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SHADIC_ wrote:

Hi! M4M from my Queue!

SF's Insane

First thing, the star difficulty is way too high for being the next difficulty after the 2.78 star hard. Now for the rest of the mod. i dont no
00:35:498 (4,5,6,7,1) - why the distance between 7 and 1? distance fix but, newcombo suitable
00:38:325 (1,2) - blanket pointed in blanket
00:40:367 (4,5,6) - wat... 00:40:524 (5,6,1) - consept
00:56:702 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - why? try either stacking the circles with the slider end or something similar. the way it is now just doesn't flow right.
circle changing the short slider
01:02:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - again... wat? pattern changing pattern changing


Other than those things, I see no real issues! Good luck getting the map ranked and happy beatmapping!

osu file format v14

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Title:Halcyon
TitleUnicode:Halcyon
Artist:xi
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Creator:_ Hatsune Miku
Version:SF's Insane
Source:BMS
Tags:xi Halcyon yama-ko.net Sky Future
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Lily Bread wrote:

hi, m4m from my queue.

[General]
00:24:503 - add a spinner from here to - 00:27:016 -? - eh.. is not good,

[Easy]
00:51:519 (5,7) -
you should avoid any visible overlap in Easy diff, unless it can't be avoided due to DS.
this is much better imo. - change other pettern

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http://image17-c.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20151112/15/17820113020151112155157087.jpg?565x524_120

01:28:587 (1) - in easy diff, sliders that repeats over 1 times is not good. don't want to map every music in Easy diff, you must ignore some music or "overlap" them with slider. for example, change this repeat slider to a long slider from - 01:28:587 - to - 01:29:530 - . - Fixed

00:53:718 (7) - end of this slider drifted. - i hold on

[Normal]
same as Easy, sliders that repeats over 1 times is not good. change them into one slider + one circle, or one 1/1 slider + two circles. -well.. fixed some

SHADIC_ wrote:

Hi! M4M from my Queue!

General

I would love to see some custom colors. The background looks fantastic but right now the colors for the hitcircles are really bland and just default... Try putting in some colors like this, or this, or maybe even this. Other than that, please check AIMod and fix the kiai issues...

Easy

00:47:121 (1,2,3) - blanketing and overlap... Not Fixed
01:05:969 (3,4,5) - not sure if this is an okay thing to do...- Done
02:08:168 (4,5) - blanketing... Not Fixed
02:14:922 (3,4) - blanketing... Not Fixed

Normal

00:35:027 (2,3) - fix overlap plz- Fixed
00:41:938 (2,3) - blanketing...- Done
01:04:713 (2,3) - blanketing... - Done
01:23:561 (5,6) - blanketing... - Done
01:26:074 (7,8,9) - blanketing please Dx - Done
02:11:781 (2,3) - larger distance please... - Done
02:16:807 (2,3) - blanketing - Done
02:20:106 (2,1) - overlap

Hard

CS 4.7 for a hard is a big no no... Try using more circles and less sliders to increase the difficulty
There are some parts where the rhythm you're mapping is very basic and could easily by made more difficult. I will gladly mod the hard again once you've made changes to it, because as it stands right now, it should essentially be remapped. - i think is good now ... But change CS 4.7 -> 4.5


Other than those things, I see no real issues! Good luck getting the map ranked and happy beatmapping!

okay.. Thanks Guys to help my map

1. 00:37:226 (2,3,4,6) - try to make more space between these so they are not touching
2. 00:38:797 (2) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/lr8ez/ca437d570b.jpg
3. 00:40:367 (4,6) - dont let these overlap! It looks sloppy. how about stack at the end of 00:40:838 (1) -
4. 00:42:252 - NC's like this? http://puu.sh/lr8jv/3c8dad14d1.jpg
5. 00:44:922 (2) - move to 308,135 for a better blanket
6. 00:56:545 (5) - add NC here
7. 00:59:530 (4,5) - its hard to read this pause here since the spacing is same as 1/2. maybe add NC on 00:59:844 (5) - or just move it somewhere farther
8. 01:05:969 (1) - try moving it somewhere around here http://puu.sh/lr8Cg/8dc6e85bec.jpg so that it can have similar spacing as 01:04:791 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
9. 01:17:278 (3) - try changing this into just circle at 01:17:435 -
10. 01:32:514 (1,1,2,1) - spacing is very confusing since the first one is 1/2
11. 01:39:582 (1) - NC is not necessary here
12. 01:40:210 (1,2,3,4) - sloppy! check the spacing between them http://puu.sh/lr9Kr/54bd7f85fa.jpg
13. 01:42:723 (1) - No NC
14. 01:48:064 - NC like this http://puu.sh/lr91y/dc24d6a836.jpg
15. 01:59:373 (8,9) - I think a lot of people will be confused by this... dont stack them OR add a note at 01:59:451 -
16. 02:03:299 (3) - a little more to the right so it is not touching 02:02:514 (1) -
17. 02:28:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is very much harder than the rest of the map. Consider lessening the spacing or making it not as angular

