Porter Robinson - Flicker · forum

XzCraftP

48 posts

Joined May 2012

XzCraftP 2015-08-08T15:58:56+00:00

SOMEBODY RANK DIS MASTERPIECE ;w;

huu

1,218 posts

Joined February 2015

huu 2015-08-10T09:23:36+00:00

This post might not be helpful that much.

But just wanna say that this is probably my favorite unranked map, closely followed by Gotsta Terrify

Keep up the good work, good luck getting it ranked.

Also, does the singer remind anyone else of Histoire from HDN or is it just me?

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2015-08-11T15:51:49+00:00

Hi M4M from my modding queue o/

I'm not to good with Hard diff's but let's go.

[sval001's advanced]

00:08:374 (1,2,3) - you can make 2 same slidershape like 3 and i would keep same spacing on 3 between 2 and 4.
00:11:308 (2,3) - bad overlap
00:15:547 (6,1,2,3) - you miss here beats. I missed here even and this is not even my level lmao
00:16:526 (4,5) - bad overlap
00:17:993 (2,3) - you miss beat here
00:17:993 (2,3,2,3) - strong beat here
00:21:906 (2) - bad overlap
00:23:374 (6,1) - strong beat here
00:28:266 (2,3) - bad overlap
00:38:047 (4) - curve this the other side
00:43:428 (4) - stay consistent with your slidershapes.
00:42:613 (1,2) - this okay overlap, but can still need improvement.
00:44:244 (7,1) - strong beat here betweent those.
01:19:460 (3) - overlapped a little by 1
01:25:331 (1,2) - decide on one shape.
01:41:145 (2,3) - bad overlap
01:45:058 (2,3) - slider looks not very nice
01:46:200 (1,2) - symmetrical improvement here.
01:59:895 (6) - nice idea, but I think kinda hard for newer players
02:04:460 (1,2) - bad overlap
02:25:004 (3,4,5,1) - bad overlaps on those
02:27:776 (2,4) - overlaping
02:32:178 (1,2) - ^
02:30:874 (5,6) - not the same sliders.
02:32:177 (1,2) - bad overlap
02:34:950 (2,4) - either 2 or 4 as shape.
02:38:047 (3,4,5) - bad overlaps and slidershape not like the others.
02:39:516 (8,2) - make 8 more distinguishable from 2
02:54:678 (4,5) - use sth different here.
03:43:754 (5) - I know you want to blanket this, but the slider just looks straight up bad

03:48:482 (3,4) - bad overlap
03:49:461 (4) - like before.
03:52:884 (2,3) - make both the same.
04:10:330 (5) - liek before.

ok done.
I personally like only the kiai of this song If I'm honest lmao.

Feel free to pm me Ingame or Forum If you need anything.

sval001

34 posts

Joined June 2014

sval001 2015-08-11T20:45:02+00:00

Feb

Feb wrote:
Hi M4M from my modding queue o/

I'm not to good with Hard diff's but let's go.

[sval001's advanced]

00:08:374 (1,2,3) - you can make 2 same slidershape like 3 and i would keep same spacing on 3 between 2 and 4. fixed spacing
00:11:308 (2,3) - bad overlap
00:15:547 (6,1,2,3) - you miss here beats. I missed here even and this is not even my level lmao
00:16:526 (4,5) - bad overlap
00:17:993 (2,3) - you miss beat here
00:17:993 (2,3,2,3) - strong beat here
00:21:906 (2) - bad overlap
00:23:374 (6,1) - strong beat here
00:28:266 (2,3) - bad overlap
00:38:047 (4) - curve this the other side
00:43:428 (4) - stay consistent with your slidershapes.
00:42:613 (1,2) - this okay overlap, but can still need improvement.
00:44:244 (7,1) - strong beat here betweent those.
01:19:460 (3) - overlapped a little by 1
01:25:331 (1,2) - decide on one shape.
01:41:145 (2,3) - bad overlap
01:45:058 (2,3) - slider looks not very nice
01:46:200 (1,2) - symmetrical improvement here.
01:59:895 (6) - nice idea, but I think kinda hard for newer players Yeah, maybe the SV change is too much for a Hard
02:04:460 (1,2) - bad overlap
02:25:004 (3,4,5,1) - bad overlaps on those
02:27:776 (2,4) - overlaping
02:32:178 (1,2) - ^
02:30:874 (5,6) - not the same sliders.
02:32:177 (1,2) - bad overlap
02:34:950 (2,4) - either 2 or 4 as shape.
02:38:047 (3,4,5) - bad overlaps and slidershape not like the others.
02:39:516 (8,2) - make 8 more distinguishable from 2
02:54:678 (4,5) - use sth different here.
03:43:754 (5) - I know you want to blanket this, but the slider just looks straight up bad
03:48:482 (3,4) - bad overlap
03:49:461 (4) - like before.
03:52:884 (2,3) - make both the same.
04:10:330 (5) - liek before.

