1. Dissonant Existence (6,48 stars, 2371 notes)

HaegHeoseuki wrote:

02:30:724 i think you should make kick sliders to all the deep kicks because it kind of feels odd that some have and some don't but still this is a sugestion

Maakkeli wrote:

HaegHeoseuki wrote:

02:30:724 i think you should make kick sliders to all the deep kicks because it kind of feels odd that some have and some don't but still this is a sugestion

Mulle voi kyllä puhua aiva suomeaki, mutta siis juttuhan on se, että sillä hitsoundilla mä vaan hitsoundaan rytmiä ja sitte niihin kickslidereihin on se oma normal-hitwhistle5 jotka mappaa ja hitsoundaa kitaraa.

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Damn i love Vektor <3

pls dont mind,i´m not really gud at modding above 6+ but i´ll try my best - oh baby first mod oh yea
that rsi in the tags tho,lol - well this at least should give rsi, I can't play this though so I can't get it


imo you should lower the hitsounding maybe to like 50-45 until 00:15:124 (1) -
sounds kinda a bit too loud in my ears,idk ;w; - i have not meddled with hitsounds yet i'll do it at some point

stack 00:19:024 (8) - at 00:19:624 (2) - maybe ? - um... it focks up my spacing and the high ar should make it not overlap

stack 00:29:824 (4) - at the end of 00:30:424 (1) - maybe ? - yes

idk,but maybe a little jump section on this would be cool :> 00:58:324 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ? - i don't think jumps fit here since it's really just the same sound over and over again so I decided to go with a pentagon

NC ? 02:08:374 (8) - no cuz the "new part" starts at 02:09:124 (1) -

02:10:624 (9) - ^^^ - ^^^

that sliders at 02:47:824 (1) - and so on are really sexy :3
really nicely made - ty i don't really like 02:55:324 (1) - but idk if i'm still gonna change it

03:12:824 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap with 03:13:449 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should change this - i have to ask if the high ar compensates for this

this pattern tho 03:16:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
you really should change it imo,doesnt really play well - explain me why imo it plays fine

stack this 03:20:131 (10,11,12) - at some note on the following stream - k

this note 04:36:864 (2) - put it somewhere else,it just looks and plays weird there - but i like awkward shit, whatevs i'll change it if someone else tells me to

04:41:864 (2) - same for this one - ^^^

well,thats it
i hope i could help you a lil bit,and pls keep up that great work ! - i'll do my best
that map is really amazing :3 - thanks

XeoStyle wrote:

One star for ya, GL for rank dude !

TheBronyGames wrote:

The final Mod from My Modding Queue


[Dissonant Existence]

General - Why does RSI have to be a tag? i don't think that is necessary by any means

I gimmick shit

General - AR9.7 just seems akward, maybe 9.8 would be good for HR players, but i recommend just upscaling to AR10 - 9.8

General - OD9 is super harsh, even considering the map at hand, try backing it down a bit. - Lowering the OD would probably make this map a notelock hell. If anything it should be upped but hey, what do I know.

other than those things, i can't find anything wrong, i wish you luck with getting this Qualified! - cool i guess

vincaslt wrote:

Hi, I like thrash, so I thought I'd give my input on your map:

Source - maybe add album title Outer Isolation (not sure, maybe Demolition) - source is for something like tv series idk but album does not qualify for some reason
HP - I think can be 6 - k idk what hp i should put since i can't play this
I see several places where kiai timer is suepr short, you should probably make it longer or move it elsewhere altogether. - not a big deal and this isn't relevant

