Hello!
[General]
[General]
- Remove "5" from Tags since it's too random and everything can be 5, maybe you want to add "opening_5"
- Add some Lead In time on each diff because the song starts too sudden
- Preview Point and Timing Point conflict with Laturn's Easy
- Folder: OK
- 00:25:861 - Remove this unused green line
- 00:19:498 (1,4) - I don't like how this pattern feels, it's like blanketing the void. You may want to curve 00:19:498 (1) - a bit to make the pattern prettier
- 00:27:679 (4) - Either move it slightly up or down, increase the overlap, or removing it at all, but this way just no xD
- 00:28:134 (5,6,1) - I don't understand why the jump 00:28:361 (6,1) - Is smaller than 00:28:134 (5,6) - , where on the second one, there's nothing to be emphasized
- 00:40:861 (6,7,8,1) - This is hard to read, you may want to unstack them
- 00:45:861 (4,5,6) - Same case here, why the jump 00:46:088 (5,6) - is such smaller than 00:45:861 (4,5) - ?
- 00:50:407 (1,2) - I know you like this pattern (stalked a bit your maps xD) but, imo, it's not flowing good here. It will help if you curve 00:50:861 (2) - accordingly with the tail of 00:50:407 (1) -
- 00:57:679 (6) - Add NC for consistency, you added every 4/1 beat
- 01:01:770 (2,4) - Semi stack is kinda weird, stack it?
- 01:03:134 (1,2,3) - The jump 01:03:134 (1,2) - Should be smaller than 01:03:588 (2,3) - , just like you did here
- 01:04:498 (4,1) -
- 01:17:225 (5,3) - Is this overlap on purpose?
- 01:21:998 (3,6) - ^
- 01:33:134 (3,4,5) - Same jump thing. 01:33:361 (4,5) - This should be bigger, having constant DS kinda break the emotion here, also, the jump 01:33:588 (5,6) - is higher, why? It should be smaller.
- 01:34:498 (2,3) - Change this for a slider, 1/2
- 01:45:634 (2) - NC? Just minor thing, you can ignore, but I think it will make it better because both are strong
- 00:19:498 - 00:25:861 - Remove unused green lines
- 00:04:942 - Remove unused green line
- 00:09:942 (2,3) - A bit nazi but this blanket can be improved
- 00:47:669 (3,1) - Could you make this overlap bigger, I think it will be prettier, this way it's like it was overlapped by mistake
- 01:06:760 (1,2) - Blanket here
- 01:08:578 (2,1) - This gab may be very Hard to deal for newbie players