annyeong (am i right? xD)!
#m4m
gl!
#m4m
SB.
SB size that u have is too big. It takes too much place (but u dont have any special effects except white and black)
i reworked some moments and put them here: http://www41.zippyshare.com/v/xJvzYvEX/file.html
(just put all these files into map folder (.osb file u will have to change with the one that u have))
also delete file called d.png because u are not using it
and if u will accept my SB, delete all ur files except black.png and white.png)
also. if u have some thoughts about ur sb, u can pm me in-game and ill try to help u to realize them ^^
Map.
1. change bg size to 1366x768
2. your sliders are so different from each other.. it looks bad (as for me, at least)
i can suggest u to do every 2 sliders similar to each other. this looks better, right? 00:16:559 (8,2)
3. stack notes.
somewhere u do this, somewhere - not. in general these things look bad. so, u should decide will u stack notes or not?
i suggest u to stack them, caz mostly ur notes are stacked. here are some places, that u need to check:
00:13:816 (1,4)
00:17:759 (6)
00:18:787 (3)
01:07:987 (4,6)
etc
4. flow.
there no reason not to do a flow, even its extra
flow makes map better, much beautiful etc etc etc
this looks better - 00:19:130 (6,7)
this here - 00:25:645 (2,3)
this here 00:29:759 (3,1)
etc
also notice, i put only some examples here, NOT ALL, u should check these problems all throw the map.
5. blankets and imposition
blanket is a very important thing, because it looks better, if it is used.
here - 00:29:759 (3,1)
here - 00:56:330 (5)
etc
imposition looks bad anyway, it looks good if only u did it on purpose (u - not):
00:58:045 (1,6) -
00:24:273 (3,1) -
01:57:016 (1) - with 01:58:216 (1)
etc
6. speed changes
brrrr..
it doesnt look ok in ur way. u make only one slider faster. its unplayable and unreadable
also the way how u make another speed. u should take all slider and not only his beggining.
so, for example here 00:47:073 (1) - it will look like this:
can suggest u some pro mapper to help u map it (maybe collab or smth like that), if u have such friends, of course
SB size that u have is too big. It takes too much place (but u dont have any special effects except white and black)
i reworked some moments and put them here: http://www41.zippyshare.com/v/xJvzYvEX/file.html
(just put all these files into map folder (.osb file u will have to change with the one that u have))
also delete file called d.png because u are not using it
and if u will accept my SB, delete all ur files except black.png and white.png)
also. if u have some thoughts about ur sb, u can pm me in-game and ill try to help u to realize them ^^
Map.
1. change bg size to 1366x768
2. your sliders are so different from each other.. it looks bad (as for me, at least)
i can suggest u to do every 2 sliders similar to each other. this looks better, right? 00:16:559 (8,2)
3. stack notes.
somewhere u do this, somewhere - not. in general these things look bad. so, u should decide will u stack notes or not?
i suggest u to stack them, caz mostly ur notes are stacked. here are some places, that u need to check:
00:13:816 (1,4)
00:17:759 (6)
00:18:787 (3)
01:07:987 (4,6)
etc
4. flow.
there no reason not to do a flow, even its extra
flow makes map better, much beautiful etc etc etc
this looks better - 00:19:130 (6,7)
this here - 00:25:645 (2,3)
this here 00:29:759 (3,1)
etc
also notice, i put only some examples here, NOT ALL, u should check these problems all throw the map.
5. blankets and imposition
blanket is a very important thing, because it looks better, if it is used.
here - 00:29:759 (3,1)
here - 00:56:330 (5)
etc
imposition looks bad anyway, it looks good if only u did it on purpose (u - not):
00:58:045 (1,6) -
00:24:273 (3,1) -
01:57:016 (1) - with 01:58:216 (1)
etc
6. speed changes
brrrr..
it doesnt look ok in ur way. u make only one slider faster. its unplayable and unreadable
also the way how u make another speed. u should take all slider and not only his beggining.
so, for example here 00:47:073 (1) - it will look like this:
can suggest u some pro mapper to help u map it (maybe collab or smth like that), if u have such friends, of course
gl!