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Gakuen Seikatsu-bu - Friend Shitai

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Topic Starter
Doormat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 20, 2016 at 1:09:54 PM

Artist: Gakuen Seikatsu-bu
Title: Friend Shitai
Source: がっこうぐらし!
Tags: CloudSplash16 Little gakkou gurashi school live school-live op opening full size living club takeya yuki 丈槍由紀 minase inori 水瀬いのり ebisuzawa kurumi 恵飛須沢胡桃 ozawa ari 小澤亜李 wakasa yuuri 若狭悠里 ichimichi mao M·A·O 市道真央 naoki miki 直樹美紀 takahashi rie 高橋李依
BPM: 148
Filesize: 7484kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cloud's Insane (3.86 stars, 695 notes)
  2. Easy (1.45 stars, 198 notes)
  3. Hard (3.23 stars, 536 notes)
  4. Normal (1.93 stars, 360 notes)
Download: Gakuen Seikatsu-bu - Friend Shitai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please delete the previous version and download the new version if you had this map before Nov. 23, 2015!
Modders
Hi Im Nathan | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Airachi | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Log Off Now | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Zectro | Easy, Hard, Cloud's Insane
pishifat | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Ben | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Shad0w1and | Hard, Cloud's Insane
MokouSmoke | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
DahplA | Hard, Cloud's Insane
Originality | Easy, Normal, Hard
Baraatje123 | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
-Nya- | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
-Hakurei- | Cloud's Insane
Cheonshi | Hard, Cloud's Insane
XxSeonxX | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Reditum | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
- Frontier - | Cloud's Insane
Lanturn | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
SnowNiNo_ | Cloud's Insane
Underforest | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
sahuang | Easy, Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Battle | Easy, Normal, Hard
Mercusheigan | Hard, Cloud's Insane
Rizia | Normal, Hard, Cloud's Insane
Chaoslitz | Easy, Normal, Hard
Bubbled by Rizia on 2016.04.20
Qualified by Chaoslitz on 2016.04.20
Special Thanks
Little | ; guest difficulty; hitsounding
Airachi | x 12
Originality |
Misure |
IntelliTroodon |
Misc
background source (easy, normal, hard)
  1. the normal and hard background are the same as the easy background, but edited to have less saturation
background source (insane)
  1. the insane background was also edited to have less saturation
Explanation for the change in background (spoiler warning!):

The show this song is from presents itself as a slice of life "cute girls doing cute things at school" anime, but is slowly revealed to be a post-zombie apocalypse survival anime about these girls trying to survive. As the series goes on, it starts to get darker and darker to reflect the true nature of the show, which is why the difficulty starts off being bright and colourful in the Easy difficulty, then slowly starts to lose its colour as the difficulty increases, and then changes to show the post-apocalyptic setting in the hardest difficulty.
You can click on the Insane difficulty name to find a pointless conversation explaining why we ended up going with Insane as a difficulty name instead of a custom name

Yuki (ft. the School Living Club) about to drop some dope beats and spit that hot fire, yo
_handholding
hi from your modding queue

[cloud's insane]
00:27:016 (2,3,4) - make the DS the same as 00:27:624 (5,6,7,8)
00:06:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have this pattern through out the map so I'll jsut mention it once. I think it would be better to take out the kick sliders and have it all circles
02:57:624 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make the increases in distance more gradual

[hard]
00:14:651 (3) - stack on top of 00:15:056 (1) It feels better to play imo
00:33:705 (1) - make into a slider?
00:40:597 (6) - reduce the angle
00:46:475 (2) - small jump?

[normal]
Increase DS to 1.35 to avoid objects from touching each other? just a thought idk
03:04:313 (2) -
03:26:407 (1) - This would be better suited for the rhythm imo


well thats all from me, I hope this mod was useful, GL !
Topic Starter
Doormat

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from your modding queue

[hard]
00:14:651 (3) - stack on top of 00:15:056 (1) It feels better to play imo good idea, but i want to keep this consistent with certain parts like 01:07:556 (4,5) and 02:14:043 (4,5), so i'll leave it as is for now and change it if somebody else suggests this as well
00:33:705 (1) - make into a slider? actually i wanted there to be a pause here, so no change
00:40:597 (6) - reduce the angle sure
00:46:475 (2) - small jump? not a bad idea, but I like how it sort of forms a triangle with the slider tail/head of 00:45:461 (4,1) right now. will leave it as is for now, and probably change it if somebody else suggests it

[normal]
Increase DS to 1.35 to avoid objects from touching each other? just a thought idk actually this was sort of intentional; i didn't want the DS too close to each other, but I also didn't want them too far apart
03:04:313 (2) - yeah sure; angle looked a little weird to me anyways, so i was going to change it lol
03:26:407 (1) - This would be better suited for the rhythm imo it's not that much different from what i have lol; while not a bad idea, i'm not too keen on using a repeat slider at the end of this song :/


well thats all from me, I hope this mod was useful, GL !
Thanks for the mod! :)
Airachi
General:
  1. for easy/normal diff maybe turn off grid snap
Easy:
  1. rhythm and aesthetics look fine 2 mee
Normal:
00:08:570 (1) - maybe make this a repeat 1/2 slider for all similar rhyhtms
00:11:813 (1) - more examples
00:15:056 (1) -
00:21:543 (1) -
00:24:786 (1) - ^

00:52:961 (5) - maybe move to 64|68?
01:25:799 (3,4,5) - think this should same angels as 01:12:826 (3,4,5) -
02:57:218 (1,1) - is there enough time for recovery after spinner?

Hard:
  1. 00:42:014 - http://puu.sh/lCrSZ.png object not snapped
00:10:597 (2) - Ctrl+G and straighten out more to fit the rest of patterns in the verse?
00:20:326 (2,3,4) - rotate square so not overlapping a little?
01:14:651 (7) - what do you think about stacking this on 01:14:043 (4) - ? it would make same motion as this one also 01:27:016 (3,4) -
02:21:137 (7) - stack on 02:20:529 (4) - ?
03:13:029 (7) - stack on 03:12:421 (4) -

Insane:
  1. I think the AR should be higher, 8.5-9 and maybe OD8 for consistent OD increase
00:00:462 (1,1,1,1) - 11/10
00:06:543 (5,6) - i think these should be straight
00:11:813 (1) - what do you think of ctrl G here?
00:19:516 (5,1) - make same distance as 00:19:313 (4,5) - ?
01:30:664 (4) - fix overlap if no reason for there?
02:00:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really like this pattern
02:09:989 (5,4) - blanket 02:11:002 (4) - with 02:09:989 (5) -
02:24:178 (4) - move to the right so 4 it isnt overlapping 6?
thats all i got! I hope i could be helpful, goodluck!
(This song is catchy.. I am going to go watch the anime right now! lol :))
Topic Starter
Doormat

Airachi wrote:

General:
  1. for easy/normal diff maybe turn off grid snap lol grid snap was to help with mapping; it's not really something to comment on after a map is finished because it doesn't add or take away anything from the actual map

Easy:
  1. rhythm and aesthetics look fine 2 mee
Normal:
*00:08:570 (1) - maybe make this a repeat 1/2 slider for all similar rhyhtms
*00:11:813 (1) - more examples
*00:15:056 (1) -
*00:21:543 (1) -
*00:24:786 (1) - ^
*i was following the drums here rather than the vocals, so i don't think i'm gonna be changing this

00:52:961 (5) - maybe move to 64|68? doing so isn't a bad idea, but it breaks the distance snap, so i moved it to 72|72 instead
01:25:799 (3,4,5) - think this should same angels as 01:12:826 (3,4,5) - i don't think this is that big an issue, so no change here
02:57:218 (1,1) - is there enough time for recovery after spinner? i think it's enough, but you have a fair point. made the spinner one beat shorter, so there's now two beats of recovery time. should be enough now

