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Arzenvald
=w=)/ etlie-nyan

[general]
add hitsound on Easy & Normal... =w= if you are too lazy, try to find 'hitsound copier'..

[easy]
00:24:771 (24771|2) - LN stop at 00:25:499

00:29:430 (29430|4) - stop at 00:29:867
00:30:158 : add notes

so many LN that stop on blue line instead white, it's somehow confusing & off beat.. =w= fix them

01:14:140 (74140|0) - remove
add on 01:13:993 & 01:14:284 (like you did on 01:23:314 (83314|0,83606|2,83751|6) - )

01:25:353 (85353|2) - orz, LN stop at white line please, also add notes on the white line too, there's a sound (optional)
02:11:955 (131955|2) - & many others ^ ;-; white line please...

03:06:858 (186858|4) - add 1 note
03:52:441 (232441|6,232586|5,232732|4,232877|3) - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1874876

can't find annoying things, since easy is EZ as it is

[normal]
=w=)b

[hard]
OwO hitsound..

00:09:770 (9770|3) - add 1 note
00:14:429 (14429|1) - remove? =w= no symbal 'crash' sound
00:19:090 (19090|1) - add 2 notes
00:28:411 (28411|2) - add 1 note
00:37:731 (37731|5) - add 2 notes
00:47:051 (47051|3) - ^
00:56:372 (56372|5) - add 2
00:57:536 (57536|4) - add 1
01:01:031 (61031|6) - add 1
01:02:197 (62197|5) - ^
01:05:692 (65692|2) - add 2
01:15:012 (75012|2) - add 1
01:19:673 (79673|3) - add 2 / 1
01:24:333 (84333|1) - add 2
01:33:653 (93653|3) - add 2
01:42:973 (102973|4) - add 1
01:44:138 (104138|2) - add 1
01:46:468 (106468|5) - add 1
01:47:633 (107633|4) - add 1
01:48:798 (108798|5) - add 1
01:52:294 (112294|3) - add 2
02:01:614 (121614|3) - add 2
02:10:935 (130935|6) - add 2
02:20:255 (140255|5) - add 2
02:24:624 (144624|2) - add 1 / 2
02:29:284 (149284|3) - turn into LN, stop at 02:29:575
02:48:216 (168216|4) - add 2
03:06:856 (186856|5) - add 1
03:08:021 (188021|1) - add 1
03:09:186 (189186|4) - add 1
03:10:351 (190351|2) - add 1
03:11:517 (191517|6) - add 1
03:12:683 (192683|5) - add 1
03:16:178 (196178|3) - add 1
03:20:838 (200838|3) - add 2
03:25:498 (205498|4) - add 1
03:30:158 (210158|6) - add 2
03:34:818 (214818|6) - add 1
03:39:478 (219478|2) - add 2
03:44:139 (224139|5) - add 2
03:48:507 (228507|1) - add 2
03:48:799 (228799|5) - add 2

why add? it's to representate cymbal / crash soud.. =w=
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

ajeemaniz wrote:

=w=)/ etlie-nyan

[general]
add hitsound on Easy & Normal... =w= if you are too lazy, try to find 'hitsound copier'.. ; will add them when i have time >w<b

[easy]
00:24:771 (24771|2) - LN stop at 00:25:499

00:29:430 (29430|4) - stop at 00:29:867
00:30:158 : add notes

so many LN that stop on blue line instead white, it's somehow confusing & off beat.. =w= fix them [will go for it

01:14:140 (74140|0) - remove
add on 01:13:993 & 01:14:284 (like you did on 01:23:314 (83314|0,83606|2,83751|6) - )

01:25:353 (85353|2) - orz, LN stop at white line please, also add notes on the white line too, there's a sound (optional)
02:11:955 (131955|2) - & many others ^ ;-; white line please... << Nope ; there is already following the bass song listen to it carrefully

03:06:858 (186858|4) - add 1 note
03:52:441 (232441|6,232586|5,232732|4,232877|3) - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1874876 << Great suggestion thx

can't find annoying things, since easy is EZ as it is <<ikr :V
[normal]
=w=)b d(=w=

[hard]
OwO hitsound..

00:09:770 (9770|3) - add 1 note
00:14:429 (14429|1) - remove? =w= no symbal 'crash' sound
00:19:090 (19090|1) - add 2 notes
00:28:411 (28411|2) - add 1 note
00:37:731 (37731|5) - add 2 notes
00:47:051 (47051|3) - ^
00:56:372 (56372|5) - add 2
00:57:536 (57536|4) - add 1
01:01:031 (61031|6) - add 1
01:02:197 (62197|5) - ^
01:05:692 (65692|2) - add 2
01:15:012 (75012|2) - add 1
01:19:673 (79673|3) - add 2 / 1
01:24:333 (84333|1) - add 2
01:33:653 (93653|3) - add 2
01:42:973 (102973|4) - add 1
01:44:138 (104138|2) - add 1
01:46:468 (106468|5) - add 1
01:47:633 (107633|4) - add 1
01:48:798 (108798|5) - add 1
01:52:294 (112294|3) - add 2
02:01:614 (121614|3) - add 2
02:10:935 (130935|6) - add 2
02:20:255 (140255|5) - add 2
02:24:624 (144624|2) - add 1 / 2
02:29:284 (149284|3) - turn into LN, stop at 02:29:575
02:48:216 (168216|4) - add 2
03:06:856 (186856|5) - add 1
03:08:021 (188021|1) - add 1
03:09:186 (189186|4) - add 1
03:10:351 (190351|2) - add 1
03:11:517 (191517|6) - add 1
03:12:683 (192683|5) - add 1
03:16:178 (196178|3) - add 1
03:20:838 (200838|3) - add 2
03:25:498 (205498|4) - add 1
03:30:158 (210158|6) - add 2
03:34:818 (214818|6) - add 1
03:39:478 (219478|2) - add 2
03:44:139 (224139|5) - add 2
03:48:507 (228507|1) - add 2
03:48:799 (228799|5) - add 2

