BigEarsMau wrote:

M4M

[Easy]
No probs imo

[Normal]

1. Try to use AR5. AR4 is too slow
   AR stay

[Hard]

1. This diff doesn't fit with AR6. I suggest to use AR7 for better readability change 6.2
2. 00:55:403 (4,5,6) - This pattern is too straight and boring. Try to make it more curved like this so it flows better ya
   

[Insane]

1. 01:02:661 (9) - Place this circle below the last circle for better flow and consistency. It's a bit sudden to hit if you leave it like that prefer keep it 2.00x look good for me but change placements my own
2. 02:04:596 (9) - ^ ^ same
3. 01:42:096 (4,5,6,7) - This stack is too straight. Try to make it more curvy like this so it flows better ya
   
   
   Gotta be honest, this diff is actually enjoyable to play

That's all I can find. Generally, this map is pretty enjoyable

Good luck in being ranked

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue

let's get right into the mod

[General]
Since you deleted the SB you should uncheck the widescreen support ups, yeah
your bg is 1023x767 it should be 1366x768 you forget re-download but this resolution is fine

[Insane]
00:03:629 (6,1) - more neater blanket
00:07:983 (2,3) - ^
00:10:887 (5,6) - ^
00:18:387 (3,4) - ^
00:49:354 (3,4,1) - ^
00:52:741 (2,3) - ^
01:12:822 (5,6) - blanket?
02:03:629 (5) - NC
02:06:774 (3,4) - more neater blanket

fix 4 thing blanket only

1. 00:11:612 (4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3728523 looks a little lazy imo. Maybe make the shapes symmetrical or something?
2. 01:00:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm. Are you sure you want to use all these 1/2 circles in a row? It might be a little tough for a normal. consider using 1/2 sliders as well. This applies to the other parts as well. If you think about it. It's technically harder than insane anyways XD
3. 02:07:016 (4) - same as hard. reduce by 1/2 and leave a 1/1 gap. Also applies to the other similar ones.

1. 02:07:016 (4) - and 02:14:758 (4) - are awkward to play much like in Insane. Honestly just ending them 1/2 earlier would make it perfect since you already got a gap.

1. 00:38:467 (1) - I'm not really a fan of how long this slider is held. I would honestly prefer it to be 1/4 shorter, with a 1/2 gap, but if you wanted to add a circle at 00:39:072 - then it would be fine as well. Same goes for 01:40:403 (1) - as well. Same with 02:07:983 (1) -
2. 00:45:725 (5,6) - control+g? I like how you do this for 00:43:790 (6,7,2,3) - but it confused me a little that you didn't do it here.
3. 01:25:645 (3) - Jump feels kind of big. Maybe stack it on 01:24:435 (6) - or move it somewhere just above it?
4. 01:47:661 (5,6) - I guess the same thing as 45 seconds.
5. 02:07:016 (4) - end half earlier please. This is so awkward to play. when following the chime sounds. A circle at 02:07:741 - could fit afterwards if you wanted.
6. 02:14:758 (4,1) - same thing as above?

Lanturn wrote:

Nice :3

[Easy]
There seems to be missing hitsounds like 00:08:709 (4) - and in a few other places as well. I suggest you double-check this since I think you used the hitsound copier and insane doesn't actually map this. ups add 3 whistle and 3 whistle in normal and 1 clap in hard, they consistency now I hope

[Normal]

1. 00:11:612 (4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3728523 looks a little lazy imo. Maybe make the shapes symmetrical or something? I'm lazy
2. 01:00:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm. Are you sure you want to use all these 1/2 circles in a row? It might be a little tough for a normal. consider using 1/2 sliders as well. This applies to the other parts as well. If you think about it. It's technically harder than insane anyways XD slider 1/2 ok ? lol
3. 02:07:016 (4) - same as hard. reduce by 1/2 and leave a 1/1 gap. Also applies to the other similar ones no, sorry.