Hard:
  1. 00:42:014 - http://puu.sh/lCrSZ.png object not snapped oh woops; fixed it now
00:10:597 (2) - Ctrl+G and straighten out more to fit the rest of patterns in the verse? this was intentional, actually
00:20:326 (2,3,4) - rotate square so not overlapping a little? yeah sure
01:14:651 (7) - what do you think about stacking this on 01:14:043 (4) - ? it would make same motion as this one also 01:27:016 (3,4) - actually, i wanted a back-and-forth pattern here rather than the cross pattern that i used later, so no change
02:21:137 (7) - stack on 02:20:529 (4) - ? ^
03:13:029 (7) - stack on 03:12:421 (4) - ^
thats all i got! I hope i could be helpful, goodluck!
(This song is catchy.. I am going to go watch the anime right now! lol :)) well, i hope you enjoy another typical moe anime, because that's what this totally is. yep. just cute girls doing cute things. i'm not in denial, really! ;w;
Thanks for the mod! Will take a look at it later in the day I'm going to bed lol edit: took a look at your suggestions and applied the changes. will update when Little changes the insane, or when bss decides to work lol.
Airachi
Hello, I just wanted to apologize for the grid snap comment. I did not realize it was rude. Also thank you for replies, i like your maps quite a bit. :)
Topic Starter
Doormat

Airachi wrote:

Hello, I just wanted to apologize for the grid snap comment. I did not realize it was rude. Also thank you for replies, i like your maps quite a bit. :)
Ahh no worries, it wasn't rude or anything, just something I never really see people mention lol. And thanks for the kind words!
Little
Hi Im Nathan

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

[cloud's insane]
00:27:016 (2,3,4) - make the DS the same as 00:27:624 (5,6,7,8) Why?
00:06:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have this pattern through out the map so I'll jsut mention it once. I think it would be better to take out the kick sliders and have it all circles No. That makes it harder to play because it ends on a blue tick. The current rhythm is more intuitive because the player is clicking on the stronger beats.
02:57:624 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make the increases in distance more gradual No. I don't see why I should.
Airachi

Airachi wrote:

Insane:
  1. I think the AR should be higher, 8.5-9 and maybe OD8 for consistent OD increase I think AR8 is appropriate for this map. OD8 is too high for the map.
00:00:462 (1,1,1,1) - 11/10
00:06:543 (5,6) - i think these should be straight They look better curved.
00:11:813 (1) - what do you think of ctrl G here? Current direction feels better to me.
00:19:516 (5,1) - make same distance as 00:19:313 (4,5) - ? ok
01:30:664 (4) - fix overlap if no reason for there? Overlap is fine. The spacing is the most comfortable this way.
02:00:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really like this pattern
02:09:989 (5,4) - blanket 02:11:002 (4) - with 02:09:989 (5) - fixed.
02:24:178 (4) - move to the right so 4 it isnt overlapping 6? Reworked those jumps since the flow wasn't very good anyway.
Thanks for modding!
Cloud's Insane
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: friend shitai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62083
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Friend Shitai
TitleUnicode:ふ・れ・ん・ど・し・た・い
Artist:Gakuen Seikatsu Bu
ArtistUnicode:学園生活部
Creator:Doormat
Version:Cloud's Insane
Source:がっこうぐらし!
Tags:cloudsplash16 little gakkou gurashi school live op opening full size living club takeya yuki 丈槍由紀 minase inori 水瀬いのり ebisuzawa kurumi 恵飛須沢胡桃 ozawa ari 小澤亜李 wakasa yuuri 若狭悠里 ichimichi mao 市道真央 naoki miki 直樹美紀 takahashi rie 高橋李依
BeatmapID:833485
BeatmapSetID:368566

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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60,268,185326,6,0,P|28:243|13:206,1,80,6|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,185732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,168,185934,2,0,P|312:172|354:108,1,160,6|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,115,186644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,140,186745,1,0,3:0:0:0:
153,170,186847,1,0,3:0:0:0:
159,199,186948,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,204,187151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,168,187353,1,12,0:0:0:0:
300,312,187556,2,0,P|379:303|459:307,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
459,307,188164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,144,188367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
408,144,188468,1,0,3:0:0:0:
408,144,188570,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,272,188772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,188975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,244,189177,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,244,189279,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,244,189380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,164,189583,1,0,3:0:0:0:
36,280,189786,2,0,L|44:360,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,190191,6,0,P|182:175|177:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,80,190597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,260,190799,2,0,P|151:304|226:282,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,191407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,196,191610,6,0,L|464:275,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,192016,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,196,192117,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,196,192218,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,96,192421,1,0,3:0:0:0:
464,96,192522,1,0,3:0:0:0:
464,96,192624,1,6,0:0:0:0:
344,32,192826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,108,193029,2,0,P|192:112|154:100,1,80,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,193333,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,64,193434,5,6,0:0:0:0:
56,248,193637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,212,193840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,168,194043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,168,194144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,194245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,292,194448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,247,194651,2,0,P|315:243|355:249,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,276,195056,5,2,0:0:0:0:
508,168,195259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,96,195461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,204,195664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,144,195867,2,0,P|248:139|208:145,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,184,196272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,304,196475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,304,196576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,304,196678,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,216,196880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,152,197083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,55,197286,2,0,P|378:86|390:162,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,188,197894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,136,198097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,136,198198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,198299,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,292,198502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,300,198705,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,116,198907,2,0,P|229:155|232:195,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,293,199516,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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340,292,200326,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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420,56,200934,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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108,148,201543,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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420,336,202353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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280,172,203570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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104,156,208840,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,209752,12,0,212894,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Doormat
Okay I updated the beatmap-
Log Off Now
Hi, NM from my queue!

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may not be useful! If this is the case feel free to ignore this mod, although feedback would be much appreciated! All mods are my opinion

[General]

Looks good to me

[Easy]

Very clean difficulty

01:19:921 (2,3) - Maybe rotate 3 a bit for a cleaner shape?

01:31:272 (1,2,3) - Try to keep the space between each slider the same

[Normal]

Same comment as easy, very clean

01:10:191 (4,5) - I would essentially swap these around so the flow into 01:11:002 (6) - is more intuitive

01:14:245 (7) - Potential for NC?

02:01:070 (2,3) - Stack?

[Hard]

this mod is gonna look like a shitmod soon im so embarrassed lmao

02:21:137 (7) - I would change this to a triangle instead, flowed better for me personally but it's up to you

02:23:570 (3,4) - 4's slider end could be raise a little for a better shape/fit (this is so minor lmao)

[Insane]

01:05:934 (3) - Maybe make this slider end a little lower, it makes 01:05:732 (2) - look a bit randomly placed

02:47:995 - I feel this should be clickable, it's very noticeable in the music

[]

Seriously I found this hard to mod which I suppose is pretty good? XD, hope this helped anyway!
Little
Topic Starter
Doormat

Log Off Now wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue!

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may not be useful! If this is the case feel free to ignore this mod, although feedback would be much appreciated! All mods are my opinion

[General]

Looks good to me

[Easy]

Very clean difficulty

01:19:921 (2,3) - Maybe rotate 3 a bit for a cleaner shape? rotated by -3 degrees from its selection centre lol

01:31:272 (1,2,3) - Try to keep the space between each slider the same b-but they are?

