[General]
I recommend you use the mp3 and timing in
my map, since the original song is know to have some weird timing issues at rather random places.
[Flower-Viewing Party]
00:20:888 (5,1) - bring these a bit closer, the distance threw me off since this is the first occurrence
00:29:631 (2,3) - no partial stack here?
00:55:174 - perhaps a circle or a triplet starting here to complement the guitars
01:05:973 (8,9) - ctrl+g flows better imo
01:08:545 (1) - the correctly way to NC here in conjunction with the music would be this:
01:14:716 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC group these in 3s (123 123)
01:19:516 (1) - NC pattern:
01:27:488 (3,4) - should be 1/6 snap
01:27:745 (1,1) - use the same combo for this
01:49:516 (1,1,1) - same here
02:06:316 - add a slider here to connect the two sections better, the pause feels really awkward to play
02:22:431 (1,1,1) - one combo
02:33:745 (9) - try a 1/4 slider here (do bring it closer so the next pattern is not difficult to aim)
02:36:316 (1) - NC restructure:
02:42:316 (1) - ^
02:48:488 (4) - NC to keep consistency with the previous sections
02:53:459 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - group these in 3s
03:18:316 (1,2,3) - there is not enough momentum in the patterns themselves which is making the flow really jagged, try increased the spacing within each triplet:
03:37:688 (1) - finish
04:07:345 (1) - change the default sample to soft and use drum additions in this section, this way you don't get the unfitting drum ticks on the sliders
04:10:088 (3) - NC
04:12:316 (2) - NC here and remove NC on 04:12:574 (1)
04:32:716 (8,9,1) - this part plays really confusing, the 1/2 gap has a shorter spacing than the 1/4 gap...you might want to reposition this somewhere else
04:39:231 (1) - remove NC
05:03:059 (4,5,1) - quite a random anti jump if you ask me, use normal spaced jump here would fit the music better
05:04:774 (1) - remove NC and place it on 05:04:945 (2)
05:07:516 (8) - remove the clap, doesnt fit the music here
05:15:916 (1) - not sure why you used a stream here, the 1/4 don't appear until 05:16:430 (7) which is ideally where you should start it
05:51:059 (1,2) - give this a little more spacing, i overshot the last circle due to the speed of my spin xD
the map is pretty nicely done, but the NC is a little random at times, so get a few more mods and call me back after