1. 00:29:373 (1,2,3,4) - make all of them straight! you can use ctrl+c ctrl+v to copy paste them over.
2. 00:33:142 (1,2) - umm I think there is other ways to map this part of the song. a long slider like this is great on the Easy but when we get to Hard it should be something more challenging
3. 00:43:352 (1) - ^
4. 00:48:692 (1,3) - move it so they arent touching!
5. 01:31:100 (1,2) - please make them straight! compare http://puu.sh/lr9rS/a2212f3a08.jpg
6. 01:34:870 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:38:640 (1,1,1,1) - please map it not so many spinners
8. 01:54:818 (1,2) - ^
9. 01:59:373 (3,4,5,6) - more spacing between these?
10. 02:05:027 (1,2,3) -
11. 02:14:922 (1,2,3) - yeah you get the idea.. its not very fitting for a hard to have patterns like these. we should put more notes to make it more exciting

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue sorry for the delay

[General]
Maybe switch the order of the combo colors so 2 and 3 are not right next to each other since they are kind of similar. http://puu.sh/lr8ts/11a1e69289.png - >
[Hard]
Try AR=7~7.5 because the Normal has only AR 4

1. 00:29:373 (1,2,3,4) - make all of them straight! you can use ctrl+c ctrl+v to copy paste them over. - >placed straight
2. 00:33:142 (1,2) - umm I think there is other ways to map this part of the song. a long slider like this is great on the Easy but when we get to Hard it should be something more challenging - >change and add more node!
3. 00:43:352 (1) - ^ -> Fixed
4. 00:48:692 (1,3) - move it so they arent touching! -> Fixed
5. 01:31:100 (1,2) - please make them straight! compare http://puu.sh/lr9rS/a2212f3a08.jpg - > Now is Better
6. 01:34:870 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 01:38:640 (1,1,1,1) - please map it not so many spinners -> if i take long spinner , is not correct rhythm
8. 01:54:818 (1,2) - ^ -> Fixed
9. 01:59:373 (3,4,5,6) - more spacing between these? ->more spacing is super hard
10. 02:05:027 (1,2,3) - -> Fixed
11. 02:14:922 (1,2,3) - yeah you get the idea.. its not very fitting for a hard to have patterns like these. we should put more notes to make it more exciting -> Fixed

That's all from me, good luck!

MadHypnofrog wrote:

yooo

General

the gap between Hard and Insane is kinda big, I'll suggest making Hard and Normal both harder so the spread will be better

Easy

HP0 is pretty much low IMO, try increasing it


- things like these probably can't be ranked; if you want to do a pause between two kiais consider putting the first line earlier and snap both of them - > fixed
00:47:121 (1) - move this so the beginning of that slider won't overlap with 00:43:352 (1)
01:00:629 (4,5,1) - replace those with slider-circle maybe? IMO this is pretty much fast for easy - > fixed
01:37:383 (2) - move it to the right so it'll be the same as 01:33:613 (1,2,1) maybe?
01:49:948 (1), 01:52:462 (1) - those are the only two sliders with anchors, I'd change those
02:14:922 (1) - blanket the sliderend with 02:16:807 (2)?
02:27:959 (2,3,4) - same as 01:00:629 (4,5,1) - > fixed

