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[Rosenkibb]
[Rosenkibb]
- 00:16:858 - 00:22:680 - 00:25:303 - Omit first bar line for these 3 red lines.
- 00:33:019 - No spinner? Could end it at 00:35:155 - and have a green line at 00:34:827 - to fade the volume a bit.
- 00:36:407 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is like a build up with the drums so imo 4>1 should also have larger jump.
- 00:40:214 - There's a piano sound here that you've skipped.. seems odd to have a 3/4 gap from 3>4. You're going to play the 1/4 slider as just a circle anyways.
- 00:40:330 (4,5,6,7) - This part should be 1/4 no? Listen at 25% I only hear 3 piano notes during this interval... sounds really different from 00:40:791 (8,9,10,1) -
- 00:41:945 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could make this part a bit more difficult so the transition into the 260 bpm section will feel a bit less abrupt. Imo, simple things like not stacking 00:42:291 (4,7) - would already be a good visual indicator.
- 00:48:406 (1,2) - Maybe larger jump here? Players are going to cut the slider-tail of 1 when they go into 2 anyways so if you want to create an emphasis like on 00:45:637 (1,2) - a larger DS would really help.
- 01:02:944 (6) - Ehh. flow is a bit weird here... How about Ctrl < it. makes a more circular flow, since you haven't been emphasizing slider 1 with a flowbreak in your previous combo's
- 01:05:944 (1,2) - 1/2 slider?? The drum sequence doesn't begin until 3.
- 01:09:637 (1) - This hitsound doesnt map to anything :S. The violin sound is at 01:09:752 - . And there's no other sound that maps to the repeat slider itself.
- 01:16:790 (3,4) - Would be cool to use a 1/3 repeat slider here to map the piano; if you want
- 01:32:598 (4) - 1/4 repeat slider? so you can map 01:32:714 - lol.
- 01:39:867 (3,4,1) - How about a larger jump from 4>1 and a smaller jump from 3>4? Emphasis on the vocal > emphasis on circle 4 that's on a red tick .
- 01:46:098 (3,4,5) - The way you stack it, it's going to be really difficult for players to tell if these are 1/4 or 1/3... Cuz all they have to go on is the approach circle . I think 1/3 repeats would be better here.
- 02:16:098 (1,2) - 1/2 slider instead? The violin here also doesn't pick up until 3.
- 03:00:866 (3,4,5) - How about Ctrl+G this rhythm? Would follow the eguitar better and reflect what you did later with: 03:02:712 (3,4,5) -
- 03:11:943 (1,2,3,4) - how about making these jumps more horizontal? cuz youre mapping the drums now whereas at 03:11:020 (3,4,5,6) - these are also jumps but they map the guitar. Idk... a change in motion would be nice so it feels different when you follow another instrument.
- 03:50:827 (3) - circles instead?
- 04:10:558 (1,2) - How come the spacing is reduced for these two sliders? imo they should be just as large in terms of spacing if nto larger, because this whole section is building up to the Kiai.
- 04:12:289 (5,1) - Anti-jump doesn't really feel right just before the Kiai too .
- 04:52:904 (5,1) - Could put a larger gap here honestly... Looks like you ran out of room with slider 1. You can push it off screen a bit. Rotate it 180 degrees. then move it to 143||39 and rotate it 180 degrees again. it'll still be in screen on 4:3 and the spacing will make more sense.
- 04:59:019 (1) - Seems like an unnecessary NC...
- 05:12:289 (4,1) - End with a bang D: large jump