00:08:974 (3,4) - consider adding drum or clap
00:11:974 (3,4) - ^ - sounds dumb imo
00:04:924 (1,1,1,1) - consider adding soft whistle
00:07:924 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:10:924 (3,1,1,1) - ^
03:09:699 (1,1,1,1) - ^
03:12:824 (1,1,1,1) - ^ - k to all of these
00:10:474 (8,1) - I hear a sound in between them, maybe add something? - no
00:13:474 (8,1) - ^ - no. reason to this is that the snare is a lot stronger than the triple the bass drum does
00:13:924 (1,1) - consider adding whistle - kk
00:14:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a bass changes tone, maybe add whistle? - bass doesn't matter here
00:24:274 (2,3) - I hear a sound between them, add note?
00:24:424 (3,4) - ^
00:34:474 (2,3) - ^ - there is literally everywhere a bass drum triple so i decided not to add them
(I realize there are very many places where the sound is not added, so you decide whether you want to add them)
00:43:324 (9,10,11,12) - add drum/clap? - that just sounded weird
00:49:174 (8) - the stream starts in the middle of the slider, and it's painfully loud. Maybe shorten the slider and add 2 circles after it, so the stream starts earlier? - k done
00:54:124 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - maybe add drum/clap? - sounds weird to my ear again
01:21:874 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - in this whole part I hear a lot of missing notes in between circles, maybe something like http://puu.sh/kRduC/978d4c5b9f.jpg ? - the guitar!! no one gives two shits about the drums everyone like guitars, even though i was a bassist
01:23:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure if it should be a stream, because in a very similar place you mapped 01:28:324 (1,2,3) - idk both sound good and play good so keeping them but will change is some other modder points out
02:00:724 (1) - this is a burst not a single note imo - you're not quite catching what i'm mapping here
02:13:324 (1,2,3) - this should probably be a stream - guitar
02:13:774 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a continuous stream (add circle between) - why
03:12:355 (8,1) - I hear a sound between, add?
02:52:355 (4,5,6,7) - ^ - same reason as above
02:18:124 (3) - this should probably be a burst - guitar
03:10:792 (3,4) - add drum? - kk
03:44:353 (1) - new combo? - yesyes

A very nice map overall, I'm giving it a star, because osu needs more real metal - cool nice thanks m8
I assume you've already checked Mazzerin's mapping, he has several great maps, at least 2 of which are also Vektor. - 58% nf cosmic cortex play is my best play

1. 00:06:124 (1,2) - stuck?
2. 00:07:624 (9,10) - unstuck?
3. 00:09:124 (1,2) - stuck or or reduce DS
4. 00:12:124 (1,2) - reduce DS
5. 00:17:899 - add not
6. 00:22:999 - ^
7. 00:19:924 (3,1) - reduce DS
8. 00:24:799 (5,7) - remove
9. 01:05:374 (6) - offgrid
10. 01:37:924 (1) - mb make repeat 1/2
    
11. 01:48:574 (6) - offgrid
12. 01:49:774 (11) - ^
13. 01:50:424 (3,4,5,6) - ^
14. 01:56:224 (2) - ^
15. 02:17:974 (2) - ^
16. 02:18:424 (4) - ^
17. 02:50:792 (2) - ^
18. 03:59:050 (2,5,8,11,14,17) - remove
19. 03:59:201 (3,6,9,12,15,18) - to move a red tick
20. 04:07:125 (2,4) - offgrid
21. 04:56:551 (1) - remove repeat

Loony Key wrote:

NM queue

1. 00:06:124 (1,2) - stuck?
2. 00:07:624 (9,10) - unstuck? - not sure if i got your meaning here, but the reason the other is stacked and the other isn't is because i don't really like putting a stack at the end of a stream, it just feels super dumb to play imo
3. 00:09:124 (1,2) - stuck or or reduce DS - stacked it to 00:08:224 (1) -
4. 00:12:124 (1,2) - reduce DS - nah
5. 00:17:899 - add not - there is no sound there
6. 00:22:999 - ^ - ^
7. 00:19:924 (3,1) - reduce DS - it's fine
8. 00:24:799 (5,7) - remove - 00:24:874 (5,6,7) - now a triple
9. 01:05:374 (6) - offgrid - if one could not place stuff off the grid then why should this be allowed in the editor?
10. 01:37:924 (1) - mb make repeat 1/2 - sounds awkward when listening to the guitar
    
11. 01:48:574 (6) - offgrid
12. 01:49:774 (11) - ^
13. 01:50:424 (3,4,5,6) - ^
14. 01:56:224 (2) - ^
15. 02:17:974 (2) - ^
16. 02:18:424 (4) - ^
17. 02:50:792 (2) - ^ - same as stated before
18. 03:59:050 (2,5,8,11,14,17) - remove - why? there's a clear guitar sound there listen on 25%
19. 03:59:201 (3,6,9,12,15,18) - to move a red tick - no
20. 04:07:125 (2,4) - offgrid - yabbadappadoo
21. 04:56:551 (1) - remove repeat - why? maybe i could remove it and add a circle on top of 2 but i've done this everywhere and now you point this kind of stuff out

Good Luck^^ - Thanks!

