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Topic Starter
Surono
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 April 2022 at 4:18:46

Artist: Demetori
Title: Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead
Source: 東方神霊廟 ~ Ten Desires.
Tags: Shinreibyou Toho Touhou Project 13 th13 Yoshika Miyako 宮古 芳香 BEGIERDE DES ZAUBERER comic market comiket コミケットC81 djent DECD-0007 Power Progressive Heavy Metal Instrumental Video Game ZUN
BPM: 176
Filesize: 9083kb
Play Time: 05:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Taiko Stage (5,6 stars, 2908 notes)
Download: Demetori - Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead
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puxtu
whee gl
Topic Starter
Surono

puxtu wrote:

whee gl
haha, lagi pengen buat ni taikotok beneran. `_L` thx ya mz udah nerima di GD sebelomnya. jadi dpt "Plong"nya pas ngemap ni lagu *susah nyari teko yg enak di map dementorih*

thx for supret
LigerZero
[Metadata]
Title:Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead OK Bener
TitleUnicode:リジッドパラダイス ~ Dawn of the Dead OK Bener
Artist:Demetori OK Bener
ArtistUnicode:Demetori OK Bener
Creator:Surono OK Bener
Version:Inner Oni OK Bener
Source:東方Project OK Bener
Tags:東方神霊廟 〜 Ten Desires. Shinreibyou Touhou 13 th13 Yoshika Miyako 宮古 芳香 BEGIERDE DES ZAUBERER C81 Power Prog Progressive Heavy Metal ZUN surono OK Bener

waah bener semua...... ane kasih dech kudosunya :3
Topic Starter
Surono
Makasih banget mas :lol: ( I see unused tags )

need demeNtoriH :^)
Volta
Shiranai
Maaf aku ikut diskusi sebentar ya surono,

LigerZero wrote:

[Metadata]
Title:Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead OK Bener
TitleUnicode:リジッドパラダイス ~ Dawn of the Dead OK Bener
Artist:Demetori OK Bener
ArtistUnicode:Demetori OK Bener
Creator:Surono OK Bener
Version:Inner Oni OK Bener
Source:東方Project OK Bener
Tags:東方神霊廟 〜 Ten Desires. Shinreibyou Touhou 13 th13 Yoshika Miyako 宮古 芳香 BEGIERDE DES ZAUBERER C81 Power Prog Progressive Heavy Metal ZUN surono OK Bener

waah bener semua...... ane kasih dech kudosunya :3
Hallo, lain kali kalo mau provide metadata, disertakan sumber dari metadatanya kalo bisa yang official (baik itu web, cover/cd scan, dll) kalo cuma dari wiki dan sumber lain yang dirasa ga official dirasa masih kurang memadai. Also, jangan necro post map-map yang udah graved hanya untuk ngebenerin atau ngasih saran metadata, kecuali sang creator mau me-revive mapnya. Terakhir, metadata check kurang worth untuk dikasih kudosu, coba kasih mod yang lebih membangun map tersebut selain metadata check. Kalo ada yang mau ditanyain kontak aku di ingame atau forum pm
Topic Starter
Surono
oh ya lupa... ngasih Kudos cuma buat post yang membangun si mapper. makasih kak buat penjelasannya, ini ngambil metadata dari puxtu (ada yang ranked juga, jadi aku ntar nengok itu map buat koreksi)
LigerZero
habisnya Mako Sakata.... ane tuh seperti Jelangkung..... data tak dijemput pulang tak diantar

cheking dimap WIP/graveyard/pending pulang tanpa sekata apapun

nggak peduli mau itu dikasih atau nggak atau denied
Shiranai
Yup, gpp kok aku cuma ngasih tau buat ligerzero

Anyway carry on with the main ranking process here, good luck surono :)
Topic Starter
Surono
Makasih kak Mako. ya namanya mas Liger, kan map tuhuw pasti ngesupport XD *thx very much for star! ya mas*

Let's Get Heavy Metal Taco Drum!1!!1!!!
Jerry


Hello~ Here's your taiko mod as requested.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:07:321 - This part sounds really awkward imo. Why not delete the kat at 00:07:321 (39) - and try the same pattern with 00:04:423 (21,22,23) -? It flows really well here and is more consistent

  2. 01:34:981 (27) - I highly recommend moving this over to 01:35:071 -. It matches the drums in the music much better.