[Normal]

Same comment as easy, very clean

01:10:191 (4,5) - I would essentially swap these around so the flow into 01:11:002 (6) - is more intuitive not that big a deal, i think; still flows into the (6) pretty nicely in my opinion

01:14:245 (7) - Potential for NC? mm maybe; will give it some more thought

02:01:070 (2,3) - Stack? i think this is fine; not really necessary to stack in my opinion

[Hard]

this mod is gonna look like a shitmod soon im so embarrassed lmao

02:21:137 (7) - I would change this to a triangle instead, flowed better for me personally but it's up to you as i explained before, i wanted to use a back-and-forth pattern here rather than a cross or a triangle, so i'm gonna leave it as is

02:23:570 (3,4) - 4's slider end could be raise a little for a better shape/fit (this is so minor lmao) i just ended up moving the entire slider upwards by a little bit so hopefully it looks better now; also curved the (3) by a little bit for a better fit

[]

Seriously I found this hard to mod which I suppose is pretty good? XD, hope this helped anyway!
Thanks for the mod!
Zectro
Heya! M4M thingy

[Easy]
- 03:09:380 (3,2) - Perfect stack
Seems ready!

[Normal]
Ready for sure.

[Hard]
- 00:00:462 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I am not too sure if you should keep this
- 00:28:637 (3) - I'm sure that you can make this one look better
- 00:30:461 (3) - ^, this shape is too extreme imo
- 00:33:299 (2,3) - Tone changes on these so consider moving them to different places
- 00:56:407 (4) - Weeeh I don't think the shape of these fi. I'd like to see something like this though http://puu.sh/lQfER/2c55646607.jpg I wont point out any more of these
- 00:58:840 (3,4) - Maybe increase the spacing on these? That would fit better imo
- 02:05:326 (3,4) - Increase the spacing again? And btw I don't think the curves fit that well on 02:03:705 (1,2,3,4) -
- 03:28:840 (5,6,7) - This can look better imo, for example 03:29:042 (6) - 's spacing is not perfect

[Cloud's Insane]
What's with the dark and creepy bg change O.o
- 02:34:516 - To 02:41:002 - I expected you to use a lot of tripples there but instead you ignore most of the guitar sounds and follow.. idk what. 02:34:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems very out of place for example! This is probably my only concern about this diff


Good luck!
Topic Starter
Doormat

Zectro wrote:

Heya! M4M thingy

[Easy]
- 03:09:380 (3,2) - Perfect stack fixed it i think
Seems ready!

[Normal]
Ready for sure.

[Hard]
- 00:00:462 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I am not too sure if you should keep this i like it though ;w; will keep for now
- 00:28:637 (3) - I'm sure that you can make this one look better sure
- 00:30:461 (3) - ^, this shape is too extreme imo k i made it less stupid
- 00:33:299 (2,3) - Tone changes on these so consider moving them to different places this was intentional since it gives more emphasis to that one spot, but moving them isn't bad either; will give it more thought
- 00:56:407 (4) - Weeeh I don't think the shape of these fi. I'd like to see something like this though http://puu.sh/lQfER/2c55646607.jpg I wont point out any more of these i think the shapes are fine, but i do agree they could use some refinement
- 00:58:840 (3,4) - Maybe increase the spacing on these? That would fit better imo sure
- 02:05:326 (3,4) - Increase the spacing again? And btw I don't think the curves fit that well on 02:03:705 (1,2,3,4) - increased spacing. as for the curve, i'll give it some more thought
- 03:28:840 (5,6,7) - This can look better imo, for example 03:29:042 (6) - 's spacing is not perfect i literally just made it a diamond shape by copy/pasting and then rotating by 90 degrees, so spacing should be right, even though DS seems to be fussy about it. anyways, i rotated the diamond by a little bit so it looks a little better

[Cloud's Insane]
What's with the dark and creepy bg change O.o this was actually intentional because it makes sense if you ever watched the show this song is from. also in case you didn't notice, the bg slowly loses colour and gets "darker" as the difficulty increases, so to speak

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod! Still need to mod your map, expect it soon ;)
Little
Was following the melody at that part...
Not sure what you were hearing there to be getting a lot of triples.

Anyway, I remapped that part because the original rhythm was complex and hard to dt xddd

http://puu.sh/lQoZn/cc403845c4.zip
pishifat
shovel is best girl

insane
02:39:583 (2,3) - the 1/4 spaced 1/2 sliders while overlapping like you do later = less confuse. people gonna assume 1/2 slider starts on 1/2 tick since thats how the world works
02:41:002 (1,2) - vs 02:47:489 (1,2) - what the heck
also making the 1/2 gap after 1/4 obvious with huge spacing like in the second instance = good idea

hard
same ar as insane o k lowering this one is sense
02:47:083 (4,5,6) - um problem cant map 1/4 when there's only 1/6. leaving it empty like senyor splash is a yes

normal
the distance snap you chose here is kinda shit. people usually choose to either overlap 1/2 (like what would be 1.1x or lower ds for you) or space them (which would be 1.4x and up). either would work fine, but being in the middle makes for poop aesthetics and really obvious minor spacing inconsistencies, like 01:55:597 (4,5,6) - is barely spaced apart, then 01:57:218 (1,2,3) - is barely touching and it is triggereing me so hard
so basically im saying to rearrange objects with a different distance snap g
and that being ill just not mention anything else

ez
00:47:489 (1) - on the lowest diffsliderbodies should have as clear of paths as possible. both of us know that there's a hidden corner here, but scrubs won't. basically you'll want that corner thing to always be visible for scrubs
03:15:461 (3,1) - what is this placement please
Topic Starter
Doormat

pishifat wrote:

shovel is best girl yes she is

hard
same ar as insane o k lowering this one is sense lowered to 7.5 o k
02:47:083 (4,5,6) - um problem cant map 1/4 when there's only 1/6. leaving it empty like senyor splash is a yes deleted (5,6) k

normal
the distance snap you chose here is kinda shit. people usually choose to either overlap 1/2 (like what would be 1.1x or lower ds for you) or space them (which would be 1.4x and up). either would work fine, but being in the middle makes for poop aesthetics and really obvious minor spacing inconsistencies, like 01:55:597 (4,5,6) - is barely spaced apart, then 01:57:218 (1,2,3) - is barely touching and it is triggereing me so hard
so basically im saying to rearrange objects with a different distance snap g decided to lower it to 1.1; will take some time to fix everything so yeah edit: k i fixed it and everything should be 1.1x now
and that being ill just not mention anything else

ez
00:47:489 (1) - on the lowest diffsliderbodies should have as clear of paths as possible. both of us know that there's a hidden corner here, but scrubs won't. basically you'll want that corner thing to always be visible for scrubs i just changed the shape altogether
03:15:461 (3,1) - what is this placement please lol woops; made the (1) a boomerang shape to avoid overlap
thanks pishi
Ben
From Pulse modding queue



Easy

Looks good to me, enjoyed playing the map and had nice parts in it.

