00:02:258 (1) - maybe make the slider end end at 20% volume to create a sort of volume burst when approaching the first slider, since then you hear 2 clicks because of the slider end and the first click on the slider, whilst if you put the volume of the slider down to 20% you would basiclly hear 1 click, that would match the first hard beat in the song as well
00:37:358 (3,4) - what about a blanklet here
00:37:358 (3,4) - how about creating a sharp slider like you done here 00:41:858 (1,2) - matches the tune pretty well
00:49:058 (1) - ctrl+g if you want, pretty nice flow imo with that invertion
00:50:708 (5,9) - blanket
01:16:058 (3) - move to x:144 y:92
01:18:158 (2,3) - blanket
01:19:358 (3) - how about moving this to the slider beginning at 01:19:508 (4) - there isnt really a beat going with that jump
01:28:658 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g i dont see why they should all go in the same direction :/ it flows pretty well too and if you listen in closely you can hear this sort of like voal in the background like humming, at one point the tone of that goes up and down at those notes the tone goes down
01:31:058 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:058 (6,7) - blanket
01:41:108 (5,6) - ^
01:42:458 (6,7) - ^
01:48:608 (5) - move to x:416 y:124 and blanket with this slider 01:48:308 (4) -
01:50:258 (1,6) - you can give this a blanket too but its not require just looks a bit nicer
01:53:108 (4,5) - blanket
02:01:958 (7,8,9) - move these to x:1 y:225 and blanket the first note 02:01:958 (7) - with this slider 02:01:658 (6) -
02:22:058 (4,1,2) - how about something like this, looks a bit cramp but i mean your choice
http://imgur.com/LT6SP7A (had to reduce the AR to 5 to show you this, dont be put off by the look of this haha
02:47:708 (5,1) - blanket
03:13:958 (5,2) - highlight these 2 slider and move them to x:223 y:97 creates a nice overlap with 03:14:558 (2) - and this 03:15:458 (1) -
03:14:558 (2,3) - if you accept the previous point the blanket this
04:39:458 (1) - maybe end the kiai time here and start it again here 04:41:858 (1) - burst moment-ish if you want
05:03:458 (1) - i would highly reccomend increasing the volume by at least 5% here since in the background the humming gets louder
05:05:858 (1) - ^
05:08:258 (1) - ^
05:10:658 (1) - here it should rest at 80% volume strong hitsounds would be very noticable here
05:11:858 (1) - then here again 70%
05:13:058 (1) - here 75%-ish
05:15:458 (1) - then here 85%
Thanks all i have to offer, i hope i helped
really nice song btw not really a metal/rock fan but really nice tune