Normal

the same green lines thing
SV 1.2 is too much IMO, tone it down to 1.0 or something like that - > fixed
00:36:284 (3) - fix the blanket - > fixed
01:33:613 (5) - make this one the same as 01:32:357 (4) or vice versa - > now is better
02:16:807 (2) - fix the blanket - > fixed
02:20:106 (2,1) - this overlap looks kinda bad, decreasing SV should fix that ->after This slider is spinner so is not bad
02:25:446 (1) - ^, don't really like the overlap with (3) -> is not good

Hard

green lines thing - > fixed[/color
CS 4.5? please, this is even higher than in Insane, decrease it to 4 - >
same with HP7.5, decrease it to 6 - > 7
same with AR8, decrease it to AR7 - > 7.5

00:35:812 (4) - tweak it so the beginning of that will be parallel to 00:36:912 (6), will look much better - > fixed to better
00:37:697 (1) - I'd rotate this one like this - > is better now

SPOILER

00:45:708 (4) - move this to the right a bit, something like (340, 288) - >done
01:22:304 (3) - don't really like the flow between this one and 01:21:362 (2), I'd do it like this - > fixed to better

SPOILER

01:27:645 (1) - not snapped - >done
why won't you also map something instead of those long sliders? they don't really fit in there IMO - maybe i change some long sliders

S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩예약

1. 00:52:776 (5) - Should be based on 1/4 beat instead of 1/3 beat.
2. 00:54:660 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above
3. 00:57:174 (4,5) - ^
4. 01:04:713 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:07:226 (4,5,6) - The rhythm here is not correct. Change into this pattern.
   Oh no I cannot connect to puush so I failed to upload the picture.This is text version
   From 01:07:226 - to 01:07:854 - should be 1/4 reverse sliders. From 01:07:854 - to 01:08:482 - should be 1/6 reverse sliders

1. 00:47:121 (6) - It is not recommended to be a repeatedly reverse slider in normal.
2. 01:23:561 (5) - NC
3. 01:37:383 (8) - Move to x504y296 may be better
4. 02:20:106 (2,1) - Seems to be overlap
5. 02:25:446 (1) - Long repeatedly reverse slider may be not suitable in normal.
6. 02:25:446 (1,3) - Seems to be overlap

1. 01:34:870 (1) - Cancel NC
2. 01:36:126 (2) - NC
3. 01:37:069 (1) - Cancel NC
4. 02:08:168 (2) - DS
5. 02:30:472 (1) - In normal and hard, the last spinner end on 02:32:985 - but the one in easy end on 02:33:142 - . I think it is better to make them consistent

XiaofengTiger wrote:

From My Queue

Some flaws should be fixed imo.
[Hard]

1. 00:52:776 (5) - Should be based on 1/4 beat instead of 1/3 beat.
2. 00:54:660 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above
3. 00:57:174 (4,5) - ^
4. 01:04:713 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:07:226 (4,5,6) - The rhythm here is not correct. Change into this pattern. ->Fixed
   
   Oh no I cannot connect to puush so I failed to upload the picture.This is text version
   From 01:07:226 - to 01:07:854 - should be 1/4 reverse sliders. From 01:07:854 - to 01:08:482 - should be 1/6 reverse sliders

[Normal]

1. 00:47:121 (6) - It is not recommended to be a repeatedly reverse slider in normal. ->Fixed
2. 01:23:561 (5) - NC ->Fixed
3. 01:37:383 (8) - Move to x504y296 may be better -> out of screen
4. 02:20:106 (2,1) - Seems to be overlap
5. 02:25:446 (1) - Long repeatedly reverse slider may be not suitable in normal. -> Make short and add node
6. 02:25:446 (1,3) - Seems to be overlap

[Easy]

1. 01:34:870 (1) - Cancel NC
2. 01:36:126 (2) - NC
3. 01:37:069 (1) - Cancel NC
4. 02:08:168 (2) - DS
5. 02:30:472 (1) - In normal and hard, the last spinner end on 02:32:985 - but the one in easy end on 02:33:142 - . I think it is better to make them consistent
6. Fixed all

Good luck!

S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩 늦게 도착해서 죄송해요. 일정이 아주 바빠가지고...

시작합니다!!!

[Easy]
모든 노트가 1/1로 되어 있어야 되요. 이지 난이도에서 1/2형태로 두면 디퀼될 확률이 높아요. ->아는 분한테 물어보고 수정하도록 하겠습니다.