  3. 01:35:493 (31) - Why is this don 1/6? The beat of the music clearly lands on the 01:35:523 - point, so I highly suggest you follow the music's beat for this.

  4. 01:35:794 (2) - Remove Finisher for this note since you didn't apply Finish for the other exact same notes at 01:41:577 (47) - and 01:44:469 (70) -?

  5. 01:36:156 (3) - Same for this, remove Finisher? It doesn't emphasize anything in the music for this part imo

  6. 01:38:505 (22) - Change to a big kat to follow what you did for the other exact same notes at 01:35:613 (1) -, 01:41:396 (46) - and 01:44:288 (69) -

  7. 03:20:462 (305,306) - Please CTRL+G for this! It sounds so much better and flows smoother!

  8. 04:20:703 (59,60,61) - This 1/6 is unnecessary in my opinion. Change it to a normal 1/4 ddd by moving 04:20:764 (60) - to 04:20:794 -

That's all from me, really solid patterns and streams throughout the whole map, I enjoyed it alot!
Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Surono

Jerry wrote:



Hello~ Here's your taiko mod as requested.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:07:321 - This part sounds really awkward imo. Why not delete the kat at 00:07:321 (39) - and try the same pattern with 00:04:423 (21,22,23) -? It flows really well here and is more consistent .. I just make this different to more emphasized to "Other" pitch.. I not like to make same if have different parts of music

  2. 01:34:981 (27) - I highly recommend moving this over to 01:35:071 -. It matches the drums in the music much better. Follow Guitar please, and thats fit to hit and to hear

  3. 01:35:493 (31) - Why is this don 1/6? The beat of the music clearly lands on the 01:35:523 - point, so I highly suggest you follow the music's beat for this. if You Slow playback.. you can hear previous patterns xx xx, and in here to see different. is xx X 1/6, not xxxX 1/6 *is same to hit 1/3 patterns with finisher in end of patterns

  4. 01:35:794 (2) - Remove Finisher for this note since you didn't apply Finish for the other exact same notes at 01:41:577 (47) - and 01:44:469 (70) -? yup, but (2) is Stronk pitch then 47 and 70

  5. 01:36:156 (3) - Same for this, remove Finisher? It doesn't emphasize anything in the music for this part imo Stronk pitch

  6. 01:38:505 (22) - Change to a big kat to follow what you did for the other exact same notes at 01:35:613 (1) -, 01:41:396 (46) - and 01:44:288 (69) - is different.. not stronk, and this bass drum, not drum kick

  7. 03:20:462 (305,306) - Please CTRL+G for this! It sounds so much better and flows smoother! ups my mistake, i think with kdkdk in de end of 1/6 is to make easy to hit XD

  8. 04:20:703 (59,60,61) - This 1/6 is unnecessary in my opinion. Change it to a normal 1/4 ddd by moving 04:20:764 (60) - to 04:20:794 - keep, i follow music. this enough fine bcus i can hit this and follow music properly *except if this 1/8, i will make 1/4 or 1/6 XD*


That's all from me, really solid patterns and streams throughout the whole map, I enjoyed it alot!
Good luck with the map!
Makasih Jerry XD

wtf, SR changed XD from 5.14 -> 5.26 ahahah, bcus ctrl g 1/6 part =w= ahah to nice pepes to eat. and changed HP to 5, i want ez pass it
Koucha-
Met sore..
Ini modnya. (wew)