Maakkeli wrote:

Loony Key wrote:

NM queue


[*] 03:59:050 (2,5,8,11,14,17) - remove - why? there's a clear guitar sound there listen on 25% to hand rested more
[*] 03:59:201 (3,6,9,12,15,18) - to move a red tick - no

[*] 04:56:551 (1) - remove repeat - why? maybe i could remove it and add a circle on top of 2 but i've done this everywhere and now you point this kind of stuff out[/list] I'm sorry I did not read that is written above
Good Luck^^ - Thanks!

Thanks for the mod!!

Strategas wrote:

yo from my queue

00:43:624 (1) - strange nc, the sv change here doesn't make a difference - ok
00:52:474 (6) - move this more to the left, now the jump from it to the next note feels weird - put it a bit more left
01:23:074 (6,1) - huge ass jump into a slow moving slider felt weird I thought it was 1/4 slider for sure
01:20:674 (6,1) - ^ - i think this is seen quite many times in other maps and stuff but i'll change this if someone else tells me to
01:26:824 (3) - ctrl g? - k
02:25:849 - strange break here - not imo lol will add a note here if someone tells me to
03:07:511 (1) - not sure if nc is needed - unNC'd
03:36:171 (1) - could start this patern with a slider to know what rhythm it is, otherwise it's hard to know what speed to click - looks like i have to add the combo colors for 1/3 again
03:44:353 (1) - similar situation but it's expected this time - combo colors will make my ass hurt
03:57:535 (13,14,15,16) - this lacks emphasis - whistles
03:58:898 (1) - again it's impossible to guess whether it's 1/3 or 1/4 - combou colours bwois and grills
04:34:989 (6,1,2) - really weird looking overlap - lol nice stacked
04:54:451 (8,9) - I think this stop is not needed - triple
05:06:151 (1) - same story - oppai stories

This map is very well done, good luck with rank! - Thanks m8!!

riktoi wrote:

modi täältä jonosta taas

that spacing fam

[Dissonant Existence]

03:16:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pelatessa huomasin nyt että tää kohta on vähän hankala lukea, jos kutosta liikuttaisi hiukan että näkee sen alun siitä niin vois olla aika bueno - nyt sen alku pilkistää mukavasti sieltä ei sitä varmaan vieläkää kunnolla näy

01:17:074 (4,5,6) - en tiedä miksi mutta näistä tulee aina satasia (tärkeä posti) - tärkeä olut

01:41:674 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing vois olla sama kun tossa seuraavassa streamissäkin (koska taputukset) - spaced streams = jotain mitä en pysty pelaamaan

en tiedä miksi aina käy näin mutta en mä vaan löydä mitään kunnon konflikteja että vois tehä niistä isoa listaa. Mappi pelaa hyvin ja kicksliderit on parhaita - parempi mulle ettei löydy paljoa. Olutta kuitenkin löytyy.

1. 02:25:849 - The gap looks kinda strange. I think adding a note would be better, like you did with 02:21:049
2. 03:29:218 (3) - ctrl g and 03:29:362 (4) too~ People will be more prepared for the deathstream
3. 03:35:641 (7) - There is something wrong with this. Is it me, or is this not snapped?
4. 03:41:928 (7,10) - ^

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, from my queue

[Dissonant Existence]

1. 02:25:849 - The gap looks kinda strange. I think adding a note would be better, like you did with 02:21:049 - kicksliders are fun
2. 03:29:218 (3) - ctrl g and 03:29:362 (4) too~ People will be more prepared for the deathstream - k
3. 03:35:641 (7) - There is something wrong with this. Is it me, or is this not snapped? I THINK I FIXED IT THIS HAS BUGGED ME FOR SO LONG HOLY SHIT
4. 03:41:928 (7,10) - ^ - thanks dude