Karia wrote:

• Easy

1. CS + 1, AR + 2, OD + 1, HP + 2 - > HP '0' 은 아닌거같아서 올림니다.다른건 냅둘게요
2. 00:48:378 - 무시하는것보다는 앞의 슬라를 여기까지 늘려주세요
3. 01:42:409 (2) - 01:43:037 - 여기서 끊으시고 01:43:352 - 여기에 노트하나 놓아주세요 - >수정
4. 01:58:116 (2) - 얘는 01:57:959 - 여기로 옮겨주세요 - >수정
5. 02:00:001 (1,2) - DS 에러 - >수정
6. 02:26:074 (1) - 02:26:231 - 여기로 옮긴다음 02:27:488 - 여기서 끝내주세요 ->박자가 약간 안맞는 것 같습니다.
7. 02:28:901 (3) - 02:29:844 - 여기에서 끊은다음 02:30:158 - 여기에 노트 - >수정

• Normal

1. 00:27:645 (1) - 뒤에도 좀 보이던데 곡의 브픔이 낮진 않아서 이런 1/2에 리버스 두개이상 넣는건 별로 추천드리고싶진 않네요,,일단은 냅둘게요
2. 00:42:880 (3) - 00:43:352 - 여기까지 늘려주세요 - >수정
3. 00:46:807 (5,6) - DS - >수정
4. 00:48:378 - 노트 추가 - >추가
5. 01:21:990 - 노트 추가 - >^
6. 01:27:331 (4) - 이거 지우시고 01:27:016 - 여기에 1/1슬라 - >슬라이더대신 노드 추가
7. 01:28:587 - 노말에 0.5배속은 좀 심한거같네요..ㄷㄷ - >Song beat a little slower parts
8. 01:43:666 (1) - 이지랑 스핀 시작부분 맞춰주는게 나을꺼같아요 ->수정
9. 01:49:477 - 초록색선 지워주세요- >삭제
10. 01:50:263 - ^ - >^
11. 01:54:818 (4) - NC - >수정
12. 01:58:116 (6) - 01:57:959 - 여기로 이동 - >수정
13. 02:28:901 (6) - 이지와 동일 - >수정

• Hard

1. 00:47:121 (6) - 음.. 0.5배속까지 낮출 필요가 있는 부분인질 모르겠네요
2. 00:54:660 (3,4,5,6) - 00:57:174 (4,5) - 01:04:713 (3,4) - 01:07:226 (4,5) - 01:07:854 (6,7) - 1/4로 바꿔주세요 ->좀만 더 생각해볼게요
3. 01:27:645 (1) - 노트 하나로도 충분할꺼같습니다 = >그냥 냅두는 것이 더좋을것같습니다,
4. 01:38:011 (8) - 3/4리버스로 바꿔주세요 - >수정
5. 01:38:640 (1,1,1) - 하위난이도들은 매핑이 되어있는데 하드에서 스핀으로 채울필요는 없을꺼같네요 -> Because that part ,put a spinner better
6. 02:00:472 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요 - >수정

no kds, gl!

1. 00:35:027 (2,3) - this looks a bit weird, try making the slider move the same way as the last slider (continue the movement)
2. 00:43:352 (1) - place this on 00:40:838 (1) -
3. In terms of Rhythmical accuracy, this map is perfect; Slider and circle placement isnt sadly D: btw, you can map with higher DS, so it doesnt overlap all the time. Easys are supposed to look neat and, as sorry as i am, i dont really like the looks of that Diff. I'd recommend remapping, maybe looking at some other ranked easies for ideas.
4. 02:16:807 (2) - I'd suggest blanketing
5. if you want more info on that, pm me and well IRC about that

1. You could improve almost every blanket here, if you want some pointed out, pm me
2. 00:35:027 (2) - this is a bit sloppy in the blanketing
3. 01:03:770 (1,2) - these overlap, maybe blanket 2 with 1 and move 2 a bit?
4. 01:33:613 (5) - maybe copy and flip 4 horizontally here
5. 02:14:922 (1) - maybe put the end point here 02:13:666 (4) -
6. 02:22:619 (1) - this flows bad, try to keep the same momentum as in the prior slider (in direction)
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. Blanketing is a bit of an issue here as well, i'd also recommend changing your grid size to tiny, it makes blanketing way easier
   2. 00:33:770 (2) - this one for example, could be improved
   3. 01:54:818 (1) - why the sudden slowdown? at least have the singletaps a bit more spaced, them overlapping like that might make players missread them as streams
   4. 02:14:922 (1) - this kills all flow, id suggest making a different slider
   You might need another Insane between those two diffs
   