ok done.
I personally like only the kiai of this song If I'm honest lmao.

Feel free to pm me Ingame or Forum If you need anything.

fixed all

Thanks for the mod~

update

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 91850
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Flicker
Artist:Porter Robinson
ArtistUnicode:Porter Robinson
Creator:Cyllinus
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Source:
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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-12T13:55:24+00:00

Hi there, as requested.
Your current metadata is totally fine.

SPOILER

References:
http://www.porterrobinson.com/spotify
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D1sZ_vwqwcE

Poke me if you have any other questions, good luck!

The Veldt

114 posts

Joined January 2012

The Veldt 2015-08-15T13:15:05+00:00

[ryuu's Easy]
01:38:374 - I think there should be a circle here indicating the "fu" because I think it is unnecessary to leave the voice unmapped here.
01:39:026 (5) - Add NC here as an emphasis to the beat.
01:57:939 (4) - Add NC in case you just forgot (I think you intended that)
02:37:069 (1) - How about copying 02:35:113 (2) and ctrl+G-ing it for aesthetics?
02:40:330 (2) - I think this should be a slider for consistency to the beat.
03:31:852 (4) - Add NC in case you just forgot (I think you intended that also)
04:09:678 (5) - NC for emphasis.
[Hard]
00:15:874 (8) - Unnecessary overlap even though you used some emphasis (Make it a circle instead)
00:42:939 (3) - Add NC indicating start of the drum thingy (Previous section is pretty silent)
01:10:493 (4) - Change this to a slider and omit the next circle. There is a high chance of a player hitting 01:10:819 (5) earlier (and for consistency also)
01:15:221 (5) - Spacing issues here. I think that I will hit this really earlier than expected.
01:17:830 (5) - At least the spacing here won't affect gameplay
01:54:352 (2) - overlap is kinda ruining the map aesthetically.
01:56:634 (1) - ^
01:59:895 (1) - Just a suggestion, but could you make the slider less conventional? It implies something unique so please for the sake of epicness lol.
02:41:634 (1) - ^
03:02:504 - I feel that you need to add more elements here before finally adding a break
03:28:591 (1) - Uhmm overlap
Or make it like this
04:31:852 (1) - Add spinner after this circle for the fufufufu
[fufufu]
00:42:939 (3) - Add NC
01:15:221 (5) - Spacing/playability issue
01:38:374 - Try This
02:42:939 (3) - Overlap O.o try making 02:42:287 (1) a curve instead (aesthetics)
02:58:591 (2) - ctrl G this for spacing consistency.
03:02:504 - I feel that you need to add more elements here before finally adding a break
03:27:939 - add beat for fufufu
03:31:200 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:417 (1) - ^
04:31:852 (1) - Add spinner after this circle for the fufufufu

Cyllinus

196 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cyllinus 2015-08-16T01:37:56+00:00

forbiddenplayer wrote:

[ryuu's Easy]
01:38:374 - I think there should be a circle here indicating the "fu" because I think it is unnecessary to leave the voice unmapped here.
01:39:026 (5) - Add NC here as an emphasis to the beat.
01:57:939 (4) - Add NC in case you just forgot (I think you intended that)
02:37:069 (1) - How about copying 02:35:113 (2) and ctrl+G-ing it for aesthetics?
02:40:330 (2) - I think this should be a slider for consistency to the beat.
03:31:852 (4) - Add NC in case you just forgot (I think you intended that also)
04:09:678 (5) - NC for emphasis.
[Hard]
00:15:874 (8) - Unnecessary overlap even though you used some emphasis (Make it a circle instead) done
00:42:939 (3) - Add NC indicating start of the drum thingy (Previous section is pretty silent) done
01:10:493 (4) - Change this to a slider and omit the next circle. There is a high chance of a player hitting 01:10:819 (5) earlier (and for consistency also) done
01:15:221 (5) - Spacing issues here. I think that I will hit this really earlier than expected. fixed? maybe
01:17:830 (5) - At least the spacing here won't affect gameplay
01:54:352 (2) - overlap is kinda ruining the map aesthetically. done
01:56:634 (1) - ^
01:59:895 (1) - Just a suggestion, but could you make the slider less conventional? It implies something unique so please for the sake of epicness lol.
02:41:634 (1) - ^
03:02:504 - I feel that you need to add more elements here before finally adding a break
03:28:591 (1) - Uhmm overlap this seems acceptable because of the time between notes
Or make it like this
04:31:852 (1) - Add spinner after this circle for the fufufufu
[fufufu]
00:42:939 (3) - Add NC done
01:15:221 (5) - Spacing/playability issue
01:38:374 - Try This maybe not
02:42:939 (3) - Overlap O.o try making 02:42:287 (1) a curve instead (aesthetics) done
02:58:591 (2) - ctrl G this for spacing consistency.
03:02:504 - I feel that you need to add more elements here before finally adding a break
03:27:939 - add beat for fufufu
03:31:200 (1) - Remove NC done
03:36:417 (1) - ^
04:31:852 (1) - Add spinner after this circle for the fufufufu

Thanks for modding.
I'll consider doing the parts with no response.

ItashaS13

678 posts

Joined January 2014

ItashaS13 2015-08-22T00:53:58+00:00

I want this map ranked fufufufufu

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-08-22T21:13:45+00:00

Hello!

[ryuu's Easy]

00:20:765 (6) - This shape lacks quality a bit, compare the end with the beginning, they're curved differently
01:20:113 (2,3) - I recommend changing to 1/1 here because, firstly that's what you used on the entire section, so why a change here? Second it's hard to get for an Easy because they'd think that the rhythm is the same as before
02:21:091 (3) - Remove? You did similar in places where the rhythm is too Strong, like: 01:33:808 -
02:26:634 (1) - Well why changing for 1/2 here?
02:33:808 (4,1) - Same
02:36:091 (3) - Add clap on the head?

[Normal]

01:09:678 (2,1) - Personally I like it, but it may create problems with QAT or BNs, it's a little bit confusing to play
01:54:678 (1) - Well as far as I know 1/4 are not nice for Normals
02:06:417 (2,3) - Well flow is a bit bad here
02:27:613 (3) - Move a bit to the left to avoid overlap with 02:26:634 (1) -
03:44:243 (1) - Same 1/4
03:46:852 (4,1) - I'm 80% sure this overlap is confusing and may be unrankeable for a Normal
04:00:221 (1) - Do you really need a NC here?
04:13:591 (1) - Move it up a bit? Will make the pattern prettier imo
04:15:547 (1) - Same 1/4
04:22:721 (3,1) - Not nice overla

That's it! I can't mod the rest because I'm out of time, GL!! Nice beatmap

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2015-08-24T16:14:20+00:00

some changes from forbiddenplayer's mod and some from lumael's
sorry for no replays. i'm not in the mood
if u have questions, write to me
thank u

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 91850
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:Flicker
Artist:Porter Robinson
ArtistUnicode:Porter Robinson
Creator:Cyllinus
Version:ryuu's Easy
Source:
Tags:Worlds electronic ryuu sval001 Alonevpk BarkingMadDog
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Huskatron

416 posts

Joined October 2009

Huskatron 2015-08-25T00:08:03+00:00

I practise this map every day +HR waiting for it to be ranked

MyHand

16 posts

Joined May 2012

MyHand 2015-09-19T12:56:10+00:00

BUMP, this map is really cool.