HONESTLY ahum first thing Thanks~ i change most of the thing ^ sometimes add 1 sometimes 2 but WELL I gonna do my lazy guy you'll said but srsly not gonna say what i didn't put '' I use almost all of them Sooo~ ""
why add? it's to representate cymbal / crash soud.. =w= Thx for advice
Really Thanks Guardian Rabbit Ajee >w<b No Reply mean Ok~
hokin1995
Hello@@/
I'm not good at mod so if you not agree my suggestion , you can ignore my suggestion . ;)
I don't care XD :D
Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[General]
In Easy I suggest to change the HP Drain Rate from 5 to 6
In Normal I suggest to change the HP Drain Rate from 6 to 7

[Easy]
00:20:838 00:23:168 00:32:488 etc - add a note? like this→(25499|6,30158|2,34819|6) if you add a note please recheck the Easy diff because many LN also have this problem

00:42:392 (42392|1) - move to 1
00:42:974 (42974|6) - move to 5
00:44:430 (44430|4) - move to 4
00:46:469 (46469|3,46761|3,47052|1) - move 1 column to the right
00:47:634 (47634|5) - move to 7
00:51:712 (51712|5) - move to 1
00:52:295 (52295|2) - move to 7
00:56:226 (56226|6) - move to 5
00:56:373 (56373|4) - move to 7
00:58:703 (58703|2) - move to 1
01:02:197 (62197|6) - move to 4?

Easy is for beginner so I think you should avoid to use the pattern (1/4 note)like this →00:55:789 (55789|3,55936|0,56081|2,56226|6,56372|4) many times because I think it is difficult for beginner

[Normal]
00:19:382 (19382|4) - move to 6
00:19:965 (19965|5) - move to 5
00:21:420 - add a note in 4?

[Hard]
00:00:450 (450|1) - move to 1
00:01:033 (1033|3) - move to 2
00:01:032 (1032|6) - move to 6
00:01:761 (1761|2) - move to 4
00:06:420 - add one note in 5?
00:08:459 (8459|3) - move to 5
00:08:750 (8750|6) - move to 6
00:12:974 (12974|1) - move to 3
00:16:469 (16469|3) - move to 3

When I have a time I will mod Normal and Hard again
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

hokin1995 wrote:

Hello@@/
I'm not good at mod so if you not agree my suggestion , you can ignore my suggestion . ;)
I don't care XD :D
Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[General]
In Easy I suggest to change the HP Drain Rate from 5 to 6 << NICE >.</ ty
In Normal I suggest to change the HP Drain Rate from 6 to 7 << NICE >.</ ty

[Easy]
00:20:838 00:23:168 00:32:488 etc - add a note? like this→(25499|6,30158|2,34819|6) if you add a note please recheck the Easy diff because many LN also have this problem This Is not appear ;w; don't know why

00:42:392 (42392|1) - move to 1 << NICE >.</ ty
00:42:974 (42974|6) - move to 5 << NICE >.</ ty
00:44:430 (44430|4) - move to 4 << NICE >.</ ty
00:46:469 (46469|3,46761|3,47052|1) - move 1 column to the right << NICE >.</ ty
00:47:634 (47634|5) - move to 7 << NICE >.</ ty
00:51:712 (51712|5) - move to 1 << NICE >.</ ty
00:52:295 (52295|2) - move to 7 << NICE >.</ ty
00:56:226 (56226|6) - move to 5 << NICE >.</ ty
00:56:373 (56373|4) - move to 7 << NICE >.</ ty
00:58:703 (58703|2) - move to 1 << NICE >.</ ty
01:02:197 (62197|6) - move to 4? << NICE >.</ ty

Easy is for beginner so I think you should avoid to use the pattern (1/4 note)like this →00:55:789 (55789|3,55936|0,56081|2,56226|6,56372|4) many times because I think it is difficult for beginner Ok :D will remenber dat ty

[Normal]
00:19:382 (19382|4) - move to 6 << NICE >.</ ty
00:19:965 (19965|5) - move to 5 << NICE >.</ ty
00:21:420 - add a note in 4? << NICE >.</ ty

[Hard]
00:00:450 (450|1) - move to 1 << NICE >.</ ty
00:01:033 (1033|3) - move to 2 << NICE >.</ ty
00:01:032 (1032|6) - move to 6 << NICE >.</ ty
00:01:761 (1761|2) - move to 4 << NICE >.</ ty
00:06:420 - add one note in 5? << NICE >.</ ty
00:08:459 (8459|3) - move to 5 << NICE >.</ ty
00:08:750 (8750|6) - move to 6 << NICE >.</ ty
00:12:974 (12974|1) - move to 3 << NICE >.</ ty
00:16:469 (16469|3) - move to 3 << NICE >.</ ty

When I have a time I will mod Normal and Hard again
Good luck :)
Thanks~ :D seriously This mod help me >w<b
Remillion Cross
Hi ETernalie :D here's the mods! (and thanks about your help anyway)
these mod just for fix some pattern, and not destroying your imagination