   [SF's Insane]
   
   1. 00:38:325 (1) - id suggest using more sliderpoints to make the curve less edgy
   2. 00:40:681 (6,1) - thats a pretty far jump, going completety in the opposite direction afterwards... might be too hard
   3. 00:43:273 (2) - the white tick being on the sliderend is weird, rather make it a triple
   4. 01:08:482 (1,1,1) - this is overmapped
   5. 02:29:137 (4,1) - this is gonna kill people, please make that less edgy
   6. How is this just 4.9 stars xD

Asonate wrote:

hey, Mod4Mod o/

[Easy]

1. 00:35:027 (2,3) - this looks a bit weird, try making the slider move the same way as the last slider (continue the movement) - > Fixed
2. 00:43:352 (1) - place this on 00:40:838 (1) -
3. In terms of Rhythmical accuracy, this map is perfect; Slider and circle placement isnt sadly D: btw, you can map with higher DS, so it doesnt overlap all the time. Easys are supposed to look neat and, as sorry as i am, i dont really like the looks of that Diff. I'd recommend remapping, maybe looking at some other ranked easies for ideas.
4. 02:16:807 (2) - I'd suggest blanketing
5. if you want more info on that, pm me and well IRC about that

[Normal]

1. You could improve almost every blanket here, if you want some pointed out, pm me
2. 00:35:027 (2) - this is a bit sloppy in the blanketing
3. 01:03:770 (1,2) - these overlap, maybe blanket 2 with 1 and move 2 a bit?
4. 01:33:613 (5) - maybe copy and flip 4 horizontally here
5. 02:14:922 (1) - maybe put the end point here 02:13:666 (4) -
6. 02:22:619 (1) - this flows bad, try to keep the same momentum as in the prior slider (in direction) - > Fixed
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. Blanketing is a bit of an issue here as well, i'd also recommend changing your grid size to tiny, it makes blanketing way easier
   2. 00:33:770 (2) - this one for example, could be improved
   3. 01:54:818 (1) - why the sudden slowdown? at least have the singletaps a bit more spaced, them overlapping like that might make players missread them as streams
   4. 02:14:922 (1) - this kills all flow, id suggest making a different slider - > Fixed
   You might need another Insane between those two diffs

alright, thats it, i wish you good Luck!

Thanks for modding

Neoskylove wrote:

모딩큐에서 옴

[General]
Sky_Future님 이름 대문자로 해야하지 않으려나. 정확히는 모르겠는데 이지적 다른사람이 얘기하면 수정하기
배경 소개글에 있는거 http://puu.sh/lJveA/fd1f9e5c66.jpeg 쓰지 왜 굳이...
태그에 xi halcyon이라는 단어는 가수와 제목이니 지워야함.
태그에 yama ko.net 되어있는데 .net 지우센.yama_ko만
검색해보니깐 BOF2010이라는게 나옴. 태그에 BOF2010 추가 ->수정 여기서 태그에 대문자 넣는건 ,프로그램 인식이 소문자 밖에안되서 못함

[이지]
01:33:692 (1,3) - 직선배치 좀...
01:37:383 (3) - ^
01:53:718 (2) - 박자 이상 - > 수정

[노말]
00:59:137 (1,3) - 스택 - > 잘못 집은거같은 데 찾음 수정
01:28:587 - 변속ㄴㄴ - >음정이 약간 내려간 부분이라 일단 냅둠 (한번더 지적받으면 그때 수정함)

[하드]
00:27:645 (1) - 진돌슬라이더... http://puu.sh/lIOna/036d23a1a1.jpg
00:30:001 (3,2) - 오버랩
00:33:770 (2,3) - 블랭킷
00:54:660 (3,4,5,6) - 간격 왜이럼
01:04:713 (3,4) - 앞에랑 똘같이 한번 리버스 4개
01:18:849 - 아까도 얘기했지만 너무 변속이 심함
01:38:640 (1,1,1,1) - 매핑 하센

Momizi wrote:

Hello,M4M from my queue
[Hard]
change AR to 7 ,ar 6 is a bit low for hard
00:29:058 (6) - prev is 0.95x and next is 1.4x plz change it to same disatance,by the way,note space 1 beat plz sure the distance is more than 1.0x
00:31:257 (2,3) - here can use slider，to make you map look is not too empty
and you call pm me to mod for you hard after you finished remap：D - > okayy Thank you !!