LimePixel

184 posts

Joined March 2015

LimePixel 2015-09-27T19:21:31+00:00

Awesome map

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2015-09-27T22:58:21+00:00

I adore this map ♥

edit: okay so, I gave you another star because apparently, I did send you one before. LOL

Nayrus

44 posts

Joined June 2015

Nayrus 2015-10-15T14:10:44+00:00

This song and this map is so amazing <3

anaria usui

1 post

Joined October 2015

anaria usui 2015-10-16T19:01:33+00:00

hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2015-10-17T07:49:03+00:00

ranked pls

Chemistry

113 posts

Joined February 2015

Chemistry 2015-11-06T17:35:27+00:00

why the fuck isnt this ranked

Alonevpk

88 posts

Joined November 2012

Alonevpk 2015-11-07T04:43:37+00:00

RIP Cyllinus

konlulu

1 post

Joined April 2014

konlulu 2015-11-07T19:17:34+00:00

Alonevpk wrote:
RIP Cyllinus

What happened to him?

Alonevpk

88 posts

Joined November 2012

Alonevpk 2015-11-08T04:23:19+00:00

angelhuman wrote:
Alonevpk wrote:
RIP Cyllinus
What happened to him?

What I heard from a mutual friend was that he was playing around in Dark Souls with some cheat engine on and opened up osu! at the same time, causing him to get a ban.
I'll have to ask him myself though.

-rocket

51 posts

Joined November 2014

-rocket 2015-11-08T18:34:49+00:00

Alonevpk wrote:
RIP Cyllinus

BibleThump

Huskatron

416 posts

Joined October 2009

Huskatron 2015-11-22T17:14:44+00:00

NEVER LET THIS DIE </3

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2015-11-23T01:32:39+00:00

[Advanced]

00:09:669 (1) - remove NC
00:25:973 (6) - there's nothing on the blue tick where it finishes, and you're ignoring the red tick which has a beat on it
00:30:538 (1) - remove NC
00:51:408 (1,1) - ^
01:09:669 (1) - ^
01:18:147 (5,1) - ugly overlap
01:45:212 (2,3) - irregular DS, or at least avoid putting (2) too close to (3)'s end to prevent confusion. I dont know if this kind of "jump" (irregular DS) can be tolerated in advanced but I'd advise against it. I guess you'll have to see with a BN/QAT
I wont report any more of those since you put quite a lot of them, up to you to see what should be done with them
01:54:669 (1) - remove NC
02:20:104 (1) - ^
02:40:973 (1) - ^
02:41:625 (1) - this SV seems alright but maybe QATs wont like it (you never know)
Also 02:42:278 - is pretty strong, you should map a circle on it instead of a slider end, Ii'd suggest making the slider 1/4 shorter then putting on circle there
02:46:191 (1) - remove NC
02:50:756 (1) - QATs might not like it because the route is all blended together
Also remove NC
03:44:234 (1) - remove NC
04:05:104 (1) - idk, but QATs
04:15:538 (1) - ^

Call me back for bubble~

(i wish i could say that)

Cyllinus

196 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cyllinus 2015-11-23T02:20:36+00:00

Alheak wrote:
[Advanced]
00:09:669 (1) - remove NC
00:25:973 (6) - there's nothing on the blue tick where it finishes, and you're ignoring the red tick which has a beat on it reduced slider length by 1/4
00:30:538 (1) - remove NC
00:51:408 (1,1) - ^
01:09:669 (1) - ^
01:18:147 (5,1) - ugly overlap pls. I made a bigger overlap
01:45:212 (2,3) - irregular DS, or at least avoid putting (2) too close to (3)'s end to prevent confusion. I dont know if this kind of "jump" (irregular DS) can be tolerated in advanced but I'd advise against it. I guess you'll have to see with a BN/QAT
I wont report any more of those since you put quite a lot of them, up to you to see what should be done with them
01:54:669 (1) - remove NC
02:20:104 (1) - ^
02:40:973 (1) - ^
02:41:625 (1) - this SV seems alright but maybe QATs wont like it (you never know) ended up removing the SV change
Also 02:42:278 - is pretty strong, you should map a circle on it instead of a slider end, Ii'd suggest making the slider 1/4 shorter then putting on circle there yes
02:46:191 (1) - remove NC
02:50:756 (1) - QATs might not like it because the route is all blended together
Also remove NC
03:44:234 (1) - remove NC
04:05:104 (1) - idk, but QATs
04:15:538 (1) - ^
Call me back for bubble~

(i wish i could say that) don't let your're dreams b dreams

I fixed all of the NC things.