  • [Easy]
    *00:15:887 (15887|4) - move this note to 00:16:032 so it will same consistent as 00:13:703 (13703|6,13848|4) or 00:11:373 (11373|0,11518|2) (remembering when you use the note here for follow the vocals)
    *00:32:488 - add a circle with whistle hitsound in 2nd column
    *00:28:702 (28702|0) - delete this pattern. i didn't see if you make the same pattern in the other same part as this
    *03:46:178 - add a circle here in 5th column for consistency
    *01:11:663 (71663|1) - for me, it looks like it will be follow the pitch when you move this note to 3rd column
    *02:59:139 (179139|4) - move the note to 5th column, it suits the pattern beside this
  • [Normal]
    *00:46:179 (46179|1,46470|2,46761|3) - ctrl+J. Follow the pitch relevancy for this one
    *01:30:158 - seems you forgot some note in here (take a look in this 00:34:237 (34237|6)) you need to add a note in 2nd column or any column do you want to
    *01:57:828 (117828|2,117974|1) - move this pattern one column to the left
    *02:10:498 - add a circle in 5th column
    *03:50:401 - you need to add a circle in this time. (suggestion : 2nd or 3rd column)
  • [Hard]
    *00:27:828 - you need to add a circle in here for following the instrument. maybe in 2 or 3 column ?
    *00:50:983 - add a circle in 4th column, please heard this timing more accurately, and you will find the reason why i suggest you about this
    *01:37:585 - same as ^, add a circle in 5th column
    *00:57:537 (57537|2) - it's better if you put this to 7th column
    *02:01:469 - add a circle or add a same pattern like 02:01:322 (121322|5,121322|6) in the 6 and 7 column (following the drum beat)
    *02:10:061 and 02:10:498 - add a circle in here, up to you where the column do you want to add (different than in the first reffrain)
That's all. Actually there are many instrument that you actually can add some pattern to increase the hard diff (since the other hard diff had a 2.75 or above star rating), but well.. i'm here just for modding XD
Good luck for ranked!~
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi ETernalie :D here's the mods! (and thanks about your help anyway)
these mod just for fix some pattern, and not destroying your imagination

  • [Easy]
    *00:15:887 (15887|4) - move this note to 00:16:032 so it will same consistent as 00:13:703 (13703|6,13848|4) or 00:11:373 (11373|0,11518|2) (remembering when you use the note here for follow the vocals) << I didn't even noticed I followed vocal :V dat make sense thx
    *00:32:488 - add a circle with whistle hitsound in 2nd column
    *00:28:702 (28702|0) - delete this pattern. i didn't see if you make the same pattern in the other same part as this
    *03:46:178 - add a circle here in 5th column for consistency
    *01:11:663 (71663|1) - for me, it looks like it will be follow the pitch when you move this note to 3rd column
    *02:59:139 (179139|4) - move the note to 5th column, it suits the pattern beside this
All Fixed hau~

  • [Normal]
    *00:46:179 (46179|1,46470|2,46761|3) - ctrl+J. Follow the pitch relevancy for this one
    *01:30:158 - seems you forgot some note in here (take a look in this 00:34:237 (34237|6)) you need to add a note in 2nd column or any column do you want to
    *01:57:828 (117828|2,117974|1) - move this pattern one column to the left
    *02:10:498 - add a circle in 5th column
    *03:50:401 - you need to add a circle in this time. (suggestion : 2nd or 3rd column)
All Fixed hau~

  • [Hard]
    *00:27:828 - you need to add a circle in here for following the instrument. maybe in 2 or 3 column ?
    *00:50:983 - add a circle in 4th column, please heard this timing more accurately, and you will find the reason why i suggest you about this << This is genius
    *01:37:585 - same as ^, add a circle in 5th column
    *00:57:537 (57537|2) - it's better if you put this to 7th column
    *02:01:469 - add a circle or add a same pattern like 02:01:322 (121322|5,121322|6) in the 6 and 7 column (following the drum beat)<< I like the idea :D
    *02:10:061 and 02:10:498 - add a circle in here, up to you where the column do you want to add (different than in the first reffrain)
All Fixed hau~

That's all. Actually there are many instrument that you actually can add some pattern to increase the hard diff (since the other hard diff had a 2.75 or above star rating), but well.. i'm here just for modding XD
Good luck for ranked!~
Thx for Mod RC :3 ,Actually It helped me a lot , but I don't think i want to make hard Harder cause I mapped this for being Easy << well at least a little hard
Ichigaki
Welcome to the mod
Mod requested via in-game chat


Column setup
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[General]
  1. Song Setup : The mp3 is have 320 bitrate. Please change it into 192kbps in order to make it rankable.
    1. Artist : 花澤 香菜
    2. Romanized Artist : Hanazawa Kana
    3. Title : sweets parade
    4. Romanized Artist : sweets parade
    5. Source : 妖狐×僕SS
    6. Tags : Inu x Boku SS ending song The Dog and Me Secret Service
  2. AiMod : Check on Easy and Hard only
  3. Kiai and preview audio :
    1. Kiai Clear
    2. For audio preview, maybe change it in 01:52:294 -
[Easy]
  1. If you follow the vocal, try to avoid 00:16:760 (16760|6,16761|2,17343|4,17344|1) - . On there, you follow the instrument, not the vocal instead. 00:17:051 - 00:17:488 - add a single note there to keep you pattern. Try to be consistent.
  2. 00:20:110 (20110|2,22440|5,24770|2) - All sliders like these isn't fit with the song. Change them into single note. This part is different with 00:26:081 (26081|0,26664|1,27101|2) - . Maybe like 02:32:926 (152926|0,153509|0,153654|2) - .
  3. 01:02:197 (62197|3) - Maybe strecth this until next white line.
  4. 01:05:693 (65693|0,65984|6,66276|4,66567|3,66713|2,67004|0,67441|4) - As i said in first mod, try to be consistent. You're here following the vocal, not the instrument. Any part in kiai here you used to be like that. So please re-arrange it.
  5. 01:25:352 (85352|2,87683|4,90013|2) - Same as second mod in here and so on.
  6. 01:49:382 - Maybe add a note on 4th.
  7. 01:52:149 - Add a note on 4th.
  8. 02:11:954 (131954|2,134284|4,136615|2,138945|2,141275|2) - Stretch it until next white line and so on like you did in 03:06:858 (186858|4,188023|3,189187|2,190352|5,191517|1) - .
  9. 03:52:877 (232877|1) - Change to single note.
[Normal]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen support.
  2. 00:14:868 (14868|3) - Remove this. I heard no sound both for the instrument and vocal here.
  3. 00:17:198 (17198|1) - Same as above.
  4. 00:22:585 -
  5. 00:32:198 (32198|5,32635|6,32780|0) - Same as above but with different pattern if you accept it and so on.
  6. 01:02:488 - 01:02:925 - Add a note there.
  7. 01:06:130 (66130|1,68460|1,70790|2) - Same as first and second mod here, and so on.
  8. 01:14:721 (74721|4) - Move to 6th and add a note 01:14:867 - on 5th.
  9. 02:10:935 - Add a note on 5th because of cymbal.
  10. 02:15:304 - Add a note on 7th because of cymbal.
  11. 02:20:255 - Add a note on 1st because of cymbal.
  12. 02:24:624 - Same as above.
  13. 02:45:887 (165887|0,165887|2,166470|6,166470|4,166907|1,166907|3) - No need to make it as 2-notes, different with 02:47:051 -. Add note on 3rd there.
  14. 03:05:692 - Add a note on 3rd and Ctrl+G 03:05:839 (185839|0,185984|1) - to make a little stairs to make it fit with 03:06:130 (186130|6,186276|5,186421|4,186567|3,186713|2) - .
  15. 03:52:877 (232877|3) - Move this to 1st.
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:876 (22876|5,23313|6,23458|4) - Why you make this? Maybe change it into
    and so on
  2. 00:39:333 - Add a note to 4th.
  3. 00:48:362 - 00:48:653 - Add a note to 3rd. 00:48:799 - Add a note to 2nd.
  4. Try to make each red lines in kiai into 2-notes.
  5. 01:24:041 (84041|0,84042|4,84042|2,84042|6) - Remove this and change it with add two notes on 2nd and 6th.
  6. 01:50:837 (110837|1,110983|5) - Change it to 2-notes jack.
  7. 02:01:469 - Too loud here.
  8. 02:06:275 - Add note on 7th.
  9. 03:06:857 (186857|2) - Move to 4th.
  10. 03:16:178 - ~kiai end - There's some inconsistent note quantity here.
  11. Just testplay for this :
[Overall]
Yes, your map is good, suitable with the song, easy-played, but have some inconsistent pattern in all diff :( .
Good luck Eternalie~ :oops:
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