Well, that's all I could find. The map is really enjoyable (probably gonna get RSI after playing it) Good luck with getting it ranked! - Thank you very much

FCL wrote:

Hell, I finally made it to this map
I've never been a lover of Trash metal, but when I heard this song I really started to love it.
The rare case when I do mod to my favorite song, I really want to do better this map

• [diff]

1. 00:03:124 (5) - the soft hitsounds should be start here, no? - no there's still drums
2. btw, you can use it here - green lines look cool
3. 00:47:974 (8) - rotate a bit (5 degrees). So looks better, lol - lol it looks better kappa
4. 00:58:324 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - but you said, that red combo colour is 1/3 - like if this turns out to be a problem then i will change it
5. 01:06:724 (1,2) - your choice, but i be stacked their
6. 01:07:924 (1,2) - ^ - i actually tried stacking these but i just didn't like it
7. 01:11:974 (4) - don't like this form of sliderwawes. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/lapfu/c5dcee8873.jpg - thanks m8
8. 01:24:424 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - what the fuck, where a stream part? - guitar m8
9. 01:50:674 (4,5,6) - unranked (touch HP bar) - ok it shouldn't anymore
10. 02:11:824 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - rly need a streams here, lol - guitar m8
11. 02:38:824 (1,2,3) - not need to use other spacing here - ok
12. 02:59:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think that you should make more spacing at this part http://puu.sh/laqfe/e3ab677cbc.jpg. Seriusly! - umm... i really want to keep this playable as possible so i will let this be for now but if someone else seriously wants these more spaced too i'll do it
13. 03:04:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^same - ^
14. 03:12:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks a little dirtily - i think it looks fine will change again if someone else points out
15. 03:19:554 (7,10,11,12) - stack? - thanks for the pickup
16. 03:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but here spaced stream is not necessary - imo it represents the guitar better when the spacing changes
17. 03:51:625 (2) - looks weird, lol - i know trying to figure something out
18. 04:05:625 (1,2,3) - why 1/4 silder, It's not necessary, imo - i felt that i wanted to emphasize the guitar this way
19. 04:10:958 (1,2,3) - ^ - ^ but will change these again if someone else tells me to
20. 04:42:958 (1) - here started my favorite part. And i have a great suggestion. Probably i made it slovenly, but i think you the essence caught - yes this is nice
    

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21. 04:51:747 (1,2) - Biiiiiiiiiiig jump here is better http://puu.sh/larKk/2d17b8ceba.jpg - ok but i didn't want to make it too big it still is 250BPM
22. 05:14:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - i was make a little more spacing, finish is very epic - imo the spacing is fine will change again if need be

I really got pleasure during mod it. Good luck! - Nice thanks!!

DahplA wrote:

I like how RSI is a tag.

Dissonant Existence

1. 00:03:124 (5) - Shouldn't this be NC'd to keep consistency with 00:06:124 (1) - yes oh god i have to edit colors now
2. 00:06:124 (1) - I think this should have a jump as well, since it's a strong drum beat. It also makes sense, because other white ticks like 00:05:824 (1) - have jumps. This happens quite a bit, so if you want to fix it them check over all these parts. - jumpy jumps
3. 00:39:124 (3) - NC here, since it's a drum roll? - kk
4. 02:33:724 (9) - Maybe place a 1/4 here instead to indicate the clap. - The 1/4 sliders are to emphasize the guitar and imo the guitar is more natural for me here at least
5. 03:36:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I feel like these parts are too spammy. Maybe it's because it's all in one combo, or since there is no sliders. Anyways, I think you should change this part to make it look better or something like that. - I have already remapped this part a few times and I'm pretty satisfied with it so I'll get more opinions and stuff
6. 03:40:262 (2,3) - These are placed too far at the top of the screen. Also, 3 is way too hard to read, since you can't even see the sliderbody or the sliderend. - remapping the combo noice
7. 04:27:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think the flow of this should face the other way. http://puu.sh/lcDHL/1c8a28441c.PNG - I actually tried this when I remapped this but I was just meh with it. Imo it emphasizes the "change" in the guitar but still maps the drums. WTF am I even babbling about I'll consider changing this.
8. 04:51:747 (1,2) - Shouldn't these be like the finale of jumps. Make them bigger :3 - ok

Damn, this is actually a really well-done map. GL with this map. Sorry if this was short. - Noice. Thanks!

