m4m
[General]
Add dubstep to tags
[Shadow]
00:09:913 (2,3) - objects too close, move 2 more top left
00:10:430 (4) - can make this a little better
00:18:017 (1) - improve blanket? with these 00:17:672 (4,3) -
00:25:172 (2,3) - kinda unexpected, expected tripple
00:40:086 (1,3) - blanket?
00:45:603 (1) - lol.
01:08:017 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing here seems a little random to me, I mean these 01:08:189 (3,4) - are most spaced when they are weakest sounds
01:08:706 (6) - extend this to downbeat and all the ones later 01:14:223 (6) - here you can keep the lenght but add note on dowbeat since it's stronger than the one before
01:25:603 (1) - move this a little further now the movement from big jump to this small is weird 02:09:568 (6,1) - here is much better
01:25:430 (5) - according to your logic this should be NC
01:30:086 (4,5,6) - line paterns are bad to play if they have different spacing
02:01:465 (1) - this one isn't really in the middle of slider if that's what you were aiming for
02:12:327 (2) - a little too spaced since you moved really slow on slider then you make it really fast
hm interesting map, but recheck your blankets, most of them can be improved. Also your NCs are questionable
[Insane]
00:04:741 - you didn't map this, but previously you did
00:06:120 - ^
00:16:637 (1,2) - imo make the shape more alike
00:22:154 (1) - music doesn't get any calmer here, not sure if the voice is good enough reason to pause
00:45:603 (1) - xd
00:35:948 (1,2) - no reason to space them this much
00:46:292- slider?
00:47:499 (2) - slider should start here not on the tick after.
01:00:948 (1) - add green line 5 % voulme is no
01:02:154 (5) - change volume
01:06:292 (1) - your skipping over an important beat here and there isn't even a slider tick there
01:22:154 (3) - slider ends on strong beat, might want to reconsider
01:50:430 (1) - if you change the one before do here too
01:58:361 (5,6,1) - differently spaced line is never a good idea
02:06:120 (3,4) - the angle here tho, try rotating slider more
02:06:982 (1) - doesn't fit
[Hard]
00:00:775 (3) - what's with the jump here
00:09:051 (3) - uh I see you do this kind of thing everywhere... if you want a jump to this note make a sharper angle, now it's cancer to move the cursor in same direction with different speed. Examples of good 00:22:672 (2,3) - 00:25:430 (2,3) - 00:30:948 (2,3) -
01:09:051 - 01:14:568 - same with your hardest diff
pretty much just the line with different spacing issue
[Normal]
00:02:154 (4,1) - improve blankets
00:58:103 (1) - there are suppose to be breaks before next spinner in normal and easy diffs, I'm unsure about repeating spinners though.
01:09:051 - same as other diffs. If I played to music I'd definetely click this beat
01:43:879 (5) - this overlap can confuse new players.
again recheck blankets, most of them can be improved
[Easy]
00:05:603 (1,2) - blanket
00:08:361 (1,2) - doesn't seem to play very well with the music
00:44:223 - add note?
00:58:103 (1) - same as normal
there's a bunch of useless green lines that you should remove etc. 01:04:913 - 00:44:234-
01:14:568- same with other diffs
01:34:223 (2) - avoid overlap imo
02:09:741 (1) - ^
yeah recheck blankets here too
That's it. Good luck!
[General]
Add dubstep to tags
[Shadow]
00:09:913 (2,3) - objects too close, move 2 more top left
00:10:430 (4) - can make this a little better
00:18:017 (1) - improve blanket? with these 00:17:672 (4,3) -
00:25:172 (2,3) - kinda unexpected, expected tripple
00:40:086 (1,3) - blanket?
00:45:603 (1) - lol.
01:08:017 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing here seems a little random to me, I mean these 01:08:189 (3,4) - are most spaced when they are weakest sounds
01:08:706 (6) - extend this to downbeat and all the ones later 01:14:223 (6) - here you can keep the lenght but add note on dowbeat since it's stronger than the one before
01:25:603 (1) - move this a little further now the movement from big jump to this small is weird 02:09:568 (6,1) - here is much better
01:25:430 (5) - according to your logic this should be NC
01:30:086 (4,5,6) - line paterns are bad to play if they have different spacing
02:01:465 (1) - this one isn't really in the middle of slider if that's what you were aiming for
02:12:327 (2) - a little too spaced since you moved really slow on slider then you make it really fast
hm interesting map, but recheck your blankets, most of them can be improved. Also your NCs are questionable
[Insane]
00:04:741 - you didn't map this, but previously you did
00:06:120 - ^
00:16:637 (1,2) - imo make the shape more alike
00:22:154 (1) - music doesn't get any calmer here, not sure if the voice is good enough reason to pause
00:45:603 (1) - xd
00:35:948 (1,2) - no reason to space them this much
00:46:292- slider?
00:47:499 (2) - slider should start here not on the tick after.
01:00:948 (1) - add green line 5 % voulme is no
01:02:154 (5) - change volume
01:06:292 (1) - your skipping over an important beat here and there isn't even a slider tick there
01:22:154 (3) - slider ends on strong beat, might want to reconsider
01:50:430 (1) - if you change the one before do here too
01:58:361 (5,6,1) - differently spaced line is never a good idea
02:06:120 (3,4) - the angle here tho, try rotating slider more
02:06:982 (1) - doesn't fit
[Hard]
00:00:775 (3) - what's with the jump here
00:09:051 (3) - uh I see you do this kind of thing everywhere... if you want a jump to this note make a sharper angle, now it's cancer to move the cursor in same direction with different speed. Examples of good 00:22:672 (2,3) - 00:25:430 (2,3) - 00:30:948 (2,3) -
01:09:051 - 01:14:568 - same with your hardest diff
pretty much just the line with different spacing issue
[Normal]
00:02:154 (4,1) - improve blankets
00:58:103 (1) - there are suppose to be breaks before next spinner in normal and easy diffs, I'm unsure about repeating spinners though.
01:09:051 - same as other diffs. If I played to music I'd definetely click this beat
01:43:879 (5) - this overlap can confuse new players.
again recheck blankets, most of them can be improved
[Easy]
00:05:603 (1,2) - blanket
00:08:361 (1,2) - doesn't seem to play very well with the music
00:44:223 - add note?
00:58:103 (1) - same as normal
there's a bunch of useless green lines that you should remove etc. 01:04:913 - 00:44:234-
01:14:568- same with other diffs
01:34:223 (2) - avoid overlap imo
02:09:741 (1) - ^
yeah recheck blankets here too
That's it. Good luck!