Heey~ M4M from my queue :>
I looooooooove Demetori <3
Pretty good map here, was hard to find much here D: oh well, Ill give you a star too <3 since Demetori is luv and this map seems so fun to play shame I cant play at night ;w;
I looooooooove Demetori <3
General
- Your map need some hitsounds D: cause the default ones is so boring .-. sooo I picked some for you http://puu.sh/hVUTC/8423a2f15d.rar
hope you like them, and know how to use them
Come poke me if you dont know how :3 aaand if you need help with the hitsounds, I can do it too ^-^ I love hitsounding Demetori <3 - OD8 should be fine in this map
- Consider having capital letters on all new words in your diffname (nothing big but) so it should be Flower-Viewing Party :>
Flower-Viewing Party
- 00:04:431 (1) - this loses flow a little bit
- 00:29:116 (1) - sliderend isnt perfectly stacked but its like a millimeter or something so xD
- 00:29:631 (2,4) - ctrl+g here? would be cool
- 00:44:888 (3) - make this the other way for better flow + it plays better, can also blanket http://puu.sh/hVTzl/b0eaecaea0.jpg
- 01:20:031 (1,3) - not sure if intentional or not, but this isnt correctly stacked
- 01:22:431 (5) - could move this a little bit to the left so it doesnt overlap 01:21:745 (2) - or just take the slider a bit to the right cause its overlapped with 01:21:059 (6) - as well
- 01:43:516 (1) - shouldnt and should be a note here, dont know but it isnt a beat here in the music. You could either do a slider over this big white tick or you can remove the note there and do it like you did here 02:39:574 (1,2) - would play pretty nice too
- 01:54:659 (5,6,7) - fix this pattern? to a triangle like this maybe? http://puu.sh/hVTXF/b1fdb69b34.jpg
- 02:05:802 (7) - move a bit to the left to get a nicer triangle here 02:04:431 (2,3,7) - then you need to move the next slider too, but that shouldnt be a problem should it
- 02:26:202 (2) - stack? with 02:25:259 (4) -
- 02:31:174 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The patterns here doesnt really look so good D: try something like this: http://puu.sh/hVUdw/78afbe0fdb.jpg
- 02:44:888 (8) - dont overlap with 02:43:945 (2) -
- 02:47:974 (2) - Move a bit down on this, its kinda close to the (7)
- 03:04:088 (6,1,2,3) - Triangle alittle bit off
- 03:29:888 - could fit with a note here, would fit the solo if you listen to the guitar
- 03:30:231 - same here ^
- 03:46:859 (1,2,4,6,7) - triangle a bit off again D:
- 04:03:745 (5) - move a bit up to correct the triangle (I am upsessed with triangles DDDDD:)
- 05:27:916 (7,8,1) - Triangle
- 05:33:059 (5,6) - Ctrl+G
Pretty good map here, was hard to find much here D: oh well, Ill give you a star too <3 since Demetori is luv and this map seems so fun to play shame I cant play at night ;w;