[Hard]
The one major issue I have with this diff is that there is a lot of jumps. More than recommended really. I would recommend removing a few here and there so they don't feel that excessive. It felt like I was playing a light insane, not a hard. The other thing is the density. It's pretty similar to insane. From 00:17:419 - to 00:47:903 - it is all 1/2 gaps. That's 30 seconds of playing nonstop 1/2 notes. I suggest making a few more 1/1 holes here and there. You also do this at 01:19:354 - for another 30 seconds. I'll mod this again later. well the problem thing is Insane, insane have full jump + short stream, would be good spread with this hard but I reduce 8 jump to normal spacing and 2 place nerf jump, hope they good now

1. 02:07:016 (4) - and 02:14:758 (4) - are awkward to play much like in Insane. Honestly just ending them 1/2 earlier would make it perfect since you already got a gap.reduce jump, but keep follow melody I pretty like that

[Insane]

1. 00:38:467 (1) - I'm not really a fan of how long this slider is held. I would honestly prefer it to be 1/4 shorter, with a 1/2 gap, but if you wanted to add a circle at 00:39:072 - then it would be fine as well. Same goes for 01:40:403 (1) - as well. Same with 02:07:983 (1) - but I prefer my own full follow melody, I follow melody than weak or strong beat
2. 00:45:725 (5,6) - control+g? I like how you do this for 00:43:790 (6,7,2,3) - but it confused me a little that you didn't do it here. ok
3. 01:25:645 (3) - Jump feels kind of big. Maybe stack it on 01:24:435 (6) - or move it somewhere just above it? change placements
4. 01:47:661 (5,6) - I guess the same thing as 45 seconds. ok
5. 02:07:016 (4) - end half earlier please. This is so awkward to play. when following the chime sounds. A circle at 02:07:741 - could fit afterwards if you wanted. Same begin I explain
6. 02:14:758 (4,1) - same thing as above? Same

I don't have much else to say, Just the little bit in hard that could be nerfed. You can call me back whenever, maybe get one or two more mods.
Good luck o/

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]

00:06:653 - No triplet? You map it everywhere else no, intentional, follow only melody strong
00:13:064 (6,7,1) - This doesn't flow too well visually.

Maybe something like this idk~

00:34:959 (2) - You sure there's a note here? It sounds different from the other triplets you map too so idk if you need a triplet here. However, if you listen, theres a really noticeable note on 00:35:201 - the blue tick. It's quite loud so I think it's better to map that instead. YA
00:42:943 - ^ YAAAAA
00:44:879 - ^ YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
01:01:693 (5) - Might be better to NC here even though it doesn't follow your NC pattern. It will help with reading the pattern if they are different combo colors. (Is this 2015 influence?! NC'ing outside of every measure? xD) 02:03:629 (5) - Here too if you decide to change. and 02:19:112 (5) - ops, fix
01:22:983 (1,2) - Shouldn't the NC be on the 2? Since you are NC'ing on the downbeat. intentional, i did change NC in (1) because melody change, is higher than downbeat
01:30:725 (1,2) - ^ same ^

fix other patterns to be consistency

[Hard]

00:51:774 (4) - 1/2 slider better imo. Feels empty here I keep follow my own instrument because the melody really stop in 00:51:774 you can similiar melody in 00:59:516, stay
00:58:306 (2,3,4) - I think the jump from 3>4 is nice, but 2>3 doesn't need a jump imo... but but.... melody high
01:05:564 - Weird that you leave this unmapped even tho theres a clear drumbeat here. Maybe extend the slider to 1/1 instead? or put a circle here? add
01:13:306 - ^ add
01:19:354 (1) - Some QAT's say using blue combo-color after a spinner makes things hard to read. Maybe change the color? xD 01:50:322 (1) - Here too i guess. ho right, I forget that thing

fix other patterns to be consistency

[Normal]

00:14:999 (1,1) - You should have half a measure of recovery time between spinner/object. Uhhh. Actually I think it might be fine here because of the BPM but its a grey area. Ending on 00:16:451 - doesn't seem any different than 00:16:693 - . I hope they fine, REALLY lol

fix other patterns to be consistency

[Easy]

00:14:516 (1,1) - You need 1 measure of break between a spinner and an object on Easy. Well, this is more of a guideline, but I think it's relevant here. I REALLY REALLY HOPE FINE THAT
00:45:483 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:16:451 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:47:419 (1,1) - ^^

fix other patterns to be consistency

RemiFlan wrote:

wtf is the background doing

ghm12 wrote:

That's why the bg is fucked up, it should be 0

I don't know if it's reasonable for dq, maybe it is since a considerable part of the background is black
You should try to talk with a QAT about that

Lanturn wrote:

He moved the BG down so it would work with widescreen (since this is a 4:3 picture) I guess.

Definitely will get DQ'd so oops. Still, are there really people who play in 4:3? 0_o

Lanturn wrote:

He moved the BG down so it would work with widescreen (since this is a 4:3 picture) I guess.

Definitely will get DQ'd so oops. Still, are there really people who play in 4:3? 0_o