[General]
  1. Ini kayaknya di AImod minta SV 1.4 --> liat .osu pake notepad, itu SVnya msh 1.40000000596046 wkwkwkwk
  2. 04:44:649 - Mungkin tidak perlu mengakhiri kiai disini
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:383 (34,35,36) - bisa jadi k
  2. 00:11:202 (68,69) - k sama 00:11:551 (71,72) - d. soalnya 1/3nya kedengeran dari 00:10:854 -
  3. 00:15:192 - k dan 00:15:373 - d. kalo gak cuma ngikutin nada dasar kan seru :v
  4. 00:15:915 - ada yg kosong disini... geser 108 atau tambahi
  5. 00:21:698 - sama
  6. 00:26:578 (198,199,200) - menurutku disini kkd
  7. 00:39:409 (292) - d. sounds better
  8. 01:14:288 - tambah d?
  9. 01:34:348 - d 01:35:252 (29) - k
  10. 01:47:361 (13,14) - dk
  11. 02:46:637 (80,82,84,2,3,4) - d,k,d,d,k,k (wew)
  12. 03:33:264 (403,405,29) - d,k,d
  13. 04:44:017 - ini jadikan d
  14. 04:58:294 (355 )- sama 05:04:077 (10) - k
    terus, dari 05:19:258 - ke belakang, mungkin patternnya bisa diubah dikit2. biar gak kdkdk terus

huff... ok. mungkin segini dulu ya..
Gud Lak! :)
Topic Starter
Surono

YalEdo wrote:

Met sore..
Ini modnya. (wew)

[General]
  1. Ini kayaknya di AImod minta SV 1.4 --> liat .osu pake notepad, itu SVnya msh 1.40000000596046 wkwkwkwk wtf kwkwkwkw, anjeg amat ini SV dibenerin ttp aja balik ke 1.96 :U
  2. 04:44:649 - Mungkin tidak perlu mengakhiri kiai disini lol
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:06:383 (34,35,36) - bisa jadi k iya sih, tapi keep aja dulu deh. ga suka buat ngeover emphasize
  2. 00:11:202 (68,69) - k sama 00:11:551 (71,72) - d. soalnya 1/3nya kedengeran dari 00:10:854 - what? but this pitch switches is fit.. tetep aja
  3. 00:15:192 - k dan 00:15:373 - d. kalo gak cuma ngikutin nada dasar kan seru :v ngerusak ritim...
  4. 00:15:915 - ada yg kosong disini... geser 108 atau tambahi gw ngikut drum
  5. 00:21:698 - sama sama juga
  6. 00:26:578 (198,199,200) - menurutku disini kkd noh noh, noh is noh ;w;
  7. 00:39:409 (292) - d. sounds better this monotone sound, and for emphasize kick drum
  8. 01:14:288 - tambah d? ngikut drum, ga mau over
  9. 01:34:348 - d 01:35:252 (29) - k ahh.. ga terlalu berpengaruh
  10. 01:47:361 (13,14) - dk drumnya ga cocok...
  11. 02:46:637 (80,82,84,2,3,4) - d,k,d,d ,k,k (wew) jadi apaan itu X_X ntar susah...
  12. 03:33:264 (403,405,29) - d,k,d gw ngerti ini buat neken si guitar, tapi gw ga mau randomin, tetep dulu karna udah sinkron ma si kick drum
  13. 04:44:017 - ini jadikan d penekanan nada ntar hilang
  14. 04:58:294 (355 )- sama 05:04:077 (10) - k gak
    terus, dari 05:19:258 - ke belakang, mungkin patternnya bisa diubah dikit2. biar gak kdkdk terus walau bosenin, tapi kalau diubah2 ntar pusing yg main.

huff... ok. mungkin segini dulu ya..
Gud Lak! :)
thx bro :P
Volta
just a little suggestion becoz the mapper is alredy proh

[Cheese Crackers]
  1. 00:07:321 (39) - move to 00:07:150 - and add something at 00:07:491 - and 00:07:662 - i suggest d k
  2. 00:12:482 (1) - change to D for different colour than the 1/3 pattern. played better for me.
  3. 00:24:048 (1,2) - change to D if mod above applied. i see some inconsistecies in finisher usage in this section. for example: 00:12:482 - , 00:18:265 - , 00:24:048 - 00:29:831 - they sounds similar to me so i think its better to use same kind of finisher (D or K). i prefer D tho..
  4. 03:44:920 (60) - maybe d for better pattern?
  5. 04:36:065 (170) - d flows better
  6. 04:51:968 (303,304,305) - change to ddk or kkd
  7. 04:59:197 (363) - add finisher like at 05:04:980 -
  8. 05:00:643 (1) - maybe change to d? to startled player lol
itu ajah. paling finishernya diperhatiin lagi mana yang D mana yang K. smoga membantu..