ichia7x wrote:

Welcome to the mod
Mod requested via in-game chat


Column setup
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[General]
  1. Song Setup : The mp3 is have 320 bitrate. Please change it into 192kbps in order to make it rankable. I need help for this I don't know how to change the mp3 without Osu counting it as new beatmap ;w;
    1. Artist : 花澤 香菜
    2. Romanized Artist : Hanazawa Kana
    3. Title : sweets parade
    4. Romanized Artist : sweets parade
    5. Source : 妖狐×僕SS
    6. Tags : Inu x Boku SS ending song The Dog and Me Secret Service
  2. AiMod : Check on Easy and Hard only
  3. Kiai and preview audio :
    1. Kiai Clear
    2. For audio preview, maybe change it in 01:52:294 -


[Easy]
  1. If you follow the vocal, try to avoid 00:16:760 (16760|6,16761|2,17343|4,17344|1) - . On there, you follow the instrument, not the vocal instead. 00:17:051 - 00:17:488 - add a single note there to keep you pattern. Try to be consistent.
  2. 00:20:110 (20110|2,22440|5,24770|2) - All sliders like these isn't fit with the song. Change them into single note. This part is different with 00:26:081 (26081|0,26664|1,27101|2) - . Maybe like 02:32:926 (152926|0,153509|0,153654|2) - .
  3. 01:02:197 (62197|3) - Maybe strecth this until next white line.
  4. 01:05:693 (65693|0,65984|6,66276|4,66567|3,66713|2,67004|0,67441|4) - As i said in first mod, try to be consistent. You're here following the vocal, not the instrument. Any part in kiai here you used to be like that. So please re-arrange it. Tryed to
  5. 01:25:352 (85352|2,87683|4,90013|2) - Same as second mod in here and so on. Tryed to
  6. 01:49:382 - Maybe add a note on 4th.
  7. 01:52:149 - Add a note on 4th.
  8. 02:11:954 (131954|2,134284|4,136615|2,138945|2,141275|2) - Stretch it until next white line and so on like you did in 03:06:858 (186858|4,188023|3,189187|2,190352|5,191517|1) - .
  9. 03:52:877 (232877|1) - Change to single note.
[Normal]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen support.
  2. 00:14:868 (14868|3) - Remove this. I heard no sound both for the instrument and vocal here. Nope there is a sound here :3 It's a drum kick if i'm not wrong
  3. 00:17:198 (17198|1) - Same as above. Tryed to fix it
  4. 00:22:585 -
  5. 00:32:198 (32198|5,32635|6,32780|0) - Same as above but with different pattern if you accept it and so on. Same as above tryed to fix
  6. 01:02:488 - 01:02:925 - Add a note there.
  7. 01:06:130 (66130|1,68460|1,70790|2) - Same as first and second mod here, and so on.
  8. 01:14:721 (74721|4) - Move to 6th and add a note 01:14:867 - on 5th.
  9. 02:10:935 - Add a note on 5th because of cymbal.
  10. 02:15:304 - Add a note on 7th because of cymbal.
  11. 02:20:255 - Add a note on 1st because of cymbal.
  12. 02:24:624 - Same as above.
  13. 02:45:887 (165887|0,165887|2,166470|6,166470|4,166907|1,166907|3) - No need to make it as 2-notes, different with 02:47:051 -. Add note on 3rd there.
  14. 03:05:692 - Add a note on 3rd and Ctrl+G 03:05:839 (185839|0,185984|1) - to make a little stairs to make it fit with 03:06:130 (186130|6,186276|5,186421|4,186567|3,186713|2) - .
  15. 03:52:877 (232877|3) - Move this to 1st.
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:876 (22876|5,23313|6,23458|4) - Why you make this? Maybe change it into Nope, I don't follow drum only but it's my special of Drum instrumental it's weird maybe but I love it this way
    and so on
  2. 00:39:333 - Add a note to 4th.
  3. 00:48:362 - 00:48:653 - Add a note to 3rd. 00:48:799 - Add a note to 2nd.
  4. Try to make each red lines in kiai into 2-notes. I Think this cool make the diff a bit harder
  5. 01:24:041 (84041|0,84042|4,84042|2,84042|6) - Remove this and change it with add two notes on 2nd and 6th.
  6. 01:50:837 (110837|1,110983|5) - Change it to 2-notes jack. Nope , I see it ruins the flow and I especially enjoy this part :P sry
  7. 02:01:469 - Too loud here.
  8. 02:06:275 - Add note on 7th.
  9. 03:06:857 (186857|2) - Move to 4th.
  10. 03:16:178 - ~kiai end - There's some inconsistent note quantity here.
  11. Just testplay for this :
[Overall]
Yes, your map is good, suitable with the song, easy-played, but have some inconsistent pattern in all diff :( .
Good luck Eternalie~ :oops:

Thx for Mod ichi ~ no reply means OK (I normally awnser to all but well ..... :V ) Really helpfull as always
Might have check everything :D >w<b
Ichigaki
You forgot change the title OAO, fix it please
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

ichia7x wrote:

You forgot change the title OAO, fix it please
OAO right
Kruzon


Hello, my 7K Column Format is: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

7K Easy

check aimod, and re-snap all notes

00:08:896 (8896|5) - there is no cue sound here, perhaps delete (however if you intend to follow vocal, then you need to move it forward by 1/4)

it feels like, around this section 00:16:470 (16470|5) - 00:18:509 (18509|2) - its synchronize well following vocal than instrument. therefore, i suggest
00:17:634 (17634|6) - move back by 1/4 beat

02:47:051 (167051|3) - i think this should be on blue line instead (1/4 beat forth)

03:36:275 (216275|5) - feels like it should start 1/4 beat early, and
03:36:420 (216420|6) - you might want to add a note on column 7 ( vocal cue sound and it's kinda empty)

i don't know why, but i really think following vocal is more suitable here 03:40:935 (220935|5,221226|1,221517|5) - , current notes placed doesn't feel right

imo, vocals have more stronger accent than instrument here, just an opinion tho..

if you consider following vocals, then change:

notes between these 03:45:158 (225158|3,226178|3) -
notes between these 03:49:818 (229818|4,230547|3) -

-other than that, it's quite catchy and fun song. you pattern them well also, its just that i really think vocal is strong point of this song
-different modder from our team might come and settle 7k normal, sharing is caring, caring is loving c:

Good luck for your map!
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

Kruzon wrote:



Hello, my 7K Column Format is: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

7K Easy

check aimod, and re-snap all notes

00:08:896 (8896|5) - there is no cue sound here, perhaps delete (however if you intend to follow vocal, then you need to move it forward by 1/4)

it feels like, around this section 00:16:470 (16470|5) - 00:18:509 (18509|2) - its synchronize well following vocal than instrument. therefore, i suggest
00:17:634 (17634|6) - move back by 1/4 beat

02:47:051 (167051|3) - i think this should be on blue line instead (1/4 beat forth)

03:36:275 (216275|5) - feels like it should start 1/4 beat early, and
03:36:420 (216420|6) - you might want to add a note on column 7 ( vocal cue sound and it's kinda empty)

i don't know why, but i really think following vocal is more suitable here 03:40:935 (220935|5,221226|1,221517|5) - , current notes placed doesn't feel right

imo, vocals have more stronger accent than instrument here, just an opinion tho..

if you consider following vocals, then change:

notes between these 03:45:158 (225158|3,226178|3) -
notes between these 03:49:818 (229818|4,230547|3) -

-other than that, it's quite catchy and fun song. you pattern them well also, its just that i really think vocal is strong point of this song
-different modder from our team might come and settle 7k normal, sharing is caring, caring is loving c:

Good luck for your map!
Thanks for mod Kruzon-san :D already discussed in game I might only change some minor things and resnapped all this thankyou~
Harbyter
hello Eter ,mod req via queue


[MOD]

I'm not so good in 7k and my mod focus on pattern consistency and other little stuff ,but since this is already pretty good will suggest just few things lol

Column-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-

[Hard]

00:04:090 (4090|1) - suggest to delete this note,this is only for the vocal but you didn't followed the vocal in this section

00:14:139 (14139|2) - suggest to move in col 2

00:11:372 - 00:13:848 - 00:16:032 - those section are the same, why a decrease of amount of notes here??I feel this is on purpose but i suggest to don't broke the consistency

following the pitch i think is better if you CTRL+H 00:46:032 (46032|0,46178|2,46323|4,46469|6,46760|6) - ,then move this 00:45:304 (45304|5) - in col 5 and 00:45:741 (45741|4) - in col 6

01:47:634 - add a note for the cymbal??Like the previous triples

01:48:799 (108799|4) - suggest to remove this, sound isn't so strong here

01:51:857 (111857|6,111857|0,112003|5,112003|1) - suggest to CTRL+J those

02:10:935 - suggest to remove this SV 1.10 ,no need an increase of speed here xD otherside this sv can cause a disqualification

02:29:576 - in all the song i didn't understand what are the LNs for xD but from here i think you should end those LN where that sound end lol

03:05:983 (185983|1,186129|2,186275|3,186420|4,186566|5,186712|6) - suggest to CTRL+H then shift one column on right,after this move 03:05:838 (185838|0) - in col 6 ,for pitch revelancy

03:14:721 (194721|2) - suggest to remove, without this note we can catch better the rhytm

03:15:449 (195449|1,195595|2) - CTRL+H and 03:15:886 (195886|4) - in col 3 ,always for a better pitch revelancy

03:52:877 (232877|3) - suggest to end this LN here 03:54:042 - xd


ok that's all ,hope i'll be helpfull :)

sorry for the poor mod :c
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

Harbyter wrote:

hello Eter ,mod req via queue


[MOD]

I'm not so good in 7k and my mod focus on pattern consistency and other little stuff ,but since this is already pretty good will suggest just few things lol

Column-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-

[Hard]

00:04:090 (4090|1) - suggest to delete this note,this is only for the vocal but you didn't followed the vocal in this section Wrong this is following the bell thingy sound