Normal

00:10:191 (4) - Try matching the tilt from slider 5
00:16:678 (4) - Same as above, matching the tilt looks nicer in my opinion
01:41:002 (1) - I would maintain the pattern as so 02:23:164 (4,5) - Doesn't look nice, make them the same tilt
03:20:529 (2,3) - ^

Hard

01:14:245 (5,7) - I would try stacking these
01:20:529 (4) - Curve the first point of the slider so it flows better
02:08:975 (2,3) - This is beyond strict but just a note, blanket 02:20:732 (5,7) - Try stacking and let me know what you think. I will stop pointing these out now

Cloud's Insane

00:13:434 (1,2,3) - The jump is inconsistent
00:16:880 (2,4) - Stacking stuff just like hard difficulty so i will leave it to you
00:32:894 (1,2,3) - Maybe try making the jump from 1 to 2 smaller and have a larger jump from 2 to 3. This matches the instruments increase in pitch and strength
01:19:516 (4,1) - Incredibly strict blanket, top left could be curved in more.
01:32:894 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing
01:39:380 (1,2,3) - Similar to the one at 00:32:894 (1,2,3)
02:15:664 (3,5) - Strict blanket 02:26:407 (1,3) - I'm sorry
03:10:191 (1,2) - Blanket

Sorry for not putting in much, the difficulties were done well and i struggled to find mistakes. I also loved what you did with the backgrounds. Good job !
Topic Starter
Doormat

Ben wrote:

From Pulse modding queue



Normal

00:10:191 (4) - Try matching the tilt from slider 5 the change in tilt is intentional
00:16:678 (4) - Same as above, matching the tilt looks nicer in my opinion ^
01:41:002 (1) - I would maintain the pattern as so nice idea!02:23:164 (4,5) - Doesn't look nice, make them the same tilt again, it was intentional here
03:20:529 (2,3) - ^ ^

Hard

01:14:245 (5,7) - I would try stacking these mm maybe; i want a back-and-forth pattern here, but i also the (7) to be distinct from the (5), so that's why it's not stacked. gonna give this some more thought first
01:20:529 (4) - Curve the first point of the slider so it flows better i think this is fine
02:08:975 (2,3) - This is beyond strict but just a note, blanket fixed02:20:732 (5,7) - Try stacking and let me know what you think. I will stop pointing these out now like i said before, will give it some more thought

Sorry for not putting in much, the difficulties were done well and i struggled to find mistakes. I also loved what you did with the backgrounds. Good job !
Thanks for the mod!
Little
Fixed both things from pishifat's mod.
Changed the stack part and fixed a few of the more noticeable blankets from Ben's mod.
Also reworked a couple of the flows to play better.

http://puu.sh/lR00k/ee6262ec11.zip
Shad0w1and
[Cloud]
01:57:218 (1) - should have higher DS for the crash, 01:56:407 (3) - 3.3x b4 and 1.6x after, make no much sense
03:26:002 (5) - or nc?
nice

[Hard]
02:26:407 (1) - 307-187
02:26:813 (2) - 417-299
02:30:056 (2) - rotate -18 and 152-176
02:45:867 (1,2,3,4) - confusing, look at (1)(4), i suggest nc on 4 or hit by spacing
02:47:995 (2) - staring a slider at blue stick, especially with high DS, is really hard for player to catch the rhythm. i tried many times and i always got 100 on this note
nice

[Normal]
nice

skipped ez


nah, wait, cloud changed user name?
Topic Starter
Doormat

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Hard]
02:26:407 (1) - 307-187 nice idea
02:26:813 (2) - 417-299 moved to x416,y304 instead to maintain DS here
02:30:056 (2) - rotate -18 and 152-176 sure
02:45:867 (1,2,3,4) - confusing, look at (1)(4), i suggest nc on 4 or hit by spacing i moved the (4)
02:47:995 (2) - staring a slider at blue stick, especially with high DS, is really hard for player to catch the rhythm. i tried many times and i always got 100 on this note i think it's fine, since it fits with the music here; will leave it as is for now, but will change if somebody else brings it up
nice

[Normal]
nice k

skipped ez that's fine


nah, wait, cloud changed user name? yeah lol
Thanks for the mod!
MokouSmoke
Random guy from $modreqs
[General]
Personal preference, but you could flip all the background images horizontally so that you can see the lolis girls better in the song selection screen.
[Hard]
Nice map, just small suggestions below
  1. 00:08:164 (1) - small thing, but maybe start the 1.1x SV on this slider (and all other similar parts)
  2. 01:52:556 (2,3) - ctrl+g to give more emphasis to the stronger beats on 01:52:353 (1) and 01:52:961 (4)
  3. 02:27:624 (4,5) - I think slightly larger spacing (~1.9x) and sharper angle would play better. Like something similar to what you have at 02:14:651 (5,6)
  4. 02:56:407 (5) - maybe NC so visual effect matches song
  5. 03:19:414 - good place for triplet imo
[Normal]
Same thing, just small suggestions
  1. 00:19:313 (3,4,5) - I would make this less curved to help with flow http://puu.sh/lTaop/3062f50b8f.jpg
  2. 01:43:232 (5,6,1) - Copy the pattern from 01:41:610 (2,3,4) and use it here. Currently. it feels that (5,6,1) are spaced too far apart since they're in a line.
  3. 03:01:070 (2) - feels strange to have finish on end of slider and leave 03:01:678 (3) hanging. Adding a note at 03:01:880 - feels better (also follows vocal).
  4. 03:16:475 - add note here? not sure if that would make it too difficult, but the musical phrase ends at 03:19:516 - which would give player a short break after 4 measures of playing instead of 2.
  5. 03:22:961 - ^
  6. 03:28:840 (3,4) - prefer if you didn't stack here since notes sound different
[Cloud's Insane]
  1. 00:06:543 (5,6) - spacing too large for <4* map imo
  2. 01:05:225 - possible place for triplet
  3. 02:31:171 - ^
  4. 02:35:022 (3,4) - personal preference, but you could make this (and other similar places) into a kick slider instead for more funk.
  5. 02:41:002 (1) - maybe 1/2 slider + note instead to add some emphasis to 02:41:306 -
  6. 02:47:286 - don't really like the pause here, maybe add a triplet before the slider
  7. 02:56:205 - add note here to be consistent with rest of song (like 00:56:205 (1) - )
  8. 02:59:853 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1) - <3
  9. 03:13:029 (9,10) - felt the spacing was a little large here during my playthrough
  10. 03:17:286 (4) - I'd break this into 1/2 rhythms since you're doubling hitsound frequency in this section
  11. 03:29:448 - needs a note here imo
You're a good enough mapper that I'm sure easy diff is fine (don't feel like modding it lol)
Hope this helps and good luck with getting this ranked!
Topic Starter
Doormat

MokouSmoke wrote:

Random guy from $modreqs
[General]
Personal preference, but you could flip all the background images horizontally so that you can see the lolis girls better in the song selection screen. tried it, but it looks really really weird to me, so i'm gonna leave it as is
[Hard]
Nice map, just small suggestions below
  1. 00:08:164 (1) - small thing, but maybe start the 1.1x SV on this slider (and all other similar parts) i feel that making the 1.1x SV on at the beginning of the kiai time places a heavier emphasis there, so i'm going to leave it as is
  2. 01:52:556 (2,3) - ctrl+g to give more emphasis to the stronger beats on 01:52:353 (1) and 01:52:961 (4) nice idea!
  3. 02:27:624 (4,5) - I think slightly larger spacing (~1.9x) and sharper angle would play better. Like something similar to what you have at 02:14:651 (5,6) i moved the spacing, but i'm keeping the angle because i want it to be parallel to 02:28:637 (3)
  4. 02:56:407 (5) - maybe NC so visual effect matches song sure
  5. 03:19:414 - good place for triplet imo mm maybe; i'll leave it as is for now
[Normal]
Same thing, just small suggestions
  1. 00:19:313 (3,4,5) - I would make this less curved to help with flow http://puu.sh/lTaop/3062f50b8f.jpg sure
  2. 01:43:232 (5,6,1) - Copy the pattern from 01:41:610 (2,3,4) and use it here. Currently. it feels that (5,6,1) are spaced too far apart since they're in a line. sure
  3. 03:01:070 (2) - feels strange to have finish on end of slider and leave 03:01:678 (3) hanging. Adding a note at 03:01:880 - feels better (also follows vocal). yeah i was thinking of doing this anyways. however, i opted for using a slider kick instead of a circle
  4. 03:16:475 - add note here? not sure if that would make it too difficult, but the musical phrase ends at 03:19:516 - which would give player a short break after 4 measures of playing instead of 2. why not; i wanted the last chorus to be a little bit more difficult anyways
  5. 03:22:961 - ^ done
  6. 03:28:840 (3,4) - prefer if you didn't stack here since notes sound different sure
You're a good enough mapper that I'm sure easy diff is fine (don't feel like modding it lol) you're too kind ;w;
Hope this helps and good luck with getting this ranked!
Thanks for the mod!
Little

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Cloud]
01:57:218 (1) - should have higher DS for the crash, 01:56:407 (3) - 3.3x b4 and 1.6x after, make no much sense I think this part is fine, actually, because (2,3) is direct flow, it doesn't feel that big. I want the smaller spacing (3,1) to separate the phrases.
03:26:002 (5) - or nc? Switched nc.
nice

nah, wait, cloud changed user name? Yeah, changed.