Topic Starter
Surono

Flying Pan wrote:

just a little suggestion becoz the mapper is alredy proh plox, i never tried to mapset spread.. still nub on that (tako must dun tak lol)

[Cheese Crackers]
  1. 00:07:321 (39) - move to 00:07:150 - and add something at 00:07:491 - and 00:07:662 - i suggest d k lol if you want this get emphasize. i will do it, kat for cymbal and don for guitar. *dkdd added*
  2. 00:12:482 (1) - change to D for different colour than the 1/3 pattern. played better for me. nah, this fine imo.. bcus is not 1/4. and i just put this K for high emphasize
  3. 00:24:048 (1,2) - change to D if mod above applied. i see some inconsistecies in finisher usage in this section. for example: 00:12:482 - , 00:18:265 - , 00:24:048 - 00:29:831 - they sounds similar to me so i think its better to use same kind of finisher (D or K). i prefer D tho.. 00:51:878 (1,2) - this bass drum, i looking what pitch of drum is can hearing. if instrument have bass drum. thats soft. if high, kick drum will arranged it
  4. 03:44:920 (60) - maybe d for better pattern? keep, i follow instrument. and thats kick drum
  5. 04:36:065 (170) - d flows better yeah better, but this high pitch
  6. 04:51:968 (303,304,305) - change to ddk or kkd i guess, kdk is enough to hit, and to different with 04:46:185 (253,254,255) - this
  7. 04:59:197 (363) - add finisher like at 05:04:980 - 04:59:197 (363) -different pitch, and not have cymbal pitch
  8. 05:00:643 (1) - maybe change to d? to startled player lol wat?/??/? OLoOLLLOLOOolOOOOlol
itu ajah. paling finishernya diperhatiin lagi mana yang D mana yang K. smoga membantu.. woke!1!

miss on 1/6 parts or death guitar?/? lol I've emphasize more to guitar, but still adding kat for kick drum.. and with before is like kdddkdkkkkdkkkk idk. bla engrisz
thx, this useful :D
Volta
still survive in first death guitar. until comes 1/6 kddkddkddk (slowfinger.jpg)
and missed next guitar.... 03:32:631 - fak this. (cannotalternatesmoothly.mp3)
and some stupid miss in the end lol

blah engrish
Topic Starter
Surono
03:33:444 -

Before


After

Maybe this why harsh to playing 6(`-`)9
I Emphasizing thats Guitar. But okay, This make confused if first try (wow to see Mekadon playthis, beutijol alternating, humen needs moar learnink thiz)

but i cant too.. confused too or idk (With HR and every time to try). so, I changed to patterns with before with kkk to moar nic3 *not ddk or dkk* and just need emphasizing 03:33:986 - in here lol, nice guitar enyor

thx4lotesrujakNOTIS at 2nd gitarz. bwa ALAY Engrizh
Fuel
Hi, from my mod queue.
Sorry for the late post :?

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
Streams too hard for me :(
Inner Oni
00:09:878 - Technically the k should go here instead of at 00:09:934 (going off the guitar here), but I'm not sure if that makes the 1/6 there too difficult or has weird flow (all that complex-sounding stuff) because I'm just mashing and somehow combo that part hue
03:18:986 - Add a d here or at 03:19:167? I understand if you leave those notes out so the finisher plays better. I think it goes with the guitar run better though. There's a couple of places where I think notes should go (like k at 04:09:950 but they're all around finishers so I guess you left them out specifically).
03:19:980 (296) - Change to d? The drum beats on the other k's are more emphatic.
03:20:824 - I think a note should go here, though if you're following the guitar in this 1/6 then its fine as it is. I'm listening to the drumroll here but it looks like you're going off the guitar.
04:20:824 - It sounds like there's a missing d in this 1/6 pattern here.
05:19:980 (30,31,32,33,34) - Make some of these ddkdk into ddkkk?