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2015-12-04T14:13:42+00:00

hi recheck no kds

[BMD's Insane]

00:02:821 (3) - several things wrong with this, first, it lands on a strong downbeat which should be clicked on, not released on
second, it's inconsistent with 00:00:539 (1) -
You can end it on 00:02:984 - , then put a circle on 00:03:147 - or even a slider like 00:00:539 (1) - ending on 00:03:473 -
00:05:430 (4) - ^
00:09:017 - and 00:09:506 - : strong beat ignored, this whole part feels very awkward to play rhythmically speaking
00:50:756 - and 00:51:245 - ^
00:21:245 (7) - I'd advise against this, you're ignoring a strong beat on 00:21:408 -
01:14:886 (3,4) - no accentuation in the song yet this has double the DS of 01:14:234 (2,3) -
01:59:886 - reduce the volume to 50% i'd say, or better yet do like 03:49:452 (1) -
00:02:169 (1) - remove NC
00:03:147 - if you did as i suggested, add NC
00:04:125 (1) - remove NC
00:05:756 - Add NC
00:06:734 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:115 (6,1) - Swap NC
00:21:408 - 00:21:734 (1) - swap NC
00:22:549 (3) - Add NC
00:24:832 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:25:647 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:767 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:30:375 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:42:604 (1) - Remove NC
01:09:669 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:18:147 (1,3) - Swap NC
01:19:778 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:038 (1) - Remove NC
01:25:321 (5) - Add NC
01:29:234 (6) - Add NC
01:35:756 (7,1) - Swap NC
01:40:973 (7,1) - Swap NC
01:54:180 (6,1) - Swap NC
01:56:625 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:57:930 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:59:234 (5) - Add NC
02:01:843 (5) - Add NC
02:03:147 (8,1) - Swap NC
02:04:452 (5) - Add NC
02:07:060 (5) - Add NC
02:08:038 (1,2) - Swap NC
02:09:343 (1,3) - Swap NC
02:10:321 (1) - Remove NC
02:12:115 (6,1) - Swap NC
02:13:582 (4) - Add NC
02:17:495 (7,1) - Swap NC
02:19:125 (1) - Remove NC
02:19:452 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:104 (5) - Add NC
02:20:756 (1) - Remove NC
02:30:702 (1) - Remove NC
02:35:430 (1) - Remove NC
02:38:038 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:995 (1,1) - Remove NC
02:40:973 (5) - Add NC
03:00:538 (5) - Add NC
03:29:234 (4,1) - Swap NC
03:30:538 (3) - Add NC
03:33:147 (7,1) - Swap NC
03:38:365 (7,1) - Swap NC
03:40:647 (4,1) - Swap NC
03:42:278 (3) - Add NC
03:43:256 (1,4) - Swap NC
03:46:191 (5) - Add NC
03:48:473 (1,2) - Swap NC
03:54:017 (6) - Add NC
04:07:223 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:09:669 (7,1) - Swap NC
04:12:278 (6) - Add NC
04:17:495 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:20:104 (7,1) - Swap NC
04:21:082 (1,1) - Add NC
04:22:712 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:24:017 (4) - Add NC
04:24:995 (1,2) - Swap NC
04:26:299 (1,3) - Swap NC
04:26:952 (1) - Remove NC
04:27:930 (4,1) - Swap NC

[ryuu's Easy]

You should pick a slightly higher DS, objects are overlaping all the time, making the whole map look cheap
If you don't feel like changing the DS of the whole map (i can understand), at least fix all those damned overlaps
And yes, barely touching is overlaping (switch to the official skin to map if you don't already do this)
Add a new NC every measure, as you can see in BMD's mod ^ I don't have the willpower to point every single one of them again, so please

[]

And yes, (almost) all of this is required to rank the mapset, or at least not getting it disqualified, so please, unless you have a strong point against some of those remarks, don't be too stubborn

