[General]
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[Mapping and NCs]
00:05:145 (1) - Delete NC
00:05:445 (2) - NC
00:05:745 (1) - Delete NC
00:06:645 (4) - NC
00:06:945 (1) - Delete NC
00:07:845 (4) - NC
00:08:145 (1) - Delete NC
00:10:245 (1) - Keep the pattern, make it look like next (1) and (1) sliders
00:16:545 (5) - NC, because you've made 00:21:345 (1) - NC here so keep the Combo Patterning please
00:27:945 - There are too much NCs in my opinion.. Think about it
00:38:595 - Triple here, can't you hear it?
01:17:895 (1) - Delete NC
01:23:670 (3,4,5,6,7) - That is one ugly stream, make it through converter :/
01:24:345 (1,2) - make more distance between them...
01:31:845 (1,2,3,4) - that looks like cancer... arrange them in other way
01:39:945 (2) - keep the distance like in three previous sliders
01:40:695 (2) - NC
01:40:845 (1) - Delete NC
01:40:995 (2) - NC
01:41:145 (1) - Delete NC
01:41:295 (2) - NC
01:56:745 (2) - Why are they touching.. Touching is a no no!
01:58:845 (4) - NC
01:59:295 (1) - Delete NC
01:59:895 (4) - NC
01:59:895 (1) - Delete NC and put it lower to match the trail from the previous slider
02:06:345 (2) - NC
02:12:645 (1) - Delete NC
02:20:445 (2) - NC and place this and next two sliders in more distance from the previous one because its other beat and its the beggining of the streaming part so it has to be noticed in gameplay
02:34:695 (7,1) - OMG KILL IT, DESTROY IT. That's a BIG no no!
02:41:895 (1) - Keep the distance snapping.... also NO FOR TOUCHING >:C
02:50:745 - bad Combo patterning, rearrange it
03:05:820 - Notes that are out of main beat divisor are better to make as sliders, because they wont be so hard to acc. Change (2,3) to a slider
03:10:620 - ^
03:15:345 (8,1,2) - what an actual fuck is that... Rotate (1) to not touch (8) and move it farther. Also get this (2) out of there and make normal sliderjumps, not a human centipede... You hear that break after (1)? No? Me neither, so why the fuck is there a break in pattern... More distance between (1) and (2) or remake this part.
03:16:545 (8,1) - no touching...
03:17:820 (4,5,6,1) - that is bad arrangement, change...
03:19:095 (3,4) - DONT MAKE THAT EVER AGAIN, omg its so bad... You've put it in such way that its really hard to read and play...
ok I'll maybe stop here... and assume everything...
03:13:245 - 03:33:645 - This has to be remade imo, It hasn't got any normal pattern... Make it a stream part, not a sliderjump part. To make sliderjumps you have to know how to make them, how to arrange them.. If you cant, ask somebody to do them for you or make stream part for yourself.
That's just my honest opinion
03:34:845 - 03:43:245 - Make a break here
03:43:245 - ugly stream...
04:03:195 (5,1) - just NO!
04:04:845 (3,1) - distance, Distance, DISTANCE
04:40:845 - ehh
04:48:495 (4,1) - distance?