00:14:139 (14139|2) - suggest to move in col 2 Okaysu~

00:11:372 - 00:13:848 - 00:16:032 - those section are the same, why a decrease of amount of notes here??I feel this is on purpose but i suggest to don't broke the consistency NIce catch up : D thanks

following the pitch i think is better if you CTRL+H 00:46:032 (46032|0,46178|2,46323|4,46469|6,46760|6) - ,then move this 00:45:304 (45304|5) - in col 5 and 00:45:741 (45741|4) - in col 6 Sure~

01:47:634 - add a note for the cymbal??Like the previous triples haisu~

01:48:799 (108799|4) - suggest to remove this, sound isn't so strong here ok

01:51:857 (111857|6,111857|0,112003|5,112003|1) - suggest to CTRL+J those ok

02:10:935 - suggest to remove this SV 1.10 ,no need an increase of speed here xD otherside this sv can cause a disqualification LOL didn't even noticed and why this is here lol okay XD

02:29:576 - in all the song i didn't understand what are the LNs for xD but from here i think you should end those LN where that sound end lol They end at the good timming (imo) it's following the bass thingy , that's kind of innovating but well I want it like that x)

03:05:983 (185983|1,186129|2,186275|3,186420|4,186566|5,186712|6) - suggest to CTRL+H then shift one column on right,after this move 03:05:838 (185838|0) - in col 6 ,for pitch revelancy kaysu~

03:14:721 (194721|2) - suggest to remove, without this note we can catch better the rhytm Nice~

03:15:449 (195449|1,195595|2) - CTRL+H and 03:15:886 (195886|4) - in col 3 ,always for a better pitch revelancy ok

03:52:877 (232877|3) - suggest to end this LN here 03:54:042 - xd kaysu~


ok that's all ,hope i'll be helpfull :) OFC it is ^^b

sorry for the poor mod :c PLZ that's a great mod ^^b even if you wrote '' remove the diff give me my kudos ' still good mod looooooooool don't worry about that :Db
Thanks for mod Harby-chan >x< I wuv you XD ^^/
Kamikaze
sup

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

I think that HP/OD settings start too low, you don't really need to go that low (beginners can't learn acc like that)
Suggesting to go 7/7 on Easy, 7,5/7,5 on Normal and 8/8 on Hard
BG quality sucks to be honest, search for a better one or post in ringating's queue

Columns: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Easy]
I feel like you could make this easier, for new players. Something under 1 star, as basic as it can get

00:01:032 (1032|3,2197|3) - Move 1 right, it's a bit cramped pattern
00:03:362 (3362|2,4527|2) - ^
00:05:692 (5692|3,6857|3) - Same but left
00:11:809 - I don't really get why there's double, nothing louder here
00:14:139 - ^ and other similar ones
One way to solve this problem would be moving one of notes 1/2 higher (ex. 00:11:809 - to 00:12:100 - ) so second note represents main melody change
00:18:653 - Not accenting drums like on 00:09:187 - ?
00:19:090 (19090|1,20110|2) - Ctrl+J seems to work better for pitch
00:21:420 (21420|6,22003|4,22440|5) - 5 -> 7 -> 6 for same reason as above
00:26:081 (26081|0,26663|1,27100|2) - First LN feels like it should end 1/4 earlier (not sure tho) and make both next LNs into single notes, seems to fit better
00:29:430 (29430|4) - Drum hitsound?
00:30:741 - Same on one of notes
00:35:983 (35983|3) - Move to 5th and move 00:36:420 (36420|4) - to 6th or 7th, LN on space can be painful for newbies
00:39:479 - Add for plate
00:41:809 - Add for melody or whatever is there, gap is quite big compared to rest of map
00:45:304 (45304|1,45741|2) - Change to single notes, guitar is not really matching those LNs
00:56:226 - Add on 5th? Expressing drums
01:02:197 (62197|3) - Ends either on 01:02:925 - or 01:03:071 -
01:07:294 - Add note, flow is quite broken
01:07:731 - ^
Apply this suggestion numerous times throughout this section. In fact apply same things all over you map because it';s very repetetive and the same mistakes happen consistently
01:42:828 - Add at 2 for drum?
02:10:935 BPM: Inherited (1,1x) - not intentional I guess, remove
03:09:187 - Add like at 03:06:857 -
03:11:517 - ^
03:48:508 - Add at 5th for plate (or whatever that is) and delete 03:48:799 (228799|4) -
tfw modder is telling you to nerf it and then suggests a lot of addings. Honestly tho, this looks like a NM diff after my changes lel

[talking about NMs, here's one!]
Most of suggestions from EZ can apply to NM

00:32:634 (32634|6) - Awkward note after 6 lane LN
00:40:352 (40352|4) - Move to 7th so it doesn't anchor with note before
00:46:178 (46178|3,46469|2,46760|1,47051|2) - Move all 1 to right, same reason as above
00:51:712 (51712|3) - Move to 5th/6th
01:03:799 (63799|6,63945|4,64090|2) - Ctrl+H
01:04:964 (64964|2,65110|0) - Ctrl+J
01:14:721 (74721|5,74721|4) - Would be nicer to express drum in 1/4 stair triplet
01:30:449 (90449|3,90741|2,91032|1) - Change to normal notes and put last of them on 3rd
01:50:401 (110401|0,110547|2,110692|4) - Same as before, it's very hard to hit compered to rest
02:10:935 BPM: Inherited (1,1x) - not intentional I guess, remove
03:50:692 - Note missing
03:52:877 - Compared to Hard
As before, all suggestions need to be rechecked on similar sections
Note placement looks good, patterning can use more work

[Hard]
00:16:032 (16032|2,16032|6,16178|0,16178|5) - Hitsounds are out of place
02:30:595 (150595|0) - That's a 1/2 long sound
02:31:906 (151906|2) - Shorter by 1/4
02:32:925 (152925|0) - 1/2 again
02:34:818 (154818|2) - Shorter by 1/4
02:35:255 (155255|1) - 1/2
and so on, I'm too lazy to finish this sorry ;;
Good luck! o/
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

