from my modding queue
[Hard] • 00:42:040 (6,1) - Why that sudden jump?
• 00:44:485 (4) - I wouldn't do an overlap because you never used one except there.
• 01:08:127 (5,6,1) - Random triplet?
[Insane]
• 00:14:812 (1,3) - I'd set the sliderhead of (3) on the slidertail of (1). Would look cleaner.
• 00:26:062 (4) - CTRL + J and rotate it a little?
• 00:35:681 (1,2,3,4) - Why not making small jumps here? The voice goes up a little. Also you used some fitting jumps here 00:22:964 (2,3,4,5) - too
•00:43:344 (5,1) - Imo the spacing here should be the same as 00:43:181 (4,5)
• 00:46:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd use this pattern instead. Your current doesn't flow too well (imo, but I have a strange definition of flow to be honest).
• 00:51:822 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not making the stream a bit longer to 00:52:638 ? This break seems a bit large to me.
• 00:55:572 (2,3,5,6) - Antijumps are anything but fun, really.
• 01:08:290 (8) - NC?
• 00:44:485 (4) - I wouldn't do an overlap because you never used one except there.
• 01:08:127 (5,6,1) - Random triplet?
• 00:14:812 (1,3) - I'd set the sliderhead of (3) on the slidertail of (1). Would look cleaner.
• 00:26:062 (4) - CTRL + J and rotate it a little?
• 00:35:681 (1,2,3,4) - Why not making small jumps here? The voice goes up a little. Also you used some fitting jumps here 00:22:964 (2,3,4,5) - too
•00:43:344 (5,1) - Imo the spacing here should be the same as 00:43:181 (4,5)
• 00:46:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd use this pattern instead. Your current doesn't flow too well (imo, but I have a strange definition of flow to be honest).
• 00:51:822 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not making the stream a bit longer to 00:52:638 ? This break seems a bit large to me.
• 00:55:572 (2,3,5,6) - Antijumps are anything but fun, really.
• 01:08:290 (8) - NC?