Hope it helps :D
Topic Starter
Surono

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.
Sorry for the late post :? np, u've come here lel

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod

Streams too hard for me :( maybe 1/6 patterns? or long streams? but is easy patterns, you just should moar using stamina lol
Inner Oni
00:09:878 - Technically the k should go here instead of at 00:09:934 (going off the guitar here), but I'm not sure if that makes the 1/6 there too difficult or has weird flow (all that complex-sounding stuff) because I'm just mashing and somehow combo that part hue lol, this can be moar emphasize 00:09:878 (62,63) - with kat, but I just put on 63 for ez play. and flow is support too imo
03:18:986 - Add a d here or at 03:19:167? I understand if you leave those notes out so the finisher plays better. I think it goes with the guitar run better though. There's a couple of places where I think notes should go (like k at 04:09:950 but they're all around finishers so I guess you left them out specifically). yep, I placed that finisher and ignoring drum pitch before finisher.. fun to hit finisher, like others ranked mapped. ( I not really liking to placing finisher in end streams.. but if 1/3 patterns is np4me
03:19:980 (296) - Change to d? The drum beats on the other k's are more emphatic. thats make unbalance with high pitch (Guitar), and idk whether this nice to playing
03:20:824 - I think a note should go here, though if you're following the guitar in this 1/6 then its fine as it is. I'm listening to the drumroll here but it looks like you're going off the guitar. 1/6 with end finisher.. should this? I just ignoring thats for 03:20:764 (307,308) - hitting 1/3 pattern (like 1/4 patterns too)
04:20:824 - It sounds like there's a missing d in this 1/6 pattern here. try with 25% playback, and you can know thats missing or not
05:19:980 (30,31,32,33,34) - Make some of these ddkdk into ddkkk? nice suggest, but 05:20:251 (33) - this low pitch then 32 & 34. but I will find ddkkk patterns in next length. (if find high pitch)

Hope it helps :D
Thanks for Ur opiny. I get someting to find at end of duration
Skeuddy
Hi, Sur, from my queue
(!) – Important change

Inner Oni
  1. Timing > Resnap All Notes, or some like that
  2. 00:48:716 (358) - k (I like dk k patterns. Yey)
  3. 00:55:674 (28) - ^
  4. 00:57:119 (39) - ^
  5. 00:58:565 (50) - ^
  6. 01:00:011 (61) - ^
  7. 01:01:457 (72) - ^
  8. 01:02:902 (83) - ^, and 01:03:083 (84,85) - d
  9. 01:04:348 (94) - ^
  10. 01:07:240 (114) - ^
  11. 01:08:686 (125) - ^
  12. 01:10:131 (135) - ^
  13. 01:48:174 (18) - ^
  14. 01:49:619 (29) - ^, and 01:49:800 (30,31) - d
  15. 01:51:065 (40) - ^
  16. 01:52:511 (1) - ^
  17. 01:53:957 (11) - ^
  18. 01:55:403 (22) - ^
  19. 01:56:848 (33) - ^
  20. 01:58:294 (44) - ^
  21. 01:59:740 (55) - ^
  22. 02:01:186 (66) - ^, and 02:01:366 (67,68) - d
  23. 02:02:631 (77) - ^
  24. 02:04:077 (1) - ^
  25. 02:05:523 (11) - ^
  26. 02:06:969 (22) - ^
  27. 02:08:414 (32) - ^
  28. 02:16:095 (85) - ^ (~)
  29. 02:31:999 (125) - ^ (~)
  30. 02:44:740 (60) - ^
  31. 03:08:053 (185,186) - ^ (~)
  32. 03:16:095 (264) - ^ (~)
  33. 03:22:872 (314) - ^ (~)
  34. 03:25:041 (325) - ^
  35. 03:38:414 (4) - ^ (~)
  36. 03:52:692 (12) - ^ (!)
  37. 03:56:306 (32) - ^ (!)
  38. 04:11:486 (10) - ^
  39. 04:14:378 (10) - ^
  40. 04:17:450 (32,33) - ^
  41. 04:37:782 (186) - ^
  42. 04:50:071 (288) - ^
  43. 05:06:426 (2) - ^
  44. 05:39:317 (105) - ^
  45. 02:32:631 (130,131,134) - d
  46. 01:05:794 (105,106) - Swap
  47. 03:58:474 (51,52) - ^ (!)
  48. 04:16:727 (27,29) - ^, and 04:16:999 (30) - k