-Kamikaze- wrote:

sup

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

I think that HP/OD settings start too low, you don't really need to go that low (beginners can't learn acc like that)
Suggesting to go 7/7 on Easy, 7,5/7,5 on Normal and 8/8 on Hard
BG quality sucks to be honest, search for a better one or post in ringating's queue

Columns: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Easy]
I feel like you could make this easier, for new players. Something under 1 star, as basic as it can get

00:01:032 (1032|3,2197|3) - Move 1 right, it's a bit cramped pattern
00:03:362 (3362|2,4527|2) - ^
00:05:692 (5692|3,6857|3) - Same but left
00:11:809 - I don't really get why there's double, nothing louder here
00:14:139 - ^ and other similar ones
One way to solve this problem would be moving one of notes 1/2 higher (ex. 00:11:809 - to 00:12:100 - ) so second note represents main melody change
00:18:653 - Not accenting drums like on 00:09:187 - ?
00:19:090 (19090|1,20110|2) - Ctrl+J seems to work better for pitch
00:21:420 (21420|6,22003|4,22440|5) - 5 -> 7 -> 6 for same reason as above
00:26:081 (26081|0,26663|1,27100|2) - First LN feels like it should end 1/4 earlier (not sure tho) and make both next LNs into single notes, seems to fit better
00:29:430 (29430|4) - Drum hitsound?
00:30:741 - Same on one of notes
00:35:983 (35983|3) - Move to 5th and move 00:36:420 (36420|4) - to 6th or 7th, LN on space can be painful for newbies
00:39:479 - Add for plate
00:41:809 - Add for melody or whatever is there, gap is quite big compared to rest of map
00:45:304 (45304|1,45741|2) - Change to single notes, guitar is not really matching those LNs
00:56:226 - Add on 5th? Expressing drums
01:02:197 (62197|3) - Ends either on 01:02:925 - or 01:03:071 -
01:07:294 - Add note, flow is quite broken
01:07:731 - ^
Apply this suggestion numerous times throughout this section. In fact apply same things all over you map because it';s very repetetive and the same mistakes happen consistently
01:42:828 - Add at 2 for drum?
02:10:935 BPM: Inherited (1,1x) - not intentional I guess, remove
03:09:187 - Add like at 03:06:857 -
03:11:517 - ^
03:48:508 - Add at 5th for plate (or whatever that is) and delete 03:48:799 (228799|4) -
tfw modder is telling you to nerf it and then suggests a lot of addings. Honestly tho, this looks like a NM diff after my changes lel

[talking about NMs, here's one!]
Most of suggestions from EZ can apply to NM

00:32:634 (32634|6) - Awkward note after 6 lane LN
00:40:352 (40352|4) - Move to 7th so it doesn't anchor with note before
00:46:178 (46178|3,46469|2,46760|1,47051|2) - Move all 1 to right, same reason as above
00:51:712 (51712|3) - Move to 5th/6th
01:03:799 (63799|6,63945|4,64090|2) - Ctrl+H
01:04:964 (64964|2,65110|0) - Ctrl+J
01:14:721 (74721|5,74721|4) - Would be nicer to express drum in 1/4 stair triplet
01:30:449 (90449|3,90741|2,91032|1) - Change to normal notes and put last of them on 3rd
01:50:401 (110401|0,110547|2,110692|4) - Same as before, it's very hard to hit compered to rest
02:10:935 BPM: Inherited (1,1x) - not intentional I guess, remove
03:50:692 - Note missing
03:52:877 - Compared to Hard
As before, all suggestions need to be rechecked on similar sections
Note placement looks good, patterning can use more work

[Hard]
00:16:032 (16032|2,16032|6,16178|0,16178|5) - Hitsounds are out of place
02:30:595 (150595|0) - That's a 1/2 long sound
02:31:906 (151906|2) - Shorter by 1/4
02:32:925 (152925|0) - 1/2 again
02:34:818 (154818|2) - Shorter by 1/4
02:35:255 (155255|1) - 1/2
and so on, I'm too lazy to finish this sorry ;;
Good luck! o/
Thanks for mod Makikaze~ , applied all mentioned thing ( because huh xD) , will try to fix all the diff.. probably
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
Resurrect


Any help is appreciated~ :3
Muu-chan
YYEESSSSSSS!!!! ><b
Gravey-
Go go go! >w<)b
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
here we are , back in Pending desu

reworked hard and easy quite alot I think

any help appreciated

Thanks guys for support ^w^
- [ S o r a ] -
whew :3
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[Easy]
00:01:760 (1760|2) - Move to ===> | 2 | ? the same key
00:08:896 (8896|5) - Move to ===> | 5 | ? then 00:09:187 (9187|3) - Move to | 6 |
Next is optional 00:09:333 (9333|2) - 1. Remove <> 2. Move to the right hand (Recommend to 1. but this is your choice or ignore this? :3 ) and then
00:09:479 (9479|0) - Move to ===> | 2 | for better handle
00:20:838 - Just feel weird between these instruments (I don't know how to call these. atleast you should follow one)
01:05:692 - 2 notes can? cymbal sound (I'm not sure if someone modded here x3 (Hitsounds are Finish and Whistle in the same note))
01:42:828 (102828|1) - Move to right hand? i guess, it's better
03:36:566 (216566|6) - Remove? weird than other patterns?
03:18:508 (198508|2) - Remove? you following vocals? also ===> 03:27:828 (207828|3) - 03:37:149 (217149|2) - :3 these for reducing difficulty

[Normal]
01:15:013 (75013|2) - Move to ===> | 7 | don't let the cymbal sounds beside that note. should be wide x3
01:47:634 - Can you add a note to ===> | 1 | ? I just noticed from Easy diff.
After that seems fine

[Hard]
This diff. pretty good x3
02:10:644 (130644|3) - Change to Long note and place to the white line?
02:34:236 (154236|2) - Cut and place to the red line. i guess this is fit. also 02:38:896 (158896|2) - :3 until 03:02:197
03:52:149 to 03:52:877 - these hitsounds are too loud?

