hi, M4M
good luck!
Red Night
- 00:03:345 (2) - I think a more curved slider like thiswould look/play better.
- 00:04:845 (5) - Shorten this to the red tick and add a circle at 00:05:070. It'd follow the music more this way.
- 00:05:145 (1,3) - I'd separate these too by a little bit so it didn't look like they were so close.
- 00:07:245 (2,3) - You should use the same rhythm as 00:06:045 (2,3,4) since they're pretty much identical.
- 00:10:245 (1) - Move to (91, 158) to give 00:09:945 (4,1,2) a more equalized look.
- 00:15:045 (3) - To make this easier to read you could blanket this with the stream by moving it to (355, 105).
- 00:18:645 (6,7) - Not a fan of this overlap, you could just do this.
- 00:24:345 (1) - Remove NC, add one at 00:24:645 (3), remove from 00:24:945 (1).
- 00:29:295 (3,4) - Drum claps or finishes would fit better here.
- 00:30:495 (4) - Finish.
- 00:31:845 (5) - ^
- 00:32:295 (7) - ^
- 00:32:745 (1) - Remove clap and add finish.
- 00:34:245 (1) - Finish.
- 00:37:545 (5,6) - I think a slider like thiswould have better flow and look a lot nicer.
- 00:39:045 (1) - Finish.
- 00:39:345 (2) - Shorten this to the red tick and add a circle on the white tick.
- 00:43:845 (5) - Finish instead of clap and start NC here while removing it from 00:44:145 (1).
- 00:45:795 (4,5) - I think you should space these out more so they're not overlapping. It'll still be easily playable and it'll also look nicer
- 00:54:645 (1) - Finish instead of whistle on head
- 00:58:245 (1) - Finish on head
- 01:00:645 (1) - ^
- 01:03:195 (2,3) and 01:03:645 - These notes don't really cover anything so I think you should be using 1/1 sliders here.
- 01:05:445 (1) - Finish instead of clap
- 01:10:245 (1,2) - Unattractive overlap
- 01:11:895 (4,7,1) - Might be your preference, but I'd fix this overlap
- 01:24:345 (1,2) - I'd remove the NC and start it on the last note
- 01:50:445 (1,2) - Weird looking overlap again
- 02:00:795 (2) - Move to (287, 236)
- 02:13:245 (1,2) - Blanket these?
- 02:15:420 (7) - delete note
- 02:15:945 (2,4) - Move these to the left a little so that they're not overlapping 02:16:245 (3)
- 02:28:470 (5,6) - Move these to (510,278).
- 02:30:045 (1,3,5) - Finishes on these
- 02:51:495 - there should be a clickable object here instead of a slider end
- 02:54:045 (1) - Should probably turn this into slider art some time in the future
- 03:17:595 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix this curve like thismaybe
good luck!