BarkingMadDog

443 posts

Joined October 2013

BarkingMadDog 2015-12-06T00:32:58+00:00

Alheak wrote:
hi recheck no kds

[BMD's Insane]
00:02:821 (3) - several things wrong with this, first, it lands on a strong downbeat which should be clicked on, not released on
second, it's inconsistent with 00:00:539 (1) -
You can end it on 00:02:984 - , then put a circle on 00:03:147 - or even a slider like 00:00:539 (1) - ending on 00:03:473 -
00:05:430 (4) - ^
00:09:017 - and 00:09:506 - : strong beat ignored, this whole part feels very awkward to play rhythmically speaking
00:50:756 - and 00:51:245 - ^
00:21:245 (7) - I'd advise against this, you're ignoring a strong beat on 00:21:408 -
01:14:886 (3,4) - no accentuation in the song yet this has double the DS of 01:14:234 (2,3) -
01:59:886 - reduce the volume to 50% i'd say, or better yet do like 03:49:452 (1) -
00:02:169 (1) - remove NC
00:03:147 - if you did as i suggested, add NC
00:04:125 (1) - remove NC
00:05:756 - Add NC
00:06:734 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:115 (6,1) - Swap NC
00:21:408 - 00:21:734 (1) - swap NC
00:22:549 (3) - Add NC
00:24:832 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:25:647 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:767 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:30:375 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:42:604 (1) - Remove NC
01:09:669 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:18:147 (1,3) - Swap NC
01:19:778 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:038 (1) - Remove NC
01:25:321 (5) - Add NC
01:29:234 (6) - Add NC
01:35:756 (7,1) - Swap NC
01:40:973 (7,1) - Swap NC
01:54:180 (6,1) - Swap NC
01:56:625 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:57:930 (5,1) - Swap NC
01:59:234 (5) - Add NC
02:01:843 (5) - Add NC
02:03:147 (8,1) - Swap NC
02:04:452 (5) - Add NC
02:07:060 (5) - Add NC
02:08:038 (1,2) - Swap NC
02:09:343 (1,3) - Swap NC
02:10:321 (1) - Remove NC
02:12:115 (6,1) - Swap NC
02:13:582 (4) - Add NC
02:17:495 (7,1) - Swap NC
02:19:125 (1) - Remove NC
02:19:452 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:104 (5) - Add NC
02:20:756 (1) - Remove NC
02:30:702 (1) - Remove NC
02:35:430 (1) - Remove NC
02:38:038 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:995 (1,1) - Remove NC
02:40:973 (5) - Add NC
03:00:538 (5) - Add NC
03:29:234 (4,1) - Swap NC
03:30:538 (3) - Add NC
03:33:147 (7,1) - Swap NC
03:38:365 (7,1) - Swap NC
03:40:647 (4,1) - Swap NC
03:42:278 (3) - Add NC
03:43:256 (1,4) - Swap NC
03:46:191 (5) - Add NC
03:48:473 (1,2) - Swap NC
03:54:017 (6) - Add NC
04:07:223 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:09:669 (7,1) - Swap NC
04:12:278 (6) - Add NC
04:17:495 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:20:104 (7,1) - Swap NC
04:21:082 (1,1) - Add NC
04:22:712 (6,1) - Swap NC
04:24:017 (4) - Add NC
04:24:995 (1,2) - Swap NC
04:26:299 (1,3) - Swap NC
04:26:952 (1) - Remove NC
04:27:930 (4,1) - Swap NC
And yes, (almost) all of this is required to rank the mapset, or at least not getting it disqualified, so please, unless you have a strong point against some of those remarks, don't be too stubborn

I FIXED EVERYTHING!!!!!!! (aka remapped)
sorry for wasting your time on that mod... thanks anyway

http://puu.sh/lKNHD/5cb49d3ed1.txt

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2015-12-07T08:53:58+00:00

i do my best
thank u

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dylansantosh

313 posts

Joined February 2015

dylansantosh 2015-12-11T14:06:09+00:00

Hey from my queue

Ryuu's Easy

I was going to comment on all those overlaps, but you use them consistently in the same way so i will not
00:43:908 (2,1) - Distant blanket maybe?
03:21:408 - Could insert another break after this note for the attention arrows