MokouSmoke wrote:

[Cloud's Insane]
  1. 00:06:543 (5,6) - spacing too large for <4* map imo lol it's fine. the map affects the star rating... not the other way around.
  2. 01:05:225 - possible place for triplet no.
  3. 02:31:171 - ^ no.
  4. 02:35:022 (3,4) - personal preference, but you could make this (and other similar places) into a kick slider instead for more funk. I prefer the triples. They are more comfortable to play. I had kick sliders before, but it made it too easy to slider break with dt.
  5. 02:41:002 (1) - maybe 1/2 slider + note instead to add some emphasis to 02:41:306 - keep for now.
  6. 02:47:286 - don't really like the pause here, maybe add a triplet before the slider Added triple.
  7. 02:56:205 - add note here to be consistent with rest of song (like 00:56:205 (1) - ) No vocal here.
  8. 02:59:853 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1) - <3
  9. 03:13:029 (9,10) - felt the spacing was a little large here during my playthrough Decreased a little.
  10. 03:17:286 (4) - I'd break this into 1/2 rhythms since you're doubling hitsound frequency in this section Prefer the 1/1 slider. Fits the song better imo. Better emphasis.
  11. 03:29:448 - needs a note here imo no.
Thanks.

http://puu.sh/lTvJK/5629f33533.zip
DahplA
[Cloud's Insane]
  1. 02:47:995 (2) - Compared to the previous iteration of this pattern 02:41:509 (2) - , this slider has very low spacing to the point where I'd thought it landed on the red tick. It's a bit inconsistent for me, so I suggest spacing it out more similarly.
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:907 (2) - I don't quite understand why these notes have more spacing than the finishing notes at 00:20:732 (4) - . The later one is much more stronger both in beat (clap against whistle) and vocal (as it finishes on a high note). I recommend reworking your spacings on all of these patterns.
  2. 02:33:705 (4) - Strong cymbal sound here, so should be a finish.
  3. 02:36:948 (3,4) - I really do think it's a good opportunity emphasise the guitar and map the red ticks here. You've done it in a similar instance here 02:39:583 (1,2) - , and since it only appears in one part it would be a waste to let it slide.
-

The rest of the mapset is very well done. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Doormat

DahplA wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:907 (2) - I don't quite understand why these notes have more spacing than the finishing notes at 00:20:732 (4) - . The later one is much more stronger both in beat (clap against whistle) and vocal (as it finishes on a high note). I recommend reworking your spacings on all of these patterns. it's to emphasize the finish that's on the (2). this isn't too flow-breaking, so i'll leave it as is for now
  2. 02:33:705 (4) - Strong cymbal sound here, so should be a finish. woops; fixed it
  3. 02:36:948 (3,4) - I really do think it's a good opportunity emphasise the guitar and map the red ticks here. You've done it in a similar instance here 02:39:583 (1,2) - , and since it only appears in one part it would be a waste to let it slide. i'm following the music box here, so no change for now. however, what you suggested isn't bad either, so i'll probably change it if somebody else suggests the same thing
-

The rest of the mapset is very well done. Good luck.
Thanks for the mod!
Originality
Well hello again! :D
/me listens to song all the way through multiple times before modding... then receives this from a friend
http://p1.i.ntere.st/6cc90c67be64dbbecc ... 18_480.jpg hnng...


[Easy]
00:08:164 (1) - hmm, consider mapping this, single circle is kinda nice here
- happens @ 01:02:083 (1) - too, this is just a suggestion, way you have it sounds fine too xd
- and @ 02:08:164 -
00:45:867 (3) - I don't see what you're mapping with the return part of this slider, there's a vocal it in the middle of it, but that's kinda weird, and next drum hit doesn't start till 00:47:489 (1) - How about this?
http://puu.sh/lUD9m/05b7c397ae.png
00:14:448 (3) - 01:07:961 (3) - Are these the same? I think they're hit sounded differently doe.
01:39:380 (2) - I kinda like this setup here. Emphasizes the hold on the last hit more compared to the first two notes, which are more like singles
http://puu.sh/lUDzL/b1d6697482.png
01:52:353 (3) - This is same as 45:867 I believe
03:15:867 (4) - This border line feels really close to 1
03:23:164 (1) - That's really close to HP bar, 0.o
03:29:651 (1) - You should put 1/16 death stream here.

[Normal]
00:25:394 (2) - This is a personal thing, but I don't like horizontal sliders along the bottom of the map. xd
00:37:151 - Any way you can map this note? like how you mapped 00:35:124 (2) - I tried messing with it but couldn't come up with much that wasn't the exact same as the first part, which your mapped second part offers more diversity.
00:46:475 (6) - would move this out from under since it's a new note on vocals/drums
01:01:678 (1) - AHA! You mapped this here, but not in the easy. I would carry this over to easy xd
01:09:786 (3) - hmm, I dunno how I feel about these being buried. There was one earlier in the song too. Notes like 01:08:164 (6) - feel great underneath, other times it's kinda weird. I like it how it plays currently but other people might comment on it.
01:34:516 (2) - That's really close to HP bar
01:47:895 (2) - & 02:32:286 (3) - Further commenting on 1:09, these aren't stacked, but they're individual vocal/drum notes, kinda feels inconsistent
02:52:353 - There's nothing to map here, but it does make flow nice... prob fine on normal
02:53:975 (1) - I like these unburied, this is kinda neat...
http://puu.sh/lUKKm/08c6896a7c.png
http://puu.sh/lUKKY/3376c81c8d.png

[Hard]
00:09:178 (3) - The jump between 3 and 4 just doesn't look right, I think it's the slider (3)... if you move the little square to the middle it fixes it
00:20:326 (2) - You know what I love? When people turn off distance snap and using spacing for emphasis. <3
00:32:894 (1) - I saw this spacing in another map for a section just like that and thought it was interesting, no change needed, but this is kinda neat
http://puu.sh/lULec/bae0a40645.png
01:39:380 (1) - Same as 32:894
03:26:002 (5) - I feel bad for the people that will FC up to this point then miss stream. Fits really well. :D
03:29:651 (1) - Would move this out from underneath for emphasis
This difficulty looks really nice.

Hope this helped, best of luck getting ranked. Oh, and a star for picking this great song. xd
Topic Starter
Doormat

Originality wrote:

Well hello again! :D
/me listens to song all the way through multiple times before modding... then receives this from a friend
http://p1.i.ntere.st/6cc90c67be64dbbecc ... 18_480.jpg hnng...