Fixed all

Sky Future wrote:

인셁인 겘난읽욝

떩

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360,32,94085,5,0,0:0:0:0:
476,120,94242,2,0,P|468:64|424:40,1,90
324,32,94556,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,136,95655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,112,95812,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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52,68,96126,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,120,96598,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,248,97069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,97226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,40,98011,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,64,98168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,98247,2,0,L|208:20,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,98404,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,64,98640,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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452,88,98954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,99111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,168,99425,1,2,0:3:0:0:
388,28,99582,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,168,99739,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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364,68,101153,6,0,L|424:88,2,45
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240,148,101624,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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280,364,102409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,364,102723,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,324,102880,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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84,304,103273,6,0,P|44:260|44:216,1,90,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,103509,5,4,0:2:0:0:
168,32,103666,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,152,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,64,104137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,0,104765,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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256,192,109006,12,0,109634,0:0:0:0:
184,296,109948,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,152,112304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,112383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,208,112933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,356,113247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,113404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,264,113875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,232,114346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,260,114503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,114660,2,0,P|468:180|464:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,52,114975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,52,115053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,52,115210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,52,115289,6,0,P|328:80|224:32,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,52,115760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,128,115917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,216,116074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,116231,2,0,P|240:216|188:312,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,116702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,208,117331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,160,120472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,36,120786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,168,121100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,121414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,288,122435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,288,122514,6,0,P|264:328|364:272,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,236,122985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,123299,2,0,L|492:364,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,216,123613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,68,123927,2,0,P|336:36|216:84,2,180
238,61,124870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,61,124948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,61,125027,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,125184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,125263,2,0,L|84:164,1,45,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,125498,2,0,P|268:272|360:188,1,180
276,160,125969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,320,126126,6,0,B|304:352|304:352|440:364,2,180
164,316,126912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,352,127069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,352,127226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,248,127383,6,0,P|16:184|84:92,1,180
168,132,127854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,224,128011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,76,128168,2,0,L|260:20,3,45
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356,76,128797,5,12,3:0:0:0:
444,304,129111,1,2,3:0:0:0:
472,224,129268,1,2,3:0:0:0:
364,332,129425,2,0,L|252:348,1,90
380,240,129739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,232,129818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,240,129896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,129975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,128,130838,2,0,P|144:108|48:124,1,135
66,115,131153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,32,131467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,56,131781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,104,132095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,28,132252,6,0,L|252:40,1,45
224,124,132409,2,0,L|280:160,1,45
220,232,132566,6,0,B|216:304|204:360|180:360|152:344|144:304,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,284,133037,2,0,P|376:284|440:376,1,180
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308,284,133980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,134137,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,304,134294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,134608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,134765,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,108,134922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,36,135079,6,0,L|152:8,1,45
232,132,135236,2,0,L|292:128,1,45
256,312,135393,6,0,P|208:336|212:272,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,272,135708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,135865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,136022,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,188,136179,6,0,B|328:96|364:76|364:76|360:104|368:140,1,180
320,12,136650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,256,136807,2,0,P|356:292|236:264,1,180
184,232,137278,2,0,P|112:228|60:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,137592,6,0,P|32:72|144:12,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,138064,2,0,P|192:288|80:348,1,180
140,144,138535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,288,138692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,139006,5,8,0:0:0:0:
360,316,139163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,56,139477,5,8,0:0:0:0:
504,164,139634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,139713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,139791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,139870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,139948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,140027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,292,142854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,142933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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468,120,144660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,160,145132,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,264,145289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,145446,2,0,P|380:368|320:280,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,145917,2,0,L|324:300,1,90
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204,296,147174,2,0,L|312:324,1,90
368,224,147488,6,0,P|428:244|420:352,1,180
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336,44,149058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,88,149137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,60,149294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,152,149765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,150551,12,0,152985,0:0:0:0:

앙대 디나이 당했어

• 00:28:273 (4) - NC
  00:36:598 (4) - Blanket
  00:48:378 (3) - NC
  01:03:770 (2) - Why new combo
  01:08:482 (9) - NC
  01:38:011 (3) - Blanket
  01:49:948 (1) to 02:30:472 (1) - Why are this ignore. Are u lazy. idk what are u doing

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hai! From Modding Queue

I love xi's song. But I like Blue Zenith

Normal are not finish

Hard

• 00:28:273 (4) - NC - >Fix
  00:36:598 (4) - Blanket - >Fix
  00:48:378 (3) - NC
  01:03:770 (2) - Why new combo
  01:08:482 (9) - NC- >Fix
  01:38:011 (3) - Blanket- >Fix
  01:49:948 (1) to 02:30:472 (1) - Why are this ignore. Are u lazy. idk what are u doing - >Sorry i have shcool test soon i finished now

Momizi wrote:

Hello,second round,NO kd ;D
[HARD]
00:30:001 (4) - make the slider in lower part to avoid your map looks all notes is in middle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4105317 ->Fixed
00:44:451 (5) - ctrl+G mabye is a btter flow ->Distance
01:00:158 (4) - i advise you place this slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4105297->Fixed
02:20:577 (2,4) - overlap this two notes,overlap can make your map look more neat->Fixed
umm general look is a little mess，and you can ctrl+a，you will found notes is Concentrated in middle，try to make a map let all area have notes
good luck ：D

ouranhshc wrote:

umm, for the lower diffs, its kinda hard for me to mod it (IDK WHY? ITS HARD TO EXPLAIN


01:38:640 (1,1,1,1) - i would map more the spinners here in normal and hard ->delete spinner and add it


Hard
02:19:477 (1,1,2,3) - the placement of (2) looks bad ingame because it shows up under 02:19:477 (1) - . Probably the easiest fix would be to move 02:19:477 (1) - ->Fixed
00:44:922 (6,1) - spacing is odd because you don't do anything like this in other parts of the map and you don't really use a stop/go mapping style for this diff ->Fixed
02:28:273 (2,3) - maybe move these from under the slider? ->Fixed

Normal
For this diff, I'd recommend just watching auto play the map so that you can rearrange or redo the sliders that overlap other sliders. An example is : 00:42:095 (1,2,3) -
Since sliders in easier diffs are typically present on the screen longer, you kinda have to take that into account when placing them. Probably could increase the AR by 1 tick. - >Okay

[OH AND you might need a diff between the Insane and Hard diff :v - > ugh,,, okay later i add it

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Hio, Are you still accepting gd requests for this mapset?

FlobuFlobs wrote:

What Kind of difficulty?

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue sorry for the delay

[SF's Insane]

1. 00:37:226 (2,3,4,6) - try to make more space between these so they are not touching
   fix
2. 00:38:797 (2) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/lr8ez/ca437d570b.jpg
   fix
3. 00:40:367 (4,6) - dont let these overlap! It looks sloppy. how about stack at the end of 00:40:838 (1) -
   4slider overlap, did you like?
4. 00:42:252 - NC's like this? http://puu.sh/lr8jv/3c8dad14d1.jpg
   fix, but only my NC 00:43:666 (1) -
5. 00:44:922 (2) - move to 308,135 for a better blanket
   omg, thx
6. 00:56:545 (5) - add NC here
   fix
7. 00:59:530 (4,5) - its hard to read this pause here since the spacing is same as 1/2. maybe add NC on 00:59:844 (5) - or just move it somewhere farther
   1st fix
8. 01:05:969 (1) - try moving it somewhere around here http://puu.sh/lr8Cg/8dc6e85bec.jpg so that it can have similar spacing as 01:04:791 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
   fix
9. 01:17:278 (3) - try changing this into just circle at 01:17:435 -
   change the circle move
10. 01:32:514 (1,1,2,1) - spacing is very confusing since the first one is 1/2
    fix
11. 01:39:582 (1) - NC is not necessary here
    fix
12. 01:40:210 (1,2,3,4) - sloppy! check the spacing between them http://puu.sh/lr9Kr/54bd7f85fa.jpg
    fix
13. 01:42:723 (1) - No NC
    fix
14. 01:48:064 - NC like this http://puu.sh/lr91y/dc24d6a836.jpg
    fix
15. 01:59:373 (8,9) - I think a lot of people will be confused by this... dont stack them OR add a note at 01:59:451 -
    fix
16. 02:03:299 (3) - a little more to the right so it is not touching 02:02:514 (1) -
    fix
17. 02:28:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is very much harder than the rest of the map. Consider lessening the spacing or making it not as angular
    fix