The Fetish wrote:

NM From Queue.

Dude, fun map. Pretty solid as well. - Well I tried to make it liquid.

00:04:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Nothing wrong with all these. But did you ever consider lowering the spacing to match the music? - the guitar m8. The guitar changes from a fret to another and that's why the streamjumps look up that tab at songsterr or something
00:16:174 (8,9) - I assume you're under mapping these parts for a bit of variety. But in case you didnt notice these are triples. Theres a lot of these all over the map. I dont actually have any problems with how you've mapped it, Id just like to point that out. - that was actually not a triple but i know. if people want triples i will give them triples
00:19:924 (5) - This really should be ending on the red tick instead. - oh shit yea
00:49:774 (7,8) - If you were trying to have this stream circular these two are slightly out of place. - i don't see it but tried to change
01:07:924 (1,2,3) - Theres a lot of these throughout the song. And while there is no issue with them. I feel the ones Ive highlighted should have more spacing to give more emphasis. Plus they're pretty easy anyways. - ok
01:22:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Pretty cool drum fill here. Ever consider mapping that instead? - imo guitar is more important but i'll map cool drum fills if people demand
01:37:324 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - Pretty sure Im only hearing triples here. Id personally map them as 2 triples or have the first 3 be a slider instead. Same for other sections the same as this. - there's definitely a sound on the blue tick or i'm just deaf
02:05:824 (8) - There should be a note on this red tick, change the slider out for circles. Or at least end it on the red tick - there's no sound on the red tick except the extending guitar sound (extending guitar sound... can one even say it that way lol)
03:07:199 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stream is needlessly ugly IMO. - i know
03:09:699 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as my first point. - hubbaboobaaloo
03:17:102 (6) - This might just be me but I misread this on my SR. Was pretty hard to see. - should be visible now
03:25:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this might be better if you start the stream with large spacing and decrease it as you go.
But increase it again for 03:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is true, now i just gotta come up with stuff to make it look cool
03:32:535 (1) - Up the SV a little, I almost missed this on SR. - a bit
03:36:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Okay so, I feel like this shouldnt be a stream, same for all the similar points later. But if you want to keep it a stream change the combo to group it into 6's. - i can feel it better as a stream... wtf am i babbling about but yea. I know anyone can just singletap through that but I don't want to map jumps in this kind of a slow part. It just doesn't feel right not mapping this as stream
03:44:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Same again. - ^
03:48:898 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Pretty much same spacing as the 1/3 streams made this confusing on SR. - Combo colors m8 combo colors
03:56:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Increase spacing at the end to match the music maybe? - done
04:08:958 (13) - I hear a note on this red tick.
04:14:291 (13) - Same here.
04:19:624 (13) - ^ - i might be deaf again but i just can't derp will confirm with someone maybe if i remember someone will point it out anyway
04:32:958 (1) - Blanket looks off. - that's because it's off
04:41:551 (8) - Same here. - well that one was like 0,111111199999mm off your blanket eye is more nazi than mine
04:42:958 (1) - Dont change this part ever. Its great. Dont listen to anyone tell you otherwise. - lol ok
04:52:951 (1) - Any issues from here on out are just copies of previous points Ive already made. Im not gonna point out every single one. - fixed the 1/3 jump thing slowdown shit

All in all. Awesome map. Good luck with this. Thanks!