Nice

Advanced

00:42:278 (1,3) - Looks symetrical, but isnt
00:46:191 (4,5) - ^
02:10:321 (5,1) - idk blanket looks strange imo
02:31:191 (4,1) - ^
02:38:038 (3,4) - ^
03:21:408 - Same as Ryuu's easy
03:42:278 (1,2) - I'd make this exactly vertically symetrical
03:59:886 (5,1) - Blanket looks slightly off

04:37:060 - ~~I always laugh myself to death when i hear this~~

Hard

00:16:843 (3,5) - These sliderends could touch
00:46:843 (1,1) - Blanket looks off
04:31:843 (1) - its not centered D:

Never has a less than 4* diff given me a blast like this

Alonecpk's Insane

01:52:060 (7,8) - Took me a while, but this blanket is off
02:02:495 (8) - There is very little distance between this and previous note, you could move slider end up against the side of the mapping area and redo the blanket to create a bigger distance
02:05:104 (9) - This shouldnt kick imo, just be a single note at 02:05:104 -
02:32:169 (2,3) - While this map is a blanket galore, this should blanket too imo
02:41:625 (1,2) - Slider ends do not stack properly, they are only a few pixels off though
02:48:799 (4,1) - ^
03:23:365 (1) - This feels really out of place
04:24:669 (3,4) - Blanket slightly off

BMD's Insane

00:20:919 (7) - Kickslider feels out of place
00:31:843 (1,2) - What exactly are you mapping here?
00:42:604 (2) - ^
01:33:799 (1) - How is the person supposed to hit the next note when this is mapped at 1/16th and and ALL of the rest of the beatmap is at 1/8th, How about shortening this 1/16th so that there is proper amount of time for the person to guess when to hit the next note
01:59:234 (7) - This hitsound is weird
01:59:886 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
02:44:234 (1) - I'd try to make this symetrical
02:50:104 (1) - ~~This blanket is so extreme, I like it :v)~~
02:54:669 (4) - This feels out of place
03:23:365 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
03:49:452 (1) - ^
04:03:147 (1,3) - Blanket maybe?
04:05:104 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
04:10:321 (1) - ^

fufufu

fufufufufufufu

Im sorry i cant mod with an ~~errection~~, have a star instead

Cyllinus

196 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cyllinus 2015-12-11T16:06:50+00:00

DylanSan wrote:
Hey from my queue

Ryuu's Easy
I was going to comment on all those overlaps, but you use them consistently in the same way so i will not
00:43:908 (2,1) - Distant blanket maybe?
03:21:408 - Could insert another break after this note for the attention arrows

Nice

Advanced
00:42:278 (1,3) - Looks symetrical, but isnt
00:46:191 (4,5) - ^
02:10:321 (5,1) - idk blanket looks strange imo
02:31:191 (4,1) - ^
02:38:038 (3,4) - ^
03:21:408 - Same as Ryuu's easy
03:42:278 (1,2) - I'd make this exactly vertically symetrical
03:59:886 (5,1) - Blanket looks slightly off

04:37:060 - ~~I always laugh myself to death when i hear this~~

Hard
00:16:843 (3,5) - These sliderends could touch
00:46:843 (1,1) - Blanket looks off
04:31:843 (1) - its not centered D:

Never has a less than 4* diff given me a blast like this

Alonecpk's Insane
01:52:060 (7,8) - Took me a while, but this blanket is off
02:02:495 (8) - There is very little distance between this and previous note, you could move slider end up against the side of the mapping area and redo the blanket to create a bigger distance
02:05:104 (9) - This shouldnt kick imo, just be a single note at 02:05:104 -
02:32:169 (2,3) - While this map is a blanket galore, this should blanket too imo
02:41:625 (1,2) - Slider ends do not stack properly, they are only a few pixels off though
02:48:799 (4,1) - ^
03:23:365 (1) - This feels really out of place
04:24:669 (3,4) - Blanket slightly off