That's all from me, good luck!

MadHypnofrog wrote:

yooo


Insane
OD7 is the same as in hard, increase it to 8
in diff not bad
00:35:184 (3) - stack this with the sliderend of 00:34:556 (1)?
no problem reading
00:35:812 (1) - ugh, the spacing
fix
00:40:838 (1) - the jump feels awkward
my only concept^^
01:08:482 (1) - ugh, the spacing again
i cant, need stack 1/3
01:15:708 (1) - ^
01:32:985 (1) - ^
01:59:373 (8) - not really a fan of it being at the same spot as 01:59:530 (9)
changed the stream note

Asonate wrote:

hey, Mod4Mod o/


[SF's Insane]

1. 00:38:325 (1) - id suggest using more sliderpoints to make the curve less edgy
   fix
2. 00:40:681 (6,1) - thats a pretty far jump, going completety in the opposite direction afterwards... might be too hard
   only my concept, and feel make entry note
3. 00:43:273 (2) - the white tick being on the sliderend is weird, rather make it a triple
   sorry.. only my concept, not bad reading
4. 01:08:482 (1,1,1) - this is overmapped
   moving consideration 1/3
5. 02:29:137 (4,1) - this is gonna kill people, please make that less edgy
   fix
6. How is this just 4.9 stars xD
   XD i dont no

alright, thats it, i wish you good Luck!

Momizi wrote:

Hello,M4M from my queue


[SF's Insane]
00:37:540 (5) - meet with the blood(i dont know how to say, HP ?
fix, move circle
00:54:975 (3) - ctrl+H change flow to right? I think move to left and then move to right,then left is very good for plaer：D
i think in not bad
00:59:844 (5) - it maybe read as 1/2
already changed note!, add NC check in my Diff
00:58:744 (1) - dont use nc here
fix
00:59:844 (7) - NC
sorry.. i cant reading your modding
please again request
01:06:441 (2) - dont need nc
are you check in my diff? already not NC
01:11:781 (3) - ctrl+G，I may use this flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4084239
ohhh thats good idea
01:19:948 (3,1) - try to let this two sliders not meet，move 3to left a bit，it maybe hide the arrow of 01:20:420 (1) - ，reason for dq
01:19:948 (3,1) - check fix ( not reading.. please check my diff)
01:59:373 (8) - i think here should NC
fix
02:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - I think 1/2 slider coluld be better
not comport!
02:28:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the flow of this stream maybe not good for plaer to play.
changing so easy~ to note

ouranhshc wrote:

umm, for the lower diffs, its kinda hard for me to mod it (IDK WHY? ITS HARD TO EXPLAIN



SF's Insane - nice diff >w<
00:40:524 (5,6,1) - The direction of (1) makes this pattern awkward and unnecessarily difficult. So maybe have a slider that initially moves in his direction: http://puu.sh/lSgQY/4f663a4e9f.jpg (ignore the slider length)
your horse well got but, only my concept and i think in note no problem! however consideration
01:08:482 (1,1,1) - possibly make this into a repeating slider. The way its new combo'd lets me know that there is something different about it; however its still hard to read, especially since the previous contained several 1/4. Same goes for the other times you use this pattern for this section of the map
i think comport 1/3
01:43:666 (1,2,3,4,1) - possibly use the polygon maker for this :v
fix...?(i not reading please check)
01:48:221 (1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - not to sure about the new combos here
fix~ 01:48:064 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -
02:08:168 (4) - new combo here?
fix

OH AND you might need a diff between the Insane and Hard diff :v
:v

sorry.. i cant english..
but i can reading
thx mod!