1. 00:02:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps feel almost identical to 00:03:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - even though they follow a whole different part of the song, I'd recommend changing their position/pattern so it's easier to see that they are following different instruments, since the nc changes don't really say that much
2. 01:16:324 (1,2,3) - Here this spacing kinda works.. but at 01:17:524 (1,2,3) - the spacing is just too confusing
3. 01:32:149 (9) - You forgot to nc this one. Since you DID nc 01:27:349 (1) -
4. 01:49:924 (1,2,3) - 01:51:124 (1,2,3) - 01:59:524 (1,2,3) - 02:00:724 (1,2,3) - For these goes the same as mentioned earlier, I get that you obviously have thought this out already and have reasoning for this but it really doesn't feel well at all. Not going to mention any future ones
5. 02:15:349 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - Nc patterns are extremely inconsistent.. 02:20:149 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) -
6. 02:52:824 (1) - This shape is kinda unexpected.. I'd suggest changing it a bit, so it's easier to follow from 02:52:667 (2) -
7. 03:07:199 (5,6,7,8,9) - Could look better, specially the slider
8. 03:28:929 (2,3,4) - Spacing here looks kinda meh, 03:28:929 (2,3) - could be a bit further away from eachother so it looks better
9. 03:40:716 (4) - Eh I don't think this is rankable because it basically goes back into itself which is unrankable
10. 03:45:262 (7) - I would recommend changing the direction or something here, ofcourse use NC if you decide to do so, since it fits the melody WAY better
11. 03:46:171 (13) - And here you could like go back in the direction you were going with 03:44:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or something, just do something else again and NC if you decide to do so
12. 03:56:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - You should do something crazy with the spacing here that fits the music
13. 03:58:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Change directions again with nc's at 03:59:353 (4) - 03:59:807 (7) - 04:00:262 (10) - 04:00:716 (13) - 04:01:171 (16) - , just a little bit, but do SOMETHING at least
14. 05:04:051 (8,10) - Noticed this overlap that you should avoid

Zectro wrote:

Yo o/ Sorry for the late mod back, I was struggling with time and motivation haha, alright let's see :3

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[Dissonant Existence]

1. 00:02:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps feel almost identical to 00:03:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - even though they follow a whole different part of the song, I'd recommend changing their position/pattern so it's easier to see that they are following different instruments, since the nc changes don't really say that much - did some stuff don't know if it worked out for the better
2. 01:16:324 (1,2,3) - Here this spacing kinda works.. but at 01:17:524 (1,2,3) - the spacing is just too confusing - forgot to change 01:16:624 (2) - to 1.0x ds thanks
3. 01:32:149 (9) - You forgot to nc this one. Since you DID nc 01:27:349 (1) - FUUUUUUUCK
4. 01:49:924 (1,2,3) - 01:51:124 (1,2,3) - 01:59:524 (1,2,3) - 02:00:724 (1,2,3) - For these goes the same as mentioned earlier, I get that you obviously have thought this out already and have reasoning for this but it really doesn't feel well at all. Not going to mention any future ones
5. 02:15:349 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - Nc patterns are extremely inconsistent.. 02:20:149 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - - ahh fuck it i'm just gonna renc this whole shit
6. 02:52:824 (1) - This shape is kinda unexpected.. I'd suggest changing it a bit, so it's easier to follow from 02:52:667 (2) - - i could follow it just fine but taking suggestions
7. 03:07:199 (5,6,7,8,9) - Could look better, specially the slider - LOL
8. 03:28:929 (2,3,4) - Spacing here looks kinda meh, 03:28:929 (2,3) - could be a bit further away from eachother so it looks better - was actually thinking the same before now 1.7x
9. 03:40:716 (4) - Eh I don't think this is rankable because it basically goes back into itself which is unrankable - gotta ask someone
10. 03:45:262 (7) - I would recommend changing the direction or something here, ofcourse use NC if you decide to do so, since it fits the melody WAY better - remade the "stream"
11. 03:46:171 (13) - And here you could like go back in the direction you were going with 03:44:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or something, just do something else again and NC if you decide to do so - ^
12. 03:56:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - You should do something crazy with the spacing here that fits the music - no dude i don't want anything crazy in this part this is too slow
13. 03:58:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Change directions again with nc's at 03:59:353 (4) - 03:59:807 (7) - 04:00:262 (10) - 04:00:716 (13) - 04:01:171 (16) - , just a little bit, but do SOMETHING at least - "stream" jumps idk man i don't really like how it looks but i'll try to figure something better
14. 05:04:051 (8,10) - Noticed this overlap that you should avoid - fixed

Damn this map is so great. It's one of the better maps of this style for sure. Please rank this! - I'll do my best!