this song really creepy, and really good
the transition of music, musical patterning, and volume composition makes this song good for mapping
well that is my opinions on song, so maybe let's get started with this, sometimes you have some problems on your map, and you can take a look on here
see ya later and good luck!
the transition of music, musical patterning, and volume composition makes this song good for mapping
well that is my opinions on song, so maybe let's get started with this, sometimes you have some problems on your map, and you can take a look on here
[FEAR]
consistent and persistent map, really good work for this- 01:30:820 (5) - this can be done if you didnt map this circle. for warmup you can provide jumps on 01:30:560 (4,6) -, i think it can be better play with jump instead on triplet, just same like 01:41:658 (4,5) -
- 02:05:415 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try curved this slider like http://puu.sh/lcp8e/51d26b362e.jpg (that flow kinda make 02:05:848 (8,9) - easier to hit with same distance spacing)
- 02:45:473 (5) - change this circle to 1/4 slider to provide a stable stream pattern (on song this pattern not stable maybe it can be reduced if you put continuous stream pattern like that
- 02:47:901 (1,2,3) - kinda weird spacing, i hope you can move 02:47:901 (1) - more further and more clearly visible to make sure players can see this notes 02:48:248 (2,3,4,5) - something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926368 can be good
- 02:50:242 (8,9,10) - what about remove circle (8) and move circle (9) to 387|177 for good double patterns (im really sure 02:50:154 (7) - can be good for jumps because high pitched musical rhythm can make jumps more intense)
- 04:26:398 (1,1,1,2) - i think this combo kinda bugged, put constant SV for this kiai time and reshape some sliders can be okay for this one, as example this picture can be helped with good flow and makes combo better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926397
- 04:40:964 (3) - mapped it with circle or short sliders can make this pattern like a boom! (same like 04:43:739 (3) - it's like a rare thing if you mapped some unique patterns there)
- 05:11:311 (3) - looks it's better if you didnt forcing this slider to be blanketed with 05:11:485 (4,5,6,7) - (the flow kinda zigzag but with less emphasize flow to 05:11:311 (3,4) - , yeah really short distance) looks this needs to be ctrl+g and move to 498|276 for better constant spacing running and avioud bad overlaps at 05:11:831 (8) - . <- nah that slider makes this 1/4 sliders looks forcing
- 05:12:872 (4,5,6,7,8) - 371|66 for avoiding overlap with 05:12:525 (2) - (that kinda clearly overlapped lol)
- 05:14:519 (8,9,10) - same thing with 02:50:242 (8,9,10) -
- 05:15:299 (5) - same thing with 02:45:473 (5) -
- 05:34:375 (1,2) - same thing with 02:47:901 (1,2,3) - (as example try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926429)
- 05:38:797 (4,1) - the (this kinda sudden pattern, especially on ending, i think it can be fun if you make constant spacing at 05:38:363 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - so it can be a good ending
- end of mod
see ya later and good luck!