[Easy]
00:08:164 (1) - hmm, consider mapping this, single circle is kinda nice here
- happens @ 01:02:083 (1) - too, this is just a suggestion, way you have it sounds fine too xd
- and @ 02:08:164 - added all three circles
00:45:867 (3) - I don't see what you're mapping with the return part of this slider, there's a vocal it in the middle of it, but that's kinda weird, and next drum hit doesn't start till 00:47:489 (1) - How about this? it's landing on a drum sound, no change here
http://puu.sh/lUD9m/05b7c397ae.png
00:14:448 (3) - 01:07:961 (3) - Are these the same? I think they're hit sounded differently doe. hitsounds make sense though, so i'll leave as is for now
01:39:380 (2) - I kinda like this setup here. Emphasizes the hold on the last hit more compared to the first two notes, which are more like singles i think this is currently fine; also, there's no beat on the fourth beat in this bar, so having a 1/1 slider on the third beat wouldn't really be the best idea
http://puu.sh/lUDzL/b1d6697482.png
01:52:353 (3) - This is same as 45:867 I believe yeah it's landing on the percussion, so no change
03:15:867 (4) - This border line feels really close to 1 i think it's fine
03:23:164 (1) - That's really close to HP bar, 0.o i think it's fine, so long as it's not obstructing the hp bar
03:29:651 (1) - You should put 1/16 death stream here. for an easy? yeah no

[Normal]
00:25:394 (2) - This is a personal thing, but I don't like horizontal sliders along the bottom of the map. xd b-but it's not horizontal, it's curved ;w;
00:37:151 - Any way you can map this note? like how you mapped 00:35:124 (2) - I tried messing with it but couldn't come up with much that wasn't the exact same as the first part, which your mapped second part offers more diversity. i think it's fine without the circle, no change for now
00:46:475 (6) - would move this out from under since it's a new note on vocals/drums again, i think it's fine
01:01:678 (1) - AHA! You mapped this here, but not in the easy. I would carry this over to easy xd yeahhh
01:09:786 (3) - hmm, I dunno how I feel about these being buried. There was one earlier in the song too. Notes like 01:08:164 (6) - feel great underneath, other times it's kinda weird. I like it how it plays currently but other people might comment on it. again, i think these are fine the way they are
01:34:516 (2) - That's really close to HP bar not too big a deal, i think
01:47:895 (2) - & 02:32:286 (3) - Further commenting on 1:09, these aren't stacked, but they're individual vocal/drum notes, kinda feels inconsistent it's intent was to be similar to 00:41:408 (2,3,4), so i'll leave it as is for now
02:52:353 - There's nothing to map here, but it does make flow nice... prob fine on normal there's a faint beat here, so i think it should be fine
02:53:975 (1) - I like these unburied, this is kinda neat... i prefer them buried; in my opinion it places an emphasis on that single spot
http://puu.sh/lUKKm/08c6896a7c.png
http://puu.sh/lUKKY/3376c81c8d.png

[Hard]
00:09:178 (3) - The jump between 3 and 4 just doesn't look right, I think it's the slider (3)... if you move the little square to the middle it fixes it think i fixed it
00:20:326 (2) - You know what I love? When people turn off distance snap and using spacing for emphasis. <3 i just wanted a cross pattern here lol
00:32:894 (1) - I saw this spacing in another map for a section just like that and thought it was interesting, no change needed, but this is kinda neat i prefer the emphasis on the one spot, so no change
http://puu.sh/lULec/bae0a40645.png
01:39:380 (1) - Same as 32:894 ^
03:26:002 (5) - I feel bad for the people that will FC up to this point then miss stream. Fits really well. :D
03:29:651 (1) - Would move this out from underneath for emphasis moved the (1)
This difficulty looks really nice.

Hope this helped, best of luck getting ranked. Oh, and a star for picking this great song. xd
Thanks for the mod and star!
Bara-
Hi

[General]
Easy -> • Object is unsnapped:
02:20:936 {140936} Slider edge

[Easy]
00:00:462 (1,2,3,4) - Why not try to make them symmetrical?
00:41:002 (1) - Why not differentiate the finishes? imo it's better if the head gets softfinish, and the tail gets normalfinish (Same for Normal/Hard)
01:02:083 (1) - 3/2 feels out of place, 1/1 follows the song better
01:47:489 (1) - Why not differentiate the finishes? imo it's better if the head gets softfinish, and the tail gets normalfinish (Same for Normal/Hard)

Nice diff

[Normal]
00:18:299 (1,5,6) - Imperfect stacks/overlaps thingie. When (1,6) ae stacked it probably is fine
03:01:678 (3,4,5) - Too much 1/2 sliders after eachother feels weird, and quite hard
03:27:624 (2,3,4) - Spacing feels weird for normal, as (4) is close to the previous object, and visible when (2) disappears, why may create a false sense of rhythm
Overall, a good diff, but I'm not a fan of those stacked 1/2 circles (under the sldiertails)

[Hard]
00:11:813 (1) - Hits HPBar
00:18:299 (1,2) - Plays pretty weird, why not move this to 192:200 (or similar) as it still creates a jump, but it gives a much better flow!
00:41:205 - This gap feels really weird, as everything is 1/2 (or 1/4), no 1/1 is used except this gap
02:31:880 (2) - See 2 above
Good

[Cloud]
Seems fine, (Quickly checked it as I was only modding a few diffs), but the quick reverses, such as 03:29:043 (5) - should be in 1/6

Good luck
Topic Starter
Doormat

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi

[General]
Easy -> • Object is unsnapped:
02:20:936 {140936} Slider edge that's weird, aimod didn't pick up this one.. fixed it i guess

[Easy]
00:00:462 (1,2,3,4) - Why not try to make them symmetrical? 00:00:462 (1,2,3,4,1) - is a i'm pentagon shape, so probably not going to change this
00:41:002 (1) - Why not differentiate the finishes? imo it's better if the head gets softfinish, and the tail gets normalfinish (Same for Normal/Hard) gonna talk this through with Little since the hitsounds at that point are the same in all difficulties, and i'd rather it be consistent throughout all difficulties
01:02:083 (1) - 3/2 feels out of place, 1/1 follows the song better i think the 3/2 is more fitting since it hits the vocals
01:47:489 (1) - Why not differentiate the finishes? imo it's better if the head gets softfinish, and the tail gets normalfinish (Same for Normal/Hard) same comment; will need to discuss with Little first

Nice diff

[Normal]
00:18:299 (1,5,6) - Imperfect stacks/overlaps thingie. When (1,6) ae stacked it probably is fine fixed the stack here
03:01:678 (3,4,5) - Too much 1/2 sliders after eachother feels weird, and quite hard i think it's fine since it's the last chorus, but i might nerf it if other people point this out as well
03:27:624 (2,3,4) - Spacing feels weird for normal, as (4) is close to the previous object, and visible when (2) disappears, why may create a false sense of rhythm moved this around to avoid confusion, hopefully it reads better now
Overall, a good diff, but I'm not a fan of those stacked 1/2 circles (under the sldiertails)

[Hard]
00:11:813 (1) - Hits HPBar b-but it isn't even touching the hp bar on my screen? (double checked using the default skin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4170516)
00:18:299 (1,2) - Plays pretty weird, why not move this to 192:200 (or similar) as it still creates a jump, but it gives a much better flow! tried it, but it doesn't give as much emphasis to the finish on the (2) in my opinion
00:41:205 - This gap feels really weird, as everything is 1/2 (or 1/4), no 1/1 is used except this gap the gap is there to accentuate the finishes; if other people point this out and don't like it, i'll probably replace it with a 1/1 slider or something
02:31:880 (2) - See 2 above same answer there applies to here
Good

Good luck
Thanks for the mod, Baraatje!

edit: fixed hitsounds; applied to all difficulties
Little
Misure
Nice map, good luck! :)
-Nya-
Heyo~ From my M4M queue.