I need icecream and chocolate. give me pleassse x333
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

whew :3
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[Easy]
00:01:760 (1760|2) - Move to ===> | 2 | ? the same key
00:08:896 (8896|5) - Move to ===> | 5 | ? then 00:09:187 (9187|3) - Move to | 6 |
Next is optional 00:09:333 (9333|2) - 1. Remove <> 2. Move to the right hand (Recommend to 1. but this is your choice or ignore this? :3 ) and then
00:09:479 (9479|0) - Move to ===> | 2 | for better handle
00:20:838 - Just feel weird between these instruments (I don't know how to call these. atleast you should follow one)
01:05:692 - 2 notes can? cymbal sound (I'm not sure if someone modded here x3 (Hitsounds are Finish and Whistle in the same note))
01:42:828 (102828|1) - Move to right hand? i guess, it's better
03:36:566 (216566|6) - Remove? weird than other patterns?
03:18:508 (198508|2) - Remove? you following vocals? also ===> 03:27:828 (207828|3) - 03:37:149 (217149|2) - :3 these for reducing difficulty
All applied here owob
[Normal]
01:15:013 (75013|2) - Move to ===> | 7 | don't let the cymbal sounds beside that note. should be wide x3 moved and added cymbal hitsound I might have missunderstand you lol sorry ma english is kinda bad ;w;
01:47:634 - Can you add a note to ===> | 1 | ? I just noticed from Easy diff. nice catchy
After that seems fine

[Hard]
This diff. pretty good x3
02:10:644 (130644|3) - Change to Long note and place to the white line? I didn't really understand ;w; , so I kept it for now desu
02:34:236 (154236|2) - Cut and place to the red line. i guess this is fit. also 02:38:896 (158896|2) - :3 until 03:02:197 really really nice , fixed thoose !3v
03:52:149 to 03:52:877 - these hitsounds are too loud? oh thanks forget to undouble it

I need icecream and chocolate. give me pleassse x333
Ice cream best 'w'
Thank you for the mod ! have a nice neko day ^^/
helpful :D

UPDATED
Hestia-
yahallo Eternalie~

This song is actually too cute, I didn't know it was possible to be too cute like this

[Hard]
00:56:081 - Add 5
00:56:226 - Add 3
01:04:964 (64964|3) - Change to 35?
01:42:683 - Add 6
01:42:828 (102828|0) - Move to 2; add 4
01:50:838 - Add 2
01:50:983 - Add 6
01:51:566 (111566|3) - Change to 35?
03:05:983 - Add 2
03:06:129 - Add 1
03:14:430 - Add 3
03:14:576 - Add 2

For all the diffs it feels like there are many one handed patterns and a few minijacks in some places, it's not bad to have them but you can map other ways too. For this one I kind of want more chords for the louder drums

:3 good luck
Topic Starter
Fubukicat

Hestia- wrote:

yahallo Eternalie~ Nyahoo~

This song is actually too cute, I didn't know it was possible to be too cute like this

[Hard]
00:56:081 - Add 5
00:56:226 - Add 3
01:04:964 (64964|3) - Change to 35? I really like the flow of thoose notes so keep :3
01:42:683 - Add 6
01:42:828 (102828|0) - Move to 2; add 4
01:50:838 - Add 2
01:50:983 - Add 6
01:51:566 (111566|3) - Change to 35? ^ same as the other one
03:05:983 - Add 2
03:06:129 - Add 1
03:14:430 - Add 3 Didn't add , since I want to keep it consistent with the other same part such as : 01:49:964 - (also noticed an error so thankyou XD lol :3)
03:14:576 - Add 2

For all the diffs it feels like there are many one handed patterns and a few minijacks in some places, it's not bad to have them but you can map other ways too. For this one I kind of want more chords for the louder drums
Thanks for the opinion :3v

:3 good luck
Thanks For the mod Hestianyan~ Have a nice day ^^/
~UPDATED~
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
welp~ peace~~
Frim4503

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7


General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : if you have pls change to 192kbps
  3. Hitsound : ok
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. Timing: ok
  6. AI Mod : ok

Easy


  • 00:28:411 (28411|6) -make double ? seem like cymbal for me
    00:46:760 (46760|2) -move to 4. Cuz difference sound from before
    01:11:663 (71663|2) -moveto 4
    01:28:411 -I suggest to add note here. Cuz it feel akward
    01:48:799 (108799|5,108799|4) -why this part have double ?
    01:59:284 (119284|5,119284|2) -^same
    02:08:605 (128605|2,128605|0) -^same
    02:20:255 (140255|1) -better to add another note for cymbal sound
Sorry not very experience enough to mod 7k
Mod Done
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
Sorry didn't see earlier lol my bad .....

EDIT : of like alot of time ago hue , Revived once again , rechecked hitsound thingy , applied aboves mods and some thingys

probably gonna search some more mods who knows~
Muu-chan
No matter what, i would always support this one :)
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
Revived for the 54131651561165 times (about the 5th time I assume ?)

here we go again xd
Drum-Hitnormal
hitsound done, your HD is pretty weird to play, i get confused playing it

http://puu.sh/rWLd7/f6c9cfbf32.zip

please use my program to copy it, since it will clear your current hitsound and then copy (updated it this week)
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
Topic Starter
Fubukicat
dadadon , using all that, thanks it sounds really cool tbh
also as you mentioned I tested HD with them and aside some part that are kinda 'lacky' everything seems okay

so gonna try with that I guess :Db
Drum-Hitnormal

Eternalie wrote:

dadadon , using all that, thanks it sounds really cool tbh
also as you mentioned I tested HD with them and aside some part that are kinda 'lacky' everything seems okay

so gonna try with that I guess :Db
sorry for the lacky part couldnt find appropriate hitsound for it. glad you like it. this song has too much focus on vocal
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