 4 . . . because you used too much 2nd column in this time Keep because same pitch
  12. 02:50:775 (170775|2,170880|1,170880|2) - dude, this is painful to press xD idk why but i think it was the mini-jack, right? If yes. I fixed this already before but it wasn't updated xP
  13. 03:03:048 (183048|2,183048|0,183153|1,183153|3) - Ctrl G, it just feels like same sound on this part 03:03:572 (183572|1,183572|3,183677|0,183677|2) - and it useful to avoid overused note on 2nd column Changed
  14. 04:08:293 - the LN seems different sound, i suggest to map something like this http://puu.sh/pE8Jq/b2d0fc7cea.jpg you can see the same kick sound is have same place too Basically you are right, the two LN's there have different sound, but i gonna keep it because this part is overall to PR mapped so i think it's okay when i keep only these two LN's on same col
  15. 04:10:810 (250810|0,251020|2) - Ctrl G, same reason as above ^ Here i change it
  16. i really loves the kiai end parts :3 Thanks (:

    [Hitsound]
  17. 01:47:104 - 01:47:838 - 01:48:048 - 01:48:153 - 01:48:363 - 01:48:572 - add drum sampleset for the kick sound here
  18. 03:16:055 - 03:16:789 - 03:16:999 - 03:17:104 - 03:17:314 - 03:17:523 - same as above ^
  19. 05:28:642 - hmm ^ Thanks for mention it. Actually i didn't hitsound single notes in the 1/8 intentionally because it could sound strange but i decided to add these hitsounds so yeah. Done!
OK just that from me . . . call me back after fix :)
Thank you very much for the Check.
Additionally i would like to say i did following changes:

Removed Mini-jacks from 02:50:775 - and 05:03:363 -
Added more SV's from 03:26:125 - . Now it goes down to 0.7x and goes slowly up until 04:06:404 - where it is 1.0x again.
Arranged all 1/8 Burts for more fun! Simple rolls are so boring and very bad to hit for me.
Changed OD to 9 and HP to 8.5 so the Burts are better to hit.
[ A v a l o n ]
OwO yes, i think it's nice if you do some variant mapping in burst parts, i agree with that
and then maybe OD should be 8,5 only ? since i saw you've using much slider in certain parts
let me hear your decision about that (:
Topic Starter
Feerum
OD 8,5 would be a bit too less so changed to 8,7 :D
[ A v a l o n ]
Okay, great :)
finally after 4+ months Bubbled 2
Congratulations Feerum
Topic Starter
Feerum
Thank you very much for your time and the bubble Ava (:
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