General:
  1. Why do you use four BG’s that look exactly the same? Lol. Maybe rather use BG’s that are different?
  2. You can change audio lead-in to 2000ms, just to be safe.

Cloud’s Insane:
  1. 00:05:732 (2) –I suggest you rather replace this repeat slider with a normal slider to be consistent with 00:04:110 (2,2) – Seems a bit sudden if you at first used normal sliders and then suddenly a repeat slider.
  2. 00:12:016 –I can hear a vocal here. So imo it would be better to do this instead:
  3. 00:15:461 (2) –I don’t think it’s a good idea to stack since it prevents smooth flow.
  4. 00:31:880 (3) –Ctrl+J this slider. Better flow imo.
  5. 00:38:975 (6) –I don’t really like the placement of this circle. I suggest avoiding the overlap with 00:38:570 (4) –
  6. 00:57:016 (3) –Again, the stacking thing.
  7. 00:59:246 (2) –Same as 00:05:732 (2) –
  8. 01:13:029 (4) –The stacking thing again.
  9. 01:20:934 (5) –Maybe add new combo here, since so far no combo had been this long.
  10. 01:48:502 (5) –This slider doesn’t follow the rhythm that nicely imo. Maybe try this:
  11. 01:50:934 – and 01:51:745 –You miss important vocals here. I think it would be better to split that slider up into a short slider and a circle to map the vocals.
  12. 02:03:502 (3) –Stacking thing, etc.
  13. 02:05:732 (2) –Same as first suggestion.
  14. 02:09:178 (3,5,2,4) –This looks a bit bad, since all these objects are crammed into one space. I would suggest that you try avoiding them overlapping each other by using the rest of the grid.
  15. 02:36:948 (7) –Add new combo? This combo is longer than the rest.
  16. 02:57:624 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –This just looks . . . bad. Lol.
  17. 03:09:380 (6) –New combo?
  18. 03:12:624 (7) –New combo here. That combo looks quite long and causes inconsistency.

Hard:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. You don’t have a SB.
  2. 00:14:651 (3) –Stacking notes like this sometimes prevents smooth flow. I suggest to rather unstack.
  3. 00:18:907 (2) –Placing this circle here causes bad flow. This placement is sometimes not even recommended in an Insane, so I suggest you try to place this circle somewhere else.
  4. 00:53:164 (3) –Rather place this slider in the left side of the grid to avoid cramming the notes into one space.
  5. 00:56:407 (4) –New combo here?
  6. 01:08:164 (5) –Again, the stacking thing.
  7. 01:14:651 (7) –I don’t like this placement. Either stack it on 01:14:245 (5) – or avoid the overlap.
  8. 01:17:489 (3,4,1) –This spacing looks inconsistent . . . or larger than the rest.
  9. 01:25:394 (2) –Same as 00:18:907 (2) –
  10. 02:14:651 (5) –Stacking thing again.
  11. 02:21:137 (7) –Same as 01:14:651 (7) –

I didn’t point out every little thing, since that would be silly. So I suggest just going over the diff again and also change the similar stuff that you changed at other places.

Normal:
  1. Uncheck Widescreen support.
  2. 00:09:786 (3) –I would never suggest stacking like this in an easier diff. It would be best to space that circle normally. There are a lot of other places as well where you did this but I’m not gonna point out every single one. AiMod points some of them out too.
  3. 01:29:245 (3,6) –There are a lot of places where you overlapped, but for some reason this one stood out to me since it looks so unnecessary, so I suggest you try to avoid the overlap.

Easy:
  1. 00:19:313 (2) –Be careful of using repeat sliders like this in an Easy. I suggest you doublecheck with a QAT or BN member if they’re fine.
  2. 00:48:705 (2,4) –I remember that Bakari sometimes have a problem with stacks like this since it can be difficult for beginners to clearly see this note: 00:50:326 (4) – To be safe I suggest avoiding the stack or doublechecking with someone.
  3. 01:55:191 (2,4) -^

Overall this is a pretty nice mapset.
Good Luck getting this ranked~!
Topic Starter
Doormat

Misure wrote:

Nice map, good luck! :)
awaaaa thanks for the star! :o

-Nya- wrote:

Heyo~ From my M4M queue.

General:
  1. Why do you use four BG’s that look exactly the same? Lol. Maybe rather use BG’s that are different? explained this already, but here's the explanation again. the show this song is from presents itself as a slice of life "cute girls doing cute things at school" anime, but is slowly revealed to be a post-zombie apocalypse survival anime about these girls trying to survive. as the series goes on, it starts to get darker and darker to reflect the true nature of the show, which is why the difficulty starts off being bright and colourful in the Easy difficulty, then slowly starts to lose its colour as the difficulty increases, and then changes to show the post-apocalyptic setting in the hardest difficulty
  2. You can change audio lead-in to 2000ms, just to be safe. mm i think the current lead-in should be fine

Hard:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. You don’t have a SB. could've sworn i already unchecked it for all difficulties lol woops. fixed
  2. 00:14:651 (3) –Stacking notes like this sometimes prevents smooth flow. I suggest to rather unstack. it doesn't seem too flow-breaking to me, but i'll consider changing it if somebody else suggests unstacking it as well
  3. 00:18:907 (2) –Placing this circle here causes bad flow. This placement is sometimes not even recommended in an Insane, so I suggest you try to place this circle somewhere else. again, i don't think it's too flow-breaking, but baraatje also suggested i move it, so i'll probably do so it i get this suggestion one more time
  4. 00:53:164 (3) –Rather place this slider in the left side of the grid to avoid cramming the notes into one space. it's similar in effect to 00:49:110 (1,2,3) - , so i'm gonna keep the stack for now
  5. 00:56:407 (4) –New combo here? doesn't feel right since it's a part of the same phrase
  6. 01:08:164 (5) –Again, the stacking thing. same comment there applies to here
  7. 01:14:651 (7) –I don’t like this placement. Either stack it on 01:14:245 (5) – or avoid the overlap. fine; stacked the (5) and (7)
  8. 01:17:489 (3,4,1) –This spacing looks inconsistent . . . or larger than the rest. i don't see any problems here
  9. 01:25:394 (2) –Same as 00:18:907 (2) – same comment there applies to here
  10. 02:14:651 (5) –Stacking thing again. ^
  11. 02:21:137 (7) –Same as 01:14:651 (7) – yeah i stacked this as well

I didn’t point out every little thing, since that would be silly. So I suggest just going over the diff again and also change the similar stuff that you changed at other places.

Normal:
  1. Uncheck Widescreen support. done
  2. 00:09:786 (3) –I would never suggest stacking like this in an easier diff. It would be best to space that circle normally. There are a lot of other places as well where you did this but I’m not gonna point out every single one. AiMod points some of them out too. yeahh, i tried fixing it many times but aimod would always register it as being unstacked. decided to unstack most of them
  3. 01:29:245 (3,6) –There are a lot of places where you overlapped, but for some reason this one stood out to me since it looks so unnecessary, so I suggest you try to avoid the overlap. ok i think i fixed it

Easy:
  1. 00:19:313 (2) –Be careful of using repeat sliders like this in an Easy. I suggest you doublecheck with a QAT or BN member if they’re fine. i agree, though i think it should be fine for the most part
  2. 00:48:705 (2,4) –I remember that Bakari sometimes have a problem with stacks like this since it can be difficult for beginners to clearly see this note: 00:50:326 (4) – To be safe I suggest avoiding the stack or doublechecking with someone. ^
  3. 01:55:191 (2,4) -^ ^

Overall this is a pretty nice mapset.
Good Luck getting this ranked~!
Thanks for the mod Nya!
Little
-Nya-

-Nya- wrote:

Cloud’s Insane:
  1. 00:05:732 (2) –I suggest you rather replace this repeat slider with a normal slider to be consistent with 00:04:110 (2,2) – Seems a bit sudden if you at first used normal sliders and then suddenly a repeat slider. No, I want to use the reverse slider for increased energy.
  2. 00:12:016 –I can hear a vocal here. So imo it would be better to do this instead: ok
  3. 00:15:461 (2) –I don’t think it’s a good idea to stack since it prevents smooth flow. It flows fine, and the purpose of this stack is to increase the emphasis on (3), but i guess it's fine to unstack it too.
  4. 00:31:880 (3) –Ctrl+J this slider. Better flow imo. That makes the flow a lot worse.
  5. 00:38:975 (6) –I don’t really like the placement of this circle. I suggest avoiding the overlap with 00:38:570 (4) – It's fine.
  6. 00:57:016 (3) –Again, the stacking thing. No, this flow is good.
  7. 00:59:246 (2) –Same as 00:05:732 (2) –
  8. 01:13:029 (4) –The stacking thing again.
  9. 01:20:934 (5) –Maybe add new combo here, since so far no combo had been this long. No.
  10. 01:48:502 (5) –This slider doesn’t follow the rhythm that nicely imo. Maybe try this: No. It does what I want it to do, which is to put emphasis on the bass, where the most interesting rhythm is.
  11. 01:50:934 – and 01:51:745 –You miss important vocals here. I think it would be better to split that slider up into a short slider and a circle to map the vocals. Vocals are not important here.
  12. 02:03:502 (3) –Stacking thing, etc.
  13. 02:05:732 (2) –Same as first suggestion.
  14. 02:09:178 (3,5,2,4) –This looks a bit bad, since all these objects are crammed into one space. I would suggest that you try avoiding them overlapping each other by using the rest of the grid. It's fine.
  15. 02:36:948 (7) –Add new combo? This combo is longer than the rest.
  16. 02:57:624 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –This just looks . . . bad. Lol. ???
  17. 03:09:380 (6) –New combo?
  18. 03:12:624 (7) –New combo here. That combo looks quite long and causes inconsistency.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/m6RPz/0203116f01.zip
lit120
yo. i'll just focus on loli little guy's diff

[General]
  1. dat 2 different BGs though LOL
[Loli's Insane]
  1. try to think about the use of finish on some notes. some of them didn't make any sense at all imo :/
  2. 00:00:462 (1,1,1,1) - well played for slider speed changes LOL
  3. 00:08:164 (1) - remove finish
  4. 00:11:813 (1,2) - woops, wrong hitsound here. (2) should be clap, not (1)'s tail
  5. 00:14:043 (4) - due to its downbeat, use finish here
  6. 00:20:732 (4) - remove finish
  7. 00:27:218 (4) - finish?
  8. 00:31:880 (3) - remove finish
  9. 00:33:299 (2) - finish again, really?
  10. 00:53:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - dat copy paste though, but i get it why you did this LOL
  11. 01:01:576 (1) - remove finish
  12. 01:08:265 (6) - this note doesn't make any sense for me
  13. 01:14:448 (8) - finish?
  14. 01:33:705 (5) - finish?
  15. 01:34:211 (7) - this doesn't make any sense for me here
  16. 01:46:880 (4,5) - ctrl + G ?
  17. 01:49:921 (4) - wrong hitsound for clap. it's not this note. it should be 01:50:124 (5) - from white tick
  18. 02:20:934 (6) - finish?
  19. 02:27:725 (6) - this one too
  20. 02:34:516 (1) - why finish? it doesn't have a downbeat here
  21. 02:41:407 - i feel bad for skipping a note here
  22. 02:47:894 - ^
  23. 03:12:826 (8) - finish?
  24. 03:19:617 (7) - same thing what i said about this
Little
-Hakurei-

-Hakurei- wrote:

[Loli's Insane]
  1. try to think about the use of finish on some notes. some of them didn't make any sense at all imo :/ My hitsound patterns are based on the drums in the song.
  2. 00:00:462 (1,1,1,1) - well played for slider speed changes LOL
  3. 00:08:164 (1) - remove finish Why? Anyway, I'll change this to a normal-finish because it sounds better that way.
  4. 00:11:813 (1,2) - woops, wrong hitsound here. (2) should be clap, not (1)'s tail Yeah, I forgot to re-copy the hitsounds after I changed the rhythm.
  5. 00:14:043 (4) - due to its downbeat, use finish here Fixed.
  6. 00:20:732 (4) - remove finish Changed to normal-finish
  7. 00:27:218 (4) - finish? ok
  8. 00:31:880 (3) - remove finish It fits imo.
  9. 00:33:299 (2) - finish again, really? yes?
  10. 00:53:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - dat copy paste though, but i get it why you did this LOL What's wrong with copy paste?
  11. 01:01:576 (1) - remove finish Changed to normal-finish
  12. 01:08:265 (6) - this note doesn't make any sense for me Why? It follows instrument.
  13. 01:14:448 (8) - finish? Too much.
  14. 01:33:705 (5) - finish? Fixed.
  15. 01:34:211 (7) - this doesn't make any sense for me here Why?
  16. 01:46:880 (4,5) - ctrl + G ? No.
  17. 01:49:921 (4) - wrong hitsound for clap. it's not this note. it should be 01:50:124 (5) - from white tick Changed pattern for this part.
  18. 02:20:934 (6) - finish? Too much.
  19. 02:27:725 (6) - this one too No.
  20. 02:34:516 (1) - why finish? it doesn't have a downbeat here Removed.
  21. 02:41:407 - i feel bad for skipping a note here I don't.
  22. 02:47:894 - ^
  23. 03:12:826 (8) - finish?
  24. 03:19:617 (7) - same thing what i said about this
Thanks.

Here's my diff and hitsounds diff: http://puu.sh/m8rVd/0854fea791.zip
Topic Starter
Doormat
Not home right now, will update map when I have time

edit (2015.12.26): updated hitsounds and the insane difficulty

-Hakurei- wrote:

yo. i'll just focus on loli little guy's diff

[General]
  1. dat 2 different BGs though LOL
it's fitting though ;)
Cheonshi
Caution: Im New maybe everything is wrong just my opinion in most cases:

Easy and Normal: Good to read and to play

Hard
02:10:191 (1,2) - i dont get on what u decide if a slider is curved or straight looked pretty random to me not especially this second but overall dont know if you like it as it is or im blind and dont see the system

02:24:786 (1) - you habe 1 kick slider in each chorus but i dont really get why when there are no else and its not even like a sillabill is returning @ that second i think either u should add more kick slider or change this but maybe its just me

its not really easy to find more stuff looks all on beat and was smooth to play so... seems good

Insane:
00:35:630 (4,5) - 00:37:252 (4,5) - here doubles 00:38:164 (2,3) - here not so maybe do a at least a small jump because right after it you do the jump anyway: 00:38:772 (5,6,7) -

01:56:002 (2,3) - bigger spacing on purpose compared to before? becuz e.g 01:58:029 (3,4) - very small spacing few secs later and song still pretty slow

02:19:718 (1,2,3) - im not sure if that overlap is too hard for someone whos playing that starrange but this could be nonsense

02:39:583 (2,3) - 02:46:070 (2,3,4,5) - very weird to play first time it fits the song but doenst has to be so hard for not even 4 stars imo

02:41:002 (1,2) - this between the beat mapping is in the song right but i dont know if everyone would play after this than rather the beat like i checked placing a longer slider and a circle would also work but i think you can keep it if you like it.

03:00:461 (1,2) - i wanted to jump here at my first try playing this and felt like super stopped by staying on place

03:13:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i really enjoyed everything from here on till end =)
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