BMD's Insane
00:20:919 (7) - Kickslider feels out of place
00:31:843 (1,2) - What exactly are you mapping here?
00:42:604 (2) - ^
01:33:799 (1) - How is the person supposed to hit the next note when this is mapped at 1/16th and and ALL of the rest of the beatmap is at 1/8th, How about shortening this 1/16th so that there is proper amount of time for the person to guess when to hit the next note
01:59:234 (7) - This hitsound is weird
01:59:886 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
02:44:234 (1) - I'd try to make this symetrical
02:50:104 (1) - ~~This blanket is so extreme, I like it :v)~~
02:54:669 (4) - This feels out of place
03:23:365 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
03:49:452 (1) - ^
04:03:147 (1,3) - Blanket maybe?
04:05:104 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) -
04:10:321 (1) - ^

fufufu
fufufufufufufu

Im sorry i cant mod with an ~~errection~~, have a star instead

Thanks for your mod, I'll update it when I get a chance.

dylansantosh

313 posts

Joined February 2015

dylansantosh 2015-12-11T19:49:41+00:00

oops i spilled 2 more stars, sorry

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2015-12-12T17:48:21+00:00

added break and made few changes

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 04. Flicker.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 91843
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 52696,68349
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Flicker
TitleUnicode:Flicker
Artist:Porter Robinson
ArtistUnicode:Porter Robinson
Creator:Cyllinus
Version:ryuu's Easy
Source:
Tags:Worlds electronic ryuu Alonevpk BarkingMadDog
BeatmapID:845360
BeatmapSetID:284931

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"stolen bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,52912,61707
2,183347,199968
2,201608,202577
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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228,152,239234,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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BarkingMadDog

443 posts

Joined October 2013

BarkingMadDog 2015-12-13T14:20:42+00:00

DylanSan wrote:
Hey from my queue

00:20:919 (7) - Kickslider feels out of place No, it does not.
00:31:843 (1,2) - What exactly are you mapping here? Are you deaf?
00:42:604 (2) - ^ ^
01:33:799 (1) - How is the person supposed to hit the next note when this is mapped at 1/16th and and ALL of the rest of the beatmap is at 1/8th, How about shortening this 1/16th so that there is proper amount of time for the person to guess when to hit the next note ???
01:59:234 (7) - This hitsound is weird Misplaced.
01:59:886 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) - ???
02:44:234 (1) - I'd try to make this symetrical It is fine.
02:50:104 (1) - ~~This blanket is so extreme, I like it :v)~~
02:54:669 (4) - This feels out of place ???
03:23:365 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) - ???
03:49:452 (1) - ^ ^
04:03:147 (1,3) - Blanket maybe? Not sacrificing the pattern just for a measly blanket.
04:05:104 (1) - Same as 01:33:799 (1) - ???
04:10:321 (1) - ^^

thanks for mod. http://puu.sh/lU02g/8196a96255.txt

Wishmaker980

238 posts

Joined October 2013

Wishmaker980 2015-12-14T07:00:19+00:00

Hello! From my NM Queue~

fufufu

02:31:191 (1,2,3) - Remove NC
02:32:495 (3) - Stack this slider tail with 02:31:843 (1) - slider head
03:47:495 (1) - Stack this slider tail with 03:46:354 (2,4) -
04:21:408 (1) - From this blue tick onwards,you can hear the music volume going down,so you should decrease the hitsound volume as well

01:38:202 (4) - Put a finish
03:27:767 (4) - ^
03:54:669 (3) - ^
03:54:669 (3) - ^
04:09:506 (7) - ^
04:20:756 (5) - ^
04:31:843 (1) - ^

That's all from me,pretty neat map.Good luck with your map!

Cyllinus

196 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cyllinus 2015-12-14T07:08:27+00:00

Wishmaker980 wrote:
Hello! From my NM Queue~

fufufu

02:31:191 (1,2,3) - Remove NC done
02:32:495 (3) - Stack this slider tail with 02:31:843 (1) - slider head done
03:47:495 (1) - Stack this slider tail with 03:46:354 (2,4) - done
04:21:408 (1) - From this blue tick onwards,you can hear the music volume going down,so you should decrease the hitsound volume as well

01:38:202 (4) - Put a finish no thanks
03:27:767 (4) - ^
03:54:669 (3) - ^
03:54:669 (3) - ^
04:09:506 (7) - ^
04:20:756 (5) - ^
04:31:843 (1) - ^

That's all from me,pretty neat map.Good luck with your map!

Thank you for the mod.