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Surono
wtf, fked conectson!1 BWAAAH

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Sur, from my queue
(!) – Important change

Inner Oni
  1. Timing > Resnap All Notes, or some like that
  2. 00:48:716 (358) - k (I like dk k patterns. Yey)
  3. 00:55:674 (28) - ^
  4. 00:57:119 (39) - ^
  5. 00:58:565 (50) - ^
  6. 01:00:011 (61) - ^
  7. 01:01:457 (72) - ^
  8. 01:02:902 (83) - ^, and 01:03:083 (84,85) - d
  9. 01:04:348 (94) - ^
  10. 01:07:240 (114) - ^
  11. 01:08:686 (125) - ^
  12. 01:10:131 (135) - ^
  13. 01:48:174 (18) - ^
  14. 01:49:619 (29) - ^, and 01:49:800 (30,31) - d
  15. 01:51:065 (40) - ^
  16. 01:52:511 (1) - ^
  17. 01:53:957 (11) - ^
  18. 01:55:403 (22) - ^
  19. 01:56:848 (33) - ^
  20. 01:58:294 (44) - ^
  21. 01:59:740 (55) - ^
  22. 02:01:186 (66) - ^, and 02:01:366 (67,68) - d
  23. 02:02:631 (77) - ^
  24. 02:04:077 (1) - ^
  25. 02:05:523 (11) - ^
  26. 02:06:969 (22) - ^
  27. 02:08:414 (32) - ^ Sorry, no change
  28. 02:16:095 (85) - ^ (~)
  29. 02:31:999 (125) - ^ (~)
  30. 02:44:740 (60) - ^
  31. 03:08:053 (185,186) - ^ (~)
  32. 03:16:095 (264) - ^ (~)
  33. 03:22:872 (314) - ^ (~)
  34. 03:25:041 (325) - ^
  35. 03:38:414 (4) - ^ (~) idk with this
  36. 03:52:692 (12) - ^ (!) this fine bcus end of pattern, not 1/4 patterns
  37. 03:56:306 (32) - ^ (!) balance, not problem
  38. 04:11:486 (10) - ^
  39. 04:14:378 (10) - ^
  40. 04:17:450 (32,33) - ^
  41. 04:37:782 (186) - ^
  42. 04:50:071 (288) - ^
  43. 05:06:426 (2) - ^
  44. 05:39:317 (105) - ^
  45. 02:32:631 (130,131,134) - d
  46. 01:05:794 (105,106) - Swap
  47. 03:58:474 (51,52) - ^ (!) ^
  48. 04:16:727 (27,29) - ^, and 04:16:999 (30) - k

Good luck!
thx.. but i not like with your reverse suggestion, this contrast with my mind. this solid map sry (if you have reason. i can think thats, but this mod just kill my consistent hitsounding. I follow drum rather then guitar, guitar pitch is second to hitsound)

and rip high SR, i can change X icon with 1 note. but i cant get a quality mep. rip lol
Shinsekai-
Take my stars ;~; good map and good song
Nyan
[The only diff]

02:22:149 (42) - remove Finish
04:12:662 - add a note
05:41:668 (122) - big kat

A suggestion. I'd like to put several massive 1/4 trains on 05:39:680 - 05:47:270 to make a last challenge part.
Topic Starter
Surono
aa.. thats enough for spicy 1/4, I just make like that for identic a drum mapping lol.

Really thx much to both of you.
Kankri
"Deme tory Cheese Crackers" i think this is the best thing i seen today


[Inner Oni]

00:06:639 (37) - kat

02:05:794 (13) - ^


wowza, you're heck of a good mapper, if only I could map like you lolz 8-)

especially that the kat notes went with the rhythm :D



GL! :)
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